Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA



SUICIDE BOMBERS ~ A Lament (7 7 Sonnet)
Rajkumar said:

You have expressed your feelings in right words brain

May 24th, 2017 09:18

SUICIDE BOMBERS ~ A Lament (7 7 Sonnet)
alanis98 said:

A wonderful poem this needs to been seen bay many more like ones who are in morning over their loved ones. My heart goes out to all the parents who lost many beautiful children.

May 24th, 2017 06:01

M A N C H E S T E R ~ Choose Love ~ An Acrostic
Michael Edwards said:

Another fine write for the grieving city - so pleased to see the leaders of ALL religious beliefs (and none) coming out so strongly to declare their abhorrence.

May 24th, 2017 05:47

M A N C H E S T E R ~ Choose Love ~ An Acrostic
alanis98 said:

Beautiful what a beautiful poem for Manchester I have friends who live in Manchester so I understand what many are going through luckily my friends weren\'t near the bomb. I hope others who weren\'t as lucky as me stay strong.

May 24th, 2017 05:45

M A N C H E S T E R ~ Choose Love ~ An Acrostic
swingline said:

No other word I can think of fits better than the word grief . Grieving , griefstricken . But as you say we must forgive as God forives us . But the grief remains .

May 24th, 2017 05:06

M A N C H E S T E R ~ Choose Love ~ An Acrostic
orchidee said:

A fine write and tribute B.

May 24th, 2017 04:29

SUICIDE BOMBERS ~ A Lament (7 7 Sonnet)
Augustus said:

Sad that your country is so open to immigrants and you receive this in return. Well done. PS, sometimes I watch a little soccer on TV and knew of Manchester from its team. Praying we can solve this extremism.

May 23rd, 2017 23:18

SUICIDE BOMBERS ~ A Lament (7 7 Sonnet)
WriteBeLight said:

Great tribute and points made here Dear Brian relative to this horrible tragedy! My heart goes out to all of you in the U.K.!

May 23rd, 2017 13:21

SUICIDE BOMBERS ~ A Lament (7 7 Sonnet)
Hopey_xx said:

The news about Manchester is so awful, our hearts go out to them, and all affected.

May 23rd, 2017 11:45

SUICIDE BOMBERS ~ A Lament (7 7 Sonnet)
Michael Edwards said:

Great piece as a tribute to those affected by this terrible act of barbarism.

May 23rd, 2017 11:31

SUICIDE BOMBERS ~ A Lament (7 7 Sonnet)
swingline said:

Death gives them validity . Take away their ability to destroy they are nothing . By the seventh of the Ten commandments ,\"Though shall not kill\" they will be judged .


May 23rd, 2017 11:25

SUICIDE BOMBERS ~ A Lament (7 7 Sonnet)
Christina8 said:

Beautiful piece you wrote--manchester is on my mind and in my prayers. A lot of people are very distressed today after losing loved ones. My hearts go out to them too. Thanks for writing and sharing--hugs--Christina

May 23rd, 2017 09:07

SUICIDE BOMBERS ~ A Lament (7 7 Sonnet)
Goldfinch60 said:

Such a sad state of affairs, those who create these acts are never there to do it themselves, they persuade others to do it for them.

May 23rd, 2017 08:42

SUICIDE BOMBERS ~ A Lament (7 7 Sonnet)
Fay Slimm. said:

A haunt of a read as a dire reminder of what this country faces . Pray we all must for those left behind grieving for lost kith and kin and for the poor injured after such evil.

May 23rd, 2017 08:38

SUICIDE BOMBERS ~ A Lament (7 7 Sonnet)
ShannonXx said:

This is a really great poem! It really is such a devastating event that happened in Manchester.

May 23rd, 2017 08:32

SUICIDE BOMBERS ~ A Lament (7 7 Sonnet)
orchidee said:

I\'m in my own distress too, over the passing of a cat, who was almost our own - semi-adopted! We can\'t see the \'reward\' of evil ones - wherever they may \'wake up\'. Bit it\'s consolation in a way. They shall have to answer for it. Yet each one of us has to answer at the final day.
Makes us think. A loving God? Surely there can\'t be a Hell? And yet for some - there is!

May 23rd, 2017 07:49

COOPERATION ? YES ! An Acrostic Sonnet
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, one day John Lennon\'s words may come true and we \'Give peace a chance\'.

May 23rd, 2017 00:05

FRIENDS ~ An Anaphoric Sonnet
Christina8 said:

Very nice write! Yes I hope that teens these days have more personal friends than facebook or snapchat friends!! I\'m glad I have MPS friends too, like you! But friends are a gift and to be cherished. Friendly hug--Christina

May 22nd, 2017 11:20

THE LOVE OF GOD ~ A 4 4 3 3 Rhyming Sonnet
Christina8 said:

This is really beautiful! Very touching. Love what you post on Sundays! Spiritual hugs-Christina

May 22nd, 2017 11:15

COOPERATION ? YES ! An Acrostic Sonnet
Christina8 said:

Wonderfully written acrostic and I wholeheartedly agree with you Brian! Some people give on the holidays but the need is year round and not just locally. Give and you shall receive! Great job. Hugs-Christina

May 22nd, 2017 11:13

COOPERATION ? YES ! An Acrostic Sonnet
Michael Edwards said:

So true with a great big \'but\' - if only.

May 22nd, 2017 09:36

COOPERATION ? YES ! An Acrostic Sonnet
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

May 22nd, 2017 06:46

COOPERATION ? YES ! An Acrostic Sonnet
Fay Slimm. said:

A loud Amen to this resolve Brian - - helping others and working together is the only way to world peace.

May 22nd, 2017 04:20

COOPERATION ? YES ! An Acrostic Sonnet
swingline said:

Good idea but for the sinful inclination of man . The golden rule goes so far if it was incorporated in the plan . But there are those who are rooted in their wealth and cannot see it all belongs to God and someday he collects his loans with the interest that it cost .

May 22nd, 2017 03:48

THE LOVE OF GOD ~ A 4 4 3 3 Rhyming Sonnet
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write. God is always with us. God Bless you Brian.

May 22nd, 2017 00:38

THE LOVE OF GOD ~ A 4 4 3 3 Rhyming Sonnet
Augustus said:

I am not sure why but I always thought of it in reverse, that God, Christ loved us, me. Just recently have I come to the love for Christ. Thanks.

May 21st, 2017 12:18

THE LOVE OF GOD ~ A 4 4 3 3 Rhyming Sonnet
swingline said:

The message radiates loud and clear . Reminds me of Psalms 136 .

May 21st, 2017 08:30

THE LOVE OF GOD ~ A 4 4 3 3 Rhyming Sonnet
Michael Edwards said:

Super piece of composition Brian.

May 21st, 2017 05:14

THE LOVE OF GOD ~ A 4 4 3 3 Rhyming Sonnet
Fay Slimm. said:

A beautiful set of praiseworthy traits we have as a gift from our Father above.

May 21st, 2017 04:43

THE LOVE OF GOD ~ A 4 4 3 3 Rhyming Sonnet
orchidee said:

A fine hymn-poem B. I recognised the hymn on which it is based. Sometimes I may take almost entire lines, or may aim to adapt some lines of Scripture and/or lines of hymns. I just feel drawn more to traditional type hymns. Not to rubbish the modern though.

May 21st, 2017 02:31



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