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Thirteen A (An Acrostic)
orchidee said:
Good write AS. Unusual 13A.
Doh! Sometimes we can spend ages looking for No.13 in a street. it\'s often been changed to 11A, or non-existent.
Some streets with houses about 100 years old or so, haven\'t been so superstitious. They have No.13.
January 12th, 2022 11:38
orchidee said:
Good write AS. Unusual 13A.
Doh! Sometimes we can spend ages looking for No.13 in a street. it\'s often been changed to 11A, or non-existent.
Some streets with houses about 100 years old or so, haven\'t been so superstitious. They have No.13.
January 12th, 2022 11:38
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Goldfinch60 said:
Such very true words Ben. It is absolutely awful that this party took place and they will not even admit it as the blame will now fall on the new lady Sue Gray who is \'investigating\' the problem.
\"How do you know when a politician is lying?\"
\"Their lips move!\"
Andy
January 12th, 2022 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Such very true words Ben. It is absolutely awful that this party took place and they will not even admit it as the blame will now fall on the new lady Sue Gray who is \'investigating\' the problem.
\"How do you know when a politician is lying?\"
\"Their lips move!\"
Andy
January 12th, 2022 01:32
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Rozina said:
Marvellous poem. Politicians are the same the world over. Difficult to trust. A great write.
January 12th, 2022 01:23
Rozina said:
Marvellous poem. Politicians are the same the world over. Difficult to trust. A great write.
January 12th, 2022 01:23
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woundedheart said:
Boris can kiss my free pass i never voted for him and never will as he does not represent Britain or its true views, this is a fabulous piece full of truth. Kudos. 💟
January 11th, 2022 17:18
woundedheart said:
Boris can kiss my free pass i never voted for him and never will as he does not represent Britain or its true views, this is a fabulous piece full of truth. Kudos. 💟
January 11th, 2022 17:18
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orchidee said:
It\'s enough to make people believe, as some papers say, that the country is being run by Bozo, Coco, Thicko, etc - clowns!
January 11th, 2022 11:24
orchidee said:
It\'s enough to make people believe, as some papers say, that the country is being run by Bozo, Coco, Thicko, etc - clowns!
January 11th, 2022 11:24
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L. B. Mek said:
(a great write!
thanks for inspiring my over opinionated - rant
of a reply, dear poet)..
just amazed, how they got
the general public warring
with each other
over our vaccinated, status
feeding
those gluttonous, morally bankrupt Bulletins
with evermore, fearmongering
unverifiable figures and guesses
yet
they walk around, making their filthy
backhanded deals
as if, COVID
was just a tag line
in some far-fetched
sci-fi, plot scheme...
(their is a reason why
the 5th of November
is my Favourite, remembrance
holiday!!!)
and to think, of all those
who died for this dreamed, reality
we waste
generation after wasted, generation!
January 11th, 2022 07:55
L. B. Mek said:
(a great write!
thanks for inspiring my over opinionated - rant
of a reply, dear poet)..
just amazed, how they got
the general public warring
with each other
over our vaccinated, status
feeding
those gluttonous, morally bankrupt Bulletins
with evermore, fearmongering
unverifiable figures and guesses
yet
they walk around, making their filthy
backhanded deals
as if, COVID
was just a tag line
in some far-fetched
sci-fi, plot scheme...
(their is a reason why
the 5th of November
is my Favourite, remembrance
holiday!!!)
and to think, of all those
who died for this dreamed, reality
we waste
generation after wasted, generation!
January 11th, 2022 07:55
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dusk arising said:
The very fact that this party took place is a disgrace when all over our nation people were not allowed to visit their dieing loved ones, nor their funerals, banned form care homes.
So much bad feeling will arise from this particular party, it was truly in lockdown time when there were no vaccinations and the nation was on a plague footing.
The sarcasm of your piece is well placed here. I doubt whether it would have made any difference if the PM and government were labour instead of tory for all those in power seem to exist in a different world to the rest of us.
January 11th, 2022 06:46
dusk arising said:
The very fact that this party took place is a disgrace when all over our nation people were not allowed to visit their dieing loved ones, nor their funerals, banned form care homes.
So much bad feeling will arise from this particular party, it was truly in lockdown time when there were no vaccinations and the nation was on a plague footing.
The sarcasm of your piece is well placed here. I doubt whether it would have made any difference if the PM and government were labour instead of tory for all those in power seem to exist in a different world to the rest of us.
January 11th, 2022 06:46
The Butterfly and Lazarus
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Ben, I believe that shower in the morning strips away the troubles we may feel and lead us into a brighter day in our lives.
