Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
The seesaw of life
SLR said:
I think we all, at one time or another, reevaluate who we are. It helps us to become better people. To help others. This brings self confidence, self esteem. If we don\'t reevaluate ourselves than we have become complacent. You have written a beautiful, profound piece today. You have helped everyone who reads it. We can\'t expect to love ourselves overnight, but you should be proud of yourself. Thank you for a wonderful post.
May 19th, 2018 21:51
SLR said:
I think we all, at one time or another, reevaluate who we are. It helps us to become better people. To help others. This brings self confidence, self esteem. If we don\'t reevaluate ourselves than we have become complacent. You have written a beautiful, profound piece today. You have helped everyone who reads it. We can\'t expect to love ourselves overnight, but you should be proud of yourself. Thank you for a wonderful post.
May 19th, 2018 21:51
The seesaw of life
dusk arising said:
That\'s probably the most profound piece of yours i have ever read. There is great wisdom in there and many of us (self included) should take heed of the message you beautifully encapsulate.
Without hesitation this has to go into my favourites.
May 18th, 2018 10:10
dusk arising said:
That\'s probably the most profound piece of yours i have ever read. There is great wisdom in there and many of us (self included) should take heed of the message you beautifully encapsulate.
Without hesitation this has to go into my favourites.
May 18th, 2018 10:10
The seesaw of life
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Yes, be patient! Take all the time needed and without a doubt the seeds you have planted will flower...when they are ready! All in good time, my friend!
All good things require lots of love and devotion to come to fruition! You have plenty of that āLove and Devotionā within you!
Just be patient and youāll eventually enjoy the rewards you so well deserve!
Yesterday is gone...forget it!
Today will be a good day!
...tomorrow even better!
Love the pic...
āAccept yourself as you areā...
YOU ARE GREAT AS YOU ARE!
~Laura~
May 18th, 2018 08:57
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Yes, be patient! Take all the time needed and without a doubt the seeds you have planted will flower...when they are ready! All in good time, my friend!
All good things require lots of love and devotion to come to fruition! You have plenty of that āLove and Devotionā within you!
Just be patient and youāll eventually enjoy the rewards you so well deserve!
Yesterday is gone...forget it!
Today will be a good day!
...tomorrow even better!
Love the pic...
āAccept yourself as you areā...
YOU ARE GREAT AS YOU ARE!
~Laura~
May 18th, 2018 08:57
From the spark of life
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
I concur with Andyās comment!
Reading your poem brought tears to my eyes...happy and emotional ones because I know all will be just fine! Youāre an amazing individual!
~Laura~
May 17th, 2018 08:17
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
I concur with Andyās comment!
Reading your poem brought tears to my eyes...happy and emotional ones because I know all will be just fine! Youāre an amazing individual!
~Laura~
May 17th, 2018 08:17
From the spark of life
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive write, all will be good as you are beginning to realise.
May 17th, 2018 08:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive write, all will be good as you are beginning to realise.
May 17th, 2018 08:05
Thank you all for reminding me
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, to write your feelings onto paper is so fulfilling and so helpful, then to put them on site like this is wonderful as many may feel the same and understand exactly how you/we feel.
May 17th, 2018 00:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, to write your feelings onto paper is so fulfilling and so helpful, then to put them on site like this is wonderful as many may feel the same and understand exactly how you/we feel.
May 17th, 2018 00:10
Thank you all for reminding me
Christina8 said:
This is a wonderful write and I am so glad I came upon it! Thank you so much for sharing that last line too! Very wise! I needed that and this write today.
May 16th, 2018 14:06
Christina8 said:
This is a wonderful write and I am so glad I came upon it! Thank you so much for sharing that last line too! Very wise! I needed that and this write today.
May 16th, 2018 14:06
Thank you all for reminding me
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
So much truth in what you say!
Great author comments!
Positivity is healthy!
You said it best the last stanza!
So glad to read your writings again!
So happy you are among us...on this awesome MPS site! ...minus the trolls,
of course!
~Laura~
May 16th, 2018 11:33
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
So much truth in what you say!
Great author comments!
Positivity is healthy!
You said it best the last stanza!
So glad to read your writings again!
So happy you are among us...on this awesome MPS site! ...minus the trolls,
of course!
