Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Balancing act
dusk arising said:
Whatever it is, be it a shape, a mood a tear, a joke or joy, yes, whatever it is... it fits into our life.... why, cos there\'s no choice unless we snuff it!
So toughen up and take the rough with the smooth. Resist the opportunity of boring yourself by looking back at yesterdays misfortunes and instead look forward to something positive even if its just as simple a thing as all the fun you will have next summer with that beautiful daughter of yours who will be much more grown up and probably full of questions to keep you on your toes.
There\'ll be sunshine again sooner or later my friend.
August 16th, 2021 08:33
dusk arising said:
Whatever it is, be it a shape, a mood a tear, a joke or joy, yes, whatever it is... it fits into our life.... why, cos there\'s no choice unless we snuff it!
So toughen up and take the rough with the smooth. Resist the opportunity of boring yourself by looking back at yesterdays misfortunes and instead look forward to something positive even if its just as simple a thing as all the fun you will have next summer with that beautiful daughter of yours who will be much more grown up and probably full of questions to keep you on your toes.
There\'ll be sunshine again sooner or later my friend.
August 16th, 2021 08:33
Balancing act
Caring dove said:
Sorry that you feel depressed ..,
I understand the feeling .
August 16th, 2021 08:32
Caring dove said:
Sorry that you feel depressed ..,
I understand the feeling .
August 16th, 2021 08:32
Beat or bit a journey under our feet
Caring dove said:
Really like this ) lovely words
August 13th, 2021 09:47
Caring dove said:
Really like this ) lovely words
August 13th, 2021 09:47
More of natures lessons
Goldfinch60 said:
Nature is a wonderful teacher in our lives and will be for all our lives.
Andy
August 7th, 2021 00:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Nature is a wonderful teacher in our lives and will be for all our lives.
Andy
August 7th, 2021 00:22
More of natures lessons
Thekkinkkattil said:
Breathing is everything it calmns you mind and body helps you to keep together .Keep it up and thanks for sharing
August 6th, 2021 20:14
Thekkinkkattil said:
Breathing is everything it calmns you mind and body helps you to keep together .Keep it up and thanks for sharing
August 6th, 2021 20:14
More of natures lessons
Fay Slimm. said:
A treat of a read Dan - - what could be better than to be in the moment and learn from nature how to turn \"what was once solid into smooth\" - - keep up the breathing and fine out more as time goes on dear friend.
August 6th, 2021 15:43
Fay Slimm. said:
A treat of a read Dan - - what could be better than to be in the moment and learn from nature how to turn \"what was once solid into smooth\" - - keep up the breathing and fine out more as time goes on dear friend.
August 6th, 2021 15:43
More of natures lessons
Trenz Pruca said:
Thank you Dan. Am enjoyable, thoughtful and thought provoking poem.
August 6th, 2021 14:48
Trenz Pruca said:
Thank you Dan. Am enjoyable, thoughtful and thought provoking poem.
August 6th, 2021 14:48
More of natures lessons
Saxon Crow said:
Breath is everything..... And nothing
August 6th, 2021 11:50
Saxon Crow said:
Breath is everything..... And nothing
August 6th, 2021 11:50
The auto response is not us!
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ll ferret it out, don\'t you worry about that, Dan.
The main item in the agenda:
No one should be telling you It\'s easy, mate. to move on is hard work on yourself with setbacks which pop up from time to time. But being aware of what is happening is more than half the battle.
August 4th, 2021 05:42
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ll ferret it out, don\'t you worry about that, Dan.
The main item in the agenda:
No one should be telling you It\'s easy, mate. to move on is hard work on yourself with setbacks which pop up from time to time. But being aware of what is happening is more than half the battle.
August 4th, 2021 05:42
The auto response is not us!
Caring dove said:
Expressive writing Dan ... “ blue sky truth “ love those words
August 4th, 2021 04:05
Caring dove said:
Expressive writing Dan ... “ blue sky truth “ love those words
August 4th, 2021 04:05
Teddy\'s arms
Goldfinch60 said:
Those teddys are so important in our lives, mine is still sitting by the side of my bed 72 years on.
Andy
August 1st, 2021 00:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Those teddys are so important in our lives, mine is still sitting by the side of my bed 72 years on.
Andy
August 1st, 2021 00:18
Teddy\'s arms
Doggerel Dave said:
Can I put a dream like that on order Dan, providing it doesn\'t deprive the kids. Yes , my Frankie Bear, like Neil\'s was lost at 12 (when we moved to \'stralia’)
PS: Why bury your ‘Comments’ in the side column? – that piece deserves a spot of its own, just as is.
July 31st, 2021 21:45
Doggerel Dave said:
Can I put a dream like that on order Dan, providing it doesn\'t deprive the kids. Yes , my Frankie Bear, like Neil\'s was lost at 12 (when we moved to \'stralia’)
PS: Why bury your ‘Comments’ in the side column? – that piece deserves a spot of its own, just as is.
July 31st, 2021 21:45
Teddy\'s arms
Caring dove said:
I still have teddies and I still hug them sometimes ... they are comforting .
Lovely poem 🙂
July 31st, 2021 07:23
Caring dove said:
I still have teddies and I still hug them sometimes ... they are comforting .
Lovely poem 🙂
July 31st, 2021 07:23
Questions bring answers to survive
Goldfinch60 said:
We all move on in our lives Dan and you have moved on so far into a place where love and beauty are all around you as they will be again tomorrow and all the days of your long life to come.
Andy
July 31st, 2021 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
We all move on in our lives Dan and you have moved on so far into a place where love and beauty are all around you as they will be again tomorrow and all the days of your long life to come.
