Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Thank you all for reminding me
Jhe said:
\"As I read your joys, sorrow or pain
I can see where I\'ve come from
I can see where I may be stuck again\"
marvelous.
inspiring eachother
to reflect, relate, regain
the composure that
gets whittled away by pain...
it\'s all love
of which, as they say,
there\'s just too little of;
very nice write
May 29th, 2018 04:11
Jhe said:
\"As I read your joys, sorrow or pain
I can see where I\'ve come from
I can see where I may be stuck again\"
marvelous.
inspiring eachother
to reflect, relate, regain
the composure that
gets whittled away by pain...
it\'s all love
of which, as they say,
there\'s just too little of;
very nice write
May 29th, 2018 04:11
Says part of you!
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Yes, we are all here too!
Interesting pic!
I guess heās here too!š
~Laura~
May 28th, 2018 18:20
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Yes, we are all here too!
Interesting pic!
I guess heās here too!š
~Laura~
May 28th, 2018 18:20
We\'re all key
Goldfinch60 said:
the keys to life are within us all. Good write.
May 27th, 2018 00:31
Goldfinch60 said:
the keys to life are within us all. Good write.
May 27th, 2018 00:31
We\'re all key
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
This is a superb verse!
Youāve conveyed a POWERFUL message with a few words! In summary...
āWe are each otherās keys
Waiting to show us inā
PERFECT
~Laura~
May 26th, 2018 11:16
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
This is a superb verse!
Youāve conveyed a POWERFUL message with a few words! In summary...
āWe are each otherās keys
Waiting to show us inā
PERFECT
~Laura~
May 26th, 2018 11:16
A small (ish) rhyme to ease the mind
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GOOOOOOD MORNING DAN ~ It\'s FRIDAY and we seem to be on the same wavelength this morning ~ thanks for caring & sharing some great \"homilies\" ~ Yours BRIAN I \'ve added TURN TURN TURN by the Byrds ~ to my Poem ~ you will enjoy it ~ it\'s about the vicissitudes of LIFE ~ OK BRIAN
May 25th, 2018 02:39
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GOOOOOOD MORNING DAN ~ It\'s FRIDAY and we seem to be on the same wavelength this morning ~ thanks for caring & sharing some great \"homilies\" ~ Yours BRIAN I \'ve added TURN TURN TURN by the Byrds ~ to my Poem ~ you will enjoy it ~ it\'s about the vicissitudes of LIFE ~ OK BRIAN
May 25th, 2018 02:39
A healing write to turn my anger into light
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
An excellent write! Inspirational!
This is exactly the man I envision when I read your writings...
āIāll be the man that I see in me
Love, compassion and understandingā
~Laura~
May 24th, 2018 10:30
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
An excellent write! Inspirational!
This is exactly the man I envision when I read your writings...
āIāll be the man that I see in me
Love, compassion and understandingā
~Laura~
May 24th, 2018 10:30
A poet told me...
Christina8 said:
Love the write and I absolutely adore the Dr Seuss quote you put up! Great one!
May 23rd, 2018 20:29
Christina8 said:
Love the write and I absolutely adore the Dr Seuss quote you put up! Great one!
May 23rd, 2018 20:29
A poet told me...
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Spot on...
āA rhyme a day makes everything okayā!
It certainly does!
As LG knows, I too love Dr. Seuss! His books are still on my book shelf! I read them to my children and used them as a teaching tool when I taught elementary school! Seussfabulous!š
~Laura~
May 23rd, 2018 09:42
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Spot on...
āA rhyme a day makes everything okayā!
It certainly does!
As LG knows, I too love Dr. Seuss! His books are still on my book shelf! I read them to my children and used them as a teaching tool when I taught elementary school! Seussfabulous!š
~Laura~
May 23rd, 2018 09:42
Leaf or trunk all are welcome
Goldfinch60 said:
If only we could understand them, what wondrous tales they could tell. Good write.
May 23rd, 2018 00:17
Goldfinch60 said:
If only we could understand them, what wondrous tales they could tell. Good write.
