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NafisaSB said:
that was indeed sad - i hope redemption and relief are out there somewhere
enjoyed the write..
July 23rd, 2025 00:13
NafisaSB said:
that was indeed sad - i hope redemption and relief are out there somewhere
enjoyed the write..
July 23rd, 2025 00:13
Glad She Survived!!!.
Musdeenthoughts said:
Soo much sadness is embedded in this words
July 22nd, 2025 15:19
Musdeenthoughts said:
Soo much sadness is embedded in this words
July 22nd, 2025 15:19
Loving Hate
Cheeky Missy said:
Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing. It was an eye-opener when I finally began to learn that I am the one who suffers if I don\'t forgive and/or hate the other individual. Lovely reminder.
July 22nd, 2025 13:40
Cheeky Missy said:
Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing. It was an eye-opener when I finally began to learn that I am the one who suffers if I don\'t forgive and/or hate the other individual. Lovely reminder.
July 22nd, 2025 13:40
Loving Hate
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🔥🤯💨. This is fire! 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 Tobani, this is seriously sharp and stripped bare...exactly how truth often lands. Your first line holds so much…and the final turn toward love isn’t just hopeful, it’s necessary. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹👏 Bravo! This should have endless faves imho! If I could fave it more, I would, I\'d make a day of it! Bravo!
July 22nd, 2025 13:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🔥🤯💨. This is fire! 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 Tobani, this is seriously sharp and stripped bare...exactly how truth often lands. Your first line holds so much…and the final turn toward love isn’t just hopeful, it’s necessary. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹👏 Bravo! This should have endless faves imho! If I could fave it more, I would, I\'d make a day of it! Bravo!
July 22nd, 2025 13:30
Loving Hate
REBELLIOUS SOUL said:
That\'s so powerful. The contrast between love and hate so raw and real.
July 22nd, 2025 10:06
REBELLIOUS SOUL said:
That\'s so powerful. The contrast between love and hate so raw and real.
July 22nd, 2025 10:06
Loving Hate
arqios said:
Strange how only the living know pain as far as we can attest. But it can be differed from as well. Much thinking to follow. 🕊️🙏🏻
July 22nd, 2025 08:17
arqios said:
Strange how only the living know pain as far as we can attest. But it can be differed from as well. Much thinking to follow. 🕊️🙏🏻
July 22nd, 2025 08:17
Loving Hate
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Yeah man some hate is truly unjustified esp when it comes from perpetrators, victims are justified to hate their tornentors
Kudos to this fine poem.
July 22nd, 2025 07:59
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Yeah man some hate is truly unjustified esp when it comes from perpetrators, victims are justified to hate their tornentors
Kudos to this fine poem.
July 22nd, 2025 07:59
Loving Hate
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the rhyme and the idea it rolls off the tongue in its flow. Nicely done.
July 22nd, 2025 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the rhyme and the idea it rolls off the tongue in its flow. Nicely done.
July 22nd, 2025 03:52
I Thought I`d Prepared.
NafisaSB said:
the raw emotions exposed here along with the undying love is beautifully represented..
July 22nd, 2025 00:49
NafisaSB said:
the raw emotions exposed here along with the undying love is beautifully represented..
July 22nd, 2025 00:49
Giant Lobster.
NafisaSB said:
thanks - did enjoy - especially your description of the typical britisher...
keep them coming
July 21st, 2025 23:57
NafisaSB said:
thanks - did enjoy - especially your description of the typical britisher...
keep them coming
July 21st, 2025 23:57
Glad She Survived!!!.
Cirawrites01 said:
Just cause someone survives rape it doesn\'t mean everything is gonna be okay, it ruins their mental health, makes them hyper aware and anxious about everything and mainly their surroundings, trust breaks with everything altering the bonds created. A good read.
July 21st, 2025 23:37
Cirawrites01 said:
Just cause someone survives rape it doesn\'t mean everything is gonna be okay, it ruins their mental health, makes them hyper aware and anxious about everything and mainly their surroundings, trust breaks with everything altering the bonds created. A good read.
July 21st, 2025 23:37
Glad She Survived!!!.
Damaso said:
Wow, how raw and dark the veil that today\'s text carries, along with the power of a feeling that wants to explode, taking everyone with it. Thank you so much for sharing it, Lord. Kind regards, and a good week to you and yours!
July 21st, 2025 15:42
Damaso said:
Wow, how raw and dark the veil that today\'s text carries, along with the power of a feeling that wants to explode, taking everyone with it. Thank you so much for sharing it, Lord. Kind regards, and a good week to you and yours!
July 21st, 2025 15:42
Glad She Survived!!!.
Bella Shepard said:
To have empathy for someone elses pain, is to have suffered yourself. To say it\'s not all bad, is to dismiss the humanity of the person who is suffering. A very powerful write in four lines.
July 21st, 2025 15:35
Bella Shepard said:
To have empathy for someone elses pain, is to have suffered yourself. To say it\'s not all bad, is to dismiss the humanity of the person who is suffering. A very powerful write in four lines.