Andy
January 10th, 2022 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Ben, I believe that shower in the morning strips away the troubles we may feel and lead us into a brighter day in our lives.
Andy
January 10th, 2022 01:07
The Butterfly and Lazarus
spilleronsheet said:
Nature is beautiful
We inspire
We love
We miss
We get in captivated
Yet at times we do get jealous at some lines
Very well penned dear friend
It’s a part that feels the same
Jealous or aspire to transform one day
January 9th, 2022 14:03
spilleronsheet said:
Nature is beautiful
We inspire
We love
We miss
We get in captivated
Yet at times we do get jealous at some lines
Very well penned dear friend
It’s a part that feels the same
Jealous or aspire to transform one day
January 9th, 2022 14:03
The Butterfly and Lazarus
woundedheart said:
Beautifully penned such vivid imagery my friend.☺
January 9th, 2022 12:42
woundedheart said:
Beautifully penned such vivid imagery my friend.☺
January 9th, 2022 12:42
The Butterfly and Lazarus
chriswylie2 said:
Well composed and written. Love the comparison!
January 9th, 2022 10:35
chriswylie2 said:
Well composed and written. Love the comparison!
January 9th, 2022 10:35
From Light to Dark, Then Back Again
Rozina said:
I agree. We all have dark and light. A balancing act. Sometimes the scales tilt a bit more to 1 side. Then a correction. Excellent poem.
January 9th, 2022 09:07
Rozina said:
I agree. We all have dark and light. A balancing act. Sometimes the scales tilt a bit more to 1 side. Then a correction. Excellent poem.
January 9th, 2022 09:07
The Butterfly and Lazarus
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Really love this ! 🙂
It’s so nicely expressed , so many great lines and I did enjoy it .. so Thankyou )
January 9th, 2022 08:30
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Really love this ! 🙂
It’s so nicely expressed , so many great lines and I did enjoy it .. so Thankyou )
January 9th, 2022 08:30
From Light to Dark, Then Back Again
Goldfinch60 said:
The light is always within us Ben.
Andy
January 8th, 2022 14:35
Goldfinch60 said:
The light is always within us Ben.
Andy
January 8th, 2022 14:35
From Light to Dark, Then Back Again
spilleronsheet said:
The light and dark
The part of me
Like two sides of same coin
Moving in spree
On which side will it land
Good or bad
Happy or sad
At the end it will only be me
I mess up with life
To pester it
To what fate throws
I shall continue to fight
Loved the way you wove such beautiful insights
The dilemmas running in mind
Turning and twisting with the wonderful words you string by
January 8th, 2022 12:30
spilleronsheet said:
The light and dark
The part of me
Like two sides of same coin
Moving in spree
On which side will it land
Good or bad
Happy or sad
At the end it will only be me
I mess up with life
To pester it
To what fate throws
I shall continue to fight
Loved the way you wove such beautiful insights
The dilemmas running in mind
Turning and twisting with the wonderful words you string by
January 8th, 2022 12:30
A Letter, to Those Who Make Bots
Saxon Crow said:
I was going to write a pleading E mail to you As but I don\'t think I\'ll bother now. Although you have gold? Hmm mm??
January 7th, 2022 10:49
Saxon Crow said:
I was going to write a pleading E mail to you As but I don\'t think I\'ll bother now. Although you have gold? Hmm mm??
January 7th, 2022 10:49
A Letter, to Those Who Make Bots
L. B. Mek said:
\'A very disgruntled ginger, not only trying to find his soul\'
ahhh, that sharp wit
it knows no limits, and forces itself
to shine in all, that you ink
(I agree with your Fury, completely
but fraud, is not new my wise friend
its just, the whole
\'put all your life, into one
account number or phone
or swipe device\'
broken-at-origin, ideology
lends itself
to unsavoury characters, gaining access
to almost everything we own, all at ounce;
you\'d think
those clever, software designers
and nimbly fingered programmer\'s
would have foreseen
this plague, creating itself
from the outset, right?
\'oh wait
they, are never effected
quite as bad, as the rest of us
because, they
take precautions
huh?
isn\'t this just cyclical history
of the have\'s
slapping the have-not\'s, in the face
repeatedly
generation, after
wasted generation
with that greedy, Capitalist
\'pass it down the line\', mentality...!)
ahem, do please
forgive my little rant
and thanks for sharing, dear poet
January 7th, 2022 06:48
L. B. Mek said:
\'A very disgruntled ginger, not only trying to find his soul\'
ahhh, that sharp wit
it knows no limits, and forces itself
to shine in all, that you ink
(I agree with your Fury, completely
but fraud, is not new my wise friend
its just, the whole
\'put all your life, into one
account number or phone
or swipe device\'
broken-at-origin, ideology
lends itself
to unsavoury characters, gaining access
to almost everything we own, all at ounce;
you\'d think
those clever, software designers
and nimbly fingered programmer\'s
would have foreseen
this plague, creating itself
from the outset, right?
