Comments received on poems by soheil khodaparasti
Two Views of the Wind
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of opposites and the question of which side you are on. As for me it is a blend of the two multiple views are generally a more honest view. Well written and nicely organized it presents its point well.
December 20th, 2025 15:34
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of opposites and the question of which side you are on. As for me it is a blend of the two multiple views are generally a more honest view. Well written and nicely organized it presents its point well.
December 20th, 2025 15:34
Celebration of Life
sorenbarrett said:
Age affects all and time passes without notice. Well written
December 18th, 2025 12:02
sorenbarrett said:
Age affects all and time passes without notice. Well written
December 18th, 2025 12:02
Celebration of Life
Paul Bell said:
Age is just a number I mentioned to the children.
Yes, they said, but yours is a big number.
Showed them a hand stand.
Now they\'ve rested their case.
December 18th, 2025 12:00
Paul Bell said:
Age is just a number I mentioned to the children.
Yes, they said, but yours is a big number.
Showed them a hand stand.
Now they\'ve rested their case.
December 18th, 2025 12:00
Witness of the Wind
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has seductive wisdom that requires thought and time. Lovely
December 16th, 2025 15:44
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has seductive wisdom that requires thought and time. Lovely
December 16th, 2025 15:44
An Abandoned Father
sorenbarrett said:
This poem calls out for one missing and felt lost. A lovely poem of a haunting nature. Lovely
December 14th, 2025 13:06
sorenbarrett said:
This poem calls out for one missing and felt lost. A lovely poem of a haunting nature. Lovely
December 14th, 2025 13:06
An Abandoned Father
Soman Ragavan said:
This poem is a cry from the heart. I can fully understand the feelings, the despair, the pain… Unfortunately, life flings sufferings across our paths…
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December 14th, 2025 11:02
Soman Ragavan said:
This poem is a cry from the heart. I can fully understand the feelings, the despair, the pain… Unfortunately, life flings sufferings across our paths…
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December 14th, 2025 11:02
Hope امید
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful poem on hope, my friend! A fave! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 13th, 2025 16:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful poem on hope, my friend! A fave! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 13th, 2025 16:37
Hope امید
sorenbarrett said:
The end of this poem reinforced my thoughts. To me hope is white the gathering of all colors of light not reflected but light itself and in it hope becomes what any wish or desire it is that canvas that exists blank before thought and paint are put to it. A lovely poem and a fave
December 13th, 2025 16:32
sorenbarrett said:
The end of this poem reinforced my thoughts. To me hope is white the gathering of all colors of light not reflected but light itself and in it hope becomes what any wish or desire it is that canvas that exists blank before thought and paint are put to it. A lovely poem and a fave
December 13th, 2025 16:32
The Unseen Border
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful poem, worded so well it is a fave
December 11th, 2025 10:33
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful poem, worded so well it is a fave
December 11th, 2025 10:33
Winter Jasmine
Adam Shirley (Rea) said:
Winter Jasmine is a beautiful image to bring to this poem. There is resilience in this poem, there is hope. Great write. - AS
December 10th, 2025 22:42
Adam Shirley (Rea) said:
Winter Jasmine is a beautiful image to bring to this poem. There is resilience in this poem, there is hope. Great write. - AS
December 10th, 2025 22:42
Winter Jasmine
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of what love not passion is. nicely crafted
December 10th, 2025 16:25
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of what love not passion is. nicely crafted
December 10th, 2025 16:25
Ashes of the Unseen Wound
sorenbarrett said:
Sharp depictions of times wounds in this poem. Short but graphic and well said.
December 9th, 2025 11:22
sorenbarrett said:
Sharp depictions of times wounds in this poem. Short but graphic and well said.
December 9th, 2025 11:22
My Fragments
Katie B. said:
Simply breathtaking and so well written. Thank you for sharing.
December 8th, 2025 05:15
Katie B. said:
Simply breathtaking and so well written. Thank you for sharing.
