Comments received on poems by dbremner
Our Morning Song
Cheeky Missy said:
La, but this is an EXCELLENTly sweet passionate love poem! If it is but a dream now, I hope for all its ecstasy, it enters reality. I wish I could give you more than a little "10" for it...it is EXCELLENT!!! Your similes are great and the scene drawn so well. Your daydreamer is lucky if she gets to taste this for real. The symbolism of a dawning morning is so perfect for the love.....I'd better stop before I exceed the 500-word limit hahaha!
December 21st, 2010 12:51
Cheeky Missy said:
La, but this is an EXCELLENTly sweet passionate love poem! If it is but a dream now, I hope for all its ecstasy, it enters reality. I wish I could give you more than a little "10" for it...it is EXCELLENT!!! Your similes are great and the scene drawn so well. Your daydreamer is lucky if she gets to taste this for real. The symbolism of a dawning morning is so perfect for the love.....I'd better stop before I exceed the 500-word limit hahaha!
December 21st, 2010 12:51
Our Morning Song
jvl narasimha rao said:
It is a great romantic poem brother.It is as beautiful as dawn
yours lovingly.I have rated this with a 10
yours lovingly,
JVL
December 21st, 2010 12:03
jvl narasimha rao said:
It is a great romantic poem brother.It is as beautiful as dawn
yours lovingly.I have rated this with a 10
yours lovingly,
JVL
December 21st, 2010 12:03
Yellow Primrose - A Tribute
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. This is a beautiful piece! I began to see the golden delicacy in my mind's eye half-buried out of sight and so precious. I really enjoyed this! I also like this metre very well!
December 20th, 2010 08:21
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. This is a beautiful piece! I began to see the golden delicacy in my mind's eye half-buried out of sight and so precious. I really enjoyed this! I also like this metre very well!
December 20th, 2010 08:21
The Dance
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow! This is intoxicatingly sweet! You have written VERY romantically! You beautifully painted quite the poetic picture of a man in love, with your "silver gown, "red wine" lips, dancing, glowing candles, and etc. It is delightfully tender and sweetly passionate....Excellent!!!
December 19th, 2010 12:14
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow! This is intoxicatingly sweet! You have written VERY romantically! You beautifully painted quite the poetic picture of a man in love, with your "silver gown, "red wine" lips, dancing, glowing candles, and etc. It is delightfully tender and sweetly passionate....Excellent!!!
December 19th, 2010 12:14
It is True?
Cheeky Missy said:
It is such a sweet romantic poem! The last stanza begs an answer that only the recipient can give, and the way you've painted it, I hope would indicate she would delightedly assent. I do love how you've drawn the whole scene so reassuringly, so tenderly, so very sweetly...it is very romantic. Passion seems to flirt around the edges of it and through its midst so like a twisting misty warmth that cannot be but seen and possesses. I like it very well!!! Another excellent love poem....you write such sweet ones!
December 17th, 2010 08:53
Cheeky Missy said:
It is such a sweet romantic poem! The last stanza begs an answer that only the recipient can give, and the way you've painted it, I hope would indicate she would delightedly assent. I do love how you've drawn the whole scene so reassuringly, so tenderly, so very sweetly...it is very romantic. Passion seems to flirt around the edges of it and through its midst so like a twisting misty warmth that cannot be but seen and possesses. I like it very well!!! Another excellent love poem....you write such sweet ones!
December 17th, 2010 08:53
Touches
Cheeky Missy said:
This is very tender and sweet! Oh, the scene is so warm and alluring....it is all so very lovely! And oh! so romantic! I love it!!!! and seems I can't say enough about it so shall quite now.
December 16th, 2010 14:02
Cheeky Missy said:
This is very tender and sweet! Oh, the scene is so warm and alluring....it is all so very lovely! And oh! so romantic! I love it!!!! and seems I can't say enough about it so shall quite now.
December 16th, 2010 14:02
Touches
StormyDay said:
Very heartfelt. (Can't help but go "Awwww!") Keep up the good work!
December 16th, 2010 13:39
StormyDay said:
Very heartfelt. (Can't help but go "Awwww!") Keep up the good work!
December 16th, 2010 13:39
Love Softly Felt
StormyDay said:
Normally, I don't go for free verse, but this is masterfully done. The imagery is....very vivid. I love it.
December 15th, 2010 14:19
StormyDay said:
Normally, I don't go for free verse, but this is masterfully done. The imagery is....very vivid. I love it.
December 15th, 2010 14:19
Jazz Filled Love
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. I like this piece! It is different, kinda like the jazz that swirls through it. It is cool. I love how you drew the scenes poetically....and it is so romantic! Made me smile.
December 15th, 2010 13:28
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. I like this piece! It is different, kinda like the jazz that swirls through it. It is cool. I love how you drew the scenes poetically....and it is so romantic! Made me smile.
