Comments received on poems by AuburnScribbler
This is His Call (A Song, to the rhythm of “This is A Call” by Foo Fighters, one of Taylor Hawkins’ favourite Foo Fighters songs, For Taylor
Bella Shepard said:
I just saw on the news this morning that he had passed, how very sad and at just 50. Being of the older persuasion I am, sadly not familiar with the Foo Fighters, however listening to this song and hearing his percussion, it must still be reverberating throughout the universe. The photo speaks volumes of how much he must have loved what he did. What a wonderful homage to an artist gone before his time.
March 26th, 2022 09:15
Bella Shepard said:
I just saw on the news this morning that he had passed, how very sad and at just 50. Being of the older persuasion I am, sadly not familiar with the Foo Fighters, however listening to this song and hearing his percussion, it must still be reverberating throughout the universe. The photo speaks volumes of how much he must have loved what he did. What a wonderful homage to an artist gone before his time.
March 26th, 2022 09:15
Cardboard Tombstone
Bella Shepard said:
Such a wonderful nostalgic poem. I love the allusion of a cardboard tombstone, putting to rest a part of your life always well remembered, and now looking to the future. I wish you joy wherever that future takes you!
March 22nd, 2022 11:17
Bella Shepard said:
Such a wonderful nostalgic poem. I love the allusion of a cardboard tombstone, putting to rest a part of your life always well remembered, and now looking to the future. I wish you joy wherever that future takes you!
March 22nd, 2022 11:17
Cardboard Tombstone
Goldfinch60 said:
It can be hard when you move but the home that you have built in that house will be there for you in your new house Ben, that will not change.
Andy
March 22nd, 2022 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
It can be hard when you move but the home that you have built in that house will be there for you in your new house Ben, that will not change.
Andy
March 22nd, 2022 01:48
His Ghost in the Fog
Bella Shepard said:
Powerful, difficult to read as we realize the reality of today\'s world. People we love become strangers to us and to themselves, and the struggle to regain a life affects all who touch it
March 17th, 2022 13:34
Bella Shepard said:
Powerful, difficult to read as we realize the reality of today\'s world. People we love become strangers to us and to themselves, and the struggle to regain a life affects all who touch it
March 17th, 2022 13:34
His Ghost in the Fog
Christina8 said:
I can relate on so many levels. I live with a family member with dementia. It\'s very difficult. I favorited your poem not just on subject but I loved the cadence and the rhyme. Awesome job!
March 17th, 2022 10:20
Christina8 said:
I can relate on so many levels. I live with a family member with dementia. It\'s very difficult. I favorited your poem not just on subject but I loved the cadence and the rhyme. Awesome job!
March 17th, 2022 10:20
His Ghost in the Fog
Rocky Lagou said:
This was crafted and shaped to perfection. I mean really this was so good. I can relate as well as I think most families could, there\'s no such thing as a \"normal family\" so this will really reach a lot of people. I love the line \"as, I, and we, are him.\" It\'s so true, we\'re all, despite the chaos, still connected by a bond that just can\'t be broken so easily: it\'s family. Very well done!
March 17th, 2022 08:43
Rocky Lagou said:
This was crafted and shaped to perfection. I mean really this was so good. I can relate as well as I think most families could, there\'s no such thing as a \"normal family\" so this will really reach a lot of people. I love the line \"as, I, and we, are him.\" It\'s so true, we\'re all, despite the chaos, still connected by a bond that just can\'t be broken so easily: it\'s family. Very well done!
March 17th, 2022 08:43
Up Beacon Hill, Via the Sconce
Bella Shepard said:
I love the conversation you have with your feet, it really brings this poem to life. I put in my 4 miles a day, but you could probably walk circles around me. Kudos to you and your feet for such an engaging read.
March 15th, 2022 05:54
Bella Shepard said:
I love the conversation you have with your feet, it really brings this poem to life. I put in my 4 miles a day, but you could probably walk circles around me. Kudos to you and your feet for such an engaging read.
March 15th, 2022 05:54
Daffs (My Modern Day Variation on “Daffodils” by William Wordsworth)
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Ben. Those daffodils have such good meanings to us all.
