Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
First find made me think of you
Caring dove said:
Nice words ... happiness can make another person feel better .
August 24th, 2021 09:12
Caring dove said:
Nice words ... happiness can make another person feel better .
August 24th, 2021 09:12
Attention to de shell
Neville said:
I love it when your pen flows like this Mr. PD ...............................................tis super sir n truly ............................... Neville
August 24th, 2021 02:43
Neville said:
I love it when your pen flows like this Mr. PD ...............................................tis super sir n truly ............................... Neville
August 24th, 2021 02:43
Attention to de shell
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Dan, life is so wonderful when we see it properly within us.
Andy
August 24th, 2021 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Dan, life is so wonderful when we see it properly within us.
Andy
August 24th, 2021 00:56
Attention to de shell
Accidental Poet said:
Well penned Dan. 👍
For when a man
No longer confuses himself
With the definition of himself
that others have given him,
He is at once
Universal and unique
~ Alan Watts ~
August 23rd, 2021 19:18
Accidental Poet said:
Well penned Dan. 👍
For when a man
No longer confuses himself
With the definition of himself
that others have given him,
He is at once
Universal and unique
~ Alan Watts ~
August 23rd, 2021 19:18
Attention to de shell
Coyote said:
Being able to see the beauty and wonder of everyday things is what it\'s all about. Outstanding write!
August 23rd, 2021 10:55
Coyote said:
Being able to see the beauty and wonder of everyday things is what it\'s all about. Outstanding write!
August 23rd, 2021 10:55
Attention to de shell
dusk arising said:
Yep, plenty more to say about the world around you i.e. away from self.
August 23rd, 2021 07:49
dusk arising said:
Yep, plenty more to say about the world around you i.e. away from self.
August 23rd, 2021 07:49
Attention to de shell
L. B. Mek said:
\'Taking in these moments
I think I find the bliss, not something
that can be taught or bought
it just is!\'..
Amen!
indeed, its that mental wear and tear
we must be weary of
because that painstakingly achieved
moment of serenity
will pass us by, in a forgotten blink...
insightful, as always dear poet
thanks for sharing your wisdom
August 23rd, 2021 06:37
L. B. Mek said:
\'Taking in these moments
I think I find the bliss, not something
that can be taught or bought
it just is!\'..
Amen!
indeed, its that mental wear and tear
we must be weary of
because that painstakingly achieved
moment of serenity
will pass us by, in a forgotten blink...
insightful, as always dear poet
thanks for sharing your wisdom
August 23rd, 2021 06:37
Attention to de shell
Caring dove said:
Being in the flow is related to the water element ...
It’s nice when we can write in the flow without feeling stuck or confused
A good piece of writing
August 23rd, 2021 06:07
Caring dove said:
Being in the flow is related to the water element ...
It’s nice when we can write in the flow without feeling stuck or confused
A good piece of writing
August 23rd, 2021 06:07
Attention to de shell
Lorna said:
Hi Dan - so well expresses trying for centered perspective - I always find life is such a balancing act to try to stay happy and indeed that is a mental game...
August 23rd, 2021 06:03
Lorna said:
Hi Dan - so well expresses trying for centered perspective - I always find life is such a balancing act to try to stay happy and indeed that is a mental game...
August 23rd, 2021 06:03
Battle cry
Goldfinch60 said:
You now know how to \'live better than yesterday Dan as you have worked so hard to get where you are today.
Andy
August 21st, 2021 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
You now know how to \'live better than yesterday Dan as you have worked so hard to get where you are today.
Andy
August 21st, 2021 00:46
Battle cry
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
“Only to grow from the darkness but never stay in”…
“I wave no flag and lay no claims this is just a battle cry”…
“To live better than yesterday growing into legendary steps now in the sky”…
What beautiful words to read. You always speak the truth with NO false pretenses. It is such a pleasure to read your work. You are an inspiration.
Laura🌻
August 20th, 2021 23:16
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
“Only to grow from the darkness but never stay in”…
“I wave no flag and lay no claims this is just a battle cry”…
“To live better than yesterday growing into legendary steps now in the sky”…
What beautiful words to read. You always speak the truth with NO false pretenses. It is such a pleasure to read your work. You are an inspiration.
