Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Battle cry
Caring dove said:
Expressive and creative with your words ... good poem 🙂
August 20th, 2021 12:23
Caring dove said:
Expressive and creative with your words ... good poem 🙂
August 20th, 2021 12:23
Droplets
L. B. Mek said:
If this, be your battle cry
I\'ll be your flag carrier
asking
\'where to, dear Poet
who next, do we run to
lets save the world
one syllable at a time
in this poetic dreamscape
of all-things: empathetically Humane;
you lead, I\'ll grow into your footprints
my friend!\'
August 20th, 2021 03:51
L. B. Mek said:
If this, be your battle cry
I\'ll be your flag carrier
asking
\'where to, dear Poet
who next, do we run to
lets save the world
one syllable at a time
in this poetic dreamscape
of all-things: empathetically Humane;
you lead, I\'ll grow into your footprints
my friend!\'
August 20th, 2021 03:51
Droplets
Neville said:
Well said Dan .. if it can be said .. tis best to say it like you mean it ... N
August 19th, 2021 14:41
Neville said:
Well said Dan .. if it can be said .. tis best to say it like you mean it ... N
August 19th, 2021 14:41
Droplets
dusk arising said:
I saw this video of a man skateboarding with his son and daughter.... it made me happy, they all looked very happy. The dogs were loving it..... and there\'s poetry too...
. .....what a life.
August 19th, 2021 13:16
dusk arising said:
I saw this video of a man skateboarding with his son and daughter.... it made me happy, they all looked very happy. The dogs were loving it..... and there\'s poetry too...
. .....what a life.
August 19th, 2021 13:16
Droplets
Caring dove said:
A good poem , Dan 🙂 they say your thoughts create your reality .,, or you attract things related to the energy you send out . I’ve heard that before ( related to the law of attraction ) I think on some level it may be true but who knows .., I’m
Not sure it makes you feel good tho , especially if you’ve been through difficult situations or are not receiving what you want in life .,,
Just my thoughts on it .
Love your last line ... “ when dreams become reality from the well in our mind “
August 19th, 2021 12:07
Caring dove said:
A good poem , Dan 🙂 they say your thoughts create your reality .,, or you attract things related to the energy you send out . I’ve heard that before ( related to the law of attraction ) I think on some level it may be true but who knows .., I’m
Not sure it makes you feel good tho , especially if you’ve been through difficult situations or are not receiving what you want in life .,,
Just my thoughts on it .
Love your last line ... “ when dreams become reality from the well in our mind “
August 19th, 2021 12:07
15 years of delight
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Dan and that video shows what a wonderful life she has had and will take with her in her forthcoming years.
Andy
August 19th, 2021 00:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Dan and that video shows what a wonderful life she has had and will take with her in her forthcoming years.
Andy
August 19th, 2021 00:47
15 years of delight
dusk arising said:
Lovely isn\'t it Dan to see the young ones growing up and smiles on their faces. We are so lucky to be what we are, where we are here in UK when you see the other stuff going on in the world.
August 18th, 2021 07:48
dusk arising said:
Lovely isn\'t it Dan to see the young ones growing up and smiles on their faces. We are so lucky to be what we are, where we are here in UK when you see the other stuff going on in the world.
August 18th, 2021 07:48
15 years of delight
Caring dove said:
Hi Dan ... lovely words !!🙂 such a sweet poem .
August 18th, 2021 07:42
Caring dove said:
Hi Dan ... lovely words !!🙂 such a sweet poem .
August 18th, 2021 07:42
Low is still a flow
dusk arising said:
You ain\'t doing so bad are you old son? Another excellent video, what a remarkable transformation in that animal - all down to your empathy and strength of character.
August 17th, 2021 09:45
dusk arising said:
You ain\'t doing so bad are you old son? Another excellent video, what a remarkable transformation in that animal - all down to your empathy and strength of character.
