Comments received on poems by soheil khodaparasti
Vindictive Gravity
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely using mythology as a building block that stone a representation of earthly burden is rolled up that hill only to roll back again the job never complete. A lovely write a metaphor within a metaphor and a fave
January 8th, 2026 05:22
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely using mythology as a building block that stone a representation of earthly burden is rolled up that hill only to roll back again the job never complete. A lovely write a metaphor within a metaphor and a fave
January 8th, 2026 05:22
Walking with Truth
sorenbarrett said:
Times of the day roll on through this poem. Nicely written
January 6th, 2026 16:36
sorenbarrett said:
Times of the day roll on through this poem. Nicely written
January 6th, 2026 16:36
Walking with Truth
Caring dove said:
I sometimes see shadows of myself or other people .. that’s maybe just my dissociation or something .. anyway
Interesting writing )
January 6th, 2026 15:57
Caring dove said:
I sometimes see shadows of myself or other people .. that’s maybe just my dissociation or something .. anyway
Interesting writing )
January 6th, 2026 15:57
False Green
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful jewel of wisdom in verse and a fave
January 5th, 2026 16:46
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful jewel of wisdom in verse and a fave
January 5th, 2026 16:46
Father
Friendship said:
Beautifully worded. Your poem expresses deep gratitude and love towards a father figure, acknowledging both the visible and invisible roles he plays in the poet\'s life. It highlights the emotional connection and the profound impact of paternal support, presence, and absence.
January 3rd, 2026 10:32
Friendship said:
Beautifully worded. Your poem expresses deep gratitude and love towards a father figure, acknowledging both the visible and invisible roles he plays in the poet\'s life. It highlights the emotional connection and the profound impact of paternal support, presence, and absence.
January 3rd, 2026 10:32
Father
sorenbarrett said:
Whether religious of literal it is a great homage well worded. Nicely written
January 3rd, 2026 10:20
sorenbarrett said:
Whether religious of literal it is a great homage well worded. Nicely written
January 3rd, 2026 10:20
Something Between Knowing and Being
Friendship said:
Well worded. Your poem revolves around the relationship between sensory experience and emotional understanding. It explores how the natural world—symbolized by the sound of water—can evoke deep feelings and insights without the need for explicit interpretation or judgment.
January 2nd, 2026 06:52
Friendship said:
Well worded. Your poem revolves around the relationship between sensory experience and emotional understanding. It explores how the natural world—symbolized by the sound of water—can evoke deep feelings and insights without the need for explicit interpretation or judgment.
January 2nd, 2026 06:52
Something Between Knowing and Being
sorenbarrett said:
Nature has many lessons to teach and this poem speaks of some of them. It is nicely worded in imagery and metaphor where the very sound of the water is a message and a calming agent. A fave
January 2nd, 2026 03:49
sorenbarrett said:
Nature has many lessons to teach and this poem speaks of some of them. It is nicely worded in imagery and metaphor where the very sound of the water is a message and a calming agent. A fave
January 2nd, 2026 03:49
Orchid
sorenbarrett said:
Simply lovely a wonderful depiction and imaging of the physical into the emotional. Happy New Year
January 1st, 2026 09:39
sorenbarrett said:
Simply lovely a wonderful depiction and imaging of the physical into the emotional. Happy New Year
January 1st, 2026 09:39
Orchid
Friendship said:
Nicely worded, your poem \"Orchid\" explores themes of beauty, balance, and the interconnectedness of life through the imagery of an orchid flower. It emphasizes the delicate interplay between different elements—light and shadow, joy and understanding—illustrating how nature embodies a deeper truth and vitality. The orchid serves as a symbol of passion, joy, and understanding, representing a transcendent experience that goes beyond mere existence.
January 1st, 2026 09:08
Friendship said:
Nicely worded, your poem \"Orchid\" explores themes of beauty, balance, and the interconnectedness of life through the imagery of an orchid flower. It emphasizes the delicate interplay between different elements—light and shadow, joy and understanding—illustrating how nature embodies a deeper truth and vitality. The orchid serves as a symbol of passion, joy, and understanding, representing a transcendent experience that goes beyond mere existence.
January 1st, 2026 09:08
Loneliness
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds parallel to Buddhist giving up all desire to find Nirvana and enlightenment. Very nicely written
December 31st, 2025 08:44
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds parallel to Buddhist giving up all desire to find Nirvana and enlightenment. Very nicely written
December 31st, 2025 08:44
Loneliness
Katie B. said:
Lovely, so well written. I invite you to checkout mine.
