Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Sold Your Soul To The Devil
hzugman said:
Nice description of the shortfalls of shortcuts. I really enjoyed this. Excellent poem.
March 31st, 2025 12:50
hzugman said:
Nice description of the shortfalls of shortcuts. I really enjoyed this. Excellent poem.
March 31st, 2025 12:50
You Get Out What You Put In
hzugman said:
Well said but I guess it depends on where you put your foot.
March 31st, 2025 11:46
hzugman said:
Well said but I guess it depends on where you put your foot.
March 31st, 2025 11:46
Sold Your Soul To The Devil
Salvia.S said:
A cautionary tale about the drak side of fame & the music industry. Well written!!
March 31st, 2025 07:41
Salvia.S said:
A cautionary tale about the drak side of fame & the music industry. Well written!!
March 31st, 2025 07:41
Aving A Laugh Wise Man Say (8)
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done. Really enjoyed. The line about the dog\'s breath made me smile.
March 31st, 2025 06:56
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done. Really enjoyed. The line about the dog\'s breath made me smile.
March 31st, 2025 06:56
Sold Your Soul To The Devil
The Indignant Poetess said:
The devils deal is never worth it and it says a lot about the person who is willing to sign it. Great poem.
March 31st, 2025 06:31
The Indignant Poetess said:
The devils deal is never worth it and it says a lot about the person who is willing to sign it. Great poem.
March 31st, 2025 06:31
Sold Your Soul To The Devil
sorenbarrett said:
Everything has its price. From the author note I know that this was intended for those that want quick fame and riches but as a metaphor it reaches far further. We all sell our souls for one thing or another. We make our choices as to what is important to us at the moment or in the foreseen future and often find that it is not all we thought it would be. Sacrifices of school for a job that doesn\'t exist or pays less, military service for a cause one doesn\'t support, a marriage to a partner we find not to be right. A lovely write that is quite pertinent
March 31st, 2025 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
Everything has its price. From the author note I know that this was intended for those that want quick fame and riches but as a metaphor it reaches far further. We all sell our souls for one thing or another. We make our choices as to what is important to us at the moment or in the foreseen future and often find that it is not all we thought it would be. Sacrifices of school for a job that doesn\'t exist or pays less, military service for a cause one doesn\'t support, a marriage to a partner we find not to be right. A lovely write that is quite pertinent
March 31st, 2025 04:13
Aving A Laugh Wise Man Say (8)
Goldfinch60 said:
More good ones Tobanl especially the last one.
Andy
March 31st, 2025 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
More good ones Tobanl especially the last one.
Andy
March 31st, 2025 01:45
Aving A Laugh Wise Man Say (8)
John Prophet said:
Love all these sayings. Good read!
March 30th, 2025 18:44
John Prophet said:
Love all these sayings. Good read!
March 30th, 2025 18:44
Aving A Laugh Wise Man Say (8)
Neilton said:
Thank you for sharing such beautiful message! Enjoyed very much
March 30th, 2025 09:25
Neilton said:
Thank you for sharing such beautiful message! Enjoyed very much
March 30th, 2025 09:25
Aving A Laugh Wise Man Say (8)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great ones, my friend! You should publish these into a book. They are THAT good! Can\'t wait for more. And, oh, true story on a dog\'s breath. I\'ve experienced both breath and bite...breath is worse so long as it doesn\'t turn to a mauling! LOL! Well done! 🌹👏 Have a gorgeous Sunday!
March 30th, 2025 07:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great ones, my friend! You should publish these into a book. They are THAT good! Can\'t wait for more. And, oh, true story on a dog\'s breath. I\'ve experienced both breath and bite...breath is worse so long as it doesn\'t turn to a mauling! LOL! Well done! 🌹👏 Have a gorgeous Sunday!