August 17th, 2021 09:45
Low is still a flow
Neville said:
That\'s the spirit mate .. \'never give up\' is easy to say but not always easy to do or follow ... But and its a BIG BUT mind, if ya do .. it does gets easier and the naff days dont then seem so frequent or severe ... I love hearing about what you do with our doggy friends .. tis a gift sir .... so remember .. ya gotta take the woof with the smooth ............ :)
August 17th, 2021 06:56
Neville said:
That\'s the spirit mate .. \'never give up\' is easy to say but not always easy to do or follow ... But and its a BIG BUT mind, if ya do .. it does gets easier and the naff days dont then seem so frequent or severe ... I love hearing about what you do with our doggy friends .. tis a gift sir .... so remember .. ya gotta take the woof with the smooth ............ :)
August 17th, 2021 06:56
Low is still a flow
Lorna said:
Hi Dan - Life is a constant struggle to stay balanced isn\'t it - and just when we are perfect, we die! Your comments about being a dog trainer sound a lot like my husband\'s approach with horses (he was a horseman professional) - and very good with difficult horses because he didn\'t \"force\" them but was totally aware of their individual fears and problems and always brought them around. Your comments reminded me of him.
August 17th, 2021 05:39
Lorna said:
Hi Dan - Life is a constant struggle to stay balanced isn\'t it - and just when we are perfect, we die! Your comments about being a dog trainer sound a lot like my husband\'s approach with horses (he was a horseman professional) - and very good with difficult horses because he didn\'t \"force\" them but was totally aware of their individual fears and problems and always brought them around. Your comments reminded me of him.
August 17th, 2021 05:39
Low is still a flow
L. B. Mek said:
Amen! brother
keep singing your Truth
ain\'t nothing else more rewarding in life
thanks for including us in your journey, dear Poet
(hope your back pain got better)
August 17th, 2021 05:37
L. B. Mek said:
Amen! brother
keep singing your Truth
ain\'t nothing else more rewarding in life
thanks for including us in your journey, dear Poet
(hope your back pain got better)
August 17th, 2021 05:37
Balancing act
L. B. Mek said:
\'waiting for sun to keep me warm\'
until then, dear Poet
I\'ll just wrap your words around me tight
and use the warmth you imbued into each syllable
to keep my hope\'s dying embers, alive
even if it be for just, one more crucial night...!
(such a sincere and comforting read
a fine example of how to turn our weakness\'
into art: that empowers, so many others)
August 17th, 2021 05:32
L. B. Mek said:
\'waiting for sun to keep me warm\'
until then, dear Poet
I\'ll just wrap your words around me tight
and use the warmth you imbued into each syllable
to keep my hope\'s dying embers, alive
even if it be for just, one more crucial night...!
(such a sincere and comforting read
a fine example of how to turn our weakness\'
into art: that empowers, so many others)
August 17th, 2021 05:32
Balancing act
Goldfinch60 said:
That sun will be there for you Dan, you have been through the darkness and the light will now be forever with you.
Andy
August 16th, 2021 23:58
Goldfinch60 said:
That sun will be there for you Dan, you have been through the darkness and the light will now be forever with you.
Andy
August 16th, 2021 23:58
Balancing act
Accidental Poet said:
You\'re far more that you ever thought you were Dan. A smile reveals your true identity. 😊
August 16th, 2021 20:21
Accidental Poet said:
You\'re far more that you ever thought you were Dan. A smile reveals your true identity. 😊
August 16th, 2021 20:21
Balancing act
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
You’re spot on with your author’s comment,
“who really does have it together all of the time!”
No one!!
Onward and Upward my friend.
Laura🌻
August 16th, 2021 08:45
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
You’re spot on with your author’s comment,
“who really does have it together all of the time!”
No one!!
Onward and Upward my friend.
Laura🌻
August 16th, 2021 08:45
Balancing act
dusk arising said:
Whatever it is, be it a shape, a mood a tear, a joke or joy, yes, whatever it is... it fits into our life.... why, cos there\'s no choice unless we snuff it!
So toughen up and take the rough with the smooth. Resist the opportunity of boring yourself by looking back at yesterdays misfortunes and instead look forward to something positive even if its just as simple a thing as all the fun you will have next summer with that beautiful daughter of yours who will be much more grown up and probably full of questions to keep you on your toes.
There\'ll be sunshine again sooner or later my friend.
August 16th, 2021 08:33
dusk arising said:
Whatever it is, be it a shape, a mood a tear, a joke or joy, yes, whatever it is... it fits into our life.... why, cos there\'s no choice unless we snuff it!