~Laura~
May 16th, 2018 11:33
A rhyme a day
Lorna said:
And if the words they do us fail
Poetry will then the words unveil
May 14th, 2018 15:41
Lorna said:
And if the words they do us fail
Poetry will then the words unveil
May 14th, 2018 15:41
A rhyme a day
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Brilliant write! I enjoyed your rhyme of the day!
āBalance and harmony is lovingā...
Your words look very familiar! š
I guess someone cares a whole lot!
You were actually inspired?
Imagine that!š
~Laura~
May 14th, 2018 15:04
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Brilliant write! I enjoyed your rhyme of the day!
āBalance and harmony is lovingā...
Your words look very familiar! š
I guess someone cares a whole lot!
You were actually inspired?
Imagine that!š
~Laura~
May 14th, 2018 15:04
Reflection from the other friends
Lauraš» said:
A poetic piece from Poetic Dan! A Super write!
Spot on with these meaningful words...
āBalance and harmony is lovingā
~Laura~
May 12th, 2018 07:27
Lauraš» said:
A poetic piece from Poetic Dan! A Super write!
Spot on with these meaningful words...
āBalance and harmony is lovingā
~Laura~
May 12th, 2018 07:27
Reflection from the other friends
Lorna said:
Great message......... if you look up Chernobyl.... the animals are THRIVING there now that the people are gone........
May 12th, 2018 05:36
Lorna said:
Great message......... if you look up Chernobyl.... the animals are THRIVING there now that the people are gone........
May 12th, 2018 05:36
Words from the soul
SLR said:
Great message. Never take your day for granted, It may be your last. No matter what we\'re going through, there\'s always someone else going through worse. Thank you for posting this reminder! :-) :-)
May 11th, 2018 17:57
SLR said:
Great message. Never take your day for granted, It may be your last. No matter what we\'re going through, there\'s always someone else going through worse. Thank you for posting this reminder! :-) :-)
May 11th, 2018 17:57
Words from the soul
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Glad to see your writing again!
Your words are very touching and so dear! A beautiful message to behold!
Youāre so right...
āNothing is guaranteed to us not even how or if we formā
We have been gifted with this life we live. Therefore, let us...
āRemember whatever you do you do it well
Thereās no wrong or right, everything is life.ā
Thank you for having shared this extraordinary write!
~Laura~
May 11th, 2018 14:08
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Glad to see your writing again!
Your words are very touching and so dear! A beautiful message to behold!
Youāre so right...
āNothing is guaranteed to us not even how or if we formā
We have been gifted with this life we live. Therefore, let us...
āRemember whatever you do you do it well
Thereās no wrong or right, everything is life.ā
Thank you for having shared this extraordinary write!
~Laura~
May 11th, 2018 14:08
Little pleasures in life
Michael Edwards said:
Really fancy a bum - err sorry - bun like that. And enjoyed the write to go with it.
April 6th, 2018 14:42
Michael Edwards said:
Really fancy a bum - err sorry - bun like that. And enjoyed the write to go with it.
April 6th, 2018 14:42
Little pleasures in life
Lorna said:
How funny.... they should sell those \"buns\" over here in the Northeast USA right now........ way too cold for this time of year and they might make people laugh....
April 6th, 2018 10:53
Lorna said:
How funny.... they should sell those \"buns\" over here in the Northeast USA right now........ way too cold for this time of year and they might make people laugh....
April 6th, 2018 10:53
No blame just the learning game
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
This a beautiful write!
Youāre spot on with...
āThe power is inside us to chooseā and
āWe live, learn and figure this outā!
We do learn from our children!
I loved reading this poem! It reminded me of my two children growing up and me being their mother/referee! I think I was balanced! They turned out ok! Yours will too! Thatā a great pic of your āsproutsā!š
~Laura~
April 4th, 2018 18:35
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
This a beautiful write!
Youāre spot on with...
āThe power is inside us to chooseā and
āWe live, learn and figure this outā!
We do learn from our children!
I loved reading this poem! It reminded me of my two children growing up and me being their mother/referee! I think I was balanced! They turned out ok! Yours will too! Thatā a great pic of your āsproutsā!š
~Laura~
April 4th, 2018 18:35
Drifting again
sylviasearcher said:
I think I had that moment yesterday too.
