Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Don\'t hate whos
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
You are you...
be the best you want to be...
...there are no ifs, ands, or buts!
~Laura~
June 28th, 2018 18:48
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
You are you...
be the best you want to be...
...there are no ifs, ands, or buts!
~Laura~
June 28th, 2018 18:48
Don\'t hate whos
E-Poems said:
Absolutely love the message in this poem. Great work ~ E
June 28th, 2018 12:21
E-Poems said:
Absolutely love the message in this poem. Great work ~ E
June 28th, 2018 12:21
Shadow of yourself
sjc513 said:
This is so relatable and your forgiveness is so beautiful it touched me because I still have days where Iām still so angry and hope one day it will go away for her and myself.
June 28th, 2018 10:58
sjc513 said:
This is so relatable and your forgiveness is so beautiful it touched me because I still have days where Iām still so angry and hope one day it will go away for her and myself.
June 28th, 2018 10:58
Back to front
Christina8 said:
You are a great man and poet and it shows! I don\'t think you are backwards. You are doing the best you can. Great write!
June 27th, 2018 13:06
Christina8 said:
You are a great man and poet and it shows! I don\'t think you are backwards. You are doing the best you can. Great write!
June 27th, 2018 13:06
Back to front
orchidee said:
A fine write Dan. Oohh, just don\'t hear me sing. It\'ll only make things ten times worse! It\'s a whirlpool of torment, with no escape. heehee.
June 27th, 2018 13:05
orchidee said:
A fine write Dan. Oohh, just don\'t hear me sing. It\'ll only make things ten times worse! It\'s a whirlpool of torment, with no escape. heehee.
June 27th, 2018 13:05
Back to front
dusk arising said:
Just be gentle with yourself. There are no rules as to how a life should be lived.
Today may not be a day for action. Today your mind may not see or even wish to look ahead.
But if you accept that there will be other days, then you will know that there will be other ways of looking at things.
Sitting back and letting the world go by for a while can be a great way of re-evaluating situations. Wisdom comes with the passing of time.
Once again the words of Max Ehrmann\'s \'Desiderata\' come to mind - worth a read (recommend it to you).
Your writing today is very touching and thought provoking.
June 27th, 2018 08:25
dusk arising said:
Just be gentle with yourself. There are no rules as to how a life should be lived.
Today may not be a day for action. Today your mind may not see or even wish to look ahead.
But if you accept that there will be other days, then you will know that there will be other ways of looking at things.
Sitting back and letting the world go by for a while can be a great way of re-evaluating situations. Wisdom comes with the passing of time.
Once again the words of Max Ehrmann\'s \'Desiderata\' come to mind - worth a read (recommend it to you).
Your writing today is very touching and thought provoking.
June 27th, 2018 08:25
Back to front
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
The head might want to go backwards, but youāre stronger and will divert it and guide it to go toward the forward path...your children are on that path! Stay strong and push away the unwanted!
I HAVE sat with the broken! A tough deal, but rewarding at the end!
~Laura~
June 27th, 2018 06:59
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
The head might want to go backwards, but youāre stronger and will divert it and guide it to go toward the forward path...your children are on that path! Stay strong and push away the unwanted!
I HAVE sat with the broken! A tough deal, but rewarding at the end!
~Laura~
June 27th, 2018 06:59
Back to front
Heartwriter said:
It has a sad tone. Hey, your not backwards. You are what you feel. Created by experiences in life. You can move forward by letting go of the past. You have the ability. Use it. Great write.
June 27th, 2018 02:08
Heartwriter said:
It has a sad tone. Hey, your not backwards. You are what you feel. Created by experiences in life. You can move forward by letting go of the past. You have the ability. Use it. Great write.
June 27th, 2018 02:08
Another write to heal my inner child
Frogspoetry said:
VERY HEARTFELT.I CAN FEEL YOUR PAIN THROUGH YOUR WORDS.KEEP LOOKING UP AND PRAY FOR THE SAVIOR JESUS CHRIST TO TOUCH YOUR LIFE AND ENTER INTO YOUR HEART.YOU RE SOMEBODY WHO CAN MAKE A DIFFERENCE TO OTHERS,I BELIEVE YOU ARE WORTH SAVING,EVERYBODY IS,EVEN IF THEY DON\'T FEEL WORTHY,YOU ARE.I CARE BOUT YOU,AND WOULD LIKE TO SEE YOUR STORY OVERCOME THE PAIN THAT YOU EXPERIENCE.THANK YOU FOR SHARING DAN,KEEP PRESSING ON AND DON\'T GIVE UP.
June 26th, 2018 18:01
Frogspoetry said:
VERY HEARTFELT.I CAN FEEL YOUR PAIN THROUGH YOUR WORDS.KEEP LOOKING UP AND PRAY FOR THE SAVIOR JESUS CHRIST TO TOUCH YOUR LIFE AND ENTER INTO YOUR HEART.YOU RE SOMEBODY WHO CAN MAKE A DIFFERENCE TO OTHERS,I BELIEVE YOU ARE WORTH SAVING,EVERYBODY IS,EVEN IF THEY DON\'T FEEL WORTHY,YOU ARE.I CARE BOUT YOU,AND WOULD LIKE TO SEE YOUR STORY OVERCOME THE PAIN THAT YOU EXPERIENCE.THANK YOU FOR SHARING DAN,KEEP PRESSING ON AND DON\'T GIVE UP.
