Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA
PATIENCE ~ An Acrostic
WriteBeLight said:
Not enough patience in the world Brian. Nice reminder.
May 18th, 2017 05:20
WriteBeLight said:
Not enough patience in the world Brian. Nice reminder.
May 18th, 2017 05:20
PATIENCE ~ An Acrostic
swingline said:
I take care of my invalid mother who is almost 92 . I have been since 2010 . And of all the tools , skills , and sets of knowledge patience is the key to holding everything together .
May 18th, 2017 04:20
swingline said:
I take care of my invalid mother who is almost 92 . I have been since 2010 . And of all the tools , skills , and sets of knowledge patience is the key to holding everything together .
May 18th, 2017 04:20
PEANUT BUTTER OK ~ A Rhyming Acrostic Sonnet !
WriteBeLight said:
Great one Brian.
May 17th, 2017 11:42
WriteBeLight said:
Great one Brian.
May 17th, 2017 11:42
PEANUT BUTTER OK ~ A Rhyming Acrostic Sonnet !
Christina8 said:
Very clever acrostic. \"less windy than baked beans\" gave me a good belly laugh!! You even gave a nod to Elvis! I just don\'t know how you get acrostics to rhyme. I vow one day to make one! Excellent job!! Hugs-Christina
May 17th, 2017 10:41
Christina8 said:
Very clever acrostic. \"less windy than baked beans\" gave me a good belly laugh!! You even gave a nod to Elvis! I just don\'t know how you get acrostics to rhyme. I vow one day to make one! Excellent job!! Hugs-Christina
May 17th, 2017 10:41
PEANUT BUTTER OK ~ A Rhyming Acrostic Sonnet !
Tony36 said:
A very tasty write my friend
May 17th, 2017 10:25
Tony36 said:
A very tasty write my friend
May 17th, 2017 10:25
PEANUT BUTTER OK ~ A Rhyming Acrostic Sonnet !
swingline said:
PB&J with a cold glass of milk
that is a form of Paradise
dressed up to the hilt .
May 17th, 2017 06:54
swingline said:
PB&J with a cold glass of milk
that is a form of Paradise
dressed up to the hilt .
May 17th, 2017 06:54
PEANUT BUTTER OK ~ A Rhyming Acrostic Sonnet !
Michael Edwards said:
I love it a bit too much - sometimes wish I was allergic to it for my waistline\'s sake - but on second thoughts it can\'t be much fun.
May 17th, 2017 03:55
Michael Edwards said:
I love it a bit too much - sometimes wish I was allergic to it for my waistline\'s sake - but on second thoughts it can\'t be much fun.
May 17th, 2017 03:55
PEANUT BUTTER OK ~ A Rhyming Acrostic Sonnet !
orchidee said:
A fine write. Eek, except for those allergic to it!
May 17th, 2017 03:25
orchidee said:
A fine write. Eek, except for those allergic to it!
May 17th, 2017 03:25
COUNT BLESSINGS ! A 5 ~ 9 Sonnet
Christina8 said:
Very good message! I like how you ended it. \"It is more blessed to give than to receive\". You are a ray of sunshine on MPS! That\'s for sure. I try to stay positive but I have my days. Great poem! Hugs-Christina
May 16th, 2017 14:20
Christina8 said:
Very good message! I like how you ended it. \"It is more blessed to give than to receive\". You are a ray of sunshine on MPS! That\'s for sure. I try to stay positive but I have my days. Great poem! Hugs-Christina
May 16th, 2017 14:20
COUNT BLESSINGS ! A 5 ~ 9 Sonnet
Michael Edwards said:
One small thing every day - even just holding a door for someone - can make such a difference - just think if everyone did one small act of kindness every day what a difference it would make.
May 16th, 2017 10:30
Michael Edwards said:
One small thing every day - even just holding a door for someone - can make such a difference - just think if everyone did one small act of kindness every day what a difference it would make.
May 16th, 2017 10:30
COUNT BLESSINGS ! A 5 ~ 9 Sonnet
orchidee said:
Gimme you lottery winnings! heehee. Nope, Orchi, that\'s not the idea! A fine write.
