Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Sunday rhythm & breeze
dusk arising said:
Great observational piece with lifestyle message.
February 10th, 2019 09:45
dusk arising said:
Great observational piece with lifestyle message.
February 10th, 2019 09:45
Sunday rhythm & breeze
orchidee said:
A fine write Dan. Them dog noses are more sensitive than ours, we know.
February 10th, 2019 08:54
orchidee said:
A fine write Dan. Them dog noses are more sensitive than ours, we know.
February 10th, 2019 08:54
Come give a cheer!
Neville said:
how wonderful a read was that.. you just filled a grey day with a kaleidoscope of colour... thank you brightly, Neville
February 10th, 2019 05:56
Neville said:
how wonderful a read was that.. you just filled a grey day with a kaleidoscope of colour... thank you brightly, Neville
February 10th, 2019 05:56
Come give a cheer!
dusk arising said:
This is a light fun read. I have no idea what marbleympics is all about but it deffo seems you had a lot of fun with it.
February 9th, 2019 09:17
dusk arising said:
This is a light fun read. I have no idea what marbleympics is all about but it deffo seems you had a lot of fun with it.
February 9th, 2019 09:17
Come give a cheer!
Seek said:
Peace and love. We can never have enough of a good thing. Thanks for sharing your noble sentiments.
February 9th, 2019 07:25
Seek said:
Peace and love. We can never have enough of a good thing. Thanks for sharing your noble sentiments.
February 9th, 2019 07:25
I have it, they have it and so do you!
Caleb.A said:
Well written Dan, reminding us all of the power we posses!
February 8th, 2019 10:26
Caleb.A said:
Well written Dan, reminding us all of the power we posses!
February 8th, 2019 10:26
I have it, they have it and so do you!
Lorna said:
Doesn\'t matter what country - the mess is everywhere and I agree, we have to be rebels........
February 8th, 2019 07:13
Lorna said:
Doesn\'t matter what country - the mess is everywhere and I agree, we have to be rebels........
February 8th, 2019 07:13
I have it, they have it and so do you!
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Dan and so true, we should follow the ways within us that we know to be right.
February 8th, 2019 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Dan and so true, we should follow the ways within us that we know to be right.
February 8th, 2019 01:23
I have it, they have it and so do you!
psychofemale said:
I loved this, the last lines especially. great read :) thanks for sharing it with us
February 7th, 2019 20:42
psychofemale said:
I loved this, the last lines especially. great read :) thanks for sharing it with us
February 7th, 2019 20:42
I have it, they have it and so do you!
dusk arising said:
I love those last two lines. Im that rebel who lives within the rules but flouts them when i can get away with it.
Yes those rules were written by \'nature\' long before a man tried out new ones, long before they invented religion to scare people into submission, long before we clothed ourselves with civilisation.
Hey i\'ve got a huge white van. You\'ve given me ideas with that picture.
February 7th, 2019 16:15
dusk arising said:
I love those last two lines. Im that rebel who lives within the rules but flouts them when i can get away with it.
Yes those rules were written by \'nature\' long before a man tried out new ones, long before they invented religion to scare people into submission, long before we clothed ourselves with civilisation.
Hey i\'ve got a huge white van. You\'ve given me ideas with that picture.
February 7th, 2019 16:15
Letting the darkness out
Goldfinch60 said:
That darkness does not last and the ligh will soon be with you Dan.
February 6th, 2019 15:50
Goldfinch60 said:
That darkness does not last and the ligh will soon be with you Dan.
February 6th, 2019 15:50
Letting the darkness out
sylviasearcher said:
That\'s what I always tell myself.
This moment will pass.
Hold on tight.
Take a deep breath and let the wave wash over you 🖤
February 6th, 2019 11:50
sylviasearcher said:
That\'s what I always tell myself.
This moment will pass.
Hold on tight.
Take a deep breath and let the wave wash over you 🖤
February 6th, 2019 11:50
Letting the darkness out
Neville said:
Hang on to that insight my friend.. yes of course it will pass, it sometimes helps tho to be reminded of that doesn\'t it... keep jotting stuff down too.. writing can be an extremely powerful self help intervention and help to lift us up....You express yourself very well here in your poem Letting the Darkness Out.... Neville
February 6th, 2019 11:46
Neville said:
Hang on to that insight my friend.. yes of course it will pass, it sometimes helps tho to be reminded of that doesn\'t it... keep jotting stuff down too.. writing can be an extremely powerful self help intervention and help to lift us up....You express yourself very well here in your poem Letting the Darkness Out.... Neville
February 6th, 2019 11:46
Letting the darkness out
orchidee said:
Well, I\'m worn out! I been trying to break out of my shell; get myself out of this hole I\'m in; pull my socks up and get on with things; stop crying over spilt milk; etc. By the time I\'ve done all that, there\'s no time for anything else. lol.
