Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA
COUNT BLESSINGS ! A 5 ~ 9 Sonnet
swingline said:
Everything we have is on loan from God . Even oor life . And someday he will come and collect his due and profits . Pray that we may use his blessings and multiply his wealth as it glorifies his name and trust he places on us . So give thanks for everything , use his blessing wisely that you glorify his name .
May 16th, 2017 05:07
swingline said:
Everything we have is on loan from God . Even oor life . And someday he will come and collect his due and profits . Pray that we may use his blessings and multiply his wealth as it glorifies his name and trust he places on us . So give thanks for everything , use his blessing wisely that you glorify his name .
May 16th, 2017 05:07
BOTTLES ~ An ANAPHORA
Mandi said:
So true, RECYCLE! Lol I always save my glass bottles and reuse them for whatever or turn them into potions for my Halloween witch station😅. I have so many my mom tells me I\'m crazy, but always gives me some really neat shaped ones when ever she can. Love the rhyme, love this poem!
May 15th, 2017 13:30
Mandi said:
So true, RECYCLE! Lol I always save my glass bottles and reuse them for whatever or turn them into potions for my Halloween witch station😅. I have so many my mom tells me I\'m crazy, but always gives me some really neat shaped ones when ever she can. Love the rhyme, love this poem!
May 15th, 2017 13:30
BOTTLES ~ An ANAPHORA
Michael Edwards said:
And yet another new form to have a go at - good one B.
May 15th, 2017 10:20
Michael Edwards said:
And yet another new form to have a go at - good one B.
May 15th, 2017 10:20
BOTTLES ~ An ANAPHORA
Christina8 said:
You always amaze me with the new forms of poetry that you come up with! I always enjoy when they rhyme. Fantastic job! I\'m a recycle nut so I hope all my bottles are being reused somehow. Great poem! Hugs-Christina
May 15th, 2017 10:05
Christina8 said:
You always amaze me with the new forms of poetry that you come up with! I always enjoy when they rhyme. Fantastic job! I\'m a recycle nut so I hope all my bottles are being reused somehow. Great poem! Hugs-Christina
May 15th, 2017 10:05
MAN IN BLACK ~ JOHNNY CASH
Christina8 said:
Thanks for sharing this Brian! I really like this song. I\'m glad you posted, I will save as a fav! Hugs-Christina
May 15th, 2017 10:00
Christina8 said:
Thanks for sharing this Brian! I really like this song. I\'m glad you posted, I will save as a fav! Hugs-Christina
May 15th, 2017 10:00
BOTTLES ~ An ANAPHORA
orchidee said:
Made me think - an AMPHORA is a kind of bottle too. I was around ages ago when they invented them - so I say, in my pretence for being millions of years old! Oh vanity - it\'s so no-one guesses my real age! A fine write B.
May 15th, 2017 08:55
orchidee said:
Made me think - an AMPHORA is a kind of bottle too. I was around ages ago when they invented them - so I say, in my pretence for being millions of years old! Oh vanity - it\'s so no-one guesses my real age! A fine write B.
May 15th, 2017 08:55
BOTTLES ~ An ANAPHORA
swingline said:
I\'m glad your angst is not bottled up . You\'ve cut them off at the bottle neck . Now that they have bottle bottom from too much cake . Your broken bottle diplomacy was from too much shake . Soon the Earth will be one big bottle dome . So raise you drink it\'s bottle up .
May 15th, 2017 08:52
swingline said:
I\'m glad your angst is not bottled up . You\'ve cut them off at the bottle neck . Now that they have bottle bottom from too much cake . Your broken bottle diplomacy was from too much shake . Soon the Earth will be one big bottle dome . So raise you drink it\'s bottle up .
May 15th, 2017 08:52
BOTTLES ~ An ANAPHORA
kevin browne said:
this reminds me of a homeless man who started to build round houses for other homeless people out of plastic bottles. a scheme has now been made up to keep the work going. good work BRIANSODES,
May 15th, 2017 03:53
kevin browne said:
this reminds me of a homeless man who started to build round houses for other homeless people out of plastic bottles. a scheme has now been made up to keep the work going. good work BRIANSODES,
May 15th, 2017 03:53
GOD\'S LOVE & GUIDENCE ~ A Monolittura Sonnet
orchidee said:
Erm, it can depend also, which number Psalm you are reading. e.g. 88 is \'dark\'; 109 is somewhat hellfire and damnation to enemies. Then sweet as light, e.g. 23, 145. And so on. I did a written \'discourse\' of rhyming \'said\' poem of Psalm 119. It clocked up 3,500 words!
May 14th, 2017 10:51
orchidee said:
Erm, it can depend also, which number Psalm you are reading. e.g. 88 is \'dark\'; 109 is somewhat hellfire and damnation to enemies. Then sweet as light, e.g. 23, 145. And so on. I did a written \'discourse\' of rhyming \'said\' poem of Psalm 119. It clocked up 3,500 words!
