Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
It doesn\'t matter any more
Suresh said:
Ditto to what d.a. said....
now the time has come to take your poetic self and explore the nature.
July 27th, 2019 09:39
Suresh said:
Ditto to what d.a. said....
now the time has come to take your poetic self and explore the nature.
July 27th, 2019 09:39
It doesn\'t matter any more
dusk arising said:
Now when it comes to beautiful words i think you\'ve created something special both for us to read today and in your family\'s life forever.
This is by far the most moving piece i have seen from you Dan.
\"My children understand, they have the only key
As they showed the one, I had deep within me\"
Those two lines are a thing of such beauty.
July 27th, 2019 06:31
dusk arising said:
Now when it comes to beautiful words i think you\'ve created something special both for us to read today and in your family\'s life forever.
This is by far the most moving piece i have seen from you Dan.
\"My children understand, they have the only key
As they showed the one, I had deep within me\"
Those two lines are a thing of such beauty.
July 27th, 2019 06:31
Fear of love & criticism
Goldfinch60 said:
In this life we must try to do the best we can, if we keep trying we will go forward to the light that is always there for us.
July 26th, 2019 14:15
Goldfinch60 said:
In this life we must try to do the best we can, if we keep trying we will go forward to the light that is always there for us.
July 26th, 2019 14:15
Fear of love & criticism
Suresh said:
It\'s all perception!!!!!!.....
..... you be the best you know how, and try to be the best you can be.
Thnx for letting us share
July 26th, 2019 12:03
Suresh said:
It\'s all perception!!!!!!.....
..... you be the best you know how, and try to be the best you can be.
Thnx for letting us share
July 26th, 2019 12:03
Thunder
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes be all that you can because you are enough my friend. I loved the flow of this meaningful message that being ourselves we face being responsible for our own life and for no other........ thank you for these thoughts Dan........
July 25th, 2019 13:06
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes be all that you can because you are enough my friend. I loved the flow of this meaningful message that being ourselves we face being responsible for our own life and for no other........ thank you for these thoughts Dan........
July 25th, 2019 13:06
Thunder
Neville said:
now that\'s more like it... a little bit of optimism goes a long long way....
Neville
July 25th, 2019 06:02
Neville said:
now that\'s more like it... a little bit of optimism goes a long long way....
Neville
July 25th, 2019 06:02
Thunder
dusk arising said:
Do you have room in your life for the imperfect? Can you tolerate the troubled minds of others? Are you able to make judgements which enable you to say - nothing. Will you acknowledge the pain of damaged souls beginning their path of self realisation.
To all these i know you answer yes which makes you a compassionate and understanding human being. Walk the walk.
July 25th, 2019 02:24
dusk arising said:
Do you have room in your life for the imperfect? Can you tolerate the troubled minds of others? Are you able to make judgements which enable you to say - nothing. Will you acknowledge the pain of damaged souls beginning their path of self realisation.
To all these i know you answer yes which makes you a compassionate and understanding human being. Walk the walk.
July 25th, 2019 02:24
Thunder
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
The positivity interwoven throughout your poem is infectious! I’m very happy for you! With this new attitude, the world is your oyster!
~Laura~
July 25th, 2019 01:56
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
The positivity interwoven throughout your poem is infectious! I’m very happy for you! With this new attitude, the world is your oyster!
~Laura~
July 25th, 2019 01:56
The \"who\" I shall retain
Christina8 said:
Congratulations on your new life of moving forward. Forgiving is not always easy to do but a good route to your path of healing. Much respect, Dan. Christina
July 24th, 2019 23:13
Christina8 said:
Congratulations on your new life of moving forward. Forgiving is not always easy to do but a good route to your path of healing. Much respect, Dan. Christina
July 24th, 2019 23:13
The \"who\" I shall retain
Neville said:
You are not there yet, are you.. but you have moved forward, and that is the main thing.........actually, to be honest, I dont believe there is a there yet.. life and living and all that it consists of is a continuum .. a series of choices and risks, decisions and opportunities.... there are several excellent lines within this poem.. very meaningful ones...... Neville
July 24th, 2019 09:01
Neville said:
You are not there yet, are you.. but you have moved forward, and that is the main thing.........actually, to be honest, I dont believe there is a there yet.. life and living and all that it consists of is a continuum .. a series of choices and risks, decisions and opportunities.... there are several excellent lines within this poem.. very meaningful ones...... Neville
July 24th, 2019 09:01
The \"who\" I shall retain
Goldfinch60 said:
May that clean shelf become full of words that carry you into a wonderful future.
