Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
A rhyme is a rhyme
FineB said:
Thank you Poetic Dan.
A good write.
You have captured the essence of a poem and what makes a poet a poet.
Keep writing
FineB
May 17th, 2019 03:41
FineB said:
Thank you Poetic Dan.
A good write.
You have captured the essence of a poem and what makes a poet a poet.
Keep writing
FineB
May 17th, 2019 03:41
A rhyme is a rhyme
orchidee said:
Must I always insist on rhyming in my poems? lol. Well, not always. I do some ad libbing too, more sort of prose thingys at times
May 17th, 2019 02:21
orchidee said:
Must I always insist on rhyming in my poems? lol. Well, not always. I do some ad libbing too, more sort of prose thingys at times
May 17th, 2019 02:21
Selfhood
Goldfinch60 said:
Over the time that I have been reading your poems you have come such a long way and are arriving at your Nirvana. May that peace within always be with you.
May 17th, 2019 00:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Over the time that I have been reading your poems you have come such a long way and are arriving at your Nirvana. May that peace within always be with you.
May 17th, 2019 00:14
Selfhood
Suresh said:
The key teaching of Buddha was - to walk the middle path and avoid extremes of all kind.
Your surroundings are at PEACE AND HARMONY, when you are at PEACE AND HARMONY.
Your writings show your true intent, so I am in support of you all the way
May 16th, 2019 11:40
Suresh said:
The key teaching of Buddha was - to walk the middle path and avoid extremes of all kind.
Your surroundings are at PEACE AND HARMONY, when you are at PEACE AND HARMONY.
Your writings show your true intent, so I am in support of you all the way
May 16th, 2019 11:40
Selfhood
Fay Slimm. said:
Powerful truths and beautifully written - a memorable read Dan.
May 16th, 2019 10:44
Fay Slimm. said:
Powerful truths and beautifully written - a memorable read Dan.
May 16th, 2019 10:44
Selfhood
dusk arising said:
Oh so very true. You have mined deep into yourself to find those words and from my experience not everyone will understand because few CAN go that deep. In my opinion you achieve a different mental state when coming to reason like this. Unfortunately, writing it down doesn\'t work in that mental state very well.
Those words accompanying your picture today are so true.
You are already there Dan. Perfect solutions don\'t exist. Compromise wins the day. Every day.
May 16th, 2019 07:10
dusk arising said:
Oh so very true. You have mined deep into yourself to find those words and from my experience not everyone will understand because few CAN go that deep. In my opinion you achieve a different mental state when coming to reason like this. Unfortunately, writing it down doesn\'t work in that mental state very well.
Those words accompanying your picture today are so true.
You are already there Dan. Perfect solutions don\'t exist. Compromise wins the day. Every day.
May 16th, 2019 07:10
Watering Can
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write with a deeper meaning, many can be watering cans who bring fresh life to others.
May 16th, 2019 00:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write with a deeper meaning, many can be watering cans who bring fresh life to others.
May 16th, 2019 00:18
Watering Can
Suresh said:
This one is on a much lighter side
Some pings and pangs there and there, but still on a much lighter side.
Enjoyable read
May 15th, 2019 10:20
Suresh said:
This one is on a much lighter side
Some pings and pangs there and there, but still on a much lighter side.
Enjoyable read
May 15th, 2019 10:20
Watering Can
Lorna said:
Delightfully zany Dan although there is a deeper sadder meaning here. I loved it. Funny too because Rain and Water seem to be the theme today for a few of us....... Brave little watering can!
May 15th, 2019 05:05
Lorna said:
Delightfully zany Dan although there is a deeper sadder meaning here. I loved it. Funny too because Rain and Water seem to be the theme today for a few of us....... Brave little watering can!
