Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
I\'ll never understand
jarcher54 said:
Well, you are welcome in my space any time man. This is a little like an wicked incantation, a desperate soliloquy, and a lecture. It\'s quite real, a little scary, and yet lovely and hopeful.
September 16th, 2023 02:05
jarcher54 said:
Well, you are welcome in my space any time man. This is a little like an wicked incantation, a desperate soliloquy, and a lecture. It\'s quite real, a little scary, and yet lovely and hopeful.
September 16th, 2023 02:05
I\'ll never understand
Bobby O said:
It’s both. I like how you were brave enough to admit the current reality and however shitty it is now I believe you could reach for optimistic view as yiu seem balanced and thoughtful and smart enough to know there is some risk but that Also means the pksn could work perfect next time.
September 15th, 2023 23:05
Bobby O said:
It’s both. I like how you were brave enough to admit the current reality and however shitty it is now I believe you could reach for optimistic view as yiu seem balanced and thoughtful and smart enough to know there is some risk but that Also means the pksn could work perfect next time.
September 15th, 2023 23:05
I\'ll never understand
peto said:
Great to see you writing Dan
Always emotional
Always real
Maybe the answer is a miracle curse
Though provoking and genuine
Dan the man
September 15th, 2023 18:14
peto said:
Great to see you writing Dan
Always emotional
Always real
Maybe the answer is a miracle curse
Though provoking and genuine
Dan the man
September 15th, 2023 18:14
I\'ll never understand
BlessedbyGod said:
I feel your pain Dan,
Sometimes I struggle with these feelings and emotions too,
We\'re only human my friend,
The incredible parts of life wouldn\'t be as incredible if we didn\'t have the struggle too,
They would be just another part of our lives,
When we have pain and sorrow, it only makes the good times that much better,
We have the ability to appreciate obstacles that enter our paths, whether they are good or bad,
God made us able to handle all situations that get thrown at us, He never gives us more than we can handle, we will bend and it will hurt, badly, but we will not break,
Whatever you are going through my dear friend, there is a way through it to a peaceful and happy ending.
Hang in there Dan, you got this!
Thoughts and prayers are with you
September 15th, 2023 17:18
BlessedbyGod said:
I feel your pain Dan,
Sometimes I struggle with these feelings and emotions too,
We\'re only human my friend,
The incredible parts of life wouldn\'t be as incredible if we didn\'t have the struggle too,
They would be just another part of our lives,
When we have pain and sorrow, it only makes the good times that much better,
We have the ability to appreciate obstacles that enter our paths, whether they are good or bad,
God made us able to handle all situations that get thrown at us, He never gives us more than we can handle, we will bend and it will hurt, badly, but we will not break,
Whatever you are going through my dear friend, there is a way through it to a peaceful and happy ending.
Hang in there Dan, you got this!
Thoughts and prayers are with you
September 15th, 2023 17:18
The cycle is complete
BlessedbyGod said:
Wow, congratulations Dan, there is no greater feeling, I\'m so happy for u my friend,
There are many more moments like this to come!!!
September 10th, 2023 18:45
BlessedbyGod said:
Wow, congratulations Dan, there is no greater feeling, I\'m so happy for u my friend,
There are many more moments like this to come!!!
September 10th, 2023 18:45
uncertain and uncomfortable but also blissful and serene
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Dan, you have come a very long way in your life.
Andy
September 10th, 2023 02:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Dan, you have come a very long way in your life.
Andy
September 10th, 2023 02:03
uncertain and uncomfortable but also blissful and serene
peto said:
Dan THE man
You have always been a tremendous example
Given it away to keep it
Loved every word big chap
Proud to know you
September 9th, 2023 05:15
peto said:
Dan THE man
You have always been a tremendous example
Given it away to keep it
Loved every word big chap
Proud to know you
September 9th, 2023 05:15
uncertain and uncomfortable but also blissful and serene
Teddy.15 said:
Dogs are really a humans best friend. Nurture and be nurtured beautiful dear Dan, lovely to see you. 💖
September 9th, 2023 02:45
Teddy.15 said:
Dogs are really a humans best friend. Nurture and be nurtured beautiful dear Dan, lovely to see you. 💖
September 9th, 2023 02:45
Forever guessing
L. B. Mek said:
\'Sometimes paradise is never
what you expect
and can be as simple as checking
over your shoulder with no regrets.\'
!Brilliant!
(I wish safe travels for your daughter
may her journeys deliver her
to her heart\'s desires..)
August 25th, 2023 00:04
L. B. Mek said:
\'Sometimes paradise is never
what you expect
and can be as simple as checking
over your shoulder with no regrets.\'
!Brilliant!
(I wish safe travels for your daughter
may her journeys deliver her
to her heart\'s desires..)
