Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Again & Again
dusk arising said:
Quote:-
Work is love made visible. And if you cannot work with love but only with distaste, it is better that you should leave your work and sit at the gate of the temple and take alms of those who work with joy.
Khalil Gibran
But we all have our \'off\' days
June 17th, 2019 05:46
dusk arising said:
Quote:-
Work is love made visible. And if you cannot work with love but only with distaste, it is better that you should leave your work and sit at the gate of the temple and take alms of those who work with joy.
Khalil Gibran
But we all have our \'off\' days
June 17th, 2019 05:46
Again & Again
orchidee said:
I thought that thingy at the top was an eye test!
Dunno about me soul, but I lost me way in woods a few times! lol.
June 17th, 2019 05:03
orchidee said:
I thought that thingy at the top was an eye test!
Dunno about me soul, but I lost me way in woods a few times! lol.
June 17th, 2019 05:03
Again & Again
Neville said:
a big little write & oh what a super message you have incorporated.... N
June 17th, 2019 04:38
Neville said:
a big little write & oh what a super message you have incorporated.... N
June 17th, 2019 04:38
Again & Again
Michael Edwards said:
Money rules I\'m afraid but that\'s life. Great work PD
June 17th, 2019 03:33
Michael Edwards said:
Money rules I\'m afraid but that\'s life. Great work PD
June 17th, 2019 03:33
Crash & burn
dusk arising said:
Life brings unexpected challenges, disappointments, and mistakes. Without those we would truly be exceptional, but we are not. None of us are.
And so you are tested, and you may falter. But you will regain. Take from this day its wisdom. Hold it within you and let its strength be yours.
Stand with those who have faith in you. Peace and goodwill Dan.
\"out beyond the ideas of wrongdoing and rightdoing
there is a field
I\'ll meet you there\"
Rumi
June 16th, 2019 18:26
dusk arising said:
Life brings unexpected challenges, disappointments, and mistakes. Without those we would truly be exceptional, but we are not. None of us are.
And so you are tested, and you may falter. But you will regain. Take from this day its wisdom. Hold it within you and let its strength be yours.
Stand with those who have faith in you. Peace and goodwill Dan.
\"out beyond the ideas of wrongdoing and rightdoing
there is a field
I\'ll meet you there\"
Rumi
June 16th, 2019 18:26
Persistence is a fun key
kevin browne said:
I love these animal related and the little monkey being the key ingredients. And, never give in whatever you do.
June 14th, 2019 20:22
kevin browne said:
I love these animal related and the little monkey being the key ingredients. And, never give in whatever you do.
June 14th, 2019 20:22
Persistence is a fun key
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Opposable thumbs my friend opposable thumbs
Great write
June 14th, 2019 12:50
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Opposable thumbs my friend opposable thumbs
Great write
June 14th, 2019 12:50
Persistence is a fun key
dusk arising said:
The crocodile snapped at Dan\'s feet
But crafty Dan was way out of reach
He was on a plain so much higher
And soon that croc tired
He was knackered - just a figure of speech
But that croc would not be outdone
And proceeded to snap at Dans bum
Dans wasn\'t down hearted
And swiftly he farted
That crocodile didn\'t half run.
But later with a twinkle in his eye
Croc decided to have one more try
Not pro-cras-tin-a-ting
Clever Dan, he was waiting
And dispatched poor old croc to the sky
June 14th, 2019 10:41
dusk arising said:
The crocodile snapped at Dan\'s feet
But crafty Dan was way out of reach
He was on a plain so much higher
And soon that croc tired
He was knackered - just a figure of speech
But that croc would not be outdone
And proceeded to snap at Dans bum
Dans wasn\'t down hearted
And swiftly he farted
That crocodile didn\'t half run.
But later with a twinkle in his eye
Croc decided to have one more try
Not pro-cras-tin-a-ting
Clever Dan, he was waiting
And dispatched poor old croc to the sky
June 14th, 2019 10:41
Persistence is a fun key
Suresh said:
No they sure can\'t swing, but can leap pretty high
June 14th, 2019 10:06
Suresh said:
No they sure can\'t swing, but can leap pretty high
June 14th, 2019 10:06
I\'ve seen
kevin browne said:
Did you shower in sea salts and vinegar? Now you\'re almost a fish!!!!
June 13th, 2019 13:12
kevin browne said:
Did you shower in sea salts and vinegar? Now you\'re almost a fish!!!!
June 13th, 2019 13:12
I\'ve seen
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
SINGING IN THE RAIN
SHOWS ME A PERSON
WHO SHOWS NO PAIN
AND WHEN THEY ARE DRY
THEY SEE A BLACK SKY
AND SING IN THE RAIN ~ AGAIN
Thanks for carin\' an\' sharin\' DAN ~ However hard the times I\'ve been through ~ IN LOVE & LIFE ~ I have always found others whose state is worse than mine. So I learn to count my Blessings ~ AMEN
Please check Our POEM ~ Morning has BROKEN
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡 🧡
June 13th, 2019 10:49
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
SINGING IN THE RAIN
SHOWS ME A PERSON
WHO SHOWS NO PAIN
AND WHEN THEY ARE DRY
THEY SEE A BLACK SKY
AND SING IN THE RAIN ~ AGAIN
Thanks for carin\' an\' sharin\' DAN ~ However hard the times I\'ve been through ~ IN LOVE & LIFE ~ I have always found others whose state is worse than mine. So I learn to count my Blessings ~ AMEN
Please check Our POEM ~ Morning has BROKEN
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡 🧡
June 13th, 2019 10:49
I\'ve seen
dusk arising said:
For mid June theres too many flippin showers.. and its too cold!
