Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan



I sit by me again offering a hand
Goldfinch60 said:

When you face your fears and stand up to them they no longer become fears but enhance your strength as you go forward into that wonderful future that each moment will bring you in the future.

July 14th, 2019 00:51

I sit by me again offering a hand
Michael Edwards said:

Oh you\'ll listen - I admire your resilience and your pen - keep writing good friend.

July 13th, 2019 05:41

I sit by me again offering a hand
Fay Slimm. said:

Yes facing is the way to control these unwanted feelings dear Dan - keep going and feel no shame in the way you take..........

July 13th, 2019 03:35

I sit by me again offering a hand
Neville said:

Well penned friend.... never give up on hope

okay..................... N

July 13th, 2019 03:25

Life is the plan
Suresh said:

Recognition is the initiating step, that you have attained. The second is not to be drawn back to yesterdays. Now the future needs you, and it\'s yours to have.

July 13th, 2019 01:01

Life is the plan
Goldfinch60 said:

As we go through life we learn and you are learning quickly that the positives always outweigh the negatives.

July 13th, 2019 00:30

Life is the plan
dusk arising said:

It seems you are very much aware of the ying and yang inside you. The positive and the negative influences.
Now you are conscious that the positive must defeat the negative and the battle is on. Dan, in this respect you are not alone. Everybody has to come to terms with this need to control ones energy. It is an ongoing battle. But sooner or later you get an amazing buzz from the positive thing you just did and it encourages you to do more.... each time you\'ll get a buzz, a good feeling and it leads to the remarkable - you get a buzz out of just being you and how people treat you.
You are well on your way.

July 12th, 2019 06:02

Life is the plan
Neville said:

every day is a new lesson ... I say learn from each one of em....

July 12th, 2019 04:04

Life is the plan
orchidee said:

A fine write Dan. I had a plan to sing to everyone. Why they all run away?! heehee.

July 12th, 2019 03:43

Integrity
Goldfinch60 said:

Integrity is one of the finest things we can have within ourselves and you certainly have that Dan.

July 10th, 2019 00:08

Integrity
Michael Edwards said:

Add integrity to tolerance and respect - fine work Dan

July 9th, 2019 11:19

Home stretch
Neville said:

what lovely sentiments you have poemed here sir... bravo..

July 9th, 2019 10:14

Integrity
Neville said:

if you can maintain your integrity while those around you lose their\'s, you shall always be a rich man....... Neville

July 9th, 2019 10:05

Home stretch
orchidee said:

In a light vein - but, what, if, maybe, perhaps, might do, then again I might not.......
Doh, get a grip, Ochi! You\'ll be finished or run out of time before you\'ve even started, at this rate - procrastinating! lol.

July 8th, 2019 02:05

Home stretch
Suresh said:

No more \"but, if and what\" you are at a place where you can handle whatever life presents.

July 7th, 2019 10:05

Home stretch
Goldfinch60 said:

Super write, that last stanza is so very true.

July 7th, 2019 09:57

Home stretch
Michael Edwards said:

This a real gem - an inspiring write.

July 7th, 2019 07:20

Home stretch
sylviasearcher said:

This brought a pang to my chest.
Your strength is such an inspiration 💜

July 7th, 2019 04:57

Vibration adjustment
Goldfinch60 said:

Your self examination is bringing you into a glorious life, once that examination is completed life will be glorious.

July 7th, 2019 00:27

Vibration adjustment
Suresh said:

Stay strong, and don\'t loose a single moment to unworthiness.
A very poetic examination

July 6th, 2019 11:58

Vibration adjustment
dusk arising said:

All around you are people with similar wounds. You won\'t know them for they do not wear their heart on their sleeve. I expect many look at you and do not see who you are either.
The world isn\'t ready for us to see each other as gods yet. So what shall we see each other as when a look of disdain meets us along the high street?

July 6th, 2019 11:00

Vibration adjustment
Laura🌻 said:

Dan,

The wonderful thing about you is that upon an honest self examination, you hone up to the ‘hurt, the pain, the love and joy’ , and realize they’re all lessons to learn from! You seem to adjust those vibrations very well! Kudos! 👏🏻
Great message and video!
Have a great weekend!

~Laura~🌻

July 6th, 2019 05:38

Rant or opinion it\'s my dominion
Suresh said:

As nothing can ever be destroyed, and the fight between good and bad is eternal, with our strength and our need to protect our loved ones, we can forever keep our demons at bay.
Your recognition and your words are your strength, and others will come around too.

July 4th, 2019 10:25

Rant or opinion it\'s my dominion
dusk arising said:

Loved that video Dan.
Whatever you chose or deny as a palliative or drug you are doing it in full recognition of what it is, what it\'s for, and why you are doing it. You are a free man and aware of what can happen if it ever became an addiction. Frightening isn\'t it.

July 4th, 2019 09:47

Rant or opinion it\'s my dominion
Michael Edwards said:

In my eyes you are a positive man and this write spells it out.

July 4th, 2019 04:20

Rant or opinion it\'s my dominion
Goldfinch60 said:

May those inspirational lessons be forever with you - and for all of us. Life is good and you have so much for which to look forward in the very near future - be there as your new self and show your new offspring the light that you have found.

July 4th, 2019 01:53

What could I learn
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful write Dan, babies are so wonderful and their instincts start them towards the right way in their lives.
I am sure your baby will be so wonderful, fulfilling and of course loved.

July 4th, 2019 00:06

What could I learn
dusk arising said:

I rekkon it\'s a healthy thing to keep asking questions of ones-self and others around you all through life. Alternatively - look at the boring old farts who\'ve stopped!

July 3rd, 2019 10:56

What could I learn
Suresh said:

A wondrous aspect of life, is a milking mother, that comes prepared to feed its newborn, and the newborns instinctive sense to find the source.
Human babies are a rarity, for we are a little more coddling

July 3rd, 2019 10:33

What could I learn
Michael Edwards said:

What a super philosophical write.
Your poem reminded me that one of the most wonderful sights is seeing a baby at the breast. Nothing lewd or to snigger about - just wonderful to see the love devotion and dependency between the new born and the mother. Magic.

July 3rd, 2019 08:56



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