Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Love Is In The Air
Natalie Gladmir said:
I admire your indefatigable thirst for love. Keep it up!
March 5th, 2025 17:27
Natalie Gladmir said:
I admire your indefatigable thirst for love. Keep it up!
March 5th, 2025 17:27
Love Is In The Air
Cassie58 said:
Don’t do yourself down Tobani, this is a beautiful acrostic on love and I am shouting it out loud. A fine poem and very much enjoyed. Have a great evening.
March 5th, 2025 15:12
Cassie58 said:
Don’t do yourself down Tobani, this is a beautiful acrostic on love and I am shouting it out loud. A fine poem and very much enjoyed. Have a great evening.
March 5th, 2025 15:12
Love Is In The Air
Neville said:
these words could not possibly have fallen randomly or by chance in the order they have been so meticulously placed here .. this is surely a fine love poem in acrostic form, unless I am grossly mistaken .. Neville
March 5th, 2025 10:32
Neville said:
these words could not possibly have fallen randomly or by chance in the order they have been so meticulously placed here .. this is surely a fine love poem in acrostic form, unless I am grossly mistaken .. Neville
March 5th, 2025 10:32
Love Is In The Air
arqios said:
How good it is to love and be loved. And don’t worry, the expression of love is unique and very personal. Every sculptor needs a block before chipping away, I believe this is the same with poetry in a way of thinking and understanding it. 🙏🏻🕊
March 5th, 2025 06:09
arqios said:
How good it is to love and be loved. And don’t worry, the expression of love is unique and very personal. Every sculptor needs a block before chipping away, I believe this is the same with poetry in a way of thinking and understanding it. 🙏🏻🕊
March 5th, 2025 06:09
Love Is In The Air
sorenbarrett said:
Tobani don\'t shoot yourself in the foot before the race begins. This poem has many elements of touching and tender lines that pull at heart strings. A poem of love of which all of us have written and in love innocence is our best tool.
March 5th, 2025 05:56
sorenbarrett said:
Tobani don\'t shoot yourself in the foot before the race begins. This poem has many elements of touching and tender lines that pull at heart strings. A poem of love of which all of us have written and in love innocence is our best tool.
March 5th, 2025 05:56
Love Is In The Air
David Wakeling said:
Good old Love. You gotta Love Love. Excellent poem
March 5th, 2025 05:15
David Wakeling said:
Good old Love. You gotta Love Love. Excellent poem
March 5th, 2025 05:15
On The Outside Looking In
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing . There’s a nice softness to your words
March 5th, 2025 03:18
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing . There’s a nice softness to your words
March 5th, 2025 03:18
Reasons to leave Mexico
Doggerel Dave said:
Nothing to constructively add after your piece and Tristan\'s response. I\'ll shut up and fave it instead.
March 5th, 2025 01:06
Doggerel Dave said:
Nothing to constructively add after your piece and Tristan\'s response. I\'ll shut up and fave it instead.
March 5th, 2025 01:06
Seasons In a Year.
Caring dove said:
Beautiful writing .. lovely to read this ))
March 4th, 2025 21:29
Caring dove said:
Beautiful writing .. lovely to read this ))
March 4th, 2025 21:29
Reasons to leave Mexico
Cheeky Missy said:
Well. That\'s a macabre and ghastly list of ghoulish behaviors dealt out. Nothing like letting the demons run the show, I guess. Excellently rendered with superb imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 4th, 2025 14:29
Cheeky Missy said:
Well. That\'s a macabre and ghastly list of ghoulish behaviors dealt out. Nothing like letting the demons run the show, I guess. Excellently rendered with superb imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 4th, 2025 14:29
Reasons to leave Mexico
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truth. And here’s the kicker: Who arms those cartels? The U.S. of A! It turns out there is a lawsuit currently before the U.S. Supreme Court, where Mexico is suing American gun companies, including Smith & Wesson, for designing and selling firearms that end up in the hands of drug cartels. They claim that over 70% of the weapons used by these cartels originate from the United States.
Just read this in the news today. “God bless the USA,” right? We manufacture and sell the guns, then impose hefty tariffs on those countries we sell them to, all while they grapple with drug and gang violence fueled by our products.
Forgive me, anyone who isn’t American and is reading this. I am so disgusted with my country that I can hardly articulate it constructively—other than through poetry. But disgusting...that I find it all.
Now, back to your poem, well done my friend. You not only brought up a major humanitarian issue going on in Mexico, you also posted it on a day where some major news about the USAs impact on those cartels is becoming more and more clear and obvious. Timely and urgent. Well done,. friend. This gets a fave. 🌹👏
March 4th, 2025 10:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truth. And here’s the kicker: Who arms those cartels? The U.S. of A! It turns out there is a lawsuit currently before the U.S. Supreme Court, where Mexico is suing American gun companies, including Smith & Wesson, for designing and selling firearms that end up in the hands of drug cartels. They claim that over 70% of the weapons used by these cartels originate from the United States.