March 30th, 2025 07:55
Aving A Laugh Wise Man Say (8)
sorenbarrett said:
Thanks for brightening the day with these pieces of smiles. Loved them
March 30th, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
Thanks for brightening the day with these pieces of smiles. Loved them
March 30th, 2025 04:11
Aving A Laugh Wise Man Say (8)
arqios said:
Now this has become my Sunday rest and pot of cheer! 🙏🏻🕊
March 30th, 2025 02:47
arqios said:
Now this has become my Sunday rest and pot of cheer! 🙏🏻🕊
March 30th, 2025 02:47
You Get Out What You Put In
Goldfinch60 said:
I hope I do get my foot back Tobani, hopping through life is a challenge. 🤣😂🤣
Andy
March 30th, 2025 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
I hope I do get my foot back Tobani, hopping through life is a challenge. 🤣😂🤣
Andy
March 30th, 2025 01:51
You Get Out What You Put In
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sardonic wit, sharp humor, a foot to a jerk\'s ass..whatever you want to call this...it is masterfully brilliant in it\'s brevity, my friend. LOVE THIS! 🌹🙏 If I ever say this to anyone in real time, you will be cited! 🤣 \"Wise man Tobani says...\" or something to that effect! Again, brilliant!
March 29th, 2025 11:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sardonic wit, sharp humor, a foot to a jerk\'s ass..whatever you want to call this...it is masterfully brilliant in it\'s brevity, my friend. LOVE THIS! 🌹🙏 If I ever say this to anyone in real time, you will be cited! 🤣 \"Wise man Tobani says...\" or something to that effect! Again, brilliant!
March 29th, 2025 11:08
The Race
Cheeky Missy said:
Forsooth, good Sir. Begins to remind me of my late father\'s injunction to, \"enjoy the ride! The journey is half the fun of getting there...\" whether or not that is applicable. Beautifully rendered with a delightfully haunting poignancy. Thank go for sharing.
March 29th, 2025 10:08
Cheeky Missy said:
Forsooth, good Sir. Begins to remind me of my late father\'s injunction to, \"enjoy the ride! The journey is half the fun of getting there...\" whether or not that is applicable. Beautifully rendered with a delightfully haunting poignancy. Thank go for sharing.
March 29th, 2025 10:08
You Get Out What You Put In
Cheeky Missy said:
Hahaha, you\'re hilarious! Me still is uncertain about that, though, since methinks I\'ve put in a ton more than I\'ve recieved from the effort, however I\'m not dead as yet, so who knows. Delightful and sweetly rendered with a waltzing poignancy. Thank you for sharing! I love it.
March 29th, 2025 09:43
Cheeky Missy said:
Hahaha, you\'re hilarious! Me still is uncertain about that, though, since methinks I\'ve put in a ton more than I\'ve recieved from the effort, however I\'m not dead as yet, so who knows. Delightful and sweetly rendered with a waltzing poignancy. Thank you for sharing! I love it.
March 29th, 2025 09:43
You Get Out What You Put In
Friendship said:
Nicely said. Your poem aims to inspire me, as the reader, to reflect on my efforts and the potential rewards that can emerge from investing in life, encouraging a proactive and hopeful mindset.
March 29th, 2025 07:53
Friendship said:
Nicely said. Your poem aims to inspire me, as the reader, to reflect on my efforts and the potential rewards that can emerge from investing in life, encouraging a proactive and hopeful mindset.
March 29th, 2025 07:53
You Get Out What You Put In
orchidee said:
Oh no! What did one put one\'s foot in? Don\'t tell me - it may be TMI (too Much Info). lol.
March 29th, 2025 03:19
orchidee said:
Oh no! What did one put one\'s foot in? Don\'t tell me - it may be TMI (too Much Info). lol.
March 29th, 2025 03:19
The Race
Goldfinch60 said:
Just keep moving forward Tobani and the race will end when life has been satisfied.
Andy
March 29th, 2025 02:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Just keep moving forward Tobani and the race will end when life has been satisfied.
Andy
March 29th, 2025 02:54
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