Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Recovery rhyme and to thank all of life
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Dan, we all write for differing reasons and get our words on the page is so important - and wonderful.
January 11th, 2019 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Dan, we all write for differing reasons and get our words on the page is so important - and wonderful.
January 11th, 2019 01:36
Recovery rhyme and to thank all of life
Fay Slimm. said:
Fine write Dan -- a writer\'s passion needs an outlet for as this verse states the result is a flow towards consciousness - worth all the efforts of yielding methinks. Great read.
January 10th, 2019 17:04
Fay Slimm. said:
Fine write Dan -- a writer\'s passion needs an outlet for as this verse states the result is a flow towards consciousness - worth all the efforts of yielding methinks. Great read.
January 10th, 2019 17:04
Recovery rhyme and to thank all of life
Netashi said:
Twas a great write and rhythm and beat was top notch as were the words. Keep up the great work.
- T
January 10th, 2019 14:35
Netashi said:
Twas a great write and rhythm and beat was top notch as were the words. Keep up the great work.
- T
January 10th, 2019 14:35
Rebuilding outside and in
poetboy123 said:
Dan, I am extremely sorry to hear that you\'re not doing well, but I also can\'t help but admiring the positivity you tap into when running into a wall. It\'s just another wall for you to overcome, I wish you the best.
January 9th, 2019 20:29
poetboy123 said:
Dan, I am extremely sorry to hear that you\'re not doing well, but I also can\'t help but admiring the positivity you tap into when running into a wall. It\'s just another wall for you to overcome, I wish you the best.
January 9th, 2019 20:29
Rebuilding outside and in
Goldfinch60 said:
Such painful words, you have seen a way forward though so move forward in the new freedom that you have found.
January 8th, 2019 15:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Such painful words, you have seen a way forward though so move forward in the new freedom that you have found.
January 8th, 2019 15:26
A few words for my lady
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Dan, may you life continue to be filled with love.
December 31st, 2018 02:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Dan, may you life continue to be filled with love.
December 31st, 2018 02:00
Little dog poem and his song
Goldfinch60 said:
It is amazing how dogs can calm the worries in our lives.
December 12th, 2018 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
It is amazing how dogs can calm the worries in our lives.
December 12th, 2018 01:40
Malfunctioning
Goldfinch60 said:
The end of one show only clears the way for the show that is always with us and will be there for eternity. Keep looking at that light, it will guide you along the right path.
December 11th, 2018 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
The end of one show only clears the way for the show that is always with us and will be there for eternity. Keep looking at that light, it will guide you along the right path.
December 11th, 2018 01:22
Malfunctioning
Fay Slimm. said:
Correction to this amazing write - your show can still go on my friend - on and on............. and on. An excellent piece of rhyme.
December 10th, 2018 11:39
Fay Slimm. said:
Correction to this amazing write - your show can still go on my friend - on and on............. and on. An excellent piece of rhyme.
December 10th, 2018 11:39
Malfunctioning
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Your honesty is admirable!
You did it your way, but itās NOT
āthe end of the showā!
Youāre in control! Your show will go on the way you want it to. You love life! You will get through the rough patches! I repeat...YOUāRE IN CONTROL!
You WILL go on!
~Laura~
December 10th, 2018 11:16
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Your honesty is admirable!
You did it your way, but itās NOT
āthe end of the showā!
Youāre in control! Your show will go on the way you want it to. You love life! You will get through the rough patches! I repeat...YOUāRE IN CONTROL!
You WILL go on!
~Laura~
December 10th, 2018 11:16
Faith lost then returned like a boomerang
š¤s.zaynab.kamoonpuriš·š¦š½ said:
A wonderful story poem that proves there are Devils and angels amongst us but let\'s live on and appreciate the Good Samaritans and mortal saviours in order to thank God for life. I liked the nice way you reflect and conclude positively. Kudos.
Pleez do add your thoughts/comment/review under my newest poem too. Always nice to say hi to all here via comments.
December 6th, 2018 03:35
š¤s.zaynab.kamoonpuriš·š¦š½ said:
A wonderful story poem that proves there are Devils and angels amongst us but let\'s live on and appreciate the Good Samaritans and mortal saviours in order to thank God for life. I liked the nice way you reflect and conclude positively. Kudos.
