Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Somebody save me!
L. B. Mek said:
\'May I find within these words
more purpose to my stroll,
having more conviction
in authentically becoming whole.\'
Amen!
how I relate, wise Poet
and thank you!
for introducing me to such a meaningful song
June 9th, 2023 03:35
L. B. Mek said:
\'May I find within these words
more purpose to my stroll,
having more conviction
in authentically becoming whole.\'
Amen!
how I relate, wise Poet
and thank you!
for introducing me to such a meaningful song
June 9th, 2023 03:35
In the end their will be no words
L. B. Mek said:
\'everything is rippling as it should be!\'
pebbles in our river\'s of fate
we\'re too lost, trying to paddle
our destiny\'s, when the current
of life, already has us
exactly where we should be...
(I love how real you keep your poetic voice
such a feat of transparency, sincerity, bravery!)
stay strong! oh brother of mine
\'and miles to go, before we sleep\'
a most deserved, serene sleep
June 9th, 2023 03:31
L. B. Mek said:
\'everything is rippling as it should be!\'
pebbles in our river\'s of fate
we\'re too lost, trying to paddle
our destiny\'s, when the current
of life, already has us
exactly where we should be...
(I love how real you keep your poetic voice
such a feat of transparency, sincerity, bravery!)
stay strong! oh brother of mine
\'and miles to go, before we sleep\'
a most deserved, serene sleep
June 9th, 2023 03:31
It\'s not work but life
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
so true wise Poet
nature, teaches us best
(I read and try, to heed)
June 9th, 2023 03:27
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
so true wise Poet
nature, teaches us best
(I read and try, to heed)
June 9th, 2023 03:27
Sometimes this love really hurts
L. B. Mek said:
firstly, I love your picture
that\'s such a healthy, gleaming coat
on your wise dog
that discerning eye, says it all! lol
\'In a never-ending journey
of almost got it,
as passion slips from the finger tips.\'
if rainbows are random
why do rainfalls seems so predictable?
if love\'s innate
why do heartbreak\'s seem so contrived
an inevitability of Tim-Stamped fate
..
I too, have had my fingertips, scorched
for holding-on, to those ashes of a defeated love
yet, like you
I choose
to simply hold them, high
let that wind of change
blow on them, and rekindle
my stamina
for those drumming heartbeats
one more time
every time
and on, till we get it right
or die
knowing we gave it all we had..!
June 9th, 2023 03:23
L. B. Mek said:
firstly, I love your picture
that\'s such a healthy, gleaming coat
on your wise dog
that discerning eye, says it all! lol
\'In a never-ending journey
of almost got it,
as passion slips from the finger tips.\'
if rainbows are random
why do rainfalls seems so predictable?
if love\'s innate
why do heartbreak\'s seem so contrived
an inevitability of Tim-Stamped fate
..
I too, have had my fingertips, scorched
for holding-on, to those ashes of a defeated love
yet, like you
I choose
to simply hold them, high
let that wind of change
blow on them, and rekindle
my stamina
for those drumming heartbeats
one more time
every time
and on, till we get it right
or die
knowing we gave it all we had..!
June 9th, 2023 03:23
My journey into Art of the mutt
BlessedbyGod said:
Sometimes it seems as if dogs are more human than we are,
Maybe you should write a book Dan, I\'m already a fan of your work my friend
May 23rd, 2023 21:30
BlessedbyGod said:
Sometimes it seems as if dogs are more human than we are,
Maybe you should write a book Dan, I\'m already a fan of your work my friend
May 23rd, 2023 21:30
Somebody save me!
Goldfinch60 said:
Music can be the saviour Dan. I always went to music whenever I was down.
Andy
May 21st, 2023 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Music can be the saviour Dan. I always went to music whenever I was down.
Andy
May 21st, 2023 01:19
Somebody save me!
BlessedbyGod said:
So true Dan, I too have found comfort and hope in music,
And poetry,for me writing is very therapeutic and healing
This is a great piece once again my friend
May 19th, 2023 08:13
BlessedbyGod said:
So true Dan, I too have found comfort and hope in music,
And poetry,for me writing is very therapeutic and healing
This is a great piece once again my friend
May 19th, 2023 08:13
In the end their will be no words
Goldfinch60 said:
You have come a long way Dan, just remember that and you will move forward in a fine life.
Andy
May 19th, 2023 03:01
Goldfinch60 said:
You have come a long way Dan, just remember that and you will move forward in a fine life.