Laura🌻
August 20th, 2021 23:16
Battle cry
Accidental Poet said:
Everyone has that drive to make tomorrow better than today. And Dan, you\'re well on your way to perfection. 😉
August 20th, 2021 20:39
Accidental Poet said:
Everyone has that drive to make tomorrow better than today. And Dan, you\'re well on your way to perfection. 😉
August 20th, 2021 20:39
Battle cry
Coyote said:
Beautiful sentiment here Dan. Live to be better than yesterday. Love it.
August 20th, 2021 15:30
Coyote said:
Beautiful sentiment here Dan. Live to be better than yesterday. Love it.
August 20th, 2021 15:30
Battle cry
Caring dove said:
Expressive and creative with your words ... good poem 🙂
August 20th, 2021 12:23
Caring dove said:
Expressive and creative with your words ... good poem 🙂
August 20th, 2021 12:23
Droplets
L. B. Mek said:
If this, be your battle cry
I\'ll be your flag carrier
asking
\'where to, dear Poet
who next, do we run to
lets save the world
one syllable at a time
in this poetic dreamscape
of all-things: empathetically Humane;
you lead, I\'ll grow into your footprints
my friend!\'
August 20th, 2021 03:51
L. B. Mek said:
If this, be your battle cry
I\'ll be your flag carrier
asking
\'where to, dear Poet
who next, do we run to
lets save the world
one syllable at a time
in this poetic dreamscape
of all-things: empathetically Humane;
you lead, I\'ll grow into your footprints
my friend!\'
August 20th, 2021 03:51
Droplets
Neville said:
Well said Dan .. if it can be said .. tis best to say it like you mean it ... N
August 19th, 2021 14:41
Neville said:
Well said Dan .. if it can be said .. tis best to say it like you mean it ... N
August 19th, 2021 14:41
Droplets
dusk arising said:
I saw this video of a man skateboarding with his son and daughter.... it made me happy, they all looked very happy. The dogs were loving it..... and there\'s poetry too...
. .....what a life.
August 19th, 2021 13:16
dusk arising said:
I saw this video of a man skateboarding with his son and daughter.... it made me happy, they all looked very happy. The dogs were loving it..... and there\'s poetry too...
. .....what a life.
August 19th, 2021 13:16
Droplets
Caring dove said:
A good poem , Dan 🙂 they say your thoughts create your reality .,, or you attract things related to the energy you send out . I’ve heard that before ( related to the law of attraction ) I think on some level it may be true but who knows .., I’m
Not sure it makes you feel good tho , especially if you’ve been through difficult situations or are not receiving what you want in life .,,
Just my thoughts on it .
Love your last line ... “ when dreams become reality from the well in our mind “
August 19th, 2021 12:07
Caring dove said:
A good poem , Dan 🙂 they say your thoughts create your reality .,, or you attract things related to the energy you send out . I’ve heard that before ( related to the law of attraction ) I think on some level it may be true but who knows .., I’m
Not sure it makes you feel good tho , especially if you’ve been through difficult situations or are not receiving what you want in life .,,
Just my thoughts on it .
Love your last line ... “ when dreams become reality from the well in our mind “
August 19th, 2021 12:07
15 years of delight
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Dan and that video shows what a wonderful life she has had and will take with her in her forthcoming years.
Andy
August 19th, 2021 00:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Dan and that video shows what a wonderful life she has had and will take with her in her forthcoming years.
Andy
August 19th, 2021 00:47
15 years of delight
dusk arising said:
Lovely isn\'t it Dan to see the young ones growing up and smiles on their faces. We are so lucky to be what we are, where we are here in UK when you see the other stuff going on in the world.
August 18th, 2021 07:48
dusk arising said:
Lovely isn\'t it Dan to see the young ones growing up and smiles on their faces. We are so lucky to be what we are, where we are here in UK when you see the other stuff going on in the world.
August 18th, 2021 07:48
15 years of delight
Caring dove said:
Hi Dan ... lovely words !!🙂 such a sweet poem .
August 18th, 2021 07:42
Caring dove said:
Hi Dan ... lovely words !!🙂 such a sweet poem .
