Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
What if?
Jhe said:
good one;!
a single act of spite can tear a life apart, whole an act of kindness can restore faith to a broken heart.
June 9th, 2018 08:38
Jhe said:
good one;!
a single act of spite can tear a life apart, whole an act of kindness can restore faith to a broken heart.
June 9th, 2018 08:38
Unnatural
Goldfinch60 said:
It is such a sad situation whenany animal is hit, even more so if they are shot. Good write.
June 5th, 2018 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
It is such a sad situation whenany animal is hit, even more so if they are shot. Good write.
June 5th, 2018 00:46
Unnatural
Lorna said:
Isn\'t it awful to hit a creature..... I hit a deer once but he deflected off the car and ran off - I\'ll never know if he was hurt.....
June 4th, 2018 17:03
Lorna said:
Isn\'t it awful to hit a creature..... I hit a deer once but he deflected off the car and ran off - I\'ll never know if he was hurt.....
June 4th, 2018 17:03
Nature in me
poetboy123 said:
Wow, a brilliant, descriptive piece that closes together perfectly.
June 3rd, 2018 11:55
poetboy123 said:
Wow, a brilliant, descriptive piece that closes together perfectly.
June 3rd, 2018 11:55
For each others sake
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, may you and your brother be each others keeper.
June 3rd, 2018 00:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, may you and your brother be each others keeper.
June 3rd, 2018 00:31
Knock knock
Jhe said:
\"We are all speaking our truths
To my children, never stop speaking yours.\"
better said
than left
to twist love
into bitter regret
as long as he sees you\'re trying, he\'ll try too. just don\'t expect more from him than he can expect from you...
and the love will have a chance to win through
May 29th, 2018 05:45
Jhe said:
\"We are all speaking our truths
To my children, never stop speaking yours.\"
better said
than left
to twist love
into bitter regret
as long as he sees you\'re trying, he\'ll try too. just don\'t expect more from him than he can expect from you...
and the love will have a chance to win through
May 29th, 2018 05:45
His and hers
Jhe said:
this is a timeless piece of writing ~
men and women have always had fears and needs that made us feel vulnerable /made us try to appear stronger than we felt; made us defensive / insensitive...
and having hormones doesn\'t help!
but denial,
that\'s the worst self-defence
in fact it makes zero sense
as it prevents change...
then again, worrying about how much (/ how little) time we have can make us deranged!
there\'s just not enough love
to go around
to keep everybody safe
and each mind sound...
keep doling out that love!
May 29th, 2018 05:07
Jhe said:
this is a timeless piece of writing ~
men and women have always had fears and needs that made us feel vulnerable /made us try to appear stronger than we felt; made us defensive / insensitive...
and having hormones doesn\'t help!
but denial,
that\'s the worst self-defence
in fact it makes zero sense
as it prevents change...
then again, worrying about how much (/ how little) time we have can make us deranged!
there\'s just not enough love
to go around
to keep everybody safe
and each mind sound...
keep doling out that love!
May 29th, 2018 05:07
Shoulder exercises
Jhe said:
hopefully, with you as their dad,
they will come to appreciate that
what passes for culture
ain\'\'t all it\'s hyped up to be,
and will find relief
in the company of friends
and their openly loving family
May 29th, 2018 04:32
Jhe said:
hopefully, with you as their dad,
they will come to appreciate that
what passes for culture
ain\'\'t all it\'s hyped up to be,
and will find relief
in the company of friends
and their openly loving family
May 29th, 2018 04:32
Thank you all for reminding me
Jhe said:
\"As I read your joys, sorrow or pain
I can see where I\'ve come from
I can see where I may be stuck again\"
marvelous.
inspiring eachother
to reflect, relate, regain
the composure that
gets whittled away by pain...
it\'s all love
of which, as they say,
there\'s just too little of;
very nice write
May 29th, 2018 04:11
Jhe said:
\"As I read your joys, sorrow or pain
I can see where I\'ve come from
I can see where I may be stuck again\"
marvelous.
inspiring eachother
to reflect, relate, regain
the composure that
gets whittled away by pain...
it\'s all love
of which, as they say,
there\'s just too little of;
very nice write
May 29th, 2018 04:11
Says part of you!
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Yes, we are all here too!
Interesting pic!
I guess heās here too!š
~Laura~
May 28th, 2018 18:20
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Yes, we are all here too!
Interesting pic!
I guess heās here too!š
~Laura~
May 28th, 2018 18:20
We\'re all key
Goldfinch60 said:
the keys to life are within us all. Good write.
May 27th, 2018 00:31
Goldfinch60 said:
the keys to life are within us all. Good write.
May 27th, 2018 00:31
We\'re all key
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
This is a superb verse!
Youāve conveyed a POWERFUL message with a few words! In summary...
āWe are each otherās keys
Waiting to show us inā
PERFECT
~Laura~
May 26th, 2018 11:16
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
This is a superb verse!
Youāve conveyed a POWERFUL message with a few words! In summary...
