Comments received on poems by soheil khodaparasti
Inversion
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem where word play takes first place where meanings invert (what we go through goes through us, leaving behind what goes though us, out running what pulls us along, Quenching our thirst with what drinks from our thirst, An inversion (reversed, upside down, inside out) what better title than this. What a wonderful line \"standing like an earth that does not know which way the sky is. Being surrounded by sky it is in all directions. Thought provoking work Soheil
July 24th, 2026 14:14
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem where word play takes first place where meanings invert (what we go through goes through us, leaving behind what goes though us, out running what pulls us along, Quenching our thirst with what drinks from our thirst, An inversion (reversed, upside down, inside out) what better title than this. What a wonderful line \"standing like an earth that does not know which way the sky is. Being surrounded by sky it is in all directions. Thought provoking work Soheil
July 24th, 2026 14:14
Everything But One Thing
sorenbarrett said:
Philosophy the study that has no answers. Well written containing the continued challenges and uncertainties the changes of each question. Vagueness begets vague answers. I had a philosophy course once where the final exam had one question Why? I wrote a great deal and got a B a friend of mine wrote Because and got an A
July 22nd, 2026 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
Philosophy the study that has no answers. Well written containing the continued challenges and uncertainties the changes of each question. Vagueness begets vague answers. I had a philosophy course once where the final exam had one question Why? I wrote a great deal and got a B a friend of mine wrote Because and got an A
July 22nd, 2026 04:29
The Ever-Burning Lamp
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely write of longing and questioning where he waits for a daughter\'s response. Wonderful imagery fill the poem and great metaphors are used as the river knowing its way to the sea. Very nicely written it feels so intimate.
July 15th, 2026 06:40
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely write of longing and questioning where he waits for a daughter\'s response. Wonderful imagery fill the poem and great metaphors are used as the river knowing its way to the sea. Very nicely written it feels so intimate.
July 15th, 2026 06:40
(In) visible Ro pe
sorenbarrett said:
It is the structure of this poem that catches one\'s eye first then the message sinks through. Very nicely done with a subtle but quite deep message my friend.
July 4th, 2026 07:33
sorenbarrett said:
It is the structure of this poem that catches one\'s eye first then the message sinks through. Very nicely done with a subtle but quite deep message my friend.
July 4th, 2026 07:33
The Face of Fate
sorenbarrett said:
Hearing one and seeing the other leaves doubts. Well written
July 3rd, 2026 18:03
sorenbarrett said:
Hearing one and seeing the other leaves doubts. Well written
July 3rd, 2026 18:03
Norm and Deviation
sorenbarrett said:
Soheil this is a most profound and metaphoric poetic statement. Very nicely stated in a minimum of words
July 1st, 2026 09:27
sorenbarrett said:
Soheil this is a most profound and metaphoric poetic statement. Very nicely stated in a minimum of words
July 1st, 2026 09:27
shared breath
Friendship said:
Well written. Your revolves around the emotional and spiritual bond between two individuals, emphasizing the intimate act of sharing one\'s breath as a symbol of love and unity.
June 29th, 2026 19:56
Friendship said:
Well written. Your revolves around the emotional and spiritual bond between two individuals, emphasizing the intimate act of sharing one\'s breath as a symbol of love and unity.
June 29th, 2026 19:56
shared breath
soheil khodaparasti said:
Thank you for sharing that—it is a beautiful reflection. I find the connection between breath, life, and being deeply meaningful. The idea that, in ancient understanding, to breathe was synonymous with living is fascinating. It reminds us that existence itself is a profound mystery and that life is both a gift and a continual expression of that sacred reality. I appreciate your sharing this perspective.
June 29th, 2026 07:28
soheil khodaparasti said:
Thank you for sharing that—it is a beautiful reflection. I find the connection between breath, life, and being deeply meaningful. The idea that, in ancient understanding, to breathe was synonymous with living is fascinating. It reminds us that existence itself is a profound mystery and that life is both a gift and a continual expression of that sacred reality. I appreciate your sharing this perspective.
June 29th, 2026 07:28
shared breath
sorenbarrett said:
This is a marvelous poem well designed that has multiple ways of seeing it. When first looking at it the L written l appeared as an I bringing up Alister Crowley\'s IO Pan the whole issue of gender and sexuality in love. The title itself is intimate, although we all share breath and reveals at a deeper level the intimacy of all mankind and life in general. The breaking of the words into letter combinations is illustrated well in the last breaking of h ear ts where hear ear and hearts all fall into place. Very nicely done
June 29th, 2026 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
This is a marvelous poem well designed that has multiple ways of seeing it. When first looking at it the L written l appeared as an I bringing up Alister Crowley\'s IO Pan the whole issue of gender and sexuality in love. The title itself is intimate, although we all share breath and reveals at a deeper level the intimacy of all mankind and life in general. The breaking of the words into letter combinations is illustrated well in the last breaking of h ear ts where hear ear and hearts all fall into place. Very nicely done
June 29th, 2026 04:59
Before the First Step
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply philosophical this poem is nicely written
June 25th, 2026 16:45
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply philosophical this poem is nicely written
June 25th, 2026 16:45
Pearls and Jellyfish
mohammad ali said:
So much a realistic fact, my ever first best respected teacher! So beautifully composed and described!
