Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Fresh air
Crystal Hope said:
Yesterday\'s words is today\'s fresh air,
Letting it go so I can breathe easier!
such peace and beauty in this piece. wonderful job!
April 1st, 2023 12:13
Crystal Hope said:
Yesterday\'s words is today\'s fresh air,
Letting it go so I can breathe easier!
such peace and beauty in this piece. wonderful job!
April 1st, 2023 12:13
Intoxication
Goldfinch60 said:
You have the strength within you Dan, you have been in worse places and have come through them, your life will always get better.
Andy
April 1st, 2023 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
You have the strength within you Dan, you have been in worse places and have come through them, your life will always get better.
Andy
April 1st, 2023 01:46
Intoxication
BlessedbyGod said:
Hang in there Dan, you can make it through this bumpy stretch and make it to smooth waters again, this storm in your life is temporary and you will survive this
March 31st, 2023 20:01
BlessedbyGod said:
Hang in there Dan, you can make it through this bumpy stretch and make it to smooth waters again, this storm in your life is temporary and you will survive this
March 31st, 2023 20:01
Intoxication
Doggerel Dave said:
Stay cool, Dan. \"This too shall pass\".
Your line \'I am the problem and solution\' shows a deep awareness plus the insight needed to resolve all.
Take care and best wishes.
March 31st, 2023 19:53
Doggerel Dave said:
Stay cool, Dan. \"This too shall pass\".
Your line \'I am the problem and solution\' shows a deep awareness plus the insight needed to resolve all.
Take care and best wishes.
March 31st, 2023 19:53
Shades of gray despite the suns rays
HangingbyaHalo said:
Wonderful write! I get trapped in the grey sometimes and have to remind myself the sun exists.
March 24th, 2023 15:29
HangingbyaHalo said:
Wonderful write! I get trapped in the grey sometimes and have to remind myself the sun exists.
March 24th, 2023 15:29
Shades of gray despite the suns rays
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(We seek solace, idolising a past
fearing future\'s, as yet unrealised
in this now, graced by a brilliant
Sunset
as reminder to that we treasure
few, witness
this grace within breath we\'ve been
afforded
few, understand
tis now, not our next that matters
most!)
March 24th, 2023 05:52
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(We seek solace, idolising a past
fearing future\'s, as yet unrealised
in this now, graced by a brilliant
Sunset
as reminder to that we treasure
few, witness
this grace within breath we\'ve been
afforded
few, understand
tis now, not our next that matters
most!)
March 24th, 2023 05:52
Random rainbows in my brain
L. B. Mek said:
\'These are random thoughts
from sheltering my eyes in the rain,
seeing many souls walk this earth
reflecting the smiles
that bring rainbows to my brain..\'
a most Perfect poet, brother
(so glad to have you back
smiling, defiant
through all that raw pain!)
forgive my tardiness
March 24th, 2023 05:46
L. B. Mek said:
\'These are random thoughts
from sheltering my eyes in the rain,
seeing many souls walk this earth
reflecting the smiles
that bring rainbows to my brain..\'
a most Perfect poet, brother
(so glad to have you back
smiling, defiant
through all that raw pain!)
forgive my tardiness
March 24th, 2023 05:46
Shades of gray despite the suns rays
BlessedbyGod said:
Great piece Dan,
Despite the beauty in the world we can\'t but feel and see only Grey at times, other times we see all the colors of the rainbow so vibrant and beautiful
Goes to show you that life can give you anything, just don\'t let the dullness consume you and overtake the beauty
March 23rd, 2023 18:46
BlessedbyGod said:
Great piece Dan,
Despite the beauty in the world we can\'t but feel and see only Grey at times, other times we see all the colors of the rainbow so vibrant and beautiful
Goes to show you that life can give you anything, just don\'t let the dullness consume you and overtake the beauty
March 23rd, 2023 18:46
Random rainbows in my brain
Goldfinch60 said:
Whenever I pass people I always say hello and smile, most reply but some do not.
Andy
March 11th, 2023 02:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Whenever I pass people I always say hello and smile, most reply but some do not.
Andy
March 11th, 2023 02:47
Random rainbows in my brain
Bella Shepard said:
First of all, an adorable video of an adorable little girl, that made me smile from ear to ear. It is so important to acknowledge each other, in even the simplist ways. When I pass someone randomly, and they say good morning, or how are you, I respond in like kind, smiling just to think that they noticed me and wished me well even not knowing who I am. This is such a thoughtful write dear poet, you made my day.
