Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Before I push it away again
Crowns4Christ said:
It\'s ok to be afraid, just don\'t let it take over your life Dan
March 15th, 2022 20:36
Crowns4Christ said:
It\'s ok to be afraid, just don\'t let it take over your life Dan
March 15th, 2022 20:36
Before I push it away again
L. B. Mek said:
\'This fear is actually in a safe place.\'
(It\'s ok
to not, be ok
my friend)
for we\'re all, subjected
to those whims of recency bias..
looking up
at a wondrous sunshine
while cursing
our dampened trouser bottoms, from the puddles
we couldn\'t bypass in our chaotic lives...
so write free, proudly
as few, if any
take time to heed
the side effects
of those accrued bruises, we carry in our hopeful heart\'s...
March 15th, 2022 07:22
L. B. Mek said:
\'This fear is actually in a safe place.\'
(It\'s ok
to not, be ok
my friend)
for we\'re all, subjected
to those whims of recency bias..
looking up
at a wondrous sunshine
while cursing
our dampened trouser bottoms, from the puddles
we couldn\'t bypass in our chaotic lives...
so write free, proudly
as few, if any
take time to heed
the side effects
of those accrued bruises, we carry in our hopeful heart\'s...
March 15th, 2022 07:22
A day late or is it!
Goldfinch60 said:
May that brightness always be with Dan.
Andy
March 10th, 2022 03:05
Goldfinch60 said:
May that brightness always be with Dan.
Andy
March 10th, 2022 03:05
A day late or is it!
Crowns4Christ said:
Very beautiful,once again Dan,you use your words beautifully
March 9th, 2022 19:53
Crowns4Christ said:
Very beautiful,once again Dan,you use your words beautifully
March 9th, 2022 19:53
A day late or is it!
spilleronsheet said:
I missed the date
So I couldn’t ink
But I guess all the poets did justice to the special day
You as well inked the words of gratitude and love for the world so well dear Poetic Dan
March 9th, 2022 14:42
spilleronsheet said:
I missed the date
So I couldn’t ink
But I guess all the poets did justice to the special day
You as well inked the words of gratitude and love for the world so well dear Poetic Dan
March 9th, 2022 14:42
A day late or is it!
Christina8 said:
I think this is a wonderful tribute to ladies everywhere, thank you for sharing, dan!!
March 9th, 2022 08:39
Christina8 said:
I think this is a wonderful tribute to ladies everywhere, thank you for sharing, dan!!
March 9th, 2022 08:39
Another soul returns home (sad)
Neville said:
this is far more than just a poem Dan, it is a prayer, a song & a splendid dedication & tribute to someone who once shone briefly and bright, not only your life, but I imagine in so many other peoples lives also ... Neville
March 7th, 2022 09:36
Neville said:
this is far more than just a poem Dan, it is a prayer, a song & a splendid dedication & tribute to someone who once shone briefly and bright, not only your life, but I imagine in so many other peoples lives also ... Neville
March 7th, 2022 09:36
Burning light
Fay Slimm. said:
Found these words very inspiring Dan - - just what I needed and thanks for sharing them.
March 5th, 2022 04:57
Fay Slimm. said:
Found these words very inspiring Dan - - just what I needed and thanks for sharing them.
March 5th, 2022 04:57
Burning light
Crowns4Christ said:
All we can really ever be is ourselves take one step at a time
March 5th, 2022 04:53
Crowns4Christ said:
All we can really ever be is ourselves take one step at a time
March 5th, 2022 04:53
Burning light
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Dan, that light in your life is certainly glowing brighter.
Andy
March 5th, 2022 02:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Dan, that light in your life is certainly glowing brighter.
Andy
March 5th, 2022 02:53
Burning light
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great writing Dan 🙂love your use of nature in this , and like your mention of the light .. theirs a nice spiritual aspect to your writing
March 5th, 2022 02:33
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great writing Dan 🙂love your use of nature in this , and like your mention of the light .. theirs a nice spiritual aspect to your writing
March 5th, 2022 02:33
Wave to the mystic from shores of unknown
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one Dan, may that connection always be with you.
Andy
March 5th, 2022 02:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one Dan, may that connection always be with you.
Andy
March 5th, 2022 02:10
Wave to the mystic from shores of unknown
Rozina said:
Supporting each other. Lovely poem.
March 4th, 2022 22:40
Rozina said:
Supporting each other. Lovely poem.
March 4th, 2022 22:40
Wave to the mystic from shores of unknown
Crowns4Christ said:
Your poetry is so beautiful Dan,it brings me joy to read your work,
Nicely written.
Melissa Crown
March 4th, 2022 19:19
Crowns4Christ said:
Your poetry is so beautiful Dan,it brings me joy to read your work,
Nicely written.
