Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA
C H L O R O P H Y L L ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic
orchidee said:
I\'m off to talk to a tree now, and say nice things to it, even hug it! A fine write. Never knew there was so much to know about plants! Well, I recall some of it from what I learnt in earlier days.
A serious matter, though did you feel global warming on your field trip?!
May 3rd, 2017 11:46
orchidee said:
I\'m off to talk to a tree now, and say nice things to it, even hug it! A fine write. Never knew there was so much to know about plants! Well, I recall some of it from what I learnt in earlier days.
A serious matter, though did you feel global warming on your field trip?!
May 3rd, 2017 11:46
C H L O R O P H Y L L ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic
Jane Frye said:
Haha! I love this. Thanks!
May 3rd, 2017 11:40
Jane Frye said:
Haha! I love this. Thanks!
May 3rd, 2017 11:40
C H L O R O P H Y L L ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic
swingline said:
Don\'t forget the algae in the sea . Most of our oxygen comes from such . But with the rising sea temperatures this vital ecosystem is in peril .
May 3rd, 2017 11:13
swingline said:
Don\'t forget the algae in the sea . Most of our oxygen comes from such . But with the rising sea temperatures this vital ecosystem is in peril .
May 3rd, 2017 11:13
I AM A STREAM !
TheBrokenPrincess said:
I really love this and have read it a couple times in the last ten minutes. It is simple yet complex
loved it !
May 2nd, 2017 17:43
TheBrokenPrincess said:
I really love this and have read it a couple times in the last ten minutes. It is simple yet complex
loved it !
May 2nd, 2017 17:43
C A R N I V A L !
WriteBeLight said:
Yes, it is that time of year again for the Carnivals! Very poetic tribute.
May 2nd, 2017 12:14
WriteBeLight said:
Yes, it is that time of year again for the Carnivals! Very poetic tribute.
May 2nd, 2017 12:14
MUSEUMS IN SIX STANZAS !
Michael Edwards said:
It\'s a fabulous museum - the Hermitage is probably my favourite - would love to return to St P one day and such a great write
May 2nd, 2017 11:40
Michael Edwards said:
It\'s a fabulous museum - the Hermitage is probably my favourite - would love to return to St P one day and such a great write
May 2nd, 2017 11:40
COASTAL EROSION ~ A 77 Acrostic Sonnet !
Christina8 said:
Great job on this acrostic. Very informative. I\'m as green as I can be but I know we can all do better. Glad you are back and writing more sonnets and poems! I can tell this is a very serious subject especially for you. Hugs-Christina
May 2nd, 2017 08:46
Christina8 said:
Great job on this acrostic. Very informative. I\'m as green as I can be but I know we can all do better. Glad you are back and writing more sonnets and poems! I can tell this is a very serious subject especially for you. Hugs-Christina
May 2nd, 2017 08:46
MAKE LOVE NOT WAR !
Christina8 said:
This is a very good and eye opening poem. I\'m so glad you wrote it. Let\'s all pray that it never goes as far as nuclear war! Praying for peace, Hugs-Christina
May 2nd, 2017 08:38
Christina8 said:
This is a very good and eye opening poem. I\'m so glad you wrote it. Let\'s all pray that it never goes as far as nuclear war! Praying for peace, Hugs-Christina
May 2nd, 2017 08:38
C A R N I V A L !
Christina8 said:
Another wonderful rhyming poem! I didn\'t know you had carnival at a certain time each year but now I do! Sounds like a lot of fun! Hugs-Christina
May 2nd, 2017 08:32
Christina8 said:
Another wonderful rhyming poem! I didn\'t know you had carnival at a certain time each year but now I do! Sounds like a lot of fun! Hugs-Christina
May 2nd, 2017 08:32
MUSEUMS IN SIX STANZAS !
Christina8 said:
Lovely rhyming poem! Your details are so true. I also enjoy visiting museums on vacation. Great job! Hugs-Christina
May 2nd, 2017 08:28
Christina8 said:
Lovely rhyming poem! Your details are so true. I also enjoy visiting museums on vacation. Great job! Hugs-Christina
May 2nd, 2017 08:28
MUSEUMS IN SIX STANZAS !
