Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
No shortcuts to becoming brave
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, Clapham can be a maze
and that was before they made it
the Bus capital of the world
lol
a lovely read, and what a an elegant dog in your pic
so attentive and calm, that confidence
only a k-9 can exude, with ease
lol
thanks for sharing, brother
hope you have a lovely weekend
July 7th, 2023 04:11
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, Clapham can be a maze
and that was before they made it
the Bus capital of the world
lol
a lovely read, and what a an elegant dog in your pic
so attentive and calm, that confidence
only a k-9 can exude, with ease
lol
thanks for sharing, brother
hope you have a lovely weekend
July 7th, 2023 04:11
No shortcuts to becoming brave
Caring dove said:
Fear can make us hide .. can’t it , and can hold us back but sometimes we can’t help how we feel .. it’s brave to be with that anxiety / fear and do things anyway
A good writing Dan
Especially like these lines
Those that matter will always say, \"I knew you would get there one of these days.\"
It is so nice to see you out of the comfort cave. Thank you for lighting the way.
That last verse is lovely ))
I think we all need those positive words and others believing in us
July 7th, 2023 02:53
Caring dove said:
Fear can make us hide .. can’t it , and can hold us back but sometimes we can’t help how we feel .. it’s brave to be with that anxiety / fear and do things anyway
A good writing Dan
Especially like these lines
Those that matter will always say, \"I knew you would get there one of these days.\"
It is so nice to see you out of the comfort cave. Thank you for lighting the way.
That last verse is lovely ))
I think we all need those positive words and others believing in us
July 7th, 2023 02:53
Let the soul glow
Neville said:
I can see and hear and read why .. most beautiful in every respect and then much more so .. Neville
July 5th, 2023 02:22
Neville said:
I can see and hear and read why .. most beautiful in every respect and then much more so .. Neville
July 5th, 2023 02:22
Let the soul glow
BlessedbyGod said:
Great piece Dan, children are so precious and truly the greatest gift that we as parents can receive,keep up the great work my friend, and enjoy these little moments
July 3rd, 2023 18:08
BlessedbyGod said:
Great piece Dan, children are so precious and truly the greatest gift that we as parents can receive,keep up the great work my friend, and enjoy these little moments
July 3rd, 2023 18:08
Let the soul glow
Parisab said:
Capturing the soul of childhood and the joy and wonder they inspire… good write…
July 3rd, 2023 10:49
Parisab said:
Capturing the soul of childhood and the joy and wonder they inspire… good write…
July 3rd, 2023 10:49
Let the soul glow
peto said:
Dan
She is as lucky to have you as you are her
Can\'t beat a write from the heart
Beautiful
July 3rd, 2023 08:01
peto said:
Dan
She is as lucky to have you as you are her
Can\'t beat a write from the heart
Beautiful
July 3rd, 2023 08:01
Let the soul glow
L. B. Mek said:
\'so go ahead and do what you love to do\'
well I love to read poetry, inked
with crimson sincerity
allowing me to live vicariously
and rejoice in your joy
at witnessing that sunshine face
glow, while blossoming
into a smile iridescently sublime..
(poetry like yours
oh treasured friend of mine
stay blessed!)
July 3rd, 2023 04:44
L. B. Mek said:
\'so go ahead and do what you love to do\'
well I love to read poetry, inked
with crimson sincerity
allowing me to live vicariously
and rejoice in your joy
at witnessing that sunshine face
glow, while blossoming
into a smile iridescently sublime..
(poetry like yours
oh treasured friend of mine
stay blessed!)
July 3rd, 2023 04:44
Let the soul glow
Teddy.15 said:
Music children and dancing, 3 things bound to lift any spirits. Gorgeous dear Dan ❤️
July 3rd, 2023 02:53
Teddy.15 said:
Music children and dancing, 3 things bound to lift any spirits. Gorgeous dear Dan ❤️
July 3rd, 2023 02:53
Let the soul glow
Goldfinch60 said:
So glad that you are feeling so good Dan.
Andy
July 3rd, 2023 02:05
Goldfinch60 said:
So glad that you are feeling so good Dan.
Andy
July 3rd, 2023 02:05
Let the soul glow
Caring dove said:
‘ to guide and teach has not been breezy.
Yet to dance with her completes me, to let my soul glow beneath me, in a moment of inner harmony ‘
Beautiful words here )
July 3rd, 2023 02:02
Caring dove said:
‘ to guide and teach has not been breezy.
