Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
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Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
I enjoyed reading this poem!
I sense much positivity threaded within!
Like a baby learning to walk...
...one step at a time...
From the crawling lane...
to the stand up lane...
to the running lane!
We’re all there to cheer you on ...
and if you should stumble,
...DO NOT FEAR...
we’re here to help you up!
Nothing to fear!
You’ll be just fine!
~Laura-~
February 24th, 2019 16:51
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
I enjoyed reading this poem!
I sense much positivity threaded within!
Like a baby learning to walk...
...one step at a time...
From the crawling lane...
to the stand up lane...
to the running lane!
We’re all there to cheer you on ...
and if you should stumble,
...DO NOT FEAR...
we’re here to help you up!
Nothing to fear!
You’ll be just fine!
~Laura-~
February 24th, 2019 16:51
Blink of an eye
Goldfinch60 said:
The time ahead of you may be a struggle but each hill climbed, each corner turned and each door opened will lead you to the light of experience which opens up your wonderful world in front of you.
February 21st, 2019 02:02
Goldfinch60 said:
The time ahead of you may be a struggle but each hill climbed, each corner turned and each door opened will lead you to the light of experience which opens up your wonderful world in front of you.
February 21st, 2019 02:02
Blink of an eye
dusk arising said:
Is it right to listen to the heart and mind. ??? You pose as a question here.
You\'ve discovered there is a poet in you. And a very truthful, sincere soul shines out of your writing. Writing worth reading and learning from.... learning from a man who is so sincere he exposes his frailty to us readers. That in itself is a lesson in humanity.
You, me, and most others here have no option but to listen to our hearts and minds. See my poem today Dan.... it\'s what you are... it\'s what you do.... and you do it well.
February 20th, 2019 13:36
dusk arising said:
Is it right to listen to the heart and mind. ??? You pose as a question here.
You\'ve discovered there is a poet in you. And a very truthful, sincere soul shines out of your writing. Writing worth reading and learning from.... learning from a man who is so sincere he exposes his frailty to us readers. That in itself is a lesson in humanity.
You, me, and most others here have no option but to listen to our hearts and minds. See my poem today Dan.... it\'s what you are... it\'s what you do.... and you do it well.
February 20th, 2019 13:36
Blink of an eye
Neville said:
almost anything can happen in the blink of an eye.. I could feel the pain .. glad I stopped here for a while tho... N
February 20th, 2019 13:07
Neville said:
almost anything can happen in the blink of an eye.. I could feel the pain .. glad I stopped here for a while tho... N
February 20th, 2019 13:07
Blink of an eye
sylviasearcher said:
A reality I just cannot drift
I felt this piece and so did my car and my sodden sleeve 😢
Don’t slip through 🌟
February 20th, 2019 11:06
sylviasearcher said:
A reality I just cannot drift
I felt this piece and so did my car and my sodden sleeve 😢
Don’t slip through 🌟
February 20th, 2019 11:06
If you see it! Nudge it back my way
Goldfinch60 said:
May that space be continually filled with your wonderful words Dan.
February 13th, 2019 15:54
Goldfinch60 said:
May that space be continually filled with your wonderful words Dan.
February 13th, 2019 15:54
If you see it! Nudge it back my way
dusk arising said:
Now this is you at your poetic best Dan. Your last line is worthy of a piece all its own..... it is a line for us all to think about... again and again.
February 13th, 2019 14:04
dusk arising said:
Now this is you at your poetic best Dan. Your last line is worthy of a piece all its own..... it is a line for us all to think about... again and again.