Are there many bathers down on the beaches?
So, are you a bit of a Tom Jones in the shower Dan? It\'s not unusual!
June 13th, 2019 06:59
dusk arising said:
For mid June theres too many flippin showers.. and its too cold!
Are there many bathers down on the beaches?
So, are you a bit of a Tom Jones in the shower Dan? It\'s not unusual!
June 13th, 2019 06:59
I\'ve seen
orchidee said:
Good write Dan. That\'s OK then, as long as it wasn\'t me singing! lol.
June 13th, 2019 02:46
orchidee said:
Good write Dan. That\'s OK then, as long as it wasn\'t me singing! lol.
June 13th, 2019 02:46
I\'ve seen
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful Dan, those showers can be so cleansing and so meaningful.
June 13th, 2019 02:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful Dan, those showers can be so cleansing and so meaningful.
June 13th, 2019 02:27
I am....
Fay Slimm. said:
A fine place to be is to have found our uniqueness - - a big step forward is to know our own Self. A beautiful verse Dan and thank you .
June 12th, 2019 02:40
Fay Slimm. said:
A fine place to be is to have found our uniqueness - - a big step forward is to know our own Self. A beautiful verse Dan and thank you .
June 12th, 2019 02:40
I am....
Goldfinch60 said:
You have become you Dan and that you is a wonderful person.
June 12th, 2019 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
You have become you Dan and that you is a wonderful person.
June 12th, 2019 01:42
Sending it somewhere
Goldfinch60 said:
Looking into yourself can sometimes be painful, you have been doing this and have come out of it a far happier person. This wobbles will happen but each day of your new being will be able to dismiss them easier each time.
June 12th, 2019 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Looking into yourself can sometimes be painful, you have been doing this and have come out of it a far happier person. This wobbles will happen but each day of your new being will be able to dismiss them easier each time.
June 12th, 2019 00:35
Sending it somewhere
Suresh said:
infeel your despair, but more importantly your strength as well
June 11th, 2019 16:23
Suresh said:
infeel your despair, but more importantly your strength as well
June 11th, 2019 16:23
Sending it somewhere
Neville said:
insight is a double edged sword, but when that sword is shared between a friend or two... everything will eventually work out fine..... Neville
June 11th, 2019 06:23
Neville said:
insight is a double edged sword, but when that sword is shared between a friend or two... everything will eventually work out fine..... Neville
June 11th, 2019 06:23
Sending it somewhere
dusk arising said:
Read my piece today m8. Although it is a true part of my life, you came to mind when i re-read it.
June 11th, 2019 03:21
dusk arising said:
Read my piece today m8. Although it is a true part of my life, you came to mind when i re-read it.
June 11th, 2019 03:21
Sending it somewhere
orchidee said:
Good write Dan. I find I can\'t rely on feelings alone though.
June 11th, 2019 02:48
orchidee said:
Good write Dan. I find I can\'t rely on feelings alone though.
June 11th, 2019 02:48
Your pocket or mine it will be fine
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write, let the silliness out it gives all a smile.
June 10th, 2019 14:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write, let the silliness out it gives all a smile.
June 10th, 2019 14:53
Your pocket or mine it will be fine
Suresh said:
You say silly,bi say reflection of an innocent purity.
June 10th, 2019 12:02
Suresh said:
You say silly,bi say reflection of an innocent purity.
June 10th, 2019 12:02
Your pocket or mine it will be fine
Michael Edwards said:
I like the simple things in life - like me and this engaging little read.
June 10th, 2019 09:19
Michael Edwards said:
I like the simple things in life - like me and this engaging little read.
June 10th, 2019 09:19
Your pocket or mine it will be fine
orchidee said:
But of course: \'All donations gratefully received\'. What\'s that? The cheque is in the post to me?! Good!\' heehee.
I\'m getting greedy. I not quite got the hang of \'It is more blessed to give than to receive\'. Oohhh!
June 10th, 2019 08:20
orchidee said:
But of course: \'All donations gratefully received\'. What\'s that? The cheque is in the post to me?! Good!\' heehee.
I\'m getting greedy. I not quite got the hang of \'It is more blessed to give than to receive\'. Oohhh!
June 10th, 2019 08:20
Your pocket or mine it will be fine
Fay Slimm. said:
The simple things in this life are the best and seem to satisfy the most - a lovely read Dan
June 10th, 2019 07:54
Fay Slimm. said:
The simple things in this life are the best and seem to satisfy the most - a lovely read Dan
June 10th, 2019 07:54
Your pocket or mine it will be fine
kevin browne said:
Sweet as a nutter can be.
June 10th, 2019 06:25
kevin browne said:
Sweet as a nutter can be.
June 10th, 2019 06:25
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