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. I love museums, I am always amazed by the artefacts in them.
May 2nd, 2017 08:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. I love museums, I am always amazed by the artefacts in them.
May 2nd, 2017 08:06
MUSEUMS IN SIX STANZAS !
Gary Edward Geraci said:
\"Children looked bored....\" and seeing only the weapons....Great observation of a pressing societal ill Brian. This remains the real challenge today: how do we engage our children?
May 2nd, 2017 07:01
Gary Edward Geraci said:
\"Children looked bored....\" and seeing only the weapons....Great observation of a pressing societal ill Brian. This remains the real challenge today: how do we engage our children?
May 2nd, 2017 07:01
MUSEUMS IN SIX STANZAS !
OxfordSkills said:
Wow! I love that Brian. How you brought the story to life is simply amazing. Thank you for your many expressions of genius. If you haven\'t yet self-published, then please do so as quick as you can :-)
Also, I just want to apologise for being so busy, I haven\'t had time to log onto My Poetic Side or anything else besides my lesson planning and teaching, and everything else my PGCE programme required.
However, please know that I LOVE your poetic skills, and hope one day I can write the way you do. Well done once again Brian.. Well done! :-)
May 2nd, 2017 03:52
OxfordSkills said:
Wow! I love that Brian. How you brought the story to life is simply amazing. Thank you for your many expressions of genius. If you haven\'t yet self-published, then please do so as quick as you can :-)
Also, I just want to apologise for being so busy, I haven\'t had time to log onto My Poetic Side or anything else besides my lesson planning and teaching, and everything else my PGCE programme required.
However, please know that I LOVE your poetic skills, and hope one day I can write the way you do. Well done once again Brian.. Well done! :-)
May 2nd, 2017 03:52
C A R N I V A L !
orchidee said:
Thought you was having fun around the May Pole there! heehee.
May 1st, 2017 08:42
orchidee said:
Thought you was having fun around the May Pole there! heehee.
May 1st, 2017 08:42
MAKE LOVE NOT WAR !
Goldfinch60 said:
Bother hippies with their make love not war and John Lennon with give peace a chance had it right but those who can do anything about it just do not care!!
April 30th, 2017 11:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Bother hippies with their make love not war and John Lennon with give peace a chance had it right but those who can do anything about it just do not care!!
April 30th, 2017 11:26
MAKE LOVE NOT WAR !
orchidee said:
And... there\'s a lot of rubbish in some songs, though certain lines stand out as sensible and wise. I don\'t think mankind without God will naturally (human nature-ly) choose peace. Good deeds etc of many may go some way towards it though, as we retain God\'s image still.
April 30th, 2017 09:23
orchidee said:
And... there\'s a lot of rubbish in some songs, though certain lines stand out as sensible and wise. I don\'t think mankind without God will naturally (human nature-ly) choose peace. Good deeds etc of many may go some way towards it though, as we retain God\'s image still.
April 30th, 2017 09:23
MAKE LOVE NOT WAR !
orchidee said:
I understand - an election, or 100 elections, won\'t be the \'one thing\' needed, as many are saying. it\'s a change of the human heart that\'s needed. I\'ve always believed, since I first heard it: \'It\'s not society in itself that needs changing, but the people in the society\'.
Erm, yes Outback. I rather got lost somewhere in your discussion!
April 30th, 2017 09:20
orchidee said:
I understand - an election, or 100 elections, won\'t be the \'one thing\' needed, as many are saying. it\'s a change of the human heart that\'s needed. I\'ve always believed, since I first heard it: \'It\'s not society in itself that needs changing, but the people in the society\'.
Erm, yes Outback. I rather got lost somewhere in your discussion!
April 30th, 2017 09:20
MAKE LOVE NOT WAR !
WriteBeLight said:
Very timely message Brian. I hope they are listening.
