Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA
BRAVE ~ NEW ~ WORLD Diamond Morphic Poem ~ with verse reverse !
orchidee said:
I say it\'s a good write. Write good a it\'s say I. Erm, I need more practice at this lark! lol. I\'m gibbering on now - no change there then! heehee.
May 8th, 2018 08:28
orchidee said:
I say it\'s a good write. Write good a it\'s say I. Erm, I need more practice at this lark! lol. I\'m gibbering on now - no change there then! heehee.
May 8th, 2018 08:28
BRAVE ~ NEW ~ WORLD Diamond Morphic Poem ~ with verse reverse !
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Brian, it works well both ways.
May 8th, 2018 05:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Brian, it works well both ways.
May 8th, 2018 05:27
IS IT THE BEST OF TIMES .... ? A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet
Arianna Smith said:
I really loved this read! I’d say it is one of your best. You have great description skills that’s for sure!!
May 7th, 2018 08:34
Arianna Smith said:
I really loved this read! I’d say it is one of your best. You have great description skills that’s for sure!!
May 7th, 2018 08:34
JESUS ~ LOVER OF MY SOUL ~ A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet
FineB said:
Thank you Brian.
A beautiful write.
The Lord is my light and my salvation
Whom shall I fear.
The Lord is the stronghold of my life.
Of whom shall I be afraid.
Psalm 27:1
Keep writing Brian
FineB
May 7th, 2018 08:09
FineB said:
Thank you Brian.
A beautiful write.
The Lord is my light and my salvation
Whom shall I fear.
The Lord is the stronghold of my life.
Of whom shall I be afraid.
Psalm 27:1
Keep writing Brian
FineB
May 7th, 2018 08:09
IS IT THE BEST OF TIMES .... ? A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI MAX ~ Trust you\'re having a fantastic MAY Bank Holiday in Sunny Manchester ! Thanks for your advice ~ Live for TODAY and let TOMORROW worry for itself ! Please check my latest FUSION ~ WINE ! Hugs BRIAN & ANGELA @@@
May 7th, 2018 07:32
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI MAX ~ Trust you\'re having a fantastic MAY Bank Holiday in Sunny Manchester ! Thanks for your advice ~ Live for TODAY and let TOMORROW worry for itself ! Please check my latest FUSION ~ WINE ! Hugs BRIAN & ANGELA @@@
May 7th, 2018 07:32
IS IT THE BEST OF TIMES .... ? A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet
orchidee said:
E.T. might come back. Has he gone home? Where\'s he gone?!
May 7th, 2018 02:50
orchidee said:
E.T. might come back. Has he gone home? Where\'s he gone?!
May 7th, 2018 02:50
IS IT THE BEST OF TIMES .... ? A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet
orchidee said:
The good old days? The bad old days? Good days for the future? Bad days for the future?
It\'s the wheat and weeds. The \'weeds\' seem to still exist, in case any of the \'wheat\' is pulled up along with them, before their time - at the Rapture. When you\'ll hear my rapturous (oh yes) singing for ever - arrghhh! lol.
May 7th, 2018 02:49
orchidee said:
The good old days? The bad old days? Good days for the future? Bad days for the future?
It\'s the wheat and weeds. The \'weeds\' seem to still exist, in case any of the \'wheat\' is pulled up along with them, before their time - at the Rapture. When you\'ll hear my rapturous (oh yes) singing for ever - arrghhh! lol.
May 7th, 2018 02:49
IS IT THE BEST OF TIMES .... ? A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet
Michael Edwards said:
One of your best Brian - a great piece - As Dickens wrote: It was the best of times, it was the worst of times
May 7th, 2018 02:29
Michael Edwards said:
One of your best Brian - a great piece - As Dickens wrote: It was the best of times, it was the worst of times
May 7th, 2018 02:29
IS IT THE BEST OF TIMES .... ? A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet
Goldfinch60 said:
If only those who have the power would listen to those who know all would be well but those in power are only there to look after the own interests. ME CYNICAL - OF COURSE I AM WHERE POLITICIANS ARE CONCERNED!!
May 7th, 2018 02:18
Goldfinch60 said:
If only those who have the power would listen to those who know all would be well but those in power are only there to look after the own interests. ME CYNICAL - OF COURSE I AM WHERE POLITICIANS ARE CONCERNED!!
May 7th, 2018 02:18
JESUS ~ LOVER OF MY SOUL ~ A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet
Laura🌻 said:
Mio Caro Amico BRIAN,
Grazie!