May 16th, 2017 10:03
orchidee said:
Gimme you lottery winnings! heehee. Nope, Orchi, that\'s not the idea! A fine write.
May 16th, 2017 10:03
COUNT BLESSINGS ! A 5 ~ 9 Sonnet
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes we should be prepared to make a difference and giving to others is one way of showing God\'s purpose for humans on this sad earth. Lovely sonnet Brian.
May 16th, 2017 06:54
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes we should be prepared to make a difference and giving to others is one way of showing God\'s purpose for humans on this sad earth. Lovely sonnet Brian.
May 16th, 2017 06:54
COUNT BLESSINGS ! A 5 ~ 9 Sonnet
swingline said:
Everything we have is on loan from God . Even oor life . And someday he will come and collect his due and profits . Pray that we may use his blessings and multiply his wealth as it glorifies his name and trust he places on us . So give thanks for everything , use his blessing wisely that you glorify his name .
May 16th, 2017 05:07
swingline said:
Everything we have is on loan from God . Even oor life . And someday he will come and collect his due and profits . Pray that we may use his blessings and multiply his wealth as it glorifies his name and trust he places on us . So give thanks for everything , use his blessing wisely that you glorify his name .
May 16th, 2017 05:07
BOTTLES ~ An ANAPHORA
Mandi said:
So true, RECYCLE! Lol I always save my glass bottles and reuse them for whatever or turn them into potions for my Halloween witch station😅. I have so many my mom tells me I\'m crazy, but always gives me some really neat shaped ones when ever she can. Love the rhyme, love this poem!
May 15th, 2017 13:30
Mandi said:
So true, RECYCLE! Lol I always save my glass bottles and reuse them for whatever or turn them into potions for my Halloween witch station😅. I have so many my mom tells me I\'m crazy, but always gives me some really neat shaped ones when ever she can. Love the rhyme, love this poem!
May 15th, 2017 13:30
BOTTLES ~ An ANAPHORA
Michael Edwards said:
And yet another new form to have a go at - good one B.
May 15th, 2017 10:20
Michael Edwards said:
And yet another new form to have a go at - good one B.
May 15th, 2017 10:20
BOTTLES ~ An ANAPHORA
Christina8 said:
You always amaze me with the new forms of poetry that you come up with! I always enjoy when they rhyme. Fantastic job! I\'m a recycle nut so I hope all my bottles are being reused somehow. Great poem! Hugs-Christina
May 15th, 2017 10:05
Christina8 said:
You always amaze me with the new forms of poetry that you come up with! I always enjoy when they rhyme. Fantastic job! I\'m a recycle nut so I hope all my bottles are being reused somehow. Great poem! Hugs-Christina
May 15th, 2017 10:05
MAN IN BLACK ~ JOHNNY CASH
Christina8 said:
Thanks for sharing this Brian! I really like this song. I\'m glad you posted, I will save as a fav! Hugs-Christina
May 15th, 2017 10:00
Christina8 said:
Thanks for sharing this Brian! I really like this song. I\'m glad you posted, I will save as a fav! Hugs-Christina
May 15th, 2017 10:00
BOTTLES ~ An ANAPHORA
orchidee said:
Made me think - an AMPHORA is a kind of bottle too. I was around ages ago when they invented them - so I say, in my pretence for being millions of years old! Oh vanity - it\'s so no-one guesses my real age! A fine write B.
May 15th, 2017 08:55
orchidee said:
Made me think - an AMPHORA is a kind of bottle too. I was around ages ago when they invented them - so I say, in my pretence for being millions of years old! Oh vanity - it\'s so no-one guesses my real age! A fine write B.
May 15th, 2017 08:55
BOTTLES ~ An ANAPHORA
swingline said:
I\'m glad your angst is not bottled up . You\'ve cut them off at the bottle neck . Now that they have bottle bottom from too much cake . Your broken bottle diplomacy was from too much shake . Soon the Earth will be one big bottle dome . So raise you drink it\'s bottle up .
