Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan



I\'m back from dusk till dawn
Michael Edwards said:

And in the daylight too - fine write.

July 18th, 2019 13:39

I\'m back from dusk till dawn
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Wow yes true, words matter. This is a super cool poem. Self reflection is always good. Kudos.


Would you pls pleez give your thoughts/ comments on my newest poem too?

July 18th, 2019 02:31

Vanity is gone
Goldfinch60 said:

May that smile never leave your face and your positivity be forever with you, as I am sure it will be.
Great words Dan

July 18th, 2019 00:45

Vanity is gone
Michael Edwards said:

Great thoughts well expressed.

July 17th, 2019 20:12

Vanity is gone
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Great message Dan... keep strong love the emerson quote

July 17th, 2019 17:20

Vanity is gone
kevin browne said:

And stuck to positivity you have dealt with over the last plenty of months now. Keep your finger dipped in the river of positivity and it will take you up or down or wherever you want to. Self-preservastion is no dout the healing of ones own ability and for your placement on this planet. Inspiring you are indeed.

July 17th, 2019 13:59

Heartbeat & 4D of rainbow dragonfly
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful write. The birth of your child will be wondrous for all. Your newborn will come into your world of light, joy and of course love, always love.
I give my blessings to you all, baby, mother and father, may your lives be filled with light.

July 17th, 2019 00:21

Heartbeat & 4D of rainbow dragonfly
Christina8 said:

Awesome write Dan! Can\'t wait to see what you write when your little one arrives.

July 16th, 2019 18:26

Heartbeat & 4D of rainbow dragonfly
orchidee said:

A lovely write Dan.

July 16th, 2019 11:19

Twelve rounds
Goldfinch60 said:

You must always remember that last line. You need a plaque on the wall saying
\"I AM IN CONTROL OF MY FUTURE AND FATE!\"

July 16th, 2019 01:11

Twelve rounds
Neville said:


write on and fight on squire, its not over till the fat lady sings... and she might be having twins.....

July 15th, 2019 22:25

Twelve rounds
Christina8 said:

So well done, my friend. Good fight! I love your authors\' comments!! Much peace and respect back to you Dan!--Christina

July 15th, 2019 22:18

I sit by me again offering a hand
Goldfinch60 said:

When you face your fears and stand up to them they no longer become fears but enhance your strength as you go forward into that wonderful future that each moment will bring you in the future.

July 14th, 2019 00:51

I sit by me again offering a hand
Michael Edwards said:

Oh you\'ll listen - I admire your resilience and your pen - keep writing good friend.

July 13th, 2019 05:41

I sit by me again offering a hand
Fay Slimm. said:

Yes facing is the way to control these unwanted feelings dear Dan - keep going and feel no shame in the way you take..........

July 13th, 2019 03:35

I sit by me again offering a hand
Neville said:

Well penned friend.... never give up on hope

okay..................... N

July 13th, 2019 03:25

Life is the plan
Suresh said:

Recognition is the initiating step, that you have attained. The second is not to be drawn back to yesterdays. Now the future needs you, and it\'s yours to have.

July 13th, 2019 01:01

Life is the plan
Goldfinch60 said:

As we go through life we learn and you are learning quickly that the positives always outweigh the negatives.

July 13th, 2019 00:30

Life is the plan
dusk arising said:

It seems you are very much aware of the ying and yang inside you. The positive and the negative influences.
Now you are conscious that the positive must defeat the negative and the battle is on. Dan, in this respect you are not alone. Everybody has to come to terms with this need to control ones energy. It is an ongoing battle. But sooner or later you get an amazing buzz from the positive thing you just did and it encourages you to do more.... each time you\'ll get a buzz, a good feeling and it leads to the remarkable - you get a buzz out of just being you and how people treat you.
You are well on your way.

July 12th, 2019 06:02

Life is the plan
Neville said:

every day is a new lesson ... I say learn from each one of em....

July 12th, 2019 04:04

Life is the plan
orchidee said:

A fine write Dan. I had a plan to sing to everyone. Why they all run away?! heehee.

July 12th, 2019 03:43

Integrity
Goldfinch60 said:

Integrity is one of the finest things we can have within ourselves and you certainly have that Dan.

July 10th, 2019 00:08

Integrity
Michael Edwards said:

Add integrity to tolerance and respect - fine work Dan

July 9th, 2019 11:19

Home stretch
Neville said:

what lovely sentiments you have poemed here sir... bravo..

July 9th, 2019 10:14

Integrity
Neville said:

if you can maintain your integrity while those around you lose their\'s, you shall always be a rich man....... Neville

July 9th, 2019 10:05

Home stretch
orchidee said:

In a light vein - but, what, if, maybe, perhaps, might do, then again I might not.......
Doh, get a grip, Ochi! You\'ll be finished or run out of time before you\'ve even started, at this rate - procrastinating! lol.

July 8th, 2019 02:05

Home stretch
Suresh said:

No more \"but, if and what\" you are at a place where you can handle whatever life presents.

July 7th, 2019 10:05

Home stretch
Goldfinch60 said:

Super write, that last stanza is so very true.

July 7th, 2019 09:57

Home stretch
Michael Edwards said:

This a real gem - an inspiring write.

July 7th, 2019 07:20

Home stretch
sylviasearcher said:

This brought a pang to my chest.
Your strength is such an inspiration 💜

July 7th, 2019 04:57



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