Andy
July 31st, 2021 00:38
Questions bring answers to survive
Accidental Poet said:
When the beauty comes from within, it\'s reflected back to the source. Dan, you are the hero within. 👍
July 30th, 2021 21:36
Accidental Poet said:
When the beauty comes from within, it\'s reflected back to the source. Dan, you are the hero within. 👍
July 30th, 2021 21:36
Questions bring answers to survive
L. B. Mek said:
\'Next is my desire
to endless escape, this reality and drift
Unable to ever truly connect
without drowning - in it first
Becoming a slave, to the object
setting me free
I gave away love
to be in many places
I didn\'t want to be
To young to understand
the damage: of hidden authenticity\'..
(these - your words, sing: regret\'s soundtrack
to my youthful days of floundered opportunity
and blindly chosen path of counterfeit integrity...)
thank you! dear poet
just reading your insightful wisdom
was a therapeutic experience
July 30th, 2021 05:33
L. B. Mek said:
\'Next is my desire
to endless escape, this reality and drift
Unable to ever truly connect
without drowning - in it first
Becoming a slave, to the object
setting me free
I gave away love
to be in many places
I didn\'t want to be
To young to understand
the damage: of hidden authenticity\'..
(these - your words, sing: regret\'s soundtrack
to my youthful days of floundered opportunity
and blindly chosen path of counterfeit integrity...)
thank you! dear poet
just reading your insightful wisdom
was a therapeutic experience
July 30th, 2021 05:33
My journey to healing
Goldfinch60 said:
That healing is bringing you into a wonderful life Dan where your soul becomes the love within yourself.
Andy
July 28th, 2021 00:14
Goldfinch60 said:
That healing is bringing you into a wonderful life Dan where your soul becomes the love within yourself.
Andy
July 28th, 2021 00:14
My journey to healing
Saxon Crow said:
Bro you hit it right on the head. Be responsible for your own well being, always.
July 27th, 2021 14:44
Saxon Crow said:
Bro you hit it right on the head. Be responsible for your own well being, always.
July 27th, 2021 14:44
My journey to healing
Accidental Poet said:
You\'re well on your way Dan. Write on.
July 27th, 2021 08:17
Accidental Poet said:
You\'re well on your way Dan. Write on.
July 27th, 2021 08:17
My journey to healing
Caring dove said:
I certainly need more healing .... nice write , Dan 🙂everyone wants to feel whole ..
July 27th, 2021 07:03
Caring dove said:
I certainly need more healing .... nice write , Dan 🙂everyone wants to feel whole ..
July 27th, 2021 07:03
My journey to healing
L. B. Mek said:
healing, like all things
is a maturation of learning
take your time, dear poet
let nature do its thing;
\'pain: is relative - to mindset\'
keep that hopeful pen, flowing
and let yourself ink - free
some of that frustration
you\'ll inevitably
find yourself, drowning - in
July 27th, 2021 05:57
L. B. Mek said:
healing, like all things
is a maturation of learning
take your time, dear poet
let nature do its thing;
\'pain: is relative - to mindset\'
keep that hopeful pen, flowing
and let yourself ink - free
some of that frustration
you\'ll inevitably
find yourself, drowning - in
July 27th, 2021 05:57
Snails a Snail
SureshG said:
You are savoring every ounce of pleasure from the simplest of activity, so my hats off to you.
July 26th, 2021 12:31
SureshG said:
You are savoring every ounce of pleasure from the simplest of activity, so my hats off to you.
July 26th, 2021 12:31
Snails a Snail
Neville said:
I\'m with yellowrose Dan .. and what a great use of words mate all threaded together to make one heck of a happy poem .... :) :)
July 25th, 2021 09:56
Neville said:
I\'m with yellowrose Dan .. and what a great use of words mate all threaded together to make one heck of a happy poem .... :) :)
July 25th, 2021 09:56
Snails a Snail
Trenz Pruca said:
Who cares that the snail eats your garden, they are good to eat and though so small can climb that wall. The snail is both admirable and delicious and a worthy metaphor for ambitious. Thanks.
July 24th, 2021 20:51
Trenz Pruca said:
Who cares that the snail eats your garden, they are good to eat and though so small can climb that wall. The snail is both admirable and delicious and a worthy metaphor for ambitious. Thanks.
July 24th, 2021 20:51
Snails a Snail
Saxon Crow said:
The snail in the hot tub
Now there\'s a thing
I guess the bubbles
Make his shell all gleam
July 24th, 2021 13:53
Saxon Crow said:
The snail in the hot tub
Now there\'s a thing
I guess the bubbles
Make his shell all gleam
July 24th, 2021 13:53
Customer become friends, poetic blister & brother with a pen
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Wow 🤩 …
an amazing write showing us ( the readers) your extensive ability to write ‘on the spot’.
Your capacity to love and write is immeasurable! Never doubt yourself (your poetic blister is telling you so)! We care and we are ‘happy you are here’!
I enjoyed the video very much.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
July 24th, 2021 10:30
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Wow 🤩 …
an amazing write showing us ( the readers) your extensive ability to write ‘on the spot’.
Your capacity to love and write is immeasurable! Never doubt yourself (your poetic blister is telling you so)! We care and we are ‘happy you are here’!
I enjoyed the video very much.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
July 24th, 2021 10:30
Snails a Snail
orchidee said:
Good write Dan.
Snail-savers unite! On damp days pick up a snail crossing a pavement, and put it a garden or on some grass. It speeds their journey!
Crossing paths must be like crossing motorways for them.
July 24th, 2021 02:19
orchidee said:
Good write Dan.
Snail-savers unite! On damp days pick up a snail crossing a pavement, and put it a garden or on some grass. It speeds their journey!
Crossing paths must be like crossing motorways for them.
July 24th, 2021 02:19
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