Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
I\'m not here to tell others storyline
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that haunting will disappear amongst your words Dan.
Andy
September 28th, 2022 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that haunting will disappear amongst your words Dan.
Andy
September 28th, 2022 01:42
I\'m not here to tell others storyline
Bluskys said:
I love it! You have a great piece here.
September 27th, 2022 23:09
Bluskys said:
I love it! You have a great piece here.
September 27th, 2022 23:09
Light and dark all in my heart
Goldfinch60 said:
Always remember Dan that in that darkness there will be a glimmer of light, you have found it before and it will always be there for you.
Andy
September 26th, 2022 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Always remember Dan that in that darkness there will be a glimmer of light, you have found it before and it will always be there for you.
Andy
September 26th, 2022 01:00
Light and dark all in my heart
shaa said:
A sad one makes me think of all the days I\'m blue... nonetheless a beautiful write and I liked the second stanza this part in particular \'...what about the times when the worst is our best.\'
September 25th, 2022 12:02
shaa said:
A sad one makes me think of all the days I\'m blue... nonetheless a beautiful write and I liked the second stanza this part in particular \'...what about the times when the worst is our best.\'
September 25th, 2022 12:02
Light and dark all in my heart
Eugene S. said:
I can taste the fall in the air and in this poem. A time, no doubt, to reflect before the long dark night. I here you.
September 25th, 2022 10:42
Eugene S. said:
I can taste the fall in the air and in this poem. A time, no doubt, to reflect before the long dark night. I here you.
September 25th, 2022 10:42
More than fun in the sun
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words and great video Dan, I am so glad that you have obviously had a wonderful time.
Andy
September 25th, 2022 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words and great video Dan, I am so glad that you have obviously had a wonderful time.
Andy
September 25th, 2022 01:28
Hearts desires
Goddess of the Mist said:
Beautiful poem and video! Enjoyed both very much 😍
September 24th, 2022 20:55
Goddess of the Mist said:
Beautiful poem and video! Enjoyed both very much 😍
September 24th, 2022 20:55
More than fun in the sun
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Hi Dan a nice writing .. nice to see you posting again )) I havnt been on holiday In a very long time . Glad it’s helping you
September 24th, 2022 07:24
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Hi Dan a nice writing .. nice to see you posting again )) I havnt been on holiday In a very long time . Glad it’s helping you
September 24th, 2022 07:24
Just to be alive
Goldfinch60 said:
Such fine words Dan, you have come a long way and are in a wonderful place that will only get better and better.
Andy
September 18th, 2022 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Such fine words Dan, you have come a long way and are in a wonderful place that will only get better and better.
Andy
September 18th, 2022 01:49
Just to be alive
Doggerel Dave said:
A perfect statement of where you are now, Dan...You are making me envious.
Best wishes.
September 17th, 2022 07:15
Doggerel Dave said:
A perfect statement of where you are now, Dan...You are making me envious.
Best wishes.
September 17th, 2022 07:15
Hearts desires
Goldfinch60 said:
Certainly Dan, follow your hearts desire.
Your son can now take you out for a pint, legally, enjoy.
Andy
September 6th, 2022 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Certainly Dan, follow your hearts desire.
Your son can now take you out for a pint, legally, enjoy.
Andy
September 6th, 2022 00:26
Hearts desires
Doggerel Dave said:
That\'s a Liberation statement if ever I\'ve found one. Good luck to you and yours, Dan.
September 5th, 2022 07:20
Doggerel Dave said:
That\'s a Liberation statement if ever I\'ve found one. Good luck to you and yours, Dan.
September 5th, 2022 07:20
My spark
orchidee said:
Good write Dan.
Erm, I tried not breathing for 24 hours one day. I did not feel well afterwards. Well, I was only trying to save on air! lol.
September 5th, 2022 02:00
orchidee said:
Good write Dan.
Erm, I tried not breathing for 24 hours one day. I did not feel well afterwards. Well, I was only trying to save on air! lol.
September 5th, 2022 02:00
My spark
Goldfinch60 said:
Each breath we take moves us into a better place in our lives Dan.
Andy
September 5th, 2022 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Each breath we take moves us into a better place in our lives Dan.
