Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Teddy\'s arms
Caring dove said:
I still have teddies and I still hug them sometimes ... they are comforting .
Lovely poem 🙂
July 31st, 2021 07:23
Caring dove said:
I still have teddies and I still hug them sometimes ... they are comforting .
Lovely poem 🙂
July 31st, 2021 07:23
Questions bring answers to survive
Goldfinch60 said:
We all move on in our lives Dan and you have moved on so far into a place where love and beauty are all around you as they will be again tomorrow and all the days of your long life to come.
Andy
July 31st, 2021 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
We all move on in our lives Dan and you have moved on so far into a place where love and beauty are all around you as they will be again tomorrow and all the days of your long life to come.
Andy
July 31st, 2021 00:38
Questions bring answers to survive
Accidental Poet said:
When the beauty comes from within, it\'s reflected back to the source. Dan, you are the hero within. 👍
July 30th, 2021 21:36
Accidental Poet said:
When the beauty comes from within, it\'s reflected back to the source. Dan, you are the hero within. 👍
July 30th, 2021 21:36
Questions bring answers to survive
L. B. Mek said:
\'Next is my desire
to endless escape, this reality and drift
Unable to ever truly connect
without drowning - in it first
Becoming a slave, to the object
setting me free
I gave away love
to be in many places
I didn\'t want to be
To young to understand
the damage: of hidden authenticity\'..
(these - your words, sing: regret\'s soundtrack
to my youthful days of floundered opportunity
and blindly chosen path of counterfeit integrity...)
thank you! dear poet
just reading your insightful wisdom
was a therapeutic experience
July 30th, 2021 05:33
L. B. Mek said:
\'Next is my desire
to endless escape, this reality and drift
Unable to ever truly connect
without drowning - in it first
Becoming a slave, to the object
setting me free
I gave away love
to be in many places
I didn\'t want to be
To young to understand
the damage: of hidden authenticity\'..
(these - your words, sing: regret\'s soundtrack
to my youthful days of floundered opportunity
and blindly chosen path of counterfeit integrity...)
thank you! dear poet
just reading your insightful wisdom
was a therapeutic experience
July 30th, 2021 05:33
My journey to healing
Goldfinch60 said:
That healing is bringing you into a wonderful life Dan where your soul becomes the love within yourself.
Andy
July 28th, 2021 00:14
Goldfinch60 said:
That healing is bringing you into a wonderful life Dan where your soul becomes the love within yourself.
Andy
July 28th, 2021 00:14
My journey to healing
Saxon Crow said:
Bro you hit it right on the head. Be responsible for your own well being, always.
July 27th, 2021 14:44
Saxon Crow said:
Bro you hit it right on the head. Be responsible for your own well being, always.
July 27th, 2021 14:44
My journey to healing
Accidental Poet said:
You\'re well on your way Dan. Write on.
July 27th, 2021 08:17
Accidental Poet said:
You\'re well on your way Dan. Write on.
July 27th, 2021 08:17
My journey to healing
Caring dove said:
I certainly need more healing .... nice write , Dan 🙂everyone wants to feel whole ..
July 27th, 2021 07:03
Caring dove said:
I certainly need more healing .... nice write , Dan 🙂everyone wants to feel whole ..
July 27th, 2021 07:03
My journey to healing
L. B. Mek said:
healing, like all things
is a maturation of learning
take your time, dear poet
let nature do its thing;
\'pain: is relative - to mindset\'
keep that hopeful pen, flowing
and let yourself ink - free
some of that frustration
you\'ll inevitably
find yourself, drowning - in
July 27th, 2021 05:57
L. B. Mek said:
healing, like all things
is a maturation of learning
take your time, dear poet
let nature do its thing;
\'pain: is relative - to mindset\'
keep that hopeful pen, flowing
and let yourself ink - free
some of that frustration
you\'ll inevitably
find yourself, drowning - in
July 27th, 2021 05:57
Snails a Snail
SureshG said:
You are savoring every ounce of pleasure from the simplest of activity, so my hats off to you.
July 26th, 2021 12:31
SureshG said:
You are savoring every ounce of pleasure from the simplest of activity, so my hats off to you.
July 26th, 2021 12:31
Snails a Snail
Neville said:
I\'m with yellowrose Dan .. and what a great use of words mate all threaded together to make one heck of a happy poem .... :) :)
July 25th, 2021 09:56
Neville said:
I\'m with yellowrose Dan .. and what a great use of words mate all threaded together to make one heck of a happy poem .... :) :)
July 25th, 2021 09:56
Snails a Snail
Trenz Pruca said:
Who cares that the snail eats your garden, they are good to eat and though so small can climb that wall. The snail is both admirable and delicious and a worthy metaphor for ambitious. Thanks.
