Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA
SPRING SUNRISES ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
swingline said:
My sun rises when I have coffee . Even if it\'s still dark outside . Yes I did see sunrise this morning . A day after a cold front with cold temps and severe clear skies .
May 6th, 2017 07:55
swingline said:
My sun rises when I have coffee . Even if it\'s still dark outside . Yes I did see sunrise this morning . A day after a cold front with cold temps and severe clear skies .
May 6th, 2017 07:55
SPRING SUNRISES ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
WriteBeLight said:
Love them both Brian. Unfortunately, a lot of weather that will keep them hidden all this coming week. At least I can look at your picture and words.
May 6th, 2017 06:33
WriteBeLight said:
Love them both Brian. Unfortunately, a lot of weather that will keep them hidden all this coming week. At least I can look at your picture and words.
May 6th, 2017 06:33
SPRING SUNRISES ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
Rajkumar said:
Yep brain I too love sunrises and sets ..especially in beaches
May 6th, 2017 05:17
Rajkumar said:
Yep brain I too love sunrises and sets ..especially in beaches
May 6th, 2017 05:17
RAINBOW OF ROSES !
swingline said:
Our roses have been blooming since late March . We went through a four week drought and they showed it but the rains have returned and so has the color . . . Red ! It seems to be so hard growing roses of other colors other than red . But I like all the colors even the black rose which is actually a dark red rose . (Correct me if I am in error) But I plant them on top of dead fish I catch (they were alive when I caught them) and the results are staggering . I guess you can see I was enthused by your poem .
May 5th, 2017 16:39
swingline said:
Our roses have been blooming since late March . We went through a four week drought and they showed it but the rains have returned and so has the color . . . Red ! It seems to be so hard growing roses of other colors other than red . But I like all the colors even the black rose which is actually a dark red rose . (Correct me if I am in error) But I plant them on top of dead fish I catch (they were alive when I caught them) and the results are staggering . I guess you can see I was enthused by your poem .
May 5th, 2017 16:39
RAINBOW OF ROSES !
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve already seen some in bloom in my neck of the woods - yes you must get the colour right
May 5th, 2017 10:58
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve already seen some in bloom in my neck of the woods - yes you must get the colour right
May 5th, 2017 10:58
RAINBOW OF ROSES !
Rajkumar said:
Roses may or may not help to win a girls heart..
But definitely it\'s a good start...
May 5th, 2017 10:31
Rajkumar said:
Roses may or may not help to win a girls heart..
But definitely it\'s a good start...
May 5th, 2017 10:31
RAINBOW OF ROSES !
Christina8 said:
Beautiful poem, Brian! I love sending flowers. I may not be as educated on the colors, I send what the heart tells me. (of course I\'ll look it up next time) Hugs--Christina
May 5th, 2017 08:04
Christina8 said:
Beautiful poem, Brian! I love sending flowers. I may not be as educated on the colors, I send what the heart tells me. (of course I\'ll look it up next time) Hugs--Christina
May 5th, 2017 08:04
RAINBOW OF ROSES !
WriteBeLight said:
Thanks for the guide to the colors. I never knew about this until years into my life when buying flowers for Mother\'s Day. And, what a color can mean relative to a Mom who as passed on. I am sure that applies to other occasions. It is very interesting... a true Science. Thanks Brian for the info.
May 5th, 2017 05:42
WriteBeLight said:
Thanks for the guide to the colors. I never knew about this until years into my life when buying flowers for Mother\'s Day. And, what a color can mean relative to a Mom who as passed on. I am sure that applies to other occasions. It is very interesting... a true Science. Thanks Brian for the info.
May 5th, 2017 05:42
RAINBOW OF ROSES !
orchidee said:
A fine write. The only \'rainbow\' or ring-of-roses we don\'t want is the ones from the days of the plague! Children merrily go on singing it, then the ghastly background to the song is explained to them!
May 5th, 2017 02:05
orchidee said:
A fine write. The only \'rainbow\' or ring-of-roses we don\'t want is the ones from the days of the plague! Children merrily go on singing it, then the ghastly background to the song is explained to them!
May 5th, 2017 02:05
WHATS YOUR NUMBER (1 - 10) ?
valene said:
hello Brian. methinks after looking at me birth date and what astrologically speaking me life path number is...i\'ll say 6! i like what i read and actually it was pretty on target as to the kind of person i be! so there ya have it....me fav. number and life path number all in one! number 6!
thanks for the fun read!
valene :)
May 4th, 2017 13:23
valene said:
hello Brian. methinks after looking at me birth date and what astrologically speaking me life path number is...i\'ll say 6! i like what i read and actually it was pretty on target as to the kind of person i be! so there ya have it....me fav. number and life path number all in one! number 6!
thanks for the fun read!
valene :)
May 4th, 2017 13:23
WHY ?
Rajkumar said:
\"Why does love make us both to smile and to cry\"....I like those lines much.....Sorry for late reply i just viewed now...
May 4th, 2017 13:16
Rajkumar said:
\"Why does love make us both to smile and to cry\"....I like those lines much.....Sorry for late reply i just viewed now...
May 4th, 2017 13:16
WHY ?
Lydia Black said:
Being with persons that are alike you is often boring, men and women are different; there are two sexes because God is intelligent, ... we are after His image, ... we need diversity, otherwise we would die of boredom. (:
Beautiful poem!
May 4th, 2017 13:06
Lydia Black said:
Being with persons that are alike you is often boring, men and women are different; there are two sexes because God is intelligent, ... we are after His image, ... we need diversity, otherwise we would die of boredom. (:
Beautiful poem!
May 4th, 2017 13:06
TRUE LOVE IS DIVINE ! A SONNETT
Lydia Black said:
The Bible indeed inspires the most beautiful love poems.
