Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan



Thunder
Neville said:

now that\'s more like it... a little bit of optimism goes a long long way....

Neville

July 25th, 2019 06:02

Thunder
dusk arising said:

Do you have room in your life for the imperfect? Can you tolerate the troubled minds of others? Are you able to make judgements which enable you to say - nothing. Will you acknowledge the pain of damaged souls beginning their path of self realisation.
To all these i know you answer yes which makes you a compassionate and understanding human being. Walk the walk.

July 25th, 2019 02:24

Thunder
Laura🌻 said:

Dan,

The positivity interwoven throughout your poem is infectious! I’m very happy for you! With this new attitude, the world is your oyster!

~Laura~

July 25th, 2019 01:56

The \"who\" I shall retain
Christina8 said:

Congratulations on your new life of moving forward. Forgiving is not always easy to do but a good route to your path of healing. Much respect, Dan. Christina

July 24th, 2019 23:13

The \"who\" I shall retain
Neville said:

You are not there yet, are you.. but you have moved forward, and that is the main thing.........actually, to be honest, I dont believe there is a there yet.. life and living and all that it consists of is a continuum .. a series of choices and risks, decisions and opportunities.... there are several excellent lines within this poem.. very meaningful ones...... Neville

July 24th, 2019 09:01

The \"who\" I shall retain
Goldfinch60 said:

May that clean shelf become full of words that carry you into a wonderful future.

July 24th, 2019 05:03

The \"who\" I shall retain
dusk arising said:

Forgiving and moving forward is a vision easier seen than carried through. Take your time.

July 24th, 2019 02:36

To much positive, kiss my negative
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful write Dan, your Universe is expanding in joy and wonder.

July 24th, 2019 00:35

To much positive, kiss my negative
dusk arising said:

Spider Dan, Spider Dan
does whatever a spider can
on the web writes out verses
whilst skateboard huskies
he traverses
watch out... here comes our Spider Dan

(I saw your BatDan reference and thought.... that skateboard will never pass for a Batmobile)

July 23rd, 2019 02:48

I could never of made it alone
Goldfinch60 said:

Your path has been rocky but now all is clear and your life can now move on into calmness and love.

July 23rd, 2019 00:58

I could never of made it alone
Christina8 said:

This is wonderful Dan! Congratulations on finding whatever it is that makes you happy!!

July 22nd, 2019 17:17

I could never of made it alone
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Worth the wait and never too late
Beautiful Dan
This is Beautiful
The most powerful force in the universe... right there
BRAVO

July 22nd, 2019 13:23

I could never of made it alone
Suresh said:

The road ahead, now free of potholes, now blooming with wonderful anticipations.

July 22nd, 2019 09:56

I could never of made it alone
Neville said:

this is what we want to hear, those of us out here who love ya that is.......

Neville

July 22nd, 2019 08:17

I could never of made it alone
dusk arising said:

And enjoyment Dan, don\'t miss out on enjoyment. Fun and laughter. Those prescious moments when love shines out of others eyes.

July 22nd, 2019 07:53

I\'m a fan of you all
Michael Edwards said:

Some great lines in this - wish I\'d thought of them - from the soul poetry - keep writing.

July 21st, 2019 13:40

I\'m a fan of you all
dusk arising said:

You cover a lot of ground today in these words. It\'s now plain to see you know you have everything you need to overcome the demons which nip your ankles and disturb your thought.

Amazing words you coin today Dan \"Letting the music from our hearts, walk across water\"

July 21st, 2019 10:08

I\'m a fan of you all
sylviasearcher said:

You have a wonderful soul.

Your strength and hopefulness is an inspiration 🌈

July 21st, 2019 05:21

I\'m a fan of you all
Nafis Light said:

Well said!

July 21st, 2019 05:01

I no longer deny
Goldfinch60 said:

We all have troubles within us and perhaps we impose them on others in some mistaken way but the way to get over that is to smile and talk to people, it is surprising how good the feeling is when they smile of chat back to you.

\"Smile - it confuses people!\"

July 21st, 2019 01:07

I no longer deny
Michael Edwards said:

There\'s a star in the sky in this great write - may it ever shine on you Dan

July 21st, 2019 01:00

I no longer deny
kevin browne said:

People who are comparable to think that for some reason they good fabulous which may make them feel fabulous inside. However, I go against the grain that materialistic addicts have diferent perceptions to what true feelings are. It\'s very rare when some peoople can actually see the \'ignorance of bliss\' disappearing from their lives. It needs attention to detail for anyone to transcend into a higher life, love and less egoistic maniacs who run the planet. Stay clear in your head, Dan that show yourself what your made of and keeping the diversity of life remains sists firmly upon your own honesty.

July 20th, 2019 16:27

I no longer deny
dusk arising said:

Yes i agree, we do place our own judgements of ourselves into the eyes of others as we perceive them to be. Is it from experience or rejection of their perceived rejection.
Complex eh? Yes, so if we can stop doing it.... then we can just get on with not caring what ppl think.... simples (oh i wish).
Look happy and ppl won\'t worry.

July 20th, 2019 08:10

I no longer deny
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Great write Dan

July 20th, 2019 07:46

Never lose faith in yourself
kevin browne said:

I\'m beginning to run out of words to big you up, but it\'s worth the effort to make such comments when we come across your poetry. It\'s not just a poem. there are thousands of places to find your own heart. It appears very clearly here that at last you have landed. Top bloke with an extraordinary glint across his love, poetry, his life and his willingness to share the moments in his life to others to learn from. You\'re doing great, my freind....!!!!

July 19th, 2019 19:52

Never lose faith in yourself
Suresh said:

Life presents us with lot of wringers, and as we traverse, most of us cope with them. Some never. You have come a long way with a rich future ahead.
While I disagree with fellow poets, if my actions were a cause of hurt to others then regrets are in order, to heal and move on.
May your future be all that is important.

July 19th, 2019 18:30

Never lose faith in yourself
Michael Edwards said:

Never, never - no regrets.

July 19th, 2019 04:05

Never lose faith in yourself
Goldfinch60 said:

That path of no regret will always be ahead of you Dan.

July 19th, 2019 01:37

I\'m back from dusk till dawn
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good positive write Dan.

July 18th, 2019 15:37

I\'m back from dusk till dawn
kevin browne said:

Both thumbs up for this one !!

July 18th, 2019 14:20



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