Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Your pocket or mine it will be fine
dusk arising said:
Reads like somebody enjoying some of lifes little pleasures.
June 10th, 2019 05:59
dusk arising said:
Reads like somebody enjoying some of lifes little pleasures.
June 10th, 2019 05:59
Blessed to know you all
kevin browne said:
Permanently keep your finger dipped in the river of positivity and it will lift you up and lead you to anywhere you want to be in life.
June 10th, 2019 05:49
kevin browne said:
Permanently keep your finger dipped in the river of positivity and it will lift you up and lead you to anywhere you want to be in life.
June 10th, 2019 05:49
Blessed to know you all
Goldfinch60 said:
May your journey never again go to the dark places and you continue your way in life with the light to brighten your path.
June 9th, 2019 23:59
Goldfinch60 said:
May your journey never again go to the dark places and you continue your way in life with the light to brighten your path.
June 9th, 2019 23:59
Blessed to know you all
kevin browne said:
Dear Dan, my friend, your hope in deciding your own hearts truths and the witnessing of some lower ground level of life leaves you only looking upwards to see how high you\'ve fallen from. Now the persistence of your thoughts which you create for us readers to dwell upon, learning how to take, retrieve, except, take in and to watch you grow more so everyday into a beautiful being is just a remarkable feat to have gained towards your own wisdom of life. I trust you, I think about you and congratulate you on both your winnings and your losses. Without those you wouldn\'t be you. I perceive serenity is heading your way and I expect from the poetry you teach us will lift the skies to reveal your name written right across its blue beauty followed up with the Sun shining down on you for the rest of your life. Never let your dreams fail you and from what I can gather your intentions are pointing in the right direction. You are loved whatever you write, say or do. Keep the world smiling for everyone around you and I\'m quite sure you will positively win the day. Keep the fight alive and tell the world of what you have learned in order for others to learn from. Now that\'s one of Gods gifts given to you open evenhandedly. Beat that if you can and then your star will shine bright forever.
June 9th, 2019 20:58
kevin browne said:
Dear Dan, my friend, your hope in deciding your own hearts truths and the witnessing of some lower ground level of life leaves you only looking upwards to see how high you\'ve fallen from. Now the persistence of your thoughts which you create for us readers to dwell upon, learning how to take, retrieve, except, take in and to watch you grow more so everyday into a beautiful being is just a remarkable feat to have gained towards your own wisdom of life. I trust you, I think about you and congratulate you on both your winnings and your losses. Without those you wouldn\'t be you. I perceive serenity is heading your way and I expect from the poetry you teach us will lift the skies to reveal your name written right across its blue beauty followed up with the Sun shining down on you for the rest of your life. Never let your dreams fail you and from what I can gather your intentions are pointing in the right direction. You are loved whatever you write, say or do. Keep the world smiling for everyone around you and I\'m quite sure you will positively win the day. Keep the fight alive and tell the world of what you have learned in order for others to learn from. Now that\'s one of Gods gifts given to you open evenhandedly. Beat that if you can and then your star will shine bright forever.
June 9th, 2019 20:58
Blessed to know you all
dusk arising said:
I wholeheartedly agree with Nevilles words.
Consider this. Each one of us who has commented on your work over the years here is an imperfect soul either going through or coming out of a self repair mechanism. Whether it ever ends i don\'t know. But this much i do know. You are one of us and among us you have no need to validate yourself for we value you. If you were a cowboy i guess we would all agree that you won your spurs quite a while ago.
June 9th, 2019 12:04
dusk arising said:
I wholeheartedly agree with Nevilles words.
Consider this. Each one of us who has commented on your work over the years here is an imperfect soul either going through or coming out of a self repair mechanism. Whether it ever ends i don\'t know. But this much i do know. You are one of us and among us you have no need to validate yourself for we value you. If you were a cowboy i guess we would all agree that you won your spurs quite a while ago.
June 9th, 2019 12:04
Blessed to know you all
Fay Slimm. said:
You have arrived at where you are meant to be Dan - - keep walking along with your present voice ringing out to all who will listen......... Hugs for your achievement - - ........... XX Fay
June 9th, 2019 09:11
Fay Slimm. said:
You have arrived at where you are meant to be Dan - - keep walking along with your present voice ringing out to all who will listen......... Hugs for your achievement - - ........... XX Fay
June 9th, 2019 09:11
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orchidee said:
Oh woe! The only thing folk will be un-blessed with is me singing! heehee.
June 9th, 2019 08:40
orchidee said:
Oh woe! The only thing folk will be un-blessed with is me singing! heehee.
June 9th, 2019 08:40
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Michael Edwards said:
You\'ve arrived and poetically you\'re one of us.
June 9th, 2019 08:26
Michael Edwards said:
You\'ve arrived and poetically you\'re one of us.
June 9th, 2019 08:26
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Fay Slimm. said:
You have arrived at where you are meant to be Dan - - keep walking along with your present voice ringing out to all who will listen......... Hugs for your achievement - - ........... XX Fay
June 9th, 2019 07:41
Fay Slimm. said:
You have arrived at where you are meant to be Dan - - keep walking along with your present voice ringing out to all who will listen......... Hugs for your achievement - - ........... XX Fay
June 9th, 2019 07:41
Blessed to know you all
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
I\'ll never fly said the caterpillar...