Yet to dance with her completes me, to let my soul glow beneath me, in a moment of inner harmony ‘
Beautiful words here )
July 3rd, 2023 02:02
Let the soul glow
Caring dove said:
Hi Dan
It’s nice to feel in a high vibration .. away from sadness , and negative feelings
Glad your feeling ok
And nice writing 🙂
July 3rd, 2023 02:00
Caring dove said:
Hi Dan
It’s nice to feel in a high vibration .. away from sadness , and negative feelings
Glad your feeling ok
And nice writing 🙂
July 3rd, 2023 02:00
Goes down easier with a rhyme
Caring dove said:
Don’t think Ive heard of that song thanks for sharing
June 26th, 2023 07:14
Caring dove said:
Don’t think Ive heard of that song thanks for sharing
June 26th, 2023 07:14
Goes down easier with a rhyme
Caring dove said:
Hi Dan )) some people find it difficult to admit when their in the wrong … don’t they . A nice writing ) and yes real change doesn’t happen overnight ..
Guess we have to be lighthearted about things sometimes when things feel a bit difficult
June 26th, 2023 07:13
Caring dove said:
Hi Dan )) some people find it difficult to admit when their in the wrong … don’t they . A nice writing ) and yes real change doesn’t happen overnight ..
Guess we have to be lighthearted about things sometimes when things feel a bit difficult
June 26th, 2023 07:13
Avoid park politics
L. B. Mek said:
dog park\'s or boardrooms
your words ring true my wise friend
\'Never let anyone change your reality unless you want it!\'
indeed
it\'s only ourselves that can allow
someone to affect our reality
what an empowering realisation
thank you!
June 26th, 2023 02:35
L. B. Mek said:
dog park\'s or boardrooms
your words ring true my wise friend
\'Never let anyone change your reality unless you want it!\'
indeed
it\'s only ourselves that can allow
someone to affect our reality
what an empowering realisation
thank you!
June 26th, 2023 02:35
Is positivity really a thing!
L. B. Mek said:
so true!
feigning positivity is a quick way
to tripping ourselves
better, to let it come naturally
sense its presence
and fight the need to grab at it
let it marinate
and when the time\'s right, we\'ll
sip, a little at a time
every time, making sure there\'s plenty left
for those bleak storm winds of life..
a great right dear Poet
thought provoking indeed
June 26th, 2023 02:29
L. B. Mek said:
so true!
feigning positivity is a quick way
to tripping ourselves
better, to let it come naturally
sense its presence
and fight the need to grab at it
let it marinate
and when the time\'s right, we\'ll
sip, a little at a time
every time, making sure there\'s plenty left
for those bleak storm winds of life..
a great right dear Poet
thought provoking indeed
June 26th, 2023 02:29
Goes down easier with a rhyme
L. B. Mek said:
Depth over distance
legacy of steadfast over shortcuts
our wrong\'s pathing our destinies
hold on, wait
that lonesome, won\'t be around
for too long
although we may be too earnest, it\'s ok
although we may too timid, that\'s fine
although we may be too young at 80, that\'s just us
that\'s life
so hold on, fight strong
let your heart shine bright n bold
those smiles in your life, reward them
with your wings of hope and resolve
depth over distance
lament\'s as our afterthought\'s
exclamations in our eyes, we
survive
deep into those tunnels of life
we\'re still alight with aliveness
knowing, in each step
we imbue everything we have
find meaning, in our potholes
of life
depth over distance
worth over value
we\'ll trail a blaze
for those like minded
who realise
there\'s more to life than taglines
and price points
we\'ll be the ones who recognise
empathy and love
in each breath of life...
testify!
(what a fck\'ng song
grabbed me and shook loose these words
from depths, I hide from myself
thank you! Brother
what an inspirational offering)
i read and learn, wise Poet
June 26th, 2023 02:24
L. B. Mek said:
Depth over distance
legacy of steadfast over shortcuts
our wrong\'s pathing our destinies
hold on, wait
that lonesome, won\'t be around
for too long
although we may be too earnest, it\'s ok
although we may too timid, that\'s fine
although we may be too young at 80, that\'s just us
that\'s life
so hold on, fight strong
let your heart shine bright n bold
those smiles in your life, reward them
with your wings of hope and resolve
depth over distance
lament\'s as our afterthought\'s
exclamations in our eyes, we
survive
deep into those tunnels of life
we\'re still alight with aliveness
knowing, in each step
we imbue everything we have
find meaning, in our potholes
of life
depth over distance
worth over value
we\'ll trail a blaze
for those like minded
who realise
there\'s more to life than taglines
and price points
we\'ll be the ones who recognise
empathy and love
in each breath of life...
testify!