June 26th, 2018 18:01
Another write to heal my inner child
Christina8 said:
This is a very good write. Loved the post about feeling behind in life because I certainly do too. Thanks for sharing, Dan!
June 26th, 2018 17:12
Christina8 said:
This is a very good write. Loved the post about feeling behind in life because I certainly do too. Thanks for sharing, Dan!
June 26th, 2018 17:12
Another write to heal my inner child
orchidee said:
Here now - I told folk - all they gotta be afraid of in life is me singing! Cos I shall never stop! There ya go! heehee.
June 26th, 2018 11:46
orchidee said:
Here now - I told folk - all they gotta be afraid of in life is me singing! Cos I shall never stop! There ya go! heehee.
June 26th, 2018 11:46
Another write to heal my inner child
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
You may not be able to do it today, or tomorrow, or the next day...but YOU WILL do it!
Yesterday I read QUOTE by Lawless.
Itās a great quote...
āLife is a test.
There are no failing grades,
just a passage.ā
The passage may be arduous, but youāll be able to handle it!
Loved the clip and the message in the pic!
Believe in yourself!
~Laura~
June 26th, 2018 10:13
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
You may not be able to do it today, or tomorrow, or the next day...but YOU WILL do it!
Yesterday I read QUOTE by Lawless.
Itās a great quote...
āLife is a test.
There are no failing grades,
just a passage.ā
The passage may be arduous, but youāll be able to handle it!
Loved the clip and the message in the pic!
Believe in yourself!
~Laura~
June 26th, 2018 10:13
Another write to heal my inner child
Heartwriter said:
Loved this. So nicely written. Really good.
June 26th, 2018 06:37
Heartwriter said:
Loved this. So nicely written. Really good.
June 26th, 2018 06:37
Soul say write but brain takes flight
Goldfinch60 said:
Your writing need not scare you, it is a release from the horrors in life.
June 25th, 2018 23:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Your writing need not scare you, it is a release from the horrors in life.
June 25th, 2018 23:57
Soul say write but brain takes flight
orchidee said:
You\'re bold, strong, confident as that lion! He looks like he could command the sea. It won\'t drown him, or overcome him. He knows - you know.
Sometimes habitual thoughts can try to take over, whether negatively or positively.
Reminded me of a picture - a kitten looks in a mirror and see itself as a lion!
June 25th, 2018 13:59
orchidee said:
You\'re bold, strong, confident as that lion! He looks like he could command the sea. It won\'t drown him, or overcome him. He knows - you know.
Sometimes habitual thoughts can try to take over, whether negatively or positively.
Reminded me of a picture - a kitten looks in a mirror and see itself as a lion!
June 25th, 2018 13:59
New music to feed the soul
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Yes, we all struggle...some of us more than others!
āIām in a shadow of the who that I could be...ā
You do have the courage!
Donāt cage that āraw emotion internallyā!
By writing this excellent piece, youāre aware of your strength! You have a head start. Donāt fall behind!
~Laura~
June 22nd, 2018 15:29
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Yes, we all struggle...some of us more than others!
āIām in a shadow of the who that I could be...ā
You do have the courage!
Donāt cage that āraw emotion internallyā!
By writing this excellent piece, youāre aware of your strength! You have a head start. Donāt fall behind!
~Laura~
June 22nd, 2018 15:29
New music to feed the soul
Heartwriter said:
I agree. We need to be better to others as well as ourselves. I share the guilt and blame.
June 22nd, 2018 05:06
Heartwriter said:
I agree. We need to be better to others as well as ourselves. I share the guilt and blame.
June 22nd, 2018 05:06
New music to feed the soul
Goldfinch60 said:
May those new beginnings become reality.
June 22nd, 2018 03:00
Goldfinch60 said:
May those new beginnings become reality.
June 22nd, 2018 03:00
Let go of concern
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and good video, she must make you very proud.
June 11th, 2018 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and good video, she must make you very proud.
June 11th, 2018 00:34
Let go of concern
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Awesomeness and uniqueness are indeed two words that describe that amazing young lady! Wow!!! She was super! I loved when she got off the board, somersaulted, and jumped right back on that board! A future Olympian in the making!š
I enjoyed the video very much!
~Laura~
June 10th, 2018 09:37
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Awesomeness and uniqueness are indeed two words that describe that amazing young lady! Wow!!! She was super! I loved when she got off the board, somersaulted, and jumped right back on that board! A future Olympian in the making!š
I enjoyed the video very much!
~Laura~
June 10th, 2018 09:37
Let go of concern
Heartwriter said:
Today we may have much in common in verse. Loved this.
June 10th, 2018 06:54
Heartwriter said:
Today we may have much in common in verse. Loved this.
June 10th, 2018 06:54
What if?
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, words, yours, mine or others can be so meaningful.
June 10th, 2018 01:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, words, yours, mine or others can be so meaningful.
June 10th, 2018 01:04
What if?
poetboy123 said:
I believe that last line flowed wonderfully with the rest, a brilliant write with a great message Dan!
June 9th, 2018 11:47
poetboy123 said:
I believe that last line flowed wonderfully with the rest, a brilliant write with a great message Dan!
June 9th, 2018 11:47
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