Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA
SEASONS HAIKU
Lydia Black said:
Vivaldi\'s Four Seasons put in poem, well summarised too. (: Beautiful!
May 4th, 2017 12:56
Lydia Black said:
Vivaldi\'s Four Seasons put in poem, well summarised too. (: Beautiful!
May 4th, 2017 12:56
C A R N I V A L !
Lydia Black said:
I must say that your profile picture sent me to believe of religious connotations, which would not be bad, I myself love God, only that He is sometimes badly represented, and I am bored by such \'advisers.
It is clear that you are a well read writer, and I wonder if you have published any book with your poems. I will be reading more from you; I must especially appreciate \'Carnival, as you send me to my passion, \'anime. Rarely does one paint with words, but you indeed impose an image upon the reader. Beautiful!
May 4th, 2017 12:49
Lydia Black said:
I must say that your profile picture sent me to believe of religious connotations, which would not be bad, I myself love God, only that He is sometimes badly represented, and I am bored by such \'advisers.
It is clear that you are a well read writer, and I wonder if you have published any book with your poems. I will be reading more from you; I must especially appreciate \'Carnival, as you send me to my passion, \'anime. Rarely does one paint with words, but you indeed impose an image upon the reader. Beautiful!
May 4th, 2017 12:49
ARBOREAL HAIKU
jlortiz84 said:
I am not a skilled writer. My techniques and phrasing is all raw and rough. I may learn a thing or two from you. I have enjoyed your writings. I too love nature and everything she has to offer me. There was a time where I was rather lost (emotionally) and when I drove by this field a lone tree stood proud. That moment changed me. I found peace in the chaos that was my life. I found the path to finding myself. Their are few that would understand that. She is my spirit that i must follow.
May 4th, 2017 12:25
jlortiz84 said:
I am not a skilled writer. My techniques and phrasing is all raw and rough. I may learn a thing or two from you. I have enjoyed your writings. I too love nature and everything she has to offer me. There was a time where I was rather lost (emotionally) and when I drove by this field a lone tree stood proud. That moment changed me. I found peace in the chaos that was my life. I found the path to finding myself. Their are few that would understand that. She is my spirit that i must follow.
May 4th, 2017 12:25
COASTAL EROSION ~ A 77 Acrostic Sonnet !
jlortiz84 said:
SO many people advert their eyes to our damaged earth. While there may be a cycle that she is going through, we are hurting her more and more every day for the sake of our \"progress\". We are killer her and therefore ourselves.
May 4th, 2017 12:18
jlortiz84 said:
SO many people advert their eyes to our damaged earth. While there may be a cycle that she is going through, we are hurting her more and more every day for the sake of our \"progress\". We are killer her and therefore ourselves.
May 4th, 2017 12:18
WHATS YOUR NUMBER (1 - 10) ?
Hopey_xx said:
Good poem- my favourite is 3. Do you know about the psychological links with the number 3? (And that 4 is the only number that has the same amount of letters in it to its value?) hehe
May 4th, 2017 11:00
Hopey_xx said:
Good poem- my favourite is 3. Do you know about the psychological links with the number 3? (And that 4 is the only number that has the same amount of letters in it to its value?) hehe
May 4th, 2017 11:00
WHATS YOUR NUMBER (1 - 10) ?
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, 9 has always seemed to be my lucky number.
May 4th, 2017 07:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, 9 has always seemed to be my lucky number.
May 4th, 2017 07:57
WHATS YOUR NUMBER (1 - 10) ?
swingline said:
\"7:12\" Do unto others as you would have then do unto you . A universal number that works everywhere .
May 4th, 2017 05:13
swingline said:
\"7:12\" Do unto others as you would have then do unto you . A universal number that works everywhere .
May 4th, 2017 05:13
WHATS YOUR NUMBER (1 - 10) ?
Michael Edwards said:
Currently I guess its 9 as its the only number that appears on my cars number plate
May 4th, 2017 04:25
Michael Edwards said:
Currently I guess its 9 as its the only number that appears on my cars number plate
May 4th, 2017 04:25
C H L O R O P H Y L L ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic
Goldfinch60 said:
Good acrostic.
The song 40 shades of green is not true, experiments have shown the the number of shades of green are infinite. Like the song though especially the Johnny Cash version.
May 4th, 2017 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Good acrostic.
The song 40 shades of green is not true, experiments have shown the the number of shades of green are infinite. Like the song though especially the Johnny Cash version.
May 4th, 2017 01:14
C H L O R O P H Y L L ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic
Michael Edwards said:
you are preaching to converted here but do continue preaching - there are so many who do not know the problem or chose to deny it.
May 3rd, 2017 13:53
Michael Edwards said:
you are preaching to converted here but do continue preaching - there are so many who do not know the problem or chose to deny it.
May 3rd, 2017 13:53
C H L O R O P H Y L L ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic
Fay Slimm. said:
An acrostic which teaches us much about the need for preservation of natural things - thanks Brian for sharing this wonderful make-up of leaves and plants.
May 3rd, 2017 13:03
Fay Slimm. said:
An acrostic which teaches us much about the need for preservation of natural things - thanks Brian for sharing this wonderful make-up of leaves and plants.
May 3rd, 2017 13:03
C H L O R O P H Y L L ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic
orchidee said:
I\'m off to talk to a tree now, and say nice things to it, even hug it! A fine write. Never knew there was so much to know about plants! Well, I recall some of it from what I learnt in earlier days.
A serious matter, though did you feel global warming on your field trip?!