December 15th, 2010 13:28
Your Meadow In My Mind
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh, but this is a VERY SWEET poem! How I do love it!!! And you know, two months from today is....Valentines Day...ah, this is a delightful reminder for lovers. And it is yesterday's metre of 4,4,6,7! The images of the sun-bathed meadow with its light spring colours and flowers makes it such a lovely poem of sweet love...as well as the reminder that "in spring, a young man's heart turns to love." Excellent love poem!!!
December 14th, 2010 14:51
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh, but this is a VERY SWEET poem! How I do love it!!! And you know, two months from today is....Valentines Day...ah, this is a delightful reminder for lovers. And it is yesterday's metre of 4,4,6,7! The images of the sun-bathed meadow with its light spring colours and flowers makes it such a lovely poem of sweet love...as well as the reminder that "in spring, a young man's heart turns to love." Excellent love poem!!!
December 14th, 2010 14:51
Those Words
Cheeky Missy said:
Like the delightfully poetic symbol of the summer zephr, so sweetly tender is this piece. Like a whisper, yet a promise, hope flies on golden wings and she is his! May their joy forever grow through bitter and sweet, and love keep them forever. I like this light piece VERY well!
(la, but I miss the rhyme and metre though...you won me with the sweet poetry!)
December 13th, 2010 17:09
Cheeky Missy said:
Like the delightfully poetic symbol of the summer zephr, so sweetly tender is this piece. Like a whisper, yet a promise, hope flies on golden wings and she is his! May their joy forever grow through bitter and sweet, and love keep them forever. I like this light piece VERY well!
(la, but I miss the rhyme and metre though...you won me with the sweet poetry!)
December 13th, 2010 17:09
Flickering Flames
Cheeky Missy said:
Sweet....VERY sweet!! I love the scene you passionately painted.....it is rather....erotic. Excellent......'tis a passionate poem and so poetic in its symbolism. I like it very well! It's soooo romantic.
December 12th, 2010 15:12
Cheeky Missy said:
Sweet....VERY sweet!! I love the scene you passionately painted.....it is rather....erotic. Excellent......'tis a passionate poem and so poetic in its symbolism. I like it very well! It's soooo romantic.
December 12th, 2010 15:12
The Light of the Flames
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. This is an excellently passionate piece! You painted the scene very well. It's a lovely scene.....so romantic and alluring. Seriously, you did an excellent job! The fire playing, dancing gaily, snapping, lighting all.....la, it's a sweet piece. I like it. ......Is the fire Love?
December 11th, 2010 14:45
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. This is an excellently passionate piece! You painted the scene very well. It's a lovely scene.....so romantic and alluring. Seriously, you did an excellent job! The fire playing, dancing gaily, snapping, lighting all.....la, it's a sweet piece. I like it. ......Is the fire Love?
December 11th, 2010 14:45
Shadows of Love
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. It is VERY sweet. I love it. I could so picture the scene which you symbolically painted....it is so poetic. Oh, it is so tender too, that it makes me almost catch my breath watching the dancing shadows love alluringly throws, silent in eagerness.
December 10th, 2010 18:11
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. It is VERY sweet. I love it. I could so picture the scene which you symbolically painted....it is so poetic. Oh, it is so tender too, that it makes me almost catch my breath watching the dancing shadows love alluringly throws, silent in eagerness.
December 10th, 2010 18:11
Winter Sun
Cheeky Missy said:
Aw sweet! I LOVE the picture you've painted!!! This was delightful!! Thanks for this poem!!!
December 9th, 2010 15:03
Cheeky Missy said:
Aw sweet! I LOVE the picture you've painted!!! This was delightful!! Thanks for this poem!!!
December 9th, 2010 15:03
Love Softly Felt
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. That was sweet! How romantic. Did they live happily ever after too?
December 7th, 2010 00:38
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. That was sweet! How romantic. Did they live happily ever after too?
December 7th, 2010 00:38
Depth of Love
Cheeky Missy said:
And they kept it too, right?! And lived happily ever after in a love that none had known before.......! I like it very well. It is delightfully romantic and sweet. I like how the lines are arranged....it gave me the sense of the falling and depth, just looking at it descending on the page, like the first stanza, where every succeeding line is shorter than the previous, you know what I mean?
December 3rd, 2010 16:56
Cheeky Missy said:
And they kept it too, right?! And lived happily ever after in a love that none had known before.......! I like it very well. It is delightfully romantic and sweet. I like how the lines are arranged....it gave me the sense of the falling and depth, just looking at it descending on the page, like the first stanza, where every succeeding line is shorter than the previous, you know what I mean?
December 3rd, 2010 16:56
Are You My Snowflake?