May 23rd, 2018 00:17
Leaf or trunk all are welcome
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Your pen is golden! An extraordinarily poignant write!
I love every single word...
and the pic is phenomenal!
āSo come take a leaf or a pew on a rock
Whatever the weather...ā
I would take a leaf from that tree anytime!
~Laura~
May 22nd, 2018 10:51
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Your pen is golden! An extraordinarily poignant write!
I love every single word...
and the pic is phenomenal!
āSo come take a leaf or a pew on a rock
Whatever the weather...ā
I would take a leaf from that tree anytime!
~Laura~
May 22nd, 2018 10:51
Leaf or trunk all are welcome
MLHnow said:
My time was well spent beneath your tree!
MLH
May 22nd, 2018 10:03
MLHnow said:
My time was well spent beneath your tree!
MLH
May 22nd, 2018 10:03
To the end. From the spark of life
SLR said:
Meaningful and thought provoking. Great post! I think a lot of parents ask themselves these same questions.
May 21st, 2018 21:50
SLR said:
Meaningful and thought provoking. Great post! I think a lot of parents ask themselves these same questions.
May 21st, 2018 21:50
To the end. From the spark of life
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a searching write with some searching questions of yourself but you seem to be answering them and are finding a way into your better future. Stay strong and look towards the the light.
May 21st, 2018 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a searching write with some searching questions of yourself but you seem to be answering them and are finding a way into your better future. Stay strong and look towards the the light.
May 21st, 2018 00:26
To the end. From the spark of life
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Youāre asking yourself many questions. By just stating, āIs the connection stronger than before
As to make the same mistake means I learned nothing from my first fallā...
It is evident that intuitively you have learned from before. You have understood that...
āSometimes you have to understand when letting go is better than holding onā.
Youāve asked yourself many questions. It seems to me youāre answering them.
THAT IS POSITIVITY!
Youāre learning as youāre growing along with your children. You are āBreaking this cycle from generationsā ā...the plan is the plan and what will be will beā!
Your final words are so true...
ā...this isnāt all backwards, itās right from the start...for the inner calling for us all is peace on this earth.ā
And to be at peace with ourselves!
You have understood the plan!
...PROCEED...
~Laura~
May 20th, 2018 09:26
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Youāre asking yourself many questions. By just stating, āIs the connection stronger than before
As to make the same mistake means I learned nothing from my first fallā...
It is evident that intuitively you have learned from before. You have understood that...
āSometimes you have to understand when letting go is better than holding onā.
Youāve asked yourself many questions. It seems to me youāre answering them.
THAT IS POSITIVITY!
Youāre learning as youāre growing along with your children. You are āBreaking this cycle from generationsā ā...the plan is the plan and what will be will beā!
Your final words are so true...
ā...this isnāt all backwards, itās right from the start...for the inner calling for us all is peace on this earth.ā
And to be at peace with ourselves!
You have understood the plan!
...PROCEED...
~Laura~
May 20th, 2018 09:26
The seesaw of life
SLR said:
I think we all, at one time or another, reevaluate who we are. It helps us to become better people. To help others. This brings self confidence, self esteem. If we don\'t reevaluate ourselves than we have become complacent. You have written a beautiful, profound piece today. You have helped everyone who reads it. We can\'t expect to love ourselves overnight, but you should be proud of yourself. Thank you for a wonderful post.
May 19th, 2018 21:51
SLR said:
I think we all, at one time or another, reevaluate who we are. It helps us to become better people. To help others. This brings self confidence, self esteem. If we don\'t reevaluate ourselves than we have become complacent. You have written a beautiful, profound piece today. You have helped everyone who reads it. We can\'t expect to love ourselves overnight, but you should be proud of yourself. Thank you for a wonderful post.
May 19th, 2018 21:51
The seesaw of life
dusk arising said:
That\'s probably the most profound piece of yours i have ever read. There is great wisdom in there and many of us (self included) should take heed of the message you beautifully encapsulate.
Without hesitation this has to go into my favourites.
