Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA
THE LANGUAGE OF GIFTS OF FLOWERS (N to Z)
Michael Edwards said:
You got there - great work B
May 11th, 2017 05:00
Michael Edwards said:
You got there - great work B
May 11th, 2017 05:00
MUSEUMS IN SIX STANZAS !
Jessie said:
Brilliant job. You create perfect images in my head and recreate so many memories with your beautiful words. This is wonderful!
May 10th, 2017 19:07
Jessie said:
Brilliant job. You create perfect images in my head and recreate so many memories with your beautiful words. This is wonderful!
May 10th, 2017 19:07
THE LANGUAGE OF BRITISH FLOWERS (A to M)
WriteBeLight said:
Beautiful images you have bloomed Brian!
May 10th, 2017 12:57
WriteBeLight said:
Beautiful images you have bloomed Brian!
May 10th, 2017 12:57
FOOD GLORIOUS FOOD ~ DECONSTRUCTED HAIKU
Christina8 said:
Very good, Brian! I like these deconstructed Haiku very much. Yes we need to eat healthier as an American nation and stop with the supplements--agreed! More water and fruits and veggies! Great job! Hugs--Christina
May 10th, 2017 11:05
Christina8 said:
Very good, Brian! I like these deconstructed Haiku very much. Yes we need to eat healthier as an American nation and stop with the supplements--agreed! More water and fruits and veggies! Great job! Hugs--Christina
May 10th, 2017 11:05
THE LANGUAGE OF BRITISH FLOWERS (A to M)
Christina8 said:
A wonderful bouquet of my favorite scents. Well put together, will look for the other half tomorrow! Wherever I live I simply must have lilac. Glad you included that in your poem. Floral hugs-Christina
May 10th, 2017 10:58
Christina8 said:
A wonderful bouquet of my favorite scents. Well put together, will look for the other half tomorrow! Wherever I live I simply must have lilac. Glad you included that in your poem. Floral hugs-Christina
May 10th, 2017 10:58
THE LANGUAGE OF BRITISH FLOWERS (A to M)
Michael Edwards said:
Been in the garden all morning trimming ivy, cutting grass, hoeing, feeding pot plants - now aching a bit and soon off to the garden centre to get some bedding plants. Very apt posting.
May 10th, 2017 08:04
Michael Edwards said:
Been in the garden all morning trimming ivy, cutting grass, hoeing, feeding pot plants - now aching a bit and soon off to the garden centre to get some bedding plants. Very apt posting.
May 10th, 2017 08:04
THE LANGUAGE OF BRITISH FLOWERS (A to M)
Goldfinch60 said:
A bouquet to enjoy this day with the promise of another one tomorrow, thanks Brian.
May 10th, 2017 02:12
Goldfinch60 said:
A bouquet to enjoy this day with the promise of another one tomorrow, thanks Brian.
May 10th, 2017 02:12
FOOD GLORIOUS FOOD ~ DECONSTRUCTED HAIKU
Goldfinch60 said:
Sorry Brian but I am a bit of a pedant where Haiku are concerned. I believe that they SHOULD be 5-7-5 and that Haiku are specifically about the seasons or nature. The other 5-7-5 format is called senryu which relate to emotion.
As you know my poetry does not generally follow any rules but strangely haiku and senryu I believe should be written in they way and for the subjects they were meant.
Below are one each of my Haiku and Senryu.
Haiku
A single snowflake
Falls gently onto the grass
Unique hexagon
Senryu
Their love was so strong,
The strength of their love was lost,
Love became despair.
May 10th, 2017 01:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Sorry Brian but I am a bit of a pedant where Haiku are concerned. I believe that they SHOULD be 5-7-5 and that Haiku are specifically about the seasons or nature. The other 5-7-5 format is called senryu which relate to emotion.
As you know my poetry does not generally follow any rules but strangely haiku and senryu I believe should be written in they way and for the subjects they were meant.
Below are one each of my Haiku and Senryu.
Haiku
A single snowflake
Falls gently onto the grass
Unique hexagon
Senryu
Their love was so strong,
The strength of their love was lost,
Love became despair.