So toughen up and take the rough with the smooth. Resist the opportunity of boring yourself by looking back at yesterdays misfortunes and instead look forward to something positive even if its just as simple a thing as all the fun you will have next summer with that beautiful daughter of yours who will be much more grown up and probably full of questions to keep you on your toes.
There\'ll be sunshine again sooner or later my friend.
August 16th, 2021 08:33
Balancing act
Caring dove said:
Sorry that you feel depressed ..,
I understand the feeling .
August 16th, 2021 08:32
Caring dove said:
Sorry that you feel depressed ..,
I understand the feeling .
August 16th, 2021 08:32
Beat or bit a journey under our feet
Caring dove said:
Really like this ) lovely words
August 13th, 2021 09:47
Caring dove said:
Really like this ) lovely words
August 13th, 2021 09:47
More of natures lessons
Goldfinch60 said:
Nature is a wonderful teacher in our lives and will be for all our lives.
Andy
August 7th, 2021 00:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Nature is a wonderful teacher in our lives and will be for all our lives.
Andy
August 7th, 2021 00:22
More of natures lessons
Thekkinkkattil said:
Breathing is everything it calmns you mind and body helps you to keep together .Keep it up and thanks for sharing
August 6th, 2021 20:14
Thekkinkkattil said:
Breathing is everything it calmns you mind and body helps you to keep together .Keep it up and thanks for sharing
August 6th, 2021 20:14
More of natures lessons
Fay Slimm. said:
A treat of a read Dan - - what could be better than to be in the moment and learn from nature how to turn \"what was once solid into smooth\" - - keep up the breathing and fine out more as time goes on dear friend.
August 6th, 2021 15:43
Fay Slimm. said:
A treat of a read Dan - - what could be better than to be in the moment and learn from nature how to turn \"what was once solid into smooth\" - - keep up the breathing and fine out more as time goes on dear friend.
August 6th, 2021 15:43
More of natures lessons
Trenz Pruca said:
Thank you Dan. Am enjoyable, thoughtful and thought provoking poem.
August 6th, 2021 14:48
Trenz Pruca said:
Thank you Dan. Am enjoyable, thoughtful and thought provoking poem.
August 6th, 2021 14:48
More of natures lessons
Saxon Crow said:
Breath is everything..... And nothing
August 6th, 2021 11:50
Saxon Crow said:
Breath is everything..... And nothing
August 6th, 2021 11:50
The auto response is not us!
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ll ferret it out, don\'t you worry about that, Dan.
The main item in the agenda:
No one should be telling you It\'s easy, mate. to move on is hard work on yourself with setbacks which pop up from time to time. But being aware of what is happening is more than half the battle.
August 4th, 2021 05:42
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ll ferret it out, don\'t you worry about that, Dan.
The main item in the agenda:
No one should be telling you It\'s easy, mate. to move on is hard work on yourself with setbacks which pop up from time to time. But being aware of what is happening is more than half the battle.
August 4th, 2021 05:42
The auto response is not us!
Caring dove said:
Expressive writing Dan ... “ blue sky truth “ love those words
August 4th, 2021 04:05
Caring dove said:
Expressive writing Dan ... “ blue sky truth “ love those words
August 4th, 2021 04:05
Teddy\'s arms
Goldfinch60 said:
Those teddys are so important in our lives, mine is still sitting by the side of my bed 72 years on.
Andy
August 1st, 2021 00:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Those teddys are so important in our lives, mine is still sitting by the side of my bed 72 years on.
Andy
August 1st, 2021 00:18
Teddy\'s arms
Doggerel Dave said:
Can I put a dream like that on order Dan, providing it doesn\'t deprive the kids. Yes , my Frankie Bear, like Neil\'s was lost at 12 (when we moved to \'stralia’)
PS: Why bury your ‘Comments’ in the side column? – that piece deserves a spot of its own, just as is.
July 31st, 2021 21:45
Doggerel Dave said:
Can I put a dream like that on order Dan, providing it doesn\'t deprive the kids. Yes , my Frankie Bear, like Neil\'s was lost at 12 (when we moved to \'stralia’)
PS: Why bury your ‘Comments’ in the side column? – that piece deserves a spot of its own, just as is.
July 31st, 2021 21:45
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