Comments received on poems by soheil khodaparasti
A Nail in Silk
sorenbarrett said:
May that nail be shiny and golden with joy. A great write
June 14th, 2026 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
May that nail be shiny and golden with joy. A great write
June 14th, 2026 04:51
Noah\'s Ocean
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely metaphoric progression from small to large. Nicely done
June 13th, 2026 06:43
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely metaphoric progression from small to large. Nicely done
June 13th, 2026 06:43
Imbalance
sorenbarrett said:
This reads as a proverb. A lovely write that gets a fave
June 11th, 2026 16:29
sorenbarrett said:
This reads as a proverb. A lovely write that gets a fave
June 11th, 2026 16:29
On This Scale
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully said and I may add that the balance between the two keeps either pan from spilling
June 10th, 2026 07:55
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully said and I may add that the balance between the two keeps either pan from spilling
June 10th, 2026 07:55
The Sorrows of the World
sorenbarrett said:
Life and its adversities in this poem well done
June 9th, 2026 16:47
sorenbarrett said:
Life and its adversities in this poem well done
June 9th, 2026 16:47
The Sound of Dawn; The Sound of Morning
maya21 said:
Beautiful contrast—so simple yet powerful. It really shows how natural silence gets replaced by urban noise.
June 8th, 2026 05:56
maya21 said:
Beautiful contrast—so simple yet powerful. It really shows how natural silence gets replaced by urban noise.
June 8th, 2026 05:56
The Sound of Dawn; The Sound of Morning
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful presentation of differences between nature and those good old days and society and change and the present. Now I hear the cars at six in the morning and soon it will be all day and night. When does change become trauma and too much. Nicely written Soheil
June 8th, 2026 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful presentation of differences between nature and those good old days and society and change and the present. Now I hear the cars at six in the morning and soon it will be all day and night. When does change become trauma and too much. Nicely written Soheil
June 8th, 2026 04:54
Belief and Being
sorenbarrett said:
Most philosophical and thought provoking it is short but says so much. Lovely
June 5th, 2026 16:36
sorenbarrett said:
Most philosophical and thought provoking it is short but says so much. Lovely
June 5th, 2026 16:36
The Spring of Compassion
sorenbarrett said:
This is most thought provoking and causes one to ponder if refers to all such tears, the one of the speaker or of another.
June 4th, 2026 07:10
sorenbarrett said:
This is most thought provoking and causes one to ponder if refers to all such tears, the one of the speaker or of another.
June 4th, 2026 07:10
Naivety
sorenbarrett said:
So true duality exists in all things for if it did not they would not exist. Well said
June 1st, 2026 12:15
sorenbarrett said:
So true duality exists in all things for if it did not they would not exist. Well said
June 1st, 2026 12:15
The Storm Within the Breeze
NafisaSB said:
The visual is captivating enough to make us want to capture it👍
March 5th, 2026 11:58
NafisaSB said:
The visual is captivating enough to make us want to capture it👍
March 5th, 2026 11:58
The Storm Within the Breeze
Poetic Licence said:
This has the feel of stand and ride out the storm against the odds, don\'t cave in under the dark cloud. Well written and a wonderful message in the write, enjoyed the read
February 27th, 2026 20:11
Poetic Licence said:
This has the feel of stand and ride out the storm against the odds, don\'t cave in under the dark cloud. Well written and a wonderful message in the write, enjoyed the read
February 27th, 2026 20:11
The Storm Within the Breeze
sorenbarrett said:
This plays the card of give me your best shot. To take the worst and survive gives one an exhilaration that is like no other. Well done
February 27th, 2026 14:50
sorenbarrett said:
This plays the card of give me your best shot. To take the worst and survive gives one an exhilaration that is like no other. Well done
February 27th, 2026 14:50
Delusion
sorenbarrett said:
Such a metaphor for people as well. Nicely written
February 21st, 2026 16:38
sorenbarrett said:
Such a metaphor for people as well. Nicely written
February 21st, 2026 16:38
Until Dawn
sorenbarrett said:
I love the subtlety of this piece that feels spiritual and most comforting a fave
February 19th, 2026 15:24
sorenbarrett said:
I love the subtlety of this piece that feels spiritual and most comforting a fave
February 19th, 2026 15:24
The Taste of a Smile
sorenbarrett said:
A smile can fill a belly. Nicely written
February 18th, 2026 13:00
sorenbarrett said:
A smile can fill a belly. Nicely written
February 18th, 2026 13:00
The Measure of Being
sorenbarrett said:
Simply beautiful and most poetic. It speaks of nature at its deepest level. Here one must consider determinism as opposed to free will
February 17th, 2026 10:08
sorenbarrett said:
Simply beautiful and most poetic. It speaks of nature at its deepest level. Here one must consider determinism as opposed to free will
February 17th, 2026 10:08
Bitter Awareness, Too Late
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your revolves around the metaphor of a seed planted in the earth, representing life’s potential and aspirations that may never come to fruition. It raises questions about awareness and the inherent limitations of existence.
