Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Admitted but not Forsaken
Bella Shepard said:
For me you pose the question of how do we become compassionate human beings? And the difficult choice, at times of putting someone else\'s well being before our own. A wonderful, soul searching poem dear poet!
July 14th, 2022 12:43
Bella Shepard said:
For me you pose the question of how do we become compassionate human beings? And the difficult choice, at times of putting someone else\'s well being before our own. A wonderful, soul searching poem dear poet!
July 14th, 2022 12:43
Lifes little trip
Neville said:
Sadly, I like this Dan, very much enjoyed sir .. Glad you didn\'t keep it all bottled up ... that would have been most unfair .. AGT\'s Neville
July 14th, 2022 02:34
Neville said:
Sadly, I like this Dan, very much enjoyed sir .. Glad you didn\'t keep it all bottled up ... that would have been most unfair .. AGT\'s Neville
July 14th, 2022 02:34
Beat another day
Caring dove said:
Sometimes that’s all we can do .. just get through the day as best we can . Nature can be such a comfort when struggling with how we feel . Take care
July 14th, 2022 01:26
Caring dove said:
Sometimes that’s all we can do .. just get through the day as best we can . Nature can be such a comfort when struggling with how we feel . Take care
July 14th, 2022 01:26
Admitted but not Forsaken
L. B. Mek said:
(humility, is a virtue of the suffering
inequality, the moral compass
of those experiencing debilitating
pain
yet, that generosity of imagination\'s
empathy
is only apparent, in amongst the true
humanist\'s, since
their selflessness, must be so entrenched
in \'the who\' of their curated identity
for them, to find the strength within
to surpass their strife
and ink words of poetic lament
and a questing prayer of hope
that goodness, despite everything
may yet prevail...)
I\'m sorry if you\'re still in hospital, my friend
I champion the brave positivity in these words
you shared, dear Poet..
\'and yes, we are each imbued
with potential for levels of deity
in our instinctive, capacity
to impact and nurture, those
we come across, in our lives..!\'
July 14th, 2022 01:13
L. B. Mek said:
(humility, is a virtue of the suffering
inequality, the moral compass
of those experiencing debilitating
pain
yet, that generosity of imagination\'s
empathy
is only apparent, in amongst the true
humanist\'s, since
their selflessness, must be so entrenched
in \'the who\' of their curated identity
for them, to find the strength within
to surpass their strife
and ink words of poetic lament
and a questing prayer of hope
that goodness, despite everything
may yet prevail...)
I\'m sorry if you\'re still in hospital, my friend
I champion the brave positivity in these words
you shared, dear Poet..
\'and yes, we are each imbued
with potential for levels of deity
in our instinctive, capacity
to impact and nurture, those
we come across, in our lives..!\'
July 14th, 2022 01:13
Lifes little trip
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
and thank you! for inspiring
these feeble words, below
as my attempted poetic reply..
(tepid, at our outset
vehement, at our finish line;
this \'little trip of life\'
be it consumed
wholehartedly or tentatively
makes no difference
when
that drip of fated second, ticks
its last tock
we but - resume, our eternal visage
of perspectived, blank verse
in that universal existence,
of Poetic blank, canvas
awaiting, that bleak
crimson ink of fate
to drip, flow and consume
once again..)
July 8th, 2022 05:32
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
and thank you! for inspiring
these feeble words, below
as my attempted poetic reply..
(tepid, at our outset
vehement, at our finish line;
this \'little trip of life\'
be it consumed
wholehartedly or tentatively
makes no difference
when
that drip of fated second, ticks
its last tock
we but - resume, our eternal visage
of perspectived, blank verse
in that universal existence,
of Poetic blank, canvas
awaiting, that bleak
crimson ink of fate
to drip, flow and consume
once again..)
July 8th, 2022 05:32
Beat another day
Goldfinch60 said:
You have come a long way in your life Dan and it is getting better every day, we are always with you to help you along that path to the sea,
Andy
July 7th, 2022 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
You have come a long way in your life Dan and it is getting better every day, we are always with you to help you along that path to the sea,
Andy
July 7th, 2022 01:19
Beat another day
Doggerel Dave said:
You do keep going, Dan - there can\'t be anything other than great strength there.
Much peace and respect to you too.
July 6th, 2022 19:21
Doggerel Dave said:
You do keep going, Dan - there can\'t be anything other than great strength there.
Much peace and respect to you too.
July 6th, 2022 19:21
Beat another day
Fay Slimm. said:
Loud applause for beating another day in these wonderful and winning ways Dan - - you will enjoy the sea when you get there and feeling the wind in our hair is so healing.
July 6th, 2022 03:30
Fay Slimm. said:
Loud applause for beating another day in these wonderful and winning ways Dan - - you will enjoy the sea when you get there and feeling the wind in our hair is so healing.
July 6th, 2022 03:30
Being here now
L. B. Mek said:
\'these words, are the anthem
to the wisdom I seek of life
and thus, I shall try to heed
them, till my very end...\'
Brilliant! dear Poet
stay blessed, stay strong
and may your wisdom, ever
be utilised
in your life choices
my cherished friend
and most respected, Poet
thank you!
