Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan



All it took
Goldfinch60 said:

May that open heart remain that way to allow all the good in life into it.

June 25th, 2019 15:17

All it took
Neville said:

a splendid sentiment both penned and played to perfection......

Neville

June 25th, 2019 04:12

All it took
dusk arising said:

\"I once was lost but now am found, was blind but now i see\"

How perfectly appropriate.

\"Through many dangers, toils and snares I have already come;
\'Tis grace has brought me safe thus far. And grace will lead me home\"

Wonderful message for you, me and all in those finely penned lyrics.

June 25th, 2019 04:01

Let the spirit of your will drive your hope
Goldfinch60 said:

Full of positivesness Dan, keep on that track and all will be well.

June 25th, 2019 01:09

Let the spirit of your will drive your hope
kevin browne said:

4 keys to a word which I guess in anyone\'s life love has appeared, kept, lost and gone in a trillion directions per second. Where to begin to express your metaphors for the 4 letter word \'Love\'. To be honest I\'d probably be better off letting you do suss it out seeing you crafted such worlds. Well done, Poetic Dan.

June 24th, 2019 16:50

Let the spirit of your will drive your hope
Neville said:

You said it.. You wrote it..
All ya gotta do now is let yourself live it..... Neville

June 24th, 2019 12:35

Let the spirit of your will drive your hope
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

You should cos \"you\'re worth it\" to coin a phrase
Another Great Mantra for the day BRAVO

June 24th, 2019 11:07

Let the spirit of your will drive your hope
Fay Slimm. said:

A wonderfully positive last line which leaves all the forewords wrapped up in its truth - -- all who think this way will succeed my friend.

June 24th, 2019 11:04

Let the spirit of your will drive your hope
dusk arising said:

\"some people find that it\'s easier to hate than to wait anymore\".....

This Billy Joel album was one which meant a great deal to me as i was going thru the hell of divorce.

Similar to yourself, going through painful experiences in our lives expands our mind and teaches about the many forms love manifests itself in our life.

To find the partner described would be bliss. Some find it and have it taken from them. To be on the other side of that and remain positive... well, that\'s almost saintly.

June 24th, 2019 10:13

Let the spirit of your will drive your hope
marijoy said:

Wow! This is a beautiful words statement to begin a Monday. I love it. Believe and you create it. You will find the one.

June 24th, 2019 09:29

Confession
Goldfinch60 said:

Great positive write Dan, may your journey be filled with wonder.

June 24th, 2019 00:48

Confession
Neville said:

If ya don\'t let go.. ya never will know....

sometimes you just gotta do what yesterday you never thought was possible.............. Neville

June 23rd, 2019 17:12

Confession
Michael Edwards said:

You\'re looking forward to letting go of your own story ans writing about what is around you. That\'s when a good poet turns into a great poet and you sure are a good poet - keep writing.

June 23rd, 2019 14:28

Confession
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Great write Dan

June 23rd, 2019 07:33

Keep going
Goldfinch60 said:

That mask can hide the wonder of you from others and the wonder of others from you. Allare wonderful.

June 23rd, 2019 00:32

Keep going
FineB said:

Hello Poetic Dan,

An awesome write and ever so inspiring.

Keep writing FineB

June 22nd, 2019 16:39

Keep going
dusk arising said:

Oi!! thats cheating! This is one you wrote a while ago.... the idea was to use your \'todays\' frame of mind to write about other stuff.....
. nice try lol

June 22nd, 2019 13:35

Keep going
vvnrose said:

Keep on keeping on ;) encouragement is important. Thanks for sharing.

June 22nd, 2019 13:34

Keep going
orchidee said:

I\'ll blame you - I\'ll keep on singing then. Arrgghhh , they say! lol.

June 22nd, 2019 10:54

Keep going
Michael Edwards said:

Never avoid what life throws at you, eventually it will be a golden egg..

Nice one Dan.

June 22nd, 2019 08:10

Keep going
Suresh said:

NO CHOICE....
The very aspect of being born, is to live through whatever life throws at us, remembering that our actions have consequences, and as such our actions should be measured

June 22nd, 2019 07:50

If you come across
dusk arising said:

OK i\'m gonna change the subject for u. Have a week off and dont write about yourself for the following reason...... see what you learn about yourself by writing about other things or people.

WE are all creatures of mood and past.

June 21st, 2019 12:12

If you come across
Michael Edwards said:

Love the positivity - keep going Dan.

June 21st, 2019 10:25

If you come across
Fay Slimm. said:

A wonderfully refreshing read Dan - keep doing what you are doing and you will continue to adorn life\'s dream.

June 21st, 2019 03:46

If you come across
Neville said:

Write on, dream on brother....

June 21st, 2019 03:42

If you come across
Goldfinch60 said:

That dream will be successful for you Dan as the path that you have now found will lead you to joy and happiness.

June 21st, 2019 03:10

Blessed or cursed in giving all my worth
Michael Edwards said:

Keep travelling Dan - you\'re on the right path and the future is yours.

June 20th, 2019 12:53

Blessed or cursed in giving all my worth
Suresh said:

You have chosen your path, and the journey is yours to complete.
Yes, there will be hurdles in the way and moments will test your resolve, and you will waver a little but I am certain you can weather them all for your will shall always be strong

June 20th, 2019 12:20

Blessed or cursed in giving all my worth
Neville said:

without wanting to sound too twee.. a little bird hit the nail on the head with his comments here today.. keep moving up that wave into joy and love..... I know it is hard to be positive all the while.. in fact, it is probably impossible because stuff always comes along... but it also passes.... remember that... it also passes...... N

June 20th, 2019 09:19

Blessed or cursed in giving all my worth
dusk arising said:

Positivity wins every time - well done.

June 20th, 2019 08:04



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