Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Magnetic poetic fun
dusk arising said:
Oh blimey you\'ve got me thinking now. Shall i start sticking words on the fridge door. My muse named Beko or Hotpoint.
A great idea.
July 15th, 2018 15:59
dusk arising said:
Oh blimey you\'ve got me thinking now. Shall i start sticking words on the fridge door. My muse named Beko or Hotpoint.
A great idea.
July 15th, 2018 15:59
4am Questions
E-Poems said:
Oh god I can relate to these questions far too well! 4am is prime thinking time, about the world we live in about the universe. So many questions and little answers. you\'re not alone In your thought process! ~E
July 14th, 2018 10:50
E-Poems said:
Oh god I can relate to these questions far too well! 4am is prime thinking time, about the world we live in about the universe. So many questions and little answers. you\'re not alone In your thought process! ~E
July 14th, 2018 10:50
4am Questions
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve plenty of answers but I need to identify the questions - of dear - it\'s a hard life.
July 14th, 2018 09:54
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve plenty of answers but I need to identify the questions - of dear - it\'s a hard life.
July 14th, 2018 09:54
4am Questions
dusk arising said:
I\'d offer a rather simple explanation to all of your queries. You pose these questions because as an intelligent being you have the capacity to be your own \'devils advocate\'. Whilst loving \'our\' world you see its imperfections. Your vivid (poetic) imagination sees other ways and possibly the imperfection of those other ways too..
I would encourage you to entertain the teachings of the Buddha. Walking the beach at night is therapy. \'Where do i fit into this whole damn thing\'.
July 14th, 2018 08:52
dusk arising said:
I\'d offer a rather simple explanation to all of your queries. You pose these questions because as an intelligent being you have the capacity to be your own \'devils advocate\'. Whilst loving \'our\' world you see its imperfections. Your vivid (poetic) imagination sees other ways and possibly the imperfection of those other ways too..
I would encourage you to entertain the teachings of the Buddha. Walking the beach at night is therapy. \'Where do i fit into this whole damn thing\'.
July 14th, 2018 08:52
4am Questions
Heartwriter said:
I don\'t have the answers either. I wish the chain had never broke. I would have helped you pick up the rubish. I hate polluted beaches. Fine write!
July 14th, 2018 03:30
Heartwriter said:
I don\'t have the answers either. I wish the chain had never broke. I would have helped you pick up the rubish. I hate polluted beaches. Fine write!
July 14th, 2018 03:30
4am Questions
orchidee said:
Erm, dunno, I was asleep at 4am, not thinking! heehee.
Have to come back and look at these questions again, or some them.
July 14th, 2018 01:39
orchidee said:
Erm, dunno, I was asleep at 4am, not thinking! heehee.
Have to come back and look at these questions again, or some them.
July 14th, 2018 01:39
Thoughts from body & mind
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Thoughts, feelings, emotions...
All an integral part of our being!
It’s up to us to what we do with them!
“...emotions are more than just triggers
that help us learn from experience, they are the gateway to our very own existence.”
Very well said!
~Laura~
July 13th, 2018 14:36
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Thoughts, feelings, emotions...
All an integral part of our being!
It’s up to us to what we do with them!
“...emotions are more than just triggers
that help us learn from experience, they are the gateway to our very own existence.”
Very well said!
~Laura~
July 13th, 2018 14:36
Thoughts from body & mind
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotions can trigger all thoughts and feelings within us, we just need to go with the ones that will lead us into the light.
July 13th, 2018 08:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotions can trigger all thoughts and feelings within us, we just need to go with the ones that will lead us into the light.
July 13th, 2018 08:25
Thoughts from body & mind
orchidee said:
I\'ve often gone by : \'Thoughts lead to feelings; feelings (including emotions) lead to behaviour/actions\'.
So somewhere to start with, we used a brain cell or two to have a thought. Pity mine have gone on holiday. Dunno when they will be back! heehee.
July 13th, 2018 04:44
orchidee said:
I\'ve often gone by : \'Thoughts lead to feelings; feelings (including emotions) lead to behaviour/actions\'.
So somewhere to start with, we used a brain cell or two to have a thought. Pity mine have gone on holiday. Dunno when they will be back! heehee.
July 13th, 2018 04:44
Words aren\'t enough but where do you start
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A great and thoughtful compassionate poem for support for a friend going through tough times. She must love this and be soothed and consoled by the words of strength. Thumbs .
Soo nice to read from u again. Pleez do write your thoughts/comment under my newest poem too , titled , O human heart\"
July 12th, 2018 12:03
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A great and thoughtful compassionate poem for support for a friend going through tough times. She must love this and be soothed and consoled by the words of strength. Thumbs .