Andy
March 15th, 2022 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Ben. Those daffodils have such good meanings to us all.
Andy
March 15th, 2022 01:37
Daffs (My Modern Day Variation on “Daffodils” by William Wordsworth)
orchidee said:
A fine write with eloquence AS.
March 14th, 2022 11:56
orchidee said:
A fine write with eloquence AS.
March 14th, 2022 11:56
Daffs (My Modern Day Variation on “Daffodils” by William Wordsworth)
spilleronsheet said:
A very fresh and new approach
The poem by William Wordsworth means very much to me
It’s a memory of childhood for me
Thanks dear Auburnscribbler for penning this
March 14th, 2022 09:14
spilleronsheet said:
A very fresh and new approach
The poem by William Wordsworth means very much to me
It’s a memory of childhood for me
Thanks dear Auburnscribbler for penning this
March 14th, 2022 09:14
Daffs (My Modern Day Variation on “Daffodils” by William Wordsworth)
spilleronsheet said:
A very fresh and new approach
The poem by William Wordsworth means very much to me
It’s a memory of childhood for me
Thanks dear Auburnscribbler for penning this
March 14th, 2022 09:14
spilleronsheet said:
A very fresh and new approach
The poem by William Wordsworth means very much to me
It’s a memory of childhood for me
Thanks dear Auburnscribbler for penning this
March 14th, 2022 09:14
Roasting Kin
Goldfinch60 said:
That Sunday roast has always been a tradition in my house and it will never change.
Andy
March 10th, 2022 02:29
Goldfinch60 said:
That Sunday roast has always been a tradition in my house and it will never change.
Andy
March 10th, 2022 02:29
Roasting Kin
Rozina said:
I really enjoy the English Sunday roast beef and Yorkshire pudding. A great tradition and so nice to be reminded of it by reading your lovely poem.
March 9th, 2022 20:45
Rozina said:
I really enjoy the English Sunday roast beef and Yorkshire pudding. A great tradition and so nice to be reminded of it by reading your lovely poem.
March 9th, 2022 20:45
Roasting Kin
spilleronsheet said:
A beautiful family reunion
Truly enjoyed dear Auburn scribbler
Indeed it’s been long in covid days that family members once again met and dined
March 9th, 2022 14:48
spilleronsheet said:
A beautiful family reunion
Truly enjoyed dear Auburn scribbler
Indeed it’s been long in covid days that family members once again met and dined
March 9th, 2022 14:48
Roasting Kin
Bella Shepard said:
What a lovely poem! Especially after these years of COVID it is heartwarming to read such a wonderful tribute to family preparation and eating of a meal. And afterwards just to rest in the company of those we love.
March 9th, 2022 12:12
Bella Shepard said:
What a lovely poem! Especially after these years of COVID it is heartwarming to read such a wonderful tribute to family preparation and eating of a meal. And afterwards just to rest in the company of those we love.
March 9th, 2022 12:12
I Don\'t Like Tea Drinkers
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Ben and so true Ben but I no longer have to sit around at work drinking tea or coffee and discussing the ways and wherefores of work.
In my retirement I can just sit here writing and listening to music with a cup of fine Kenya tea nearby to sup with absolute pleasure for total enjoyment in my life, and it is real tea, no teabags in the house at all.
I hope all is well with you.
Andy
March 3rd, 2022 02:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Ben and so true Ben but I no longer have to sit around at work drinking tea or coffee and discussing the ways and wherefores of work.
In my retirement I can just sit here writing and listening to music with a cup of fine Kenya tea nearby to sup with absolute pleasure for total enjoyment in my life, and it is real tea, no teabags in the house at all.
I hope all is well with you.
Andy
March 3rd, 2022 02:12
I Don\'t Like Tea Drinkers
Rozina said:
Enjoyed the poem. I love coffee and drink every drop!
March 2nd, 2022 18:30
Rozina said:
Enjoyed the poem. I love coffee and drink every drop!
