Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Nothing and everything matters
L. B. Mek said:
(you\'ve made my week brother, thank you!)
\'All wealth may lay in my heart\'
that\'s just pure distilled Genius!
gorgeously worded and so poetic
Happy New Year!
January 6th, 2023 07:49
L. B. Mek said:
(you\'ve made my week brother, thank you!)
\'All wealth may lay in my heart\'
that\'s just pure distilled Genius!
gorgeously worded and so poetic
Happy New Year!
January 6th, 2023 07:49
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L. B. Mek said:
\'They say you ain\'t a man when you\'re exposin\' your heart
Then they say you insane until it tears you apart
And then it cuts you so deep, and they can tell by the scars\'
(ah dear cherished friend and wise Poet
I love this coalition of artistic hope
you\'ve served to us on a plate of sincerity
and genuine goodwill to offer a bright guide
through our gloom of winter\'s bleak..
just awesome to experience
and to witness your fight
emerging from your trenches
to shine a light, for another
asking for nothing in return
gratefully, I read and learn
December 9th, 2022 04:30
L. B. Mek said:
\'They say you ain\'t a man when you\'re exposin\' your heart
Then they say you insane until it tears you apart
And then it cuts you so deep, and they can tell by the scars\'
(ah dear cherished friend and wise Poet
I love this coalition of artistic hope
you\'ve served to us on a plate of sincerity
and genuine goodwill to offer a bright guide
through our gloom of winter\'s bleak..
just awesome to experience
and to witness your fight
emerging from your trenches
to shine a light, for another
asking for nothing in return
gratefully, I read and learn
December 9th, 2022 04:30
Floating on a poetic life
L. B. Mek said:
Beautiful! dear Poet
these snippets you share
of love\'s, depthless mementos
nourish my will for humanity\'s goodwill
to prevail, against all the odds
if for nothing else
to give that next generation, a shot
at undoing all our failings
one bright smile, at a time...
December 9th, 2022 04:17
L. B. Mek said:
Beautiful! dear Poet
these snippets you share
of love\'s, depthless mementos
nourish my will for humanity\'s goodwill
to prevail, against all the odds
if for nothing else
to give that next generation, a shot
at undoing all our failings
one bright smile, at a time...
December 9th, 2022 04:17
7777
Crowns4Christ said:
Nice and uplifting, Dan,also the number 7 is significant in the Bible and with God,
December 8th, 2022 15:40
Crowns4Christ said:
Nice and uplifting, Dan,also the number 7 is significant in the Bible and with God,
December 8th, 2022 15:40
Floating on a poetic life
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving words Dan.
Andy
December 7th, 2022 02:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving words Dan.
Andy
December 7th, 2022 02:30
Floating on a poetic life
Crowns4Christ said:
Very beautiful and descriptive , Dan, I can feel your love pouring forth from your words,hang in there my friend,you are doing GREAT
December 6th, 2022 22:37
Crowns4Christ said:
Very beautiful and descriptive , Dan, I can feel your love pouring forth from your words,hang in there my friend,you are doing GREAT
December 6th, 2022 22:37
Floating on a poetic life
Caring dove said:
Lovely words in this poem …
my eyes flowed with tears of glitter and soul,
Good writing ))
December 6th, 2022 08:40
Caring dove said:
Lovely words in this poem …
my eyes flowed with tears of glitter and soul,
Good writing ))
December 6th, 2022 08:40
Journey to the soul in hope to find the self
Neville said:
You have clearly come a long, long way on this, the longest of journeys Dan .. and have demonstrated here, that while not everyone is born with a shed load of self-awareness and insight ..There are many situations, circumstances and events encountered along the way that can help equip such folk with an abundance of them, if that is what they truly seek .. Remember, the destination is not as important as the route one uses to get there and what obstacles were overcome in doing so ..
This is a very impressive and I do mean impressive, self-disclosive page, suitably packed to the point of overflowing with a single prose poem .. Write on PD & seasons best to you n yours sir ........ Neville
December 5th, 2022 01:59
Neville said:
You have clearly come a long, long way on this, the longest of journeys Dan .. and have demonstrated here, that while not everyone is born with a shed load of self-awareness and insight ..There are many situations, circumstances and events encountered along the way that can help equip such folk with an abundance of them, if that is what they truly seek .. Remember, the destination is not as important as the route one uses to get there and what obstacles were overcome in doing so ..
