Comments received on poems by Breexbaby
at night
Cheeky Missy said:
Your usage of end-rhyming is pleasant. The scenario you presented is a miserable one, and while comforted in the thought of exiting, since we do not know for certain what lies hereafter, it is not really a comfort....even though you feel you've tasted enough "hell" here. You depicted the sorry case poignantly...and so perfectly. Well-written. Don't give up...seek the Lord's face while you still have breath....His mercy endures for ever.
February 8th, 2011 22:39
Cheeky Missy said:
Your usage of end-rhyming is pleasant. The scenario you presented is a miserable one, and while comforted in the thought of exiting, since we do not know for certain what lies hereafter, it is not really a comfort....even though you feel you've tasted enough "hell" here. You depicted the sorry case poignantly...and so perfectly. Well-written. Don't give up...seek the Lord's face while you still have breath....His mercy endures for ever.
February 8th, 2011 22:39
I believed in you.
Lifewellspoken said:
After readng your poem I believe in you. Thanks nice words well wretten.
January 17th, 2011 14:17
Lifewellspoken said:
After readng your poem I believe in you. Thanks nice words well wretten.
January 17th, 2011 14:17
Jail.
Lifewellspoken said:
That's a rocking poem, I'm interested to know if this is how you see life? It would be hard to imbrace such a place, time and event.
keep up the great writing.
December 7th, 2010 10:01
Lifewellspoken said:
That's a rocking poem, I'm interested to know if this is how you see life? It would be hard to imbrace such a place, time and event.
keep up the great writing.
December 7th, 2010 10:01
Jail.
nair36 said:
I love it... i like the "face of glass" you used how it to wonder how much longer till you cracked... good luck 2 u in jail. i never went but i went to a lockdown facility in florida for 8 months. it wasn't the best place 2 be but i learned things and like u said how u understand what freedom really is. Good luck.
September 18th, 2010 10:59
nair36 said:
I love it... i like the "face of glass" you used how it to wonder how much longer till you cracked... good luck 2 u in jail. i never went but i went to a lockdown facility in florida for 8 months. it wasn't the best place 2 be but i learned things and like u said how u understand what freedom really is. Good luck.
September 18th, 2010 10:59
I believed in you.
bernard franklin said:
Deeply sad and poignant poetry. But it helps to get the grief down on paper and to share it with others will make the pain reseed faster. Keep writing Bree! BF
September 1st, 2010 09:46
bernard franklin said:
Deeply sad and poignant poetry. But it helps to get the grief down on paper and to share it with others will make the pain reseed faster. Keep writing Bree! BF
September 1st, 2010 09:46
Joe
bernard franklin said:
Hi Bree, You must be going through some serious suffering to have written these words. I really liked you poem especially the lines:-
"and I jumped hard
into the pit of perfect dreams," Nicely done , keep up the good work BF
August 23rd, 2010 08:38
bernard franklin said:
Hi Bree, You must be going through some serious suffering to have written these words. I really liked you poem especially the lines:-
"and I jumped hard
into the pit of perfect dreams," Nicely done , keep up the good work BF
August 23rd, 2010 08:38
Something New.
nair36 said:
nice, it's a little hard 2 move on @ first but its easier once ur moving on
August 11th, 2010 09:25
nair36 said:
nice, it's a little hard 2 move on @ first but its easier once ur moving on
August 11th, 2010 09:25
To Love And Hate.
Jorge G Sifuentes said:
how real are your words......
good job.. I like it..
hope to see moreeeeee......
July 20th, 2010 21:06
Jorge G Sifuentes said:
how real are your words......
good job.. I like it..
hope to see moreeeeee......
July 20th, 2010 21:06
Please Understand.
lulu said:
niiiiiiiiiiice i really loved this 1 especially when u think about these words & what it means deeply :P
July 17th, 2010 15:49
lulu said:
niiiiiiiiiiice i really loved this 1 especially when u think about these words & what it means deeply :P
July 17th, 2010 15:49
Please Understand.
Jorge G Sifuentes said:
Yeesssss... unleash the power that a writer posses,... WORDS...
and make out of them the tools that will shape all these beautiful work of arts and provoke even bigger emotions on the readers than the ones created them...
it's very good!
hugs
July 16th, 2010 09:42
Jorge G Sifuentes said:
Yeesssss... unleash the power that a writer posses,... WORDS...
and make out of them the tools that will shape all these beautiful work of arts and provoke even bigger emotions on the readers than the ones created them...
it's very good!
hugs
July 16th, 2010 09:42
Please Understand.
Kri2arch said:
Thats nice, u have such a great talent...keep it up my dear
July 16th, 2010 03:32
Kri2arch said:
Thats nice, u have such a great talent...keep it up my dear
July 16th, 2010 03:32
Grandma.
Jorge G Sifuentes said:
You really show your heart...
good!!!
give us more..
hugs
July 15th, 2010 07:19
Jorge G Sifuentes said:
You really show your heart...
good!!!
give us more..
hugs
July 15th, 2010 07:19
Unglued.
Jorge G Sifuentes said:
Go on...
stage its up for you!!!
good reading you
hugs
July 15th, 2010 07:17
Jorge G Sifuentes said:
Go on...
stage its up for you!!!
good reading you
hugs
July 15th, 2010 07:17
The coldest night.
Jorge G Sifuentes said:
Uff!... this is good
I hope it'n not the last one...
is there more?....
July 15th, 2010 07:11
Jorge G Sifuentes said:
Uff!... this is good
I hope it'n not the last one...
is there more?....
July 15th, 2010 07:11
