Comments received on poems by Rocky Lagou
Undying
Amon said:
Exactly how it happen with me and my late dad during the early years after he passed on.
You touched my heart Rocky
February 17th, 2022 09:57
Amon said:
Exactly how it happen with me and my late dad during the early years after he passed on.
You touched my heart Rocky
February 17th, 2022 09:57
On the Brink of Memories
Rozina said:
There is so much woven into your poem. I feel that I need to go through it several times to understand the different layers. This is a great piece of a puzzle. Thank you.
February 17th, 2022 02:09
Rozina said:
There is so much woven into your poem. I feel that I need to go through it several times to understand the different layers. This is a great piece of a puzzle. Thank you.
February 17th, 2022 02:09
On the Brink of Memories
junia said:
I really like the vibes of this poem! I did actually not think about drugs at first haha but this might just be my naivety.
Especially the line with \"clouds of silver linings\" made me think of a mental safe-space. Something to come back to during difficult times. Also, a bit unconventional but, my mind brought up Taylor Swift lyrics. In her song \"gold rush\" she writes: \"gleaming, twinkling (...) so inviting, I almost jump in\".
February 16th, 2022 14:24
junia said:
I really like the vibes of this poem! I did actually not think about drugs at first haha but this might just be my naivety.
Especially the line with \"clouds of silver linings\" made me think of a mental safe-space. Something to come back to during difficult times. Also, a bit unconventional but, my mind brought up Taylor Swift lyrics. In her song \"gold rush\" she writes: \"gleaming, twinkling (...) so inviting, I almost jump in\".
February 16th, 2022 14:24
On the Brink of Memories
spilleronsheet said:
A beautiful imagery
With mix of old memories
With pinch of mystery
With dust of desire
With a bit of fantasy
With a sense of calm
And nevertheless an aroma of yearning
Well scripted dear Rocky
February 16th, 2022 13:43
spilleronsheet said:
A beautiful imagery
With mix of old memories
With pinch of mystery
With dust of desire
With a bit of fantasy
With a sense of calm
And nevertheless an aroma of yearning
Well scripted dear Rocky
February 16th, 2022 13:43
On the Brink of Memories
orchidee said:
Good write Rocky.
A similar (maybe not?) quote to the one you posted - \'I was in such a rush, I met myself coming back from shopping, while I was on my way there! Eh? lol.
February 16th, 2022 12:30
orchidee said:
Good write Rocky.
A similar (maybe not?) quote to the one you posted - \'I was in such a rush, I met myself coming back from shopping, while I was on my way there! Eh? lol.
February 16th, 2022 12:30
The Day I Found Out You Wanted To Kill Me
Palebluecardigan said:
Such an emotional poem, loved the twist in the end. Wonderful work!!
February 16th, 2022 11:21
Palebluecardigan said:
Such an emotional poem, loved the twist in the end. Wonderful work!!
February 16th, 2022 11:21
On the Brink of Memories
dusk arising said:
Like a dream having it\'s way with us we are led thru the teachings to behold that reality is but an illusion.
February 16th, 2022 11:13
dusk arising said:
Like a dream having it\'s way with us we are led thru the teachings to behold that reality is but an illusion.
February 16th, 2022 11:13
I\'m a Woolgatherer
sorenbarrett said:
True once you think of it. This is usually out of mind but it happens continually. Well done
February 16th, 2022 11:10
sorenbarrett said:
True once you think of it. This is usually out of mind but it happens continually. Well done
February 16th, 2022 11:10
On the Brink of Memories
Paul Bell said:
If this was a sixties\' poem, I would assume you\'re at Woodstock, and the drugs are just kicking in. In saying that, gnomes are pleasant wee things.
February 16th, 2022 10:52
Paul Bell said:
If this was a sixties\' poem, I would assume you\'re at Woodstock, and the drugs are just kicking in. In saying that, gnomes are pleasant wee things.
February 16th, 2022 10:52
A Fading Star
junia said:
I really like your style of writing, the single lines and that you add words in paranthesis. It gives your work a unique touch and, in a way, creates more room for interpretation even though or maybe because it gives the reader something new to hold onto.
February 16th, 2022 05:28
junia said:
I really like your style of writing, the single lines and that you add words in paranthesis. It gives your work a unique touch and, in a way, creates more room for interpretation even though or maybe because it gives the reader something new to hold onto.
February 16th, 2022 05:28
MY SILENT PROTEST (A Rant Against My Homophobic Father)
spilleronsheet said:
A very emotional write
Courageous to write and proud as an audience to read the honest feels
Each one is special
A special child of God
And to him it’s not about norms and rituals
To him initially is to love oneself
To cherish the feels of oneself
There will be fire
There will be pain
There will be anguish
When you take some different lane
But it’s alright be patient enough
Times are changing so shall the norms
Where kindness rests, a beautiful sun shall shine
And truly a rainbow shall greet after a downpour
February 16th, 2022 04:39
spilleronsheet said:
A very emotional write
Courageous to write and proud as an audience to read the honest feels
Each one is special
A special child of God
And to him it’s not about norms and rituals
To him initially is to love oneself
To cherish the feels of oneself
There will be fire
There will be pain
There will be anguish
When you take some different lane
But it’s alright be patient enough
Times are changing so shall the norms
Where kindness rests, a beautiful sun shall shine
And truly a rainbow shall greet after a downpour
February 16th, 2022 04:39
Free Me From Me
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful self prayer full of positive affirmations. Uplifting
February 15th, 2022 20:39
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful self prayer full of positive affirmations. Uplifting
February 15th, 2022 20:39
The Day I Found Out You Wanted To Kill Me
Goldfinch60 said:
Good intriguing words Rocky and the end was quite a twist.
