Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Double lock the gate!
AuburnScribbler said:
Very nice, lovely imagery, and a really good message about security.
Bravo!
May 28th, 2019 10:50
AuburnScribbler said:
Very nice, lovely imagery, and a really good message about security.
Bravo!
May 28th, 2019 10:50
Double lock the gate!
Suresh said:
There was a poem I made up with my grandson, I can\'t remember it all:
There was a monkey swinging in the window
And the window was open
The monkey went flying through the window
But his tail got caught in the jam
Kiddies rhymes are quirky but it\'s the laugh that follows which is fun. Have a lot of funny moments
May 28th, 2019 10:30
Suresh said:
There was a poem I made up with my grandson, I can\'t remember it all:
There was a monkey swinging in the window
And the window was open
The monkey went flying through the window
But his tail got caught in the jam
Kiddies rhymes are quirky but it\'s the laugh that follows which is fun. Have a lot of funny moments
May 28th, 2019 10:30
Double lock the gate!
dusk arising said:
All the cats in the grass
will stand up and smile
at the very first cry
from your newly born child
all those neighborhood dogs
will woof with delight
when youre pushing a pram
and stop you on sight
the birds up above
have a cunning wee plan
to sing every morning
for the children of Dan
the bees in the flowers
gonna buzz out a rap
for that lil girl blossom
or that lil boy chap
Dontcha just love kiddies rhymes.
Yours is a superb nonsense piece today.
May 28th, 2019 09:58
dusk arising said:
All the cats in the grass
will stand up and smile
at the very first cry
from your newly born child
all those neighborhood dogs
will woof with delight
when youre pushing a pram
and stop you on sight
the birds up above
have a cunning wee plan
to sing every morning
for the children of Dan
the bees in the flowers
gonna buzz out a rap
for that lil girl blossom
or that lil boy chap
Dontcha just love kiddies rhymes.
Yours is a superb nonsense piece today.
May 28th, 2019 09:58
A dog whisper not many know
kevin browne said:
Yes, and allow that return to balance and harmony may live on forever within your wonderful dogs life. A well versed poem to tribute to the art of loving a dog.
May 28th, 2019 04:26
kevin browne said:
Yes, and allow that return to balance and harmony may live on forever within your wonderful dogs life. A well versed poem to tribute to the art of loving a dog.
May 28th, 2019 04:26
A dog whisper not many know
Goldfinch60 said:
May your dream come to pass, I am sure it will your confidence and ability in life has changed so much to make you the positive person that you have now become.
May 28th, 2019 01:05
Goldfinch60 said:
May your dream come to pass, I am sure it will your confidence and ability in life has changed so much to make you the positive person that you have now become.
May 28th, 2019 01:05
A dog whisper not many know
Suresh said:
There is a saying \"one step at a time\", the courage is taking that first step. You know what you want to do,both at is the first step.
Wish you all the best.
May 27th, 2019 15:56
Suresh said:
There is a saying \"one step at a time\", the courage is taking that first step. You know what you want to do,both at is the first step.
Wish you all the best.
May 27th, 2019 15:56
A dog whisper not many know
Michael Edwards said:
Great read but I\'ll return when I have more time to give it more thought.
May 27th, 2019 13:06
Michael Edwards said:
Great read but I\'ll return when I have more time to give it more thought.
May 27th, 2019 13:06
A dog whisper not many know
Neville said:
a most interesting and revealing post.. Me and my dog Brulee wish you all the very best sir..... Neville
May 27th, 2019 09:33
Neville said:
a most interesting and revealing post.. Me and my dog Brulee wish you all the very best sir..... Neville
May 27th, 2019 09:33
A dog whisper not many know
dusk arising said:
Setting a target year is good and positive so long as you are mindful that there will be setbacks and falls along the way.I am not being negative, quite the opposite, being strong enough to ride the set backs is purely either in you or it aint. Be prepared.
I love dogs, theyre so easy to understand and can understand us easily too. I don\'t have dog with me because i could not give it the life it wants/needs. Often i will find myself working in a home where the pet dog is left home whilst owners out at work or worse i a bloody cage. I couldn\'t do either of those to my best friend. People treat them as if they can be switched on and off like a toy. Not my way at all.
