Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
I let some breath
L. B. Mek said:
smooth sailing, is a mirage
I\'ve yet to encounter
stubbed toes and flash rains
marking our tracks
is a reality I\'m much more used, to
so yeah
sht happens
world is Fcks
and people in it, are too broken
to begin contemplating, a solution
but
this I promise you, wise Poet
when we are true to ourselves
and choose empathy\'s kindness
and wisdom\'s humbleness
our day to day, becomes
so much easier to traverse
and within Poesy, we\'re afforded
the clearest reflection of ourselves
so we ink
to free our crimson pulses, ink
of all those wersisome worries
and thouts
and on
one scribbled truth
and glimpsed, wisdom
at a time
we pave a path, for veracity
to ease our burdens in life..
(stay Strong! brother
and remember
to enjoy the ride, this rollercoaster
existence, has us investing
our tomorrow\'s
before, we\'ve taken stock
of our yesterday\'s
to insure
we continue to waste, our today\'s..)
June 23rd, 2022 03:35
L. B. Mek said:
smooth sailing, is a mirage
I\'ve yet to encounter
stubbed toes and flash rains
marking our tracks
is a reality I\'m much more used, to
so yeah
sht happens
world is Fcks
and people in it, are too broken
to begin contemplating, a solution
but
this I promise you, wise Poet
when we are true to ourselves
and choose empathy\'s kindness
and wisdom\'s humbleness
our day to day, becomes
so much easier to traverse
and within Poesy, we\'re afforded
the clearest reflection of ourselves
so we ink
to free our crimson pulses, ink
of all those wersisome worries
and thouts
and on
one scribbled truth
and glimpsed, wisdom
at a time
we pave a path, for veracity
to ease our burdens in life..
(stay Strong! brother
and remember
to enjoy the ride, this rollercoaster
existence, has us investing
our tomorrow\'s
before, we\'ve taken stock
of our yesterday\'s
to insure
we continue to waste, our today\'s..)
June 23rd, 2022 03:35
I let some breath
dusk arising said:
Way to go Dan. You time away from us has seen your acceptance maturing. What will be, will be and you will walk through it hopefully knowing that the past has made you stronger, more resilient, and now with head held high (not too fukkin high mind u) you will look the future in the eye and grasp from it what is yours.
Rock-on!
June 23rd, 2022 03:33
dusk arising said:
Way to go Dan. You time away from us has seen your acceptance maturing. What will be, will be and you will walk through it hopefully knowing that the past has made you stronger, more resilient, and now with head held high (not too fukkin high mind u) you will look the future in the eye and grasp from it what is yours.
Rock-on!
June 23rd, 2022 03:33
I let some breath
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Hi Dan .. thanks for the message earlier . Nice to see you post another poem )! I like your use of nature in this 🙂
June 23rd, 2022 02:29
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Hi Dan .. thanks for the message earlier . Nice to see you post another poem )! I like your use of nature in this 🙂
June 23rd, 2022 02:29
Letting nature describe
Goddess of the Mist said:
Oh my goodness, my heart! Absolutely lovely.
June 13th, 2022 12:50
Goddess of the Mist said:
Oh my goodness, my heart! Absolutely lovely.
June 13th, 2022 12:50
Responsibility flew away
L. B. Mek said:
\'Loved to be, love\'
how deep those threads, reach
just a beautiful reading experience
thank you! dear Inspirational Poet
April 29th, 2022 03:34
L. B. Mek said:
\'Loved to be, love\'
how deep those threads, reach
just a beautiful reading experience
thank you! dear Inspirational Poet
April 29th, 2022 03:34
Responsibility flew away
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Dan, you have come into a good place now and that light will be now be forever in your life.
Andy
April 26th, 2022 00:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Dan, you have come into a good place now and that light will be now be forever in your life.
Andy
April 26th, 2022 00:37
Responsibility flew away
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Dan, you have come into a good place now and that light will be now be forever in your life.
Andy
April 26th, 2022 00:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Dan, you have come into a good place now and that light will be now be forever in your life.
Andy
April 26th, 2022 00:37
Responsibility flew away
dusk arising said:
On the beach alone with the springtime - a healing time Dan for the inner you. The space where you are reminded of who and what you are in the universe. A time of validation.
Imperfection rules our lives, every one of us but we can walk tall in company because we are far more than our imperfections and we have the right of creation, the nature which created us - me and you - to stand tall, to be all that we are.
Stay off the booze LOL.
April 25th, 2022 13:26
dusk arising said:
On the beach alone with the springtime - a healing time Dan for the inner you. The space where you are reminded of who and what you are in the universe. A time of validation.
Imperfection rules our lives, every one of us but we can walk tall in company because we are far more than our imperfections and we have the right of creation, the nature which created us - me and you - to stand tall, to be all that we are.
Stay off the booze LOL.
April 25th, 2022 13:26
Responsibility flew away
Christina8 said:
This is a really beautiful write dan! Its so natural to have these feelings when your loved ones go away for a while. I was only in New Orleans for a long weekend, 4 days and I missed my kids. Stay positive!!
