Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA



SUMMER LOVIN\' ~ A Seasonal Sonnet for CHRISTINA S
Michael Edwards said:

Just like that as I look out of the window - sun shining, garden full of bloom, striped lines where I have cut the lawn and a gin and tonic awaits - perfect Brian.

May 10th, 2018 11:08

SUMMER LOVIN\' ~ A Seasonal Sonnet for CHRISTINA S
Goldfinch60 said:

Dontknocjk the straw hats of cricket watchers that might be me one day, super summer sonnet Brian.

May 10th, 2018 07:55

SUMMER LOVIN\' ~ A Seasonal Sonnet for CHRISTINA S
Lorna said:

Very joyful poem Brian..... sounds a lot like the New England summers that go too soon but we wouldn\'t want to stay the same all year round........

May 10th, 2018 07:48

SUMMER LOVIN\' ~ A Seasonal Sonnet for CHRISTINA S
FineB said:

Thank you Brian,

Hope you have been enjoying the recent heatwave?

A charming and lovely poem that captures the essence of the most perfect British summer!

Keep writing
FineB

May 10th, 2018 03:44

LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT ~ A Diablo Morphic Mirror Poem !
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write Brian and good format.

May 10th, 2018 00:33

LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT ~ A Diablo Morphic Mirror Poem !
Christina8 said:

An awesome mirror poem---I knew it must\'ve been love at first sight! When you know, you know! Great one Brian. Congratulations and hugs to you both--Christina

May 9th, 2018 14:05

LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT ~ A Diablo Morphic Mirror Poem !
Fay Slimm. said:

Wonderful art-form top to tail and and back again - and full of reasons to celebrate love. A beautiful read Brian.

May 9th, 2018 04:47

LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT ~ A Diablo Morphic Mirror Poem !
orchidee said:

A fine write Brian. Should I try it? I might swoon! heehee.

May 9th, 2018 03:21

LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT ~ A Diablo Morphic Mirror Poem !
Michael Edwards said:

Perfecto ! Great form and yet another great write.

May 9th, 2018 03:02

BRAVE ~ NEW ~ WORLD Diamond Morphic Poem ~ with verse reverse !
Laura🌻 said:

Mio Caro Amico BRIAN,
I enjoyed reading this great write of yours! I like the structure. I think I’m going to give it a try! Thank you for the inspiration!
Abbracci e Baci per te ed Angela...
~Laura~

May 8th, 2018 22:35

BRAVE ~ NEW ~ WORLD Diamond Morphic Poem ~ with verse reverse !
Christina8 said:

I was going to say the same words Michael did--very well written and crafted. Very fine job!!

May 8th, 2018 11:45

BRAVE ~ NEW ~ WORLD Diamond Morphic Poem ~ with verse reverse !
Michael Edwards said:

Superbly writt3en and crafted - great work Brian

May 8th, 2018 10:18

BRAVE ~ NEW ~ WORLD Diamond Morphic Poem ~ with verse reverse !
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

MY EXPERIENCE WITH STUDENTS IS: They all want to change the World but don\'t know how ! We had a speaker came to speak at College ! When asked for his \"Plan for the Future\" He said first i would tear everything down ! We asked then what ? He replied I on\'t know BUT when the past is destroyed ~ only then ~ will the NEW APPEAR ! To me even at 30 ~ it seemed to big a price to pay ! Thanks Steve for your comments !
The only one who offers and HOPE for the BRAVE NEW WORLD is indeed Our Lord & Saviour JESUS CHRIST ~ AMEN ! Yours BRIAN ~ Christian Optimist !

May 8th, 2018 09:21

BRAVE ~ NEW ~ WORLD Diamond Morphic Poem ~ with verse reverse !
orchidee said:

But to take the theme of the poem - someone said \'The New Age\' stuff is all \'Old Age\' now! There are \'campaigney\' people, having a faith or none, who try to set about changing the world. Had a speaker on such at church once. Couldn\'t stand the fella. Nothing of Christianity in his talk. He rather bored me!