July 5th, 2022 04:22
L. B. Mek said:
\'these words, are the anthem
to the wisdom I seek of life
and thus, I shall try to heed
them, till my very end...\'
Brilliant! dear Poet
stay blessed, stay strong
and may your wisdom, ever
be utilised
in your life choices
my cherished friend
and most respected, Poet
thank you!
July 5th, 2022 04:22
Ride and bedazzled
Goldfinch60 said:
That ticket to ride has Brought you a long way and there is still much more of that wonderful journey to go.
Andy
July 4th, 2022 00:22
Goldfinch60 said:
That ticket to ride has Brought you a long way and there is still much more of that wonderful journey to go.
Andy
July 4th, 2022 00:22
I let some breath
Goldfinch60 said:
Great to see you back Dan and back with such a positive outlook, that is great.
Andy
June 24th, 2022 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Great to see you back Dan and back with such a positive outlook, that is great.
Andy
June 24th, 2022 00:43
I let some breath
Saxon Crow said:
Such a relatable poem Dan that it made my heart sing.
June 23rd, 2022 10:55
Saxon Crow said:
Such a relatable poem Dan that it made my heart sing.
June 23rd, 2022 10:55
I let some breath
arqios said:
Do, let them breathe, Dan. At least for a window of time, a seasonal clime.
June 23rd, 2022 06:34
arqios said:
Do, let them breathe, Dan. At least for a window of time, a seasonal clime.
June 23rd, 2022 06:34
I let some breath
L. B. Mek said:
smooth sailing, is a mirage
I\'ve yet to encounter
stubbed toes and flash rains
marking our tracks
is a reality I\'m much more used, to
so yeah
sht happens
world is Fcks
and people in it, are too broken
to begin contemplating, a solution
but
this I promise you, wise Poet
when we are true to ourselves
and choose empathy\'s kindness
and wisdom\'s humbleness
our day to day, becomes
so much easier to traverse
and within Poesy, we\'re afforded
the clearest reflection of ourselves
so we ink
to free our crimson pulses, ink
of all those wersisome worries
and thouts
and on
one scribbled truth
and glimpsed, wisdom
at a time
we pave a path, for veracity
to ease our burdens in life..
(stay Strong! brother
and remember
to enjoy the ride, this rollercoaster
existence, has us investing
our tomorrow\'s
before, we\'ve taken stock
of our yesterday\'s
to insure
we continue to waste, our today\'s..)
June 23rd, 2022 03:35
L. B. Mek said:
smooth sailing, is a mirage
I\'ve yet to encounter
stubbed toes and flash rains
marking our tracks
is a reality I\'m much more used, to
so yeah
sht happens
world is Fcks
and people in it, are too broken
to begin contemplating, a solution
but
this I promise you, wise Poet
when we are true to ourselves
and choose empathy\'s kindness
and wisdom\'s humbleness
our day to day, becomes
so much easier to traverse
and within Poesy, we\'re afforded
the clearest reflection of ourselves
so we ink
to free our crimson pulses, ink
of all those wersisome worries
and thouts
and on
one scribbled truth
and glimpsed, wisdom
at a time
we pave a path, for veracity
to ease our burdens in life..
(stay Strong! brother
and remember
to enjoy the ride, this rollercoaster
existence, has us investing
our tomorrow\'s
before, we\'ve taken stock
of our yesterday\'s
to insure
we continue to waste, our today\'s..)
June 23rd, 2022 03:35
I let some breath
dusk arising said:
Way to go Dan. You time away from us has seen your acceptance maturing. What will be, will be and you will walk through it hopefully knowing that the past has made you stronger, more resilient, and now with head held high (not too fukkin high mind u) you will look the future in the eye and grasp from it what is yours.
Rock-on!
June 23rd, 2022 03:33
dusk arising said:
Way to go Dan. You time away from us has seen your acceptance maturing. What will be, will be and you will walk through it hopefully knowing that the past has made you stronger, more resilient, and now with head held high (not too fukkin high mind u) you will look the future in the eye and grasp from it what is yours.
Rock-on!
June 23rd, 2022 03:33
I let some breath
Caring dove said:
Hi Dan .. thanks for the message earlier . Nice to see you post another poem )! I like your use of nature in this 🙂
June 23rd, 2022 02:29
Caring dove said:
Hi Dan .. thanks for the message earlier . Nice to see you post another poem )! I like your use of nature in this 🙂
June 23rd, 2022 02:29
Letting nature describe
Goddess of the Mist said:
Oh my goodness, my heart! Absolutely lovely.
June 13th, 2022 12:50
Goddess of the Mist said:
Oh my goodness, my heart! Absolutely lovely.