I wish you would give the poem its seriousness with a black font and more of a serous \'poem design, I thought it would be something on the funny side because of the design you have chosen.
Do forgive the correction. Otherwise, a beautiful poem, psalm 151.
May 4th, 2017 13:02
Lydia Black said:
The Bible indeed inspires the most beautiful love poems.
I wish you would give the poem its seriousness with a black font and more of a serous \'poem design, I thought it would be something on the funny side because of the design you have chosen.
Do forgive the correction. Otherwise, a beautiful poem, psalm 151.
May 4th, 2017 13:02
SEASONS HAIKU
Lydia Black said:
Vivaldi\'s Four Seasons put in poem, well summarised too. (: Beautiful!
May 4th, 2017 12:56
Lydia Black said:
Vivaldi\'s Four Seasons put in poem, well summarised too. (: Beautiful!
May 4th, 2017 12:56
C A R N I V A L !
Lydia Black said:
I must say that your profile picture sent me to believe of religious connotations, which would not be bad, I myself love God, only that He is sometimes badly represented, and I am bored by such \'advisers.
It is clear that you are a well read writer, and I wonder if you have published any book with your poems. I will be reading more from you; I must especially appreciate \'Carnival, as you send me to my passion, \'anime. Rarely does one paint with words, but you indeed impose an image upon the reader. Beautiful!
May 4th, 2017 12:49
Lydia Black said:
I must say that your profile picture sent me to believe of religious connotations, which would not be bad, I myself love God, only that He is sometimes badly represented, and I am bored by such \'advisers.
It is clear that you are a well read writer, and I wonder if you have published any book with your poems. I will be reading more from you; I must especially appreciate \'Carnival, as you send me to my passion, \'anime. Rarely does one paint with words, but you indeed impose an image upon the reader. Beautiful!
May 4th, 2017 12:49
ARBOREAL HAIKU
jlortiz84 said:
I am not a skilled writer. My techniques and phrasing is all raw and rough. I may learn a thing or two from you. I have enjoyed your writings. I too love nature and everything she has to offer me. There was a time where I was rather lost (emotionally) and when I drove by this field a lone tree stood proud. That moment changed me. I found peace in the chaos that was my life. I found the path to finding myself. Their are few that would understand that. She is my spirit that i must follow.
May 4th, 2017 12:25
jlortiz84 said:
I am not a skilled writer. My techniques and phrasing is all raw and rough. I may learn a thing or two from you. I have enjoyed your writings. I too love nature and everything she has to offer me. There was a time where I was rather lost (emotionally) and when I drove by this field a lone tree stood proud. That moment changed me. I found peace in the chaos that was my life. I found the path to finding myself. Their are few that would understand that. She is my spirit that i must follow.
May 4th, 2017 12:25
COASTAL EROSION ~ A 77 Acrostic Sonnet !
jlortiz84 said:
SO many people advert their eyes to our damaged earth. While there may be a cycle that she is going through, we are hurting her more and more every day for the sake of our \"progress\". We are killer her and therefore ourselves.
May 4th, 2017 12:18
jlortiz84 said:
SO many people advert their eyes to our damaged earth. While there may be a cycle that she is going through, we are hurting her more and more every day for the sake of our \"progress\". We are killer her and therefore ourselves.
May 4th, 2017 12:18
WHATS YOUR NUMBER (1 - 10) ?
Hopey_xx said:
Good poem- my favourite is 3. Do you know about the psychological links with the number 3? (And that 4 is the only number that has the same amount of letters in it to its value?) hehe
May 4th, 2017 11:00
Hopey_xx said:
Good poem- my favourite is 3. Do you know about the psychological links with the number 3? (And that 4 is the only number that has the same amount of letters in it to its value?) hehe
May 4th, 2017 11:00
WHATS YOUR NUMBER (1 - 10) ?
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, 9 has always seemed to be my lucky number.
May 4th, 2017 07:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, 9 has always seemed to be my lucky number.
May 4th, 2017 07:57
WHATS YOUR NUMBER (1 - 10) ?
swingline said:
\"7:12\" Do unto others as you would have then do unto you . A universal number that works everywhere .
May 4th, 2017 05:13
swingline said:
\"7:12\" Do unto others as you would have then do unto you . A universal number that works everywhere .
May 4th, 2017 05:13
WHATS YOUR NUMBER (1 - 10) ?
Michael Edwards said:
Currently I guess its 9 as its the only number that appears on my cars number plate
May 4th, 2017 04:25
Michael Edwards said:
Currently I guess its 9 as its the only number that appears on my cars number plate
May 4th, 2017 04:25
C H L O R O P H Y L L ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic
Goldfinch60 said:
Good acrostic.
The song 40 shades of green is not true, experiments have shown the the number of shades of green are infinite. Like the song though especially the Johnny Cash version.
May 4th, 2017 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Good acrostic.
The song 40 shades of green is not true, experiments have shown the the number of shades of green are infinite. Like the song though especially the Johnny Cash version.
May 4th, 2017 01:14
C H L O R O P H Y L L ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic
Michael Edwards said:
you are preaching to converted here but do continue preaching - there are so many who do not know the problem or chose to deny it.
May 3rd, 2017 13:53
Michael Edwards said:
you are preaching to converted here but do continue preaching - there are so many who do not know the problem or chose to deny it.
May 3rd, 2017 13:53
C H L O R O P H Y L L ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic
Fay Slimm. said:
An acrostic which teaches us much about the need for preservation of natural things - thanks Brian for sharing this wonderful make-up of leaves and plants.
May 3rd, 2017 13:03
Fay Slimm. said:
An acrostic which teaches us much about the need for preservation of natural things - thanks Brian for sharing this wonderful make-up of leaves and plants.
May 3rd, 2017 13:03
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