August 18th, 2021 07:42
Low is still a flow
dusk arising said:
You ain\'t doing so bad are you old son? Another excellent video, what a remarkable transformation in that animal - all down to your empathy and strength of character.
August 17th, 2021 09:45
dusk arising said:
You ain\'t doing so bad are you old son? Another excellent video, what a remarkable transformation in that animal - all down to your empathy and strength of character.
August 17th, 2021 09:45
Low is still a flow
Neville said:
That\'s the spirit mate .. \'never give up\' is easy to say but not always easy to do or follow ... But and its a BIG BUT mind, if ya do .. it does gets easier and the naff days dont then seem so frequent or severe ... I love hearing about what you do with our doggy friends .. tis a gift sir .... so remember .. ya gotta take the woof with the smooth ............ :)
August 17th, 2021 06:56
Neville said:
That\'s the spirit mate .. \'never give up\' is easy to say but not always easy to do or follow ... But and its a BIG BUT mind, if ya do .. it does gets easier and the naff days dont then seem so frequent or severe ... I love hearing about what you do with our doggy friends .. tis a gift sir .... so remember .. ya gotta take the woof with the smooth ............ :)
August 17th, 2021 06:56
Low is still a flow
Lorna said:
Hi Dan - Life is a constant struggle to stay balanced isn\'t it - and just when we are perfect, we die! Your comments about being a dog trainer sound a lot like my husband\'s approach with horses (he was a horseman professional) - and very good with difficult horses because he didn\'t \"force\" them but was totally aware of their individual fears and problems and always brought them around. Your comments reminded me of him.
August 17th, 2021 05:39
Lorna said:
Hi Dan - Life is a constant struggle to stay balanced isn\'t it - and just when we are perfect, we die! Your comments about being a dog trainer sound a lot like my husband\'s approach with horses (he was a horseman professional) - and very good with difficult horses because he didn\'t \"force\" them but was totally aware of their individual fears and problems and always brought them around. Your comments reminded me of him.
August 17th, 2021 05:39
Low is still a flow
L. B. Mek said:
Amen! brother
keep singing your Truth
ain\'t nothing else more rewarding in life
thanks for including us in your journey, dear Poet
(hope your back pain got better)
August 17th, 2021 05:37
L. B. Mek said:
Amen! brother
keep singing your Truth
ain\'t nothing else more rewarding in life
thanks for including us in your journey, dear Poet
(hope your back pain got better)
August 17th, 2021 05:37
Balancing act
L. B. Mek said:
\'waiting for sun to keep me warm\'
until then, dear Poet
I\'ll just wrap your words around me tight
and use the warmth you imbued into each syllable
to keep my hope\'s dying embers, alive
even if it be for just, one more crucial night...!
(such a sincere and comforting read
a fine example of how to turn our weakness\'
into art: that empowers, so many others)
August 17th, 2021 05:32
L. B. Mek said:
\'waiting for sun to keep me warm\'
until then, dear Poet
I\'ll just wrap your words around me tight
and use the warmth you imbued into each syllable
to keep my hope\'s dying embers, alive
even if it be for just, one more crucial night...!
(such a sincere and comforting read
a fine example of how to turn our weakness\'
into art: that empowers, so many others)
August 17th, 2021 05:32
Balancing act
Goldfinch60 said:
That sun will be there for you Dan, you have been through the darkness and the light will now be forever with you.
Andy
August 16th, 2021 23:58
Goldfinch60 said:
That sun will be there for you Dan, you have been through the darkness and the light will now be forever with you.
Andy
August 16th, 2021 23:58
Balancing act
Accidental Poet said:
You\'re far more that you ever thought you were Dan. A smile reveals your true identity. 😊
August 16th, 2021 20:21
Accidental Poet said:
You\'re far more that you ever thought you were Dan. A smile reveals your true identity. 😊
August 16th, 2021 20:21
Balancing act
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
You’re spot on with your author’s comment,
“who really does have it together all of the time!”
No one!!
Onward and Upward my friend.
Laura🌻
August 16th, 2021 08:45
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
You’re spot on with your author’s comment,
“who really does have it together all of the time!”
No one!!
Onward and Upward my friend.
Laura🌻
August 16th, 2021 08:45
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