Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Avoid park politics
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Dan, we must go our own way in life otherwise others will drag you down.
Andy
June 25th, 2023 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Dan, we must go our own way in life otherwise others will drag you down.
Andy
June 25th, 2023 01:48
Avoid park politics
Neville said:
I have invariably found that if I say it like it is, then I inevitably feel a whole lot better .. I bet you do feel better having got that off ya chest Dan ..Go well buddy ..... Neville
June 25th, 2023 00:58
Neville said:
I have invariably found that if I say it like it is, then I inevitably feel a whole lot better .. I bet you do feel better having got that off ya chest Dan ..Go well buddy ..... Neville
June 25th, 2023 00:58
Avoid park politics
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Some people judge and say things which are lies .. don’t they .. difficult to understand some people
A good writing , anyway ))
June 24th, 2023 05:57
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Some people judge and say things which are lies .. don’t they .. difficult to understand some people
A good writing , anyway ))
June 24th, 2023 05:57
Avoid park politics
peto said:
Animals with animals
They need trained up as well
\"Experts\" are great for a laugh
Keep em coming big chap
June 24th, 2023 02:17
peto said:
Animals with animals
They need trained up as well
\"Experts\" are great for a laugh
Keep em coming big chap
June 24th, 2023 02:17
Is positivity really a thing!
Goldfinch60 said:
My way in life and my life are always positive, it is the way I am and I hope some of it is seen in you Dan.
Andy
June 24th, 2023 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
My way in life and my life are always positive, it is the way I am and I hope some of it is seen in you Dan.
Andy
June 24th, 2023 01:15
Is positivity really a thing!
peto said:
Is it really a thing?
You sir
Are positivity personified
Inspiring
June 23rd, 2023 12:55
peto said:
Is it really a thing?
You sir
Are positivity personified
Inspiring
June 23rd, 2023 12:55
Is positivity really a thing!
orchidee said:
Well, it\'s not a \'thing\' as a cup of tea is - being completely random there!
Make that a pot of tea and a slice of cake each, for both of us, and we\'ll sit down and discuss this!
June 23rd, 2023 11:51
orchidee said:
Well, it\'s not a \'thing\' as a cup of tea is - being completely random there!
Make that a pot of tea and a slice of cake each, for both of us, and we\'ll sit down and discuss this!
June 23rd, 2023 11:51
Goes down easier with a rhyme
Doggerel Dave said:
All been said above , Dan. Home truth unable to be denied.
June 22nd, 2023 21:09
Doggerel Dave said:
All been said above , Dan. Home truth unable to be denied.
June 22nd, 2023 21:09
Goes down easier with a rhyme
peto said:
On the up and up Dan
Can\'t fail with your attitude
Inspiring
June 22nd, 2023 12:48
peto said:
On the up and up Dan
Can\'t fail with your attitude
Inspiring
June 22nd, 2023 12:48
Goes down easier with a rhyme
Teddy.15 said:
Great vibes here, positive and hopeful. ❤️
June 22nd, 2023 12:42
Teddy.15 said:
Great vibes here, positive and hopeful. ❤️
June 22nd, 2023 12:42
Goes down easier with a rhyme
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Dan,
“real change never happens overnight”…
so true!
Your words today are very inspirational.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Laura 🌻
June 22nd, 2023 06:37
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Dan,
“real change never happens overnight”…
so true!
Your words today are very inspirational.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Laura 🌻
June 22nd, 2023 06:37
Goes down easier with a rhyme
jarcher54 said:
Inspired observation... like a spoonful of sugar! But slightly fewer calories... yes, the healing power of that little trick... our writing teachers warned us it was just a trick, a sing-song novelty... but it\'s really a proper incantation to heal, amuse, sober, or just plain seduce the listener!
June 22nd, 2023 02:23
jarcher54 said:
Inspired observation... like a spoonful of sugar! But slightly fewer calories... yes, the healing power of that little trick... our writing teachers warned us it was just a trick, a sing-song novelty... but it\'s really a proper incantation to heal, amuse, sober, or just plain seduce the listener!
June 22nd, 2023 02:23
Never to late
peto said:
Dan the man
Great to see you still writing
When you got ot you got it
Thoroughly enjoyed
June 21st, 2023 17:49
peto said:
Dan the man
Great to see you still writing
When you got ot you got it
Thoroughly enjoyed
June 21st, 2023 17:49
Not my world but my home
L. B. Mek said:
\' walls can give you safety
yet the heart
needs more than stuff!
A connection
that can be felt and not seen
something, that makes you
want
to be better than yesterday\'s dreams.
Where the feeling of heaven
becomes part of your soul
knowing, there\'s a partner
anchoring*
the other side of your whole\'
Brilliant!!!
(breathtakingly beautiful
stay blessed, my cherished friend)
June 16th, 2023 01:35
L. B. Mek said:
\' walls can give you safety
yet the heart
needs more than stuff!
