Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
No saints no sinners
orchidee said:
A fine write Dan. Erm, I forgot, and did not remember, so I could not write a poem. Doh! lol. Well, I could do one titled \'I forgot\'. heehee.
March 8th, 2019 04:09
orchidee said:
A fine write Dan. Erm, I forgot, and did not remember, so I could not write a poem. Doh! lol. Well, I could do one titled \'I forgot\'. heehee.
March 8th, 2019 04:09
No saints no sinners
Goldfinch60 said:
May the light in my life become part of your life Dan, I have light enough for you.
March 8th, 2019 02:05
Goldfinch60 said:
May the light in my life become part of your life Dan, I have light enough for you.
March 8th, 2019 02:05
No saints no sinners
dusk arising said:
Ain\'t no saints here, likewise ain\'t no sinners neither..... we\'re all children of life trying to get by with the bag of burden we find on our shoulders as each day dawns.....
You\'re lucky to have the wisdom to think things through. There\'s a lot of positive out there just waiting to smile back at you.
March 7th, 2019 20:01
dusk arising said:
Ain\'t no saints here, likewise ain\'t no sinners neither..... we\'re all children of life trying to get by with the bag of burden we find on our shoulders as each day dawns.....
You\'re lucky to have the wisdom to think things through. There\'s a lot of positive out there just waiting to smile back at you.
March 7th, 2019 20:01
In a stride to forget
Neville said:
I have read your post today several times and am still not sure whether there is far more here than immediately hits the eye.. your authors note has got me thinking... I do sense a certain fragile uncertainty.... I can be wrong.... I certainly was way back in 1974..... I will read your words again later my friend..... Neville
March 7th, 2019 07:40
Neville said:
I have read your post today several times and am still not sure whether there is far more here than immediately hits the eye.. your authors note has got me thinking... I do sense a certain fragile uncertainty.... I can be wrong.... I certainly was way back in 1974..... I will read your words again later my friend..... Neville
March 7th, 2019 07:40
In a stride to forget
JaydeVictoria said:
This really hit home for me, I got from this the hope but the darkness always seems more inviting, familiar somehow..
Really good write! x
March 7th, 2019 07:24
JaydeVictoria said:
This really hit home for me, I got from this the hope but the darkness always seems more inviting, familiar somehow..
Really good write! x
March 7th, 2019 07:24
In a stride to forget
Goldfinch60 said:
The pressure in the world changes all the time and that pressure will ease form your mind leaving you free and refreshed.
March 7th, 2019 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
The pressure in the world changes all the time and that pressure will ease form your mind leaving you free and refreshed.
March 7th, 2019 01:00
In a stride to forget
poetboy123 said:
Wherever it rains, we must build umbrellas until it passes. Great seeing your work again, it\'s been a while Dan!
March 6th, 2019 22:07
poetboy123 said:
Wherever it rains, we must build umbrellas until it passes. Great seeing your work again, it\'s been a while Dan!
March 6th, 2019 22:07
It\'s simple! Right...
Fay Slimm. said:
A lovely read for a wet dull morning - together we really can make life simpler. Thanks Dan.
March 6th, 2019 04:56
Fay Slimm. said:
A lovely read for a wet dull morning - together we really can make life simpler. Thanks Dan.
March 6th, 2019 04:56
It\'s simple! Right...
Neville said:
I am smiling nicely and that is such a good thing in a harsh world... nice one sir... N
March 5th, 2019 08:59
Neville said:
I am smiling nicely and that is such a good thing in a harsh world... nice one sir... N
March 5th, 2019 08:59
Paranoia is right
Neville said:
There will be many out here who can relate & totally so.. it seems and sounds like you are already confronting your demons and reaping the rewards... Oh\' and just between you and me.. I used to be terrified of public speaking until I was required to stand up on centre stage.. miked up and talk for two day stretches to a hundred or more psychiatrists and allied workers twice a month for a couple of years.... after the 3rd or 4th time.. it was easy.... Good luck Neville
March 5th, 2019 08:55
Neville said:
There will be many out here who can relate & totally so.. it seems and sounds like you are already confronting your demons and reaping the rewards... Oh\' and just between you and me.. I used to be terrified of public speaking until I was required to stand up on centre stage.. miked up and talk for two day stretches to a hundred or more psychiatrists and allied workers twice a month for a couple of years.... after the 3rd or 4th time.. it was easy.... Good luck Neville
March 5th, 2019 08:55
Paranoia is right
Goldfinch60 said:
That paranoia an be conquered, all you need is to see the love in the peoples eyes, it may only be one person but that is the start and from there progression is bound to come.
