Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Thanks for pushing me
dusk arising said:
Empathy, know what that is? Well youve got it in shedloads... thats how u relate to people so well. You\'ve been there, you\'ve lived it..... you didnt go to uni and learn all about it and get some letters after ya name to prove youre a qualified ex uni geek! ..... NO!.. for you, living it, without any choice, living it day to day every day - THAT taught you. And yeah, youre damned right. You are fully paid up, fuily qualified to do what the F u want to do innit?
Enjoyed reading your words today poet.
June 2nd, 2019 05:01
dusk arising said:
Empathy, know what that is? Well youve got it in shedloads... thats how u relate to people so well. You\'ve been there, you\'ve lived it..... you didnt go to uni and learn all about it and get some letters after ya name to prove youre a qualified ex uni geek! ..... NO!.. for you, living it, without any choice, living it day to day every day - THAT taught you. And yeah, youre damned right. You are fully paid up, fuily qualified to do what the F u want to do innit?
Enjoyed reading your words today poet.
June 2nd, 2019 05:01
Thanks for pushing me
Neville said:
maybe, you were not meant to sleep until you had got all this off ya chest... maybe it was just meant to be... whatever the case, you have certainly captured and penned some incredibly uplifting thoughts and insights.... a very interesting & indeed compelling read sir... good on ya.... Neville
June 2nd, 2019 04:36
Neville said:
maybe, you were not meant to sleep until you had got all this off ya chest... maybe it was just meant to be... whatever the case, you have certainly captured and penned some incredibly uplifting thoughts and insights.... a very interesting & indeed compelling read sir... good on ya.... Neville
June 2nd, 2019 04:36
4 years of sharing
dusk arising said:
Some are gone and some remain.
Some are quite missed. MPS has attracted some quite outstanding personalities in the time i have been posting here and you sir rank highly amongst those outstanding persons.
You always GIVE of yourself and in that amazingly humble way about you that you have.
Always good to read your words.
June 2nd, 2019 01:18
dusk arising said:
Some are gone and some remain.
Some are quite missed. MPS has attracted some quite outstanding personalities in the time i have been posting here and you sir rank highly amongst those outstanding persons.
You always GIVE of yourself and in that amazingly humble way about you that you have.
Always good to read your words.
June 2nd, 2019 01:18
4 years of sharing
orchidee said:
Good write Dan. Pity I been singing 4 years - seems like 400 years to everyone else! heehee.
June 1st, 2019 12:32
orchidee said:
Good write Dan. Pity I been singing 4 years - seems like 400 years to everyone else! heehee.
June 1st, 2019 12:32
4 years of sharing
Goldfinch60 said:
You have come a long way in those four years Dan and I am sure that you will go further into the light of your world.
June 1st, 2019 12:11
Goldfinch60 said:
You have come a long way in those four years Dan and I am sure that you will go further into the light of your world.
June 1st, 2019 12:11
In our own time
Goldfinch60 said:
This is the best thing you have written in my opinion. You now know that the light is there for you where once there was darkness, that light will never fail.
I do not say this very often but this poem is going into my favourites.
May 31st, 2019 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
This is the best thing you have written in my opinion. You now know that the light is there for you where once there was darkness, that light will never fail.
I do not say this very often but this poem is going into my favourites.
May 31st, 2019 01:36
In our own time
Michael Edwards said:
What a great uplifting read - good on yer Dan.
May 30th, 2019 13:40
Michael Edwards said:
What a great uplifting read - good on yer Dan.
May 30th, 2019 13:40
In our own time
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Just calling yourself a poet doesn\'t make you a poet
But you are one Dan
You have to write it\'s the ink coming out of your soul
There is poetical snobbery... But not amongst poets.
Great open hearted read Thank you for posting
May 30th, 2019 08:57
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Just calling yourself a poet doesn\'t make you a poet
But you are one Dan
You have to write it\'s the ink coming out of your soul
There is poetical snobbery... But not amongst poets.
Great open hearted read Thank you for posting
May 30th, 2019 08:57
In our own time
kevin browne said:
And, whilst in your own time. please don\'t stop writing such moving and sentimental poems such as this one. I\'ts difficult to let out and express your most inner, thoughtful and sorrowing pain within your own heart. I love you and the way you deal with life in such an inspiring way I can\'t help wanting more of your own dedication to writing such poems. Bring on the next one, brother poet.
May 30th, 2019 08:25
kevin browne said:
And, whilst in your own time. please don\'t stop writing such moving and sentimental poems such as this one. I\'ts difficult to let out and express your most inner, thoughtful and sorrowing pain within your own heart. I love you and the way you deal with life in such an inspiring way I can\'t help wanting more of your own dedication to writing such poems. Bring on the next one, brother poet.
