Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Evicted From Hell.
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read about a not too fun topic and the rage that it instils in any parent and raises strong moral questions about age, consent, nature vs nurture, culture, punishment vs rehabilitation. A powerful write in humorous guise.
June 17th, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read about a not too fun topic and the rage that it instils in any parent and raises strong moral questions about age, consent, nature vs nurture, culture, punishment vs rehabilitation. A powerful write in humorous guise.
June 17th, 2025 04:14
Evicted From Hell.
nephilim56 said:
I know people like that, good write, enjoyed
June 17th, 2025 02:30
nephilim56 said:
I know people like that, good write, enjoyed
June 17th, 2025 02:30
Perfect Life.
Goldfinch60 said:
If we reached perfection in our lives Tobani we would have nothing to look forward to. I have a good life but it is certainly not perfect.
Andy
June 17th, 2025 01:03
Goldfinch60 said:
If we reached perfection in our lives Tobani we would have nothing to look forward to. I have a good life but it is certainly not perfect.
Andy
June 17th, 2025 01:03
Dads Jokes For Father\'s Day
NafisaSB said:
started a gloomy rainy day with a smile and a chuckle after reading the above - thanks for sharing
June 17th, 2025 00:18
NafisaSB said:
started a gloomy rainy day with a smile and a chuckle after reading the above - thanks for sharing
June 17th, 2025 00:18
Perfect Life.
arqios said:
A poem that remind us that our journey—our experiences, triumphs, and even mistakes—have meaning. That the struggles we face don’t make our life lesser; they make it real. And in reality, there is space for growth, connection, and the kind of authenticity that no illusion of perfection can ever provide. Yes, we are enough, just as we are. Excellent read.🙏🏻🕊️
June 16th, 2025 20:28
arqios said:
A poem that remind us that our journey—our experiences, triumphs, and even mistakes—have meaning. That the struggles we face don’t make our life lesser; they make it real. And in reality, there is space for growth, connection, and the kind of authenticity that no illusion of perfection can ever provide. Yes, we are enough, just as we are. Excellent read.🙏🏻🕊️
June 16th, 2025 20:28
Perfect Life.
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Truth echoes in your words—perfection is a myth, but authenticity is real. A brilliant unmasking of the lies we tell ourselves and others.
June 16th, 2025 20:12
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Truth echoes in your words—perfection is a myth, but authenticity is real. A brilliant unmasking of the lies we tell ourselves and others.
June 16th, 2025 20:12
Perfect Life.
Doggerel Dave said:
If (big IF) they are living the perfect life then the most superlative advice one can possibly provide is shut up about it, \'cos be assured someone somewhere somehow will take the buggers down (hey form a queue there!)
June 16th, 2025 07:23
Doggerel Dave said:
If (big IF) they are living the perfect life then the most superlative advice one can possibly provide is shut up about it, \'cos be assured someone somewhere somehow will take the buggers down (hey form a queue there!)
June 16th, 2025 07:23
Perfect Life.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent, my friend. It says the truth and does it with poetic prowess. Love the couplet structure. Wonderful job! Wishing you a wonderful week too, Tobani! 🌹👏
June 16th, 2025 06:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent, my friend. It says the truth and does it with poetic prowess. Love the couplet structure. Wonderful job! Wishing you a wonderful week too, Tobani! 🌹👏
June 16th, 2025 06:51
Perfect Life.
David Wakeling said:
The one thing I am sure of is there is no perfect life. We just have to bet with the cards we are dealt.A great thoughtful poem
June 16th, 2025 04:17
David Wakeling said:
The one thing I am sure of is there is no perfect life. We just have to bet with the cards we are dealt.A great thoughtful poem
June 16th, 2025 04:17
Perfect Life.
sorenbarrett said:
They say ignorance is bliss at least until the bubble is popped. A most evocative poem that poses the question of are these people deluded of attempting to delude us. If the former happy they are for now if the latter how miserable would that be. Good write Tobani
June 16th, 2025 03:59
sorenbarrett said:
They say ignorance is bliss at least until the bubble is popped. A most evocative poem that poses the question of are these people deluded of attempting to delude us. If the former happy they are for now if the latter how miserable would that be. Good write Tobani
June 16th, 2025 03:59
Wise Man Say (16).
Tony Grannell said:
Every one a gem and all belong in the top drawer. You ooze wisdom. Excellent!
Kind regards,
Tony.
June 15th, 2025 14:49
Tony Grannell said:
Every one a gem and all belong in the top drawer. You ooze wisdom. Excellent!
Kind regards,
Tony.
June 15th, 2025 14:49
Wise Man Say (16).
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice one Tobani
Silly and transcendant
June 15th, 2025 10:28
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice one Tobani
Silly and transcendant
June 15th, 2025 10:28
Wise Man Say (16).