Cheeky Missy said:
You sweetheart! Oh boy! Now it had better be a whopping good Christmas card....wow, I have my work cut out for me..... Aw, but you make me smile!
It is very sweet....I like it.
December 1st, 2010 14:29
Cheeky Missy said:
You sweetheart! Oh boy! Now it had better be a whopping good Christmas card....wow, I have my work cut out for me..... Aw, but you make me smile!
It is very sweet....I like it.
December 1st, 2010 14:29
Snowflakes and You
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. It is VERY sweet. And I LOVE your comparing your sweet girl to a snowflake in all its tender transient delicacy. Yet contrary to the snowflake, may she never melt away into nothingness. I love how you imagined/presented it all...it is so perfect. And sweet.
November 29th, 2010 17:49
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. It is VERY sweet. And I LOVE your comparing your sweet girl to a snowflake in all its tender transient delicacy. Yet contrary to the snowflake, may she never melt away into nothingness. I love how you imagined/presented it all...it is so perfect. And sweet.
November 29th, 2010 17:49
Mrs Robert Scott Moncrieff - A Tribute
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh Sweet! I didn't have to wait long for this treat!!! I like it very well and only wish now that I might see the painting that inspired this lovely piece!
November 28th, 2010 16:44
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh Sweet! I didn't have to wait long for this treat!!! I like it very well and only wish now that I might see the painting that inspired this lovely piece!
November 28th, 2010 16:44
Vortex of Love
Cheeky Missy said:
Yes, I like this one very well! It has a passion to it, that I can almost feel the handclasp as the "we" in the poem stand on the edge of the whirlpool to plunge into that exciting unknown of "FOREVER"....and I like the symbolism of vortex for the love! It is a delightfully passionate love poem!
November 26th, 2010 01:30
Cheeky Missy said:
Yes, I like this one very well! It has a passion to it, that I can almost feel the handclasp as the "we" in the poem stand on the edge of the whirlpool to plunge into that exciting unknown of "FOREVER"....and I like the symbolism of vortex for the love! It is a delightfully passionate love poem!
November 26th, 2010 01:30
Night Time Whispers
Cheeky Missy said:
Aw, it is so sorrowful for it begins hopefully but concludes emptily. But happy endings are vain dreams half the time anyway. It is like what you say, earnestly at a grave when you cannot bear the loss. Therefore it seems bittersweet. 4,5,5,4 and 5's.......I dunno how to properly rate it so you shall have to forgive me if the mark is too low.
But of course, I like this piece.
November 25th, 2010 16:48
Cheeky Missy said:
Aw, it is so sorrowful for it begins hopefully but concludes emptily. But happy endings are vain dreams half the time anyway. It is like what you say, earnestly at a grave when you cannot bear the loss. Therefore it seems bittersweet. 4,5,5,4 and 5's.......I dunno how to properly rate it so you shall have to forgive me if the mark is too low.
But of course, I like this piece.
November 25th, 2010 16:48
Take my Hand?
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh, I LOVE the sentiment in this one.....it is so VERY sweet!
I can picture it, and feel it; it's such a softly enticing entreaty. Who could resist it?
Now, I'll tell you frankly why I'm not giving you a "10"......your syllable count/metre is nearly perfect, with an 8,7 or 8,6 count, which are my favourite choices for quatrains....and, oh I hate to say this.....but, you were off count a little and the rythm was not perfect as a result. La, please forgive me.....I do not mean to criticize or be offensive but push for a higher mark.....
November 24th, 2010 17:18
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh, I LOVE the sentiment in this one.....it is so VERY sweet!
I can picture it, and feel it; it's such a softly enticing entreaty. Who could resist it?
Now, I'll tell you frankly why I'm not giving you a "10"......your syllable count/metre is nearly perfect, with an 8,7 or 8,6 count, which are my favourite choices for quatrains....and, oh I hate to say this.....but, you were off count a little and the rythm was not perfect as a result. La, please forgive me.....I do not mean to criticize or be offensive but push for a higher mark.....
November 24th, 2010 17:18
Pivotal Moment
Jorge G Sifuentes said:
Love is what it is...
unespected ways in it, change us.
very goog..
I loved it
November 22nd, 2010 23:34
Jorge G Sifuentes said:
Love is what it is...
unespected ways in it, change us.
very goog..
I loved it
November 22nd, 2010 23:34
The Stage
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh, this is so VERY sweet! It is such an enticing, softly irresistible alluring call of love.
I love this one very, very much!!!! You should really classify it as love...or else, what is it? Wow. I like it.
November 22nd, 2010 15:28
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh, this is so VERY sweet! It is such an enticing, softly irresistible alluring call of love.
I love this one very, very much!!!! You should really classify it as love...or else, what is it? Wow. I like it.
November 22nd, 2010 15:28
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