July 24th, 2019 05:03
Goldfinch60 said:
May that clean shelf become full of words that carry you into a wonderful future.
July 24th, 2019 05:03
The \"who\" I shall retain
dusk arising said:
Forgiving and moving forward is a vision easier seen than carried through. Take your time.
July 24th, 2019 02:36
dusk arising said:
Forgiving and moving forward is a vision easier seen than carried through. Take your time.
July 24th, 2019 02:36
To much positive, kiss my negative
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Dan, your Universe is expanding in joy and wonder.
July 24th, 2019 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Dan, your Universe is expanding in joy and wonder.
July 24th, 2019 00:35
To much positive, kiss my negative
dusk arising said:
Spider Dan, Spider Dan
does whatever a spider can
on the web writes out verses
whilst skateboard huskies
he traverses
watch out... here comes our Spider Dan
(I saw your BatDan reference and thought.... that skateboard will never pass for a Batmobile)
July 23rd, 2019 02:48
dusk arising said:
Spider Dan, Spider Dan
does whatever a spider can
on the web writes out verses
whilst skateboard huskies
he traverses
watch out... here comes our Spider Dan
(I saw your BatDan reference and thought.... that skateboard will never pass for a Batmobile)
July 23rd, 2019 02:48
I could never of made it alone
Goldfinch60 said:
Your path has been rocky but now all is clear and your life can now move on into calmness and love.
July 23rd, 2019 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Your path has been rocky but now all is clear and your life can now move on into calmness and love.
July 23rd, 2019 00:58
I could never of made it alone
Christina8 said:
This is wonderful Dan! Congratulations on finding whatever it is that makes you happy!!
July 22nd, 2019 17:17
Christina8 said:
This is wonderful Dan! Congratulations on finding whatever it is that makes you happy!!
July 22nd, 2019 17:17
I could never of made it alone
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Worth the wait and never too late
Beautiful Dan
This is Beautiful
The most powerful force in the universe... right there
BRAVO
July 22nd, 2019 13:23
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Worth the wait and never too late
Beautiful Dan
This is Beautiful
The most powerful force in the universe... right there
BRAVO
July 22nd, 2019 13:23
I could never of made it alone
Suresh said:
The road ahead, now free of potholes, now blooming with wonderful anticipations.
July 22nd, 2019 09:56
Suresh said:
The road ahead, now free of potholes, now blooming with wonderful anticipations.
July 22nd, 2019 09:56
I could never of made it alone
Neville said:
this is what we want to hear, those of us out here who love ya that is.......
Neville
July 22nd, 2019 08:17
Neville said:
this is what we want to hear, those of us out here who love ya that is.......
Neville
July 22nd, 2019 08:17
I could never of made it alone
dusk arising said:
And enjoyment Dan, don\'t miss out on enjoyment. Fun and laughter. Those prescious moments when love shines out of others eyes.
July 22nd, 2019 07:53
dusk arising said:
And enjoyment Dan, don\'t miss out on enjoyment. Fun and laughter. Those prescious moments when love shines out of others eyes.
July 22nd, 2019 07:53
I\'m a fan of you all
Michael Edwards said:
Some great lines in this - wish I\'d thought of them - from the soul poetry - keep writing.
July 21st, 2019 13:40
Michael Edwards said:
Some great lines in this - wish I\'d thought of them - from the soul poetry - keep writing.
July 21st, 2019 13:40
I\'m a fan of you all
dusk arising said:
You cover a lot of ground today in these words. It\'s now plain to see you know you have everything you need to overcome the demons which nip your ankles and disturb your thought.
