Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Persistence is a fun key
kevin browne said:
I love these animal related and the little monkey being the key ingredients. And, never give in whatever you do.
June 14th, 2019 20:22
kevin browne said:
I love these animal related and the little monkey being the key ingredients. And, never give in whatever you do.
June 14th, 2019 20:22
Persistence is a fun key
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Opposable thumbs my friend opposable thumbs
Great write
June 14th, 2019 12:50
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Opposable thumbs my friend opposable thumbs
Great write
June 14th, 2019 12:50
Persistence is a fun key
dusk arising said:
The crocodile snapped at Dan\'s feet
But crafty Dan was way out of reach
He was on a plain so much higher
And soon that croc tired
He was knackered - just a figure of speech
But that croc would not be outdone
And proceeded to snap at Dans bum
Dans wasn\'t down hearted
And swiftly he farted
That crocodile didn\'t half run.
But later with a twinkle in his eye
Croc decided to have one more try
Not pro-cras-tin-a-ting
Clever Dan, he was waiting
And dispatched poor old croc to the sky
June 14th, 2019 10:41
dusk arising said:
The crocodile snapped at Dan\'s feet
But crafty Dan was way out of reach
He was on a plain so much higher
And soon that croc tired
He was knackered - just a figure of speech
But that croc would not be outdone
And proceeded to snap at Dans bum
Dans wasn\'t down hearted
And swiftly he farted
That crocodile didn\'t half run.
But later with a twinkle in his eye
Croc decided to have one more try
Not pro-cras-tin-a-ting
Clever Dan, he was waiting
And dispatched poor old croc to the sky
June 14th, 2019 10:41
Persistence is a fun key
Suresh said:
No they sure can\'t swing, but can leap pretty high
June 14th, 2019 10:06
Suresh said:
No they sure can\'t swing, but can leap pretty high
June 14th, 2019 10:06
I\'ve seen
kevin browne said:
Did you shower in sea salts and vinegar? Now you\'re almost a fish!!!!
June 13th, 2019 13:12
kevin browne said:
Did you shower in sea salts and vinegar? Now you\'re almost a fish!!!!
June 13th, 2019 13:12
I\'ve seen
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
SINGING IN THE RAIN
SHOWS ME A PERSON
WHO SHOWS NO PAIN
AND WHEN THEY ARE DRY
THEY SEE A BLACK SKY
AND SING IN THE RAIN ~ AGAIN
Thanks for carin\' an\' sharin\' DAN ~ However hard the times I\'ve been through ~ IN LOVE & LIFE ~ I have always found others whose state is worse than mine. So I learn to count my Blessings ~ AMEN
Please check Our POEM ~ Morning has BROKEN
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡 🧡
June 13th, 2019 10:49
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
SINGING IN THE RAIN
SHOWS ME A PERSON
WHO SHOWS NO PAIN
AND WHEN THEY ARE DRY
THEY SEE A BLACK SKY
AND SING IN THE RAIN ~ AGAIN
Thanks for carin\' an\' sharin\' DAN ~ However hard the times I\'ve been through ~ IN LOVE & LIFE ~ I have always found others whose state is worse than mine. So I learn to count my Blessings ~ AMEN
Please check Our POEM ~ Morning has BROKEN
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡 🧡
June 13th, 2019 10:49
I\'ve seen
dusk arising said:
For mid June theres too many flippin showers.. and its too cold!
Are there many bathers down on the beaches?
So, are you a bit of a Tom Jones in the shower Dan? It\'s not unusual!
June 13th, 2019 06:59
dusk arising said:
For mid June theres too many flippin showers.. and its too cold!
Are there many bathers down on the beaches?
So, are you a bit of a Tom Jones in the shower Dan? It\'s not unusual!
June 13th, 2019 06:59
I\'ve seen
orchidee said:
Good write Dan. That\'s OK then, as long as it wasn\'t me singing! lol.
June 13th, 2019 02:46
orchidee said:
Good write Dan. That\'s OK then, as long as it wasn\'t me singing! lol.