May 15th, 2017 08:52
swingline said:
I\'m glad your angst is not bottled up . You\'ve cut them off at the bottle neck . Now that they have bottle bottom from too much cake . Your broken bottle diplomacy was from too much shake . Soon the Earth will be one big bottle dome . So raise you drink it\'s bottle up .
May 15th, 2017 08:52
BOTTLES ~ An ANAPHORA
kevin browne said:
this reminds me of a homeless man who started to build round houses for other homeless people out of plastic bottles. a scheme has now been made up to keep the work going. good work BRIANSODES,
May 15th, 2017 03:53
kevin browne said:
this reminds me of a homeless man who started to build round houses for other homeless people out of plastic bottles. a scheme has now been made up to keep the work going. good work BRIANSODES,
May 15th, 2017 03:53
GOD\'S LOVE & GUIDENCE ~ A Monolittura Sonnet
orchidee said:
Erm, it can depend also, which number Psalm you are reading. e.g. 88 is \'dark\'; 109 is somewhat hellfire and damnation to enemies. Then sweet as light, e.g. 23, 145. And so on. I did a written \'discourse\' of rhyming \'said\' poem of Psalm 119. It clocked up 3,500 words!
May 14th, 2017 10:51
orchidee said:
Erm, it can depend also, which number Psalm you are reading. e.g. 88 is \'dark\'; 109 is somewhat hellfire and damnation to enemies. Then sweet as light, e.g. 23, 145. And so on. I did a written \'discourse\' of rhyming \'said\' poem of Psalm 119. It clocked up 3,500 words!
May 14th, 2017 10:51
GOD\'S LOVE & GUIDENCE ~ A Monolittura Sonnet
orchidee said:
A fine write B. Every word of mine, after me mad moments of sherry-drinking (fantasy of course. lol) begin with S too. As in \'Shumthing shows here, that is a sthunning write. I wish I would sthop sherry-drinking\'! Good acting too, innit? heehee.
May 14th, 2017 10:48
orchidee said:
A fine write B. Every word of mine, after me mad moments of sherry-drinking (fantasy of course. lol) begin with S too. As in \'Shumthing shows here, that is a sthunning write. I wish I would sthop sherry-drinking\'! Good acting too, innit? heehee.
May 14th, 2017 10:48
GOD\'S LOVE & GUIDENCE ~ A Monolittura Sonnet
swingline said:
I have been studying the book of Psalms for the last two months now . It is packed full of wisdom and knowledge everyone should use and put to practice . It is always gratifying to see someone doing the same as me for it gives me hope for the world . Than you Brian for these inspiring words .
May 14th, 2017 09:27
swingline said:
I have been studying the book of Psalms for the last two months now . It is packed full of wisdom and knowledge everyone should use and put to practice . It is always gratifying to see someone doing the same as me for it gives me hope for the world . Than you Brian for these inspiring words .
May 14th, 2017 09:27
GOD\'S LOVE & GUIDENCE ~ A Monolittura Sonnet
Michael Edwards said:
Good one Brian - another form to add to my list of poems what I must write.
May 14th, 2017 07:01
Michael Edwards said:
Good one Brian - another form to add to my list of poems what I must write.
May 14th, 2017 07:01
MAN IN BLACK ~ JOHNNY CASH
swingline said:
Truly a giant among all muscans . One with a productive career spanning decades . But of all his great songs my favorite was Trent Reznor\'s song \"Hurt\" (Nine Inch Nail) . Anyone not moved by this epic music video has a heart of coal .
May 13th, 2017 12:53
swingline said:
Truly a giant among all muscans . One with a productive career spanning decades . But of all his great songs my favorite was Trent Reznor\'s song \"Hurt\" (Nine Inch Nail) . Anyone not moved by this epic music video has a heart of coal .
May 13th, 2017 12:53
MAN IN BLACK ~ JOHNNY CASH
orchidee said:
A fine write B. I probably only know songs up to about 1995, and about two songs thereafter! lol.
May 13th, 2017 11:31
orchidee said:
A fine write B. I probably only know songs up to about 1995, and about two songs thereafter! lol.
May 13th, 2017 11:31
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