Amazing words you coin today Dan \"Letting the music from our hearts, walk across water\"
July 21st, 2019 10:08
dusk arising said:
You cover a lot of ground today in these words. It\'s now plain to see you know you have everything you need to overcome the demons which nip your ankles and disturb your thought.
Amazing words you coin today Dan \"Letting the music from our hearts, walk across water\"
July 21st, 2019 10:08
I\'m a fan of you all
sylviasearcher said:
You have a wonderful soul.
Your strength and hopefulness is an inspiration 🌈
July 21st, 2019 05:21
sylviasearcher said:
You have a wonderful soul.
Your strength and hopefulness is an inspiration 🌈
July 21st, 2019 05:21
I no longer deny
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have troubles within us and perhaps we impose them on others in some mistaken way but the way to get over that is to smile and talk to people, it is surprising how good the feeling is when they smile of chat back to you.
\"Smile - it confuses people!\"
July 21st, 2019 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have troubles within us and perhaps we impose them on others in some mistaken way but the way to get over that is to smile and talk to people, it is surprising how good the feeling is when they smile of chat back to you.
\"Smile - it confuses people!\"
July 21st, 2019 01:07
I no longer deny
Michael Edwards said:
There\'s a star in the sky in this great write - may it ever shine on you Dan
July 21st, 2019 01:00
Michael Edwards said:
There\'s a star in the sky in this great write - may it ever shine on you Dan
July 21st, 2019 01:00
I no longer deny
kevin browne said:
People who are comparable to think that for some reason they good fabulous which may make them feel fabulous inside. However, I go against the grain that materialistic addicts have diferent perceptions to what true feelings are. It\'s very rare when some peoople can actually see the \'ignorance of bliss\' disappearing from their lives. It needs attention to detail for anyone to transcend into a higher life, love and less egoistic maniacs who run the planet. Stay clear in your head, Dan that show yourself what your made of and keeping the diversity of life remains sists firmly upon your own honesty.
July 20th, 2019 16:27
kevin browne said:
People who are comparable to think that for some reason they good fabulous which may make them feel fabulous inside. However, I go against the grain that materialistic addicts have diferent perceptions to what true feelings are. It\'s very rare when some peoople can actually see the \'ignorance of bliss\' disappearing from their lives. It needs attention to detail for anyone to transcend into a higher life, love and less egoistic maniacs who run the planet. Stay clear in your head, Dan that show yourself what your made of and keeping the diversity of life remains sists firmly upon your own honesty.
July 20th, 2019 16:27
I no longer deny
dusk arising said:
Yes i agree, we do place our own judgements of ourselves into the eyes of others as we perceive them to be. Is it from experience or rejection of their perceived rejection.
Complex eh? Yes, so if we can stop doing it.... then we can just get on with not caring what ppl think.... simples (oh i wish).
Look happy and ppl won\'t worry.
July 20th, 2019 08:10
dusk arising said:
Yes i agree, we do place our own judgements of ourselves into the eyes of others as we perceive them to be. Is it from experience or rejection of their perceived rejection.
Complex eh? Yes, so if we can stop doing it.... then we can just get on with not caring what ppl think.... simples (oh i wish).
Look happy and ppl won\'t worry.
July 20th, 2019 08:10
Never lose faith in yourself
kevin browne said:
I\'m beginning to run out of words to big you up, but it\'s worth the effort to make such comments when we come across your poetry. It\'s not just a poem. there are thousands of places to find your own heart. It appears very clearly here that at last you have landed. Top bloke with an extraordinary glint across his love, poetry, his life and his willingness to share the moments in his life to others to learn from. You\'re doing great, my freind....!!!!
July 19th, 2019 19:52
kevin browne said:
I\'m beginning to run out of words to big you up, but it\'s worth the effort to make such comments when we come across your poetry. It\'s not just a poem. there are thousands of places to find your own heart. It appears very clearly here that at last you have landed. Top bloke with an extraordinary glint across his love, poetry, his life and his willingness to share the moments in his life to others to learn from. You\'re doing great, my freind....!!!!
July 19th, 2019 19:52
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