Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Father & lover I should need be no other
Goldfinch60 said:
That future is progressing in a wonderful way in you life Dan, look forward to your wonderful life.
March 14th, 2019 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
That future is progressing in a wonderful way in you life Dan, look forward to your wonderful life.
March 14th, 2019 01:15
Father & lover I should need be no other
dusk arising said:
I think you know where i\'m coming from on this sort of stuff before i say anything. You is you and there\'s no one else like you. Same for everyone else. And you\'ve as much right to be whatever you are as anyone else has.
Advice? my advice would be... smile lots.... dont bash your head jumping through van windows... and be positive..... nuff said?
Mines a pint.
March 13th, 2019 12:59
dusk arising said:
I think you know where i\'m coming from on this sort of stuff before i say anything. You is you and there\'s no one else like you. Same for everyone else. And you\'ve as much right to be whatever you are as anyone else has.
Advice? my advice would be... smile lots.... dont bash your head jumping through van windows... and be positive..... nuff said?
Mines a pint.
March 13th, 2019 12:59
Father & lover I should need be no other
orchidee said:
And now a spurious saying not to be taken on board: \'When one door opens, another one slams in ya face!\' heehee.
March 13th, 2019 10:46
orchidee said:
And now a spurious saying not to be taken on board: \'When one door opens, another one slams in ya face!\' heehee.
March 13th, 2019 10:46
Father & lover I should need be no other
Nicholas Browning said:
I do enjoy the message. Keep the future in mind but not at the cost of the happiness you currently have. My dad always used to say, \"The more you laugh the longer you live.\" Maybe he\'s right though.
Another thing to add, a saying I came up with when I was younger. \"Never give up silver for a chance to find gold.\" That pertains to the aspect of enjoying your happiness that you mentioned. I really like this one, Dan. Keep your chin up, and best regards in your endeavor to maintain that balance.
March 13th, 2019 05:22
Nicholas Browning said:
I do enjoy the message. Keep the future in mind but not at the cost of the happiness you currently have. My dad always used to say, \"The more you laugh the longer you live.\" Maybe he\'s right though.
Another thing to add, a saying I came up with when I was younger. \"Never give up silver for a chance to find gold.\" That pertains to the aspect of enjoying your happiness that you mentioned. I really like this one, Dan. Keep your chin up, and best regards in your endeavor to maintain that balance.
March 13th, 2019 05:22
Everywhere I look around
dusk arising said:
Nuts to everything, spring is in the air .... and you have loadsa life and verve in ya to really enjoy it.
I really sense in you that the cloak under which your thoughts have struggled over the years is something you have come to terms with and can now wear as a medal of honour only you know is there. Now you know your worth and how your troubles have given you strength.
Go forth, now in your prime of manhood, and bloody well enjoy life M8.... you deserve to... so get on with it !!!
March 13th, 2019 04:37
dusk arising said:
Nuts to everything, spring is in the air .... and you have loadsa life and verve in ya to really enjoy it.
I really sense in you that the cloak under which your thoughts have struggled over the years is something you have come to terms with and can now wear as a medal of honour only you know is there. Now you know your worth and how your troubles have given you strength.
Go forth, now in your prime of manhood, and bloody well enjoy life M8.... you deserve to... so get on with it !!!
March 13th, 2019 04:37
Everywhere I look around
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write, that wind is a little breezy is it not?
March 13th, 2019 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write, that wind is a little breezy is it not?
March 13th, 2019 01:43
Everywhere I look around
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - - you describe the wind\'s naughtiest tricks in this bit of Springtime - fun - thanks Dan.
March 12th, 2019 06:48
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - - you describe the wind\'s naughtiest tricks in this bit of Springtime - fun - thanks Dan.
March 12th, 2019 06:48
You never forget
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words show how far you have now come in your life, the misery is behind you and you are going towards the light of your life. Well done.
March 12th, 2019 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words show how far you have now come in your life, the misery is behind you and you are going towards the light of your life. Well done.
March 12th, 2019 01:27
You never forget
dusk arising said:
I guess our pain teaches us a lot. Knowing a pain that is a cold shudder within us and ever ready to slap us down. An innocent comment in a conversation can rip into us, wanting to run, hide, but cant, not socially acceptable, brave face, false face... then later, alone with fear, humiliation, and shame, self hate, disgust.
See it in another, understand, encourage.
A negative becomes a positive. Suffering put to good use.
March 11th, 2019 14:25
dusk arising said:
I guess our pain teaches us a lot. Knowing a pain that is a cold shudder within us and ever ready to slap us down. An innocent comment in a conversation can rip into us, wanting to run, hide, but cant, not socially acceptable, brave face, false face... then later, alone with fear, humiliation, and shame, self hate, disgust.
See it in another, understand, encourage.
A negative becomes a positive. Suffering put to good use.
March 11th, 2019 14:25
You never forget
Fay Slimm. said:
Writing it through means our mind can accept and move on as yours is doing dear Dan - - - may all your tomorrows be tear-free and happy now this is outed .
March 11th, 2019 13:39
Fay Slimm. said:
Writing it through means our mind can accept and move on as yours is doing dear Dan - - - may all your tomorrows be tear-free and happy now this is outed .