April 25th, 2022 09:38
Christina8 said:
This is a really beautiful write dan! Its so natural to have these feelings when your loved ones go away for a while. I was only in New Orleans for a long weekend, 4 days and I missed my kids. Stay positive!!
April 25th, 2022 09:38
Responsibility flew away
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lol . I like your act of self kindness in your comments .. it’s nice to respect yourself . I’m taking a bit of a break from posting poems on here but I wanted to comment on your poem .
A good writing Dan .. I’m sure two weeks will fly by .. sorry that you miss them .
You know .. darkness can be turned into light and we can move through some of our feelings just by writing . Or atleast a little . It can be healing , I find
Take care ))
April 25th, 2022 09:11
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lol . I like your act of self kindness in your comments .. it’s nice to respect yourself . I’m taking a bit of a break from posting poems on here but I wanted to comment on your poem .
A good writing Dan .. I’m sure two weeks will fly by .. sorry that you miss them .
You know .. darkness can be turned into light and we can move through some of our feelings just by writing . Or atleast a little . It can be healing , I find
Take care ))
April 25th, 2022 09:11
Responsibility flew away
Crowns4Christ said:
This is beautiful Dan, the sweetest part of life is your child, I wish them the best and a safe flight,
Te amo meu amigo,
April 25th, 2022 09:06
Crowns4Christ said:
This is beautiful Dan, the sweetest part of life is your child, I wish them the best and a safe flight,
Te amo meu amigo,
April 25th, 2022 09:06
To be or not it\'s the last line of snot.
spilleronsheet said:
Amazing dear poetic Dan….sometimes is sunny sometimes it rains and sometimes its cold…but i shall be determined to paint a rainbow even if it rains…
April 13th, 2022 01:28
spilleronsheet said:
Amazing dear poetic Dan….sometimes is sunny sometimes it rains and sometimes its cold…but i shall be determined to paint a rainbow even if it rains…
April 13th, 2022 01:28
To be or not it\'s the last line of snot.
L. B. Mek said:
and paint your words
with so much life
despair aside joy
equal, in measure
poetic artistry, aside acute veracity
flowing free from a mind
yearning, to ink his path
to wisdom\'s, light..
and gracing us all
with a step by step guide
to how we, too
can aspire to live our everyday
with such unwavering
acceptance and hope...
(I read and learn, brother
stay strong!)
April 12th, 2022 06:13
L. B. Mek said:
and paint your words
with so much life
despair aside joy
equal, in measure
poetic artistry, aside acute veracity
flowing free from a mind
yearning, to ink his path
to wisdom\'s, light..
and gracing us all
with a step by step guide
to how we, too
can aspire to live our everyday
with such unwavering
acceptance and hope...
(I read and learn, brother
stay strong!)
April 12th, 2022 06:13
Why my poetry exists
L. B. Mek said:
love the imagery
and yes, we All
should learn
to: \'Utilise our Art\'
for ourselves, first..
what an exemplary message to promote
thank you, dear Poet
April 12th, 2022 06:09
L. B. Mek said:
love the imagery
and yes, we All
should learn
to: \'Utilise our Art\'
for ourselves, first..
what an exemplary message to promote
thank you, dear Poet
April 12th, 2022 06:09
Letting nature describe
L. B. Mek said:
\'The worthiness
to follow and be that guide, putting
the need for harmony, in my stride\'..
Amen!
April 12th, 2022 06:05
L. B. Mek said:
\'The worthiness
to follow and be that guide, putting
the need for harmony, in my stride\'..
Amen!
April 12th, 2022 06:05
Easy to say, another to be or do
L. B. Mek said:
\'Bring my mind back to the body in spirit to feel whole\'
its so hard to differentiate
between our mind\'s, anxieties
warping our reality
and us, just being life weary...
that\'s why we need, those tools in life
to centre ourselves, when we\'re lost
to those winds of chaos and strife..
stay strong, dear poet
entrust your evidently abundant, wisdom
to guide you
through those choppy waters of life
April 12th, 2022 06:03
L. B. Mek said:
\'Bring my mind back to the body in spirit to feel whole\'
its so hard to differentiate
between our mind\'s, anxieties
warping our reality
and us, just being life weary...
that\'s why we need, those tools in life
to centre ourselves, when we\'re lost
to those winds of chaos and strife..
stay strong, dear poet
entrust your evidently abundant, wisdom
to guide you
through those choppy waters of life
April 12th, 2022 06:03
I don\'t wear sunglasses
L. B. Mek said:
that first line said it all!
(sorry for my tardiness, my friend)
April 12th, 2022 05:58
L. B. Mek said:
that first line said it all!
(sorry for my tardiness, my friend)
April 12th, 2022 05:58
To be or not it\'s the last line of snot.