May 14th, 2017 10:51
GOD\'S LOVE & GUIDENCE ~ A Monolittura Sonnet
orchidee said:
A fine write B. Every word of mine, after me mad moments of sherry-drinking (fantasy of course. lol) begin with S too. As in \'Shumthing shows here, that is a sthunning write. I wish I would sthop sherry-drinking\'! Good acting too, innit? heehee.
May 14th, 2017 10:48
orchidee said:
A fine write B. Every word of mine, after me mad moments of sherry-drinking (fantasy of course. lol) begin with S too. As in \'Shumthing shows here, that is a sthunning write. I wish I would sthop sherry-drinking\'! Good acting too, innit? heehee.
May 14th, 2017 10:48
GOD\'S LOVE & GUIDENCE ~ A Monolittura Sonnet
swingline said:
I have been studying the book of Psalms for the last two months now . It is packed full of wisdom and knowledge everyone should use and put to practice . It is always gratifying to see someone doing the same as me for it gives me hope for the world . Than you Brian for these inspiring words .
May 14th, 2017 09:27
swingline said:
I have been studying the book of Psalms for the last two months now . It is packed full of wisdom and knowledge everyone should use and put to practice . It is always gratifying to see someone doing the same as me for it gives me hope for the world . Than you Brian for these inspiring words .
May 14th, 2017 09:27
GOD\'S LOVE & GUIDENCE ~ A Monolittura Sonnet
Michael Edwards said:
Good one Brian - another form to add to my list of poems what I must write.
May 14th, 2017 07:01
Michael Edwards said:
Good one Brian - another form to add to my list of poems what I must write.
May 14th, 2017 07:01
MAN IN BLACK ~ JOHNNY CASH
swingline said:
Truly a giant among all muscans . One with a productive career spanning decades . But of all his great songs my favorite was Trent Reznor\'s song \"Hurt\" (Nine Inch Nail) . Anyone not moved by this epic music video has a heart of coal .
May 13th, 2017 12:53
swingline said:
Truly a giant among all muscans . One with a productive career spanning decades . But of all his great songs my favorite was Trent Reznor\'s song \"Hurt\" (Nine Inch Nail) . Anyone not moved by this epic music video has a heart of coal .
May 13th, 2017 12:53
MAN IN BLACK ~ JOHNNY CASH
orchidee said:
A fine write B. I probably only know songs up to about 1995, and about two songs thereafter! lol.
May 13th, 2017 11:31
orchidee said:
A fine write B. I probably only know songs up to about 1995, and about two songs thereafter! lol.
May 13th, 2017 11:31
MAN IN BLACK ~ JOHNNY CASH
Goldfinch60 said:
The Man in Black.
Andy Brister (Goldfinch60) – October 2014
He sat on his stool,
Guitar in hand,
Dressed in black.
This man who had so much
To tell us;
But was misunderstood
By many.
He Walked the Line
Straight to Folsom Prison,
But escaped and found himself
Surrounded by a Ring of Fire;
Until those Ghost Riders in the Sky
Pulled him back to Jackson
Where his love for June,
Gave him the Peace in the Valley,
That he was seeking.
Starkville City Jail held him overnight;
The crime was picking flowers!
But when released he drove away
In the car he had built One Piece at a Time.
This Boy Named Sue
Drove into San Quentin,
Where the inmates showed him
A Sea of Heartbreak,
And that he wasn’t a Wanted Man.
The Bitter Tears that were shed
Over the Vanishing race;
But will survive
As Long as the Grass Shall Grow,
And Drums will beat out to banish
Apache Tears.
This man, dressed in black
To remind all those in their lightening cars
And fancy clothes
Of the others that were held back.
 
At the end he walked the Streets of Laredo
Picking up a Tear Stained Letter.
He was Hurt, but did not see Sam Hall
Singing Danny Boy.
As he walked the Bridge Over Those Troubled Waters
To Give That Letter to Rose
He Hung His Head, as In his Life
He was such a Desperado.
But He had his Own Personal Jesus.
Without June he was
So Lonesome that He Could Cry.
The First Time Ever he Saw Her Face
The Man Came Around and knew,
That they would Meet Again.
Johnny Cash died September 12th 2003 – four months after June Carter, his wife of 35 years.
The last stanza of this poem makes reference to all the songs in his last recorded album American 1V: The Man Comes Around (popularly known as Hurt)
I wrote this back in 2014.
May 13th, 2017 03:33
Goldfinch60 said:
The Man in Black.
Andy Brister (Goldfinch60) – October 2014
He sat on his stool,
Guitar in hand,
Dressed in black.
This man who had so much
To tell us;
But was misunderstood
By many.
He Walked the Line
Straight to Folsom Prison,
But escaped and found himself
Surrounded by a Ring of Fire;
Until those Ghost Riders in the Sky
Pulled him back to Jackson
Where his love for June,
Gave him the Peace in the Valley,
That he was seeking.
Starkville City Jail held him overnight;
The crime was picking flowers!
But when released he drove away
In the car he had built One Piece at a Time.
This Boy Named Sue
Drove into San Quentin,
Where the inmates showed him
A Sea of Heartbreak,
And that he wasn’t a Wanted Man.
The Bitter Tears that were shed
Over the Vanishing race;
But will survive
As Long as the Grass Shall Grow,
And Drums will beat out to banish
Apache Tears.