A connection
that can be felt and not seen
something, that makes you
want
to be better than yesterday\'s dreams.
Where the feeling of heaven
becomes part of your soul
knowing, there\'s a partner
anchoring*
the other side of your whole\'
Brilliant!!!
(breathtakingly beautiful
stay blessed, my cherished friend)
June 16th, 2023 01:35
Not my world but my home
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A good writing Dan ) love is important in life ..nice rhyming in your poem
June 14th, 2023 03:39
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A good writing Dan ) love is important in life ..nice rhyming in your poem
June 14th, 2023 03:39
Not my world but my home
Goldfinch60 said:
That home will come back and all will be fine Dan.
Andy
June 14th, 2023 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
That home will come back and all will be fine Dan.
Andy
June 14th, 2023 01:55
Not my world but my home
BlessedbyGod said:
I\'m sure that you miss her very much Dan,
It will be the sweetest reunion when she returns to you
June 12th, 2023 16:43
BlessedbyGod said:
I\'m sure that you miss her very much Dan,
It will be the sweetest reunion when she returns to you
June 12th, 2023 16:43
Journeying to Art of the mutt (full story)
Poetic Dan said:
Ha its a school you never ever graduate from just keeps going on and on until we pass the baton!
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and give such (what can feel like) undeserving hopeful words. I\'ll keep trying to live up to yours and mine, see you on another rhyme!
Much peace and respect
June 12th, 2023 13:16
Poetic Dan said:
Ha its a school you never ever graduate from just keeps going on and on until we pass the baton!
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and give such (what can feel like) undeserving hopeful words. I\'ll keep trying to live up to yours and mine, see you on another rhyme!
Much peace and respect
June 12th, 2023 13:16
Journeying to Art of the mutt (full story)
L. B. Mek said:
I took my time to read, and absorb
these words of veracity\'s sincerity
and brave, poetic transparency
so grateful I did
how instructive, wise Poet
you dear friend, graduated
from that school of life with flying colours..
I shall carry these words below
for the rest of my life, thank you!
\'Often I catch myself acting out of emotion rather than necessity, this is where a dogs reaction will differ depending on my energy. Knowing this and learning to breathe in moments of built-up tension always changes everyones actions. Giving space to find the next move or conclude that maybe none is needed at all!
The path to think dog, is a beautiful world of seeing how truly powerful we are and the unbelievable affects we have within the world around us. In the simplicity of body language and the energy we use every second of every day.\'
June 12th, 2023 02:32
L. B. Mek said:
I took my time to read, and absorb
these words of veracity\'s sincerity
and brave, poetic transparency
so grateful I did
how instructive, wise Poet
you dear friend, graduated
from that school of life with flying colours..
I shall carry these words below
for the rest of my life, thank you!
\'Often I catch myself acting out of emotion rather than necessity, this is where a dogs reaction will differ depending on my energy. Knowing this and learning to breathe in moments of built-up tension always changes everyones actions. Giving space to find the next move or conclude that maybe none is needed at all!
The path to think dog, is a beautiful world of seeing how truly powerful we are and the unbelievable affects we have within the world around us. In the simplicity of body language and the energy we use every second of every day.\'
June 12th, 2023 02:32
Sometimes this love really hurts
terriblesoul977 said:
You\'re so real, so true.
June 10th, 2023 02:03
terriblesoul977 said:
You\'re so real, so true.
June 10th, 2023 02:03
Sometimes this love really hurts
Goldfinch60 said:
You have come a long way Dan and I am sure all will be well in the future.
Andy
June 10th, 2023 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
You have come a long way Dan and I am sure all will be well in the future.
Andy
June 10th, 2023 00:51
My journey into Art of the mutt
L. B. Mek said:
if you have a unique, insight
and a poetic voice of sincerity
to unfurl your message within
why not write a book, a guide
to offer other\'s, a path
you\'ve come to appreciate
making a link with a dog or a pet
in general
is such a vital tool, we can utilise
for our personal evolution
we can learn how to overcome grief
again n again, accepting
that cycle of existence
we can learn to cherish nature more
and get motivation
to go out more, be more active
learn how to receive attentive thoughtfulness
wordlessly
and how to repay, the incalculable
and, so much more
so yes, dear Poet
write your experience, distil it
as poetic as you can
and let the vibes of fate, guide your story
I for one will read it, gratefully
June 9th, 2023 03:49
L. B. Mek said:
if you have a unique, insight
and a poetic voice of sincerity
to unfurl your message within
why not write a book, a guide
to offer other\'s, a path
you\'ve come to appreciate
making a link with a dog or a pet
in general
is such a vital tool, we can utilise
for our personal evolution
we can learn how to overcome grief
again n again, accepting
that cycle of existence
we can learn to cherish nature more
and get motivation
to go out more, be more active
learn how to receive attentive thoughtfulness
wordlessly
and how to repay, the incalculable
and, so much more
so yes, dear Poet
write your experience, distil it
as poetic as you can
and let the vibes of fate, guide your story
I for one will read it, gratefully
June 9th, 2023 03:49
Somebody save me!
