Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Goes down easier with a rhyme
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Dan,
“real change never happens overnight”…
so true!
Your words today are very inspirational.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Laura 🌻
June 22nd, 2023 06:37
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Dan,
“real change never happens overnight”…
so true!
Your words today are very inspirational.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Laura 🌻
June 22nd, 2023 06:37
Goes down easier with a rhyme
jarcher54 said:
Inspired observation... like a spoonful of sugar! But slightly fewer calories... yes, the healing power of that little trick... our writing teachers warned us it was just a trick, a sing-song novelty... but it\'s really a proper incantation to heal, amuse, sober, or just plain seduce the listener!
June 22nd, 2023 02:23
jarcher54 said:
Inspired observation... like a spoonful of sugar! But slightly fewer calories... yes, the healing power of that little trick... our writing teachers warned us it was just a trick, a sing-song novelty... but it\'s really a proper incantation to heal, amuse, sober, or just plain seduce the listener!
June 22nd, 2023 02:23
Never to late
peto said:
Dan the man
Great to see you still writing
When you got ot you got it
Thoroughly enjoyed
June 21st, 2023 17:49
peto said:
Dan the man
Great to see you still writing
When you got ot you got it
Thoroughly enjoyed
June 21st, 2023 17:49
Not my world but my home
L. B. Mek said:
\' walls can give you safety
yet the heart
needs more than stuff!
A connection
that can be felt and not seen
something, that makes you
want
to be better than yesterday\'s dreams.
Where the feeling of heaven
becomes part of your soul
knowing, there\'s a partner
anchoring*
the other side of your whole\'
Brilliant!!!
(breathtakingly beautiful
stay blessed, my cherished friend)
June 16th, 2023 01:35
L. B. Mek said:
\' walls can give you safety
yet the heart
needs more than stuff!
A connection
that can be felt and not seen
something, that makes you
want
to be better than yesterday\'s dreams.
Where the feeling of heaven
becomes part of your soul
knowing, there\'s a partner
anchoring*
the other side of your whole\'
Brilliant!!!
(breathtakingly beautiful
stay blessed, my cherished friend)
June 16th, 2023 01:35
Not my world but my home
Caring dove said:
A good writing Dan ) love is important in life ..nice rhyming in your poem
June 14th, 2023 03:39
Caring dove said:
A good writing Dan ) love is important in life ..nice rhyming in your poem
June 14th, 2023 03:39
Not my world but my home
Goldfinch60 said:
That home will come back and all will be fine Dan.
Andy
June 14th, 2023 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
That home will come back and all will be fine Dan.
Andy
June 14th, 2023 01:55
Not my world but my home
BlessedbyGod said:
I\'m sure that you miss her very much Dan,
It will be the sweetest reunion when she returns to you
June 12th, 2023 16:43
BlessedbyGod said:
I\'m sure that you miss her very much Dan,
It will be the sweetest reunion when she returns to you
June 12th, 2023 16:43
Journeying to Art of the mutt (full story)
Poetic Dan said:
Ha its a school you never ever graduate from just keeps going on and on until we pass the baton!
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and give such (what can feel like) undeserving hopeful words. I\'ll keep trying to live up to yours and mine, see you on another rhyme!
Much peace and respect
June 12th, 2023 13:16
Poetic Dan said:
Ha its a school you never ever graduate from just keeps going on and on until we pass the baton!
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and give such (what can feel like) undeserving hopeful words. I\'ll keep trying to live up to yours and mine, see you on another rhyme!
Much peace and respect
June 12th, 2023 13:16
Journeying to Art of the mutt (full story)
L. B. Mek said:
I took my time to read, and absorb
these words of veracity\'s sincerity
and brave, poetic transparency
so grateful I did
how instructive, wise Poet
you dear friend, graduated
from that school of life with flying colours..
I shall carry these words below
for the rest of my life, thank you!