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Happy Father’s Day! My sperm released decades ago and I can say…you absolutely right about that! 😂🤪 Great poem, my friend! Wise words indeed all around! 🌹👏
June 15th, 2025 08:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Happy Father’s Day! My sperm released decades ago and I can say…you absolutely right about that! 😂🤪 Great poem, my friend! Wise words indeed all around! 🌹👏
June 15th, 2025 08:19
Wise Man Say (16).
David Wakeling said:
I love these wise sayings/I will put some of them on my calender. Particularly if the kettle is boiling let some steam out first. Excellent
June 15th, 2025 04:27
David Wakeling said:
I love these wise sayings/I will put some of them on my calender. Particularly if the kettle is boiling let some steam out first. Excellent
June 15th, 2025 04:27
Wise Man Say (16).
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you Tobani for another edition of the Sunday humor and wisdom that are ironically tied together. Wasn\'t the court jester always the wisest man? Well done my friend.
June 15th, 2025 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you Tobani for another edition of the Sunday humor and wisdom that are ironically tied together. Wasn\'t the court jester always the wisest man? Well done my friend.
June 15th, 2025 03:55
Dads Jokes For Father\'s Day
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m not a dad, but I\'ve managed to laugh - they are quality corn.
June 14th, 2025 23:09
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m not a dad, but I\'ve managed to laugh - they are quality corn.
June 14th, 2025 23:09
Dads Jokes For Father\'s Day
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Tobani,
These are hilarious; you should do standup; you would have the audience in stitches. Plenty of ammunition here to try out on my son tomorrow - can\'t wait!
I trust you are keeping well,
Tony.
June 14th, 2025 14:23
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Tobani,
These are hilarious; you should do standup; you would have the audience in stitches. Plenty of ammunition here to try out on my son tomorrow - can\'t wait!
I trust you are keeping well,
Tony.
June 14th, 2025 14:23
Dads Jokes For Father\'s Day
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
These jokes are pure gold, Dad—you\'ve outdone yourself again!
Wishing you a Father\'s Day filled with laughter and endless puns!\"
June 14th, 2025 12:57
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
These jokes are pure gold, Dad—you\'ve outdone yourself again!
Wishing you a Father\'s Day filled with laughter and endless puns!\"
June 14th, 2025 12:57
Dads Jokes For Father\'s Day
orchidee said:
Good write PL. LOL. Does anyone laugh at MY jokes? If not, I best laugh at them myself, or else no-one may laugh at them! lol.
Fido says \'Not that old Bill Stickers/Bill Posters joke again Orchi - \'Haven\'t they found him yet? He\'s gonna be prosecuted. Why, what\'s he done?!\'
June 14th, 2025 12:30
orchidee said:
Good write PL. LOL. Does anyone laugh at MY jokes? If not, I best laugh at them myself, or else no-one may laugh at them! lol.
Fido says \'Not that old Bill Stickers/Bill Posters joke again Orchi - \'Haven\'t they found him yet? He\'s gonna be prosecuted. Why, what\'s he done?!\'
June 14th, 2025 12:30
Dads Jokes For Father\'s Day
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh, please don\'t ever stop! I am rolling over here! Dad jokes rock! And these were the cream of the crop! Wonderful job, my friend! 🌹👏
June 14th, 2025 08:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh, please don\'t ever stop! I am rolling over here! Dad jokes rock! And these were the cream of the crop! Wonderful job, my friend! 🌹👏
June 14th, 2025 08:22
Dads Jokes For Father\'s Day
arqios said:
Excellent dad jokes for Father’s Day 🙏🏻🕊
June 14th, 2025 08:21
arqios said:
Excellent dad jokes for Father’s Day 🙏🏻🕊
June 14th, 2025 08:21
Dads Jokes For Father\'s Day
Jerry Reynolds said:
Perls of joy for a rainy morning, PL. Still laughing. Happy Father\'s Day to you as well
June 14th, 2025 06:53
Jerry Reynolds said:
Perls of joy for a rainy morning, PL. Still laughing. Happy Father\'s Day to you as well
June 14th, 2025 06:53
Dads Jokes For Father\'s Day
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you for the fun, some made me smile, some made me laugh and some brightened the day.
June 14th, 2025 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you for the fun, some made me smile, some made me laugh and some brightened the day.
June 14th, 2025 04:45
Dads Jokes For Father\'s Day
David Wakeling said:
These were wonderful. Made me laugh.
June 14th, 2025 04:18
David Wakeling said:
These were wonderful. Made me laugh.
June 14th, 2025 04:18
A Cup Of Kindness.
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Tobani, I always offer cups of kindness to all.
Andy
June 14th, 2025 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Tobani, I always offer cups of kindness to all.
Andy
June 14th, 2025 01:18
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