Just read this in the news today. “God bless the USA,” right? We manufacture and sell the guns, then impose hefty tariffs on those countries we sell them to, all while they grapple with drug and gang violence fueled by our products.
Forgive me, anyone who isn’t American and is reading this. I am so disgusted with my country that I can hardly articulate it constructively—other than through poetry. But disgusting...that I find it all.
Now, back to your poem, well done my friend. You not only brought up a major humanitarian issue going on in Mexico, you also posted it on a day where some major news about the USAs impact on those cartels is becoming more and more clear and obvious. Timely and urgent. Well done,. friend. This gets a fave. 🌹👏
March 4th, 2025 10:05
Reasons to leave Mexico
arqios said:
So graphic and detailed! Never been and most probably never will set foot there. 🙏🏻🕊️
March 4th, 2025 04:39
arqios said:
So graphic and detailed! Never been and most probably never will set foot there. 🙏🏻🕊️
March 4th, 2025 04:39
Reasons to leave Mexico
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful write in brutal clarity the point is made. Where there is poverty life is cheep and so it is not just Mexico but much of central America that is desperate for relief. Great message sent.
March 4th, 2025 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful write in brutal clarity the point is made. Where there is poverty life is cheep and so it is not just Mexico but much of central America that is desperate for relief. Great message sent.
March 4th, 2025 04:23
Reasons to leave Mexico
Cassie58 said:
A horrific account of the depravity metered out by some in our species. Hardly surprising that those likely to be on the receiving end want to escape. Hard hitting Tobani. Have a peaceful Tuesday dear poet.
March 4th, 2025 03:03
Cassie58 said:
A horrific account of the depravity metered out by some in our species. Hardly surprising that those likely to be on the receiving end want to escape. Hard hitting Tobani. Have a peaceful Tuesday dear poet.
March 4th, 2025 03:03
Seasons In a Year.
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful words Tobani, that person being with your all the year is so glorious as it is for me.
Andy
March 4th, 2025 02:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful words Tobani, that person being with your all the year is so glorious as it is for me.
Andy
March 4th, 2025 02:57
Seasons In a Year.
David Wakeling said:
What a beautiful poem.It reads like a song.Excellent
March 3rd, 2025 17:03
David Wakeling said:
What a beautiful poem.It reads like a song.Excellent
March 3rd, 2025 17:03
Seasons In a Year.
Cheeky Missy said:
Very lovely and evocative. Charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a hauntingly romantic poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 3rd, 2025 16:02
Cheeky Missy said:
Very lovely and evocative. Charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a hauntingly romantic poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 3rd, 2025 16:02
Seasons In a Year.
Neville said:
Thank you for allowing me to literarily accompany you throughout your entire journey .. I can now see much more clearly what all the fuss is about ..
March 3rd, 2025 14:26
Neville said:
Thank you for allowing me to literarily accompany you throughout your entire journey .. I can now see much more clearly what all the fuss is about ..
March 3rd, 2025 14:26
Seasons In a Year.
hzugman said:
I enjoyed reading your trip around the seasons. Well done.
March 3rd, 2025 12:06
hzugman said:
I enjoyed reading your trip around the seasons. Well done.
March 3rd, 2025 12:06
Seasons In a Year.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Profoundly powerful, Tobani. Loved the message. The positive presence of another cannot be underestimated. Truth! 🌹👏
March 3rd, 2025 09:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Profoundly powerful, Tobani. Loved the message. The positive presence of another cannot be underestimated. Truth! 🌹👏
March 3rd, 2025 09:14
Seasons In a Year.
sorenbarrett said:
Tobani you completed the cycle well. In this poem the cycle of nature in seasons and so it is with life as well in metaphor this poem should speak to us all. Very nice with the emphasis on the company we have throughout the cycle.
March 3rd, 2025 05:12
sorenbarrett said:
Tobani you completed the cycle well. In this poem the cycle of nature in seasons and so it is with life as well in metaphor this poem should speak to us all. Very nice with the emphasis on the company we have throughout the cycle.
March 3rd, 2025 05:12
To Be Alone
Cassie58 said:
Isn’t it strange how things can go full circle and how we can eventually wish for what we once feared. A fine poem dear Tobani.
March 2nd, 2025 17:43
Cassie58 said:
Isn’t it strange how things can go full circle and how we can eventually wish for what we once feared. A fine poem dear Tobani.
March 2nd, 2025 17:43
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