May 30th, 2019 08:25
In our own time
dusk arising said:
I think those are your finest words Dan. Open and truthful and in contact with your genuine heartfelt feelings. What more could a poet be? What more could a poet ask of him/her self?
The world is your oyster.
May 30th, 2019 08:22
dusk arising said:
I think those are your finest words Dan. Open and truthful and in contact with your genuine heartfelt feelings. What more could a poet be? What more could a poet ask of him/her self?
The world is your oyster.
May 30th, 2019 08:22
Double lock the gate!
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Dan, may baby sparkle enjoy your words and love.
May 29th, 2019 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Dan, may baby sparkle enjoy your words and love.
May 29th, 2019 01:21
Double lock the gate!
AuburnScribbler said:
Very nice, lovely imagery, and a really good message about security.
Bravo!
May 28th, 2019 10:50
AuburnScribbler said:
Very nice, lovely imagery, and a really good message about security.
Bravo!
May 28th, 2019 10:50
Double lock the gate!
Suresh said:
There was a poem I made up with my grandson, I can\'t remember it all:
There was a monkey swinging in the window
And the window was open
The monkey went flying through the window
But his tail got caught in the jam
Kiddies rhymes are quirky but it\'s the laugh that follows which is fun. Have a lot of funny moments
May 28th, 2019 10:30
Suresh said:
There was a poem I made up with my grandson, I can\'t remember it all:
There was a monkey swinging in the window
And the window was open
The monkey went flying through the window
But his tail got caught in the jam
Kiddies rhymes are quirky but it\'s the laugh that follows which is fun. Have a lot of funny moments
May 28th, 2019 10:30
Double lock the gate!
dusk arising said:
All the cats in the grass
will stand up and smile
at the very first cry
from your newly born child
all those neighborhood dogs
will woof with delight
when youre pushing a pram
and stop you on sight
the birds up above
have a cunning wee plan
to sing every morning
for the children of Dan
the bees in the flowers
gonna buzz out a rap
for that lil girl blossom
or that lil boy chap
Dontcha just love kiddies rhymes.
Yours is a superb nonsense piece today.
May 28th, 2019 09:58
dusk arising said:
All the cats in the grass
will stand up and smile
at the very first cry
from your newly born child
all those neighborhood dogs
will woof with delight
when youre pushing a pram
and stop you on sight
the birds up above
have a cunning wee plan
to sing every morning
for the children of Dan
the bees in the flowers
gonna buzz out a rap
for that lil girl blossom
or that lil boy chap
Dontcha just love kiddies rhymes.
Yours is a superb nonsense piece today.
May 28th, 2019 09:58
A dog whisper not many know
kevin browne said:
Yes, and allow that return to balance and harmony may live on forever within your wonderful dogs life. A well versed poem to tribute to the art of loving a dog.
May 28th, 2019 04:26
kevin browne said:
Yes, and allow that return to balance and harmony may live on forever within your wonderful dogs life. A well versed poem to tribute to the art of loving a dog.
May 28th, 2019 04:26
A dog whisper not many know
Goldfinch60 said:
May your dream come to pass, I am sure it will your confidence and ability in life has changed so much to make you the positive person that you have now become.
May 28th, 2019 01:05
Goldfinch60 said:
May your dream come to pass, I am sure it will your confidence and ability in life has changed so much to make you the positive person that you have now become.
May 28th, 2019 01:05
A dog whisper not many know
Suresh said:
There is a saying \"one step at a time\", the courage is taking that first step. You know what you want to do,both at is the first step.
Wish you all the best.
May 27th, 2019 15:56
Suresh said:
There is a saying \"one step at a time\", the courage is taking that first step. You know what you want to do,both at is the first step.
Wish you all the best.
May 27th, 2019 15:56
A dog whisper not many know
Michael Edwards said:
Great read but I\'ll return when I have more time to give it more thought.
May 27th, 2019 13:06
Michael Edwards said:
Great read but I\'ll return when I have more time to give it more thought.
May 27th, 2019 13:06
A dog whisper not many know
Neville said:
a most interesting and revealing post.. Me and my dog Brulee wish you all the very best sir..... Neville
May 27th, 2019 09:33
Neville said:
a most interesting and revealing post.. Me and my dog Brulee wish you all the very best sir..... Neville
May 27th, 2019 09:33
A dog whisper not many know
dusk arising said:
Setting a target year is good and positive so long as you are mindful that there will be setbacks and falls along the way.I am not being negative, quite the opposite, being strong enough to ride the set backs is purely either in you or it aint. Be prepared.
