Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Having a Bad Day.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Nataiella, this is unfiltered pain...laid bare without apology. As it should be. We should not be apologetic for feeling pain (something I need to remind myself). The repetition, the looping dread...it’s all too familiar. I love how are honest you are in the way you name what most people hide. This poem doesn’t ask for answers...just for someone to see. And I do, my friend. Hope that dark day is far behind you but if not, know I and many others are sending you our hug-filled love. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 28th, 2025 09:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Nataiella, this is unfiltered pain...laid bare without apology. As it should be. We should not be apologetic for feeling pain (something I need to remind myself). The repetition, the looping dread...it’s all too familiar. I love how are honest you are in the way you name what most people hide. This poem doesn’t ask for answers...just for someone to see. And I do, my friend. Hope that dark day is far behind you but if not, know I and many others are sending you our hug-filled love. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 28th, 2025 09:04
Having a Bad Day.
Friendship said:
Oh, Nataiella, hits a core.... your poem explores the theme of mental anguish, emotional turmoil, and the cyclical nature of depression. The Poet recounts a struggle with anger, irritability, and feelings of hopelessness, grappling with internal conflicts and a sense of despair. That revolves around the poet\'s daily battles with mental health, characterized by physical pain and emotional distress. The poem captures a sense of isolation and the repetitive nature of such days, suggesting an ongoing struggle without resolution. I hope your day gets better, my friend.
July 28th, 2025 06:54
Friendship said:
Oh, Nataiella, hits a core.... your poem explores the theme of mental anguish, emotional turmoil, and the cyclical nature of depression. The Poet recounts a struggle with anger, irritability, and feelings of hopelessness, grappling with internal conflicts and a sense of despair. That revolves around the poet\'s daily battles with mental health, characterized by physical pain and emotional distress. The poem captures a sense of isolation and the repetitive nature of such days, suggesting an ongoing struggle without resolution. I hope your day gets better, my friend.
July 28th, 2025 06:54
Having a Bad Day.
Jerry Reynolds said:
18 justified lines.
From a poet friend of mine
feeling less than fine
Good write, Nataiellai.
July 28th, 2025 06:09
Jerry Reynolds said:
18 justified lines.
From a poet friend of mine
feeling less than fine
Good write, Nataiellai.
July 28th, 2025 06:09
Having a Bad Day.
Lorna said:
And so... after days like this.... when the light comes back on it feels soooo good......
July 28th, 2025 05:31
Lorna said:
And so... after days like this.... when the light comes back on it feels soooo good......
July 28th, 2025 05:31
Having a Bad Day.
sorenbarrett said:
This poem does show a dark side that we all have from time to time but this one contines dark throughout. It speaks to me of frustration, a feeling of lack of control over ones thoughts and feelings, deterioration and gives a feeling of hopelessness. It shows good rhyme and flow that indicate control in action. Nicely written Nataliella
July 28th, 2025 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
This poem does show a dark side that we all have from time to time but this one contines dark throughout. It speaks to me of frustration, a feeling of lack of control over ones thoughts and feelings, deterioration and gives a feeling of hopelessness. It shows good rhyme and flow that indicate control in action. Nicely written Nataliella
July 28th, 2025 04:26
Having a Bad Day.
arqios said:
Thank you for sharing this raw moment of struggle; it takes real courage to put those dark thoughts into words. Remember that every hour you endure is proof of your strength, and you deserve to feel the light waiting just beyond today’s storm. ⛈️🕊️🙏🏻
July 28th, 2025 03:58
arqios said:
Thank you for sharing this raw moment of struggle; it takes real courage to put those dark thoughts into words. Remember that every hour you endure is proof of your strength, and you deserve to feel the light waiting just beyond today’s storm. ⛈️🕊️🙏🏻
July 28th, 2025 03:58
Wise Man Say (22)
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re too fun and too clever, offering poignant tidbits of good sense in morsels which seem not unlike the \"spoonful of sugar helps the medicine go down!\" doctrine. Excellently rendered with lovely imagery and a delightful humour to offset the weightier poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 27th, 2025 10:31
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re too fun and too clever, offering poignant tidbits of good sense in morsels which seem not unlike the \"spoonful of sugar helps the medicine go down!\" doctrine. Excellently rendered with lovely imagery and a delightful humour to offset the weightier poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 27th, 2025 10:31
Wise Man Say (22)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
You know how much I love this series, Tobani. In this one, the line about not condemning your own voice really stood out. We all do that, though, don\'t we? At least I have been known too...outside of poetry, of course...and even there for a time. Wise advice. Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 27th, 2025 07:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
You know how much I love this series, Tobani. In this one, the line about not condemning your own voice really stood out. We all do that, though, don\'t we? At least I have been known too...outside of poetry, of course...and even there for a time. Wise advice. Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 27th, 2025 07:54
Wise Man Say (22)
Lorna said:
Why are these wise men always hiding on YouTube but you never see them in real life! Ah well............
July 27th, 2025 07:28
Lorna said:
Why are these wise men always hiding on YouTube but you never see them in real life! Ah well............
July 27th, 2025 07:28
Wise Man Say (22)
arqios said:
Wow! 22 instalments already! Now that\'s more than just a bit of fun... more like serious FUN!
July 27th, 2025 06:41
arqios said:
Wow! 22 instalments already! Now that\'s more than just a bit of fun... more like serious FUN!
