Comments received on poems by soheil khodaparasti
The Storm Within the Breeze
Poetic Licence said:
This has the feel of stand and ride out the storm against the odds, don\'t cave in under the dark cloud. Well written and a wonderful message in the write, enjoyed the read
February 27th, 2026 20:11
Poetic Licence said:
This has the feel of stand and ride out the storm against the odds, don\'t cave in under the dark cloud. Well written and a wonderful message in the write, enjoyed the read
February 27th, 2026 20:11
The Storm Within the Breeze
sorenbarrett said:
This plays the card of give me your best shot. To take the worst and survive gives one an exhilaration that is like no other. Well done
February 27th, 2026 14:50
sorenbarrett said:
This plays the card of give me your best shot. To take the worst and survive gives one an exhilaration that is like no other. Well done
February 27th, 2026 14:50
Delusion
sorenbarrett said:
Such a metaphor for people as well. Nicely written
February 21st, 2026 16:38
sorenbarrett said:
Such a metaphor for people as well. Nicely written
February 21st, 2026 16:38
Until Dawn
sorenbarrett said:
I love the subtlety of this piece that feels spiritual and most comforting a fave
February 19th, 2026 15:24
sorenbarrett said:
I love the subtlety of this piece that feels spiritual and most comforting a fave
February 19th, 2026 15:24
The Taste of a Smile
sorenbarrett said:
A smile can fill a belly. Nicely written
February 18th, 2026 13:00
sorenbarrett said:
A smile can fill a belly. Nicely written
February 18th, 2026 13:00
The Measure of Being
sorenbarrett said:
Simply beautiful and most poetic. It speaks of nature at its deepest level. Here one must consider determinism as opposed to free will
February 17th, 2026 10:08
sorenbarrett said:
Simply beautiful and most poetic. It speaks of nature at its deepest level. Here one must consider determinism as opposed to free will
February 17th, 2026 10:08
Bitter Awareness, Too Late
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your revolves around the metaphor of a seed planted in the earth, representing life’s potential and aspirations that may never come to fruition. It raises questions about awareness and the inherent limitations of existence.
February 16th, 2026 06:57
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your revolves around the metaphor of a seed planted in the earth, representing life’s potential and aspirations that may never come to fruition. It raises questions about awareness and the inherent limitations of existence.
February 16th, 2026 06:57
Bitter Awareness, Too Late
sorenbarrett said:
Do we foresee our own ends or know how they may come about. I would not want to know for it would make me reckless before and overly confident. It would present a date to be worried about and preoccupied over. I think nature is grand having designed things as they are. Well written
February 16th, 2026 03:44
sorenbarrett said:
Do we foresee our own ends or know how they may come about. I would not want to know for it would make me reckless before and overly confident. It would present a date to be worried about and preoccupied over. I think nature is grand having designed things as they are. Well written
February 16th, 2026 03:44
Flaming Wine
sorenbarrett said:
A question that each must answer for themselves in each occasion. A lovely poetic format nicely done
February 15th, 2026 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
A question that each must answer for themselves in each occasion. A lovely poetic format nicely done
February 15th, 2026 04:20
Lie
sorenbarrett said:
Simple shifts in perspective make all the difference in the world. A lovely poem that emphasizes the difference. Very nicely written and a fave
February 14th, 2026 17:05
sorenbarrett said:
Simple shifts in perspective make all the difference in the world. A lovely poem that emphasizes the difference. Very nicely written and a fave
February 14th, 2026 17:05
Experience
sorenbarrett said:
Experience it the forge and kiln that hardens one to face life and its adversities. A wonderful write
February 12th, 2026 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
Experience it the forge and kiln that hardens one to face life and its adversities. A wonderful write
February 12th, 2026 04:17
Change
sorenbarrett said:
Three pieces of wisdom in poetic form in this one work. Nicely crafted
February 11th, 2026 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
Three pieces of wisdom in poetic form in this one work. Nicely crafted
February 11th, 2026 04:07
Life Is an Irony
sorenbarrett said:
Irony is the shadow of life and its reflection as well. Nicely written
February 10th, 2026 17:17
sorenbarrett said:
Irony is the shadow of life and its reflection as well. Nicely written
February 10th, 2026 17:17
A Sip Against Forgetting
sorenbarrett said:
Such wisdom in such short verse. Love is an oasis from hate and a saving grace not for the one loved but for the one that loves. A fave
February 9th, 2026 16:21
sorenbarrett said:
Such wisdom in such short verse. Love is an oasis from hate and a saving grace not for the one loved but for the one that loves. A fave
February 9th, 2026 16:21
The Breath of Being
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely twist on Descarte and the issue of being and the existential value of it.
