Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Little pleasures in life
Michael Edwards said:
Really fancy a bum - err sorry - bun like that. And enjoyed the write to go with it.
April 6th, 2018 14:42
Michael Edwards said:
Really fancy a bum - err sorry - bun like that. And enjoyed the write to go with it.
April 6th, 2018 14:42
Little pleasures in life
Lorna said:
How funny.... they should sell those \"buns\" over here in the Northeast USA right now........ way too cold for this time of year and they might make people laugh....
April 6th, 2018 10:53
Lorna said:
How funny.... they should sell those \"buns\" over here in the Northeast USA right now........ way too cold for this time of year and they might make people laugh....
April 6th, 2018 10:53
No blame just the learning game
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
This a beautiful write!
You’re spot on with...
“The power is inside us to choose” and
“We live, learn and figure this out”!
We do learn from our children!
I loved reading this poem! It reminded me of my two children growing up and me being their mother/referee! I think I was balanced! They turned out ok! Yours will too! That’ a great pic of your “sprouts”!😊
~Laura~
April 4th, 2018 18:35
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
This a beautiful write!
You’re spot on with...
“The power is inside us to choose” and
“We live, learn and figure this out”!
We do learn from our children!
I loved reading this poem! It reminded me of my two children growing up and me being their mother/referee! I think I was balanced! They turned out ok! Yours will too! That’ a great pic of your “sprouts”!😊
~Laura~
April 4th, 2018 18:35
Drifting again
sylviasearcher said:
I think I had that moment yesterday too.
Feet on the ground.
March 28th, 2018 02:12
sylviasearcher said:
I think I had that moment yesterday too.
Feet on the ground.
March 28th, 2018 02:12
Drifting again
Goldfinch60 said:
Those solutions are out there but sometimes they are hard to find but they are there.
Good write Dan.
March 28th, 2018 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Those solutions are out there but sometimes they are hard to find but they are there.
Good write Dan.
March 28th, 2018 00:35
Moments gone by
Laura🌻 said:
Very relatable, Dan!
I’ve shed many tears
while listening to...
“you are my sunshine “!
It finally peeked...
and now it’s finally there!
Continue to keep your own
“light burning bright”!
The sunshine will be there
for you!
Your write is a bit sad, but
hopeful! There are many
rays of sunshine waiting
for you!
~Laura~
March 21st, 2018 12:29
Laura🌻 said:
Very relatable, Dan!
I’ve shed many tears
while listening to...
“you are my sunshine “!
It finally peeked...
and now it’s finally there!
Continue to keep your own
“light burning bright”!
The sunshine will be there
for you!
Your write is a bit sad, but
hopeful! There are many
rays of sunshine waiting
for you!
~Laura~
March 21st, 2018 12:29
Moments gone by
Lorna said:
That happens doesn\'t it - when sometimes emotions just seem to disappear or just get shunted aside because we have other people and things that need us........the last stanza is beautiful....
March 21st, 2018 12:06
Lorna said:
That happens doesn\'t it - when sometimes emotions just seem to disappear or just get shunted aside because we have other people and things that need us........the last stanza is beautiful....
March 21st, 2018 12:06
No end in sight
poetboy123 said:
I read your poem previous to this just now, and I\'d like to start off with my best wishes to you and your child. This poem is a true expression of your self (I\'m inferring you\'re referring to medical costs) and yes, this system, based on profit as the goal, breeds greed. It preys on the helpless, expecting all to simply wait and heed. Experiences like yours need to talked about, the endless exploitation this world is going through can only be ended with a combined effort of the people from the bottom. You will push through this, Dan, I know it. It\'s time to instate politicians led not by the highest \"donator\", but by the will of the people. This reaping of the less fortunate must be brought its end for the sake of everyone.
March 19th, 2018 18:54
poetboy123 said:
I read your poem previous to this just now, and I\'d like to start off with my best wishes to you and your child. This poem is a true expression of your self (I\'m inferring you\'re referring to medical costs) and yes, this system, based on profit as the goal, breeds greed. It preys on the helpless, expecting all to simply wait and heed. Experiences like yours need to talked about, the endless exploitation this world is going through can only be ended with a combined effort of the people from the bottom. You will push through this, Dan, I know it. It\'s time to instate politicians led not by the highest \"donator\", but by the will of the people. This reaping of the less fortunate must be brought its end for the sake of everyone.
March 19th, 2018 18:54
No end in sight
Accidental Poet said:
More and more I see how the politicians we elected care more about themselves than they do of the people who voted them into office. Its just so insane. Excellent write Dan. Hope you find a positive solution.
March 19th, 2018 08:04
Accidental Poet said:
More and more I see how the politicians we elected care more about themselves than they do of the people who voted them into office. Its just so insane. Excellent write Dan. Hope you find a positive solution.
March 19th, 2018 08:04
No end in sight
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
I thought your writing
related to your children
in some way, but I did not know how. Now I understand...and I think it’s despicable! I’m so sorry for your situation! I wish we could help somehow!
~Laura~
March 19th, 2018 06:20
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
I thought your writing
related to your children
in some way, but I did not know how. Now I understand...and I think it’s despicable! I’m so sorry for your situation! I wish we could help somehow!
~Laura~
March 19th, 2018 06:20
No end in sight
Lorna said:
Everyone seems to be getting this message lately - maybe it\'s spreading! Enough greed..... need less... enjoy more! I\'m with you (assuming I interpreted this correctly that is!)........