Soo nice to read from u again. Pleez do write your thoughts/comment under my newest poem too , titled , O human heart\"
July 12th, 2018 12:03
Words aren\'t enough but where do you start
Heartwriter said:
Great write. Sorry for the loss your friend endured.
July 12th, 2018 06:19
Heartwriter said:
Great write. Sorry for the loss your friend endured.
July 12th, 2018 06:19
Words aren\'t enough but where do you start
orchidee said:
It\'s deeper than a \'fine\' write really. Making something constructive out of suffering, hardship, etc. Surely one of the most painful things to endure. Plus things like losing a pet, etc.
July 12th, 2018 02:10
orchidee said:
It\'s deeper than a \'fine\' write really. Making something constructive out of suffering, hardship, etc. Surely one of the most painful things to endure. Plus things like losing a pet, etc.
July 12th, 2018 02:10
Words aren\'t enough but where do you start
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, One of our friends lost two babies but had to go full term.
It is so sad to see a child\'s coffin.
July 12th, 2018 02:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, One of our friends lost two babies but had to go full term.
It is so sad to see a child\'s coffin.
July 12th, 2018 02:02
5am confirmation
Goldfinch60 said:
I have always been an omnivore but I also cook, and our children and grandchildren have gone through phases of being vegetarian, vegan, pescetarian and all types in between. It could be a challenge sometimes when they all come to dinner to create meals they will all eat.
Good write PD.
July 12th, 2018 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
I have always been an omnivore but I also cook, and our children and grandchildren have gone through phases of being vegetarian, vegan, pescetarian and all types in between. It could be a challenge sometimes when they all come to dinner to create meals they will all eat.
Good write PD.
July 12th, 2018 01:44
5am confirmation
dusk arising said:
So that was you blasting out the moon in the khazie this morning was it?
As a veggie, do you find your body takes brussel sprouts without the traditional christmas flatulent resolve?
July 11th, 2018 15:18
dusk arising said:
So that was you blasting out the moon in the khazie this morning was it?
As a veggie, do you find your body takes brussel sprouts without the traditional christmas flatulent resolve?
July 11th, 2018 15:18
5am confirmation
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
This reminds me of a
food poisoning episode!
It is the worst!
Feel better!
~Laura~
July 11th, 2018 09:43
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
This reminds me of a
food poisoning episode!
It is the worst!
Feel better!
~Laura~
July 11th, 2018 09:43
5am confirmation
Heartwriter said:
Lactose in tolerate. That sucks! Feel better soon.
July 11th, 2018 09:27
Heartwriter said:
Lactose in tolerate. That sucks! Feel better soon.
July 11th, 2018 09:27
I\'m listening
Christina8 said:
Great write, I hear ya! Hope you are doing well!
July 9th, 2018 18:51
Christina8 said:
Great write, I hear ya! Hope you are doing well!
July 9th, 2018 18:51
Poetry or not! First and last part are worth a look
Goldfinch60 said:
In our lives we often have days where we wish we had never bothered to get up but the days that are wonderful are much more numerous than the bad ones. You have got through the bad day, the good ones await.
July 6th, 2018 00:24
Goldfinch60 said:
In our lives we often have days where we wish we had never bothered to get up but the days that are wonderful are much more numerous than the bad ones. You have got through the bad day, the good ones await.
July 6th, 2018 00:24
Poetry or not! First and last part are worth a look
dusk arising said:
Dan this is an amazing piece recounting a day in the life. A day in the life of one man like no other man on this planet - unique!
So very easy to relate to (which also means very well written) and so naturally expressed.
I\'m commenting upon your style of conveying here. This was really gripping and entertaining. I haven\'t seen you write like this before
I would like to see more in this style sir.
Very impressed.. more please.
July 5th, 2018 16:30
dusk arising said:
Dan this is an amazing piece recounting a day in the life. A day in the life of one man like no other man on this planet - unique!
So very easy to relate to (which also means very well written) and so naturally expressed.
I\'m commenting upon your style of conveying here. This was really gripping and entertaining. I haven\'t seen you write like this before
I would like to see more in this style sir.
Very impressed.. more please.
July 5th, 2018 16:30
Poetry or not! First and last part are worth a look
Heartwriter said:
Sometimes we say things we don\'t really mean. Maybe the day is just going bad and we hold in anger and it comes out misplaced. I know I am guilty. Words once reaching the air can never be brought back. Great write.
July 5th, 2018 09:45
Heartwriter said:
Sometimes we say things we don\'t really mean. Maybe the day is just going bad and we hold in anger and it comes out misplaced. I know I am guilty. Words once reaching the air can never be brought back. Great write.
July 5th, 2018 09:45
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