February 8th, 2026 15:47
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely twist on Descarte and the issue of being and the existential value of it.
February 8th, 2026 15:47
Beyond All Ladders
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and nicely written it makes sense and the story implies the message to be learned. Very nice
February 7th, 2026 16:36
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and nicely written it makes sense and the story implies the message to be learned. Very nice
February 7th, 2026 16:36
Chaff from Wheat
sorenbarrett said:
A reversal to resolve the problem nicely written in this poem
February 6th, 2026 14:19
sorenbarrett said:
A reversal to resolve the problem nicely written in this poem
February 6th, 2026 14:19
Echoes Across Souls
sorenbarrett said:
A theme of unity in this poem that reaches out to all. A lovely thought and culminates in a choir most lovely
February 5th, 2026 13:07
sorenbarrett said:
A theme of unity in this poem that reaches out to all. A lovely thought and culminates in a choir most lovely
February 5th, 2026 13:07
The Weight of Seeing
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has deep implications as a metaphor for people as well. Nicely worded a fave
February 4th, 2026 16:34
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has deep implications as a metaphor for people as well. Nicely worded a fave
February 4th, 2026 16:34
Separation and Light
sorenbarrett said:
Exile such an old practice and even in modern times as Napoleon. A great read that speaks to an old solution to undesirables. It seems long outdated and no longer acceptable but still practiced. A social problem that needs a solution. Well done
February 3rd, 2026 17:11
sorenbarrett said:
Exile such an old practice and even in modern times as Napoleon. A great read that speaks to an old solution to undesirables. It seems long outdated and no longer acceptable but still practiced. A social problem that needs a solution. Well done
February 3rd, 2026 17:11
Fate, If It Were a Poem
sorenbarrett said:
A poem set in questions becomes almost a soliloquy as it goes through the possibilities. A fun read with implications
February 2nd, 2026 03:48
sorenbarrett said:
A poem set in questions becomes almost a soliloquy as it goes through the possibilities. A fun read with implications
February 2nd, 2026 03:48
The Unwanted Pure
sorenbarrett said:
A truth very nicely written in most poetic form another fave
February 1st, 2026 09:20
sorenbarrett said:
A truth very nicely written in most poetic form another fave
February 1st, 2026 09:20
Not Asking
sorenbarrett said:
A philosophical stew of questions that trouble the mind of those with nothing else to think about. Questions that pose more questions of definition and prior assumptions. A fun read
January 31st, 2026 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
A philosophical stew of questions that trouble the mind of those with nothing else to think about. Questions that pose more questions of definition and prior assumptions. A fun read
January 31st, 2026 04:23
Space
sorenbarrett said:
Clever a sandwich of a poem that the meat goes in the middle. Well done
January 30th, 2026 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
Clever a sandwich of a poem that the meat goes in the middle. Well done
January 30th, 2026 03:58
The Observing Self
sorenbarrett said:
I love that this poem leaves the act half completed and unfinished. Is this a Narcissus or one of self reflection using the mirror as a guiding star to shape and mold a better self. Nicely done
January 29th, 2026 03:30
sorenbarrett said:
I love that this poem leaves the act half completed and unfinished. Is this a Narcissus or one of self reflection using the mirror as a guiding star to shape and mold a better self. Nicely done
January 29th, 2026 03:30
When a Look Has No Law
sorenbarrett said:
For those that understand this has deeper implications that are immediately apparent. Nicely done
January 27th, 2026 16:56
sorenbarrett said:
For those that understand this has deeper implications that are immediately apparent. Nicely done
January 27th, 2026 16:56
Vindictive Gravity
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely using mythology as a building block that stone a representation of earthly burden is rolled up that hill only to roll back again the job never complete. A lovely write a metaphor within a metaphor and a fave
January 8th, 2026 05:22
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely using mythology as a building block that stone a representation of earthly burden is rolled up that hill only to roll back again the job never complete. A lovely write a metaphor within a metaphor and a fave
January 8th, 2026 05:22
Walking with Truth
sorenbarrett said:
Times of the day roll on through this poem. Nicely written
January 6th, 2026 16:36
sorenbarrett said:
Times of the day roll on through this poem. Nicely written
January 6th, 2026 16:36
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