This man, dressed in black
To remind all those in their lightening cars
And fancy clothes
Of the others that were held back.
 
At the end he walked the Streets of Laredo
Picking up a Tear Stained Letter.
He was Hurt, but did not see Sam Hall
Singing Danny Boy.
As he walked the Bridge Over Those Troubled Waters
To Give That Letter to Rose
He Hung His Head, as In his Life
He was such a Desperado.
But He had his Own Personal Jesus.
Without June he was
So Lonesome that He Could Cry.
The First Time Ever he Saw Her Face
The Man Came Around and knew,
That they would Meet Again.
Johnny Cash died September 12th 2003 – four months after June Carter, his wife of 35 years.
The last stanza of this poem makes reference to all the songs in his last recorded album American 1V: The Man Comes Around (popularly known as Hurt)
I wrote this back in 2014.
May 13th, 2017 03:33
40 SHADES OF GREEN ~ JOHNNY CASH
Christina8 said:
This is really great! He was a great musician who inspired a lot of people. I like the song where he explains why he wears black. Thanks for sharing this song, had never seen it before. Hugs-Christina
May 12th, 2017 09:52
Christina8 said:
This is really great! He was a great musician who inspired a lot of people. I like the song where he explains why he wears black. Thanks for sharing this song, had never seen it before. Hugs-Christina
May 12th, 2017 09:52
40 SHADES OF GREEN ~ JOHNNY CASH
Mandi said:
Beautiful. Great write and a pleasant to read.
May 12th, 2017 04:33
Mandi said:
Beautiful. Great write and a pleasant to read.
May 12th, 2017 04:33
40 SHADES OF GREEN ~ JOHNNY CASH
Jooles said:
I\'m not a Jonny cash fan but this was beautiful to read
May 12th, 2017 04:13
Jooles said:
I\'m not a Jonny cash fan but this was beautiful to read
May 12th, 2017 04:13
40 SHADES OF GREEN ~ JOHNNY CASH
P.X. Vexxus said:
Johnny Cash was a great artist. I was a kid when he passed away, but I still felt connected to him through his music, even to this day.
May 12th, 2017 03:54
P.X. Vexxus said:
Johnny Cash was a great artist. I was a kid when he passed away, but I still felt connected to him through his music, even to this day.
May 12th, 2017 03:54
40 SHADES OF GREEN ~ JOHNNY CASH
Michael Edwards said:
I also love Cash and Ireland especially with Irish in my immediate ancestry so this was much enjoyed - thanks Brian.
May 12th, 2017 03:48
Michael Edwards said:
I also love Cash and Ireland especially with Irish in my immediate ancestry so this was much enjoyed - thanks Brian.
May 12th, 2017 03:48
40 SHADES OF GREEN ~ JOHNNY CASH
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - I love that last line Brian - A name and talent to remember is JC and thanks for the well-rhymed and clever reminder of the great Emerald Isle.
May 12th, 2017 01:56
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - I love that last line Brian - A name and talent to remember is JC and thanks for the well-rhymed and clever reminder of the great Emerald Isle.
May 12th, 2017 01:56
40 SHADES OF GREEN ~ JOHNNY CASH
orchidee said:
A fine write-song B! I\'m not near 1,000 hymn-poems,, let alone 6,000 that Wesley wrote. Phew!
May 12th, 2017 01:49
orchidee said:
A fine write-song B! I\'m not near 1,000 hymn-poems,, let alone 6,000 that Wesley wrote. Phew!
May 12th, 2017 01:49
40 SHADES OF GREEN ~ JOHNNY CASH
Goldfinch60 said:
I have all of Johnny Cash\'s albums.
May 12th, 2017 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
I have all of Johnny Cash\'s albums.
May 12th, 2017 01:31
THE LANGUAGE OF GIFTS OF FLOWERS (N to Z)
Christina8 said:
Great job on the second half! Love the picture of those tulips--so tired of the usual red and yellow. But according to your poem, I\'m hoping to get some! lol Hugs-Christina
May 11th, 2017 08:46
Christina8 said:
Great job on the second half! Love the picture of those tulips--so tired of the usual red and yellow. But according to your poem, I\'m hoping to get some! lol Hugs-Christina
May 11th, 2017 08:46
THE LANGUAGE OF GIFTS OF FLOWERS (N to Z)
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you for the second bouquet Brian.
May 11th, 2017 07:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you for the second bouquet Brian.
May 11th, 2017 07:51
THE LANGUAGE OF GIFTS OF FLOWERS (N to Z)
orchidee said:
A fine write again, part 2! I\'m an Orchid-ee, cos I give off a fragrant aroma, I hope! Oohh, let\'s do 23 letter acrostics. Leave out Q, X, and Z! Q may as well be \'QU\' anyway! lol.
May 11th, 2017 06:29
orchidee said:
A fine write again, part 2! I\'m an Orchid-ee, cos I give off a fragrant aroma, I hope! Oohh, let\'s do 23 letter acrostics. Leave out Q, X, and Z! Q may as well be \'QU\' anyway! lol.
May 11th, 2017 06:29
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