Comments received on poems by soheil khodaparasti
The Marathon of Time
sorenbarrett said:
A Good poem of time and its effects arriving again at the beginning. Well done
December 28th, 2025 09:12
sorenbarrett said:
A Good poem of time and its effects arriving again at the beginning. Well done
December 28th, 2025 09:12
The Marathon of Time
Friendship said:
Nicely worded, your poem seems to express a sense of urgency and the struggle to keep pace with the inevitable passage of time, emphasizing the idea that life is a continuous journey.
December 28th, 2025 07:57
Friendship said:
Nicely worded, your poem seems to express a sense of urgency and the struggle to keep pace with the inevitable passage of time, emphasizing the idea that life is a continuous journey.
December 28th, 2025 07:57
Life
sorenbarrett said:
A good message for all in this poem of listening to our own music of life. Change the beat, the melody, the key, play it loud or soft and charm others as well as put ourselves to sleep. Nicely done
December 27th, 2025 08:11
sorenbarrett said:
A good message for all in this poem of listening to our own music of life. Change the beat, the melody, the key, play it loud or soft and charm others as well as put ourselves to sleep. Nicely done
December 27th, 2025 08:11
Life
sorenbarrett said:
I love this analogy of music and life. I believe the whole of everything is music in vibration where particles in waves unheard constitute all matter and nonmatter alike. A very lovely piece
December 27th, 2025 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
I love this analogy of music and life. I believe the whole of everything is music in vibration where particles in waves unheard constitute all matter and nonmatter alike. A very lovely piece
December 27th, 2025 04:05
In Praise of the Soul’s Light
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words about beautiful words, poetic about the poetic. Nicely written
December 26th, 2025 05:13
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words about beautiful words, poetic about the poetic. Nicely written
December 26th, 2025 05:13
A Beginning of Light
sorenbarrett said:
If one\'s birthday can inspire such one did not live in vain a beautiful write for this special day. A Happy holiday for you
December 25th, 2025 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
If one\'s birthday can inspire such one did not live in vain a beautiful write for this special day. A Happy holiday for you
December 25th, 2025 04:08
A Beginning of Light
NafisaSB said:
a nice and beautiful piece of verse..keep sharing...
December 25th, 2025 02:26
NafisaSB said:
a nice and beautiful piece of verse..keep sharing...
December 25th, 2025 02:26
Thirsty in Contemplation
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem and metaphor with deeper meaning. Well done. Happy holidays
December 24th, 2025 14:45
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem and metaphor with deeper meaning. Well done. Happy holidays
December 24th, 2025 14:45
Unlearning the Answer
sorenbarrett said:
The question that has no answer is why. Always told to never ask why only where, when, who, or what. Well written. Nicely done
December 23rd, 2025 12:38
sorenbarrett said:
The question that has no answer is why. Always told to never ask why only where, when, who, or what. Well written. Nicely done
December 23rd, 2025 12:38
Poetry Survives
sorenbarrett said:
Such an apt description in such vivid images a fave
December 22nd, 2025 07:26
sorenbarrett said:
Such an apt description in such vivid images a fave
December 22nd, 2025 07:26
Balance Sheet of Life
sorenbarrett said:
The one debt that one does not want is to oneself for it is in that debt that the interest is far too high. Well written
December 21st, 2025 19:02
sorenbarrett said:
The one debt that one does not want is to oneself for it is in that debt that the interest is far too high. Well written
December 21st, 2025 19:02
Two Views of the Wind
Demar Desu said:
Interesting you give us two views, then the religious language of Arabic… I would say it’s really three views, science, philosophy and religion. Great poem, I like all three combined
December 20th, 2025 22:17
Demar Desu said:
Interesting you give us two views, then the religious language of Arabic… I would say it’s really three views, science, philosophy and religion. Great poem, I like all three combined
December 20th, 2025 22:17
Two Views of the Wind
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of opposites and the question of which side you are on. As for me it is a blend of the two multiple views are generally a more honest view. Well written and nicely organized it presents its point well.
December 20th, 2025 15:34
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of opposites and the question of which side you are on. As for me it is a blend of the two multiple views are generally a more honest view. Well written and nicely organized it presents its point well.