Melissa Crown
March 4th, 2022 19:19
Wave to the mystic from shores of unknown
Rocky Lagou said:
Nice pun with the first line! Also this poem was really gracious. I felt it and the imagery you bring up really ties in your message! Good one! 💖
March 4th, 2022 09:16
Rocky Lagou said:
Nice pun with the first line! Also this poem was really gracious. I felt it and the imagery you bring up really ties in your message! Good one! 💖
March 4th, 2022 09:16
Wave to the mystic from shores of unknown
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I like this Dan , especially your last lines with mention of the giant .. it’s so important to feel grounded in life 🙂
March 4th, 2022 07:37
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I like this Dan , especially your last lines with mention of the giant .. it’s so important to feel grounded in life 🙂
March 4th, 2022 07:37
Wave to the mystic from shores of unknown
L. B. Mek said:
\'Never alone
with many spirits in mind, swirling
to make any moment, rhyme
I\'ll wave
to the mystic from shores of unknown, casting
a shadow: wherever I roam.\'
these lines, showcase
such sincere and bravely pure
poetic genius
distilled and unfurled, accessibly relatable
with Purpose!
\'in my humble opinion\'
(Brilliant!)
thank you! for choosing to share, dear Poet
March 4th, 2022 07:11
L. B. Mek said:
\'Never alone
with many spirits in mind, swirling
to make any moment, rhyme
I\'ll wave
to the mystic from shores of unknown, casting
a shadow: wherever I roam.\'
these lines, showcase
such sincere and bravely pure
poetic genius
distilled and unfurled, accessibly relatable
with Purpose!
\'in my humble opinion\'
(Brilliant!)
thank you! for choosing to share, dear Poet
March 4th, 2022 07:11
Regardless of nothing
Rozina said:
The Gift Of Life. Precious words. Thank you for this reminder.
March 4th, 2022 00:33
Rozina said:
The Gift Of Life. Precious words. Thank you for this reminder.
March 4th, 2022 00:33
Regardless of nothing
Christina8 said:
Yes, I think things will get better for you.......but nothing is more powerful than the last line...enjoy the gift of life!!! Wonderful write, Dan!
March 3rd, 2022 15:16
Christina8 said:
Yes, I think things will get better for you.......but nothing is more powerful than the last line...enjoy the gift of life!!! Wonderful write, Dan!
March 3rd, 2022 15:16
Regardless of nothing
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes! We need to revolutionize our own beings and be ready for change! It can happen at any moment! 💖
March 3rd, 2022 10:12
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes! We need to revolutionize our own beings and be ready for change! It can happen at any moment! 💖
March 3rd, 2022 10:12
Regardless of nothing
Neville said:
superbly scripted ..... made me think no end .. keep your chin up Dan .. regardless of everything that is ...
March 3rd, 2022 09:45
Neville said:
superbly scripted ..... made me think no end .. keep your chin up Dan .. regardless of everything that is ...
March 3rd, 2022 09:45
Regardless of nothing
L. B. Mek said:
words to meditate over
and wisdom to devour..
thank you!
in sharing your journey
you highlight
poignant questions and hopeful answers
for so many
and as one, of the many
I humbly, reiterate my appreciation
for your Purposed, poetry
March 3rd, 2022 06:57
L. B. Mek said:
words to meditate over
and wisdom to devour..
thank you!
in sharing your journey
you highlight
poignant questions and hopeful answers
for so many
and as one, of the many
I humbly, reiterate my appreciation
for your Purposed, poetry
March 3rd, 2022 06:57
Another soul returns home (sad)
L. B. Mek said:
\'we must cherish
those fateful encounters in our lives
for, from the thousands
that cross our life\'s path
we\'re lucky
to have, but a handful few
tattoo their presence
in our memories and heart\'s...\'
may she rest in peace
(what a beautiful eulogy you\'ve penned, brother
what a way to utilise your wonderful gift, dear Poet)
March 3rd, 2022 06:51
L. B. Mek said:
\'we must cherish
those fateful encounters in our lives
for, from the thousands
that cross our life\'s path
we\'re lucky
to have, but a handful few
tattoo their presence
in our memories and heart\'s...\'
may she rest in peace
(what a beautiful eulogy you\'ve penned, brother
what a way to utilise your wonderful gift, dear Poet)
March 3rd, 2022 06:51
Another soul returns home (sad)
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a wonderful tribute to that lady Dan, she will always be in your memories.
Andy
March 3rd, 2022 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a wonderful tribute to that lady Dan, she will always be in your memories.
Andy
March 3rd, 2022 01:49
Another soul returns home (sad)
Bella Shepard said:
There are those people who seem to transcend earthly boundaries while they are here, and when they are gone leave a shining trail behind them. Loss is pain, but memories can be the balm. A beautiful, heartfelt piece.
March 2nd, 2022 13:25
Bella Shepard said:
There are those people who seem to transcend earthly boundaries while they are here, and when they are gone leave a shining trail behind them. Loss is pain, but memories can be the balm. A beautiful, heartfelt piece.
March 2nd, 2022 13:25
Another soul returns home (sad)
Rocky Lagou said:
So gracious! Sorry for your loss! But sometimes those short encounters leave grand impacts on us, for better. Great poem!
March 2nd, 2022 10:20
Rocky Lagou said:
So gracious! Sorry for your loss! But sometimes those short encounters leave grand impacts on us, for better. Great poem!
March 2nd, 2022 10:20
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