May 10th, 2017 01:29
FOOD GLORIOUS FOOD ~ DECONSTRUCTED HAIKU
Michael Edwards said:
Not so sure about water
Why do folk drink water?
Water’s such a tasteless drink.
I much prefer coffee.
Do I qualify for the sword?
May 9th, 2017 13:37
Michael Edwards said:
Not so sure about water
Why do folk drink water?
Water’s such a tasteless drink.
I much prefer coffee.
Do I qualify for the sword?
May 9th, 2017 13:37
FOOD GLORIOUS FOOD ~ DECONSTRUCTED HAIKU
orchidee said:
Ohh, the end of the world? MUST every Haiku be 5,7,5? We won\'t lose any sleep over it if they\'re not! Good write B.
May 9th, 2017 08:16
orchidee said:
Ohh, the end of the world? MUST every Haiku be 5,7,5? We won\'t lose any sleep over it if they\'re not! Good write B.
May 9th, 2017 08:16
FOOD GLORIOUS FOOD ~ DECONSTRUCTED HAIKU
swingline said:
Like a car with four wheels , why not five .
What looks like a good idea inside
Doesn\'t when it comes out live . Anyway why don\'t haikus grow hair . Then they could be called hairku . Banzai ! May the sword of life swing in your favor .
May 9th, 2017 07:28
swingline said:
Like a car with four wheels , why not five .
What looks like a good idea inside
Doesn\'t when it comes out live . Anyway why don\'t haikus grow hair . Then they could be called hairku . Banzai ! May the sword of life swing in your favor .
May 9th, 2017 07:28
FOOD GLORIOUS FOOD ~ DECONSTRUCTED HAIKU
WriteBeLight said:
Very important nutritional facts Brian. I love water, most of all. Salads and fruits are the best thing ever. So sorry about the list, though. Maybe bribe the Samurai with Saki? :)
May 9th, 2017 06:23
WriteBeLight said:
Very important nutritional facts Brian. I love water, most of all. Salads and fruits are the best thing ever. So sorry about the list, though. Maybe bribe the Samurai with Saki? :)
May 9th, 2017 06:23
CHARACTER TRAIT ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
Dawn Von Rue said:
I love the positivity in your writings. Definitely inspiring!
May 9th, 2017 02:29
Dawn Von Rue said:
I love the positivity in your writings. Definitely inspiring!
May 9th, 2017 02:29
CHARACTER TRAIT ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
WriteBeLight said:
Be a good friend and you will have good friends! Great write.
May 8th, 2017 13:32
WriteBeLight said:
Be a good friend and you will have good friends! Great write.
May 8th, 2017 13:32
SPRING SUNRISES ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
Christina8 said:
Just beautiful! I haven\'t seen the sunrise lately but I promise I will see it soon! Our sunsets are prettier as they fall over the water. Sunrises are beautiful accompanied by the symphonies of the birds singing. Great job! Hugs-Christina
May 8th, 2017 12:56
Christina8 said:
Just beautiful! I haven\'t seen the sunrise lately but I promise I will see it soon! Our sunsets are prettier as they fall over the water. Sunrises are beautiful accompanied by the symphonies of the birds singing. Great job! Hugs-Christina
May 8th, 2017 12:56
CHARACTER TRAIT ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
Christina8 said:
Indeed you are an encourager to all you encounter on this site! That\'s one reason I love reading and writing here. Very nice acrostic! I love all the character traits you wrote about and one more--humor. Gotta have that! ( I see there wasn\'t anywhere for you too add that :-) Hugs! Have a great day! Christina
May 8th, 2017 12:52
Christina8 said:
Indeed you are an encourager to all you encounter on this site! That\'s one reason I love reading and writing here. Very nice acrostic! I love all the character traits you wrote about and one more--humor. Gotta have that! ( I see there wasn\'t anywhere for you too add that :-) Hugs! Have a great day! Christina
May 8th, 2017 12:52
CHARACTER TRAIT ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
avigail said:
dear Brian
you are such a positive naive everchild guy
hugs and love for positive approach
May 8th, 2017 12:06
avigail said:
dear Brian
you are such a positive naive everchild guy
hugs and love for positive approach
May 8th, 2017 12:06
CHARACTER TRAIT ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
swingline said:
Yes , I see you as having always all of these traits . Praiseworthy indeed , but you left out nonjudgmental which I think you shine .