Feet on the ground.
March 28th, 2018 02:12
sylviasearcher said:
I think I had that moment yesterday too.
Feet on the ground.
March 28th, 2018 02:12
Drifting again
Goldfinch60 said:
Those solutions are out there but sometimes they are hard to find but they are there.
Good write Dan.
March 28th, 2018 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Those solutions are out there but sometimes they are hard to find but they are there.
Good write Dan.
March 28th, 2018 00:35
Moments gone by
Lauraš» said:
Very relatable, Dan!
Iāve shed many tears
while listening to...
āyou are my sunshine ā!
It finally peeked...
and now itās finally there!
Continue to keep your own
ālight burning brightā!
The sunshine will be there
for you!
Your write is a bit sad, but
hopeful! There are many
rays of sunshine waiting
for you!
~Laura~
March 21st, 2018 12:29
Lauraš» said:
Very relatable, Dan!
Iāve shed many tears
while listening to...
āyou are my sunshine ā!
It finally peeked...
and now itās finally there!
Continue to keep your own
ālight burning brightā!
The sunshine will be there
for you!
Your write is a bit sad, but
hopeful! There are many
rays of sunshine waiting
for you!
~Laura~
March 21st, 2018 12:29
Moments gone by
Lorna said:
That happens doesn\'t it - when sometimes emotions just seem to disappear or just get shunted aside because we have other people and things that need us........the last stanza is beautiful....
March 21st, 2018 12:06
Lorna said:
That happens doesn\'t it - when sometimes emotions just seem to disappear or just get shunted aside because we have other people and things that need us........the last stanza is beautiful....
March 21st, 2018 12:06
No end in sight
poetboy123 said:
I read your poem previous to this just now, and I\'d like to start off with my best wishes to you and your child. This poem is a true expression of your self (I\'m inferring you\'re referring to medical costs) and yes, this system, based on profit as the goal, breeds greed. It preys on the helpless, expecting all to simply wait and heed. Experiences like yours need to talked about, the endless exploitation this world is going through can only be ended with a combined effort of the people from the bottom. You will push through this, Dan, I know it. It\'s time to instate politicians led not by the highest \"donator\", but by the will of the people. This reaping of the less fortunate must be brought its end for the sake of everyone.
March 19th, 2018 18:54
poetboy123 said:
I read your poem previous to this just now, and I\'d like to start off with my best wishes to you and your child. This poem is a true expression of your self (I\'m inferring you\'re referring to medical costs) and yes, this system, based on profit as the goal, breeds greed. It preys on the helpless, expecting all to simply wait and heed. Experiences like yours need to talked about, the endless exploitation this world is going through can only be ended with a combined effort of the people from the bottom. You will push through this, Dan, I know it. It\'s time to instate politicians led not by the highest \"donator\", but by the will of the people. This reaping of the less fortunate must be brought its end for the sake of everyone.
March 19th, 2018 18:54
No end in sight
Accidental Poet said:
More and more I see how the politicians we elected care more about themselves than they do of the people who voted them into office. Its just so insane. Excellent write Dan. Hope you find a positive solution.
March 19th, 2018 08:04
Accidental Poet said:
More and more I see how the politicians we elected care more about themselves than they do of the people who voted them into office. Its just so insane. Excellent write Dan. Hope you find a positive solution.
March 19th, 2018 08:04
No end in sight
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
I thought your writing
related to your children
in some way, but I did not know how. Now I understand...and I think itās despicable! Iām so sorry for your situation! I wish we could help somehow!
~Laura~
March 19th, 2018 06:20
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
I thought your writing
related to your children
in some way, but I did not know how. Now I understand...and I think itās despicable! Iām so sorry for your situation! I wish we could help somehow!
~Laura~
March 19th, 2018 06:20
No end in sight
Lorna said:
Everyone seems to be getting this message lately - maybe it\'s spreading! Enough greed..... need less... enjoy more! I\'m with you (assuming I interpreted this correctly that is!)........
March 19th, 2018 05:45
Lorna said:
Everyone seems to be getting this message lately - maybe it\'s spreading! Enough greed..... need less... enjoy more! I\'m with you (assuming I interpreted this correctly that is!)........
March 19th, 2018 05:45
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