Andy
February 15th, 2022 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Good intriguing words Rocky and the end was quite a twist.
Andy
February 15th, 2022 01:51
The Day I Found Out You Wanted To Kill Me
Rozina said:
Fantastic story! Fantastic poem, I didn’t anticipate the ending. Really good read.
February 14th, 2022 22:03
Rozina said:
Fantastic story! Fantastic poem, I didn’t anticipate the ending. Really good read.
February 14th, 2022 22:03
A Fading Star
Poetic Dan said:
Wow what a trip I\'ll be sure to pop back for more!
Keep up the write
Much peace and respect
February 14th, 2022 14:36
Poetic Dan said:
Wow what a trip I\'ll be sure to pop back for more!
Keep up the write
Much peace and respect
February 14th, 2022 14:36
The Day I Found Out You Wanted To Kill Me
orchidee said:
I never wanted to kill ya. What gave ya that idea?! heehee. Oh, ya don\'t mean me. lol.
February 14th, 2022 13:35
orchidee said:
I never wanted to kill ya. What gave ya that idea?! heehee. Oh, ya don\'t mean me. lol.
February 14th, 2022 13:35
The Day I Found Out You Wanted To Kill Me
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting read with a twist at the end.
February 14th, 2022 13:00
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting read with a twist at the end.
February 14th, 2022 13:00
The Day I Found Out You Wanted To Kill Me
Rainbow said:
Sounds a bit like talking about rejection as well .
February 14th, 2022 12:47
Rainbow said:
Sounds a bit like talking about rejection as well .
February 14th, 2022 12:47
The Day I Found Out You Wanted To Kill Me
Rainbow said:
Interesting poem . Happy Valentine’s Day to you . Valentine’s Day is just another day isn’t it though . Yes every human has there darkness but we all deserve to love ourselves despite the darkness because the darkness is not who we are
February 14th, 2022 12:46
Rainbow said:
Interesting poem . Happy Valentine’s Day to you . Valentine’s Day is just another day isn’t it though . Yes every human has there darkness but we all deserve to love ourselves despite the darkness because the darkness is not who we are
February 14th, 2022 12:46
The Day I Found Out You Wanted To Kill Me
spilleronsheet said:
Tears rolled up in my eyes…overwhelming the emotions and each line stabbing inside…mightier than sword, reciting a million lines and Sylvia Plath’s line so aptly justified aas well as given a resurrection to define…
February 14th, 2022 12:14
spilleronsheet said:
Tears rolled up in my eyes…overwhelming the emotions and each line stabbing inside…mightier than sword, reciting a million lines and Sylvia Plath’s line so aptly justified aas well as given a resurrection to define…
February 14th, 2022 12:14
The Day I Found Out You Wanted To Kill Me
Paul Bell said:
Well, that was a turn up for the books.
Love the twist at the end, kept me on the edge of my seat. Just thinking if that was my ex, she would have sued me for saving her life.
February 14th, 2022 12:10
Paul Bell said:
Well, that was a turn up for the books.
Love the twist at the end, kept me on the edge of my seat. Just thinking if that was my ex, she would have sued me for saving her life.
February 14th, 2022 12:10
MY SILENT PROTEST (A Rant Against My Homophobic Father)
_m_ostwanted said:
You\'re loved Rocky!! ❤️
February 14th, 2022 10:30
_m_ostwanted said:
You\'re loved Rocky!! ❤️
February 14th, 2022 10:30
Parasol
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow an artistic creative poem, appealing and i liked the fine structure. Kudos!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
And
Happy valentines day, poets.
February 14th, 2022 05:55
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow an artistic creative poem, appealing and i liked the fine structure. Kudos!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
And
Happy valentines day, poets.
February 14th, 2022 05:55
Parasol
Garth Rakumakoe said:
I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, this write... Artistic in conception, craft, and presentation... Well done dear writer!
February 12th, 2022 04:52
Garth Rakumakoe said:
I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, this write... Artistic in conception, craft, and presentation... Well done dear writer!
February 12th, 2022 04:52
Parasol
spilleronsheet said:
A beautiful yearning every soul longs
A shade of tree in one’s difficulties
A helping hand in storms
And a gentle breeze to calm
That’s the parasol for me….
What a beautiful emotion you inked
A man’s simple desire, not greed
Only if tears fell one could dry them
Very well inked dear poet….
February 11th, 2022 14:41
spilleronsheet said:
A beautiful yearning every soul longs
A shade of tree in one’s difficulties
A helping hand in storms
And a gentle breeze to calm
That’s the parasol for me….
What a beautiful emotion you inked
A man’s simple desire, not greed
Only if tears fell one could dry them
Very well inked dear poet….
February 11th, 2022 14:41
« Return to the profile of Rocky Lagou