August 25th, 2023 00:04
Forever guessing
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Dan, you have moved on so well into your new life of wonder and love.
Andy
August 24th, 2023 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Dan, you have moved on so well into your new life of wonder and love.
Andy
August 24th, 2023 00:51
There comes a point
Nethra said:
This poem beautifully captures the essence of self-discovery, emphasizing the balance between external knowledge and internal wisdom. such a good write!
July 24th, 2023 10:07
Nethra said:
This poem beautifully captures the essence of self-discovery, emphasizing the balance between external knowledge and internal wisdom. such a good write!
July 24th, 2023 10:07
There comes a point
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
so deep, words to meditate
and consume, not just read..
(yesterday\'s, as our vindication sails
a Time, visits
when alone with our thoughts
serenity, become viable
even at the centre of our life\'s
hurricanes..
each failure and missed opportunity
we forgive ourselves
allowing us to evolve
adding layers to our worth
so that mirror, reflects
not just our best, but
all that we cherish in this thing
called life
this, accumulation of breath and
sensation
we\'ve learnt to accept and find peace
within...)
July 24th, 2023 03:36
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
so deep, words to meditate
and consume, not just read..
(yesterday\'s, as our vindication sails
a Time, visits
when alone with our thoughts
serenity, become viable
even at the centre of our life\'s
hurricanes..
each failure and missed opportunity
we forgive ourselves
allowing us to evolve
adding layers to our worth
so that mirror, reflects
not just our best, but
all that we cherish in this thing
called life
this, accumulation of breath and
sensation
we\'ve learnt to accept and find peace
within...)
July 24th, 2023 03:36
There comes a point
orchidee said:
There comes a point in time, right now, when I say good write Dan!
Yes, loads of psychological stuff around, books to read on it, etc.
July 24th, 2023 01:48
orchidee said:
There comes a point in time, right now, when I say good write Dan!
Yes, loads of psychological stuff around, books to read on it, etc.
July 24th, 2023 01:48
There comes a point
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Dan, all we can to is the best we can in our world and hope not to upset others.
Andy
July 24th, 2023 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Dan, all we can to is the best we can in our world and hope not to upset others.
Andy
July 24th, 2023 00:52
There comes a point
Introverted Sage said:
\'Finding wisdom in the unknown\'
Yes ♾️
Grow and become your own wave!
🪶Happy writing
July 23rd, 2023 15:30
Introverted Sage said:
\'Finding wisdom in the unknown\'
Yes ♾️
Grow and become your own wave!
🪶Happy writing
July 23rd, 2023 15:30
Safety before bed
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful! just lovely
thank you for sharing such precious gifts
dear cherished Poet
July 21st, 2023 04:15
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful! just lovely
thank you for sharing such precious gifts
dear cherished Poet
July 21st, 2023 04:15
Safety before bed
Neville said:
Absolutely beautiful Dan .. ZZZZ .. those Z\'s are horizontal N\'s by the way :)
July 19th, 2023 01:45
Neville said:
Absolutely beautiful Dan .. ZZZZ .. those Z\'s are horizontal N\'s by the way :)
July 19th, 2023 01:45
Safety before bed
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Dan , I am sure you will set up a good future for your children.
Andy
July 19th, 2023 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Dan , I am sure you will set up a good future for your children.
Andy
July 19th, 2023 01:16
Turning dreams into a plan
Goldfinch60 said:
Your plans sound so good Dan and I am sure you will see some magnificent places and people.
Andy
July 18th, 2023 00:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Your plans sound so good Dan and I am sure you will see some magnificent places and people.
Andy
July 18th, 2023 00:21
Turning dreams into a plan
Teddy.15 said:
Wow yes, if that is what you want, do it Dan there is no greater education than to see the world 🌎💕
July 17th, 2023 05:06
Teddy.15 said:
Wow yes, if that is what you want, do it Dan there is no greater education than to see the world 🌎💕
July 17th, 2023 05:06
Turning dreams into a plan
L. B. Mek said:
adventuring, is a lifestyle
that will suite your poetic spirit brother
I sense a Byronic hero
in the words you share
devoid of tragedy and sadness
just the poetry
in partnership with nature\'s bountiful opportunities
hope it all comes together as you wish it too
I\'ll keep my fingers and toes crossed
July 17th, 2023 04:43
L. B. Mek said:
adventuring, is a lifestyle
that will suite your poetic spirit brother
I sense a Byronic hero
in the words you share
devoid of tragedy and sadness
just the poetry
in partnership with nature\'s bountiful opportunities
hope it all comes together as you wish it too
I\'ll keep my fingers and toes crossed
July 17th, 2023 04:43
Responsibility of domestication
L. B. Mek said:
that great gentle soul, Spinoza
in championing oneness
did so by advocating, temperance
above all else, even
in our utilisation of temperance
itself..!
ergo
the key component in tempering
our actions and living a balanced
life
is by first and most critically, choosing
to take accountability for ourselves
our feeling, our actions and
our responsibilities;
freedom, is a most beautiful ideal
the anchor to that we envision
as being good or innately humane
and yet
that same freedom, often comes
at a most absurd crimson price
why, because there\'s always those
that choose to ignorantly, selfishly
believe, their opinions and assumptions
are more important
than the responsibility thy have
to consider the greater collective!