March 19th, 2018 05:45
Lorna said:
Everyone seems to be getting this message lately - maybe it\'s spreading! Enough greed..... need less... enjoy more! I\'m with you (assuming I interpreted this correctly that is!)........
March 19th, 2018 05:45
Differences aside
Goldfinch60 said:
Children do bring us together, I am glad that all is ok.
March 14th, 2018 08:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Children do bring us together, I am glad that all is ok.
March 14th, 2018 08:46
Differences aside
Nicholas Browning said:
Best wishes to you and the young one.
March 14th, 2018 06:57
Nicholas Browning said:
Best wishes to you and the young one.
March 14th, 2018 06:57
Differences aside
Lorna said:
Poor little mite........ hope he feels better and no operation........
March 14th, 2018 06:50
Lorna said:
Poor little mite........ hope he feels better and no operation........
March 14th, 2018 06:50
Bottled up healing
Fay Slimm. said:
Your words and music were sunshine to my eyes Dan - - loved your video and wishing you bundles of options as you and your pet meet life with the simple solution of bottling good feelings of just being together on a quiet beach............. great read my friend.
March 12th, 2018 17:44
Fay Slimm. said:
Your words and music were sunshine to my eyes Dan - - loved your video and wishing you bundles of options as you and your pet meet life with the simple solution of bottling good feelings of just being together on a quiet beach............. great read my friend.
March 12th, 2018 17:44
Bottled up healing
Michael Edwards said:
Enjoyed both music and prose. Great stuff Dan
March 12th, 2018 08:02
Michael Edwards said:
Enjoyed both music and prose. Great stuff Dan
March 12th, 2018 08:02
Bottled up healing
Lorna said:
Thanks Dan for letting us sit with you and your friend on the beach while you played! What\'s a mere 3,000 miles!
March 12th, 2018 06:43
Lorna said:
Thanks Dan for letting us sit with you and your friend on the beach while you played! What\'s a mere 3,000 miles!
March 12th, 2018 06:43
Bottled up healing
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Nice seeing you again!
I must compliment you on
a fine write and a fine
violin rendition of...
“You are my sunshine”!
They complement each
other very well!
I enjoyed the write, the
music, and your companion!
~Laura~
March 12th, 2018 04:30
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Nice seeing you again!
I must compliment you on
a fine write and a fine
violin rendition of...
“You are my sunshine”!
They complement each
other very well!
I enjoyed the write, the
music, and your companion!
~Laura~
March 12th, 2018 04:30
Waiting on times intervention
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
This is a great write!
“The moment comes to do what’s best for the whole tree
To be all we can, with our ability to respond and nurture what we see”
So wise and perceptive of you in recognizing the needs of the whole and not just the one!
I thoroughly enjoyed the read! I applaud you for sharing this beautiful and meaningful message!
~Laura~
March 1st, 2018 04:19
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
This is a great write!
“The moment comes to do what’s best for the whole tree
To be all we can, with our ability to respond and nurture what we see”
So wise and perceptive of you in recognizing the needs of the whole and not just the one!
I thoroughly enjoyed the read! I applaud you for sharing this beautiful and meaningful message!
~Laura~
March 1st, 2018 04:19
Dimensions connected
poetboy123 said:
Finding that inner peace in a chaotic world, you never cease to amaze my friend.
February 27th, 2018 18:26
poetboy123 said:
Finding that inner peace in a chaotic world, you never cease to amaze my friend.
February 27th, 2018 18:26
Dimensions connected
Laura🌻 said:
Spot on my friend...spot on!
A fine write with a great visual!
~Laura~
February 27th, 2018 12:20
Laura🌻 said:
Spot on my friend...spot on!
A fine write with a great visual!
~Laura~
February 27th, 2018 12:20
Beginning to end it out shines the rest
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, those walks with nature can be life affirming.
February 26th, 2018 09:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, those walks with nature can be life affirming.
February 26th, 2018 09:26
Beginning to end it out shines the rest
Lorna said:
A nice praise of nature (or for some, God)...... that speaks to all of us.
February 26th, 2018 04:56
Lorna said:
A nice praise of nature (or for some, God)...... that speaks to all of us.
February 26th, 2018 04:56
Beginning to end it out shines the rest
dusk arising said:
Words in praise of a faith here. Accepting this strength giving joy into your life was your choice/descision. No need to place the thanks externally.
February 26th, 2018 04:30
dusk arising said:
Words in praise of a faith here. Accepting this strength giving joy into your life was your choice/descision. No need to place the thanks externally.
February 26th, 2018 04:30
Roaming around
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, what is inside of us is wonderful.
February 26th, 2018 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, what is inside of us is wonderful.
February 26th, 2018 01:38
Roaming around
Laura🌻 said:
Very inspirational, Dan!
I enjoyed the read very
much! Great message!
~Laura~
February 25th, 2018 22:36
Laura🌻 said:
Very inspirational, Dan!
I enjoyed the read very
much! Great message!
~Laura~
February 25th, 2018 22:36
Roaming around
Accidental Poet said:
Life inspires you, and you inspire life. That\'s the circle of life.
February 25th, 2018 08:43
Accidental Poet said:
Life inspires you, and you inspire life. That\'s the circle of life.
February 25th, 2018 08:43
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