May 8th, 2017 05:03
swingline said:
Yes , I see you as having always all of these traits . Praiseworthy indeed , but you left out nonjudgmental which I think you shine .
May 8th, 2017 05:03
CHARACTER TRAIT ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
Mandi said:
You are an encourager. Beautiful write😊
May 8th, 2017 04:13
Mandi said:
You are an encourager. Beautiful write😊
May 8th, 2017 04:13
CHARACTER TRAIT ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
Michael Edwards said:
Positivity - still looking forward to future achievements even in my mid-70s. No vices (apart from wine), exercise every day - very active, always painting, writing, gardening as well as still giving demos, talks, and running art workshops.
May 8th, 2017 03:12
Michael Edwards said:
Positivity - still looking forward to future achievements even in my mid-70s. No vices (apart from wine), exercise every day - very active, always painting, writing, gardening as well as still giving demos, talks, and running art workshops.
May 8th, 2017 03:12
CHARACTER TRAIT ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
Goldfinch60 said:
My life is always looked at in a positive way in spite of what is thrown in its path.
May 8th, 2017 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
My life is always looked at in a positive way in spite of what is thrown in its path.
May 8th, 2017 01:51
PRAYER FOR GOD\'S BLESSING ~ EVERY DAY ~ A 6 6 2 Sonnet
swingline said:
I swing my feet out of bed and I pray to God . That way everyday starts out on a high note . Then right atter coffee I read a chapter or two of the Bible and a commentary and I feel no matter what I\'ve made my day . I almost became a teacher but decided I didn\'t have the grit and guts and selfish sacrifice it takes to make a good teacher . And it pains me , gut wrenching it is , to see the cuts in funding for education . Because you then get rulers who know nothing proclaiming they and they alone can fix everything .
May 7th, 2017 05:51
swingline said:
I swing my feet out of bed and I pray to God . That way everyday starts out on a high note . Then right atter coffee I read a chapter or two of the Bible and a commentary and I feel no matter what I\'ve made my day . I almost became a teacher but decided I didn\'t have the grit and guts and selfish sacrifice it takes to make a good teacher . And it pains me , gut wrenching it is , to see the cuts in funding for education . Because you then get rulers who know nothing proclaiming they and they alone can fix everything .
May 7th, 2017 05:51
PRAYER FOR GOD\'S BLESSING ~ EVERY DAY ~ A 6 6 2 Sonnet
Michael Edwards said:
As you will appreciate I can\'t relate but I do appreciate the sentiments so well expressed.
May 7th, 2017 02:13
Michael Edwards said:
As you will appreciate I can\'t relate but I do appreciate the sentiments so well expressed.
May 7th, 2017 02:13
PRAYER FOR GOD\'S BLESSING ~ EVERY DAY ~ A 6 6 2 Sonnet
orchidee said:
A true write. Sometimes I \'drift\' a bit in the week. All ready for Monday. But how am I for Friday too, for example?
May 7th, 2017 01:47
orchidee said:
A true write. Sometimes I \'drift\' a bit in the week. All ready for Monday. But how am I for Friday too, for example?
May 7th, 2017 01:47
PRAYER FOR GOD\'S BLESSING ~ EVERY DAY ~ A 6 6 2 Sonnet
Goldfinch60 said:
We all need Gos with us every day Brian.
May 7th, 2017 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
We all need Gos with us every day Brian.
May 7th, 2017 01:31
RAINBOW OF ROSES !
Mandi said:
Beautiful❤ What lady wouldn\'t want roses, especially if the one giving knew the language of flowers and chose accordingly so.
May 7th, 2017 00:27
Mandi said:
Beautiful❤ What lady wouldn\'t want roses, especially if the one giving knew the language of flowers and chose accordingly so.
May 7th, 2017 00:27
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