April 30th, 2017 07:13
WriteBeLight said:
Very timely message Brian. I hope they are listening.
April 30th, 2017 07:13
MAKE LOVE NOT WAR !
Michael Edwards said:
I much prefer to work with meter over rhyme and it works so well here.
April 30th, 2017 05:26
Michael Edwards said:
I much prefer to work with meter over rhyme and it works so well here.
April 30th, 2017 05:26
COASTAL EROSION ~ A 77 Acrostic Sonnet !
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and so true. Those that can do anything about this do not seem to care.
April 30th, 2017 00:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and so true. Those that can do anything about this do not seem to care.
April 30th, 2017 00:17
JERUSALEM CHARM ! An Acrostic Sonnet
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Love your passion, witness, and your comment box Brian.
April 29th, 2017 22:28
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Love your passion, witness, and your comment box Brian.
April 29th, 2017 22:28
COASTAL EROSION ~ A 77 Acrostic Sonnet !
Fay Slimm. said:
Good to have you back again Brian and the warning acrostic shows how close we all are to the effects of damage by coastal erosion - - becoming more aware and being as green as we can will be part of the battle to come on this island. Thanks for the needed reminder dear friend.
April 29th, 2017 11:34
Fay Slimm. said:
Good to have you back again Brian and the warning acrostic shows how close we all are to the effects of damage by coastal erosion - - becoming more aware and being as green as we can will be part of the battle to come on this island. Thanks for the needed reminder dear friend.
April 29th, 2017 11:34
COASTAL EROSION ~ A 77 Acrostic Sonnet !
orchidee said:
About that global warming - did ya have ya hat, coat, and gloves on last week, on ya field trip?! Bbrrrr! Bet it warms up now you\'re back - indoors?!
April 29th, 2017 11:18
orchidee said:
About that global warming - did ya have ya hat, coat, and gloves on last week, on ya field trip?! Bbrrrr! Bet it warms up now you\'re back - indoors?!
April 29th, 2017 11:18
COASTAL EROSION ~ A 77 Acrostic Sonnet !
Angel Smileyface said:
Nice to see that your back you are always so nice and im looking forward to seeing more of your posts,
April 29th, 2017 07:43
Angel Smileyface said:
Nice to see that your back you are always so nice and im looking forward to seeing more of your posts,
April 29th, 2017 07:43
COASTAL EROSION ~ A 77 Acrostic Sonnet !
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks \"O\" what you say is true. For thousands of years MAN lived in harmony (equilibrium) with Nature and the CO2 produced by the FAUNA ans Volcanoes etc was processed by the plants and converted (together with H2O into carbohydrates (food) and OXYGEN ! About 200 years ago The Industrial Revolution started and deforestation and the CO\" increased form 250 ppm to over 400 ppm ~ which resulted in Global Waming ~ ice cap melt ~ sea level rise. This is GAIA fighting back to restore equilibrium ! As you say the PLANET will become uninhabitable for MAN and there is nowhere else to go. Personally I try to reverse this by being GREENER ~ OK ~ BRIAN
April 29th, 2017 07:35
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks \"O\" what you say is true. For thousands of years MAN lived in harmony (equilibrium) with Nature and the CO2 produced by the FAUNA ans Volcanoes etc was processed by the plants and converted (together with H2O into carbohydrates (food) and OXYGEN ! About 200 years ago The Industrial Revolution started and deforestation and the CO\" increased form 250 ppm to over 400 ppm ~ which resulted in Global Waming ~ ice cap melt ~ sea level rise. This is GAIA fighting back to restore equilibrium ! As you say the PLANET will become uninhabitable for MAN and there is nowhere else to go. Personally I try to reverse this by being GREENER ~ OK ~ BRIAN
April 29th, 2017 07:35
COASTAL EROSION ~ A 77 Acrostic Sonnet !
WriteBeLight said:
Glad to see you are back Brian! Great write!
April 29th, 2017 07:06
WriteBeLight said:
Glad to see you are back Brian! Great write!
April 29th, 2017 07:06
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