June 13th, 2019 02:46
I\'ve seen
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful Dan, those showers can be so cleansing and so meaningful.
June 13th, 2019 02:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful Dan, those showers can be so cleansing and so meaningful.
June 13th, 2019 02:27
I am....
Fay Slimm. said:
A fine place to be is to have found our uniqueness - - a big step forward is to know our own Self. A beautiful verse Dan and thank you .
June 12th, 2019 02:40
Fay Slimm. said:
A fine place to be is to have found our uniqueness - - a big step forward is to know our own Self. A beautiful verse Dan and thank you .
June 12th, 2019 02:40
I am....
Goldfinch60 said:
You have become you Dan and that you is a wonderful person.
June 12th, 2019 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
You have become you Dan and that you is a wonderful person.
June 12th, 2019 01:42
Sending it somewhere
Goldfinch60 said:
Looking into yourself can sometimes be painful, you have been doing this and have come out of it a far happier person. This wobbles will happen but each day of your new being will be able to dismiss them easier each time.
June 12th, 2019 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Looking into yourself can sometimes be painful, you have been doing this and have come out of it a far happier person. This wobbles will happen but each day of your new being will be able to dismiss them easier each time.
June 12th, 2019 00:35
Sending it somewhere
Suresh said:
infeel your despair, but more importantly your strength as well
June 11th, 2019 16:23
Suresh said:
infeel your despair, but more importantly your strength as well
June 11th, 2019 16:23
Sending it somewhere
Neville said:
insight is a double edged sword, but when that sword is shared between a friend or two... everything will eventually work out fine..... Neville
June 11th, 2019 06:23
Neville said:
insight is a double edged sword, but when that sword is shared between a friend or two... everything will eventually work out fine..... Neville
June 11th, 2019 06:23
Sending it somewhere
dusk arising said:
Read my piece today m8. Although it is a true part of my life, you came to mind when i re-read it.
June 11th, 2019 03:21
dusk arising said:
Read my piece today m8. Although it is a true part of my life, you came to mind when i re-read it.
June 11th, 2019 03:21
Sending it somewhere
orchidee said:
Good write Dan. I find I can\'t rely on feelings alone though.
June 11th, 2019 02:48
orchidee said:
Good write Dan. I find I can\'t rely on feelings alone though.
June 11th, 2019 02:48
Your pocket or mine it will be fine
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write, let the silliness out it gives all a smile.
June 10th, 2019 14:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write, let the silliness out it gives all a smile.
June 10th, 2019 14:53
Your pocket or mine it will be fine
Suresh said:
You say silly,bi say reflection of an innocent purity.
June 10th, 2019 12:02
Suresh said:
You say silly,bi say reflection of an innocent purity.
June 10th, 2019 12:02
Your pocket or mine it will be fine
Michael Edwards said:
I like the simple things in life - like me and this engaging little read.
June 10th, 2019 09:19
Michael Edwards said:
I like the simple things in life - like me and this engaging little read.
June 10th, 2019 09:19
Your pocket or mine it will be fine
orchidee said:
But of course: \'All donations gratefully received\'. What\'s that? The cheque is in the post to me?! Good!\' heehee.
I\'m getting greedy. I not quite got the hang of \'It is more blessed to give than to receive\'. Oohhh!
June 10th, 2019 08:20
orchidee said:
But of course: \'All donations gratefully received\'. What\'s that? The cheque is in the post to me?! Good!\' heehee.
I\'m getting greedy. I not quite got the hang of \'It is more blessed to give than to receive\'. Oohhh!
June 10th, 2019 08:20
Your pocket or mine it will be fine
Fay Slimm. said:
The simple things in this life are the best and seem to satisfy the most - a lovely read Dan
June 10th, 2019 07:54
Fay Slimm. said:
The simple things in this life are the best and seem to satisfy the most - a lovely read Dan
June 10th, 2019 07:54
Your pocket or mine it will be fine
kevin browne said:
Sweet as a nutter can be.
