Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Moments gone by
Lorna said:
That happens doesn\'t it - when sometimes emotions just seem to disappear or just get shunted aside because we have other people and things that need us........the last stanza is beautiful....
March 21st, 2018 12:06
Lorna said:
That happens doesn\'t it - when sometimes emotions just seem to disappear or just get shunted aside because we have other people and things that need us........the last stanza is beautiful....
March 21st, 2018 12:06
No end in sight
poetboy123 said:
I read your poem previous to this just now, and I\'d like to start off with my best wishes to you and your child. This poem is a true expression of your self (I\'m inferring you\'re referring to medical costs) and yes, this system, based on profit as the goal, breeds greed. It preys on the helpless, expecting all to simply wait and heed. Experiences like yours need to talked about, the endless exploitation this world is going through can only be ended with a combined effort of the people from the bottom. You will push through this, Dan, I know it. It\'s time to instate politicians led not by the highest \"donator\", but by the will of the people. This reaping of the less fortunate must be brought its end for the sake of everyone.
March 19th, 2018 18:54
poetboy123 said:
I read your poem previous to this just now, and I\'d like to start off with my best wishes to you and your child. This poem is a true expression of your self (I\'m inferring you\'re referring to medical costs) and yes, this system, based on profit as the goal, breeds greed. It preys on the helpless, expecting all to simply wait and heed. Experiences like yours need to talked about, the endless exploitation this world is going through can only be ended with a combined effort of the people from the bottom. You will push through this, Dan, I know it. It\'s time to instate politicians led not by the highest \"donator\", but by the will of the people. This reaping of the less fortunate must be brought its end for the sake of everyone.
March 19th, 2018 18:54
No end in sight
Accidental Poet said:
More and more I see how the politicians we elected care more about themselves than they do of the people who voted them into office. Its just so insane. Excellent write Dan. Hope you find a positive solution.
March 19th, 2018 08:04
Accidental Poet said:
More and more I see how the politicians we elected care more about themselves than they do of the people who voted them into office. Its just so insane. Excellent write Dan. Hope you find a positive solution.
March 19th, 2018 08:04
No end in sight
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
I thought your writing
related to your children
in some way, but I did not know how. Now I understand...and I think itās despicable! Iām so sorry for your situation! I wish we could help somehow!
~Laura~
March 19th, 2018 06:20
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
I thought your writing
related to your children
in some way, but I did not know how. Now I understand...and I think itās despicable! Iām so sorry for your situation! I wish we could help somehow!
~Laura~
March 19th, 2018 06:20
No end in sight
Lorna said:
Everyone seems to be getting this message lately - maybe it\'s spreading! Enough greed..... need less... enjoy more! I\'m with you (assuming I interpreted this correctly that is!)........
March 19th, 2018 05:45
Lorna said:
Everyone seems to be getting this message lately - maybe it\'s spreading! Enough greed..... need less... enjoy more! I\'m with you (assuming I interpreted this correctly that is!)........
March 19th, 2018 05:45
Differences aside
Goldfinch60 said:
Children do bring us together, I am glad that all is ok.
March 14th, 2018 08:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Children do bring us together, I am glad that all is ok.
March 14th, 2018 08:46
Differences aside
Nicholas Browning said:
Best wishes to you and the young one.
March 14th, 2018 06:57
Nicholas Browning said:
Best wishes to you and the young one.
March 14th, 2018 06:57
Differences aside
Lorna said:
Poor little mite........ hope he feels better and no operation........
March 14th, 2018 06:50
Lorna said:
Poor little mite........ hope he feels better and no operation........
March 14th, 2018 06:50
Bottled up healing
Fay Slimm. said:
Your words and music were sunshine to my eyes Dan - - loved your video and wishing you bundles of options as you and your pet meet life with the simple solution of bottling good feelings of just being together on a quiet beach............. great read my friend.
March 12th, 2018 17:44
Fay Slimm. said:
Your words and music were sunshine to my eyes Dan - - loved your video and wishing you bundles of options as you and your pet meet life with the simple solution of bottling good feelings of just being together on a quiet beach............. great read my friend.
March 12th, 2018 17:44
Bottled up healing
Michael Edwards said:
Enjoyed both music and prose. Great stuff Dan
March 12th, 2018 08:02
Michael Edwards said:
Enjoyed both music and prose. Great stuff Dan
March 12th, 2018 08:02
Bottled up healing
Lorna said:
Thanks Dan for letting us sit with you and your friend on the beach while you played! What\'s a mere 3,000 miles!
March 12th, 2018 06:43
Lorna said:
Thanks Dan for letting us sit with you and your friend on the beach while you played! What\'s a mere 3,000 miles!
March 12th, 2018 06:43
Bottled up healing
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Nice seeing you again!
I must compliment you on
a fine write and a fine
violin rendition of...
āYou are my sunshineā!
They complement each
other very well!
I enjoyed the write, the
music, and your companion!
~Laura~
March 12th, 2018 04:30
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Nice seeing you again!
I must compliment you on
a fine write and a fine
violin rendition of...
āYou are my sunshineā!
They complement each
other very well!