This is a beautiful read at the end of the day for my mom! Soothing and comforting!
Abbracci e Baci per te ed Angela...
~Laura~
May 6th, 2018 19:46
Laura🌻 said:
Mio Caro Amico BRIAN,
Grazie!
This is a beautiful read at the end of the day for my mom! Soothing and comforting!
Abbracci e Baci per te ed Angela...
~Laura~
May 6th, 2018 19:46
A RAINBOW VALLEY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet for ANGELA
Christina8 said:
The year will go by so fast! A fine tribute to your love and dedication for Maxine. Sister Christina
May 6th, 2018 18:37
Christina8 said:
The year will go by so fast! A fine tribute to your love and dedication for Maxine. Sister Christina
May 6th, 2018 18:37
JESUS ~ LOVER OF MY SOUL ~ A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet
Christina8 said:
Great Sunday write Brian!
May 6th, 2018 18:32
Christina8 said:
Great Sunday write Brian!
May 6th, 2018 18:32
I COULD HAVE GONE ............? A Modern Poem !
Arianna Smith said:
This is a great read! You make great poems!! Can’t wait to see more from you!!
May 6th, 2018 13:25
Arianna Smith said:
This is a great read! You make great poems!! Can’t wait to see more from you!!
May 6th, 2018 13:25
JESUS ~ LOVER OF MY SOUL ~ A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet
orchidee said:
A lovely write Brian. Some places never touch on \'obscurer\' Psalms. Except in the dreaded \'Sung Psalm\' which only the choir knows the tune to, and they\'re not telling us what it is. It \'murders the Psalms\' - horrid phrase!
A horrible \'game\' of \'Guess the Psalm tune/chant\'. Well, we all know No.23. Maybe No.100 too, and some others are well-known too.
May 6th, 2018 07:39
orchidee said:
A lovely write Brian. Some places never touch on \'obscurer\' Psalms. Except in the dreaded \'Sung Psalm\' which only the choir knows the tune to, and they\'re not telling us what it is. It \'murders the Psalms\' - horrid phrase!
A horrible \'game\' of \'Guess the Psalm tune/chant\'. Well, we all know No.23. Maybe No.100 too, and some others are well-known too.
May 6th, 2018 07:39
JESUS ~ LOVER OF MY SOUL ~ A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet
Michael Edwards said:
You know me Brian - but I still recognise a good write when I see it.
May 6th, 2018 03:58
Michael Edwards said:
You know me Brian - but I still recognise a good write when I see it.
May 6th, 2018 03:58
JESUS ~ LOVER OF MY SOUL ~ A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet
onepauly said:
I know your not a bad man.
I seek spirit if you want to call it that. I also know we don\'t die after death. but still I don\'t believe in a custom made god. check out my comment for seeking soul. by orci.
ill get back to you.
May 6th, 2018 03:27
onepauly said:
I know your not a bad man.
I seek spirit if you want to call it that. I also know we don\'t die after death. but still I don\'t believe in a custom made god. check out my comment for seeking soul. by orci.
ill get back to you.
May 6th, 2018 03:27
A RAINBOW VALLEY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet for ANGELA
Goldfinch60 said:
Rainbows are special, they re-affirm God\'s Covenant with us all.
May 6th, 2018 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Rainbows are special, they re-affirm God\'s Covenant with us all.
May 6th, 2018 01:13
A RAINBOW VALLEY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet for ANGELA
elizabethshadow said:
It\'s been a while since I\'ve seen an acrostic poem and didn\'t know that a sonnet could be created in that format. I loved the creative verses you incorporated with the letters!
May 5th, 2018 17:25
elizabethshadow said:
It\'s been a while since I\'ve seen an acrostic poem and didn\'t know that a sonnet could be created in that format. I loved the creative verses you incorporated with the letters!
May 5th, 2018 17:25
A RAINBOW VALLEY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet for ANGELA
Laura🌻 said:
Mio Caro Amico BRIAN,
Una bella poesia per la tua fidanzata, Angela! Gli auguro un buon viaggio!
A beautiful acrostic for your darling Angela (e una bella canzone) and a beautiful song by Ariana Grande! I’m sure Maxine appreciates the dedication! She’s a sweet special young lady!
I enjoyed the read, the pic and the musical clip! Wish Angela a safe trip on my behalf!