June 10th, 2019 06:25
kevin browne said:
Sweet as a nutter can be.
June 10th, 2019 06:25
Your pocket or mine it will be fine
dusk arising said:
Reads like somebody enjoying some of lifes little pleasures.
June 10th, 2019 05:59
dusk arising said:
Reads like somebody enjoying some of lifes little pleasures.
June 10th, 2019 05:59
Blessed to know you all
kevin browne said:
Permanently keep your finger dipped in the river of positivity and it will lift you up and lead you to anywhere you want to be in life.
June 10th, 2019 05:49
kevin browne said:
Permanently keep your finger dipped in the river of positivity and it will lift you up and lead you to anywhere you want to be in life.
June 10th, 2019 05:49
Blessed to know you all
Goldfinch60 said:
May your journey never again go to the dark places and you continue your way in life with the light to brighten your path.
June 9th, 2019 23:59
Goldfinch60 said:
May your journey never again go to the dark places and you continue your way in life with the light to brighten your path.
June 9th, 2019 23:59
Blessed to know you all
kevin browne said:
Dear Dan, my friend, your hope in deciding your own hearts truths and the witnessing of some lower ground level of life leaves you only looking upwards to see how high you\'ve fallen from. Now the persistence of your thoughts which you create for us readers to dwell upon, learning how to take, retrieve, except, take in and to watch you grow more so everyday into a beautiful being is just a remarkable feat to have gained towards your own wisdom of life. I trust you, I think about you and congratulate you on both your winnings and your losses. Without those you wouldn\'t be you. I perceive serenity is heading your way and I expect from the poetry you teach us will lift the skies to reveal your name written right across its blue beauty followed up with the Sun shining down on you for the rest of your life. Never let your dreams fail you and from what I can gather your intentions are pointing in the right direction. You are loved whatever you write, say or do. Keep the world smiling for everyone around you and I\'m quite sure you will positively win the day. Keep the fight alive and tell the world of what you have learned in order for others to learn from. Now that\'s one of Gods gifts given to you open evenhandedly. Beat that if you can and then your star will shine bright forever.
June 9th, 2019 20:58
kevin browne said:
Dear Dan, my friend, your hope in deciding your own hearts truths and the witnessing of some lower ground level of life leaves you only looking upwards to see how high you\'ve fallen from. Now the persistence of your thoughts which you create for us readers to dwell upon, learning how to take, retrieve, except, take in and to watch you grow more so everyday into a beautiful being is just a remarkable feat to have gained towards your own wisdom of life. I trust you, I think about you and congratulate you on both your winnings and your losses. Without those you wouldn\'t be you. I perceive serenity is heading your way and I expect from the poetry you teach us will lift the skies to reveal your name written right across its blue beauty followed up with the Sun shining down on you for the rest of your life. Never let your dreams fail you and from what I can gather your intentions are pointing in the right direction. You are loved whatever you write, say or do. Keep the world smiling for everyone around you and I\'m quite sure you will positively win the day. Keep the fight alive and tell the world of what you have learned in order for others to learn from. Now that\'s one of Gods gifts given to you open evenhandedly. Beat that if you can and then your star will shine bright forever.
June 9th, 2019 20:58
Blessed to know you all
dusk arising said:
I wholeheartedly agree with Nevilles words.
Consider this. Each one of us who has commented on your work over the years here is an imperfect soul either going through or coming out of a self repair mechanism. Whether it ever ends i don\'t know. But this much i do know. You are one of us and among us you have no need to validate yourself for we value you. If you were a cowboy i guess we would all agree that you won your spurs quite a while ago.
June 9th, 2019 12:04
dusk arising said:
I wholeheartedly agree with Nevilles words.
Consider this. Each one of us who has commented on your work over the years here is an imperfect soul either going through or coming out of a self repair mechanism. Whether it ever ends i don\'t know. But this much i do know. You are one of us and among us you have no need to validate yourself for we value you. If you were a cowboy i guess we would all agree that you won your spurs quite a while ago.
June 9th, 2019 12:04
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