Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Another write to heal my inner child
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
You may not be able to do it today, or tomorrow, or the next day...but YOU WILL do it!
Yesterday I read QUOTE by Lawless.
Itās a great quote...
āLife is a test.
There are no failing grades,
just a passage.ā
The passage may be arduous, but youāll be able to handle it!
Loved the clip and the message in the pic!
Believe in yourself!
~Laura~
June 26th, 2018 10:13
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
You may not be able to do it today, or tomorrow, or the next day...but YOU WILL do it!
Yesterday I read QUOTE by Lawless.
Itās a great quote...
āLife is a test.
There are no failing grades,
just a passage.ā
The passage may be arduous, but youāll be able to handle it!
Loved the clip and the message in the pic!
Believe in yourself!
~Laura~
June 26th, 2018 10:13
Another write to heal my inner child
Heartwriter said:
Loved this. So nicely written. Really good.
June 26th, 2018 06:37
Heartwriter said:
Loved this. So nicely written. Really good.
June 26th, 2018 06:37
Soul say write but brain takes flight
Goldfinch60 said:
Your writing need not scare you, it is a release from the horrors in life.
June 25th, 2018 23:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Your writing need not scare you, it is a release from the horrors in life.
June 25th, 2018 23:57
Soul say write but brain takes flight
orchidee said:
You\'re bold, strong, confident as that lion! He looks like he could command the sea. It won\'t drown him, or overcome him. He knows - you know.
Sometimes habitual thoughts can try to take over, whether negatively or positively.
Reminded me of a picture - a kitten looks in a mirror and see itself as a lion!
June 25th, 2018 13:59
orchidee said:
You\'re bold, strong, confident as that lion! He looks like he could command the sea. It won\'t drown him, or overcome him. He knows - you know.
Sometimes habitual thoughts can try to take over, whether negatively or positively.
Reminded me of a picture - a kitten looks in a mirror and see itself as a lion!
June 25th, 2018 13:59
New music to feed the soul
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Yes, we all struggle...some of us more than others!
āIām in a shadow of the who that I could be...ā
You do have the courage!
Donāt cage that āraw emotion internallyā!
By writing this excellent piece, youāre aware of your strength! You have a head start. Donāt fall behind!
~Laura~
June 22nd, 2018 15:29
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Yes, we all struggle...some of us more than others!
āIām in a shadow of the who that I could be...ā
You do have the courage!
Donāt cage that āraw emotion internallyā!
By writing this excellent piece, youāre aware of your strength! You have a head start. Donāt fall behind!
~Laura~
June 22nd, 2018 15:29
New music to feed the soul
Heartwriter said:
I agree. We need to be better to others as well as ourselves. I share the guilt and blame.
June 22nd, 2018 05:06
Heartwriter said:
I agree. We need to be better to others as well as ourselves. I share the guilt and blame.
June 22nd, 2018 05:06
New music to feed the soul
Goldfinch60 said:
May those new beginnings become reality.
June 22nd, 2018 03:00
Goldfinch60 said:
May those new beginnings become reality.
June 22nd, 2018 03:00
Let go of concern
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and good video, she must make you very proud.
June 11th, 2018 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and good video, she must make you very proud.
June 11th, 2018 00:34
Let go of concern
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Awesomeness and uniqueness are indeed two words that describe that amazing young lady! Wow!!! She was super! I loved when she got off the board, somersaulted, and jumped right back on that board! A future Olympian in the making!š
I enjoyed the video very much!
~Laura~
June 10th, 2018 09:37
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Awesomeness and uniqueness are indeed two words that describe that amazing young lady! Wow!!! She was super! I loved when she got off the board, somersaulted, and jumped right back on that board! A future Olympian in the making!š
I enjoyed the video very much!
~Laura~
June 10th, 2018 09:37
Let go of concern
Heartwriter said:
Today we may have much in common in verse. Loved this.
June 10th, 2018 06:54
Heartwriter said:
Today we may have much in common in verse. Loved this.
June 10th, 2018 06:54
What if?
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, words, yours, mine or others can be so meaningful.
June 10th, 2018 01:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, words, yours, mine or others can be so meaningful.
June 10th, 2018 01:04
What if?
poetboy123 said:
I believe that last line flowed wonderfully with the rest, a brilliant write with a great message Dan!
June 9th, 2018 11:47
poetboy123 said:
I believe that last line flowed wonderfully with the rest, a brilliant write with a great message Dan!
June 9th, 2018 11:47
What if?
Jhe said:
good one;!
a single act of spite can tear a life apart, whole an act of kindness can restore faith to a broken heart.