July 24th, 2021 20:51
Trenz Pruca said:
Who cares that the snail eats your garden, they are good to eat and though so small can climb that wall. The snail is both admirable and delicious and a worthy metaphor for ambitious. Thanks.
July 24th, 2021 20:51
Snails a Snail
Saxon Crow said:
The snail in the hot tub
Now there\'s a thing
I guess the bubbles
Make his shell all gleam
July 24th, 2021 13:53
Saxon Crow said:
The snail in the hot tub
Now there\'s a thing
I guess the bubbles
Make his shell all gleam
July 24th, 2021 13:53
Customer become friends, poetic blister & brother with a pen
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Wow 🤩 …
an amazing write showing us ( the readers) your extensive ability to write ‘on the spot’.
Your capacity to love and write is immeasurable! Never doubt yourself (your poetic blister is telling you so)! We care and we are ‘happy you are here’!
I enjoyed the video very much.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
July 24th, 2021 10:30
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Wow 🤩 …
an amazing write showing us ( the readers) your extensive ability to write ‘on the spot’.
Your capacity to love and write is immeasurable! Never doubt yourself (your poetic blister is telling you so)! We care and we are ‘happy you are here’!
I enjoyed the video very much.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
July 24th, 2021 10:30
Snails a Snail
orchidee said:
Good write Dan.
Snail-savers unite! On damp days pick up a snail crossing a pavement, and put it a garden or on some grass. It speeds their journey!
Crossing paths must be like crossing motorways for them.
July 24th, 2021 02:19
orchidee said:
Good write Dan.
Snail-savers unite! On damp days pick up a snail crossing a pavement, and put it a garden or on some grass. It speeds their journey!
Crossing paths must be like crossing motorways for them.
July 24th, 2021 02:19
Snails a Snail
Goldfinch60 said:
Sharing your wonder of life with loved ones is so glorious, that is something I miss.
Andy
July 24th, 2021 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Sharing your wonder of life with loved ones is so glorious, that is something I miss.
Andy
July 24th, 2021 01:44
Snails a Snail
Caring dove said:
! “ a snail is a snail “ , “ the beauty of particles dancing in the air “ especially like those words .
Nice read 🙂
July 24th, 2021 01:25
Caring dove said:
! “ a snail is a snail “ , “ the beauty of particles dancing in the air “ especially like those words .
Nice read 🙂
July 24th, 2021 01:25
Customer become friends, poetic blister & brother with a pen
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Dan, life is wonderful and for you to share your life is even better, thank you.
Andy
July 24th, 2021 00:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Dan, life is wonderful and for you to share your life is even better, thank you.
Andy
July 24th, 2021 00:18
Customer become friends, poetic blister & brother with a pen
Thekkinkkattil said:
friendship is the sweetest flower in the garden of love
July 23rd, 2021 23:52
Thekkinkkattil said:
friendship is the sweetest flower in the garden of love
July 23rd, 2021 23:52
Customer become friends, poetic blister & brother with a pen
Saxon Crow said:
Legend friend that you are
Shine so bright you poetic star
July 23rd, 2021 13:59
Saxon Crow said:
Legend friend that you are
Shine so bright you poetic star
July 23rd, 2021 13:59
Customer become friends, poetic blister & brother with a pen
Accidental Poet said:
Never give up if you can feel that inner beat, as together we make this place pretty sweet! I\'ll agree with that Dan. And Happy Friday to you also. ; )
July 23rd, 2021 12:07
Accidental Poet said:
Never give up if you can feel that inner beat, as together we make this place pretty sweet! I\'ll agree with that Dan. And Happy Friday to you also. ; )
July 23rd, 2021 12:07
Purpose to express and reason to share
Poetic Dan said:
Battle very with my pen, this has been forever my friend and with delight words from the depth of your soul each time! I\'m guaranteed to grow old!
A truly blessed in disguise, like a shield by my side! Believe me when I say we transmit a awesome vibe
Keep being you buddy!
July 23rd, 2021 10:10
Poetic Dan said:
Battle very with my pen, this has been forever my friend and with delight words from the depth of your soul each time! I\'m guaranteed to grow old!
A truly blessed in disguise, like a shield by my side! Believe me when I say we transmit a awesome vibe
Keep being you buddy!