July 27th, 2025 06:41
Wise Man Say (22)
sorenbarrett said:
Love your wise men say it starts my Sunday. Have a great day
July 27th, 2025 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
Love your wise men say it starts my Sunday. Have a great day
July 27th, 2025 04:46
Sticking Together
Goldfinch60 said:
That glue sticks all things Tobani. LOL
Andy
July 27th, 2025 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
That glue sticks all things Tobani. LOL
Andy
July 27th, 2025 01:50
Sticking Together
NafisaSB said:
nice sense of humor - keep them coming
have a fun filled weekend
July 26th, 2025 23:27
NafisaSB said:
nice sense of humor - keep them coming
have a fun filled weekend
July 26th, 2025 23:27
Gaza (Help).
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Its really heartbreaking and heart-rending that these zionists are doing genocide pf even babies and women all just and only for land nothing else. The injured kids is shocking for this day and age ah.
Bravo to souls like you that can at least acknowledge their appalling plight!!
July 26th, 2025 15:16
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Its really heartbreaking and heart-rending that these zionists are doing genocide pf even babies and women all just and only for land nothing else. The injured kids is shocking for this day and age ah.
Bravo to souls like you that can at least acknowledge their appalling plight!!
July 26th, 2025 15:16
Sticking Together
Bella Shepard said:
Thank you for the laugh of the day, I sure needed one! lol
July 26th, 2025 14:44
Bella Shepard said:
Thank you for the laugh of the day, I sure needed one! lol
July 26th, 2025 14:44
Sticking Together
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh my--!!! I declare! Your punchline-- you got me. I couldn\'t help laughing too much. Thus is too good! There\'s nothing like repairing broken items, only to find your clumsy attempts have glued far more than the item at hand, oh me! Superb. I love it!!! Excellently rendered with awesome imagery and an irresistibly delightful poignancy... unless of course, we take it seriously. Thank you for sharing.
July 26th, 2025 14:07
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh my--!!! I declare! Your punchline-- you got me. I couldn\'t help laughing too much. Thus is too good! There\'s nothing like repairing broken items, only to find your clumsy attempts have glued far more than the item at hand, oh me! Superb. I love it!!! Excellently rendered with awesome imagery and an irresistibly delightful poignancy... unless of course, we take it seriously. Thank you for sharing.
July 26th, 2025 14:07
Sticking Together
Jerry Reynolds said:
Oh my dear Tobani. A delightful chuckle over morning coffee.
July 26th, 2025 08:32
Jerry Reynolds said:
Oh my dear Tobani. A delightful chuckle over morning coffee.
July 26th, 2025 08:32
Sticking Together
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Haha! Classic Mary and Harry, Tobani. You nailed the punchline on this one, as always...visual comedy with just the right dose of absurdity. Poor Harry never stood a chance...he never really does! 🤣 Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2025 08:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Haha! Classic Mary and Harry, Tobani. You nailed the punchline on this one, as always...visual comedy with just the right dose of absurdity. Poor Harry never stood a chance...he never really does! 🤣 Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2025 08:17
Loving Hate
rrodriguez said:
Yes, the most important thing is, love... Excellent!
July 26th, 2025 06:38
rrodriguez said:
Yes, the most important thing is, love... Excellent!
July 26th, 2025 06:38
Secrets (Senryu)
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tobany,
The confessions priests must bear in silence, such secrets bust be a daily burden weighed down with their own secrets. You have defined the fear in a secret in a perfectly rounded verse. Excellent, my friend.
Fond regards,
Tony.
July 26th, 2025 05:53
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tobany,
The confessions priests must bear in silence, such secrets bust be a daily burden weighed down with their own secrets. You have defined the fear in a secret in a perfectly rounded verse. Excellent, my friend.
Fond regards,
Tony.
July 26th, 2025 05:53
Sticking Together
arqios said:
Been a while since I heard of Harry and Mary! Good to see them again. 🕊️🙏🏻
July 26th, 2025 05:38
arqios said:
Been a while since I heard of Harry and Mary! Good to see them again. 🕊️🙏🏻
July 26th, 2025 05:38
Sticking Together
sorenbarrett said:
Another fun read, I thought that I knew where this one was going but wasn\'t sure if he was going to be glued in his shoes or the shoes glued to the floor or both. As it is now he can walk on his hands. Good one Tobani
July 26th, 2025 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
Another fun read, I thought that I knew where this one was going but wasn\'t sure if he was going to be glued in his shoes or the shoes glued to the floor or both. As it is now he can walk on his hands. Good one Tobani
July 26th, 2025 04:48
Secrets (Senryu)
Goldfinch60 said:
That fear may pass Tobani and life will be good.
Andy
July 26th, 2025 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
That fear may pass Tobani and life will be good.
Andy
July 26th, 2025 01:13
Secrets (Senryu)
Friendship said:
Oh my god, so true. The secrets we keep do become our fear. The sad part is that 98% of my secrets aren\'t mine; they belong to others, and I\'ve carried them all these years. And yet, they\'ve been played against me over and over as threats, reversed back to me as if it was my fault or I caused it!
July 25th, 2025 15:59
Friendship said:
Oh my god, so true. The secrets we keep do become our fear. The sad part is that 98% of my secrets aren\'t mine; they belong to others, and I\'ve carried them all these years. And yet, they\'ve been played against me over and over as threats, reversed back to me as if it was my fault or I caused it!
July 25th, 2025 15:59
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