~Laura~
May 5th, 2018 13:36
Laura🌻 said:
Mio Caro Amico BRIAN,
Una bella poesia per la tua fidanzata, Angela! Gli auguro un buon viaggio!
A beautiful acrostic for your darling Angela (e una bella canzone) and a beautiful song by Ariana Grande! I’m sure Maxine appreciates the dedication! She’s a sweet special young lady!
I enjoyed the read, the pic and the musical clip! Wish Angela a safe trip on my behalf!
~Laura~
May 5th, 2018 13:36
A RAINBOW VALLEY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet for ANGELA
Fay Slimm. said:
What a beautiful picture and appealing song - - glad I was able to pop in for a few moments and caught this sad-happy posting on an imminent parting of twelve months - - best wishes to Angela as she discovers the grandeur of New Zealand. As your sonnet makes clear dear Brian -time flows by so quickly when love\'s in the air.
May 5th, 2018 13:22
Fay Slimm. said:
What a beautiful picture and appealing song - - glad I was able to pop in for a few moments and caught this sad-happy posting on an imminent parting of twelve months - - best wishes to Angela as she discovers the grandeur of New Zealand. As your sonnet makes clear dear Brian -time flows by so quickly when love\'s in the air.
May 5th, 2018 13:22
A RAINBOW VALLEY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet for ANGELA
Michael Edwards said:
Good work Brian
May 5th, 2018 12:38
Michael Edwards said:
Good work Brian
May 5th, 2018 12:38
A RAINBOW VALLEY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet for ANGELA
orchidee said:
My singing is not human, so...... A fine write Brian.
May 5th, 2018 09:57
orchidee said:
My singing is not human, so...... A fine write Brian.
May 5th, 2018 09:57
I COULD HAVE GONE ............? A Modern Poem !
Christina8 said:
A fun read-you listed it under \"fable\" but now I guess your secret is out. You got an invite? Lucky you! An interesting read. Sister Christina
May 4th, 2018 11:56
Christina8 said:
A fun read-you listed it under \"fable\" but now I guess your secret is out. You got an invite? Lucky you! An interesting read. Sister Christina
May 4th, 2018 11:56
I COULD HAVE GONE ............? A Modern Poem !
Netashi said:
Very nice poem brains as always It seemed somewhat whimsical, Keep up the good work
-Theta
May 4th, 2018 11:25
Netashi said:
Very nice poem brains as always It seemed somewhat whimsical, Keep up the good work
-Theta
May 4th, 2018 11:25
I COULD HAVE GONE ............? A Modern Poem !
Michael Edwards said:
A fun read Brian - must look into the form.
May 4th, 2018 01:57
Michael Edwards said:
A fun read Brian - must look into the form.
May 4th, 2018 01:57
I COULD HAVE GONE ............? A Modern Poem !
Goldfinch60 said:
You are right it certainly does not have rhyme or reason but is great fun to read.
May 4th, 2018 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
You are right it certainly does not have rhyme or reason but is great fun to read.
May 4th, 2018 01:54
I COULD HAVE GONE ............? A Modern Poem !
orchidee said:
You mean the Royal Wedding? You could have gone, but you turned down the invite? I\'m going! lol.
May 4th, 2018 01:32
orchidee said:
You mean the Royal Wedding? You could have gone, but you turned down the invite? I\'m going! lol.
May 4th, 2018 01:32
HAPPINESS ~ An 8 6 Sonnet
FineB said:
Thank you for your poem on Happiness
Its enchanting and wonderful
Keep writing Brian.
FineB
May 3rd, 2018 13:29
FineB said:
Thank you for your poem on Happiness
Its enchanting and wonderful
Keep writing Brian.
FineB
May 3rd, 2018 13:29
NAMING OF OUR INTERNAL ORGANS ~ A Dodeca Laudatio (12 Line Eulogy)
Laura🌻 said:
Mio Caro Amico BRIAN,
Una bella scrittura del nostro corpo!
A very informative piece!
I enjoyed it very much! Your students are very lucky to have you as their teacher!
Abbracci e Baci per te ed Angela...
~Laura~
May 3rd, 2018 11:02
Laura🌻 said:
Mio Caro Amico BRIAN,
Una bella scrittura del nostro corpo!
A very informative piece!
I enjoyed it very much! Your students are very lucky to have you as their teacher!
Abbracci e Baci per te ed Angela...
~Laura~
May 3rd, 2018 11:02
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