July 23rd, 2021 10:10
Purpose to express and reason to share
L. B. Mek said:
\'I *maybe* uneducated but have plenty of depth\'..
always admire your playfulness, and remember
here at MPS you can always go back and edit your write
without having to delete and repost, but
that\'s not the point of your words today, my friend
in fact, this is a battle cry you\'ve penned
for all of us, still attending that unending curriculum
in our life graduate program, of humble wisdom;
and so, we too
will champion your defiant stance, dear poet
and shout proudly, as one:
\'there\'s no spellcheck or poetry-form, police
when we\'re connecting with those impassioned
words of a writer, determined
to infuse each syllable we read, with
that instinctively recognisable quality
of empathetic integrity
and pure poetic majesty, to express
relatable - comforting, emotional ques
in those poetic safe spaces, between
our inked letters\'
(personally, its a privilege to read
your courageous heart
in every work you pen, and your unending zeal
to convey a little more hope
and compassionate, appeasement
into this chaotic world, we call home)
July 23rd, 2021 04:36
L. B. Mek said:
\'I *maybe* uneducated but have plenty of depth\'..
always admire your playfulness, and remember
here at MPS you can always go back and edit your write
without having to delete and repost, but
that\'s not the point of your words today, my friend
in fact, this is a battle cry you\'ve penned
for all of us, still attending that unending curriculum
in our life graduate program, of humble wisdom;
and so, we too
will champion your defiant stance, dear poet
and shout proudly, as one:
\'there\'s no spellcheck or poetry-form, police
when we\'re connecting with those impassioned
words of a writer, determined
to infuse each syllable we read, with
that instinctively recognisable quality
of empathetic integrity
and pure poetic majesty, to express
relatable - comforting, emotional ques
in those poetic safe spaces, between
our inked letters\'
(personally, its a privilege to read
your courageous heart
in every work you pen, and your unending zeal
to convey a little more hope
and compassionate, appeasement
into this chaotic world, we call home)
July 23rd, 2021 04:36
Customer become friends, poetic blister & brother with a pen
Caring dove said:
Hi Dan 🙂 happy Friday to you too ! I hope you have a nice day ) lovely words here . I can’t say I have many friends .... well who I spend time with , I have my twin sister and a few people I might talk to online ...
Your lucky to be able to make friends 🙂 I hope your ok today .
I like it on this site and I feel like it’s a kind supportive place
July 23rd, 2021 02:56
Caring dove said:
Hi Dan 🙂 happy Friday to you too ! I hope you have a nice day ) lovely words here . I can’t say I have many friends .... well who I spend time with , I have my twin sister and a few people I might talk to online ...
Your lucky to be able to make friends 🙂 I hope your ok today .
I like it on this site and I feel like it’s a kind supportive place
July 23rd, 2021 02:56
Purpose to express and reason to share
Goldfinch60 said:
Just keep writing Dan your words let us into your life as ours do. You have found the light and all your words will move forward with love.
Andy
July 23rd, 2021 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Just keep writing Dan your words let us into your life as ours do. You have found the light and all your words will move forward with love.
Andy
July 23rd, 2021 01:06
Purpose to express and reason to share
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
I’m glad you were inspired to keep on writing your poetry. We certainly don’t need a degree to
‘have plenty of depth’.
Never feel ‘degraded’…
Whenever you’re inspired to write, just do it! May that pen and light keep on guiding you.
Laura🌻
July 22nd, 2021 15:30
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
I’m glad you were inspired to keep on writing your poetry. We certainly don’t need a degree to
‘have plenty of depth’.
Never feel ‘degraded’…
Whenever you’re inspired to write, just do it! May that pen and light keep on guiding you.
Laura🌻
July 22nd, 2021 15:30
Purpose to express and reason to share
Saxon Crow said:
Bro the amount of spelilgn errors I mkae is rilcousdi. Let it slide and let creativity flowwwww
July 22nd, 2021 13:31
Saxon Crow said:
Bro the amount of spelilgn errors I mkae is rilcousdi. Let it slide and let creativity flowwwww
July 22nd, 2021 13:31
Purpose to express and reason to share
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Yeah poet just share, without fear or pressure. And any mistakes can be edited. This poem itself was fantastic. Kudos!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
July 22nd, 2021 12:32
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Yeah poet just share, without fear or pressure. And any mistakes can be edited. This poem itself was fantastic. Kudos!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
July 22nd, 2021 12:32
Purpose to express and reason to share
SureshG said:
Auto check, changed the word, I did not notice
It’s OK! my friends at MPS without judging, will let me know it.
July 22nd, 2021 12:19
SureshG said:
Auto check, changed the word, I did not notice
It’s OK! my friends at MPS without judging, will let me know it.
July 22nd, 2021 12:19
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