Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Home stretch
orchidee said:
In a light vein - but, what, if, maybe, perhaps, might do, then again I might not.......
Doh, get a grip, Ochi! You\'ll be finished or run out of time before you\'ve even started, at this rate - procrastinating! lol.
July 8th, 2019 02:05
orchidee said:
In a light vein - but, what, if, maybe, perhaps, might do, then again I might not.......
Doh, get a grip, Ochi! You\'ll be finished or run out of time before you\'ve even started, at this rate - procrastinating! lol.
July 8th, 2019 02:05
Home stretch
Suresh said:
No more \"but, if and what\" you are at a place where you can handle whatever life presents.
July 7th, 2019 10:05
Suresh said:
No more \"but, if and what\" you are at a place where you can handle whatever life presents.
July 7th, 2019 10:05
Home stretch
sylviasearcher said:
This brought a pang to my chest.
Your strength is such an inspiration 💜
July 7th, 2019 04:57
sylviasearcher said:
This brought a pang to my chest.
Your strength is such an inspiration 💜
July 7th, 2019 04:57
Vibration adjustment
Goldfinch60 said:
Your self examination is bringing you into a glorious life, once that examination is completed life will be glorious.
July 7th, 2019 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Your self examination is bringing you into a glorious life, once that examination is completed life will be glorious.
July 7th, 2019 00:27
Vibration adjustment
Suresh said:
Stay strong, and don\'t loose a single moment to unworthiness.
A very poetic examination
July 6th, 2019 11:58
Suresh said:
Stay strong, and don\'t loose a single moment to unworthiness.
A very poetic examination
July 6th, 2019 11:58
Vibration adjustment
dusk arising said:
All around you are people with similar wounds. You won\'t know them for they do not wear their heart on their sleeve. I expect many look at you and do not see who you are either.
The world isn\'t ready for us to see each other as gods yet. So what shall we see each other as when a look of disdain meets us along the high street?
July 6th, 2019 11:00
dusk arising said:
All around you are people with similar wounds. You won\'t know them for they do not wear their heart on their sleeve. I expect many look at you and do not see who you are either.
The world isn\'t ready for us to see each other as gods yet. So what shall we see each other as when a look of disdain meets us along the high street?
July 6th, 2019 11:00
Vibration adjustment
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
The wonderful thing about you is that upon an honest self examination, you hone up to the ‘hurt, the pain, the love and joy’ , and realize they’re all lessons to learn from! You seem to adjust those vibrations very well! Kudos! 👏🏻
Great message and video!
Have a great weekend!
~Laura~🌻
July 6th, 2019 05:38
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
The wonderful thing about you is that upon an honest self examination, you hone up to the ‘hurt, the pain, the love and joy’ , and realize they’re all lessons to learn from! You seem to adjust those vibrations very well! Kudos! 👏🏻
Great message and video!
Have a great weekend!
~Laura~🌻
July 6th, 2019 05:38
Rant or opinion it\'s my dominion
Suresh said:
As nothing can ever be destroyed, and the fight between good and bad is eternal, with our strength and our need to protect our loved ones, we can forever keep our demons at bay.
Your recognition and your words are your strength, and others will come around too.
July 4th, 2019 10:25
Suresh said:
As nothing can ever be destroyed, and the fight between good and bad is eternal, with our strength and our need to protect our loved ones, we can forever keep our demons at bay.
Your recognition and your words are your strength, and others will come around too.
July 4th, 2019 10:25
Rant or opinion it\'s my dominion
dusk arising said:
Loved that video Dan.
Whatever you chose or deny as a palliative or drug you are doing it in full recognition of what it is, what it\'s for, and why you are doing it. You are a free man and aware of what can happen if it ever became an addiction. Frightening isn\'t it.
July 4th, 2019 09:47
dusk arising said:
Loved that video Dan.
Whatever you chose or deny as a palliative or drug you are doing it in full recognition of what it is, what it\'s for, and why you are doing it. You are a free man and aware of what can happen if it ever became an addiction. Frightening isn\'t it.