May 8th, 2018 08:31

BRAVE ~ NEW ~ WORLD Diamond Morphic Poem ~ with verse reverse !
orchidee said:

I say it\'s a good write. Write good a it\'s say I. Erm, I need more practice at this lark! lol. I\'m gibbering on now - no change there then! heehee.

May 8th, 2018 08:28

BRAVE ~ NEW ~ WORLD Diamond Morphic Poem ~ with verse reverse !
Goldfinch60 said:

Clever write Brian, it works well both ways.

May 8th, 2018 05:27

IS IT THE BEST OF TIMES .... ? A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet
Arianna Smith said:

I really loved this read! I’d say it is one of your best. You have great description skills that’s for sure!!

May 7th, 2018 08:34

JESUS ~ LOVER OF MY SOUL ~ A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet
FineB said:

Thank you Brian.

A beautiful write.

The Lord is my light and my salvation
Whom shall I fear.
The Lord is the stronghold of my life.
Of whom shall I be afraid.
Psalm 27:1

Keep writing Brian
FineB

May 7th, 2018 08:09

IS IT THE BEST OF TIMES .... ? A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

HI MAX ~ Trust you\'re having a fantastic MAY Bank Holiday in Sunny Manchester ! Thanks for your advice ~ Live for TODAY and let TOMORROW worry for itself ! Please check my latest FUSION ~ WINE ! Hugs BRIAN & ANGELA @@@

May 7th, 2018 07:32

IS IT THE BEST OF TIMES .... ? A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet
orchidee said:

E.T. might come back. Has he gone home? Where\'s he gone?!

May 7th, 2018 02:50

IS IT THE BEST OF TIMES .... ? A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet
orchidee said:

The good old days? The bad old days? Good days for the future? Bad days for the future?
It\'s the wheat and weeds. The \'weeds\' seem to still exist, in case any of the \'wheat\' is pulled up along with them, before their time - at the Rapture. When you\'ll hear my rapturous (oh yes) singing for ever - arrghhh! lol.

May 7th, 2018 02:49

IS IT THE BEST OF TIMES .... ? A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet
Michael Edwards said:

One of your best Brian - a great piece - As Dickens wrote: It was the best of times, it was the worst of times

May 7th, 2018 02:29

IS IT THE BEST OF TIMES .... ? A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet
Goldfinch60 said:

If only those who have the power would listen to those who know all would be well but those in power are only there to look after the own interests. ME CYNICAL - OF COURSE I AM WHERE POLITICIANS ARE CONCERNED!!

May 7th, 2018 02:18


JESUS ~ LOVER OF MY SOUL ~ A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet
Laura🌻 said:

Mio Caro Amico BRIAN,
Grazie!
This is a beautiful read at the end of the day for my mom! Soothing and comforting!
Abbracci e Baci per te ed Angela...
~Laura~

May 6th, 2018 19:46

A RAINBOW VALLEY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet for ANGELA
Christina8 said:

The year will go by so fast! A fine tribute to your love and dedication for Maxine. Sister Christina

May 6th, 2018 18:37

JESUS ~ LOVER OF MY SOUL ~ A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet
Christina8 said:

Great Sunday write Brian!

May 6th, 2018 18:32

I COULD HAVE GONE ............? A Modern Poem !
Arianna Smith said:

This is a great read! You make great poems!! Can’t wait to see more from you!!

May 6th, 2018 13:25

JESUS ~ LOVER OF MY SOUL ~ A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet
orchidee said:

A lovely write Brian. Some places never touch on \'obscurer\' Psalms. Except in the dreaded \'Sung Psalm\' which only the choir knows the tune to, and they\'re not telling us what it is. It \'murders the Psalms\' - horrid phrase!
A horrible \'game\' of \'Guess the Psalm tune/chant\'. Well, we all know No.23. Maybe No.100 too, and some others are well-known too.

May 6th, 2018 07:39

JESUS ~ LOVER OF MY SOUL ~ A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet
Michael Edwards said:

You know me Brian - but I still recognise a good write when I see it.

May 6th, 2018 03:58



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