June 16th, 2026 08:09
mohammad ali said:
So much a realistic fact, my ever first best respected teacher! So beautifully composed and described!
June 16th, 2026 08:09
Pearls and Jellyfish
sorenbarrett said:
A verse so well set in metaphor it speaks poetically. And yes the sharks. A fave
June 15th, 2026 04:36
sorenbarrett said:
A verse so well set in metaphor it speaks poetically. And yes the sharks. A fave
June 15th, 2026 04:36
Noah\'s Ocean
NafisaSB said:
A page taken from the history book and set in verse. Beautiful 👌👍
June 14th, 2026 07:46
NafisaSB said:
A page taken from the history book and set in verse. Beautiful 👌👍
June 14th, 2026 07:46
A Nail in Silk
sorenbarrett said:
May that nail be shiny and golden with joy. A great write
June 14th, 2026 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
May that nail be shiny and golden with joy. A great write
June 14th, 2026 04:51
Noah\'s Ocean
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely metaphoric progression from small to large. Nicely done
June 13th, 2026 06:43
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely metaphoric progression from small to large. Nicely done
June 13th, 2026 06:43
Imbalance
sorenbarrett said:
This reads as a proverb. A lovely write that gets a fave
June 11th, 2026 16:29
sorenbarrett said:
This reads as a proverb. A lovely write that gets a fave
June 11th, 2026 16:29
On This Scale
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully said and I may add that the balance between the two keeps either pan from spilling
June 10th, 2026 07:55
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully said and I may add that the balance between the two keeps either pan from spilling
June 10th, 2026 07:55
The Sorrows of the World
sorenbarrett said:
Life and its adversities in this poem well done
June 9th, 2026 16:47
sorenbarrett said:
Life and its adversities in this poem well done
June 9th, 2026 16:47
The Sound of Dawn; The Sound of Morning
maya21 said:
Beautiful contrast—so simple yet powerful. It really shows how natural silence gets replaced by urban noise.
June 8th, 2026 05:56
maya21 said:
Beautiful contrast—so simple yet powerful. It really shows how natural silence gets replaced by urban noise.
June 8th, 2026 05:56
The Sound of Dawn; The Sound of Morning
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful presentation of differences between nature and those good old days and society and change and the present. Now I hear the cars at six in the morning and soon it will be all day and night. When does change become trauma and too much. Nicely written Soheil
June 8th, 2026 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful presentation of differences between nature and those good old days and society and change and the present. Now I hear the cars at six in the morning and soon it will be all day and night. When does change become trauma and too much. Nicely written Soheil
June 8th, 2026 04:54
Belief and Being
sorenbarrett said:
Most philosophical and thought provoking it is short but says so much. Lovely
June 5th, 2026 16:36
sorenbarrett said:
Most philosophical and thought provoking it is short but says so much. Lovely
June 5th, 2026 16:36
The Spring of Compassion
sorenbarrett said:
This is most thought provoking and causes one to ponder if refers to all such tears, the one of the speaker or of another.
June 4th, 2026 07:10
sorenbarrett said:
This is most thought provoking and causes one to ponder if refers to all such tears, the one of the speaker or of another.
June 4th, 2026 07:10
Naivety
sorenbarrett said:
So true duality exists in all things for if it did not they would not exist. Well said
June 1st, 2026 12:15
sorenbarrett said:
So true duality exists in all things for if it did not they would not exist. Well said
June 1st, 2026 12:15
The Storm Within the Breeze
NafisaSB said:
The visual is captivating enough to make us want to capture it👍
March 5th, 2026 11:58
NafisaSB said:
The visual is captivating enough to make us want to capture it👍
March 5th, 2026 11:58
The Storm Within the Breeze
Poetic Licence said:
This has the feel of stand and ride out the storm against the odds, don\'t cave in under the dark cloud. Well written and a wonderful message in the write, enjoyed the read
February 27th, 2026 20:11
Poetic Licence said:
This has the feel of stand and ride out the storm against the odds, don\'t cave in under the dark cloud. Well written and a wonderful message in the write, enjoyed the read
February 27th, 2026 20:11
The Storm Within the Breeze
sorenbarrett said:
This plays the card of give me your best shot. To take the worst and survive gives one an exhilaration that is like no other. Well done
February 27th, 2026 14:50
sorenbarrett said:
This plays the card of give me your best shot. To take the worst and survive gives one an exhilaration that is like no other. Well done
February 27th, 2026 14:50
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