āWe are each otherās keys
Waiting to show us inā
PERFECT
~Laura~
May 26th, 2018 11:16
A small (ish) rhyme to ease the mind
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GOOOOOOD MORNING DAN ~ It\'s FRIDAY and we seem to be on the same wavelength this morning ~ thanks for caring & sharing some great \"homilies\" ~ Yours BRIAN I \'ve added TURN TURN TURN by the Byrds ~ to my Poem ~ you will enjoy it ~ it\'s about the vicissitudes of LIFE ~ OK BRIAN
May 25th, 2018 02:39
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GOOOOOOD MORNING DAN ~ It\'s FRIDAY and we seem to be on the same wavelength this morning ~ thanks for caring & sharing some great \"homilies\" ~ Yours BRIAN I \'ve added TURN TURN TURN by the Byrds ~ to my Poem ~ you will enjoy it ~ it\'s about the vicissitudes of LIFE ~ OK BRIAN
May 25th, 2018 02:39
A healing write to turn my anger into light
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
An excellent write! Inspirational!
This is exactly the man I envision when I read your writings...
āIāll be the man that I see in me
Love, compassion and understandingā
~Laura~
May 24th, 2018 10:30
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
An excellent write! Inspirational!
This is exactly the man I envision when I read your writings...
āIāll be the man that I see in me
Love, compassion and understandingā
~Laura~
May 24th, 2018 10:30
A poet told me...
Christina8 said:
Love the write and I absolutely adore the Dr Seuss quote you put up! Great one!
May 23rd, 2018 20:29
Christina8 said:
Love the write and I absolutely adore the Dr Seuss quote you put up! Great one!
May 23rd, 2018 20:29
A poet told me...
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Spot on...
āA rhyme a day makes everything okayā!
It certainly does!
As LG knows, I too love Dr. Seuss! His books are still on my book shelf! I read them to my children and used them as a teaching tool when I taught elementary school! Seussfabulous!š
~Laura~
May 23rd, 2018 09:42
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Spot on...
āA rhyme a day makes everything okayā!
It certainly does!
As LG knows, I too love Dr. Seuss! His books are still on my book shelf! I read them to my children and used them as a teaching tool when I taught elementary school! Seussfabulous!š
~Laura~
May 23rd, 2018 09:42
Leaf or trunk all are welcome
Goldfinch60 said:
If only we could understand them, what wondrous tales they could tell. Good write.
May 23rd, 2018 00:17
Goldfinch60 said:
If only we could understand them, what wondrous tales they could tell. Good write.
May 23rd, 2018 00:17
Leaf or trunk all are welcome
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Your pen is golden! An extraordinarily poignant write!
I love every single word...
and the pic is phenomenal!
āSo come take a leaf or a pew on a rock
Whatever the weather...ā
I would take a leaf from that tree anytime!
~Laura~
May 22nd, 2018 10:51
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Your pen is golden! An extraordinarily poignant write!
I love every single word...
and the pic is phenomenal!
āSo come take a leaf or a pew on a rock
Whatever the weather...ā
I would take a leaf from that tree anytime!
~Laura~
May 22nd, 2018 10:51
Leaf or trunk all are welcome
MLHnow said:
My time was well spent beneath your tree!
MLH
May 22nd, 2018 10:03
MLHnow said:
My time was well spent beneath your tree!
MLH
May 22nd, 2018 10:03
To the end. From the spark of life
SLR said:
Meaningful and thought provoking. Great post! I think a lot of parents ask themselves these same questions.
May 21st, 2018 21:50
SLR said:
Meaningful and thought provoking. Great post! I think a lot of parents ask themselves these same questions.
May 21st, 2018 21:50
To the end. From the spark of life
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a searching write with some searching questions of yourself but you seem to be answering them and are finding a way into your better future. Stay strong and look towards the the light.
May 21st, 2018 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a searching write with some searching questions of yourself but you seem to be answering them and are finding a way into your better future. Stay strong and look towards the the light.
May 21st, 2018 00:26
To the end. From the spark of life
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Youāre asking yourself many questions. By just stating, āIs the connection stronger than before
As to make the same mistake means I learned nothing from my first fallā...
It is evident that intuitively you have learned from before. You have understood that...
āSometimes you have to understand when letting go is better than holding onā.
Youāve asked yourself many questions. It seems to me youāre answering them.
THAT IS POSITIVITY!
Youāre learning as youāre growing along with your children. You are āBreaking this cycle from generationsā ā...the plan is the plan and what will be will beā!
Your final words are so true...
ā...this isnāt all backwards, itās right from the start...for the inner calling for us all is peace on this earth.ā
And to be at peace with ourselves!
You have understood the plan!
...PROCEED...
~Laura~
May 20th, 2018 09:26
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Youāre asking yourself many questions. By just stating, āIs the connection stronger than before
As to make the same mistake means I learned nothing from my first fallā...
It is evident that intuitively you have learned from before. You have understood that...
āSometimes you have to understand when letting go is better than holding onā.
Youāve asked yourself many questions. It seems to me youāre answering them.
THAT IS POSITIVITY!
Youāre learning as youāre growing along with your children. You are āBreaking this cycle from generationsā ā...the plan is the plan and what will be will beā!
Your final words are so true...
ā...this isnāt all backwards, itās right from the start...for the inner calling for us all is peace on this earth.ā
And to be at peace with ourselves!
You have understood the plan!
...PROCEED...
~Laura~
May 20th, 2018 09:26
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