Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan



Not my normal writing but neither is life
Laura🌻 said:

Dan,

New life, new hope!

That is an extraordinary video!
Thank you for sharing!

~Laura~🌻

May 24th, 2019 04:47

Not my normal writing but neither is life
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Makes you feel small LIFE!
Great captured day Dan
Thanks for sharing very moving
Enjoy what you have of it

May 24th, 2019 04:39

Not my normal writing but neither is life
orchidee said:

A fine write Dan. I was never normal, even on \'normal\' days! heehee. Well, I kept singing, and ruined every day. Why? Cos it was ME singing. A form of torture to have to hear it. lol.

May 24th, 2019 03:18

Little lights blessing
Goldfinch60 said:

Such a sad occasion, the grief you feel is understandable. Losing somebody before their time is so hard.
Thinking of you.

May 24th, 2019 00:36

Little lights blessing
E-Poems said:

This is beautifully written. Sending love~ E

May 23rd, 2019 13:18

Little lights blessing
Suresh said:

We suffer the pain of those we loose, for we are emotional beings after all, and in that spirit I add my sympathy along with others.

Maybe another day I\'ll share my feelings on death itself

May 23rd, 2019 09:32

Little lights blessing
Fay Slimm. said:

A grief shared is somehow not halved but helped for those having to live with its power. Heartfelt sympathy to all who will feel such a loss.

May 23rd, 2019 08:16

Little lights blessing
dusk arising said:

Life is cruel and death is a thief when arriving out of time.
Grief is a powerful emotion which must out. No words ever compensate and i will not try.
In sympathy.

May 23rd, 2019 03:55

Little lights blessing
orchidee said:

I can only imagine the pain of it all. A sensitive write Dan.

May 23rd, 2019 03:18

Words left hanging
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true Dan, appreciation of life can take you so very far into glory.

May 23rd, 2019 00:12

Words left hanging
dusk arising said:

If i wish the world to love my offspring am i guilty of deluding myself that the world is really capable of love in the first place.

May 22nd, 2019 11:36

Words left hanging
Michael Edwards said:

Hear hear.

Where?

Greta stuff da

May 22nd, 2019 11:20

Words left hanging
Suresh said:

We are all the epicenter of our universe, from where are attributes ripple outwards.
Nicely portrayed

May 22nd, 2019 11:12

Epilogue
Neville said:

although it is often considered a cliche .. it helps if you at least like yourself, at least some of the time....nice words and then some ... Neville

May 22nd, 2019 11:07

Words left hanging
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Before you can be loved you must love yourself?
Easier said than done
Great piece Dan

May 22nd, 2019 11:04

Words left hanging
Fay Slimm. said:

Loud applause for the wonderful ly positive words topped by colourful graphics which gave me a smile.... you are going far in the poetry world my friend.

May 22nd, 2019 09:05

Words left hanging
Neville said:

Thank the floop for Facebook then...

Nice little post this sir... and true.. Be happy... Neville

May 22nd, 2019 09:00

The Gnome knows
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful write and those three words are so meaningful.

May 22nd, 2019 00:37

The Gnome knows
Suresh said:

Your words and your pic really invoke a million thoughts.
Isn\'t it amazing when words freely flow, and that\'s poetry.
So well written,

May 21st, 2019 11:45

The Gnome knows
Neville said:

gnome ention of the elves, pixies or fairies.... but never mind, this is just about perfect as it is....... Neville

May 21st, 2019 08:33

The Gnome knows
dusk arising said:

I used to have a gnome but he buggered off after some swine pinched his fishing rod.
He was always complaining anyway because he never had any luck with birds. \"They just shit on me every time\" he said.


May 21st, 2019 07:29

The Gnome knows
orchidee said:

A fine write Dan.

May 21st, 2019 06:28

The Gnome knows
Michael Edwards said:

A real gem of a write PD - you\'ve triggered an idea for one of my own.

May 21st, 2019 06:15

Epilogue
Goldfinch60 said:

The light in your life is now there for us all to see.

May 21st, 2019 01:00

Epilogue
Suresh said:

.... and the flowers are starting to bloom.
Continue on this journey, the road is getting easier to travel

May 20th, 2019 10:53

Epilogue
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

We need to change the saying to:

Everything comes to those whom can bear the wait

Excellent Dan BRAVO and I totally agree, everyday needs a rhyme to be...

May 20th, 2019 07:31

Epilogue
dusk arising said:

Everyday is followed by a rhyme. Monday is followed by Tuesday... they rhyme... OK its a bit of a cop out but.... a rhyme.

Best i can do is point you at something i published on here in June of last year entitled \"through tears\".
Here\'s a link
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-97439


May 20th, 2019 04:33

Epilogue
Michael Edwards said:

A delight of a read - I don\'t mind missing out on rhyme but poetry per se is a must.

May 20th, 2019 03:53

Before 40 I\'m building a starship
Neville said:

This is bloomin brilliant PD and yes, you should be proud.... I think you have come a long way in those 38 years and although you have further to go... I sincerely hope you build your starship and any other dreams you may harbour... Forgiveness is such a special gift.. I am glad you found you had it within you to offer it... Neville

May 20th, 2019 03:31

Before 40 I\'m building a starship
Goldfinch60 said:

Each new challenge is part of experience and your challenges have each been face and overcome with the strength within you, the one ahead will be less challenging and life will be wonderful.
\"Live long and prosper\".

May 20th, 2019 00:25



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