Andy
September 5th, 2022 00:34
Being here now
AlitaOpal said:
Great write Dan.. nothing like getting back into nature.. ❤️
July 19th, 2022 19:20
AlitaOpal said:
Great write Dan.. nothing like getting back into nature.. ❤️
July 19th, 2022 19:20
Not a gift to us all
Bella Shepard said:
I truly wish you all the best for a healthy outcome and recovery. There is also the quote \"Youth is wasted on the young\", the Yin and the Yang of life perhaps. Take care my friend, and always dance your own way.
July 18th, 2022 13:52
Bella Shepard said:
I truly wish you all the best for a healthy outcome and recovery. There is also the quote \"Youth is wasted on the young\", the Yin and the Yang of life perhaps. Take care my friend, and always dance your own way.
July 18th, 2022 13:52
Not a gift to us all
Doggerel Dave said:
If I understand you right Dan, here\'s my feelings on the subject of old age:
While it is true that being old requires a higher level of body maintenance than earlier, there are still plenty of periods when \"the gift is right now\" and I enjoy them without reservation - I\'m not striving for anything, I\'m there. I worry no more what people think of me, I\'m happy and content to have had a varied and interesting life.
So stay the course - you will enjoy it when you arrive, I guarantee.
July 18th, 2022 08:00
Doggerel Dave said:
If I understand you right Dan, here\'s my feelings on the subject of old age:
While it is true that being old requires a higher level of body maintenance than earlier, there are still plenty of periods when \"the gift is right now\" and I enjoy them without reservation - I\'m not striving for anything, I\'m there. I worry no more what people think of me, I\'m happy and content to have had a varied and interesting life.
So stay the course - you will enjoy it when you arrive, I guarantee.
July 18th, 2022 08:00
Not a gift to us all
L. B. Mek said:
\'Turning the fear or hate
into loves magic embrace,
with no right or wrong
each dancing our own way\'..
Brilliant!
(hope you feel better, soon
stay Strong, my friend)
July 18th, 2022 04:10
L. B. Mek said:
\'Turning the fear or hate
into loves magic embrace,
with no right or wrong
each dancing our own way\'..
Brilliant!
(hope you feel better, soon
stay Strong, my friend)
July 18th, 2022 04:10
Better than never or too little to late
L. B. Mek said:
(yeah, I\'m so with you on this one
my poetic, kin..
so much bul sht
we\'ve got to deal with
and most of it
somehow, tethered
to our own, unvoiced
internal battles
as-if, fate itself
just wants to jump on the bandwagon
of all that causes us strife..
we make peace, here
agree to disagree, there
fight and separate, with those near
and on, and on
one corner after another
we turn
and somehow, another roadblock awaits
and we\'re left wondering
if, the common denominator
is our choices and words
are we the cause, of all of it
or
do people, really just exist
spewing bul sht
wherever they live a footprint...)
so relatable, dear poet
thank you!
July 18th, 2022 02:56
L. B. Mek said:
(yeah, I\'m so with you on this one
my poetic, kin..
so much bul sht
we\'ve got to deal with
and most of it
somehow, tethered
to our own, unvoiced
internal battles
as-if, fate itself
just wants to jump on the bandwagon
of all that causes us strife..
we make peace, here
agree to disagree, there
fight and separate, with those near
and on, and on
one corner after another
we turn
and somehow, another roadblock awaits
and we\'re left wondering
if, the common denominator
is our choices and words
are we the cause, of all of it
or
do people, really just exist
spewing bul sht
wherever they live a footprint...)
so relatable, dear poet
thank you!
July 18th, 2022 02:56
Universe of energy ready to burst
Goldfinch60 said:
That light of life is there for you Dan, you have found it once so it cannot be far away.
Andy
July 17th, 2022 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
That light of life is there for you Dan, you have found it once so it cannot be far away.
Andy
July 17th, 2022 01:35
Admitted but not Forsaken
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Dan. There are many out there who help and listen to others but we very rarely here about he good that they do, they will be there for you though.
Andy
July 15th, 2022 00:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Dan. There are many out there who help and listen to others but we very rarely here about he good that they do, they will be there for you though.
Andy
July 15th, 2022 00:41
Admitted but not Forsaken
Bella Shepard said:
For me you pose the question of how do we become compassionate human beings? And the difficult choice, at times of putting someone else\'s well being before our own. A wonderful, soul searching poem dear poet!