July 4th, 2019 09:47
Rant or opinion it\'s my dominion
Michael Edwards said:
In my eyes you are a positive man and this write spells it out.
July 4th, 2019 04:20
Michael Edwards said:
In my eyes you are a positive man and this write spells it out.
July 4th, 2019 04:20
Rant or opinion it\'s my dominion
Goldfinch60 said:
May those inspirational lessons be forever with you - and for all of us. Life is good and you have so much for which to look forward in the very near future - be there as your new self and show your new offspring the light that you have found.
July 4th, 2019 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
May those inspirational lessons be forever with you - and for all of us. Life is good and you have so much for which to look forward in the very near future - be there as your new self and show your new offspring the light that you have found.
July 4th, 2019 01:53
What could I learn
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Dan, babies are so wonderful and their instincts start them towards the right way in their lives.
I am sure your baby will be so wonderful, fulfilling and of course loved.
July 4th, 2019 00:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Dan, babies are so wonderful and their instincts start them towards the right way in their lives.
I am sure your baby will be so wonderful, fulfilling and of course loved.
July 4th, 2019 00:06
What could I learn
dusk arising said:
I rekkon it\'s a healthy thing to keep asking questions of ones-self and others around you all through life. Alternatively - look at the boring old farts who\'ve stopped!
July 3rd, 2019 10:56
dusk arising said:
I rekkon it\'s a healthy thing to keep asking questions of ones-self and others around you all through life. Alternatively - look at the boring old farts who\'ve stopped!
July 3rd, 2019 10:56
What could I learn
Suresh said:
A wondrous aspect of life, is a milking mother, that comes prepared to feed its newborn, and the newborns instinctive sense to find the source.
Human babies are a rarity, for we are a little more coddling
July 3rd, 2019 10:33
Suresh said:
A wondrous aspect of life, is a milking mother, that comes prepared to feed its newborn, and the newborns instinctive sense to find the source.
Human babies are a rarity, for we are a little more coddling
July 3rd, 2019 10:33
What could I learn
Michael Edwards said:
What a super philosophical write.
Your poem reminded me that one of the most wonderful sights is seeing a baby at the breast. Nothing lewd or to snigger about - just wonderful to see the love devotion and dependency between the new born and the mother. Magic.
July 3rd, 2019 08:56
Michael Edwards said:
What a super philosophical write.
Your poem reminded me that one of the most wonderful sights is seeing a baby at the breast. Nothing lewd or to snigger about - just wonderful to see the love devotion and dependency between the new born and the mother. Magic.
July 3rd, 2019 08:56
I dedicate these thoughts
dusk arising said:
I echo all the comments from others here today Dan. Ahead are some trying times, for a young baby can be such a demanding and unsettling presence in the home. Please make sure you take time to be yourself and should frustrating times arise for you, remind yourself of what you have written today... they are fine words of fine intent from a soul who worships life and his part in it.
I\'m not a star trek fan but spock used to have a marvellous phrase which i\'d say to you.. \"Live long and prosper!\"
July 3rd, 2019 05:11
dusk arising said:
I echo all the comments from others here today Dan. Ahead are some trying times, for a young baby can be such a demanding and unsettling presence in the home. Please make sure you take time to be yourself and should frustrating times arise for you, remind yourself of what you have written today... they are fine words of fine intent from a soul who worships life and his part in it.
I\'m not a star trek fan but spock used to have a marvellous phrase which i\'d say to you.. \"Live long and prosper!\"
July 3rd, 2019 05:11
What could I learn
orchidee said:
Ohh I\'m a snowflake! lol. Breast-feeding class? I would swoon upon arrival. heehee. \'Man up there, Orchi; pull your socks up!\' lol.
July 3rd, 2019 05:01
orchidee said:
Ohh I\'m a snowflake! lol. Breast-feeding class? I would swoon upon arrival. heehee. \'Man up there, Orchi; pull your socks up!\' lol.