March 10th, 2023 11:56
Bella Shepard said:
First of all, an adorable video of an adorable little girl, that made me smile from ear to ear. It is so important to acknowledge each other, in even the simplist ways. When I pass someone randomly, and they say good morning, or how are you, I respond in like kind, smiling just to think that they noticed me and wished me well even not knowing who I am. This is such a thoughtful write dear poet, you made my day.
March 10th, 2023 11:56
Asked for guidance once again
L. B. Mek said:
seek ye a bridge to evermore
a place where heart\'s never tear
behold, these four legged wonders
shadowing our every step
smiling, at our silent jokes
loving us, unconditional
excavating, that good
we keep hidden, deep within
seek ye a bridge, to fast-forward
days of pain, after loss
simply reset, your eyes my friend
look, within
look for that trusted friend, believe
all that love and devotion
will never dissipate or betray
(\'the tears will come, let them\' John Keats)
may they bathe you, anew
path your journey, to that awaiting
next
onwards my brother, we celebrate
those who blessed our lives
by each step, we fight to survive
to make them proud, to show them
our devotion, to their bequeathed
legacy of beloved, memories
February 17th, 2023 04:07
L. B. Mek said:
seek ye a bridge to evermore
a place where heart\'s never tear
behold, these four legged wonders
shadowing our every step
smiling, at our silent jokes
loving us, unconditional
excavating, that good
we keep hidden, deep within
seek ye a bridge, to fast-forward
days of pain, after loss
simply reset, your eyes my friend
look, within
look for that trusted friend, believe
all that love and devotion
will never dissipate or betray
(\'the tears will come, let them\' John Keats)
may they bathe you, anew
path your journey, to that awaiting
next
onwards my brother, we celebrate
those who blessed our lives
by each step, we fight to survive
to make them proud, to show them
our devotion, to their bequeathed
legacy of beloved, memories
February 17th, 2023 04:07
R.I.P little buddy
L. B. Mek said:
\'that to live is enough
and stop complaining about life, each
moment is another step
to put everything right.\'
Brilliant!
so sorry my friend, thanks for sharing
February 17th, 2023 03:54
L. B. Mek said:
\'that to live is enough
and stop complaining about life, each
moment is another step
to put everything right.\'
Brilliant!
so sorry my friend, thanks for sharing
February 17th, 2023 03:54
Love enough to care
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m too weak with
such heart-breaking topics, so sorry for your hurt my friend
crazy,
we complain about our ephemeral life\'s
yet these gentle creatures, get so much less
so unfair
February 17th, 2023 03:51
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m too weak with
such heart-breaking topics, so sorry for your hurt my friend
crazy,
we complain about our ephemeral life\'s
yet these gentle creatures, get so much less
so unfair
February 17th, 2023 03:51
Asked for guidance once again
Neville said:
this is clearly
1) very sad
2) quite brilliant
3) full of ❤️
February 14th, 2023 03:14
Neville said:
this is clearly
1) very sad
2) quite brilliant
3) full of ❤️
February 14th, 2023 03:14
Asked for guidance once again
BlessedbyGod said:
Take one step at a time Dan,
Jack was a huge part of your life,and it will take time to heal,but the Lord has you and will ease the pain of losing a loved one
February 12th, 2023 18:04
BlessedbyGod said:
Take one step at a time Dan,
Jack was a huge part of your life,and it will take time to heal,but the Lord has you and will ease the pain of losing a loved one
February 12th, 2023 18:04
R.I.P little buddy
Goldfinch60 said:
So sorry Dan but he has left you with wonderful memories.
Andy
February 12th, 2023 02:52
Goldfinch60 said:
So sorry Dan but he has left you with wonderful memories.
Andy
February 12th, 2023 02:52
R.I.P little buddy
Fay Slimm. said:
A gift indeed was your lovely Jack and you write his goodbye time so poignantly Dan - -- having a dearly loved canine myself I can relate with each line of thankfulness for our pets who teach us so much while they share lour life for a while. The missing though hard will resurrect happy memories we made that can comfort us as we try to adjust. Warm hugs from me and this needed read will go straight into my list of favourites.
February 11th, 2023 07:20
Fay Slimm. said:
A gift indeed was your lovely Jack and you write his goodbye time so poignantly Dan - -- having a dearly loved canine myself I can relate with each line of thankfulness for our pets who teach us so much while they share lour life for a while. The missing though hard will resurrect happy memories we made that can comfort us as we try to adjust. Warm hugs from me and this needed read will go straight into my list of favourites.
February 11th, 2023 07:20
R.I.P little buddy
orchidee said:
A sensitive write Dan. Yes, they\'re part of our family too.
February 11th, 2023 05:01
orchidee said:
A sensitive write Dan. Yes, they\'re part of our family too.