February 13th, 2019 14:04
A few words for my lady
Neville said:
I have never found it easy reciting any of my work in public.. to attempt it on camera, is almost impossible to comprehend.. and here is a guy who is quite used to talking for hours on end in front of several hundred people... So for the simple fact you did something I would not even attempt, and you did it so well, I salute you sir.... I also thought your poem was a great way to demonstrate your depth of feeling for another.... peace and all good things, Neville
February 11th, 2019 09:48
Neville said:
I have never found it easy reciting any of my work in public.. to attempt it on camera, is almost impossible to comprehend.. and here is a guy who is quite used to talking for hours on end in front of several hundred people... So for the simple fact you did something I would not even attempt, and you did it so well, I salute you sir.... I also thought your poem was a great way to demonstrate your depth of feeling for another.... peace and all good things, Neville
February 11th, 2019 09:48
Sunday rhythm & breeze
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Dan, wlaking with Nature is so wonderful and it does \'entertain any mood\'.
February 11th, 2019 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Dan, wlaking with Nature is so wonderful and it does \'entertain any mood\'.
February 11th, 2019 01:47
Sunday rhythm & breeze
dusk arising said:
Great observational piece with lifestyle message.
February 10th, 2019 09:45
dusk arising said:
Great observational piece with lifestyle message.
February 10th, 2019 09:45
Sunday rhythm & breeze
orchidee said:
A fine write Dan. Them dog noses are more sensitive than ours, we know.
February 10th, 2019 08:54
orchidee said:
A fine write Dan. Them dog noses are more sensitive than ours, we know.
February 10th, 2019 08:54
Come give a cheer!
Neville said:
how wonderful a read was that.. you just filled a grey day with a kaleidoscope of colour... thank you brightly, Neville
February 10th, 2019 05:56
Neville said:
how wonderful a read was that.. you just filled a grey day with a kaleidoscope of colour... thank you brightly, Neville
February 10th, 2019 05:56
Come give a cheer!
dusk arising said:
This is a light fun read. I have no idea what marbleympics is all about but it deffo seems you had a lot of fun with it.
February 9th, 2019 09:17
dusk arising said:
This is a light fun read. I have no idea what marbleympics is all about but it deffo seems you had a lot of fun with it.
February 9th, 2019 09:17
Come give a cheer!
Seek said:
Peace and love. We can never have enough of a good thing. Thanks for sharing your noble sentiments.
February 9th, 2019 07:25
Seek said:
Peace and love. We can never have enough of a good thing. Thanks for sharing your noble sentiments.
February 9th, 2019 07:25
I have it, they have it and so do you!
Caleb.A said:
Well written Dan, reminding us all of the power we posses!
February 8th, 2019 10:26
Caleb.A said:
Well written Dan, reminding us all of the power we posses!
February 8th, 2019 10:26
I have it, they have it and so do you!
Lorna said:
Doesn\'t matter what country - the mess is everywhere and I agree, we have to be rebels........
February 8th, 2019 07:13
Lorna said:
Doesn\'t matter what country - the mess is everywhere and I agree, we have to be rebels........
February 8th, 2019 07:13
I have it, they have it and so do you!
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Dan and so true, we should follow the ways within us that we know to be right.
February 8th, 2019 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Dan and so true, we should follow the ways within us that we know to be right.
February 8th, 2019 01:23
I have it, they have it and so do you!
psychofemale said:
I loved this, the last lines especially. great read :) thanks for sharing it with us
February 7th, 2019 20:42
psychofemale said:
I loved this, the last lines especially. great read :) thanks for sharing it with us
February 7th, 2019 20:42
I have it, they have it and so do you!
dusk arising said:
I love those last two lines. Im that rebel who lives within the rules but flouts them when i can get away with it.
Yes those rules were written by \'nature\' long before a man tried out new ones, long before they invented religion to scare people into submission, long before we clothed ourselves with civilisation.
Hey i\'ve got a huge white van. You\'ve given me ideas with that picture.
February 7th, 2019 16:15
dusk arising said:
I love those last two lines. Im that rebel who lives within the rules but flouts them when i can get away with it.
Yes those rules were written by \'nature\' long before a man tried out new ones, long before they invented religion to scare people into submission, long before we clothed ourselves with civilisation.
Hey i\'ve got a huge white van. You\'ve given me ideas with that picture.