March 11th, 2019 13:39
You never forget
orchidee said:
Ohh all ya needs to do to cheer up is jump in that car again a few times, as in the clip the other day. I\'m gonna try that ya know. I will probably make a blunder of it. heehee.
March 11th, 2019 04:05
orchidee said:
Ohh all ya needs to do to cheer up is jump in that car again a few times, as in the clip the other day. I\'m gonna try that ya know. I will probably make a blunder of it. heehee.
March 11th, 2019 04:05
Leaving our marks
Goldfinch60 said:
The words that we write on the page come from our souls and can be so meaningful.
March 11th, 2019 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
The words that we write on the page come from our souls and can be so meaningful.
March 11th, 2019 01:22
Leaving our marks
Fay Slimm. said:
Leaving behind words will assure our memory stays in readers\' minds and hearts - a good reminder Dan.
March 10th, 2019 06:09
Fay Slimm. said:
Leaving behind words will assure our memory stays in readers\' minds and hearts - a good reminder Dan.
March 10th, 2019 06:09
Leaving our marks
JaydeVictoria said:
Exactly mirrors my thoughts about poetry and the site, wonderful read Poetic Dan :)
March 10th, 2019 06:08
JaydeVictoria said:
Exactly mirrors my thoughts about poetry and the site, wonderful read Poetic Dan :)
March 10th, 2019 06:08
Leaving our marks
Neville said:
I guess our poetry is part of the DNA footprint or trail we leave behind.. at least I would like to think so...... N
March 10th, 2019 05:48
Neville said:
I guess our poetry is part of the DNA footprint or trail we leave behind.. at least I would like to think so...... N
March 10th, 2019 05:48
Scooby snack!
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Dan and good to read.
Never tried that, I have enough trouble getting in the car when the door is open!
March 10th, 2019 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Dan and good to read.
Never tried that, I have enough trouble getting in the car when the door is open!
March 10th, 2019 01:12
Scooby snack!
orchidee said:
Hey, should I try that? And you eating dog biscuits? Scooby snacks. lol.
March 9th, 2019 12:02
orchidee said:
Hey, should I try that? And you eating dog biscuits? Scooby snacks. lol.
March 9th, 2019 12:02
Scooby snack!
Neville said:
this is and that was pretty neat.. but hey.. here\'s a guy that thinks splat windowed frogs are cute too .... N )
March 9th, 2019 11:43
Neville said:
this is and that was pretty neat.. but hey.. here\'s a guy that thinks splat windowed frogs are cute too .... N )
March 9th, 2019 11:43
Don\'t be forgotten
Goldfinch60 said:
Words on the page can rid oneself of so many bad thoughts.
March 9th, 2019 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Words on the page can rid oneself of so many bad thoughts.
March 9th, 2019 01:24
Don\'t be forgotten
Neville said:
Poet\'s heal thy selves, or so the saying almost goes, or would that be better with a bit of prose... I dunno but I do know that if we get the chance to help some one else, then we maybe outa do it... Nice one Dan .....
March 8th, 2019 14:07
Neville said:
Poet\'s heal thy selves, or so the saying almost goes, or would that be better with a bit of prose... I dunno but I do know that if we get the chance to help some one else, then we maybe outa do it... Nice one Dan .....
March 8th, 2019 14:07
Don\'t be forgotten
Michael Edwards said:
Words are the staff of all intellectual endeavour no matter what levels we reach - just spit them out.
March 8th, 2019 08:30
Michael Edwards said:
Words are the staff of all intellectual endeavour no matter what levels we reach - just spit them out.
March 8th, 2019 08:30
Don\'t be forgotten
Fay Slimm. said:
A sound and good reason for taking up words and making them work for our sadness or rage - - long live the healing in poetry Dan - thanks a lot for voicing this need.
March 8th, 2019 08:17
Fay Slimm. said:
A sound and good reason for taking up words and making them work for our sadness or rage - - long live the healing in poetry Dan - thanks a lot for voicing this need.
March 8th, 2019 08:17
Don\'t be forgotten
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
were you possibly inspired by my writing \"im no longer important to anyone anymore\"?
March 8th, 2019 07:57
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
were you possibly inspired by my writing \"im no longer important to anyone anymore\"?
March 8th, 2019 07:57
Don\'t be forgotten
orchidee said:
So you remembered some words, for this poem! heehee.
March 8th, 2019 05:02
orchidee said:
So you remembered some words, for this poem! heehee.
March 8th, 2019 05:02
No saints no sinners
orchidee said:
It\'ll be a blank poem cos I forgot what to write. There\'s 3,647 verses of it though - how will you know it\'s the end, if it\'s all blank? Or call it \'A Silent Poem\'. \'You\'re a fraud\' poets say to me. lol
March 8th, 2019 05:00
orchidee said:
It\'ll be a blank poem cos I forgot what to write. There\'s 3,647 verses of it though - how will you know it\'s the end, if it\'s all blank? Or call it \'A Silent Poem\'. \'You\'re a fraud\' poets say to me. lol
March 8th, 2019 05:00
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