Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
I dedicate these thoughts
dusk arising said:
I echo all the comments from others here today Dan. Ahead are some trying times, for a young baby can be such a demanding and unsettling presence in the home. Please make sure you take time to be yourself and should frustrating times arise for you, remind yourself of what you have written today... they are fine words of fine intent from a soul who worships life and his part in it.
I\'m not a star trek fan but spock used to have a marvellous phrase which i\'d say to you.. \"Live long and prosper!\"
July 3rd, 2019 05:11
dusk arising said:
I echo all the comments from others here today Dan. Ahead are some trying times, for a young baby can be such a demanding and unsettling presence in the home. Please make sure you take time to be yourself and should frustrating times arise for you, remind yourself of what you have written today... they are fine words of fine intent from a soul who worships life and his part in it.
I\'m not a star trek fan but spock used to have a marvellous phrase which i\'d say to you.. \"Live long and prosper!\"
July 3rd, 2019 05:11
What could I learn
orchidee said:
Ohh I\'m a snowflake! lol. Breast-feeding class? I would swoon upon arrival. heehee. \'Man up there, Orchi; pull your socks up!\' lol.
July 3rd, 2019 05:01
orchidee said:
Ohh I\'m a snowflake! lol. Breast-feeding class? I would swoon upon arrival. heehee. \'Man up there, Orchi; pull your socks up!\' lol.
July 3rd, 2019 05:01
I dedicate these thoughts
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful words Dan. The chords that you are now playing are all in the major keys, no minor ones anymore. Your child will grow into a wonderful person as you will be able to guide that child in a loving way that is full of light. The darkness that was in your life has now been consigned to history.
July 3rd, 2019 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful words Dan. The chords that you are now playing are all in the major keys, no minor ones anymore. Your child will grow into a wonderful person as you will be able to guide that child in a loving way that is full of light. The darkness that was in your life has now been consigned to history.
July 3rd, 2019 00:39
I dedicate these thoughts
Christina8 said:
What an awesome poem and picture Dan! A belated Congratulations are in order----children are such a blessing. So nice to see you at peace!
July 2nd, 2019 21:38
Christina8 said:
What an awesome poem and picture Dan! A belated Congratulations are in order----children are such a blessing. So nice to see you at peace!
July 2nd, 2019 21:38
I dedicate these thoughts
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderful read - your words echo to the feeling of growth Dan - - keep going that way and peace you will win.
July 2nd, 2019 13:50
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderful read - your words echo to the feeling of growth Dan - - keep going that way and peace you will win.
July 2nd, 2019 13:50
I dedicate these thoughts
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
This exceptional poem has shown me how much you’ve learned and have grown so wise! I am ecstatic for you! You’re becoming such a great dad! Your children are blessed to have you as their dad and you are blessed to be given this opportunity to show them how proud you are to be their dad!
You do know what chords you’re playing and you’re playing them well! To be given such a gift to grow ‘with another soul from day one’ is a blessing and an opportunity that you will not squander! You have learned how precious life is and I’m happy you’ve been given this new gift of a life that you’ll love and nourish with all your might!
~Laura~🌻
July 2nd, 2019 13:39
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
This exceptional poem has shown me how much you’ve learned and have grown so wise! I am ecstatic for you! You’re becoming such a great dad! Your children are blessed to have you as their dad and you are blessed to be given this opportunity to show them how proud you are to be their dad!
You do know what chords you’re playing and you’re playing them well! To be given such a gift to grow ‘with another soul from day one’ is a blessing and an opportunity that you will not squander! You have learned how precious life is and I’m happy you’ve been given this new gift of a life that you’ll love and nourish with all your might!
~Laura~🌻
July 2nd, 2019 13:39
No harm
Fay Slimm. said:
Good to know you talk to wasps and bees Dan like me.............. great read.
July 2nd, 2019 04:33
Fay Slimm. said:
Good to know you talk to wasps and bees Dan like me.............. great read.
July 2nd, 2019 04:33
No harm
Suresh said:
It\'s out of fear that we swat at them, and not because of cause.
Nice write and a distancing from the past.
July 2nd, 2019 04:27
Suresh said:
It\'s out of fear that we swat at them, and not because of cause.
Nice write and a distancing from the past.