\'Often I catch myself acting out of emotion rather than necessity, this is where a dogs reaction will differ depending on my energy. Knowing this and learning to breathe in moments of built-up tension always changes everyones actions. Giving space to find the next move or conclude that maybe none is needed at all!
The path to think dog, is a beautiful world of seeing how truly powerful we are and the unbelievable affects we have within the world around us. In the simplicity of body language and the energy we use every second of every day.\'
June 12th, 2023 02:32
L. B. Mek said:
I took my time to read, and absorb
these words of veracity\'s sincerity
and brave, poetic transparency
so grateful I did
how instructive, wise Poet
you dear friend, graduated
from that school of life with flying colours..
I shall carry these words below
for the rest of my life, thank you!
\'Often I catch myself acting out of emotion rather than necessity, this is where a dogs reaction will differ depending on my energy. Knowing this and learning to breathe in moments of built-up tension always changes everyones actions. Giving space to find the next move or conclude that maybe none is needed at all!
The path to think dog, is a beautiful world of seeing how truly powerful we are and the unbelievable affects we have within the world around us. In the simplicity of body language and the energy we use every second of every day.\'
June 12th, 2023 02:32
Sometimes this love really hurts
terriblesoul977 said:
You\'re so real, so true.
June 10th, 2023 02:03
terriblesoul977 said:
You\'re so real, so true.
June 10th, 2023 02:03
Sometimes this love really hurts
Goldfinch60 said:
You have come a long way Dan and I am sure all will be well in the future.
Andy
June 10th, 2023 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
You have come a long way Dan and I am sure all will be well in the future.
Andy
June 10th, 2023 00:51
My journey into Art of the mutt
L. B. Mek said:
if you have a unique, insight
and a poetic voice of sincerity
to unfurl your message within
why not write a book, a guide
to offer other\'s, a path
you\'ve come to appreciate
making a link with a dog or a pet
in general
is such a vital tool, we can utilise
for our personal evolution
we can learn how to overcome grief
again n again, accepting
that cycle of existence
we can learn to cherish nature more
and get motivation
to go out more, be more active
learn how to receive attentive thoughtfulness
wordlessly
and how to repay, the incalculable
and, so much more
so yes, dear Poet
write your experience, distil it
as poetic as you can
and let the vibes of fate, guide your story
I for one will read it, gratefully
June 9th, 2023 03:49
L. B. Mek said:
if you have a unique, insight
and a poetic voice of sincerity
to unfurl your message within
why not write a book, a guide
to offer other\'s, a path
you\'ve come to appreciate
making a link with a dog or a pet
in general
is such a vital tool, we can utilise
for our personal evolution
we can learn how to overcome grief
again n again, accepting
that cycle of existence
we can learn to cherish nature more
and get motivation
to go out more, be more active
learn how to receive attentive thoughtfulness
wordlessly
and how to repay, the incalculable
and, so much more
so yes, dear Poet
write your experience, distil it
as poetic as you can
and let the vibes of fate, guide your story
I for one will read it, gratefully
June 9th, 2023 03:49
Somebody save me!
L. B. Mek said:
\'May I find within these words
more purpose to my stroll,
having more conviction
in authentically becoming whole.\'
Amen!
how I relate, wise Poet
and thank you!
for introducing me to such a meaningful song
June 9th, 2023 03:35
L. B. Mek said:
\'May I find within these words
more purpose to my stroll,
having more conviction
in authentically becoming whole.\'
Amen!
how I relate, wise Poet
and thank you!
for introducing me to such a meaningful song
June 9th, 2023 03:35
In the end their will be no words
L. B. Mek said:
\'everything is rippling as it should be!\'
pebbles in our river\'s of fate
we\'re too lost, trying to paddle
our destiny\'s, when the current
of life, already has us
exactly where we should be...
(I love how real you keep your poetic voice
such a feat of transparency, sincerity, bravery!)
stay strong! oh brother of mine
\'and miles to go, before we sleep\'
a most deserved, serene sleep
June 9th, 2023 03:31
L. B. Mek said:
\'everything is rippling as it should be!\'
pebbles in our river\'s of fate
we\'re too lost, trying to paddle
our destiny\'s, when the current
of life, already has us
exactly where we should be...