This is a very impressive and I do mean impressive, self-disclosive page, suitably packed to the point of overflowing with a single prose poem .. Write on PD & seasons best to you n yours sir ........ Neville
December 5th, 2022 01:59
Journey to the soul in hope to find the self
Doggerel Dave said:
Much wisdom and insight in there, Dan. You do justice to the journey you are on.
\"Nothing worth knowing comes without a feeling of breaking free, this can become uncomfortable and even a bit scary.\" - Worth it though. Great line.
December 4th, 2022 19:10
Doggerel Dave said:
Much wisdom and insight in there, Dan. You do justice to the journey you are on.
\"Nothing worth knowing comes without a feeling of breaking free, this can become uncomfortable and even a bit scary.\" - Worth it though. Great line.
December 4th, 2022 19:10
Journey to the soul in hope to find the self
Caring dove said:
It’s important to believe in yourself .. but some people struggle to do just that . I know I can sometimes
A good writing )
Apparently being in a higher vibration attracts in more of the good
December 4th, 2022 12:40
Caring dove said:
It’s important to believe in yourself .. but some people struggle to do just that . I know I can sometimes
A good writing )
Apparently being in a higher vibration attracts in more of the good
December 4th, 2022 12:40
She\'s a platter I can often forget to let know
Doggerel Dave said:
There you have created an erotic piece I can really relate to Dan, especially that first line, having had a reasonably full moustache during my active period……memories.
A powerful write.
December 2nd, 2022 23:32
Doggerel Dave said:
There you have created an erotic piece I can really relate to Dan, especially that first line, having had a reasonably full moustache during my active period……memories.
A powerful write.
December 2nd, 2022 23:32
She\'s a platter I can often forget to let know
Crowns4Christ said:
Very beautiful,Dan,an ode to your lady,very nice
December 2nd, 2022 10:54
Crowns4Christ said:
Very beautiful,Dan,an ode to your lady,very nice
December 2nd, 2022 10:54
May we all find that purpose
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(love that wheelbarrow picture)
stay blessed, dear friend
November 21st, 2022 04:22
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(love that wheelbarrow picture)
stay blessed, dear friend
November 21st, 2022 04:22
May we all find that purpose
Crowns4Christ said:
Great write Dan,you are truly so much more than you know,keep writing these
November 20th, 2022 09:28
Crowns4Christ said:
Great write Dan,you are truly so much more than you know,keep writing these
November 20th, 2022 09:28
May we all find that purpose
Fay Slimm. said:
I am dancing there with you in spirit dear Dan - - - holding on to that mirror and finding the rhythm a sercher for right can fly. Wonderful posting and thank you for sharing.
November 20th, 2022 05:55
Fay Slimm. said:
I am dancing there with you in spirit dear Dan - - - holding on to that mirror and finding the rhythm a sercher for right can fly. Wonderful posting and thank you for sharing.
November 20th, 2022 05:55
May we all find that purpose
Caring dove said:
And we are all worthy .. just we can walk through some of our life being made to feel that we’re not . And our higher self would always tell us that we are loveable .
A nice writing like the mention of dancing and the star .
Sometimes it’s difficult to feel a purpose or to know what it is. Nice that you have your daughter . Take care
November 20th, 2022 05:11
Caring dove said:
And we are all worthy .. just we can walk through some of our life being made to feel that we’re not . And our higher self would always tell us that we are loveable .
A nice writing like the mention of dancing and the star .
Sometimes it’s difficult to feel a purpose or to know what it is. Nice that you have your daughter . Take care
November 20th, 2022 05:11
Never wanting to lose sight
L. B. Mek said:
\' change is unstoppable even if you don\'t want it!\'
(how they grow up, far - too quick!
these chards of devine, gifting our lives
lighthouse\'s of hope, in their blessed smiles)
hope you had a great holiday brother
\'stay strong! cherish it all\'
November 18th, 2022 04:57
L. B. Mek said:
\' change is unstoppable even if you don\'t want it!\'
(how they grow up, far - too quick!
these chards of devine, gifting our lives
lighthouse\'s of hope, in their blessed smiles)
hope you had a great holiday brother
\'stay strong! cherish it all\'
November 18th, 2022 04:57
Never wanting to lose sight
Caring dove said:
And it’s so nice to be connected to our true self our higher self ..))
Lovely writing
November 14th, 2022 16:50
Caring dove said:
And it’s so nice to be connected to our true self our higher self ..))