Pleez do add your thoughts/comment/review under my newest poem too. Always nice to say hi to all here via comments.
December 6th, 2018 03:35
Faith lost then returned like a boomerang
Goldfinch60 said:
May your days become wonderful as you travel through your life.
December 5th, 2018 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
May your days become wonderful as you travel through your life.
December 5th, 2018 01:13
Faith lost then returned like a boomerang
Fay Slimm. said:
This read brought me to compassionate tears Dan - - your outlook after that awful happening is what learning forgiveness is all about -- and that wonderful phrase \" my faith was restored by one single act\" puts kindness where it belongs as our lift toward hoping that lost souls \"will understand what truly living life is like\" Love will win out with reminders that not all are in darkness as honesty and playing fair still mean much to the many dear friend..Thanks so much for sharing such challenges with us .
December 4th, 2018 14:19
Fay Slimm. said:
This read brought me to compassionate tears Dan - - your outlook after that awful happening is what learning forgiveness is all about -- and that wonderful phrase \" my faith was restored by one single act\" puts kindness where it belongs as our lift toward hoping that lost souls \"will understand what truly living life is like\" Love will win out with reminders that not all are in darkness as honesty and playing fair still mean much to the many dear friend..Thanks so much for sharing such challenges with us .
December 4th, 2018 14:19
Faith lost then returned like a boomerang
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Reading this write made me feel sad about what happened last night! Then I read the words...
āmy faith was restored by one single act.ā
I am so happy your faith in humanity was restored by that one act of kindness! Thatās all it takes...ONE ACT OF KINDNESS! You recognized that act of kindness of being genuine and unconditional! There are and will be many people whoāll realize and acknowledge your kind and unselfish heart! In that darkness that you feel at times, the light is always there for you!
Great choice of pic with a super message...
Live,
Be honest,
Love,
Play fair!
You are all of the above...and more!
~Laura~
December 4th, 2018 12:32
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Reading this write made me feel sad about what happened last night! Then I read the words...
āmy faith was restored by one single act.ā
I am so happy your faith in humanity was restored by that one act of kindness! Thatās all it takes...ONE ACT OF KINDNESS! You recognized that act of kindness of being genuine and unconditional! There are and will be many people whoāll realize and acknowledge your kind and unselfish heart! In that darkness that you feel at times, the light is always there for you!
Great choice of pic with a super message...
Live,
Be honest,
Love,
Play fair!
You are all of the above...and more!
~Laura~
December 4th, 2018 12:32
A fun little rhyme
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Dan, he will give you so much joy.
December 2nd, 2018 13:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Dan, he will give you so much joy.
December 2nd, 2018 13:25
A fun little rhyme
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Dan. Swoon! lol. I thought he may have done the \'other\' in his bowl!
I know - our cat always leaves the loo seat up - does he?! lol
December 2nd, 2018 09:11
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Dan. Swoon! lol. I thought he may have done the \'other\' in his bowl!
I know - our cat always leaves the loo seat up - does he?! lol
December 2nd, 2018 09:11
A fun little rhyme
Michael Edwards said:
Never tried it myself lol - Gave me a smile for the morning.
December 2nd, 2018 05:07
Michael Edwards said:
Never tried it myself lol - Gave me a smile for the morning.
December 2nd, 2018 05:07
Life, music and memories
Goldfinch60 said:
The blessings in our lives are so important and so wonderful. Good emotive write.
November 29th, 2018 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
The blessings in our lives are so important and so wonderful. Good emotive write.
November 29th, 2018 01:53
Life, music and memories
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
So happy to āseeā you! Youāve been missed!
A wonderful return with a poignant poem and musical video to complement your warm-hearted words...
āThen I find comfort in knowing loveās beautiful lesson
For when I find that happiness Iāll have more appreciation
Understanding the tears from the pastā
Having learned that lesson, you WILL build āon an unshakable foundationā!
Wishing you happiness and love during your much anticipated journey!
~Laura~
November 28th, 2018 17:46
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
So happy to āseeā you! Youāve been missed!
A wonderful return with a poignant poem and musical video to complement your warm-hearted words...
āThen I find comfort in knowing loveās beautiful lesson
For when I find that happiness Iāll have more appreciation
Understanding the tears from the pastā
Having learned that lesson, you WILL build āon an unshakable foundationā!