July 14th, 2022 12:43
Bella Shepard said:
For me you pose the question of how do we become compassionate human beings? And the difficult choice, at times of putting someone else\'s well being before our own. A wonderful, soul searching poem dear poet!
July 14th, 2022 12:43
Lifes little trip
Neville said:
Sadly, I like this Dan, very much enjoyed sir .. Glad you didn\'t keep it all bottled up ... that would have been most unfair .. AGT\'s Neville
July 14th, 2022 02:34
Neville said:
Sadly, I like this Dan, very much enjoyed sir .. Glad you didn\'t keep it all bottled up ... that would have been most unfair .. AGT\'s Neville
July 14th, 2022 02:34
Beat another day
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Sometimes that’s all we can do .. just get through the day as best we can . Nature can be such a comfort when struggling with how we feel . Take care
July 14th, 2022 01:26
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Sometimes that’s all we can do .. just get through the day as best we can . Nature can be such a comfort when struggling with how we feel . Take care
July 14th, 2022 01:26
Admitted but not Forsaken
L. B. Mek said:
(humility, is a virtue of the suffering
inequality, the moral compass
of those experiencing debilitating
pain
yet, that generosity of imagination\'s
empathy
is only apparent, in amongst the true
humanist\'s, since
their selflessness, must be so entrenched
in \'the who\' of their curated identity
for them, to find the strength within
to surpass their strife
and ink words of poetic lament
and a questing prayer of hope
that goodness, despite everything
may yet prevail...)
I\'m sorry if you\'re still in hospital, my friend
I champion the brave positivity in these words
you shared, dear Poet..
\'and yes, we are each imbued
with potential for levels of deity
in our instinctive, capacity
to impact and nurture, those
we come across, in our lives..!\'
July 14th, 2022 01:13
L. B. Mek said:
(humility, is a virtue of the suffering
inequality, the moral compass
of those experiencing debilitating
pain
yet, that generosity of imagination\'s
empathy
is only apparent, in amongst the true
humanist\'s, since
their selflessness, must be so entrenched
in \'the who\' of their curated identity
for them, to find the strength within
to surpass their strife
and ink words of poetic lament
and a questing prayer of hope
that goodness, despite everything
may yet prevail...)
I\'m sorry if you\'re still in hospital, my friend
I champion the brave positivity in these words
you shared, dear Poet..
\'and yes, we are each imbued
with potential for levels of deity
in our instinctive, capacity
to impact and nurture, those
we come across, in our lives..!\'
July 14th, 2022 01:13
Lifes little trip
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
and thank you! for inspiring
these feeble words, below
as my attempted poetic reply..
(tepid, at our outset
vehement, at our finish line;
this \'little trip of life\'
be it consumed
wholehartedly or tentatively
makes no difference
when
that drip of fated second, ticks
its last tock
we but - resume, our eternal visage
of perspectived, blank verse
in that universal existence,
of Poetic blank, canvas
awaiting, that bleak
crimson ink of fate
to drip, flow and consume
once again..)
July 8th, 2022 05:32
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
and thank you! for inspiring
these feeble words, below
as my attempted poetic reply..
(tepid, at our outset
vehement, at our finish line;
this \'little trip of life\'
be it consumed
wholehartedly or tentatively
makes no difference
when
that drip of fated second, ticks
its last tock
we but - resume, our eternal visage
of perspectived, blank verse
in that universal existence,
of Poetic blank, canvas
awaiting, that bleak
crimson ink of fate
to drip, flow and consume
once again..)
July 8th, 2022 05:32
Beat another day
Goldfinch60 said:
You have come a long way in your life Dan and it is getting better every day, we are always with you to help you along that path to the sea,
Andy
July 7th, 2022 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
You have come a long way in your life Dan and it is getting better every day, we are always with you to help you along that path to the sea,
Andy
July 7th, 2022 01:19
Beat another day
Doggerel Dave said:
You do keep going, Dan - there can\'t be anything other than great strength there.
Much peace and respect to you too.
July 6th, 2022 19:21
Doggerel Dave said:
You do keep going, Dan - there can\'t be anything other than great strength there.
Much peace and respect to you too.
July 6th, 2022 19:21
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