Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan



Words aren\'t enough but where do you start
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, One of our friends lost two babies but had to go full term.

It is so sad to see a child\'s coffin.

July 12th, 2018 02:02

Words aren\'t enough but where do you start
orchidee said:

A fine write Dan.

July 12th, 2018 01:58

5am confirmation
Goldfinch60 said:

I have always been an omnivore but I also cook, and our children and grandchildren have gone through phases of being vegetarian, vegan, pescetarian and all types in between. It could be a challenge sometimes when they all come to dinner to create meals they will all eat.

Good write PD.

July 12th, 2018 01:44

5am confirmation
dusk arising said:

So that was you blasting out the moon in the khazie this morning was it?
As a veggie, do you find your body takes brussel sprouts without the traditional christmas flatulent resolve?

July 11th, 2018 15:18

5am confirmation
Laura🌻 said:

Dan,

This reminds me of a
food poisoning episode!
It is the worst!

Feel better!

~Laura~

July 11th, 2018 09:43

5am confirmation
Heartwriter said:

Lactose in tolerate. That sucks! Feel better soon.

July 11th, 2018 09:27

Keep nothing in
sylviasearcher said:

I should make this my mantra to myself

July 11th, 2018 01:58

Keep nothing in
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true.

July 11th, 2018 00:22

Keep nothing in
Heartwriter said:

Beautiful write.

July 10th, 2018 16:37

I\'m listening
Heartwriter said:

A fine write Dan. Keep writing!

July 9th, 2018 18:59

I\'m listening
Christina8 said:

Great write, I hear ya! Hope you are doing well!

July 9th, 2018 18:51

Poetry or not! First and last part are worth a look
Goldfinch60 said:

In our lives we often have days where we wish we had never bothered to get up but the days that are wonderful are much more numerous than the bad ones. You have got through the bad day, the good ones await.

July 6th, 2018 00:24

Poetry or not! First and last part are worth a look
dusk arising said:

Dan this is an amazing piece recounting a day in the life. A day in the life of one man like no other man on this planet - unique!
So very easy to relate to (which also means very well written) and so naturally expressed.
I\'m commenting upon your style of conveying here. This was really gripping and entertaining. I haven\'t seen you write like this before
I would like to see more in this style sir.
Very impressed.. more please.

July 5th, 2018 16:30

Poetry or not! First and last part are worth a look
Heartwriter said:

Sometimes we say things we don\'t really mean. Maybe the day is just going bad and we hold in anger and it comes out misplaced. I know I am guilty. Words once reaching the air can never be brought back. Great write.

July 5th, 2018 09:45

Resistance
poetboy123 said:

There are always plenty of challenges waiting to thwart our goals, one fall is just another chance to get back up!

July 4th, 2018 16:34

Addiction
poetboy123 said:

This kind of honesty takes immense bravery and I\'m sure I\'m speaking for everyone when I say this, but you can accomplish anything you set your mind to.

July 4th, 2018 16:33

Addiction
poetboy123 said:

This kind of honesty takes immense bravery and I\'m sure I\'m speaking for everyone when I say this, but you can accomplish anything you set your mind to.

July 4th, 2018 16:33

Resistance
Laura🌻 said:

Dan,
Calmly...
One hour at a time...
with pics of your children
in front of you and whatever
else is most precious to you!
You can do it! You’re strong
and brave! Concentrate on
that and write!
You’re an awesome writer!
Keep it together today!
I’ll visit your page again...
tomorrow!

~Laura~



July 4th, 2018 10:09

Resistance
Heartwriter said:

Good luck! You can do it. Be your own self. You have stamina and courage. Your bold too.

July 4th, 2018 06:59

Resistance
sylviasearcher said:

Poetry is such a healing process and outlet for me.

Keep writing

Pen is your sword
Addiction the renegade.



July 4th, 2018 05:22

Resistance
orchidee said:

Those \'other things\' - we may see things from different points of view. I mean, singing is bad for health. For other\'s health, that is, when it\'s me singing! heehee.

July 4th, 2018 02:53

Addiction
Laura🌻 said:

Dan,
Brutally honest! Very courageous of you! You can achieve what you’ve set out to do because it’s worth the fight! There are two beautiful children waiting for you!

~Laura~

July 4th, 2018 02:38

Resistance
Goldfinch60 said:

May that luck be with you all the time, thinking of you with kind thoughts.

July 4th, 2018 02:27

Addiction
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good honest write, I do hope that you find the way forward into a place of calm addiction free living.

July 4th, 2018 00:40

Addiction
Heartwriter said:

I too, appreciate honesty such as this
We all have addictive behaviors. Great write.

July 3rd, 2018 18:30

Addiction
Christina8 said:

Very bold and courageous write! I hope you win your battle. So much luck on your journey, my friend!

July 3rd, 2018 16:30

Addiction
Fay Slimm. said:

With honesty like this you will conquer your fears friend - - a most inspiring read and I love that quote from Rumi

July 3rd, 2018 16:00

Addiction
orchidee said:

A fine write Dan. I\'m not addicted to long words (well I might be). Everyone is being existenti-wotist today on here! lol. I dunno wot it means! lol.

July 3rd, 2018 13:50

Addiction
E-Poems said:

Your words are always so real, admirable! Good luck on Journey x

July 3rd, 2018 12:59

Tiger training
Christina8 said:

Love it when you speak your truth! Awesome poetry, Dan!!

July 2nd, 2018 20:18



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