Wishing you happiness and love during your much anticipated journey!
~Laura~
November 28th, 2018 17:46
Life, music and memories
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS DAN ~ Beautiful Song ~ Elegant Poem ! When we count our Blessings it makes the Agony & Ecstasy of Life & Love and Pets & People ~ All worthwhile !
Thank you Universe
For the wonder of life
Better to lived than not ~ AMEN
Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
Please check my POEMS & latest FUSION Thanks B !
November 28th, 2018 10:11
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS DAN ~ Beautiful Song ~ Elegant Poem ! When we count our Blessings it makes the Agony & Ecstasy of Life & Love and Pets & People ~ All worthwhile !
Thank you Universe
For the wonder of life
Better to lived than not ~ AMEN
Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
Please check my POEMS & latest FUSION Thanks B !
November 28th, 2018 10:11
Life, music and memories
Fay Slimm. said:
A pleasure to read your tenderly poetic words and listen to a favourite singer too - -- thanks for sharing Dan and welcome back.
November 28th, 2018 04:18
Fay Slimm. said:
A pleasure to read your tenderly poetic words and listen to a favourite singer too - -- thanks for sharing Dan and welcome back.
November 28th, 2018 04:18
To let it go I must flow
dusk arising said:
Kudos. Those who choose to live an evil life will find evil comes and gets them. He will get his come-uppance from an evil person who he cheats/swindles. Don\'t soil your hands with revenge my friend. It can get out of control and may bring more trouble to you and yours than it is worth.
Try to see the positivity of not seeking revenge and when you have found it, try to teach it to your loved one.
Life teaches us in some very challenging ways.
November 11th, 2018 11:34
dusk arising said:
Kudos. Those who choose to live an evil life will find evil comes and gets them. He will get his come-uppance from an evil person who he cheats/swindles. Don\'t soil your hands with revenge my friend. It can get out of control and may bring more trouble to you and yours than it is worth.
Try to see the positivity of not seeking revenge and when you have found it, try to teach it to your loved one.
Life teaches us in some very challenging ways.
November 11th, 2018 11:34
Happy tattoo day to me!
orchidee said:
Looks good but, ooh, did it hurt? I would probably get a infection or something with my sensitive skin. Or faint before the tattooist even started!
November 8th, 2018 02:40
orchidee said:
Looks good but, ooh, did it hurt? I would probably get a infection or something with my sensitive skin. Or faint before the tattooist even started!
November 8th, 2018 02:40
Happy tattoo day to me!
Christina8 said:
I am SOOOOO excited that you got my words of advice tattooed on one of your arms!!!!!!!!!!!! Now I should get the \"live in love let go of fear\" and we can be tattoo mates!! I need to let go of fear!! What an exciting day, so glad I logged on to see this!! Much love and respect to you---Christina
November 7th, 2018 21:41
Christina8 said:
I am SOOOOO excited that you got my words of advice tattooed on one of your arms!!!!!!!!!!!! Now I should get the \"live in love let go of fear\" and we can be tattoo mates!! I need to let go of fear!! What an exciting day, so glad I logged on to see this!! Much love and respect to you---Christina
November 7th, 2018 21:41
Happy tattoo day to me!
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Awesome!
You really did it!
It looks fantastic!
A man who keeps his word!
Admirable indeed!
Thank you for sharing the visual!
YOU ARE HERE
LIVE IN LOVE
Great words to live by!
Happy tattoo day to you, my friend!
~Laura~
November 7th, 2018 16:01
Lauraš» said:
Dan,
Awesome!
You really did it!
It looks fantastic!
A man who keeps his word!
Admirable indeed!
Thank you for sharing the visual!
YOU ARE HERE
LIVE IN LOVE
Great words to live by!
Happy tattoo day to you, my friend!
~Laura~
November 7th, 2018 16:01
Blessings to a new member of the crew!
Lorna said:
So happy for your new friend - she\'s lucky to have you. I\'m crazy about the last stanza Dan.......
November 4th, 2018 04:44
Lorna said:
So happy for your new friend - she\'s lucky to have you. I\'m crazy about the last stanza Dan.......
November 4th, 2018 04:44
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