February 11th, 2023 05:01
R.I.P little buddy
Caring dove said:
I’m sorry for your loss , Dan ( that’s sad . Animals are so beautiful and was part of your family .
A good writing .. tho sad
February 11th, 2023 04:14
Caring dove said:
I’m sorry for your loss , Dan ( that’s sad . Animals are so beautiful and was part of your family .
A good writing .. tho sad
February 11th, 2023 04:14
Love enough to care
BlessedbyGod said:
That is so sad Dan,
I\'m truly sorry to hear that,just remember that he will be playing in the hills of Heaven,doing everything he ever loved to do,and he will be waiting to be reunited with you
February 7th, 2023 22:04
BlessedbyGod said:
That is so sad Dan,
I\'m truly sorry to hear that,just remember that he will be playing in the hills of Heaven,doing everything he ever loved to do,and he will be waiting to be reunited with you
February 7th, 2023 22:04
Love enough to care
Goldfinch60 said:
Such sad words Dan, but Jack has had a good life and will be remembered.
As a memory I have my parents had a red setter called Shane who eventually passed over and I can remember my mother saying: \"The rhubarb in the garden has never tasted as good now Shane has gone\"
Andy
February 7th, 2023 02:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Such sad words Dan, but Jack has had a good life and will be remembered.
As a memory I have my parents had a red setter called Shane who eventually passed over and I can remember my mother saying: \"The rhubarb in the garden has never tasted as good now Shane has gone\"
Andy
February 7th, 2023 02:55
Love enough to care
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks Dan. Any pet owner who has loved their pet will know that feeling of grief you so clearly describe.
The ageing process happens to us all - (pity your average pet can\'t live longer) you and me, but especially me.... Would that humans could make it that easy to go when the time comes.
February 6th, 2023 21:25
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks Dan. Any pet owner who has loved their pet will know that feeling of grief you so clearly describe.
The ageing process happens to us all - (pity your average pet can\'t live longer) you and me, but especially me.... Would that humans could make it that easy to go when the time comes.
February 6th, 2023 21:25
Love enough to care
Eileen Clark said:
Good day, A very sad but beautiful poem. I have two cats that are over ten years old and I will really be sad when they are gone, best regards.
February 6th, 2023 14:20
Eileen Clark said:
Good day, A very sad but beautiful poem. I have two cats that are over ten years old and I will really be sad when they are gone, best regards.
February 6th, 2023 14:20
Love enough to care
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh Dan - your words in this poem show the very hard task of saying goodbye to a devoted and loyal four-pawed friend - -- -like me all pet lovers will relate to this ode on the heart-breaking moment when love lies lifeless on a vet\'s bench after the needle orders its end. With you in thought as dear Jack has his further assessment.
February 6th, 2023 09:59
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh Dan - your words in this poem show the very hard task of saying goodbye to a devoted and loyal four-pawed friend - -- -like me all pet lovers will relate to this ode on the heart-breaking moment when love lies lifeless on a vet\'s bench after the needle orders its end. With you in thought as dear Jack has his further assessment.
February 6th, 2023 09:59
Love enough to care
Christina8 said:
Hello, friend, it\'s been awhile. Your poem, so sad, and rightfully so! It\'s so hard to part with our four legged friends as they are our companions. I hope whatever is best happens. Much peace and respect!
February 6th, 2023 09:20
Christina8 said:
Hello, friend, it\'s been awhile. Your poem, so sad, and rightfully so! It\'s so hard to part with our four legged friends as they are our companions. I hope whatever is best happens. Much peace and respect!
February 6th, 2023 09:20
Nothing and everything matters
Neville said:
I always knew there was something really cool hiding behind that flaming heart of yours Dan .. I wish you a contented and fulfilled 2023 good sir .. Neville
January 8th, 2023 06:47
Neville said:
I always knew there was something really cool hiding behind that flaming heart of yours Dan .. I wish you a contented and fulfilled 2023 good sir .. Neville
January 8th, 2023 06:47
Nothing and everything matters
Goldfinch60 said:
Those dreams will be there Dan and your life will improve even more than it has already, see my poem of today.
Andy
January 7th, 2023 02:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Those dreams will be there Dan and your life will improve even more than it has already, see my poem of today.
Andy
January 7th, 2023 02:47
Nothing and everything matters
Caring dove said:
Nice writing Dan ) and happy new year
Like this line
plats in stormy weather ‘
January 6th, 2023 08:13
Caring dove said:
Nice writing Dan ) and happy new year
Like this line
plats in stormy weather ‘
January 6th, 2023 08:13
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