Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan



Levelling communication
orchidee said:

Good write Dan.

May 19th, 2024 02:04

Levelling communication
Neville said:



the message comes through loud n clear .. here\'s me sitting and hoping that kindness was eventually found

I am convinced we find more of ourselves when our back is up against the proverbial wall ..

May 19th, 2024 01:59

Any moment now the 5th and last will land
Neville said:


Hey Dan .. Many, many, many huge CONGATULATIONS my man .. So good to have you back where you writefully belong .. Write on brother ..

May 19th, 2024 01:33

Any moment now the 5th and last will land
Goldfinch60 said:

Your children will forever love you Dan.
Good to see you back.

Andy

May 19th, 2024 01:23

Any moment now the 5th and last will land
jarcher54 said:

As little Davey Copperfield says, More please!

May 18th, 2024 22:06

Any moment now the 5th and last will land
sorenbarrett said:

A great message to your children and I can hear the pride and optimism in your words. May you have many more days to write.

May 18th, 2024 16:02

Any moment now the 5th and last will land
orchidee said:

Good write Dan.

May 18th, 2024 07:18

Any moment now the 5th and last will land
Teddy.15 said:

Beautiful dear Dan, nothing should ever make us prouder than our own children. 🌹 And congratulations dear Dan to all of you ❀️

May 18th, 2024 06:20

Neither friend or enemy but rebalance to harmony
BlessedbyGod said:

You and your well being and mental health and state of mind comes first my dear friend,healing takes time and patience and ALOT of energy, but you will get there Dan,
As we get older we realize how difficult things really are ,and the toll stress takes on the mind and body ,
Take your time and take it slow, you got this

September 18th, 2023 08:38

Neither friend or enemy but rebalance to harmony
L. B. Mek said:

equilibrium
gained by facing obstacles
not by hiding
and pretending a fence
we cling to
is the balance, in our life..
Happy 73rd hour of Evolution
may all your climbs be just as rewarding
\'stay\' strong, dear Poet kin

September 18th, 2023 05:38

I\'ll never understand
L. B. Mek said:

\'I think what I truly love
is knowing what I know
but not
putting myself into others shadows.\'
I truly relate, I aspire for that same
sliver of wisdom my friend
patience, such a humbling
yet essential skill in our lives..
whoever teaches it to us

September 18th, 2023 05:34

The cycle is complete
L. B. Mek said:

\'those dark days
will never make me question
my own existence again.\'
brings relief\'s tears to my own
proud eyes, cherished friend
your journey has been so long
and you\'ve fought so hard!
what an example you are
(after the book
\'A child called it\'
eventually came
\'A man named Dave\')
may these days
ink chapters, to the
\'A man named Dan\'
passage of your life, cherished Poet
(clouds can get dark
but still
they do pass, true
they\'ll be replaced with yet
darker clouds
then again, they TOO pass
and once in a while
we\'re gifted a blinding summer day
with clear skies
let\'s find all the clear skies, in our fate
my friend
shoulder to shoulder
one step and fall, at a time
till we can toast all about it
in that place where we\'re guaranteed
our well earned rest...)
cheers 🍻
(sorry for getting all emotional)

September 18th, 2023 05:31

uncertain and uncomfortable but also blissful and serene
L. B. Mek said:

\'in return they give
the true definition
of unconditional love.\'
wise words
a profound testimony
how I laud your poetic sincerity
I have never read a word from you
that you haven\'t meant
in that moment
a Ture Poet, with veracity
your chosen anchor to artistry
so proud
I get to consider you a poetic brother
and a guiding friend
give Dana a good rub between the ears for me
(I read and learn, wise Poet
sorry for always arriving late)

September 18th, 2023 05:20

Neither friend or enemy but rebalance to harmony
Christina8 said:

It\'s so true that one\'s self worth can be dictated by others, as you wrote Dan, quite sad too. Wonderful write, much peace and respect to you!

September 18th, 2023 02:39

Neither friend or enemy but rebalance to harmony
Goldfinch60 said:

You have moved on Dan, certainly over the years that I have known you and you will have your good life in front of you.

Andy

September 18th, 2023 01:53

I\'ll never understand
Goldfinch60 said:

You have moved on a long way in your life Dan, some things still come back and haunt you but you now have the ability to move on into the new life that you have created.