Discipline
deemed an ugly, restrictive word
when devoid of discipline
all our rights and possibilities
lack validation or worth
just a wild abandonment style
of life, where the consequences
of thoughtless actions
are paid for by others, who choose
to do the right thing..
so yes
all our domesticated pets and animals
are meant to roam free and live
in the wild
so then, why not let them be
why get a pet
and then try give it freedom
better, to take accountability
of our guilt
admitting, that by choosing
to keep a pet
we are choosing ourselves
over that animals preferences
but
in taking accountability for our choice
we are making a promise
to provide our pets
with the very best lives
we can offer them
and so with temperance
as our mindset
we strive to find a balance
from keeping them safe
and keeping those
who interact with them, safe
teaching them, correcting
their aggressive tendencies
and thus allowing them
to experience a life, full of love
and wagging tale happiness..
lying to ourselves
and assuming everyone else
will know
how to interact with a pet
is abandoning the promise
we made to our beloved
companions in life...!
July 17th, 2023 04:33
L. B. Mek said:
that great gentle soul, Spinoza
in championing oneness
did so by advocating, temperance
above all else, even
in our utilisation of temperance
itself..!
ergo
the key component in tempering
our actions and living a balanced
life
is by first and most critically, choosing
to take accountability for ourselves
our feeling, our actions and
our responsibilities;
freedom, is a most beautiful ideal
the anchor to that we envision
as being good or innately humane
and yet
that same freedom, often comes
at a most absurd crimson price
why, because there\'s always those
that choose to ignorantly, selfishly
believe, their opinions and assumptions
are more important
than the responsibility thy have
to consider the greater collective!
Discipline
deemed an ugly, restrictive word
when devoid of discipline
all our rights and possibilities
lack validation or worth
just a wild abandonment style
of life, where the consequences
of thoughtless actions
are paid for by others, who choose
to do the right thing..
so yes
all our domesticated pets and animals
are meant to roam free and live
in the wild
so then, why not let them be
why get a pet
and then try give it freedom
better, to take accountability
of our guilt
admitting, that by choosing
to keep a pet
we are choosing ourselves
over that animals preferences
but
in taking accountability for our choice
we are making a promise
to provide our pets
with the very best lives
we can offer them
and so with temperance
as our mindset
we strive to find a balance
from keeping them safe
and keeping those
who interact with them, safe
teaching them, correcting
their aggressive tendencies
and thus allowing them
to experience a life, full of love
and wagging tale happiness..
lying to ourselves
and assuming everyone else
will know
how to interact with a pet
is abandoning the promise
we made to our beloved
companions in life...!
July 17th, 2023 04:33
Responsibility of domestication
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words Dan. Respect is everything.
Andy
July 16th, 2023 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words Dan. Respect is everything.
Andy
July 16th, 2023 01:19
No shortcuts to becoming brave
Neville said:
there aint no one that wont like this Dan .. and if they pay attention to the message contained herein .. they may well learn something too ... Neville
July 13th, 2023 09:03
Neville said:
there aint no one that wont like this Dan .. and if they pay attention to the message contained herein .. they may well learn something too ... Neville
July 13th, 2023 09:03
No shortcuts to becoming brave
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Dan, your son sounds like a wonderful person - as is his father.
Andy
July 8th, 2023 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Dan, your son sounds like a wonderful person - as is his father.
Andy
July 8th, 2023 01:10
No shortcuts to becoming brave
Teddy.15 said:
This is beautiful Dan. ❤️ our children are what makes us, us I hear such pride in this one. ❤️
July 7th, 2023 11:43
Teddy.15 said:
This is beautiful Dan. ❤️ our children are what makes us, us I hear such pride in this one. ❤️
July 7th, 2023 11:43
No shortcuts to becoming brave
orchidee said:
Those woofers will help us overcome fears of travel, etc. They know what to do! :)
July 7th, 2023 08:56
orchidee said:
Those woofers will help us overcome fears of travel, etc. They know what to do! :)
July 7th, 2023 08:56
No shortcuts to becoming brave
orchidee said:
The busiest train station in the country, is it? Or in England, anyway. And people in all directions.
Is your son agoraphobic?
July 7th, 2023 08:55
orchidee said:
The busiest train station in the country, is it? Or in England, anyway. And people in all directions.
Is your son agoraphobic?
July 7th, 2023 08:55
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