Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan



The illusion is not hidden
Mase โ™ช said:

Beautiful write Dan! Yes, keep up the great work, it\'s a blessing to hear it.๐ŸŒนโค๏ธ

May 22nd, 2024 02:28

Universe doesn\'t have to make sense to me or you
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words Dan, we all have our own beliefs and when we find them life becomes more settled.

Andy

May 22nd, 2024 01:41

Universe doesn\'t have to make sense to me or you
Doggerel Dave said:

I\'ll vote for that relationship (or non relationship) with the universe always, Dan. Great to see that idea extended and poeticised so strongly.
Certainly it\'s my focus.
Stay with us Dan - it\'s good to see some old timers around.

May 21st, 2024 09:32

Universe doesn\'t have to make sense to me or you
2781 said:

Thou art worthy, O Lord, to receive glory and honour and power: for thou hast created all things, and for thy pleasure they are and were created.

May 21st, 2024 05:44

There\'s no book to this!
Goldfinch60 said:

good to hear your daughter has come to you Dan.

Andy

May 21st, 2024 01:52

There\'s no book to this!
Teddy.15 said:

Dear Dan, it\'s always a victory of sorts when our children choose us, we all have to find our own paths, and when unfortunately parents split, it\'s certainly harder for a child to have to choose. We all have our personal stories, they make us who we are. I\'m so happy for you and your beautiful now wife. Nothing more important than family extended or otherwise. ๐ŸŒน

May 20th, 2024 02:35

There\'s no book to this!
2781 said:

Your greatest challenges are in our own homes.

May 20th, 2024 01:43

There\'s no book to this!
Neville said:


Good news about your daughter .. and another one on the way .. Hooray .. its never easy though mate, is it ..
Hold that head high and go well ..

May 20th, 2024 01:43

Levelling communication
Goldfinch60 said:

Always walk forward Dan you never know what wonders await you in your life.

Andy

May 20th, 2024 01:15

Levelling communication
Teddy.15 said:

As I believe that a change can be a positive thing, in this case it\'s within, this is beautiful I see your fighting spirit dear Dan, and I truly admire your strength ๐ŸŒน

May 19th, 2024 14:31

Any moment now the 5th and last will land
Doggerel Dave said:

Good to know your are still around and seemingly quite productive, Dan....๐Ÿ˜Š

May 19th, 2024 09:25

Levelling communication
2781 said:

Life can be like a trampoline, the lower we go the higher we bounce. Just have to land on our feet.

May 19th, 2024 03:57

Levelling communication
orchidee said:

Good write Dan.

May 19th, 2024 02:04

Levelling communication
Neville said:



the message comes through loud n clear .. here\'s me sitting and hoping that kindness was eventually found

I am convinced we find more of ourselves when our back is up against the proverbial wall ..

May 19th, 2024 01:59

Any moment now the 5th and last will land
Neville said:


Hey Dan .. Many, many, many huge CONGATULATIONS my man .. So good to have you back where you writefully belong .. Write on brother ..

May 19th, 2024 01:33

Any moment now the 5th and last will land
Goldfinch60 said:

Your children will forever love you Dan.
Good to see you back.

Andy

May 19th, 2024 01:23

Any moment now the 5th and last will land
jarcher54 said:

As little Davey Copperfield says, More please!

May 18th, 2024 22:06

Any moment now the 5th and last will land
sorenbarrett said:

A great message to your children and I can hear the pride and optimism in your words. May you have many more days to write.

May 18th, 2024 16:02

Any moment now the 5th and last will land
orchidee said:

Good write Dan.

May 18th, 2024 07:18

Any moment now the 5th and last will land
Teddy.15 said:

Beautiful dear Dan, nothing should ever make us prouder than our own children. ๐ŸŒน And congratulations dear Dan to all of you โค๏ธ

May 18th, 2024 06:20

Neither friend or enemy but rebalance to harmony
BlessedbyGod said:

You and your well being and mental health and state of mind comes first my dear friend,healing takes time and patience and ALOT of energy, but you will get there Dan,
As we get older we realize how difficult things really are ,and the toll stress takes on the mind and body ,
Take your time and take it slow, you got this

September 18th, 2023 08:38

Neither friend or enemy but rebalance to harmony
L. B. Mek said:

equilibrium
gained by facing obstacles
not by hiding
and pretending a fence
we cling to
is the balance, in our life..
Happy 73rd hour of Evolution
may all your climbs be just as rewarding
\'stay\' strong, dear Poet kin

September 18th, 2023 05:38

I\'ll never understand
L. B. Mek said:

\'I think what I truly love
is knowing what I know
but not
putting myself into others shadows.\'
I truly relate, I aspire for that same
sliver of wisdom my friend
patience, such a humbling
yet essential skill in our lives..
whoever teaches it to us

September 18th, 2023 05:34

The cycle is complete
L. B. Mek said:

\'those dark days
will never make me question
my own existence again.\'
brings relief\'s tears to my own
proud eyes, cherished friend
your journey has been so long
and you\'ve fought so hard!
what an example you are
(after the book
\'A child called it\'
eventually came
\'A man named Dave\')
may these days
ink chapters, to the
\'A man named Dan\'
passage of your life, cherished Poet
(clouds can get dark
but still
they do pass, true
they\'ll be replaced with yet
darker clouds
then again, they TOO pass
and once in a while
we\'re gifted a blinding summer day
with clear skies
let\'s find all the clear skies, in our fate
my friend
shoulder to shoulder
one step and fall, at a time
till we can toast all about it
in that place where we\'re guaranteed
our well earned rest...)
cheers ๐Ÿป
(sorry for getting all emotional)

September 18th, 2023 05:31

uncertain and uncomfortable but also blissful and serene
L. B. Mek said:

\'in return they give
the true definition
of unconditional love.\'
wise words
a profound testimony
how I laud your poetic sincerity
I have never read a word from you
that you haven\'t meant
in that moment
a Ture Poet, with veracity
your chosen anchor to artistry
so proud
I get to consider you a poetic brother
and a guiding friend
give Dana a good rub between the ears for me
(I read and learn, wise Poet
sorry for always arriving late)

September 18th, 2023 05:20

Neither friend or enemy but rebalance to harmony
Christina8 said:

It\'s so true that one\'s self worth can be dictated by others, as you wrote Dan, quite sad too. Wonderful write, much peace and respect to you!

September 18th, 2023 02:39

Neither friend or enemy but rebalance to harmony
Goldfinch60 said:

You have moved on Dan, certainly over the years that I have known you and you will have your good life in front of you.

Andy

September 18th, 2023 01:53

I\'ll never understand
Goldfinch60 said:

You have moved on a long way in your life Dan, some things still come back and haunt you but you now have the ability to move on into the new life that you have created.

Andy

September 18th, 2023 01:52

The cycle is complete
Goldfinch60 said:

Such wonderful words Dan and I am so very happy for you to have found your way out of the darkness into the light of your future.

Andy

September 18th, 2023 01:48

I\'ll never understand
Teddy.15 said:

Your incredible courage even to write this and share is a miracle, there are many many moments where I\'ve felt this way (get out the way or die) such a powerful line and I know not an exaggeration to how you feel. But to be here to be human is a miracle sometimes we are chosen to have this type life because we are that strong even if we do not know it at the time. Any disability is a fortress yet some have it even worse. I stand beside you my darling Dan. ๐Ÿ’– may you sleep better tonight. The world is a cruel place for all right now. ๐Ÿ’–

September 16th, 2023 02:11

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