Andy

September 18th, 2023 01:52

The cycle is complete
Goldfinch60 said:

Such wonderful words Dan and I am so very happy for you to have found your way out of the darkness into the light of your future.

Andy

September 18th, 2023 01:48

I\'ll never understand
Teddy.15 said:

Your incredible courage even to write this and share is a miracle, there are many many moments where I\'ve felt this way (get out the way or die) such a powerful line and I know not an exaggeration to how you feel. But to be here to be human is a miracle sometimes we are chosen to have this type life because we are that strong even if we do not know it at the time. Any disability is a fortress yet some have it even worse. I stand beside you my darling Dan. πŸ’– may you sleep better tonight. The world is a cruel place for all right now. πŸ’–

September 16th, 2023 02:11

I\'ll never understand
jarcher54 said:

Well, you are welcome in my space any time man. This is a little like an wicked incantation, a desperate soliloquy, and a lecture. It\'s quite real, a little scary, and yet lovely and hopeful.

September 16th, 2023 02:05

I\'ll never understand
Bobby O said:

It’s both. I like how you were brave enough to admit the current reality and however shitty it is now I believe you could reach for optimistic view as yiu seem balanced and thoughtful and smart enough to know there is some risk but that Also means the pksn could work perfect next time.

September 15th, 2023 23:05

I\'ll never understand
peto said:

Great to see you writing Dan
Always emotional
Always real
Maybe the answer is a miracle curse
Though provoking and genuine
Dan the man

September 15th, 2023 18:14

I\'ll never understand
BlessedbyGod said:

I feel your pain Dan,
Sometimes I struggle with these feelings and emotions too,
We\'re only human my friend,
The incredible parts of life wouldn\'t be as incredible if we didn\'t have the struggle too,
They would be just another part of our lives,
When we have pain and sorrow, it only makes the good times that much better,
We have the ability to appreciate obstacles that enter our paths, whether they are good or bad,
God made us able to handle all situations that get thrown at us, He never gives us more than we can handle, we will bend and it will hurt, badly, but we will not break,
Whatever you are going through my dear friend, there is a way through it to a peaceful and happy ending.
Hang in there Dan, you got this!
Thoughts and prayers are with you

September 15th, 2023 17:18

The cycle is complete
BlessedbyGod said:

Wow, congratulations Dan, there is no greater feeling, I\'m so happy for u my friend,
There are many more moments like this to come!!!

September 10th, 2023 18:45

uncertain and uncomfortable but also blissful and serene
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine words Dan, you have come a very long way in your life.

Andy

September 10th, 2023 02:03

uncertain and uncomfortable but also blissful and serene
peto said:

Dan THE man
You have always been a tremendous example
Given it away to keep it
Loved every word big chap
Proud to know you

September 9th, 2023 05:15

uncertain and uncomfortable but also blissful and serene
Teddy.15 said:

Dogs are really a humans best friend. Nurture and be nurtured beautiful dear Dan, lovely to see you. πŸ’–

September 9th, 2023 02:45

Forever guessing
L. B. Mek said:

\'Sometimes paradise is never
what you expect
and can be as simple as checking
over your shoulder with no regrets.\'
!Brilliant!
(I wish safe travels for your daughter
may her journeys deliver her
to her heart\'s desires..)

August 25th, 2023 00:04

Forever guessing
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words Dan, you have moved on so well into your new life of wonder and love.

Andy

August 24th, 2023 00:51

There comes a point
Nethra said:

This poem beautifully captures the essence of self-discovery, emphasizing the balance between external knowledge and internal wisdom. such a good write!

July 24th, 2023 10:07

There comes a point
L. B. Mek said:

Brilliant!
so deep, words to meditate
and consume, not just read..
(yesterday\'s, as our vindication sails
a Time, visits
when alone with our thoughts
serenity, become viable
even at the centre of our life\'s
hurricanes..
each failure and missed opportunity
we forgive ourselves
allowing us to evolve
adding layers to our worth
so that mirror, reflects
not just our best, but
all that we cherish in this thing
called life
this, accumulation of breath and
sensation
we\'ve learnt to accept and find peace
within...)

July 24th, 2023 03:36

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