Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
She\'s a platter I can often forget to let know
Doggerel Dave said:
There you have created an erotic piece I can really relate to Dan, especially that first line, having had a reasonably full moustache during my active period……memories.
A powerful write.
December 2nd, 2022 23:32
Doggerel Dave said:
There you have created an erotic piece I can really relate to Dan, especially that first line, having had a reasonably full moustache during my active period……memories.
A powerful write.
December 2nd, 2022 23:32
She\'s a platter I can often forget to let know
Crowns4Christ said:
Very beautiful,Dan,an ode to your lady,very nice
December 2nd, 2022 10:54
Crowns4Christ said:
Very beautiful,Dan,an ode to your lady,very nice
December 2nd, 2022 10:54
May we all find that purpose
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(love that wheelbarrow picture)
stay blessed, dear friend
November 21st, 2022 04:22
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(love that wheelbarrow picture)
stay blessed, dear friend
November 21st, 2022 04:22
May we all find that purpose
Crowns4Christ said:
Great write Dan,you are truly so much more than you know,keep writing these
November 20th, 2022 09:28
Crowns4Christ said:
Great write Dan,you are truly so much more than you know,keep writing these
November 20th, 2022 09:28
May we all find that purpose
Fay Slimm. said:
I am dancing there with you in spirit dear Dan - - - holding on to that mirror and finding the rhythm a sercher for right can fly. Wonderful posting and thank you for sharing.
November 20th, 2022 05:55
Fay Slimm. said:
I am dancing there with you in spirit dear Dan - - - holding on to that mirror and finding the rhythm a sercher for right can fly. Wonderful posting and thank you for sharing.
November 20th, 2022 05:55
May we all find that purpose
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
And we are all worthy .. just we can walk through some of our life being made to feel that we’re not . And our higher self would always tell us that we are loveable .
A nice writing like the mention of dancing and the star .
Sometimes it’s difficult to feel a purpose or to know what it is. Nice that you have your daughter . Take care
November 20th, 2022 05:11
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
And we are all worthy .. just we can walk through some of our life being made to feel that we’re not . And our higher self would always tell us that we are loveable .
A nice writing like the mention of dancing and the star .
Sometimes it’s difficult to feel a purpose or to know what it is. Nice that you have your daughter . Take care
November 20th, 2022 05:11
Never wanting to lose sight
L. B. Mek said:
\' change is unstoppable even if you don\'t want it!\'
(how they grow up, far - too quick!
these chards of devine, gifting our lives
lighthouse\'s of hope, in their blessed smiles)
hope you had a great holiday brother
\'stay strong! cherish it all\'
November 18th, 2022 04:57
L. B. Mek said:
\' change is unstoppable even if you don\'t want it!\'
(how they grow up, far - too quick!
these chards of devine, gifting our lives
lighthouse\'s of hope, in their blessed smiles)
hope you had a great holiday brother
\'stay strong! cherish it all\'
November 18th, 2022 04:57
Never wanting to lose sight
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
And it’s so nice to be connected to our true self our higher self ..))
Lovely writing
November 14th, 2022 16:50
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
And it’s so nice to be connected to our true self our higher self ..))
Lovely writing
November 14th, 2022 16:50
3 moods in 1
Bella Shepard said:
I find your allusion to life as a riddle quite powerful; begging to be solved, but somehow always just out of reach. Food for deep thought, a fine write!
October 30th, 2022 15:00
Bella Shepard said:
I find your allusion to life as a riddle quite powerful; begging to be solved, but somehow always just out of reach. Food for deep thought, a fine write!
October 30th, 2022 15:00
3 moods in 1
Neville said:
Chin up, chest out, shoulders back & plod on slow with ya head held high .. You have far too much to fight for Dan .. and though not easy I have faith in you sir ......... Neville
October 29th, 2022 08:58
Neville said:
Chin up, chest out, shoulders back & plod on slow with ya head held high .. You have far too much to fight for Dan .. and though not easy I have faith in you sir ......... Neville
October 29th, 2022 08:58
3 moods in 1
arqios said:
Yes indeed, the better days that are on their way, and as we write ✍️ makes them come sooner and makes us feel better. TFS PD.
October 29th, 2022 02:50
arqios said:
Yes indeed, the better days that are on their way, and as we write ✍️ makes them come sooner and makes us feel better. TFS PD.
October 29th, 2022 02:50
3 moods in 1
L. B. Mek said:
Indeed, this reads so true wise poet
(Some paintings are mere splattered paint on a blank canvas!
Purposely lacking clear definition or a narrative
designed for our eyes to make out
the patterns that only we can uncover
from the chaotic mess it all resembles
at first glance.
Our lives, too
often appear to be a chaotic pattern of reactionary choices and mistaken actions
but I wonder
when that all-knowing universe or mother Gaia
look upon us, do we appear like those messy paintings
from within which they too, glean
the meaning and worth we imbue
into each breath, striving to define
our tattoo mark on this
our ephemeral experience of existence...)
October 28th, 2022 04:12
L. B. Mek said:
Indeed, this reads so true wise poet
(Some paintings are mere splattered paint on a blank canvas!
Purposely lacking clear definition or a narrative
designed for our eyes to make out
the patterns that only we can uncover
from the chaotic mess it all resembles
at first glance.