(what a fck\'ng song
grabbed me and shook loose these words
from depths, I hide from myself
thank you! Brother
what an inspirational offering)
i read and learn, wise Poet
June 26th, 2023 02:24
Never to late
L. B. Mek said:
(shadows exist because of light
if need be
we traverse those shadows of life
to arrive at our bright destinations;
no rules, no judgement
just shared words, experiences
and truths
positivity, is a corrosive mask
let that better come to you naturally
my wise friend
fck everyone else
your feelings, your opinions
matter most
to those who care for you
genuinely
write your truth, be it
noir dark or a chipper bird song
we\'ll read it all)
that picture
is the very embodiment of life\'s sublime
thank you!
June 26th, 2023 02:09
L. B. Mek said:
(shadows exist because of light
if need be
we traverse those shadows of life
to arrive at our bright destinations;
no rules, no judgement
just shared words, experiences
and truths
positivity, is a corrosive mask
let that better come to you naturally
my wise friend
fck everyone else
your feelings, your opinions
matter most
to those who care for you
genuinely
write your truth, be it
noir dark or a chipper bird song
we\'ll read it all)
that picture
is the very embodiment of life\'s sublime
thank you!
June 26th, 2023 02:09
Is positivity really a thing!
Neville said:
that is indeed absolutely the way .. the way to go & all that jazz as they say .. safe journey Dan .. Neville
June 25th, 2023 04:59
Neville said:
that is indeed absolutely the way .. the way to go & all that jazz as they say .. safe journey Dan .. Neville
June 25th, 2023 04:59
Avoid park politics
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Dan, we must go our own way in life otherwise others will drag you down.
Andy
June 25th, 2023 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Dan, we must go our own way in life otherwise others will drag you down.
Andy
June 25th, 2023 01:48
Avoid park politics
Neville said:
I have invariably found that if I say it like it is, then I inevitably feel a whole lot better .. I bet you do feel better having got that off ya chest Dan ..Go well buddy ..... Neville
June 25th, 2023 00:58
Neville said:
I have invariably found that if I say it like it is, then I inevitably feel a whole lot better .. I bet you do feel better having got that off ya chest Dan ..Go well buddy ..... Neville
June 25th, 2023 00:58
Avoid park politics
Caring dove said:
Some people judge and say things which are lies .. don’t they .. difficult to understand some people
A good writing , anyway ))
June 24th, 2023 05:57
Caring dove said:
Some people judge and say things which are lies .. don’t they .. difficult to understand some people
A good writing , anyway ))
June 24th, 2023 05:57
Avoid park politics
peto said:
Animals with animals
They need trained up as well
\"Experts\" are great for a laugh
Keep em coming big chap
June 24th, 2023 02:17
peto said:
Animals with animals
They need trained up as well
\"Experts\" are great for a laugh
Keep em coming big chap
June 24th, 2023 02:17
Is positivity really a thing!
Goldfinch60 said:
My way in life and my life are always positive, it is the way I am and I hope some of it is seen in you Dan.
Andy
June 24th, 2023 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
My way in life and my life are always positive, it is the way I am and I hope some of it is seen in you Dan.
Andy
June 24th, 2023 01:15
Is positivity really a thing!
peto said:
Is it really a thing?
You sir
Are positivity personified
Inspiring
June 23rd, 2023 12:55
peto said:
Is it really a thing?
You sir
Are positivity personified
Inspiring
June 23rd, 2023 12:55
Is positivity really a thing!
orchidee said:
Well, it\'s not a \'thing\' as a cup of tea is - being completely random there!
Make that a pot of tea and a slice of cake each, for both of us, and we\'ll sit down and discuss this!
June 23rd, 2023 11:51
orchidee said:
Well, it\'s not a \'thing\' as a cup of tea is - being completely random there!
Make that a pot of tea and a slice of cake each, for both of us, and we\'ll sit down and discuss this!
June 23rd, 2023 11:51
Goes down easier with a rhyme
Doggerel Dave said:
All been said above , Dan. Home truth unable to be denied.
June 22nd, 2023 21:09
Doggerel Dave said:
All been said above , Dan. Home truth unable to be denied.
June 22nd, 2023 21:09
Goes down easier with a rhyme
peto said:
On the up and up Dan
Can\'t fail with your attitude
Inspiring
June 22nd, 2023 12:48
peto said:
On the up and up Dan
Can\'t fail with your attitude
Inspiring
June 22nd, 2023 12:48
Goes down easier with a rhyme
Teddy.15 said:
Great vibes here, positive and hopeful. ❤️
June 22nd, 2023 12:42
Teddy.15 said:
Great vibes here, positive and hopeful. ❤️
June 22nd, 2023 12:42
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