Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Many thoughts kept and lost
dusk arising said:
The essence of the words of Desiderata come to mind again reading your words Dan.....
... for you are a child of the universe with as much right to be here as the stars and the trees....
February 6th, 2019 01:30
dusk arising said:
The essence of the words of Desiderata come to mind again reading your words Dan.....
... for you are a child of the universe with as much right to be here as the stars and the trees....
February 6th, 2019 01:30
Many thoughts kept and lost
Seek said:
A poem that speaks of one totally at home with oneself and unashamedly candid with potential spoilers. Wisdom so direct. Enjoyed this immensely!
February 5th, 2019 19:52
Seek said:
A poem that speaks of one totally at home with oneself and unashamedly candid with potential spoilers. Wisdom so direct. Enjoyed this immensely!
February 5th, 2019 19:52
Many thoughts kept and lost
kevin browne said:
Absolutely loving your poetic genius. You always deliver that\'s a certainty. Great stuff, Dan.
February 5th, 2019 18:36
kevin browne said:
Absolutely loving your poetic genius. You always deliver that\'s a certainty. Great stuff, Dan.
February 5th, 2019 18:36
Many thoughts kept and lost
Neville said:
My pleasure and back at you my friend... Neville
February 5th, 2019 12:51
Neville said:
My pleasure and back at you my friend... Neville
February 5th, 2019 12:51
Many thoughts kept and lost
Neville said:
you are clearly most poetically prolific.. I have been tempted to post more than one poem to a page, just to get around the one post per day ruling... I know others do it so hey, why not... Neville
February 5th, 2019 11:07
Neville said:
you are clearly most poetically prolific.. I have been tempted to post more than one poem to a page, just to get around the one post per day ruling... I know others do it so hey, why not... Neville
February 5th, 2019 11:07
We are all on this show
Reyas said:
Been a couple months but here I return to such an amazing and thoughtful poem from you like always. This definitely will give me something to think about.
January 19th, 2019 22:38
Reyas said:
Been a couple months but here I return to such an amazing and thoughtful poem from you like always. This definitely will give me something to think about.
January 19th, 2019 22:38
Its never empty!
Goldfinch60 said:
The mind can be the most powerful thing to resurrect you, just think of the good in your life and look to the future that that good will do for you.
January 16th, 2019 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
The mind can be the most powerful thing to resurrect you, just think of the good in your life and look to the future that that good will do for you.
January 16th, 2019 01:25
Its never empty!
Fay Slimm. said:
I once read Dan that the mind has power but not over will - there is a lot of food for thought in this well crafted piece of work.
January 15th, 2019 13:31
Fay Slimm. said:
I once read Dan that the mind has power but not over will - there is a lot of food for thought in this well crafted piece of work.
January 15th, 2019 13:31
We are all on this show
dusk arising said:
Where ya been? Somewhere nicer than where u were before thats for sure!
Salt of the earth... me and you and all of us. (especially dogs who show us genuine emotions).
Its a mad crazy beautiful mixed up world which can individually take us quite a while to start enjoying. But the show must go on.
January 14th, 2019 18:41
dusk arising said:
Where ya been? Somewhere nicer than where u were before thats for sure!
Salt of the earth... me and you and all of us. (especially dogs who show us genuine emotions).
Its a mad crazy beautiful mixed up world which can individually take us quite a while to start enjoying. But the show must go on.
January 14th, 2019 18:41
We are all on this show
orchidee said:
You mean the 15 minutes of fame on telly, that we all supposedly have?! heehee.
January 14th, 2019 05:12
orchidee said:
You mean the 15 minutes of fame on telly, that we all supposedly have?! heehee.
January 14th, 2019 05:12
Recovery rhyme and to thank all of life
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Dan, we all write for differing reasons and get our words on the page is so important - and wonderful.
January 11th, 2019 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Dan, we all write for differing reasons and get our words on the page is so important - and wonderful.
January 11th, 2019 01:36
Recovery rhyme and to thank all of life
Fay Slimm. said:
Fine write Dan -- a writer\'s passion needs an outlet for as this verse states the result is a flow towards consciousness - worth all the efforts of yielding methinks. Great read.
January 10th, 2019 17:04
Fay Slimm. said:
Fine write Dan -- a writer\'s passion needs an outlet for as this verse states the result is a flow towards consciousness - worth all the efforts of yielding methinks. Great read.
January 10th, 2019 17:04
Recovery rhyme and to thank all of life
Netashi said:
Twas a great write and rhythm and beat was top notch as were the words. Keep up the great work.
- T
January 10th, 2019 14:35
Netashi said:
Twas a great write and rhythm and beat was top notch as were the words. Keep up the great work.
- T
January 10th, 2019 14:35
Rebuilding outside and in
poetboy123 said:
Dan, I am extremely sorry to hear that you\'re not doing well, but I also can\'t help but admiring the positivity you tap into when running into a wall. It\'s just another wall for you to overcome, I wish you the best.
January 9th, 2019 20:29
poetboy123 said:
Dan, I am extremely sorry to hear that you\'re not doing well, but I also can\'t help but admiring the positivity you tap into when running into a wall. It\'s just another wall for you to overcome, I wish you the best.