February 6th, 2019 10:48
orchidee said:
Well, I\'m worn out! I been trying to break out of my shell; get myself out of this hole I\'m in; pull my socks up and get on with things; stop crying over spilt milk; etc. By the time I\'ve done all that, there\'s no time for anything else. lol.
February 6th, 2019 10:48
Many thoughts kept and lost
Lorna said:
Oh the safer place inside us! When we can master the attitudes which you show us above..... be safe today Dan!
February 6th, 2019 07:18
Lorna said:
Oh the safer place inside us! When we can master the attitudes which you show us above..... be safe today Dan!
February 6th, 2019 07:18
Many thoughts kept and lost
sylviasearcher said:
Hey Dan, I think it did flow indeed as one. The thoughts like a journey of discovery on my mind with the vision of a safe place.
A place to just be. However that may come. And to accept.
It gave me a little spark of hopefulness this morning! 🌟
February 6th, 2019 02:29
sylviasearcher said:
Hey Dan, I think it did flow indeed as one. The thoughts like a journey of discovery on my mind with the vision of a safe place.
A place to just be. However that may come. And to accept.
It gave me a little spark of hopefulness this morning! 🌟
February 6th, 2019 02:29
Many thoughts kept and lost
dusk arising said:
The essence of the words of Desiderata come to mind again reading your words Dan.....
... for you are a child of the universe with as much right to be here as the stars and the trees....
February 6th, 2019 01:30
dusk arising said:
The essence of the words of Desiderata come to mind again reading your words Dan.....
... for you are a child of the universe with as much right to be here as the stars and the trees....
February 6th, 2019 01:30
Many thoughts kept and lost
Seek said:
A poem that speaks of one totally at home with oneself and unashamedly candid with potential spoilers. Wisdom so direct. Enjoyed this immensely!
February 5th, 2019 19:52
Seek said:
A poem that speaks of one totally at home with oneself and unashamedly candid with potential spoilers. Wisdom so direct. Enjoyed this immensely!
February 5th, 2019 19:52
Many thoughts kept and lost
kevin browne said:
Absolutely loving your poetic genius. You always deliver that\'s a certainty. Great stuff, Dan.
February 5th, 2019 18:36
kevin browne said:
Absolutely loving your poetic genius. You always deliver that\'s a certainty. Great stuff, Dan.
February 5th, 2019 18:36
Many thoughts kept and lost
Neville said:
My pleasure and back at you my friend... Neville
February 5th, 2019 12:51
Neville said:
My pleasure and back at you my friend... Neville
February 5th, 2019 12:51
Many thoughts kept and lost
Neville said:
you are clearly most poetically prolific.. I have been tempted to post more than one poem to a page, just to get around the one post per day ruling... I know others do it so hey, why not... Neville
February 5th, 2019 11:07
Neville said:
you are clearly most poetically prolific.. I have been tempted to post more than one poem to a page, just to get around the one post per day ruling... I know others do it so hey, why not... Neville
February 5th, 2019 11:07
We are all on this show
Reyas said:
Been a couple months but here I return to such an amazing and thoughtful poem from you like always. This definitely will give me something to think about.
January 19th, 2019 22:38
Reyas said:
Been a couple months but here I return to such an amazing and thoughtful poem from you like always. This definitely will give me something to think about.
January 19th, 2019 22:38
Its never empty!
Goldfinch60 said:
The mind can be the most powerful thing to resurrect you, just think of the good in your life and look to the future that that good will do for you.
January 16th, 2019 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
The mind can be the most powerful thing to resurrect you, just think of the good in your life and look to the future that that good will do for you.
January 16th, 2019 01:25
Its never empty!
Fay Slimm. said:
I once read Dan that the mind has power but not over will - there is a lot of food for thought in this well crafted piece of work.
January 15th, 2019 13:31
Fay Slimm. said:
I once read Dan that the mind has power but not over will - there is a lot of food for thought in this well crafted piece of work.
January 15th, 2019 13:31
We are all on this show
dusk arising said:
Where ya been? Somewhere nicer than where u were before thats for sure!
Salt of the earth... me and you and all of us. (especially dogs who show us genuine emotions).
Its a mad crazy beautiful mixed up world which can individually take us quite a while to start enjoying. But the show must go on.
January 14th, 2019 18:41
dusk arising said:
Where ya been? Somewhere nicer than where u were before thats for sure!
Salt of the earth... me and you and all of us. (especially dogs who show us genuine emotions).
Its a mad crazy beautiful mixed up world which can individually take us quite a while to start enjoying. But the show must go on.
January 14th, 2019 18:41
We are all on this show
orchidee said:
You mean the 15 minutes of fame on telly, that we all supposedly have?! heehee.
January 14th, 2019 05:12
orchidee said:
You mean the 15 minutes of fame on telly, that we all supposedly have?! heehee.
January 14th, 2019 05:12
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