March 5th, 2019 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
That paranoia an be conquered, all you need is to see the love in the peoples eyes, it may only be one person but that is the start and from there progression is bound to come.
March 5th, 2019 01:41
Paranoia is right
dusk arising said:
Well yeah, kind of.
Look i used to be in bands, more than i care to remember, some brilliant some crap but...... when u hit the stage/mic just remember ppl want to be entertained and the more up front or outrageous u are the more entertaining you are.... my get out clause was \"never be YOURSELF on stage\" I would put on some \'alter ego\' cloak and act up. Self defence really Dan...cos if they hated it, it wasn\'t me they hated, it was the character i was portraying. Think about it mate.
March 4th, 2019 15:14
dusk arising said:
Well yeah, kind of.
Look i used to be in bands, more than i care to remember, some brilliant some crap but...... when u hit the stage/mic just remember ppl want to be entertained and the more up front or outrageous u are the more entertaining you are.... my get out clause was \"never be YOURSELF on stage\" I would put on some \'alter ego\' cloak and act up. Self defence really Dan...cos if they hated it, it wasn\'t me they hated, it was the character i was portraying. Think about it mate.
March 4th, 2019 15:14
Paranoia is right
Fay Slimm. said:
A wise piece of advice Dan - working together with like knots to undue I\'m sure does a power of good.
March 4th, 2019 11:31
Fay Slimm. said:
A wise piece of advice Dan - working together with like knots to undue I\'m sure does a power of good.
March 4th, 2019 11:31
It\'s simple! Right...
Goldfinch60 said:
That path is unique to us all and if there is somebody who can join you on that path your lives will become one.
February 28th, 2019 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
That path is unique to us all and if there is somebody who can join you on that path your lives will become one.
February 28th, 2019 01:39
Remind myself and maybe you
Goldfinch60 said:
Good positive write Dan. Each of those moments are so important value each one.
February 26th, 2019 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Good positive write Dan. Each of those moments are so important value each one.
February 26th, 2019 01:44
Remind myself and maybe you
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
What great observations here
too many truth bells for my liking but I ooved this work
Well done Dan
February 25th, 2019 13:29
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
What great observations here
too many truth bells for my liking but I ooved this work
Well done Dan
February 25th, 2019 13:29
Remind myself and maybe you
dusk arising said:
Dan...Absolutely bang on the truth there mate! I couldn\'t agree more.
Your second line made me laugh out loud.
Springtime ahead is lightening up and you are too... so make sure you have a brill year.
I bet you\'ve found that, if you make yourself do some of the things you dread, they\'re not so dreadful after all.
February 25th, 2019 11:37
dusk arising said:
Dan...Absolutely bang on the truth there mate! I couldn\'t agree more.
Your second line made me laugh out loud.
Springtime ahead is lightening up and you are too... so make sure you have a brill year.
I bet you\'ve found that, if you make yourself do some of the things you dread, they\'re not so dreadful after all.
February 25th, 2019 11:37
Remind myself and maybe you
orchidee said:
A fine write Dan. I hated The Canterbury Tales in English at a school. Double whammy, as I couldn\'t understand half of it in ye olde language. Then read it in modern version and enjoyed it - seeing as I then knew what the author was on about!
February 25th, 2019 10:43
orchidee said:
A fine write Dan. I hated The Canterbury Tales in English at a school. Double whammy, as I couldn\'t understand half of it in ye olde language. Then read it in modern version and enjoyed it - seeing as I then knew what the author was on about!
February 25th, 2019 10:43
Thank you again
orchidee said:
Don\'t invite me to the open mic session - I will only sing! heehee. Who can bear it?! Go on stage and take the mic - before I jump in and sing!
February 25th, 2019 03:38
orchidee said:
Don\'t invite me to the open mic session - I will only sing! heehee. Who can bear it?! Go on stage and take the mic - before I jump in and sing!
February 25th, 2019 03:38
Thank you again
Goldfinch60 said:
I am so pleased that you are finding your way, yes mistakes happen but the support that you are getting more than make up for that. Go forth to that open mike Dan, go forth.
February 25th, 2019 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
I am so pleased that you are finding your way, yes mistakes happen but the support that you are getting more than make up for that. Go forth to that open mike Dan, go forth.
February 25th, 2019 01:28
Thank you again
dusk arising said:
Go for it man. Theres a person inside you waiting for his public. Your fears are falling away and any time now that geezer is gonna jump out from within you and frighten us all to bits - i hope!
February 24th, 2019 17:06
dusk arising said:
Go for it man. Theres a person inside you waiting for his public. Your fears are falling away and any time now that geezer is gonna jump out from within you and frighten us all to bits - i hope!