May 15th, 2019 05:05
Watering Can
dusk arising said:
I thought i should write u some prose
All about the new garden hose
It\'s a real upsetter
cos he waters much better
he refreshingly easily flows
but dont be dismayed Mr Dan
theres other uses fer a watering can
since it\'s been very loyal
you could fill it with soil
and plants like a nursery man
May 15th, 2019 03:29
dusk arising said:
I thought i should write u some prose
All about the new garden hose
It\'s a real upsetter
cos he waters much better
he refreshingly easily flows
but dont be dismayed Mr Dan
theres other uses fer a watering can
since it\'s been very loyal
you could fill it with soil
and plants like a nursery man
May 15th, 2019 03:29
Back to fun, my ships are done
Goldfinch60 said:
Your ship is sailing into the new harbour of you life where the light abounds.
May 14th, 2019 23:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Your ship is sailing into the new harbour of you life where the light abounds.
May 14th, 2019 23:59
Back to fun, my ships are done
Nafis Light said:
I like that picture. It\'s the kind of photos/design that reminds me of a clown or a circus.
May 14th, 2019 09:02
Nafis Light said:
I like that picture. It\'s the kind of photos/design that reminds me of a clown or a circus.
May 14th, 2019 09:02
Back to fun, my ships are done
dusk arising said:
When ya chips are done its time to smile at the missus and tuck in....wheres the ketchup...what? ay?... ships? SHIPS? what?
Jeez thats spoiled it, lost my appetite now.
Twas on the good ship Venus .. by george you should have......
.... the cabin boys name was chipper, dirty little nipper... he stuffed his arse with broken glass and circumcised the skipper
May 14th, 2019 08:01
dusk arising said:
When ya chips are done its time to smile at the missus and tuck in....wheres the ketchup...what? ay?... ships? SHIPS? what?
Jeez thats spoiled it, lost my appetite now.
Twas on the good ship Venus .. by george you should have......
.... the cabin boys name was chipper, dirty little nipper... he stuffed his arse with broken glass and circumcised the skipper
May 14th, 2019 08:01
Back to fun, my ships are done
Lorna said:
And you are the Captain of your Starship Dan...............
May 14th, 2019 04:54
Lorna said:
And you are the Captain of your Starship Dan...............
May 14th, 2019 04:54
Back to fun, my ships are done
Michael Edwards said:
Great format well worked - yes they keep all things afloat amidship.
May 14th, 2019 03:18
Michael Edwards said:
Great format well worked - yes they keep all things afloat amidship.
May 14th, 2019 03:18
Back to fun, my ships are done
kevin browne said:
A combonation of some well picked words put together quite nicely.
Wel done and thanks for sharing.
May 14th, 2019 03:12
kevin browne said:
A combonation of some well picked words put together quite nicely.
Wel done and thanks for sharing.
May 14th, 2019 03:12
Second letter to my younger self
dusk arising said:
I guess life is a series of phases we enter slowly and before we realise it they are gone and the next is under our feet.
Careful not to build hopes too high for a happy tomorrow. Life\'s a beach and the tide always wins. Go with the flow.
May 14th, 2019 01:15
dusk arising said:
I guess life is a series of phases we enter slowly and before we realise it they are gone and the next is under our feet.
Careful not to build hopes too high for a happy tomorrow. Life\'s a beach and the tide always wins. Go with the flow.
May 14th, 2019 01:15
Second letter to my younger self
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. That light is there for us all and recently it has been getting so much brighter for you.
May 14th, 2019 00:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. That light is there for us all and recently it has been getting so much brighter for you.
May 14th, 2019 00:14
Second letter to my younger self
Suresh said:
Life is different shades of grey, that gives image it\'s character. It\'s how we deal with these shades of grey,but hat gives our life it\'s character, hoping, like you said, with more lighter shades than darker.
May 13th, 2019 22:49
Suresh said:
Life is different shades of grey, that gives image it\'s character. It\'s how we deal with these shades of grey,but hat gives our life it\'s character, hoping, like you said, with more lighter shades than darker.
May 13th, 2019 22:49
Second letter to my younger self
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
True wise word Dan well penned
May 13th, 2019 06:06
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
True wise word Dan well penned
May 13th, 2019 06:06
Worth
Lorna said:
Hi Dan - and in the end we know what we have really earned don\'t we. Don\'t need big signs from other people and there\'s no lying to ourselves.