L. B. Mek said:
\'May I find within these words
more purpose to my stroll,
having more conviction
in authentically becoming whole.\'
Amen!
how I relate, wise Poet
and thank you!
for introducing me to such a meaningful song
June 9th, 2023 03:35
L. B. Mek said:
\'May I find within these words
more purpose to my stroll,
having more conviction
in authentically becoming whole.\'
Amen!
how I relate, wise Poet
and thank you!
for introducing me to such a meaningful song
June 9th, 2023 03:35
In the end their will be no words
L. B. Mek said:
\'everything is rippling as it should be!\'
pebbles in our river\'s of fate
we\'re too lost, trying to paddle
our destiny\'s, when the current
of life, already has us
exactly where we should be...
(I love how real you keep your poetic voice
such a feat of transparency, sincerity, bravery!)
stay strong! oh brother of mine
\'and miles to go, before we sleep\'
a most deserved, serene sleep
June 9th, 2023 03:31
L. B. Mek said:
\'everything is rippling as it should be!\'
pebbles in our river\'s of fate
we\'re too lost, trying to paddle
our destiny\'s, when the current
of life, already has us
exactly where we should be...
(I love how real you keep your poetic voice
such a feat of transparency, sincerity, bravery!)
stay strong! oh brother of mine
\'and miles to go, before we sleep\'
a most deserved, serene sleep
June 9th, 2023 03:31
It\'s not work but life
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
so true wise Poet
nature, teaches us best
(I read and try, to heed)
June 9th, 2023 03:27
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
so true wise Poet
nature, teaches us best
(I read and try, to heed)
June 9th, 2023 03:27
Sometimes this love really hurts
L. B. Mek said:
firstly, I love your picture
that\'s such a healthy, gleaming coat
on your wise dog
that discerning eye, says it all! lol
\'In a never-ending journey
of almost got it,
as passion slips from the finger tips.\'
if rainbows are random
why do rainfalls seems so predictable?
if love\'s innate
why do heartbreak\'s seem so contrived
an inevitability of Tim-Stamped fate
..
I too, have had my fingertips, scorched
for holding-on, to those ashes of a defeated love
yet, like you
I choose
to simply hold them, high
let that wind of change
blow on them, and rekindle
my stamina
for those drumming heartbeats
one more time
every time
and on, till we get it right
or die
knowing we gave it all we had..!
June 9th, 2023 03:23
L. B. Mek said:
firstly, I love your picture
that\'s such a healthy, gleaming coat
on your wise dog
that discerning eye, says it all! lol
\'In a never-ending journey
of almost got it,
as passion slips from the finger tips.\'
if rainbows are random
why do rainfalls seems so predictable?
if love\'s innate
why do heartbreak\'s seem so contrived
an inevitability of Tim-Stamped fate
..
I too, have had my fingertips, scorched
for holding-on, to those ashes of a defeated love
yet, like you
I choose
to simply hold them, high
let that wind of change
blow on them, and rekindle
my stamina
for those drumming heartbeats
one more time
every time
and on, till we get it right
or die
knowing we gave it all we had..!
June 9th, 2023 03:23
My journey into Art of the mutt
BlessedbyGod said:
Sometimes it seems as if dogs are more human than we are,
Maybe you should write a book Dan, I\'m already a fan of your work my friend
May 23rd, 2023 21:30
BlessedbyGod said:
Sometimes it seems as if dogs are more human than we are,
Maybe you should write a book Dan, I\'m already a fan of your work my friend
May 23rd, 2023 21:30
Somebody save me!
Goldfinch60 said:
Music can be the saviour Dan. I always went to music whenever I was down.
Andy
May 21st, 2023 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Music can be the saviour Dan. I always went to music whenever I was down.
Andy
May 21st, 2023 01:19
Somebody save me!
BlessedbyGod said:
So true Dan, I too have found comfort and hope in music,
And poetry,for me writing is very therapeutic and healing
This is a great piece once again my friend
May 19th, 2023 08:13
BlessedbyGod said:
So true Dan, I too have found comfort and hope in music,
And poetry,for me writing is very therapeutic and healing
This is a great piece once again my friend
May 19th, 2023 08:13
In the end their will be no words
Goldfinch60 said:
You have come a long way Dan, just remember that and you will move forward in a fine life.
Andy
May 19th, 2023 03:01
Goldfinch60 said:
You have come a long way Dan, just remember that and you will move forward in a fine life.
Andy
May 19th, 2023 03:01
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