February 16th, 2026 06:57
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your revolves around the metaphor of a seed planted in the earth, representing life’s potential and aspirations that may never come to fruition. It raises questions about awareness and the inherent limitations of existence.
February 16th, 2026 06:57
Bitter Awareness, Too Late
sorenbarrett said:
Do we foresee our own ends or know how they may come about. I would not want to know for it would make me reckless before and overly confident. It would present a date to be worried about and preoccupied over. I think nature is grand having designed things as they are. Well written
February 16th, 2026 03:44
sorenbarrett said:
Do we foresee our own ends or know how they may come about. I would not want to know for it would make me reckless before and overly confident. It would present a date to be worried about and preoccupied over. I think nature is grand having designed things as they are. Well written
February 16th, 2026 03:44
Flaming Wine
sorenbarrett said:
A question that each must answer for themselves in each occasion. A lovely poetic format nicely done
February 15th, 2026 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
A question that each must answer for themselves in each occasion. A lovely poetic format nicely done
February 15th, 2026 04:20
Lie
sorenbarrett said:
Simple shifts in perspective make all the difference in the world. A lovely poem that emphasizes the difference. Very nicely written and a fave
February 14th, 2026 17:05
sorenbarrett said:
Simple shifts in perspective make all the difference in the world. A lovely poem that emphasizes the difference. Very nicely written and a fave
February 14th, 2026 17:05
Experience
sorenbarrett said:
Experience it the forge and kiln that hardens one to face life and its adversities. A wonderful write
February 12th, 2026 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
Experience it the forge and kiln that hardens one to face life and its adversities. A wonderful write
February 12th, 2026 04:17
Change
sorenbarrett said:
Three pieces of wisdom in poetic form in this one work. Nicely crafted
February 11th, 2026 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
Three pieces of wisdom in poetic form in this one work. Nicely crafted
February 11th, 2026 04:07
Life Is an Irony
sorenbarrett said:
Irony is the shadow of life and its reflection as well. Nicely written
February 10th, 2026 17:17
sorenbarrett said:
Irony is the shadow of life and its reflection as well. Nicely written
February 10th, 2026 17:17
A Sip Against Forgetting
sorenbarrett said:
Such wisdom in such short verse. Love is an oasis from hate and a saving grace not for the one loved but for the one that loves. A fave
February 9th, 2026 16:21
sorenbarrett said:
Such wisdom in such short verse. Love is an oasis from hate and a saving grace not for the one loved but for the one that loves. A fave
February 9th, 2026 16:21
The Breath of Being
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely twist on Descarte and the issue of being and the existential value of it.
February 8th, 2026 15:47
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely twist on Descarte and the issue of being and the existential value of it.
February 8th, 2026 15:47
Beyond All Ladders
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and nicely written it makes sense and the story implies the message to be learned. Very nice
February 7th, 2026 16:36
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and nicely written it makes sense and the story implies the message to be learned. Very nice
February 7th, 2026 16:36
Chaff from Wheat
sorenbarrett said:
A reversal to resolve the problem nicely written in this poem
February 6th, 2026 14:19
sorenbarrett said:
A reversal to resolve the problem nicely written in this poem
February 6th, 2026 14:19
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