January 9th, 2019 20:29
Rebuilding outside and in
Goldfinch60 said:
Such painful words, you have seen a way forward though so move forward in the new freedom that you have found.
January 8th, 2019 15:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Such painful words, you have seen a way forward though so move forward in the new freedom that you have found.
January 8th, 2019 15:26
A few words for my lady
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Dan, may you life continue to be filled with love.
December 31st, 2018 02:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Dan, may you life continue to be filled with love.
December 31st, 2018 02:00
Little dog poem and his song
Goldfinch60 said:
It is amazing how dogs can calm the worries in our lives.
December 12th, 2018 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
It is amazing how dogs can calm the worries in our lives.
December 12th, 2018 01:40
Malfunctioning
Goldfinch60 said:
The end of one show only clears the way for the show that is always with us and will be there for eternity. Keep looking at that light, it will guide you along the right path.
December 11th, 2018 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
The end of one show only clears the way for the show that is always with us and will be there for eternity. Keep looking at that light, it will guide you along the right path.
December 11th, 2018 01:22
Malfunctioning
Fay Slimm. said:
Correction to this amazing write - your show can still go on my friend - on and on............. and on. An excellent piece of rhyme.
December 10th, 2018 11:39
Fay Slimm. said:
Correction to this amazing write - your show can still go on my friend - on and on............. and on. An excellent piece of rhyme.
December 10th, 2018 11:39
Malfunctioning
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Your honesty is admirable!
You did it your way, but it’s NOT
“the end of the show”!
You’re in control! Your show will go on the way you want it to. You love life! You will get through the rough patches! I repeat...YOU’RE IN CONTROL!
You WILL go on!
~Laura~
December 10th, 2018 11:16
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Your honesty is admirable!
You did it your way, but it’s NOT
“the end of the show”!
You’re in control! Your show will go on the way you want it to. You love life! You will get through the rough patches! I repeat...YOU’RE IN CONTROL!
You WILL go on!
~Laura~
December 10th, 2018 11:16
Faith lost then returned like a boomerang
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A wonderful story poem that proves there are Devils and angels amongst us but let\'s live on and appreciate the Good Samaritans and mortal saviours in order to thank God for life. I liked the nice way you reflect and conclude positively. Kudos.
Pleez do add your thoughts/comment/review under my newest poem too. Always nice to say hi to all here via comments.
December 6th, 2018 03:35
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A wonderful story poem that proves there are Devils and angels amongst us but let\'s live on and appreciate the Good Samaritans and mortal saviours in order to thank God for life. I liked the nice way you reflect and conclude positively. Kudos.
Pleez do add your thoughts/comment/review under my newest poem too. Always nice to say hi to all here via comments.
December 6th, 2018 03:35
Faith lost then returned like a boomerang
Goldfinch60 said:
May your days become wonderful as you travel through your life.
December 5th, 2018 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
May your days become wonderful as you travel through your life.
December 5th, 2018 01:13
Faith lost then returned like a boomerang
Fay Slimm. said:
This read brought me to compassionate tears Dan - - your outlook after that awful happening is what learning forgiveness is all about -- and that wonderful phrase \" my faith was restored by one single act\" puts kindness where it belongs as our lift toward hoping that lost souls \"will understand what truly living life is like\" Love will win out with reminders that not all are in darkness as honesty and playing fair still mean much to the many dear friend..Thanks so much for sharing such challenges with us .
December 4th, 2018 14:19
Fay Slimm. said:
This read brought me to compassionate tears Dan - - your outlook after that awful happening is what learning forgiveness is all about -- and that wonderful phrase \" my faith was restored by one single act\" puts kindness where it belongs as our lift toward hoping that lost souls \"will understand what truly living life is like\" Love will win out with reminders that not all are in darkness as honesty and playing fair still mean much to the many dear friend..Thanks so much for sharing such challenges with us .
December 4th, 2018 14:19
Faith lost then returned like a boomerang
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Reading this write made me feel sad about what happened last night! Then I read the words...
“my faith was restored by one single act.”
I am so happy your faith in humanity was restored by that one act of kindness! That’s all it takes...ONE ACT OF KINDNESS! You recognized that act of kindness of being genuine and unconditional! There are and will be many people who’ll realize and acknowledge your kind and unselfish heart! In that darkness that you feel at times, the light is always there for you!
Great choice of pic with a super message...
Live,
Be honest,
Love,
Play fair!
You are all of the above...and more!
~Laura~
December 4th, 2018 12:32
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Reading this write made me feel sad about what happened last night! Then I read the words...
“my faith was restored by one single act.”
I am so happy your faith in humanity was restored by that one act of kindness! That’s all it takes...ONE ACT OF KINDNESS! You recognized that act of kindness of being genuine and unconditional! There are and will be many people who’ll realize and acknowledge your kind and unselfish heart! In that darkness that you feel at times, the light is always there for you!
Great choice of pic with a super message...
Live,
Be honest,
Love,
Play fair!
You are all of the above...and more!
~Laura~
December 4th, 2018 12:32
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