Andy
May 19th, 2023 03:01
In the end their will be no words
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
We all need harmony and peace )) sometimes it’s very difficult to write isn’t it .. I find when I’m in a certain place I just don’t feel the want to be creative , sometimes
May 18th, 2023 07:47
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
We all need harmony and peace )) sometimes it’s very difficult to write isn’t it .. I find when I’m in a certain place I just don’t feel the want to be creative , sometimes
May 18th, 2023 07:47
It\'s not work but life
Goldfinch60 said:
You have come such a long way Dan and will move on into an even better place.
Andy
April 25th, 2023 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
You have come such a long way Dan and will move on into an even better place.
Andy
April 25th, 2023 01:49
Never waste a rhyme
L. B. Mek said:
so true! and relatable
dear cherished Poet
(empower each inked syllable
within a resolve of artistry\'s
soaring stratospheres
like clouds, gliding
in our now
whilst traversing
our past\'s
we ink, breathe out
and surrender it all, to a fate
we may not be able to curate
but we damn well, can cultivate
to path those aspired better\'s
we dream
in-to brilliantly manifested, existence
with each rhyme, we allow to flow
like our life\'s, crimson wine...)
April 24th, 2023 04:17
L. B. Mek said:
so true! and relatable
dear cherished Poet
(empower each inked syllable
within a resolve of artistry\'s
soaring stratospheres
like clouds, gliding
in our now
whilst traversing
our past\'s
we ink, breathe out
and surrender it all, to a fate
we may not be able to curate
but we damn well, can cultivate
to path those aspired better\'s
we dream
in-to brilliantly manifested, existence
with each rhyme, we allow to flow
like our life\'s, crimson wine...)
April 24th, 2023 04:17
Intoxication
L. B. Mek said:
\'I am the problem and solution\'
wisdom, distilled simple enough
to consume...
a great write, dear Poet
(Intoxicated
with a self, assumed lacking
in worth
from our lack of appreciation
for that
we have sculpted of ourselves
forgetting
those overcome obstacles, convinced
these next winds of change
as that doom
awaiting, in each reflection
we glimpse
in those tainted mirrors of warped
self, worth...)
\'we are, what we\'ll go-on
to become
we need only forgive, trust
and learn from our past
selves
to sculpt the future\'s
we deserve!\'
stay strong, my friend
April 24th, 2023 04:09
L. B. Mek said:
\'I am the problem and solution\'
wisdom, distilled simple enough
to consume...
a great write, dear Poet
(Intoxicated
with a self, assumed lacking
in worth
from our lack of appreciation
for that
we have sculpted of ourselves
forgetting
those overcome obstacles, convinced
these next winds of change
as that doom
awaiting, in each reflection
we glimpse
in those tainted mirrors of warped
self, worth...)
\'we are, what we\'ll go-on
to become
we need only forgive, trust
and learn from our past
selves
to sculpt the future\'s
we deserve!\'
stay strong, my friend
April 24th, 2023 04:09
Never waste a rhyme
Accidental Poet said:
One foot in front of the other dan. Tomorrow\'s another day.
April 17th, 2023 08:29
Accidental Poet said:
One foot in front of the other dan. Tomorrow\'s another day.
April 17th, 2023 08:29
Never waste a rhyme
Goldfinch60 said:
To be is often enough Dan, I am therefore I will go on as I am sure that you will.
Andy
April 17th, 2023 00:28
Goldfinch60 said:
To be is often enough Dan, I am therefore I will go on as I am sure that you will.
Andy
April 17th, 2023 00:28
Intoxication
Goddess of the Mist said:
Excellent. I get it, the wanting to escape. I\'m trying to hang tough too.
Great music and writing!
April 9th, 2023 00:54
Goddess of the Mist said:
Excellent. I get it, the wanting to escape. I\'m trying to hang tough too.
Great music and writing!
April 9th, 2023 00:54
Fresh air
BlessedbyGod said:
Love this Dan, it\'s great,
Just one little word or kind comment can inspire a great piece of art,thank you for writing this and sharing a bit of your personal life with us all, I feel blessed to read your work
April 2nd, 2023 00:24
BlessedbyGod said:
Love this Dan, it\'s great,
Just one little word or kind comment can inspire a great piece of art,thank you for writing this and sharing a bit of your personal life with us all, I feel blessed to read your work
April 2nd, 2023 00:24
Fresh air
Crystal Hope said:
Yesterday\'s words is today\'s fresh air,
Letting it go so I can breathe easier!
such peace and beauty in this piece. wonderful job!
April 1st, 2023 12:13
Crystal Hope said:
Yesterday\'s words is today\'s fresh air,
Letting it go so I can breathe easier!
such peace and beauty in this piece. wonderful job!