I enjoyed the write, the
music, and your companion!
~Laura~
March 12th, 2018 04:30
Waiting on times intervention
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
This is a great write!
āThe moment comes to do whatās best for the whole tree
To be all we can, with our ability to respond and nurture what we seeā
So wise and perceptive of you in recognizing the needs of the whole and not just the one!
I thoroughly enjoyed the read! I applaud you for sharing this beautiful and meaningful message!
~Laura~
March 1st, 2018 04:19
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
This is a great write!
āThe moment comes to do whatās best for the whole tree
To be all we can, with our ability to respond and nurture what we seeā
So wise and perceptive of you in recognizing the needs of the whole and not just the one!
I thoroughly enjoyed the read! I applaud you for sharing this beautiful and meaningful message!
~Laura~
March 1st, 2018 04:19
Dimensions connected
poetboy123 said:
Finding that inner peace in a chaotic world, you never cease to amaze my friend.
February 27th, 2018 18:26
poetboy123 said:
Finding that inner peace in a chaotic world, you never cease to amaze my friend.
February 27th, 2018 18:26
Dimensions connected
Lauraš» said:
Spot on my friend...spot on!
A fine write with a great visual!
~Laura~
February 27th, 2018 12:20
Lauraš» said:
Spot on my friend...spot on!
A fine write with a great visual!
~Laura~
February 27th, 2018 12:20
Beginning to end it out shines the rest
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, those walks with nature can be life affirming.
February 26th, 2018 09:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, those walks with nature can be life affirming.
February 26th, 2018 09:26
Beginning to end it out shines the rest
Lorna said:
A nice praise of nature (or for some, God)...... that speaks to all of us.
February 26th, 2018 04:56
Lorna said:
A nice praise of nature (or for some, God)...... that speaks to all of us.
February 26th, 2018 04:56
Beginning to end it out shines the rest
dusk arising said:
Words in praise of a faith here. Accepting this strength giving joy into your life was your choice/descision. No need to place the thanks externally.
February 26th, 2018 04:30
dusk arising said:
Words in praise of a faith here. Accepting this strength giving joy into your life was your choice/descision. No need to place the thanks externally.
February 26th, 2018 04:30
Roaming around
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, what is inside of us is wonderful.
February 26th, 2018 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, what is inside of us is wonderful.
February 26th, 2018 01:38
Roaming around
Lauraš» said:
Very inspirational, Dan!
I enjoyed the read very
much! Great message!
~Laura~
February 25th, 2018 22:36
Lauraš» said:
Very inspirational, Dan!
I enjoyed the read very
much! Great message!
~Laura~
February 25th, 2018 22:36
Roaming around
Accidental Poet said:
Life inspires you, and you inspire life. That\'s the circle of life.
February 25th, 2018 08:43
Accidental Poet said:
Life inspires you, and you inspire life. That\'s the circle of life.
February 25th, 2018 08:43
Roaming around
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes the centre of life\'s road is where we should walk to learn trust - - love the sentiments of this short verse Dan.
February 25th, 2018 04:54
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes the centre of life\'s road is where we should walk to learn trust - - love the sentiments of this short verse Dan.
February 25th, 2018 04:54
Roaming around
Michael Edwards said:
Three little gems whether together or even separate. Nice one Dan.
February 25th, 2018 04:50
Michael Edwards said:
Three little gems whether together or even separate. Nice one Dan.
February 25th, 2018 04:50
I\'ll keep searching on
Caring dove said:
wow, poetic dan ! some powerful lines here
\'\'My tears pull down like a guillotine
My silence is a dragons fire in my being\'\'
a good piece of writing
February 25th, 2018 04:04
Caring dove said:
wow, poetic dan ! some powerful lines here
\'\'My tears pull down like a guillotine
My silence is a dragons fire in my being\'\'
a good piece of writing
February 25th, 2018 04:04
Time to enter not just look
FredPeyer said:
That harmony is what we all seek! Nicely written, PD!
February 24th, 2018 15:11
FredPeyer said:
That harmony is what we all seek! Nicely written, PD!
February 24th, 2018 15:11
Time to enter not just look
Lauraš» said:
So happy for you, my friend
A fine write for an enjoyable beautiful read!
āThe reason my mind took me away
To show not what I miss but what I haveā
Powerful words to remind us of the precious things that we have!
~Laura~
February 24th, 2018 06:21
Lauraš» said:
So happy for you, my friend
A fine write for an enjoyable beautiful read!
āThe reason my mind took me away
To show not what I miss but what I haveā
Powerful words to remind us of the precious things that we have!
~Laura~
February 24th, 2018 06:21
Time to enter not just look
Goldfinch60 said:
Harmony in life is a wonderful thing for which to aim, I hope to find it soon.
February 24th, 2018 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Harmony in life is a wonderful thing for which to aim, I hope to find it soon.
February 24th, 2018 01:35
Always trying to learn more
FredPeyer said:
Agree with poetboy5454! Your writing is getting better and better as well!
February 19th, 2018 11:49
FredPeyer said:
Agree with poetboy5454! Your writing is getting better and better as well!
February 19th, 2018 11:49
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