Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA



COOPERATION ? YES ! An Acrostic Sonnet
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, one day John Lennon\'s words may come true and we \'Give peace a chance\'.

May 23rd, 2017 00:05

FRIENDS ~ An Anaphoric Sonnet
Christina8 said:

Very nice write! Yes I hope that teens these days have more personal friends than facebook or snapchat friends!! I\'m glad I have MPS friends too, like you! But friends are a gift and to be cherished. Friendly hug--Christina

May 22nd, 2017 11:20

THE LOVE OF GOD ~ A 4 4 3 3 Rhyming Sonnet
Christina8 said:

This is really beautiful! Very touching. Love what you post on Sundays! Spiritual hugs-Christina

May 22nd, 2017 11:15

COOPERATION ? YES ! An Acrostic Sonnet
Christina8 said:

Wonderfully written acrostic and I wholeheartedly agree with you Brian! Some people give on the holidays but the need is year round and not just locally. Give and you shall receive! Great job. Hugs-Christina

May 22nd, 2017 11:13

COOPERATION ? YES ! An Acrostic Sonnet
Michael Edwards said:

So true with a great big \'but\' - if only.

May 22nd, 2017 09:36

COOPERATION ? YES ! An Acrostic Sonnet
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

May 22nd, 2017 06:46

COOPERATION ? YES ! An Acrostic Sonnet
Fay Slimm. said:

A loud Amen to this resolve Brian - - helping others and working together is the only way to world peace.

May 22nd, 2017 04:20

COOPERATION ? YES ! An Acrostic Sonnet
swingline said:

Good idea but for the sinful inclination of man . The golden rule goes so far if it was incorporated in the plan . But there are those who are rooted in their wealth and cannot see it all belongs to God and someday he collects his loans with the interest that it cost .

May 22nd, 2017 03:48

THE LOVE OF GOD ~ A 4 4 3 3 Rhyming Sonnet
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write. God is always with us. God Bless you Brian.

May 22nd, 2017 00:38

THE LOVE OF GOD ~ A 4 4 3 3 Rhyming Sonnet
Augustus said:

I am not sure why but I always thought of it in reverse, that God, Christ loved us, me. Just recently have I come to the love for Christ. Thanks.

May 21st, 2017 12:18

THE LOVE OF GOD ~ A 4 4 3 3 Rhyming Sonnet
swingline said:

The message radiates loud and clear . Reminds me of Psalms 136 .

May 21st, 2017 08:30

THE LOVE OF GOD ~ A 4 4 3 3 Rhyming Sonnet
Michael Edwards said:

Super piece of composition Brian.

May 21st, 2017 05:14

THE LOVE OF GOD ~ A 4 4 3 3 Rhyming Sonnet
Fay Slimm. said:

A beautiful set of praiseworthy traits we have as a gift from our Father above.

May 21st, 2017 04:43

THE LOVE OF GOD ~ A 4 4 3 3 Rhyming Sonnet
orchidee said:

A fine hymn-poem B. I recognised the hymn on which it is based. Sometimes I may take almost entire lines, or may aim to adapt some lines of Scripture and/or lines of hymns. I just feel drawn more to traditional type hymns. Not to rubbish the modern though.

May 21st, 2017 02:31

FRIENDS ~ An Anaphoric Sonnet
Hopey_xx said:

A great poem Brian! Without friends, what would we be?

May 20th, 2017 16:36

FRIENDS ~ An Anaphoric Sonnet
swingline said:

Jesus is our greatest friend as you have already pointed out Brian . All other friends come and go but Jesus is there forever .

May 20th, 2017 05:54

FRIENDS ~ An Anaphoric Sonnet
Fay Slimm. said:

Friends are a gift indeed and you verse them so well in this form
of sonnet - - well done again Brian.

May 20th, 2017 02:01

FRIENDS ~ An Anaphoric Sonnet
Michael Edwards said:

Without friends life is empty - must get to know Ana Phoric - seems like another bit of poetic fun.

May 20th, 2017 01:41

FRIENDS ~ An Anaphoric Sonnet
Goldfinch60 said:

Friends are to be treasured at all times, especially in the bad times in your life.

May 20th, 2017 01:27

FRIENDS ~ An Anaphoric Sonnet
orchidee said:

A fine amp-wotsit. Oh I can\'t say these unusual words when I\'ve had a few sherries! I\'m known for them, and for pork pies! (99% tee total really!).

May 20th, 2017 01:24

THANK GOD FOR TODAY ~ An Acrostic
Beyondblessedmeasures said:

God be the glory

May 20th, 2017 00:23

THANK GOD FOR TODAY ~ An Acrostic
orchidee said:

A fine write. I rather wasted all day, finding out what Carpe Wotsit meant! heehee. By the time I found out, there was no day left to seize!

May 19th, 2017 09:18

THANK GOD FOR TODAY ~ An Acrostic
Goldfinch60 said:

Every day is special, thank God.

May 19th, 2017 07:49

THANK GOD FOR TODAY ~ An Acrostic
swingline said:

Life is constructed out of those bricks called days . Sort of a time share leased by God .

May 19th, 2017 06:42

THANK GOD FOR TODAY ~ An Acrostic
Michael Edwards said:

Seize it indeed - nice one B

May 19th, 2017 04:36

PATIENCE ~ An Acrostic
Magali Aguilar Solorza said:

Beautiful your feeling, it is nice to read to you.

May 19th, 2017 00:24

PATIENCE ~ An Acrostic
Christina8 said:

Very wise poem. We should be patient with all fellow mankind. If we could just slow down like you said we\'d be less anxious and more balanced. Great topic! Hugs-Christina

May 18th, 2017 11:42

PATIENCE ~ An Acrostic
Michael Edwards said:

My folk tell me I\'m so laid back I\'m almost upside down. Mind you I do get a tad impatient behind elderly drivers who insist on travelling at 20mph slower than the speed limit - and they\'re usually actually younger than me !!

May 18th, 2017 10:48

PATIENCE ~ An Acrostic
orchidee said:

A fine write - though Goldie is going backwards! heehee.

May 18th, 2017 08:35

PATIENCE ~ An Acrostic
Goldfinch60 said:

If I were much slower I would be going backwards. Good write.

May 18th, 2017 08:05



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