Our lives, too
often appear to be a chaotic pattern of reactionary choices and mistaken actions
but I wonder
when that all-knowing universe or mother Gaia
look upon us, do we appear like those messy paintings
from within which they too, glean
the meaning and worth we imbue
into each breath, striving to define
our tattoo mark on this
our ephemeral experience of existence...)
October 28th, 2022 04:12
You won\'t know until you try
L. B. Mek said:
\'You\'ll find me in the meadows of the reality I\'ve picked\'
\'Knowing everyday I kept my candle lit \'
(This is PROFOUND! A standalone nugget of wisdom, as mantra
to guide us through the fog of life)
Brilliant! dear Poet kin
thank you
October 28th, 2022 03:59
L. B. Mek said:
\'You\'ll find me in the meadows of the reality I\'ve picked\'
\'Knowing everyday I kept my candle lit \'
(This is PROFOUND! A standalone nugget of wisdom, as mantra
to guide us through the fog of life)
Brilliant! dear Poet kin
thank you
October 28th, 2022 03:59
Dear Muma
L. B. Mek said:
\'To your welcoming arms from your admiral heart, stemming from your deeply trodden light and dark path\'
Beautiful!
(How much do we owe our heroin\'s
for the person they curated of themselves
from life\'s testing bumps and bruises.
They overcome it all and become a mountain for the waves to lash against
just to keep their loved ones, safe.)
October 28th, 2022 03:53
L. B. Mek said:
\'To your welcoming arms from your admiral heart, stemming from your deeply trodden light and dark path\'
Beautiful!
(How much do we owe our heroin\'s
for the person they curated of themselves
from life\'s testing bumps and bruises.
They overcome it all and become a mountain for the waves to lash against
just to keep their loved ones, safe.)
October 28th, 2022 03:53
3 moods in 1
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great writing Dan ) especially like the mention of hills . Life can be very difficult can’t it .. bern struggling a bit myself at times
October 26th, 2022 10:09
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great writing Dan ) especially like the mention of hills . Life can be very difficult can’t it .. bern struggling a bit myself at times
October 26th, 2022 10:09
You won\'t know until you try
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Dan, you are living the good life now and that is great.
Andy
October 19th, 2022 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Dan, you are living the good life now and that is great.
Andy
October 19th, 2022 01:31
You won\'t know until you try
Doggerel Dave said:
Who knew? Great - I can feel the optimism flowing through, Dan.
Take care.
October 18th, 2022 19:00
Doggerel Dave said:
Who knew? Great - I can feel the optimism flowing through, Dan.
Take care.
October 18th, 2022 19:00
A quick reminder
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful positive words Dan, you have come a long way, I am so pleased.
Andy
October 14th, 2022 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful positive words Dan, you have come a long way, I am so pleased.
Andy
October 14th, 2022 01:22
A quick reminder
orchidee said:
I know the cold water therapy. People chuck buckets of it over me if I read anything too \'hot\'! lol. Or if my vibes get too excited. heehee.
October 13th, 2022 08:34
orchidee said:
I know the cold water therapy. People chuck buckets of it over me if I read anything too \'hot\'! lol. Or if my vibes get too excited. heehee.
October 13th, 2022 08:34
A quick reminder
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Nice writing Dan )) you sound a bit better in yourself
October 13th, 2022 03:59
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Nice writing Dan )) you sound a bit better in yourself
October 13th, 2022 03:59
I\'ll walk with you
Goldfinch60 said:
May you keep her moving forward into that good place that is there, you have done it Dan so you know it is possible.
Andy
October 7th, 2022 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
May you keep her moving forward into that good place that is there, you have done it Dan so you know it is possible.
Andy
October 7th, 2022 01:40
I\'ll walk with you
orchidee said:
You can walk with me, and help carry my shopping home from the Co-op too! heehee.
October 6th, 2022 11:29
orchidee said:
You can walk with me, and help carry my shopping home from the Co-op too! heehee.
October 6th, 2022 11:29
I\'ll walk with you
Fay Slimm. said:
A caring gift for your friend who i am sure will value the words and the thoughts in this verse dear Dan - - keep the ink flowing my friend.
October 6th, 2022 10:33
Fay Slimm. said:
A caring gift for your friend who i am sure will value the words and the thoughts in this verse dear Dan - - keep the ink flowing my friend.
October 6th, 2022 10:33
Carry on
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful positive words Dan, keep going that way.
Andy
October 1st, 2022 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful positive words Dan, keep going that way.
Andy
October 1st, 2022 01:42
Carry on
Bella Shepard said:
I love the spirit of your poem my friend, \"go for the gusto\". Well done!
September 30th, 2022 15:28
Bella Shepard said:
I love the spirit of your poem my friend, \"go for the gusto\". Well done!
September 30th, 2022 15:28
Carry on
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Dan.
Hope can be a narrow bridge across the abyss, but it does cross.
September 30th, 2022 14:11
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Dan.
Hope can be a narrow bridge across the abyss, but it does cross.
September 30th, 2022 14:11
Carry on
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great writing Dan )) never tried using spirit cards before . I have a friend who did a tarot reading for me . Nice to see another writing from you . I may post a poem later
September 30th, 2022 10:49
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great writing Dan )) never tried using spirit cards before . I have a friend who did a tarot reading for me . Nice to see another writing from you . I may post a poem later
September 30th, 2022 10:49
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