February 24th, 2019 17:06
Thank you again
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
I enjoyed reading this poem!
I sense much positivity threaded within!
Like a baby learning to walk...
...one step at a time...
From the crawling lane...
to the stand up lane...
to the running lane!
We’re all there to cheer you on ...
and if you should stumble,
...DO NOT FEAR...
we’re here to help you up!
Nothing to fear!
You’ll be just fine!
~Laura-~
February 24th, 2019 16:51
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
I enjoyed reading this poem!
I sense much positivity threaded within!
Like a baby learning to walk...
...one step at a time...
From the crawling lane...
to the stand up lane...
to the running lane!
We’re all there to cheer you on ...
and if you should stumble,
...DO NOT FEAR...
we’re here to help you up!
Nothing to fear!
You’ll be just fine!
~Laura-~
February 24th, 2019 16:51
Blink of an eye
Goldfinch60 said:
The time ahead of you may be a struggle but each hill climbed, each corner turned and each door opened will lead you to the light of experience which opens up your wonderful world in front of you.
February 21st, 2019 02:02
Goldfinch60 said:
The time ahead of you may be a struggle but each hill climbed, each corner turned and each door opened will lead you to the light of experience which opens up your wonderful world in front of you.
February 21st, 2019 02:02
Blink of an eye
dusk arising said:
Is it right to listen to the heart and mind. ??? You pose as a question here.
You\'ve discovered there is a poet in you. And a very truthful, sincere soul shines out of your writing. Writing worth reading and learning from.... learning from a man who is so sincere he exposes his frailty to us readers. That in itself is a lesson in humanity.
You, me, and most others here have no option but to listen to our hearts and minds. See my poem today Dan.... it\'s what you are... it\'s what you do.... and you do it well.
February 20th, 2019 13:36
dusk arising said:
Is it right to listen to the heart and mind. ??? You pose as a question here.
You\'ve discovered there is a poet in you. And a very truthful, sincere soul shines out of your writing. Writing worth reading and learning from.... learning from a man who is so sincere he exposes his frailty to us readers. That in itself is a lesson in humanity.
You, me, and most others here have no option but to listen to our hearts and minds. See my poem today Dan.... it\'s what you are... it\'s what you do.... and you do it well.
February 20th, 2019 13:36
Blink of an eye
Neville said:
almost anything can happen in the blink of an eye.. I could feel the pain .. glad I stopped here for a while tho... N
February 20th, 2019 13:07
Neville said:
almost anything can happen in the blink of an eye.. I could feel the pain .. glad I stopped here for a while tho... N
February 20th, 2019 13:07
Blink of an eye
sylviasearcher said:
A reality I just cannot drift
I felt this piece and so did my car and my sodden sleeve 😢
Don’t slip through 🌟
February 20th, 2019 11:06
sylviasearcher said:
A reality I just cannot drift
I felt this piece and so did my car and my sodden sleeve 😢
Don’t slip through 🌟
February 20th, 2019 11:06
If you see it! Nudge it back my way
Goldfinch60 said:
May that space be continually filled with your wonderful words Dan.
February 13th, 2019 15:54
Goldfinch60 said:
May that space be continually filled with your wonderful words Dan.
February 13th, 2019 15:54
If you see it! Nudge it back my way
dusk arising said:
Now this is you at your poetic best Dan. Your last line is worthy of a piece all its own..... it is a line for us all to think about... again and again.
February 13th, 2019 14:04
dusk arising said:
Now this is you at your poetic best Dan. Your last line is worthy of a piece all its own..... it is a line for us all to think about... again and again.
February 13th, 2019 14:04
A few words for my lady
Neville said:
I have never found it easy reciting any of my work in public.. to attempt it on camera, is almost impossible to comprehend.. and here is a guy who is quite used to talking for hours on end in front of several hundred people... So for the simple fact you did something I would not even attempt, and you did it so well, I salute you sir.... I also thought your poem was a great way to demonstrate your depth of feeling for another.... peace and all good things, Neville
February 11th, 2019 09:48
Neville said:
I have never found it easy reciting any of my work in public.. to attempt it on camera, is almost impossible to comprehend.. and here is a guy who is quite used to talking for hours on end in front of several hundred people... So for the simple fact you did something I would not even attempt, and you did it so well, I salute you sir.... I also thought your poem was a great way to demonstrate your depth of feeling for another.... peace and all good things, Neville
February 11th, 2019 09:48
Sunday rhythm & breeze
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Dan, wlaking with Nature is so wonderful and it does \'entertain any mood\'.
February 11th, 2019 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Dan, wlaking with Nature is so wonderful and it does \'entertain any mood\'.
February 11th, 2019 01:47
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