February 7th, 2019 16:15
Letting the darkness out
Goldfinch60 said:
That darkness does not last and the ligh will soon be with you Dan.
February 6th, 2019 15:50
Goldfinch60 said:
That darkness does not last and the ligh will soon be with you Dan.
February 6th, 2019 15:50
Letting the darkness out
sylviasearcher said:
That\'s what I always tell myself.
This moment will pass.
Hold on tight.
Take a deep breath and let the wave wash over you 🖤
February 6th, 2019 11:50
sylviasearcher said:
That\'s what I always tell myself.
This moment will pass.
Hold on tight.
Take a deep breath and let the wave wash over you 🖤
February 6th, 2019 11:50
Letting the darkness out
Neville said:
Hang on to that insight my friend.. yes of course it will pass, it sometimes helps tho to be reminded of that doesn\'t it... keep jotting stuff down too.. writing can be an extremely powerful self help intervention and help to lift us up....You express yourself very well here in your poem Letting the Darkness Out.... Neville
February 6th, 2019 11:46
Neville said:
Hang on to that insight my friend.. yes of course it will pass, it sometimes helps tho to be reminded of that doesn\'t it... keep jotting stuff down too.. writing can be an extremely powerful self help intervention and help to lift us up....You express yourself very well here in your poem Letting the Darkness Out.... Neville
February 6th, 2019 11:46
Letting the darkness out
orchidee said:
Well, I\'m worn out! I been trying to break out of my shell; get myself out of this hole I\'m in; pull my socks up and get on with things; stop crying over spilt milk; etc. By the time I\'ve done all that, there\'s no time for anything else. lol.
February 6th, 2019 10:48
orchidee said:
Well, I\'m worn out! I been trying to break out of my shell; get myself out of this hole I\'m in; pull my socks up and get on with things; stop crying over spilt milk; etc. By the time I\'ve done all that, there\'s no time for anything else. lol.
February 6th, 2019 10:48
Many thoughts kept and lost
Lorna said:
Oh the safer place inside us! When we can master the attitudes which you show us above..... be safe today Dan!
February 6th, 2019 07:18
Lorna said:
Oh the safer place inside us! When we can master the attitudes which you show us above..... be safe today Dan!
February 6th, 2019 07:18
Many thoughts kept and lost
sylviasearcher said:
Hey Dan, I think it did flow indeed as one. The thoughts like a journey of discovery on my mind with the vision of a safe place.
A place to just be. However that may come. And to accept.
It gave me a little spark of hopefulness this morning! 🌟
February 6th, 2019 02:29
sylviasearcher said:
Hey Dan, I think it did flow indeed as one. The thoughts like a journey of discovery on my mind with the vision of a safe place.
A place to just be. However that may come. And to accept.
It gave me a little spark of hopefulness this morning! 🌟
February 6th, 2019 02:29
Many thoughts kept and lost
dusk arising said:
The essence of the words of Desiderata come to mind again reading your words Dan.....
... for you are a child of the universe with as much right to be here as the stars and the trees....
February 6th, 2019 01:30
dusk arising said:
The essence of the words of Desiderata come to mind again reading your words Dan.....
... for you are a child of the universe with as much right to be here as the stars and the trees....
February 6th, 2019 01:30
Many thoughts kept and lost
Seek said:
A poem that speaks of one totally at home with oneself and unashamedly candid with potential spoilers. Wisdom so direct. Enjoyed this immensely!
February 5th, 2019 19:52
Seek said:
A poem that speaks of one totally at home with oneself and unashamedly candid with potential spoilers. Wisdom so direct. Enjoyed this immensely!
February 5th, 2019 19:52
Many thoughts kept and lost
kevin browne said:
Absolutely loving your poetic genius. You always deliver that\'s a certainty. Great stuff, Dan.
February 5th, 2019 18:36
kevin browne said:
Absolutely loving your poetic genius. You always deliver that\'s a certainty. Great stuff, Dan.
February 5th, 2019 18:36
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