May 27th, 2019 09:28
dusk arising said:
Setting a target year is good and positive so long as you are mindful that there will be setbacks and falls along the way.I am not being negative, quite the opposite, being strong enough to ride the set backs is purely either in you or it aint. Be prepared.
I love dogs, theyre so easy to understand and can understand us easily too. I don\'t have dog with me because i could not give it the life it wants/needs. Often i will find myself working in a home where the pet dog is left home whilst owners out at work or worse i a bloody cage. I couldn\'t do either of those to my best friend. People treat them as if they can be switched on and off like a toy. Not my way at all.
May 27th, 2019 09:28
Up to us to use what we see
Suresh said:
Your new found strength, will make you stay the course, with your help of course.
Blessings
May 26th, 2019 16:01
Suresh said:
Your new found strength, will make you stay the course, with your help of course.
Blessings
May 26th, 2019 16:01
Up to us to use what we see
Goldfinch60 said:
Dan, you have certainly moved on in your life and will continue so to do.
As for 3 am, that when I get the answers to many questions that I couldn’t remember during the day, my friends are not so keen when I rung them with the answer that early in the morning!
May 26th, 2019 15:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Dan, you have certainly moved on in your life and will continue so to do.
As for 3 am, that when I get the answers to many questions that I couldn’t remember during the day, my friends are not so keen when I rung them with the answer that early in the morning!
May 26th, 2019 15:25
Up to us to use what we see
dusk arising said:
Reading your comments, you do of course have great healing qualities. You set out searching for self healing, you found a possible route and embraced it. Still embracing it you will radiate the positivity you have inside you and talk wisely to those who carry a burden from negative experiences.
They will be seeing a genuine human who aint trying to sell them anything, nor preach.
You poem speaks of the genuine and \'real\' feelings person you are. Your kids understand why there are tears and you show them tears are OK and so is demonstrating love in many forms.
Hey what a superb example you are to them when you compare the example you experienced.
May 26th, 2019 08:10
dusk arising said:
Reading your comments, you do of course have great healing qualities. You set out searching for self healing, you found a possible route and embraced it. Still embracing it you will radiate the positivity you have inside you and talk wisely to those who carry a burden from negative experiences.
They will be seeing a genuine human who aint trying to sell them anything, nor preach.
You poem speaks of the genuine and \'real\' feelings person you are. Your kids understand why there are tears and you show them tears are OK and so is demonstrating love in many forms.
Hey what a superb example you are to them when you compare the example you experienced.
May 26th, 2019 08:10
Up to us to use what we see
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Great poem! Bravo 👏🏻!
I love the fact that you always speak from the heart. You’re absolutely right, it is “Up to us to use what we see”!
In your case, I know you’ll use whatever you see as a positive and make it a part of your being...and then so generously share it with us! You’re amazing! 😉
~Laura~🌻
May 26th, 2019 07:08
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Great poem! Bravo 👏🏻!
I love the fact that you always speak from the heart. You’re absolutely right, it is “Up to us to use what we see”!
In your case, I know you’ll use whatever you see as a positive and make it a part of your being...and then so generously share it with us! You’re amazing! 😉
~Laura~🌻
May 26th, 2019 07:08
Not my normal writing but neither is life
Goldfinch60 said:
Although sadness is within your words the new life brings light to our lives. New life will always be there for us all.
May 24th, 2019 23:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Although sadness is within your words the new life brings light to our lives. New life will always be there for us all.
May 24th, 2019 23:53
Not my normal writing but neither is life
Suresh said:
True empathy is rare indeed, that you have so truly expressed.
May 24th, 2019 10:34
Suresh said:
True empathy is rare indeed, that you have so truly expressed.
May 24th, 2019 10:34
Not my normal writing but neither is life
dusk arising said:
We really are existing in a continuum where death is as much a part of this as is life itself and the very creation of a living being.
What you describe is i think life reaffirming the continuum in your understanding. Something we all need to experience regularly. I think that experience encourages us to love, love and love all around us.
Your words today are full of it.