June 9th, 2018 08:38
Jhe said:
good one;!
a single act of spite can tear a life apart, whole an act of kindness can restore faith to a broken heart.
June 9th, 2018 08:38
Unnatural
Goldfinch60 said:
It is such a sad situation whenany animal is hit, even more so if they are shot. Good write.
June 5th, 2018 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
It is such a sad situation whenany animal is hit, even more so if they are shot. Good write.
June 5th, 2018 00:46
Unnatural
Lorna said:
Isn\'t it awful to hit a creature..... I hit a deer once but he deflected off the car and ran off - I\'ll never know if he was hurt.....
June 4th, 2018 17:03
Lorna said:
Isn\'t it awful to hit a creature..... I hit a deer once but he deflected off the car and ran off - I\'ll never know if he was hurt.....
June 4th, 2018 17:03
Nature in me
poetboy123 said:
Wow, a brilliant, descriptive piece that closes together perfectly.
June 3rd, 2018 11:55
poetboy123 said:
Wow, a brilliant, descriptive piece that closes together perfectly.
June 3rd, 2018 11:55
For each others sake
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, may you and your brother be each others keeper.
June 3rd, 2018 00:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, may you and your brother be each others keeper.
June 3rd, 2018 00:31
Knock knock
Jhe said:
\"We are all speaking our truths
To my children, never stop speaking yours.\"
better said
than left
to twist love
into bitter regret
as long as he sees you\'re trying, he\'ll try too. just don\'t expect more from him than he can expect from you...
and the love will have a chance to win through
May 29th, 2018 05:45
Jhe said:
\"We are all speaking our truths
To my children, never stop speaking yours.\"
better said
than left
to twist love
into bitter regret
as long as he sees you\'re trying, he\'ll try too. just don\'t expect more from him than he can expect from you...
and the love will have a chance to win through
May 29th, 2018 05:45
His and hers
Jhe said:
this is a timeless piece of writing ~
men and women have always had fears and needs that made us feel vulnerable /made us try to appear stronger than we felt; made us defensive / insensitive...
and having hormones doesn\'t help!
but denial,
that\'s the worst self-defence
in fact it makes zero sense
as it prevents change...
then again, worrying about how much (/ how little) time we have can make us deranged!
there\'s just not enough love
to go around
to keep everybody safe
and each mind sound...
keep doling out that love!
May 29th, 2018 05:07
Jhe said:
this is a timeless piece of writing ~
men and women have always had fears and needs that made us feel vulnerable /made us try to appear stronger than we felt; made us defensive / insensitive...
and having hormones doesn\'t help!
but denial,
that\'s the worst self-defence
in fact it makes zero sense
as it prevents change...
then again, worrying about how much (/ how little) time we have can make us deranged!
there\'s just not enough love
to go around
to keep everybody safe
and each mind sound...
keep doling out that love!
May 29th, 2018 05:07
Shoulder exercises
Jhe said:
hopefully, with you as their dad,
they will come to appreciate that
what passes for culture
ain\'\'t all it\'s hyped up to be,
and will find relief
in the company of friends
and their openly loving family
May 29th, 2018 04:32
Jhe said:
hopefully, with you as their dad,
they will come to appreciate that
what passes for culture
ain\'\'t all it\'s hyped up to be,
and will find relief
in the company of friends
and their openly loving family
May 29th, 2018 04:32
Thank you all for reminding me
Jhe said:
\"As I read your joys, sorrow or pain
I can see where I\'ve come from
I can see where I may be stuck again\"
marvelous.
inspiring eachother
to reflect, relate, regain
the composure that
gets whittled away by pain...
it\'s all love
of which, as they say,
there\'s just too little of;
very nice write
May 29th, 2018 04:11
Jhe said:
\"As I read your joys, sorrow or pain
I can see where I\'ve come from
I can see where I may be stuck again\"
marvelous.
inspiring eachother
to reflect, relate, regain
the composure that
gets whittled away by pain...
it\'s all love
of which, as they say,
there\'s just too little of;
very nice write
May 29th, 2018 04:11
Says part of you!
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Yes, we are all here too!
Interesting pic!
I guess heās here too!š
~Laura~
May 28th, 2018 18:20
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Yes, we are all here too!
Interesting pic!
I guess heās here too!š
~Laura~
May 28th, 2018 18:20
We\'re all key
Goldfinch60 said:
the keys to life are within us all. Good write.
May 27th, 2018 00:31
Goldfinch60 said:
the keys to life are within us all. Good write.
May 27th, 2018 00:31
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