Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan



Blessed or cursed in giving all my worth
Michael Edwards said:

Keep travelling Dan - you\'re on the right path and the future is yours.

June 20th, 2019 12:53

Blessed or cursed in giving all my worth
Suresh said:

You have chosen your path, and the journey is yours to complete.
Yes, there will be hurdles in the way and moments will test your resolve, and you will waver a little but I am certain you can weather them all for your will shall always be strong

June 20th, 2019 12:20

Blessed or cursed in giving all my worth
Neville said:

without wanting to sound too twee.. a little bird hit the nail on the head with his comments here today.. keep moving up that wave into joy and love..... I know it is hard to be positive all the while.. in fact, it is probably impossible because stuff always comes along... but it also passes.... remember that... it also passes...... N

June 20th, 2019 09:19

Blessed or cursed in giving all my worth
dusk arising said:

Positivity wins every time - well done.

June 20th, 2019 08:04

Blessed or cursed in giving all my worth
orchidee said:

Meanwhile - don\'t listen to my singing. if you\'re on a roller-coaster of emotion, the only way will be down then! heehee.

June 20th, 2019 03:02

Blessed or cursed in giving all my worth
orchidee said:

Good write Dan. As I say though, I don\'t build my life ONLY on feelings. But what then? On my faith, I would say.

June 20th, 2019 03:01

Blessed or cursed in giving all my worth
Goldfinch60 said:

Very positive write Dan keep moving up that wave into joy and love.

June 20th, 2019 02:39

In shock
Goldfinch60 said:

You have come a long way Dan and with that experience you now have the strength to overcome that which may be missing.
Go forward in your life knowing that we are there for you.
Andy.

June 20th, 2019 00:27

In shock
dusk arising said:

Dan, do the important stuff at times like this.

June 19th, 2019 14:05

In shock
Michael Edwards said:

Yup - we\'re all rootin\' for you. Just keep writing - and don\'t worry if you don\'t comment as much - now go sharpen that pencil.

June 19th, 2019 12:50

In shock
Neville said:

I certainly hope things work out for you Poetic Dan..

keep ya chin up sir, there are those out here who are rooting for you... N

June 19th, 2019 06:39

Again & Again
Suresh said:

It is the currency for survival,

June 18th, 2019 11:24

Again & Again
Goldfinch60 said:

So true Dan, it is such a shame that money means more than life in many instances.

June 18th, 2019 00:07

Again & Again
dusk arising said:

Quote:-
Work is love made visible. And if you cannot work with love but only with distaste, it is better that you should leave your work and sit at the gate of the temple and take alms of those who work with joy.

Khalil Gibran

But we all have our \'off\' days


June 17th, 2019 05:46

Again & Again
orchidee said:

I thought that thingy at the top was an eye test!
Dunno about me soul, but I lost me way in woods a few times! lol.

June 17th, 2019 05:03

Again & Again
Neville said:

a big little write & oh what a super message you have incorporated.... N

June 17th, 2019 04:38

Again & Again
Michael Edwards said:

Money rules I\'m afraid but that\'s life. Great work PD

June 17th, 2019 03:33

Crash & burn
dusk arising said:

Life brings unexpected challenges, disappointments, and mistakes. Without those we would truly be exceptional, but we are not. None of us are.
And so you are tested, and you may falter. But you will regain. Take from this day its wisdom. Hold it within you and let its strength be yours.
Stand with those who have faith in you. Peace and goodwill Dan.

\"out beyond the ideas of wrongdoing and rightdoing
there is a field
I\'ll meet you there\"

Rumi

June 16th, 2019 18:26

Persistence is a fun key
kevin browne said:

I love these animal related and the little monkey being the key ingredients. And, never give in whatever you do.

June 14th, 2019 20:22

Persistence is a fun key
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Opposable thumbs my friend opposable thumbs
Great write

June 14th, 2019 12:50

Persistence is a fun key
dusk arising said:

The crocodile snapped at Dan\'s feet
But crafty Dan was way out of reach
He was on a plain so much higher
And soon that croc tired
He was knackered - just a figure of speech

But that croc would not be outdone
And proceeded to snap at Dans bum
Dans wasn\'t down hearted
And swiftly he farted
That crocodile didn\'t half run.

But later with a twinkle in his eye
Croc decided to have one more try
Not pro-cras-tin-a-ting
Clever Dan, he was waiting
And dispatched poor old croc to the sky

June 14th, 2019 10:41

Persistence is a fun key
Suresh said:

No they sure can\'t swing, but can leap pretty high


June 14th, 2019 10:06

I\'ve seen
kevin browne said:

Did you shower in sea salts and vinegar? Now you\'re almost a fish!!!!

June 13th, 2019 13:12

I\'ve seen
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

SINGING IN THE RAIN
SHOWS ME A PERSON
WHO SHOWS NO PAIN
AND WHEN THEY ARE DRY
THEY SEE A BLACK SKY
AND SING IN THE RAIN ~ AGAIN

Thanks for carin\' an\' sharin\' DAN ~ However hard the times I\'ve been through ~ IN LOVE & LIFE ~ I have always found others whose state is worse than mine. So I learn to count my Blessings ~ AMEN

Please check Our POEM ~ Morning has BROKEN
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡 🧡

June 13th, 2019 10:49

I\'ve seen
dusk arising said:

For mid June theres too many flippin showers.. and its too cold!

Are there many bathers down on the beaches?

So, are you a bit of a Tom Jones in the shower Dan? It\'s not unusual!

June 13th, 2019 06:59

I\'ve seen
orchidee said:

Good write Dan. That\'s OK then, as long as it wasn\'t me singing! lol.

June 13th, 2019 02:46

I\'ve seen
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful Dan, those showers can be so cleansing and so meaningful.

June 13th, 2019 02:27

I am....
Suresh said:

Welcome to the club of discovery

June 12th, 2019 11:11

I am....
Fay Slimm. said:

A fine place to be is to have found our uniqueness - - a big step forward is to know our own Self. A beautiful verse Dan and thank you .

June 12th, 2019 02:40

I am....
Neville said:

Good to hear... how wonderful is that...

June 12th, 2019 02:37



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