Oh yes you will said he butterfly...
The passing of time is sometimes all we need
Great write Dab,,, sorry I mean Dan... there you are
June 9th, 2019 05:08
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
I\'ll never fly said the caterpillar...
Oh yes you will said he butterfly...
The passing of time is sometimes all we need
Great write Dab,,, sorry I mean Dan... there you are
June 9th, 2019 05:08
Blessed to know you all
Neville said:
I can see no reason why you should ever put yourself down again Dan... you have clearly moved forward and found not only a new voice and a new way of expressing yourself, but a new you too.... a pat on the back is in order ,,,,,,, Neville
June 9th, 2019 04:32
Neville said:
I can see no reason why you should ever put yourself down again Dan... you have clearly moved forward and found not only a new voice and a new way of expressing yourself, but a new you too.... a pat on the back is in order ,,,,,,, Neville
June 9th, 2019 04:32
Fold & keep
Poetic Dan said:
They most certainly are my friend but easily found when in good company.
June 9th, 2019 03:07
Poetic Dan said:
They most certainly are my friend but easily found when in good company.
June 9th, 2019 03:07
Fold & keep
Goldfinch60 said:
Those thoughts of light and words of wisdom are always within us Dan.
June 9th, 2019 00:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Those thoughts of light and words of wisdom are always within us Dan.
June 9th, 2019 00:23
Fold & keep
dusk arising said:
These modified words of an old but very popular song come to mind:-
\"When you\'ve walked through a storm, hold your head up high, and don\'t be afraid of the dark. At the end of the storm is a golden sky, and the sweet silver song of the lark\"
That\'s you that is mate. And you sing it well. Keep on.
June 8th, 2019 10:29
dusk arising said:
These modified words of an old but very popular song come to mind:-
\"When you\'ve walked through a storm, hold your head up high, and don\'t be afraid of the dark. At the end of the storm is a golden sky, and the sweet silver song of the lark\"
That\'s you that is mate. And you sing it well. Keep on.
June 8th, 2019 10:29
Fold & keep
Neville said:
your writing goes from strength to strength.. nuff said...
Neville
June 8th, 2019 02:42
Neville said:
your writing goes from strength to strength.. nuff said...
Neville
June 8th, 2019 02:42
Arm and a leg
Neville said:
you need to keep all these together for the kids.. there are good lessons and morals here.. not just eggs n stuff.... :)
June 8th, 2019 01:10
Neville said:
you need to keep all these together for the kids.. there are good lessons and morals here.. not just eggs n stuff.... :)
June 8th, 2019 01:10
Home is me
Suresh said:
The past, dreadful when it was present, now recalled as cause to strengthen your resolve to live the future to the fullest for yourself and those under your care, has brought you to a solemn state of mind.
June 7th, 2019 11:49
Suresh said:
The past, dreadful when it was present, now recalled as cause to strengthen your resolve to live the future to the fullest for yourself and those under your care, has brought you to a solemn state of mind.
June 7th, 2019 11:49
Home is me
Michael Edwards said:
A fine write which complements Fay\'s super piece also published today
June 7th, 2019 10:51
Michael Edwards said:
A fine write which complements Fay\'s super piece also published today
June 7th, 2019 10:51
Home is me
Fay Slimm. said:
Life\'\'s journey is full of chances to learn and improve and your verse tells the fact of you doing just that Dan - - instead of curling over in failure you have taken the way to the stars and won.
June 7th, 2019 10:18
Fay Slimm. said:
Life\'\'s journey is full of chances to learn and improve and your verse tells the fact of you doing just that Dan - - instead of curling over in failure you have taken the way to the stars and won.
June 7th, 2019 10:18
Home is me
Neville said:
I bet there aint a single one of us who aint happy for ya... keep believing and write on....
Neville
June 7th, 2019 10:13
Neville said:
I bet there aint a single one of us who aint happy for ya... keep believing and write on....
Neville
June 7th, 2019 10:13
Home is me
dusk arising said:
\'That which does not kill you makes you stronger\'
You have gathered together the rocks through which you stumbled and fell and with them built a mountain from where you can see more clearly.
June 7th, 2019 03:23
dusk arising said:
\'That which does not kill you makes you stronger\'
You have gathered together the rocks through which you stumbled and fell and with them built a mountain from where you can see more clearly.
June 7th, 2019 03:23
Arm and a leg
Suresh said:
Yes, our actions have consequences
Thnx for reminding us in your poetic way
June 6th, 2019 13:54
Suresh said:
Yes, our actions have consequences
Thnx for reminding us in your poetic way
June 6th, 2019 13:54
Arm and a leg
orchidee said:
Yep, to be horribly pessimistic: The 3rd line near the end: \'No use getting up when you are down; give up, I say; makes sense to me!\' (heehee).
June 6th, 2019 07:20
orchidee said:
Yep, to be horribly pessimistic: The 3rd line near the end: \'No use getting up when you are down; give up, I say; makes sense to me!\' (heehee).
June 6th, 2019 07:20
Arm and a leg
Lorna said:
So funny - had me laughing out loud Dan........ especially the first one!
June 6th, 2019 04:07
Lorna said:
So funny - had me laughing out loud Dan........ especially the first one!
June 6th, 2019 04:07
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