July 21st, 2025 15:35
Wise Man Say (21)
Albix said:
I really like this wise man in your poem. Congratulations!
July 21st, 2025 10:08
Albix said:
I really like this wise man in your poem. Congratulations!
July 21st, 2025 10:08
Glad She Survived!!!.
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tobani,
This is a perfect poem about a living hell. Succinct and to the gut, deftly composed with grit and compassion. Excellent.
Fond regards,
Tony.
July 21st, 2025 09:32
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tobani,
This is a perfect poem about a living hell. Succinct and to the gut, deftly composed with grit and compassion. Excellent.
Fond regards,
Tony.
July 21st, 2025 09:32
Wise Man Say (19)
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
The wise man is right in every line.
July 21st, 2025 08:54
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
The wise man is right in every line.
July 21st, 2025 08:54
Glad She Survived!!!.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Tobani… this poem demands reflection. “At least you survived”… that line enraged me because I have received such flippant BS before. You named the cruelty survivors face even in recovery. You didn’t soften it...and that matters. Thank you for writing this. 🌹👏
July 21st, 2025 08:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Tobani… this poem demands reflection. “At least you survived”… that line enraged me because I have received such flippant BS before. You named the cruelty survivors face even in recovery. You didn’t soften it...and that matters. Thank you for writing this. 🌹👏
July 21st, 2025 08:29
Glad She Survived!!!.
sorenbarrett said:
There are worse things than death. Sometimes life is merely a reward for the selfish. A powerful poem that breaths anger, disgust, pity and sadness a powerful combination. With such a strong combination of emotions it has to be A fave
July 21st, 2025 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
There are worse things than death. Sometimes life is merely a reward for the selfish. A powerful poem that breaths anger, disgust, pity and sadness a powerful combination. With such a strong combination of emotions it has to be A fave
July 21st, 2025 03:58
Glad She Survived!!!.
Cheeky Missy said:
Precisely. Callously examined like the nonhuman entity the medical profession seems to relegate patients to in order to survive, the extreme mistreatment is tossed aside as if it couldn\'t damage beyond repair. Beautifully rendered in striking brevity with excellent imagery and a painfully haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 21st, 2025 03:21
Cheeky Missy said:
Precisely. Callously examined like the nonhuman entity the medical profession seems to relegate patients to in order to survive, the extreme mistreatment is tossed aside as if it couldn\'t damage beyond repair. Beautifully rendered in striking brevity with excellent imagery and a painfully haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 21st, 2025 03:21
Giant Lobster.
Kevin Hulme said:
As a Bonafide Englishman I can Honestly say I\'ve never worn Sandals and Socks in a Hot Climate; Duffle Coat and a Woolly Hat yes but no Sandals.
July 20th, 2025 18:18
Kevin Hulme said:
As a Bonafide Englishman I can Honestly say I\'ve never worn Sandals and Socks in a Hot Climate; Duffle Coat and a Woolly Hat yes but no Sandals.
July 20th, 2025 18:18
Wise Man Say (21)
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Tobani,
Splendid humour and overflowing with wisdom. I don\'t know how you do it and do it so well. As I said, splendid.
Fond regards,
Tony.
July 20th, 2025 13:19
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Tobani,
Splendid humour and overflowing with wisdom. I don\'t know how you do it and do it so well. As I said, splendid.
Fond regards,
Tony.
July 20th, 2025 13:19
Spinning Hoops
Keeter C said:
Had to look that word up! Now that I know the meaning I totally concur!
July 20th, 2025 08:24
Keeter C said:
Had to look that word up! Now that I know the meaning I totally concur!
July 20th, 2025 08:24
Wise Man Say (21)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Totally Tobani! I love this series so much. Please never stop writing them. You are our modern day Confucius and who knows, in 1,000 or so years, the phrase might be, “Tobani say”. LOL! Anywho, this series always hits that perfect nerve between wit and wisdom. My favorite one? “They say ignorance is bliss…but rejection is painful.” That says more in six words than most poems do in sixty. The blend of humor and heart is what makes these stand out. Keep ‘em coming, my friend. 🌹👏
July 20th, 2025 07:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Totally Tobani! I love this series so much. Please never stop writing them. You are our modern day Confucius and who knows, in 1,000 or so years, the phrase might be, “Tobani say”. LOL! Anywho, this series always hits that perfect nerve between wit and wisdom. My favorite one? “They say ignorance is bliss…but rejection is painful.” That says more in six words than most poems do in sixty. The blend of humor and heart is what makes these stand out. Keep ‘em coming, my friend. 🌹👏
July 20th, 2025 07:22
Wise Man Say (21)
Priya Tomar said:
Very well
Some good things ....
Well worded..
July 20th, 2025 05:11
Priya Tomar said:
Very well
Some good things ....
Well worded..
July 20th, 2025 05:11
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