(I love how real you keep your poetic voice
such a feat of transparency, sincerity, bravery!)
stay strong! oh brother of mine
\'and miles to go, before we sleep\'
a most deserved, serene sleep
June 9th, 2023 03:31
It\'s not work but life
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
so true wise Poet
nature, teaches us best
(I read and try, to heed)
June 9th, 2023 03:27
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
so true wise Poet
nature, teaches us best
(I read and try, to heed)
June 9th, 2023 03:27
Sometimes this love really hurts
L. B. Mek said:
firstly, I love your picture
that\'s such a healthy, gleaming coat
on your wise dog
that discerning eye, says it all! lol
\'In a never-ending journey
of almost got it,
as passion slips from the finger tips.\'
if rainbows are random
why do rainfalls seems so predictable?
if love\'s innate
why do heartbreak\'s seem so contrived
an inevitability of Tim-Stamped fate
..
I too, have had my fingertips, scorched
for holding-on, to those ashes of a defeated love
yet, like you
I choose
to simply hold them, high
let that wind of change
blow on them, and rekindle
my stamina
for those drumming heartbeats
one more time
every time
and on, till we get it right
or die
knowing we gave it all we had..!
June 9th, 2023 03:23
L. B. Mek said:
firstly, I love your picture
that\'s such a healthy, gleaming coat
on your wise dog
that discerning eye, says it all! lol
\'In a never-ending journey
of almost got it,
as passion slips from the finger tips.\'
if rainbows are random
why do rainfalls seems so predictable?
if love\'s innate
why do heartbreak\'s seem so contrived
an inevitability of Tim-Stamped fate
..
I too, have had my fingertips, scorched
for holding-on, to those ashes of a defeated love
yet, like you
I choose
to simply hold them, high
let that wind of change
blow on them, and rekindle
my stamina
for those drumming heartbeats
one more time
every time
and on, till we get it right
or die
knowing we gave it all we had..!
June 9th, 2023 03:23
My journey into Art of the mutt
BlessedbyGod said:
Sometimes it seems as if dogs are more human than we are,
Maybe you should write a book Dan, I\'m already a fan of your work my friend
May 23rd, 2023 21:30
BlessedbyGod said:
Sometimes it seems as if dogs are more human than we are,
Maybe you should write a book Dan, I\'m already a fan of your work my friend
May 23rd, 2023 21:30
Somebody save me!
Goldfinch60 said:
Music can be the saviour Dan. I always went to music whenever I was down.
Andy
May 21st, 2023 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Music can be the saviour Dan. I always went to music whenever I was down.
Andy
May 21st, 2023 01:19
Somebody save me!
BlessedbyGod said:
So true Dan, I too have found comfort and hope in music,
And poetry,for me writing is very therapeutic and healing
This is a great piece once again my friend
May 19th, 2023 08:13
BlessedbyGod said:
So true Dan, I too have found comfort and hope in music,
And poetry,for me writing is very therapeutic and healing
This is a great piece once again my friend
May 19th, 2023 08:13
In the end their will be no words
Goldfinch60 said:
You have come a long way Dan, just remember that and you will move forward in a fine life.
Andy
May 19th, 2023 03:01
Goldfinch60 said:
You have come a long way Dan, just remember that and you will move forward in a fine life.
Andy
May 19th, 2023 03:01
In the end their will be no words
Caring dove said:
We all need harmony and peace )) sometimes it’s very difficult to write isn’t it .. I find when I’m in a certain place I just don’t feel the want to be creative , sometimes
May 18th, 2023 07:47
Caring dove said:
We all need harmony and peace )) sometimes it’s very difficult to write isn’t it .. I find when I’m in a certain place I just don’t feel the want to be creative , sometimes
May 18th, 2023 07:47
It\'s not work but life
Goldfinch60 said:
You have come such a long way Dan and will move on into an even better place.