Lovely writing
November 14th, 2022 16:50
3 moods in 1
Bella Shepard said:
I find your allusion to life as a riddle quite powerful; begging to be solved, but somehow always just out of reach. Food for deep thought, a fine write!
October 30th, 2022 15:00
Bella Shepard said:
I find your allusion to life as a riddle quite powerful; begging to be solved, but somehow always just out of reach. Food for deep thought, a fine write!
October 30th, 2022 15:00
3 moods in 1
Neville said:
Chin up, chest out, shoulders back & plod on slow with ya head held high .. You have far too much to fight for Dan .. and though not easy I have faith in you sir ......... Neville
October 29th, 2022 08:58
Neville said:
Chin up, chest out, shoulders back & plod on slow with ya head held high .. You have far too much to fight for Dan .. and though not easy I have faith in you sir ......... Neville
October 29th, 2022 08:58
3 moods in 1
arqios said:
Yes indeed, the better days that are on their way, and as we write ✍️ makes them come sooner and makes us feel better. TFS PD.
October 29th, 2022 02:50
arqios said:
Yes indeed, the better days that are on their way, and as we write ✍️ makes them come sooner and makes us feel better. TFS PD.
October 29th, 2022 02:50
3 moods in 1
L. B. Mek said:
Indeed, this reads so true wise poet
(Some paintings are mere splattered paint on a blank canvas!
Purposely lacking clear definition or a narrative
designed for our eyes to make out
the patterns that only we can uncover
from the chaotic mess it all resembles
at first glance.
Our lives, too
often appear to be a chaotic pattern of reactionary choices and mistaken actions
but I wonder
when that all-knowing universe or mother Gaia
look upon us, do we appear like those messy paintings
from within which they too, glean
the meaning and worth we imbue
into each breath, striving to define
our tattoo mark on this
our ephemeral experience of existence...)
October 28th, 2022 04:12
L. B. Mek said:
Indeed, this reads so true wise poet
(Some paintings are mere splattered paint on a blank canvas!
Purposely lacking clear definition or a narrative
designed for our eyes to make out
the patterns that only we can uncover
from the chaotic mess it all resembles
at first glance.
Our lives, too
often appear to be a chaotic pattern of reactionary choices and mistaken actions
but I wonder
when that all-knowing universe or mother Gaia
look upon us, do we appear like those messy paintings
from within which they too, glean
the meaning and worth we imbue
into each breath, striving to define
our tattoo mark on this
our ephemeral experience of existence...)
October 28th, 2022 04:12
You won\'t know until you try
L. B. Mek said:
\'You\'ll find me in the meadows of the reality I\'ve picked\'
\'Knowing everyday I kept my candle lit \'
(This is PROFOUND! A standalone nugget of wisdom, as mantra
to guide us through the fog of life)
Brilliant! dear Poet kin
thank you
October 28th, 2022 03:59
L. B. Mek said:
\'You\'ll find me in the meadows of the reality I\'ve picked\'
\'Knowing everyday I kept my candle lit \'
(This is PROFOUND! A standalone nugget of wisdom, as mantra
to guide us through the fog of life)
Brilliant! dear Poet kin
thank you
October 28th, 2022 03:59
Dear Muma
L. B. Mek said:
\'To your welcoming arms from your admiral heart, stemming from your deeply trodden light and dark path\'
Beautiful!
(How much do we owe our heroin\'s
for the person they curated of themselves
from life\'s testing bumps and bruises.
They overcome it all and become a mountain for the waves to lash against
just to keep their loved ones, safe.)
October 28th, 2022 03:53
L. B. Mek said:
\'To your welcoming arms from your admiral heart, stemming from your deeply trodden light and dark path\'
Beautiful!
(How much do we owe our heroin\'s
for the person they curated of themselves
from life\'s testing bumps and bruises.
They overcome it all and become a mountain for the waves to lash against
just to keep their loved ones, safe.)
October 28th, 2022 03:53
3 moods in 1
Caring dove said:
Great writing Dan ) especially like the mention of hills . Life can be very difficult can’t it .. bern struggling a bit myself at times
October 26th, 2022 10:09
Caring dove said:
Great writing Dan ) especially like the mention of hills . Life can be very difficult can’t it .. bern struggling a bit myself at times
October 26th, 2022 10:09
You won\'t know until you try
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Dan, you are living the good life now and that is great.
Andy
October 19th, 2022 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Dan, you are living the good life now and that is great.
Andy
October 19th, 2022 01:31
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