December 31st, 2025 08:42
Katie B. said:
Lovely, so well written. I invite you to checkout mine.
December 31st, 2025 08:42
Expectation
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last stanza that impressed me most in this poem that admonishes those with expectations. Well done
December 30th, 2025 09:53
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last stanza that impressed me most in this poem that admonishes those with expectations. Well done
December 30th, 2025 09:53
The Soul’s Flight
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful moment in time when all else stops and the soul is full. A fave
December 29th, 2025 17:03
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful moment in time when all else stops and the soul is full. A fave
December 29th, 2025 17:03
The Marathon of Time
sorenbarrett said:
A Good poem of time and its effects arriving again at the beginning. Well done
December 28th, 2025 09:12
sorenbarrett said:
A Good poem of time and its effects arriving again at the beginning. Well done
December 28th, 2025 09:12
The Marathon of Time
Friendship said:
Nicely worded, your poem seems to express a sense of urgency and the struggle to keep pace with the inevitable passage of time, emphasizing the idea that life is a continuous journey.
December 28th, 2025 07:57
Friendship said:
Nicely worded, your poem seems to express a sense of urgency and the struggle to keep pace with the inevitable passage of time, emphasizing the idea that life is a continuous journey.
December 28th, 2025 07:57
Life
sorenbarrett said:
A good message for all in this poem of listening to our own music of life. Change the beat, the melody, the key, play it loud or soft and charm others as well as put ourselves to sleep. Nicely done
December 27th, 2025 08:11
sorenbarrett said:
A good message for all in this poem of listening to our own music of life. Change the beat, the melody, the key, play it loud or soft and charm others as well as put ourselves to sleep. Nicely done
December 27th, 2025 08:11
Life
sorenbarrett said:
I love this analogy of music and life. I believe the whole of everything is music in vibration where particles in waves unheard constitute all matter and nonmatter alike. A very lovely piece
December 27th, 2025 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
I love this analogy of music and life. I believe the whole of everything is music in vibration where particles in waves unheard constitute all matter and nonmatter alike. A very lovely piece
December 27th, 2025 04:05
In Praise of the Soul’s Light
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words about beautiful words, poetic about the poetic. Nicely written
December 26th, 2025 05:13
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words about beautiful words, poetic about the poetic. Nicely written
December 26th, 2025 05:13
A Beginning of Light
sorenbarrett said:
If one\'s birthday can inspire such one did not live in vain a beautiful write for this special day. A Happy holiday for you
December 25th, 2025 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
If one\'s birthday can inspire such one did not live in vain a beautiful write for this special day. A Happy holiday for you
December 25th, 2025 04:08
A Beginning of Light
NafisaSB said:
a nice and beautiful piece of verse..keep sharing...
December 25th, 2025 02:26
NafisaSB said:
a nice and beautiful piece of verse..keep sharing...
December 25th, 2025 02:26
Thirsty in Contemplation
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem and metaphor with deeper meaning. Well done. Happy holidays
December 24th, 2025 14:45
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem and metaphor with deeper meaning. Well done. Happy holidays
December 24th, 2025 14:45
Unlearning the Answer
sorenbarrett said:
The question that has no answer is why. Always told to never ask why only where, when, who, or what. Well written. Nicely done
December 23rd, 2025 12:38
sorenbarrett said:
The question that has no answer is why. Always told to never ask why only where, when, who, or what. Well written. Nicely done
December 23rd, 2025 12:38
Poetry Survives
sorenbarrett said:
Such an apt description in such vivid images a fave
December 22nd, 2025 07:26
sorenbarrett said:
Such an apt description in such vivid images a fave
December 22nd, 2025 07:26
Balance Sheet of Life
sorenbarrett said:
The one debt that one does not want is to oneself for it is in that debt that the interest is far too high. Well written
December 21st, 2025 19:02
sorenbarrett said:
The one debt that one does not want is to oneself for it is in that debt that the interest is far too high. Well written
December 21st, 2025 19:02
Two Views of the Wind
Demar Desu said:
Interesting you give us two views, then the religious language of Arabic… I would say it’s really three views, science, philosophy and religion. Great poem, I like all three combined
December 20th, 2025 22:17
Demar Desu said:
Interesting you give us two views, then the religious language of Arabic… I would say it’s really three views, science, philosophy and religion. Great poem, I like all three combined
December 20th, 2025 22:17
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