December 8th, 2025 05:15
My Fragments
Katie B. said:
Absolutely lovely and so well written. Thank you for sharing!
December 8th, 2025 05:11
Katie B. said:
Absolutely lovely and so well written. Thank you for sharing!
December 8th, 2025 05:11
My Fragments
sorenbarrett said:
I can not help myself and have to give it a fave. I read it twice and each time it got better
December 8th, 2025 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
I can not help myself and have to give it a fave. I read it twice and each time it got better
December 8th, 2025 04:47
Silence Westward
sorenbarrett said:
The image is clear and so is the message. Well done
December 7th, 2025 09:34
sorenbarrett said:
The image is clear and so is the message. Well done
December 7th, 2025 09:34
The Gaze: The Purifier of Truth in the Human Soul
sorenbarrett said:
The words that are veils keep hidden some of the self sometimes because they do not show through. Well written
December 6th, 2025 15:00
sorenbarrett said:
The words that are veils keep hidden some of the self sometimes because they do not show through. Well written
December 6th, 2025 15:00
A Small Everyday Miracle
sorenbarrett said:
A definite fave. This poem pulls at the heartstrings for as a grandfather I have asked these questions myself and in their answer found peace and strength.
December 5th, 2025 11:00
sorenbarrett said:
A definite fave. This poem pulls at the heartstrings for as a grandfather I have asked these questions myself and in their answer found peace and strength.
December 5th, 2025 11:00
Outward and Inward
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting perspective on the words and their differences. Nicely worked out in this piece. Well done
December 4th, 2025 13:06
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting perspective on the words and their differences. Nicely worked out in this piece. Well done
December 4th, 2025 13:06
DE PRESS ION
sorenbarrett said:
To the one that has it, it doesn’t matter. To those that diagnose it, they label it from their own area. I believe that they are all of these things depending upon your point of view. Regardless, it’s a terrible illness.
December 3rd, 2025 12:06
sorenbarrett said:
To the one that has it, it doesn’t matter. To those that diagnose it, they label it from their own area. I believe that they are all of these things depending upon your point of view. Regardless, it’s a terrible illness.
December 3rd, 2025 12:06
Past Afar, Present Near
sorenbarrett said:
A comment on change with technology and what is worse we can not see the stars anymore for the smog and light pollution. Well done
December 2nd, 2025 10:17
sorenbarrett said:
A comment on change with technology and what is worse we can not see the stars anymore for the smog and light pollution. Well done
December 2nd, 2025 10:17
Fear هراس
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply philosophical the imagery in this poem is very nicely conceived. Well done
December 1st, 2025 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply philosophical the imagery in this poem is very nicely conceived. Well done
December 1st, 2025 04:37
Echo پژواک
sorenbarrett said:
The contradiction from one culture to another is expressed in this poem. In the United States the owl is seen as a symbol of wisdom. In this sense wisdom of knowledge may represent the forbidden fruit from the tree that when eaten lead to mortality and thereby death. So the owl of wisdom becomes the harbinger of death but at the same time good fortune for opening our eyes. A lovely poem
November 30th, 2025 06:17
sorenbarrett said:
The contradiction from one culture to another is expressed in this poem. In the United States the owl is seen as a symbol of wisdom. In this sense wisdom of knowledge may represent the forbidden fruit from the tree that when eaten lead to mortality and thereby death. So the owl of wisdom becomes the harbinger of death but at the same time good fortune for opening our eyes. A lovely poem
November 30th, 2025 06:17
Probability احتمال
sorenbarrett said:
Logical and beautifully stated. Concise and true that is poetry
November 29th, 2025 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
Logical and beautifully stated. Concise and true that is poetry
November 29th, 2025 04:16
Hale-Tterance نفیان
sorenbarrett said:
This short utterance is the essence of truth and in a breath is summarized life and death. A lovely write that is a fave
November 28th, 2025 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
This short utterance is the essence of truth and in a breath is summarized life and death. A lovely write that is a fave
November 28th, 2025 04:44
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