May 24th, 2019 07:43
dusk arising said:
We really are existing in a continuum where death is as much a part of this as is life itself and the very creation of a living being.
What you describe is i think life reaffirming the continuum in your understanding. Something we all need to experience regularly. I think that experience encourages us to love, love and love all around us.
Your words today are full of it.
May 24th, 2019 07:43
Not my normal writing but neither is life
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
New life, new hope!
That is an extraordinary video!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~🌻
May 24th, 2019 04:47
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
New life, new hope!
That is an extraordinary video!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~🌻
May 24th, 2019 04:47
Not my normal writing but neither is life
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Makes you feel small LIFE!
Great captured day Dan
Thanks for sharing very moving
Enjoy what you have of it
May 24th, 2019 04:39
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Makes you feel small LIFE!
Great captured day Dan
Thanks for sharing very moving
Enjoy what you have of it
May 24th, 2019 04:39
Not my normal writing but neither is life
orchidee said:
A fine write Dan. I was never normal, even on \'normal\' days! heehee. Well, I kept singing, and ruined every day. Why? Cos it was ME singing. A form of torture to have to hear it. lol.
May 24th, 2019 03:18
orchidee said:
A fine write Dan. I was never normal, even on \'normal\' days! heehee. Well, I kept singing, and ruined every day. Why? Cos it was ME singing. A form of torture to have to hear it. lol.
May 24th, 2019 03:18
Little lights blessing
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a sad occasion, the grief you feel is understandable. Losing somebody before their time is so hard.
Thinking of you.
May 24th, 2019 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a sad occasion, the grief you feel is understandable. Losing somebody before their time is so hard.
Thinking of you.
May 24th, 2019 00:36
Little lights blessing
E-Poems said:
This is beautifully written. Sending love~ E
May 23rd, 2019 13:18
E-Poems said:
This is beautifully written. Sending love~ E
May 23rd, 2019 13:18
Little lights blessing
Suresh said:
We suffer the pain of those we loose, for we are emotional beings after all, and in that spirit I add my sympathy along with others.
Maybe another day I\'ll share my feelings on death itself
May 23rd, 2019 09:32
Suresh said:
We suffer the pain of those we loose, for we are emotional beings after all, and in that spirit I add my sympathy along with others.
Maybe another day I\'ll share my feelings on death itself
May 23rd, 2019 09:32
Little lights blessing
Fay Slimm. said:
A grief shared is somehow not halved but helped for those having to live with its power. Heartfelt sympathy to all who will feel such a loss.
May 23rd, 2019 08:16
Fay Slimm. said:
A grief shared is somehow not halved but helped for those having to live with its power. Heartfelt sympathy to all who will feel such a loss.
May 23rd, 2019 08:16
Little lights blessing
dusk arising said:
Life is cruel and death is a thief when arriving out of time.
Grief is a powerful emotion which must out. No words ever compensate and i will not try.
In sympathy.
May 23rd, 2019 03:55
dusk arising said:
Life is cruel and death is a thief when arriving out of time.
Grief is a powerful emotion which must out. No words ever compensate and i will not try.
In sympathy.
May 23rd, 2019 03:55
Little lights blessing
orchidee said:
I can only imagine the pain of it all. A sensitive write Dan.
May 23rd, 2019 03:18
orchidee said:
I can only imagine the pain of it all. A sensitive write Dan.
May 23rd, 2019 03:18
Words left hanging
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Dan, appreciation of life can take you so very far into glory.
May 23rd, 2019 00:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Dan, appreciation of life can take you so very far into glory.
May 23rd, 2019 00:12
Words left hanging
dusk arising said:
If i wish the world to love my offspring am i guilty of deluding myself that the world is really capable of love in the first place.
May 22nd, 2019 11:36
dusk arising said:
If i wish the world to love my offspring am i guilty of deluding myself that the world is really capable of love in the first place.
May 22nd, 2019 11:36
Words left hanging
Suresh said:
We are all the epicenter of our universe, from where are attributes ripple outwards.
Nicely portrayed
May 22nd, 2019 11:12
Suresh said:
We are all the epicenter of our universe, from where are attributes ripple outwards.
Nicely portrayed
May 22nd, 2019 11:12
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