May 18th, 2018 10:10
dusk arising said:
That\'s probably the most profound piece of yours i have ever read. There is great wisdom in there and many of us (self included) should take heed of the message you beautifully encapsulate.
Without hesitation this has to go into my favourites.
May 18th, 2018 10:10
The seesaw of life
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Yes, be patient! Take all the time needed and without a doubt the seeds you have planted will flower...when they are ready! All in good time, my friend!
All good things require lots of love and devotion to come to fruition! You have plenty of that āLove and Devotionā within you!
Just be patient and youāll eventually enjoy the rewards you so well deserve!
Yesterday is gone...forget it!
Today will be a good day!
...tomorrow even better!
Love the pic...
āAccept yourself as you areā...
YOU ARE GREAT AS YOU ARE!
~Laura~
May 18th, 2018 08:57
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Yes, be patient! Take all the time needed and without a doubt the seeds you have planted will flower...when they are ready! All in good time, my friend!
All good things require lots of love and devotion to come to fruition! You have plenty of that āLove and Devotionā within you!
Just be patient and youāll eventually enjoy the rewards you so well deserve!
Yesterday is gone...forget it!
Today will be a good day!
...tomorrow even better!
Love the pic...
āAccept yourself as you areā...
YOU ARE GREAT AS YOU ARE!
~Laura~
May 18th, 2018 08:57
From the spark of life
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
I concur with Andyās comment!
Reading your poem brought tears to my eyes...happy and emotional ones because I know all will be just fine! Youāre an amazing individual!
~Laura~
May 17th, 2018 08:17
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
I concur with Andyās comment!
Reading your poem brought tears to my eyes...happy and emotional ones because I know all will be just fine! Youāre an amazing individual!
~Laura~
May 17th, 2018 08:17
From the spark of life
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive write, all will be good as you are beginning to realise.
May 17th, 2018 08:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive write, all will be good as you are beginning to realise.
May 17th, 2018 08:05
Thank you all for reminding me
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, to write your feelings onto paper is so fulfilling and so helpful, then to put them on site like this is wonderful as many may feel the same and understand exactly how you/we feel.
May 17th, 2018 00:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, to write your feelings onto paper is so fulfilling and so helpful, then to put them on site like this is wonderful as many may feel the same and understand exactly how you/we feel.
May 17th, 2018 00:10
Thank you all for reminding me
Christina8 said:
This is a wonderful write and I am so glad I came upon it! Thank you so much for sharing that last line too! Very wise! I needed that and this write today.
May 16th, 2018 14:06
Christina8 said:
This is a wonderful write and I am so glad I came upon it! Thank you so much for sharing that last line too! Very wise! I needed that and this write today.
May 16th, 2018 14:06
Thank you all for reminding me
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
So much truth in what you say!
Great author comments!
Positivity is healthy!
You said it best the last stanza!
So glad to read your writings again!
So happy you are among us...on this awesome MPS site! ...minus the trolls,
of course!
~Laura~
May 16th, 2018 11:33
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
So much truth in what you say!
Great author comments!
Positivity is healthy!
You said it best the last stanza!
So glad to read your writings again!
So happy you are among us...on this awesome MPS site! ...minus the trolls,
of course!
~Laura~
May 16th, 2018 11:33
A rhyme a day
Lorna said:
And if the words they do us fail
Poetry will then the words unveil
May 14th, 2018 15:41
Lorna said:
And if the words they do us fail
Poetry will then the words unveil
May 14th, 2018 15:41
A rhyme a day
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Brilliant write! I enjoyed your rhyme of the day!
āBalance and harmony is lovingā...
Your words look very familiar! š
I guess someone cares a whole lot!
You were actually inspired?
Imagine that!š
~Laura~
May 14th, 2018 15:04
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Brilliant write! I enjoyed your rhyme of the day!
āBalance and harmony is lovingā...
Your words look very familiar! š
I guess someone cares a whole lot!
You were actually inspired?
Imagine that!š
~Laura~
May 14th, 2018 15:04
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