March 2nd, 2022 18:30
I Don\'t Like Tea Drinkers
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow this was so smart! The comparison between the last bit of tea and the tea drinkers themselves. Clever one! I love the message as it\'s very true. The ones who hold power in these workforces are often corrupt and careless people. Wisdom to these tea drinkers! 💖😅
March 2nd, 2022 12:16
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow this was so smart! The comparison between the last bit of tea and the tea drinkers themselves. Clever one! I love the message as it\'s very true. The ones who hold power in these workforces are often corrupt and careless people. Wisdom to these tea drinkers! 💖😅
March 2nd, 2022 12:16
The Joke
Rocky Lagou said:
Very nice poem! I felt the message you were conveying and you expressed it with a shrewd mindset. We\'re too often overlooking our current situations and disregarding it as unimportant and I feel like you expressed that with the \"joke\" that\'s being passed on. We need to pass that stage and accept the reality, even if it\'s \"some aching truth.\" Well done! 💖✨
March 2nd, 2022 12:06
Rocky Lagou said:
Very nice poem! I felt the message you were conveying and you expressed it with a shrewd mindset. We\'re too often overlooking our current situations and disregarding it as unimportant and I feel like you expressed that with the \"joke\" that\'s being passed on. We need to pass that stage and accept the reality, even if it\'s \"some aching truth.\" Well done! 💖✨
March 2nd, 2022 12:06
The Joke
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Ben, many treat life as a joke but you and I know that life can be wonderful if we go our own way and ignore the so called leaders.
Andy
February 27th, 2022 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Ben, many treat life as a joke but you and I know that life can be wonderful if we go our own way and ignore the so called leaders.
Andy
February 27th, 2022 01:41
A Message to: Moscow, Russia, 103132
Rozina said:
A horrible morning. Waiting for the latest news now. So much greed and power control.
February 24th, 2022 22:37
Rozina said:
A horrible morning. Waiting for the latest news now. So much greed and power control.
February 24th, 2022 22:37
A Message to: Moscow, Russia, 103132
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Ben, it is such a shame that people like Putin ever existed.
Andy
February 24th, 2022 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Ben, it is such a shame that people like Putin ever existed.
Andy
February 24th, 2022 01:43
A Message to: Moscow, Russia, 103132
spilleronsheet said:
It’s sad
That peace is so expensive
And war so cheap
Wish greed could take a vacation
February 23rd, 2022 16:14
spilleronsheet said:
It’s sad
That peace is so expensive
And war so cheap
Wish greed could take a vacation
February 23rd, 2022 16:14
Those Cheques in The Post
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Ben, my friend was working in the Post Office when this happened, he too was accused of stealing money but was obviously innocent and fortunately did not go to prison.
Such a major foul up by the Post Office computer idiots.
Andy
February 20th, 2022 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Ben, my friend was working in the Post Office when this happened, he too was accused of stealing money but was obviously innocent and fortunately did not go to prison.
Such a major foul up by the Post Office computer idiots.
Andy
February 20th, 2022 02:16
Those Cheques in The Post
Rozina said:
I have not heard of this scandal. Thank you for the information. I shall look up this issue. Horrendous!
February 19th, 2022 18:19
Rozina said:
I have not heard of this scandal. Thank you for the information. I shall look up this issue. Horrendous!
February 19th, 2022 18:19
Dying with My Phone (A Song, to the rhythm of “Living on My Own” by Freddie Mercury
spilleronsheet said:
A unique write dear Auburn
I ended up singing along
Really enjoyed your take on the new savvy tech that’s annoying our lives day by day
February 15th, 2022 15:24
spilleronsheet said:
A unique write dear Auburn
I ended up singing along
Really enjoyed your take on the new savvy tech that’s annoying our lives day by day
February 15th, 2022 15:24
Dying with My Phone (A Song, to the rhythm of “Living on My Own” by Freddie Mercury
Rocky Lagou said:
Okay this was a message to the people. I love songwriting and this piece was beautiful. We need to appreciate life OUTSIDE of technology a little more. 👏💕
February 15th, 2022 11:36
Rocky Lagou said:
Okay this was a message to the people. I love songwriting and this piece was beautiful. We need to appreciate life OUTSIDE of technology a little more. 👏💕
February 15th, 2022 11:36
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