April 1st, 2023 12:13
Intoxication
Goldfinch60 said:
You have the strength within you Dan, you have been in worse places and have come through them, your life will always get better.
Andy
April 1st, 2023 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
You have the strength within you Dan, you have been in worse places and have come through them, your life will always get better.
Andy
April 1st, 2023 01:46
Intoxication
BlessedbyGod said:
Hang in there Dan, you can make it through this bumpy stretch and make it to smooth waters again, this storm in your life is temporary and you will survive this
March 31st, 2023 20:01
BlessedbyGod said:
Hang in there Dan, you can make it through this bumpy stretch and make it to smooth waters again, this storm in your life is temporary and you will survive this
March 31st, 2023 20:01
Intoxication
Doggerel Dave said:
Stay cool, Dan. \"This too shall pass\".
Your line \'I am the problem and solution\' shows a deep awareness plus the insight needed to resolve all.
Take care and best wishes.
March 31st, 2023 19:53
Doggerel Dave said:
Stay cool, Dan. \"This too shall pass\".
Your line \'I am the problem and solution\' shows a deep awareness plus the insight needed to resolve all.
Take care and best wishes.
March 31st, 2023 19:53
Shades of gray despite the suns rays
HangingbyaHalo said:
Wonderful write! I get trapped in the grey sometimes and have to remind myself the sun exists.
March 24th, 2023 15:29
HangingbyaHalo said:
Wonderful write! I get trapped in the grey sometimes and have to remind myself the sun exists.
March 24th, 2023 15:29
Shades of gray despite the suns rays
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(We seek solace, idolising a past
fearing future\'s, as yet unrealised
in this now, graced by a brilliant
Sunset
as reminder to that we treasure
few, witness
this grace within breath we\'ve been
afforded
few, understand
tis now, not our next that matters
most!)
March 24th, 2023 05:52
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(We seek solace, idolising a past
fearing future\'s, as yet unrealised
in this now, graced by a brilliant
Sunset
as reminder to that we treasure
few, witness
this grace within breath we\'ve been
afforded
few, understand
tis now, not our next that matters
most!)
March 24th, 2023 05:52
Random rainbows in my brain
L. B. Mek said:
\'These are random thoughts
from sheltering my eyes in the rain,
seeing many souls walk this earth
reflecting the smiles
that bring rainbows to my brain..\'
a most Perfect poet, brother
(so glad to have you back
smiling, defiant
through all that raw pain!)
forgive my tardiness
March 24th, 2023 05:46
L. B. Mek said:
\'These are random thoughts
from sheltering my eyes in the rain,
seeing many souls walk this earth
reflecting the smiles
that bring rainbows to my brain..\'
a most Perfect poet, brother
(so glad to have you back
smiling, defiant
through all that raw pain!)
forgive my tardiness
March 24th, 2023 05:46
Shades of gray despite the suns rays
BlessedbyGod said:
Great piece Dan,
Despite the beauty in the world we can\'t but feel and see only Grey at times, other times we see all the colors of the rainbow so vibrant and beautiful
Goes to show you that life can give you anything, just don\'t let the dullness consume you and overtake the beauty
March 23rd, 2023 18:46
BlessedbyGod said:
Great piece Dan,
Despite the beauty in the world we can\'t but feel and see only Grey at times, other times we see all the colors of the rainbow so vibrant and beautiful
Goes to show you that life can give you anything, just don\'t let the dullness consume you and overtake the beauty
March 23rd, 2023 18:46
Random rainbows in my brain
Goldfinch60 said:
Whenever I pass people I always say hello and smile, most reply but some do not.
Andy
March 11th, 2023 02:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Whenever I pass people I always say hello and smile, most reply but some do not.
Andy
March 11th, 2023 02:47
Random rainbows in my brain
Bella Shepard said:
First of all, an adorable video of an adorable little girl, that made me smile from ear to ear. It is so important to acknowledge each other, in even the simplist ways. When I pass someone randomly, and they say good morning, or how are you, I respond in like kind, smiling just to think that they noticed me and wished me well even not knowing who I am. This is such a thoughtful write dear poet, you made my day.
March 10th, 2023 11:56
Bella Shepard said:
First of all, an adorable video of an adorable little girl, that made me smile from ear to ear. It is so important to acknowledge each other, in even the simplist ways. When I pass someone randomly, and they say good morning, or how are you, I respond in like kind, smiling just to think that they noticed me and wished me well even not knowing who I am. This is such a thoughtful write dear poet, you made my day.
March 10th, 2023 11:56
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