May 13th, 2019 04:03
Lorna said:
Hi Dan - and in the end we know what we have really earned don\'t we. Don\'t need big signs from other people and there\'s no lying to ourselves.
May 13th, 2019 04:03
Worth
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Dan, I too am s step dad and have been for nearly forty years, I am her dad and have been for most of them, our journey as Dad and Daughter is wonderful.
May 13th, 2019 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Dan, I too am s step dad and have been for nearly forty years, I am her dad and have been for most of them, our journey as Dad and Daughter is wonderful.
May 13th, 2019 00:27
Worth
dusk arising said:
I\'ll quote to you words of Rudyard Kipling
\"If you can meet with Triumph and Disaster
And treat those two impostors just the same;
If you can bear to hear the truth you\'ve spoken
Twisted by knaves to make a trap for fools,
Or watch the things you gave your life to, broken,
And stoop and build \'em up with worn-out tools: \"
\"Yours is the Earth and everything that\'s in it,
And - which is more - you\'ll be a Man, my son!\"
An amazing poet who has versed what i\'m thinking with finer words than i can muster for you here today Dan.
From your own comments \"Some treasure you will keep, where no one can reach and not even we can throw it away\".... I\'d like to keep those words in my favourites - sincerely.
May 12th, 2019 14:01
dusk arising said:
I\'ll quote to you words of Rudyard Kipling
\"If you can meet with Triumph and Disaster
And treat those two impostors just the same;
If you can bear to hear the truth you\'ve spoken
Twisted by knaves to make a trap for fools,
Or watch the things you gave your life to, broken,
And stoop and build \'em up with worn-out tools: \"
\"Yours is the Earth and everything that\'s in it,
And - which is more - you\'ll be a Man, my son!\"
An amazing poet who has versed what i\'m thinking with finer words than i can muster for you here today Dan.
From your own comments \"Some treasure you will keep, where no one can reach and not even we can throw it away\".... I\'d like to keep those words in my favourites - sincerely.
May 12th, 2019 14:01
11 years of absorbing, thank you to all
kevin browne said:
Words have been overflowing with pure delight within the metophor used. The combination of thoughs and real, collective and well placed on to paper. Great work, brother and thanks for letting us read your most inner preivetly and secure wisdome you have shown.
May 12th, 2019 13:22
kevin browne said:
Words have been overflowing with pure delight within the metophor used. The combination of thoughs and real, collective and well placed on to paper. Great work, brother and thanks for letting us read your most inner preivetly and secure wisdome you have shown.
May 12th, 2019 13:22
Worth
Suresh said:
The responsibility you willingly take-on now
It front of it, the your past will forever bow.
Well expressed
May 12th, 2019 12:39
Suresh said:
The responsibility you willingly take-on now
It front of it, the your past will forever bow.
Well expressed
May 12th, 2019 12:39
Worth
kevin browne said:
On form again, Dan. This made me think of that after everything you have ever wanted and 100 times more then what else is there left for these people left to do. Thye haven\'t had time to educate themselves, they just tend to gravitate to where the money, the bright lights in the city and anything else they can get. I beileve poets do the exactly the same thing but with the thoughts inside his head, heart and soul and is noe possible to turn them into words which a million pound wouldn\'t buy. You have what cannot be taken away and that\'s our thoughts. You\'ve captured those moments brillintly. Good work, my friend.
May 12th, 2019 11:41
kevin browne said:
On form again, Dan. This made me think of that after everything you have ever wanted and 100 times more then what else is there left for these people left to do. Thye haven\'t had time to educate themselves, they just tend to gravitate to where the money, the bright lights in the city and anything else they can get. I beileve poets do the exactly the same thing but with the thoughts inside his head, heart and soul and is noe possible to turn them into words which a million pound wouldn\'t buy. You have what cannot be taken away and that\'s our thoughts. You\'ve captured those moments brillintly. Good work, my friend.
May 12th, 2019 11:41
Worth
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent Dan
great wise words
Right feels right
May 12th, 2019 06:58
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent Dan
great wise words
Right feels right
May 12th, 2019 06:58
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