\'oh wait
they, are never effected
quite as bad, as the rest of us
because, they
take precautions
huh?
isn\'t this just cyclical history
of the have\'s
slapping the have-not\'s, in the face
repeatedly
generation, after
wasted generation
with that greedy, Capitalist
\'pass it down the line\', mentality...!)
ahem, do please
forgive my little rant
and thanks for sharing, dear poet
January 7th, 2022 06:48
A Letter, to Those Who Make Bots
woundedheart said:
Very well said my friend here\'s to honesty through the coming year ☺
January 7th, 2022 04:53
woundedheart said:
Very well said my friend here\'s to honesty through the coming year ☺
January 7th, 2022 04:53
A Letter, to Those Who Make Bots
Rozina said:
I get these everyday too. I\'ve never bought anything via Amazon and yet this company keeps wanting to give me a free gift! All sorts of rubbish. A good reminder from you.
January 7th, 2022 03:33
Rozina said:
I get these everyday too. I\'ve never bought anything via Amazon and yet this company keeps wanting to give me a free gift! All sorts of rubbish. A good reminder from you.
January 7th, 2022 03:33
A Letter, to Those Who Make Bots
orchidee said:
A couple of shifty handymen have stopped me more than once in the street. I should report them to police.
They draw up to me in their van, and say I owe them for gardening work. I don\'t even know the guys.
It\'s a horrible thing for people to fall for.
Not seen them a while. Maybe they\'ve been caught.
January 7th, 2022 03:27
orchidee said:
A couple of shifty handymen have stopped me more than once in the street. I should report them to police.
They draw up to me in their van, and say I owe them for gardening work. I don\'t even know the guys.
It\'s a horrible thing for people to fall for.
Not seen them a while. Maybe they\'ve been caught.
January 7th, 2022 03:27
A Letter, to Those Who Make Bots
spilleronsheet said:
It’s really annoying
Those bots
Those scammers
Those hackers
Someone hacked my social media
So annoyed i was
I stopped using it anymore
I reallly hope these dallying things stop now
It’s really pissing
January 7th, 2022 03:19
spilleronsheet said:
It’s really annoying
Those bots
Those scammers
Those hackers
Someone hacked my social media
So annoyed i was
I stopped using it anymore
I reallly hope these dallying things stop now
It’s really pissing
January 7th, 2022 03:19
A Letter, to Those Who Make Bots
Michael Edwards said:
Fine write about something that\'s getting worse. My scam box fills up daily and I\'m constantly emptying it without even bothering to see if there\'s anything genuine there,
January 7th, 2022 02:42
Michael Edwards said:
Fine write about something that\'s getting worse. My scam box fills up daily and I\'m constantly emptying it without even bothering to see if there\'s anything genuine there,
January 7th, 2022 02:42
A Letter, to Those Who Make Bots
Goldfinch60 said:
May that hope come to fruition soon Ben.
Many of us know about these scams but there are also many who do not have the knowledge and fall into the traps of these scammers.
Why do such people exist?
Andy
January 7th, 2022 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
May that hope come to fruition soon Ben.
Many of us know about these scams but there are also many who do not have the knowledge and fall into the traps of these scammers.
Why do such people exist?
Andy
January 7th, 2022 02:21
Stop the Chop (A Celebratory Acrostic)
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
People are selfish sometimes aren’t they ..
Nature is so important .,, trees , flowers
A good well expressed poem )
January 7th, 2022 02:17
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
People are selfish sometimes aren’t they ..
Nature is so important .,, trees , flowers
A good well expressed poem )
January 7th, 2022 02:17
We Barter for Time (An Urgent Rap)
Goldfinch60 said:
Brilliant rap Ben and so very true.
Andy
January 7th, 2022 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Brilliant rap Ben and so very true.
Andy
January 7th, 2022 01:31
We Barter for Time (An Urgent Rap)
woundedheart said:
We all must make up for the mistakes of the generation before us and pass on our failures to the next lets hope we are handing them a future not a doomed world. Great rap very no.1 ☺
January 6th, 2022 08:44
woundedheart said:
We all must make up for the mistakes of the generation before us and pass on our failures to the next lets hope we are handing them a future not a doomed world. Great rap very no.1 ☺
January 6th, 2022 08:44
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