July 3rd, 2019 05:01
I dedicate these thoughts
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful words Dan. The chords that you are now playing are all in the major keys, no minor ones anymore. Your child will grow into a wonderful person as you will be able to guide that child in a loving way that is full of light. The darkness that was in your life has now been consigned to history.
July 3rd, 2019 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful words Dan. The chords that you are now playing are all in the major keys, no minor ones anymore. Your child will grow into a wonderful person as you will be able to guide that child in a loving way that is full of light. The darkness that was in your life has now been consigned to history.
July 3rd, 2019 00:39
I dedicate these thoughts
Christina8 said:
What an awesome poem and picture Dan! A belated Congratulations are in order----children are such a blessing. So nice to see you at peace!
July 2nd, 2019 21:38
Christina8 said:
What an awesome poem and picture Dan! A belated Congratulations are in order----children are such a blessing. So nice to see you at peace!
July 2nd, 2019 21:38
I dedicate these thoughts
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderful read - your words echo to the feeling of growth Dan - - keep going that way and peace you will win.
July 2nd, 2019 13:50
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderful read - your words echo to the feeling of growth Dan - - keep going that way and peace you will win.
July 2nd, 2019 13:50
I dedicate these thoughts
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
This exceptional poem has shown me how much you’ve learned and have grown so wise! I am ecstatic for you! You’re becoming such a great dad! Your children are blessed to have you as their dad and you are blessed to be given this opportunity to show them how proud you are to be their dad!
You do know what chords you’re playing and you’re playing them well! To be given such a gift to grow ‘with another soul from day one’ is a blessing and an opportunity that you will not squander! You have learned how precious life is and I’m happy you’ve been given this new gift of a life that you’ll love and nourish with all your might!
~Laura~🌻
July 2nd, 2019 13:39
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
This exceptional poem has shown me how much you’ve learned and have grown so wise! I am ecstatic for you! You’re becoming such a great dad! Your children are blessed to have you as their dad and you are blessed to be given this opportunity to show them how proud you are to be their dad!
You do know what chords you’re playing and you’re playing them well! To be given such a gift to grow ‘with another soul from day one’ is a blessing and an opportunity that you will not squander! You have learned how precious life is and I’m happy you’ve been given this new gift of a life that you’ll love and nourish with all your might!
~Laura~🌻
July 2nd, 2019 13:39
No harm
Fay Slimm. said:
Good to know you talk to wasps and bees Dan like me.............. great read.
July 2nd, 2019 04:33
Fay Slimm. said:
Good to know you talk to wasps and bees Dan like me.............. great read.
July 2nd, 2019 04:33
No harm
Suresh said:
It\'s out of fear that we swat at them, and not because of cause.
Nice write and a distancing from the past.
July 2nd, 2019 04:27
Suresh said:
It\'s out of fear that we swat at them, and not because of cause.
Nice write and a distancing from the past.
July 2nd, 2019 04:27
Should & Could
Christina8 said:
Great write Dan, I loved it but I must say I really liked the Native American quote...probably because I am part Native and it struck a chord.\"what one fears, one destroys\"---so powerful and inspiring!!! Thank you for sharing dan!!!----Christina
July 1st, 2019 22:43
Christina8 said:
Great write Dan, I loved it but I must say I really liked the Native American quote...probably because I am part Native and it struck a chord.\"what one fears, one destroys\"---so powerful and inspiring!!! Thank you for sharing dan!!!----Christina
July 1st, 2019 22:43
No harm
Christina8 said:
I like your adorable write, though bees and wasps are no friend o\'mine! LOL
Much respect--Christina
July 1st, 2019 22:20
Christina8 said:
I like your adorable write, though bees and wasps are no friend o\'mine! LOL
Much respect--Christina
July 1st, 2019 22:20
No harm
poetboy123 said:
I\'m not partial to wasps, though more so to bees. Great to see your work again my friend!
July 1st, 2019 20:51
poetboy123 said:
I\'m not partial to wasps, though more so to bees. Great to see your work again my friend!
July 1st, 2019 20:51
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