Crowns4Christ said:
Life can and will be overwhelming at times,but the precious moments make the overwhelming times worth it,all we can really do is live life to it\'s fullest, appreciate the little things and live enjoy every day as if its the last,
Great write Dan,no matter what, the world still goes on and keeps spinning, keep writing my friend,
Many blessings to you and your family
April 11th, 2022 14:16
Crowns4Christ said:
Life can and will be overwhelming at times,but the precious moments make the overwhelming times worth it,all we can really do is live life to it\'s fullest, appreciate the little things and live enjoy every day as if its the last,
Great write Dan,no matter what, the world still goes on and keeps spinning, keep writing my friend,
Many blessings to you and your family
April 11th, 2022 14:16
To be or not it\'s the last line of snot.
Christina8 said:
That was definitely an optimistic ending, I loved it!!!
April 11th, 2022 09:56
Christina8 said:
That was definitely an optimistic ending, I loved it!!!
April 11th, 2022 09:56
To be or not it\'s the last line of snot.
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes. So so beautiful. Life is so full of purpose seeking and just finding a reason (a reason for life, a reason for the now, or a reason to live.) But I enjoy your optimistic finale. We\'re all coloring the world one stroke at a time.
April 11th, 2022 08:51
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes. So so beautiful. Life is so full of purpose seeking and just finding a reason (a reason for life, a reason for the now, or a reason to live.) But I enjoy your optimistic finale. We\'re all coloring the world one stroke at a time.
April 11th, 2022 08:51
Why my poetry exists
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes. Poetry is such a great outlet for our emotions and our thoughts and I adore this one! It feels reassuring to know we always have a refuge in poetry!
April 11th, 2022 08:24
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes. Poetry is such a great outlet for our emotions and our thoughts and I adore this one! It feels reassuring to know we always have a refuge in poetry!
April 11th, 2022 08:24
To be or not it\'s the last line of snot.
dusk arising said:
Great Video, yours always are.
Wassup Dan? You say you wanted the day to be over at 9am but you don\'t say why. Or don\'t you know why?
Everyone\'s life is still in the making till they cross to the other side and everyone has to deal with whatever that roll of the dice dealt them.
You\'ve got a lot more going for you than a lot of folk m8.
April 11th, 2022 08:13
dusk arising said:
Great Video, yours always are.
Wassup Dan? You say you wanted the day to be over at 9am but you don\'t say why. Or don\'t you know why?
Everyone\'s life is still in the making till they cross to the other side and everyone has to deal with whatever that roll of the dice dealt them.
You\'ve got a lot more going for you than a lot of folk m8.
April 11th, 2022 08:13
Why my poetry exists
Thekkinkkattil said:
Beautiful words . The way you pour your soul is really unique. Enjoy your salad
April 10th, 2022 20:54
Thekkinkkattil said:
Beautiful words . The way you pour your soul is really unique. Enjoy your salad
April 10th, 2022 20:54
Why my poetry exists
spilleronsheet said:
A beautiful and fun read
The title totally caught me
Cause I resonate therein so much
MPS truly a home
And the note you mentioned so sweet, thanks for stopping by
It surely feels great
April 10th, 2022 14:35
spilleronsheet said:
A beautiful and fun read
The title totally caught me
Cause I resonate therein so much
MPS truly a home
And the note you mentioned so sweet, thanks for stopping by
It surely feels great
April 10th, 2022 14:35
Why my poetry exists
Bella Shepard said:
So often the words roll around in our heads before we have the courage to speak them. To find a home such as this wonderful place, where no one judges, but accepts and understands is a gift. Your words are your feelings, let them run free. Good Write!
April 10th, 2022 12:49
Bella Shepard said:
So often the words roll around in our heads before we have the courage to speak them. To find a home such as this wonderful place, where no one judges, but accepts and understands is a gift. Your words are your feelings, let them run free. Good Write!
April 10th, 2022 12:49
Why my poetry exists
Crowns4Christ said:
Definitely an escape from everyday life, poetry has a way of releasing our pent up energy, and get our thoughts on paper or screen can help us work through our issues,, makes us realize things that we miss in our minds
April 10th, 2022 12:22
Crowns4Christ said:
Definitely an escape from everyday life, poetry has a way of releasing our pent up energy, and get our thoughts on paper or screen can help us work through our issues,, makes us realize things that we miss in our minds
April 10th, 2022 12:22
Why my poetry exists
dusk arising said:
Maybe you write to show the world that there is something in you the world cannot see but you want it to be seen.
Maybe it\'s the soft centre of you crying out to be shared because the people you meet day to day just cannot see that you are the big hearted person we see in your words and vids.
April 10th, 2022 11:07
dusk arising said:
Maybe you write to show the world that there is something in you the world cannot see but you want it to be seen.
Maybe it\'s the soft centre of you crying out to be shared because the people you meet day to day just cannot see that you are the big hearted person we see in your words and vids.
April 10th, 2022 11:07
Why my poetry exists
Michael Edwards said:
And may you always be dancing in salads PD - poignant write much
enjoyed.
April 10th, 2022 10:34
Michael Edwards said:
And may you always be dancing in salads PD - poignant write much
enjoyed.
April 10th, 2022 10:34
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