May 3rd, 2017 11:46
orchidee said:
I\'m off to talk to a tree now, and say nice things to it, even hug it! A fine write. Never knew there was so much to know about plants! Well, I recall some of it from what I learnt in earlier days.
A serious matter, though did you feel global warming on your field trip?!
May 3rd, 2017 11:46
C H L O R O P H Y L L ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic
Jane Frye said:
Haha! I love this. Thanks!
May 3rd, 2017 11:40
Jane Frye said:
Haha! I love this. Thanks!
May 3rd, 2017 11:40
C H L O R O P H Y L L ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic
swingline said:
Don\'t forget the algae in the sea . Most of our oxygen comes from such . But with the rising sea temperatures this vital ecosystem is in peril .
May 3rd, 2017 11:13
swingline said:
Don\'t forget the algae in the sea . Most of our oxygen comes from such . But with the rising sea temperatures this vital ecosystem is in peril .
May 3rd, 2017 11:13
I AM A STREAM !
TheBrokenPrincess said:
I really love this and have read it a couple times in the last ten minutes. It is simple yet complex
loved it !
May 2nd, 2017 17:43
TheBrokenPrincess said:
I really love this and have read it a couple times in the last ten minutes. It is simple yet complex
loved it !
May 2nd, 2017 17:43
C A R N I V A L !
WriteBeLight said:
Yes, it is that time of year again for the Carnivals! Very poetic tribute.
May 2nd, 2017 12:14
WriteBeLight said:
Yes, it is that time of year again for the Carnivals! Very poetic tribute.
May 2nd, 2017 12:14
MUSEUMS IN SIX STANZAS !
Michael Edwards said:
It\'s a fabulous museum - the Hermitage is probably my favourite - would love to return to St P one day and such a great write
May 2nd, 2017 11:40
Michael Edwards said:
It\'s a fabulous museum - the Hermitage is probably my favourite - would love to return to St P one day and such a great write
May 2nd, 2017 11:40
COASTAL EROSION ~ A 77 Acrostic Sonnet !
Christina8 said:
Great job on this acrostic. Very informative. I\'m as green as I can be but I know we can all do better. Glad you are back and writing more sonnets and poems! I can tell this is a very serious subject especially for you. Hugs-Christina
May 2nd, 2017 08:46
Christina8 said:
Great job on this acrostic. Very informative. I\'m as green as I can be but I know we can all do better. Glad you are back and writing more sonnets and poems! I can tell this is a very serious subject especially for you. Hugs-Christina
May 2nd, 2017 08:46
MAKE LOVE NOT WAR !
Christina8 said:
This is a very good and eye opening poem. I\'m so glad you wrote it. Let\'s all pray that it never goes as far as nuclear war! Praying for peace, Hugs-Christina
May 2nd, 2017 08:38
Christina8 said:
This is a very good and eye opening poem. I\'m so glad you wrote it. Let\'s all pray that it never goes as far as nuclear war! Praying for peace, Hugs-Christina
May 2nd, 2017 08:38
C A R N I V A L !
Christina8 said:
Another wonderful rhyming poem! I didn\'t know you had carnival at a certain time each year but now I do! Sounds like a lot of fun! Hugs-Christina
May 2nd, 2017 08:32
Christina8 said:
Another wonderful rhyming poem! I didn\'t know you had carnival at a certain time each year but now I do! Sounds like a lot of fun! Hugs-Christina
May 2nd, 2017 08:32
MUSEUMS IN SIX STANZAS !
Christina8 said:
Lovely rhyming poem! Your details are so true. I also enjoy visiting museums on vacation. Great job! Hugs-Christina
May 2nd, 2017 08:28
Christina8 said:
Lovely rhyming poem! Your details are so true. I also enjoy visiting museums on vacation. Great job! Hugs-Christina
May 2nd, 2017 08:28
MUSEUMS IN SIX STANZAS !
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. I love museums, I am always amazed by the artefacts in them.
May 2nd, 2017 08:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. I love museums, I am always amazed by the artefacts in them.
May 2nd, 2017 08:06
MUSEUMS IN SIX STANZAS !
Gary Edward Geraci said:
\"Children looked bored....\" and seeing only the weapons....Great observation of a pressing societal ill Brian. This remains the real challenge today: how do we engage our children?
May 2nd, 2017 07:01
Gary Edward Geraci said:
\"Children looked bored....\" and seeing only the weapons....Great observation of a pressing societal ill Brian. This remains the real challenge today: how do we engage our children?
May 2nd, 2017 07:01
MUSEUMS IN SIX STANZAS !
OxfordSkills said:
Wow! I love that Brian. How you brought the story to life is simply amazing. Thank you for your many expressions of genius. If you haven\'t yet self-published, then please do so as quick as you can :-)
Also, I just want to apologise for being so busy, I haven\'t had time to log onto My Poetic Side or anything else besides my lesson planning and teaching, and everything else my PGCE programme required.
However, please know that I LOVE your poetic skills, and hope one day I can write the way you do. Well done once again Brian.. Well done! :-)
May 2nd, 2017 03:52
OxfordSkills said:
Wow! I love that Brian. How you brought the story to life is simply amazing. Thank you for your many expressions of genius. If you haven\'t yet self-published, then please do so as quick as you can :-)
Also, I just want to apologise for being so busy, I haven\'t had time to log onto My Poetic Side or anything else besides my lesson planning and teaching, and everything else my PGCE programme required.
However, please know that I LOVE your poetic skills, and hope one day I can write the way you do. Well done once again Brian.. Well done! :-)
May 2nd, 2017 03:52
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