June 13th, 2022 12:50
Responsibility flew away
L. B. Mek said:
\'Loved to be, love\'
how deep those threads, reach
just a beautiful reading experience
thank you! dear Inspirational Poet
April 29th, 2022 03:34
L. B. Mek said:
\'Loved to be, love\'
how deep those threads, reach
just a beautiful reading experience
thank you! dear Inspirational Poet
April 29th, 2022 03:34
Responsibility flew away
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Dan, you have come into a good place now and that light will be now be forever in your life.
Andy
April 26th, 2022 00:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Dan, you have come into a good place now and that light will be now be forever in your life.
Andy
April 26th, 2022 00:37
Responsibility flew away
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Dan, you have come into a good place now and that light will be now be forever in your life.
Andy
April 26th, 2022 00:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Dan, you have come into a good place now and that light will be now be forever in your life.
Andy
April 26th, 2022 00:37
Responsibility flew away
dusk arising said:
On the beach alone with the springtime - a healing time Dan for the inner you. The space where you are reminded of who and what you are in the universe. A time of validation.
Imperfection rules our lives, every one of us but we can walk tall in company because we are far more than our imperfections and we have the right of creation, the nature which created us - me and you - to stand tall, to be all that we are.
Stay off the booze LOL.
April 25th, 2022 13:26
dusk arising said:
On the beach alone with the springtime - a healing time Dan for the inner you. The space where you are reminded of who and what you are in the universe. A time of validation.
Imperfection rules our lives, every one of us but we can walk tall in company because we are far more than our imperfections and we have the right of creation, the nature which created us - me and you - to stand tall, to be all that we are.
Stay off the booze LOL.
April 25th, 2022 13:26
Responsibility flew away
Christina8 said:
This is a really beautiful write dan! Its so natural to have these feelings when your loved ones go away for a while. I was only in New Orleans for a long weekend, 4 days and I missed my kids. Stay positive!!
April 25th, 2022 09:38
Christina8 said:
This is a really beautiful write dan! Its so natural to have these feelings when your loved ones go away for a while. I was only in New Orleans for a long weekend, 4 days and I missed my kids. Stay positive!!
April 25th, 2022 09:38
Responsibility flew away
Caring dove said:
Lol . I like your act of self kindness in your comments .. it’s nice to respect yourself . I’m taking a bit of a break from posting poems on here but I wanted to comment on your poem .
A good writing Dan .. I’m sure two weeks will fly by .. sorry that you miss them .
You know .. darkness can be turned into light and we can move through some of our feelings just by writing . Or atleast a little . It can be healing , I find
Take care ))
April 25th, 2022 09:11
Caring dove said:
Lol . I like your act of self kindness in your comments .. it’s nice to respect yourself . I’m taking a bit of a break from posting poems on here but I wanted to comment on your poem .
A good writing Dan .. I’m sure two weeks will fly by .. sorry that you miss them .
You know .. darkness can be turned into light and we can move through some of our feelings just by writing . Or atleast a little . It can be healing , I find
Take care ))
April 25th, 2022 09:11
Responsibility flew away
Crowns4Christ said:
This is beautiful Dan, the sweetest part of life is your child, I wish them the best and a safe flight,
Te amo meu amigo,
April 25th, 2022 09:06
Crowns4Christ said:
This is beautiful Dan, the sweetest part of life is your child, I wish them the best and a safe flight,
Te amo meu amigo,
April 25th, 2022 09:06
To be or not it\'s the last line of snot.
spilleronsheet said:
Amazing dear poetic Dan….sometimes is sunny sometimes it rains and sometimes its cold…but i shall be determined to paint a rainbow even if it rains…
April 13th, 2022 01:28
spilleronsheet said:
Amazing dear poetic Dan….sometimes is sunny sometimes it rains and sometimes its cold…but i shall be determined to paint a rainbow even if it rains…
April 13th, 2022 01:28
To be or not it\'s the last line of snot.
L. B. Mek said:
and paint your words
with so much life
despair aside joy
equal, in measure
poetic artistry, aside acute veracity
flowing free from a mind
yearning, to ink his path
to wisdom\'s, light..
and gracing us all
with a step by step guide
to how we, too
can aspire to live our everyday
with such unwavering
acceptance and hope...
(I read and learn, brother
stay strong!)
April 12th, 2022 06:13
L. B. Mek said:
and paint your words
with so much life
despair aside joy
equal, in measure
poetic artistry, aside acute veracity
flowing free from a mind
yearning, to ink his path
to wisdom\'s, light..
and gracing us all
with a step by step guide
to how we, too
can aspire to live our everyday
with such unwavering
acceptance and hope...
(I read and learn, brother
stay strong!)
April 12th, 2022 06:13
Why my poetry exists
L. B. Mek said:
love the imagery
and yes, we All
should learn
to: \'Utilise our Art\'
for ourselves, first..
what an exemplary message to promote
thank you, dear Poet
April 12th, 2022 06:09
L. B. Mek said:
love the imagery
and yes, we All
should learn
to: \'Utilise our Art\'
for ourselves, first..
what an exemplary message to promote
thank you, dear Poet
April 12th, 2022 06:09
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