Andy
April 25th, 2023 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
You have come such a long way Dan and will move on into an even better place.
Andy
April 25th, 2023 01:49
Never waste a rhyme
L. B. Mek said:
so true! and relatable
dear cherished Poet
(empower each inked syllable
within a resolve of artistry\'s
soaring stratospheres
like clouds, gliding
in our now
whilst traversing
our past\'s
we ink, breathe out
and surrender it all, to a fate
we may not be able to curate
but we damn well, can cultivate
to path those aspired better\'s
we dream
in-to brilliantly manifested, existence
with each rhyme, we allow to flow
like our life\'s, crimson wine...)
April 24th, 2023 04:17
L. B. Mek said:
so true! and relatable
dear cherished Poet
(empower each inked syllable
within a resolve of artistry\'s
soaring stratospheres
like clouds, gliding
in our now
whilst traversing
our past\'s
we ink, breathe out
and surrender it all, to a fate
we may not be able to curate
but we damn well, can cultivate
to path those aspired better\'s
we dream
in-to brilliantly manifested, existence
with each rhyme, we allow to flow
like our life\'s, crimson wine...)
April 24th, 2023 04:17
Intoxication
L. B. Mek said:
\'I am the problem and solution\'
wisdom, distilled simple enough
to consume...
a great write, dear Poet
(Intoxicated
with a self, assumed lacking
in worth
from our lack of appreciation
for that
we have sculpted of ourselves
forgetting
those overcome obstacles, convinced
these next winds of change
as that doom
awaiting, in each reflection
we glimpse
in those tainted mirrors of warped
self, worth...)
\'we are, what we\'ll go-on
to become
we need only forgive, trust
and learn from our past
selves
to sculpt the future\'s
we deserve!\'
stay strong, my friend
April 24th, 2023 04:09
L. B. Mek said:
\'I am the problem and solution\'
wisdom, distilled simple enough
to consume...
a great write, dear Poet
(Intoxicated
with a self, assumed lacking
in worth
from our lack of appreciation
for that
we have sculpted of ourselves
forgetting
those overcome obstacles, convinced
these next winds of change
as that doom
awaiting, in each reflection
we glimpse
in those tainted mirrors of warped
self, worth...)
\'we are, what we\'ll go-on
to become
we need only forgive, trust
and learn from our past
selves
to sculpt the future\'s
we deserve!\'
stay strong, my friend
April 24th, 2023 04:09
Never waste a rhyme
Accidental Poet said:
One foot in front of the other dan. Tomorrow\'s another day.
April 17th, 2023 08:29
Accidental Poet said:
One foot in front of the other dan. Tomorrow\'s another day.
April 17th, 2023 08:29
Never waste a rhyme
Goldfinch60 said:
To be is often enough Dan, I am therefore I will go on as I am sure that you will.
Andy
April 17th, 2023 00:28
Goldfinch60 said:
To be is often enough Dan, I am therefore I will go on as I am sure that you will.
Andy
April 17th, 2023 00:28
Intoxication
Goddess of the Mist said:
Excellent. I get it, the wanting to escape. I\'m trying to hang tough too.
Great music and writing!
April 9th, 2023 00:54
Goddess of the Mist said:
Excellent. I get it, the wanting to escape. I\'m trying to hang tough too.
Great music and writing!
April 9th, 2023 00:54
Fresh air
BlessedbyGod said:
Love this Dan, it\'s great,
Just one little word or kind comment can inspire a great piece of art,thank you for writing this and sharing a bit of your personal life with us all, I feel blessed to read your work
April 2nd, 2023 00:24
BlessedbyGod said:
Love this Dan, it\'s great,
Just one little word or kind comment can inspire a great piece of art,thank you for writing this and sharing a bit of your personal life with us all, I feel blessed to read your work
April 2nd, 2023 00:24
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