July 2nd, 2019 04:27
Should & Could
Christina8 said:
Great write Dan, I loved it but I must say I really liked the Native American quote...probably because I am part Native and it struck a chord.\"what one fears, one destroys\"---so powerful and inspiring!!! Thank you for sharing dan!!!----Christina
July 1st, 2019 22:43
Christina8 said:
Great write Dan, I loved it but I must say I really liked the Native American quote...probably because I am part Native and it struck a chord.\"what one fears, one destroys\"---so powerful and inspiring!!! Thank you for sharing dan!!!----Christina
July 1st, 2019 22:43
No harm
Christina8 said:
I like your adorable write, though bees and wasps are no friend o\'mine! LOL
Much respect--Christina
July 1st, 2019 22:20
Christina8 said:
I like your adorable write, though bees and wasps are no friend o\'mine! LOL
Much respect--Christina
July 1st, 2019 22:20
No harm
poetboy123 said:
I\'m not partial to wasps, though more so to bees. Great to see your work again my friend!
July 1st, 2019 20:51
poetboy123 said:
I\'m not partial to wasps, though more so to bees. Great to see your work again my friend!
July 1st, 2019 20:51
No harm
Michael Edwards said:
Both are wonderful insects - lovely touching write.
July 1st, 2019 03:40
Michael Edwards said:
Both are wonderful insects - lovely touching write.
July 1st, 2019 03:40
Should & Could
Suresh said:
In the annals of creation, I am classified as \"human\", whether justified or not.
Meanwhile a poem your children will one day recall
June 30th, 2019 13:40
Suresh said:
In the annals of creation, I am classified as \"human\", whether justified or not.
Meanwhile a poem your children will one day recall
June 30th, 2019 13:40
Should & Could
Michael Edwards said:
Ah but it can be so
Glad I never entered the human race - never could run.
Great write Dan
June 30th, 2019 09:08
Michael Edwards said:
Ah but it can be so
Glad I never entered the human race - never could run.
Great write Dan
June 30th, 2019 09:08
Should & Could
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Very true dan
Oh but it were so
Great write today
June 30th, 2019 06:06
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Very true dan
Oh but it were so
Great write today
June 30th, 2019 06:06
Band of men
Goldfinch60 said:
May that wisdom never fail Dan, it has certainly brought you out of the darkness and you can now see the light that abounds in us all.
June 30th, 2019 00:23
Goldfinch60 said:
May that wisdom never fail Dan, it has certainly brought you out of the darkness and you can now see the light that abounds in us all.
June 30th, 2019 00:23
Band of men
kevin browne said:
Just clocked into MPS and there you are at the top of the list. Wisdom is a maturity of life. your maturity is raising the roof off of a philosophical part of you.
June 29th, 2019 09:29
kevin browne said:
Just clocked into MPS and there you are at the top of the list. Wisdom is a maturity of life. your maturity is raising the roof off of a philosophical part of you.
June 29th, 2019 09:29
Tomorrow, today and always
Suresh said:
You are well on your way, no reason to look back, for future is full of promise and so much brighter
June 28th, 2019 12:10
Suresh said:
You are well on your way, no reason to look back, for future is full of promise and so much brighter
June 28th, 2019 12:10
Tomorrow, today and always
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - what with your excellent turns of phrase and the exciting video I have to save this to my faves dear Dan - a thrilling read.......... and just love those dogs among poppies.
June 28th, 2019 03:10
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - what with your excellent turns of phrase and the exciting video I have to save this to my faves dear Dan - a thrilling read.......... and just love those dogs among poppies.
June 28th, 2019 03:10
Tomorrow, today and always
Neville said:
This has a great vibe and I really like not only the message, but the way you have constructed the poem itself and pinned it to the page......... Nice one Dan.......... Neville
June 28th, 2019 03:02
Neville said:
This has a great vibe and I really like not only the message, but the way you have constructed the poem itself and pinned it to the page......... Nice one Dan.......... Neville
June 28th, 2019 03:02
Tomorrow, today and always
orchidee said:
Good write Dan. You got those teeth still?!
June 28th, 2019 02:30
orchidee said:
Good write Dan. You got those teeth still?!
June 28th, 2019 02:30
Tomorrow, today and always
Goldfinch60 said:
Keep going your way Dan, your life will be wonderful.
June 28th, 2019 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Keep going your way Dan, your life will be wonderful.
June 28th, 2019 01:30
Times of trouble
Goldfinch60 said:
That journey to nowhere can be changed, just pick another path, you have managed to do this so keep along that new path.
June 28th, 2019 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
That journey to nowhere can be changed, just pick another path, you have managed to do this so keep along that new path.
June 28th, 2019 00:57
Yoda ish
orchidee said:
Erm, it\'s a pity the only Yoda I seem to know is the one in Star Wars! heehee. Yes - are you getting there?
June 26th, 2019 04:17
orchidee said:
Erm, it\'s a pity the only Yoda I seem to know is the one in Star Wars! heehee. Yes - are you getting there?
June 26th, 2019 04:17
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