December 20th, 2025 15:34
Celebration of Life
sorenbarrett said:
Age affects all and time passes without notice. Well written
December 18th, 2025 12:02
sorenbarrett said:
Age affects all and time passes without notice. Well written
December 18th, 2025 12:02
Celebration of Life
Paul Bell said:
Age is just a number I mentioned to the children.
Yes, they said, but yours is a big number.
Showed them a hand stand.
Now they\'ve rested their case.
December 18th, 2025 12:00
Paul Bell said:
Age is just a number I mentioned to the children.
Yes, they said, but yours is a big number.
Showed them a hand stand.
Now they\'ve rested their case.
December 18th, 2025 12:00
Witness of the Wind
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has seductive wisdom that requires thought and time. Lovely
December 16th, 2025 15:44
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has seductive wisdom that requires thought and time. Lovely
December 16th, 2025 15:44
An Abandoned Father
sorenbarrett said:
This poem calls out for one missing and felt lost. A lovely poem of a haunting nature. Lovely
December 14th, 2025 13:06
sorenbarrett said:
This poem calls out for one missing and felt lost. A lovely poem of a haunting nature. Lovely
December 14th, 2025 13:06
An Abandoned Father
Soman Ragavan said:
This poem is a cry from the heart. I can fully understand the feelings, the despair, the pain… Unfortunately, life flings sufferings across our paths…
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December 14th, 2025 11:02
Soman Ragavan said:
This poem is a cry from the heart. I can fully understand the feelings, the despair, the pain… Unfortunately, life flings sufferings across our paths…
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December 14th, 2025 11:02
Hope امید
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful poem on hope, my friend! A fave! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 13th, 2025 16:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful poem on hope, my friend! A fave! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 13th, 2025 16:37
Hope امید
sorenbarrett said:
The end of this poem reinforced my thoughts. To me hope is white the gathering of all colors of light not reflected but light itself and in it hope becomes what any wish or desire it is that canvas that exists blank before thought and paint are put to it. A lovely poem and a fave
December 13th, 2025 16:32
sorenbarrett said:
The end of this poem reinforced my thoughts. To me hope is white the gathering of all colors of light not reflected but light itself and in it hope becomes what any wish or desire it is that canvas that exists blank before thought and paint are put to it. A lovely poem and a fave
December 13th, 2025 16:32
The Unseen Border
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful poem, worded so well it is a fave
December 11th, 2025 10:33
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful poem, worded so well it is a fave
December 11th, 2025 10:33
Winter Jasmine
Adam Shirley (Rea) said:
Winter Jasmine is a beautiful image to bring to this poem. There is resilience in this poem, there is hope. Great write. - AS
December 10th, 2025 22:42
Adam Shirley (Rea) said:
Winter Jasmine is a beautiful image to bring to this poem. There is resilience in this poem, there is hope. Great write. - AS
December 10th, 2025 22:42
Winter Jasmine
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of what love not passion is. nicely crafted
December 10th, 2025 16:25
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of what love not passion is. nicely crafted
December 10th, 2025 16:25
Ashes of the Unseen Wound
sorenbarrett said:
Sharp depictions of times wounds in this poem. Short but graphic and well said.
December 9th, 2025 11:22
sorenbarrett said:
Sharp depictions of times wounds in this poem. Short but graphic and well said.
December 9th, 2025 11:22
My Fragments
Katie B. said:
Simply breathtaking and so well written. Thank you for sharing.
December 8th, 2025 05:15
Katie B. said:
Simply breathtaking and so well written. Thank you for sharing.
December 8th, 2025 05:15
My Fragments
Katie B. said:
Absolutely lovely and so well written. Thank you for sharing!
December 8th, 2025 05:11
Katie B. said:
Absolutely lovely and so well written. Thank you for sharing!
December 8th, 2025 05:11
My Fragments
sorenbarrett said:
I can not help myself and have to give it a fave. I read it twice and each time it got better
December 8th, 2025 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
I can not help myself and have to give it a fave. I read it twice and each time it got better
December 8th, 2025 04:47
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