I love dogs, theyre so easy to understand and can understand us easily too. I don\'t have dog with me because i could not give it the life it wants/needs. Often i will find myself working in a home where the pet dog is left home whilst owners out at work or worse i a bloody cage. I couldn\'t do either of those to my best friend. People treat them as if they can be switched on and off like a toy. Not my way at all.
May 27th, 2019 09:28
dusk arising said:
Setting a target year is good and positive so long as you are mindful that there will be setbacks and falls along the way.I am not being negative, quite the opposite, being strong enough to ride the set backs is purely either in you or it aint. Be prepared.
I love dogs, theyre so easy to understand and can understand us easily too. I don\'t have dog with me because i could not give it the life it wants/needs. Often i will find myself working in a home where the pet dog is left home whilst owners out at work or worse i a bloody cage. I couldn\'t do either of those to my best friend. People treat them as if they can be switched on and off like a toy. Not my way at all.
May 27th, 2019 09:28
Up to us to use what we see
Suresh said:
Your new found strength, will make you stay the course, with your help of course.
Blessings
May 26th, 2019 16:01
Suresh said:
Your new found strength, will make you stay the course, with your help of course.
Blessings
May 26th, 2019 16:01
Up to us to use what we see
Goldfinch60 said:
Dan, you have certainly moved on in your life and will continue so to do.
As for 3 am, that when I get the answers to many questions that I couldn’t remember during the day, my friends are not so keen when I rung them with the answer that early in the morning!
May 26th, 2019 15:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Dan, you have certainly moved on in your life and will continue so to do.
As for 3 am, that when I get the answers to many questions that I couldn’t remember during the day, my friends are not so keen when I rung them with the answer that early in the morning!
May 26th, 2019 15:25
Up to us to use what we see
dusk arising said:
Reading your comments, you do of course have great healing qualities. You set out searching for self healing, you found a possible route and embraced it. Still embracing it you will radiate the positivity you have inside you and talk wisely to those who carry a burden from negative experiences.
They will be seeing a genuine human who aint trying to sell them anything, nor preach.
You poem speaks of the genuine and \'real\' feelings person you are. Your kids understand why there are tears and you show them tears are OK and so is demonstrating love in many forms.
Hey what a superb example you are to them when you compare the example you experienced.
May 26th, 2019 08:10
dusk arising said:
Reading your comments, you do of course have great healing qualities. You set out searching for self healing, you found a possible route and embraced it. Still embracing it you will radiate the positivity you have inside you and talk wisely to those who carry a burden from negative experiences.
They will be seeing a genuine human who aint trying to sell them anything, nor preach.
You poem speaks of the genuine and \'real\' feelings person you are. Your kids understand why there are tears and you show them tears are OK and so is demonstrating love in many forms.
Hey what a superb example you are to them when you compare the example you experienced.
May 26th, 2019 08:10
Up to us to use what we see
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Great poem! Bravo 👏🏻!
I love the fact that you always speak from the heart. You’re absolutely right, it is “Up to us to use what we see”!
In your case, I know you’ll use whatever you see as a positive and make it a part of your being...and then so generously share it with us! You’re amazing! 😉
~Laura~🌻
May 26th, 2019 07:08
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Great poem! Bravo 👏🏻!
I love the fact that you always speak from the heart. You’re absolutely right, it is “Up to us to use what we see”!
In your case, I know you’ll use whatever you see as a positive and make it a part of your being...and then so generously share it with us! You’re amazing! 😉
~Laura~🌻
May 26th, 2019 07:08
Not my normal writing but neither is life
Goldfinch60 said:
Although sadness is within your words the new life brings light to our lives. New life will always be there for us all.
May 24th, 2019 23:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Although sadness is within your words the new life brings light to our lives. New life will always be there for us all.
May 24th, 2019 23:53
Not my normal writing but neither is life
Suresh said:
True empathy is rare indeed, that you have so truly expressed.
May 24th, 2019 10:34
Suresh said:
True empathy is rare indeed, that you have so truly expressed.
May 24th, 2019 10:34
Not my normal writing but neither is life
dusk arising said:
We really are existing in a continuum where death is as much a part of this as is life itself and the very creation of a living being.
What you describe is i think life reaffirming the continuum in your understanding. Something we all need to experience regularly. I think that experience encourages us to love, love and love all around us.
Your words today are full of it.
May 24th, 2019 07:43
dusk arising said:
We really are existing in a continuum where death is as much a part of this as is life itself and the very creation of a living being.
What you describe is i think life reaffirming the continuum in your understanding. Something we all need to experience regularly. I think that experience encourages us to love, love and love all around us.
Your words today are full of it.
May 24th, 2019 07:43
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