Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
The only thing I know
sorenbarrett said:
This has all the feeling of a sad write despite it being therapeutic. It feels distant and has a tinge of finality to it. There is love in it but a coldness as well. It speaks as if from the shadows. Well written
July 31st, 2026 05:39
sorenbarrett said:
This has all the feeling of a sad write despite it being therapeutic. It feels distant and has a tinge of finality to it. There is love in it but a coldness as well. It speaks as if from the shadows. Well written
July 31st, 2026 05:39
The words we grow into
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that the darkness you show in your life Dan will have light in it that will be seen by those who love you.
Andy
July 31st, 2026 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that the darkness you show in your life Dan will have light in it that will be seen by those who love you.
Andy
July 31st, 2026 01:09
The words we grow into
Neville said:
This really touched me Dan .. written from the heart and of that, I have no doubt .. Neville
July 30th, 2026 15:51
Neville said:
This really touched me Dan .. written from the heart and of that, I have no doubt .. Neville
July 30th, 2026 15:51
The words we grow into
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dan, this really hit me. The journey from seeking approval to trusting yourself can be brutal...especially when growth changes which relationships still belong in your life. Powerful and honest work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 30th, 2026 10:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dan, this really hit me. The journey from seeking approval to trusting yourself can be brutal...especially when growth changes which relationships still belong in your life. Powerful and honest work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 30th, 2026 10:10
The words we grow into
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem about a dark road. The message gets the fave on this one my friend. A father of four as well I send my condolences to all for the darkness but also the blessing of light of life that balances the darkness.
July 30th, 2026 06:41
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem about a dark road. The message gets the fave on this one my friend. A father of four as well I send my condolences to all for the darkness but also the blessing of light of life that balances the darkness.
July 30th, 2026 06:41
44 years of training
peto said:
You belong here Dan
Deep and emotional writing
Keep em coming
July 29th, 2026 19:13
peto said:
You belong here Dan
Deep and emotional writing
Keep em coming
July 29th, 2026 19:13
44 years of training
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dan, the distinction between family and friendship carries tremendous weight here. Some bonds are assigned to us...others prove themselves by remaining beside us. Thought-provoking work, my friend. 🧭🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 29th, 2026 08:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dan, the distinction between family and friendship carries tremendous weight here. Some bonds are assigned to us...others prove themselves by remaining beside us. Thought-provoking work, my friend. 🧭🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 29th, 2026 08:19
44 years of training
sorenbarrett said:
People are people whether related or not and some we do better with than others. Well written
July 29th, 2026 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
People are people whether related or not and some we do better with than others. Well written
July 29th, 2026 04:38
Ripples to waves. My stage
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what struck me most is the struggle to protect one’s humanity when institutions begin treating existence as something to regulate and possess. That gives this tremendous emotional weight. Wonderful write, Dan. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 28th, 2026 20:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what struck me most is the struggle to protect one’s humanity when institutions begin treating existence as something to regulate and possess. That gives this tremendous emotional weight. Wonderful write, Dan. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 28th, 2026 20:50
Poetry I yearn
peto said:
Dan the man
Great to see you writing
And keeping it real as always
Welcome back
July 28th, 2026 18:56
peto said:
Dan the man
Great to see you writing
And keeping it real as always
Welcome back
July 28th, 2026 18:56
Ripples to waves. My stage
sorenbarrett said:
In riding the waves one at times is on the crest with a better view while at others falls into the troughs where one can see nothing but water coming down on one. Well written
July 28th, 2026 05:01
sorenbarrett said:
In riding the waves one at times is on the crest with a better view while at others falls into the troughs where one can see nothing but water coming down on one. Well written
July 28th, 2026 05:01
Poetry I yearn
Goldfinch60 said:
Every time I wake up I know it will be a good day Dan.
Andy
July 28th, 2026 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Every time I wake up I know it will be a good day Dan.
Andy
July 28th, 2026 01:43
Poetry I yearn
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dan, this hit me hard. I have known days when the goodness surrounding me could not reach the pain within...and putting that darkness onto the page helped me survive it. One hell of a powerful poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 27th, 2026 09:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dan, this hit me hard. I have known days when the goodness surrounding me could not reach the pain within...and putting that darkness onto the page helped me survive it. One hell of a powerful poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 27th, 2026 09:03
Poetry I yearn
sorenbarrett said:
Clever work in the note as well as the poem a good read my friend
July 27th, 2026 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
Clever work in the note as well as the poem a good read my friend
July 27th, 2026 04:21
Ink remembers what we forget
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words will always exist Dan.
Andy
July 27th, 2026 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words will always exist Dan.
Andy
July 27th, 2026 01:08
Ink remembers what we forget
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dan, this really moved me. There is a deep vulnerability here, but also tremendous gratitude...the fear of being forgotten gradually gives way to peace. Beautifully expressed, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2026 18:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dan, this really moved me. There is a deep vulnerability here, but also tremendous gratitude...the fear of being forgotten gradually gives way to peace. Beautifully expressed, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2026 18:17
Ink remembers what we forget
sorenbarrett said:
So true that we seldom know the value of something until it is gone. Nicely written
July 26th, 2026 05:14
sorenbarrett said:
So true that we seldom know the value of something until it is gone. Nicely written
July 26th, 2026 05:14
Portals of the mind
Goldfinch60 said:
Your sentence will never come Dan as you have moved up a long way in your life.
Andy
June 18th, 2026 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Your sentence will never come Dan as you have moved up a long way in your life.
Andy
June 18th, 2026 01:23
Portals of the mind
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dan, this carries a deep weariness, my friend. The speaker feels caught between survival and longing, giving everything they have while still searching for a little peace. There is something very human and relatable in that struggle. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 17th, 2026 11:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dan, this carries a deep weariness, my friend. The speaker feels caught between survival and longing, giving everything they have while still searching for a little peace. There is something very human and relatable in that struggle. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 17th, 2026 11:56
Portals of the mind
sorenbarrett said:
Nothing is free in a capitalistic world or even nature. Well written
June 17th, 2026 11:02
sorenbarrett said:
Nothing is free in a capitalistic world or even nature. Well written
June 17th, 2026 11:02
Holy cow ( moon & sea)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, “At first I was the sun / Arms like gravity / Now I am the moon” is absolutely beautiful. That shift in metaphor says so much about changing parental love with remarkable simplicity. Excellent lyrics. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 16th, 2026 09:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, “At first I was the sun / Arms like gravity / Now I am the moon” is absolutely beautiful. That shift in metaphor says so much about changing parental love with remarkable simplicity. Excellent lyrics. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 16th, 2026 09:17
Holy cow ( moon & sea)
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely and holding truth as a parent and grandparent I have seen it. Well written
May 16th, 2026 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely and holding truth as a parent and grandparent I have seen it. Well written
May 16th, 2026 04:17
Silence ain’t weakness
Neilton said:
My silence is never weakness but the space I breathe
As amazing grace by the shore holds me in serenity
Such powerful meaning here !! Thank you for sharing those beautiful words 🙏 amazing poem
May 13th, 2026 09:00
Neilton said:
My silence is never weakness but the space I breathe
As amazing grace by the shore holds me in serenity
Such powerful meaning here !! Thank you for sharing those beautiful words 🙏 amazing poem
May 13th, 2026 09:00
Inkadelic element
Neville said:
If this is not bril, then I don\'t know what is except for a fish .. so So long & thanks for all the fish .. Neville
May 6th, 2026 02:33
Neville said:
If this is not bril, then I don\'t know what is except for a fish .. so So long & thanks for all the fish .. Neville
May 6th, 2026 02:33
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