Comments received on poems by AuburnScribbler
Tinselitis
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Interesting writing … giving inanimate objects a voice . I liked the read ) if they had feelings they certainly might cry with a lack of colour at this time of year
December 9th, 2021 09:23
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Interesting writing … giving inanimate objects a voice . I liked the read ) if they had feelings they certainly might cry with a lack of colour at this time of year
December 9th, 2021 09:23
Stop the Chop (A Celebratory Acrostic)
Goldfinch60 said:
Very well done, Nature is so very important in our lives and must be saved for others to appreciated.
Andy
December 7th, 2021 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Very well done, Nature is so very important in our lives and must be saved for others to appreciated.
Andy
December 7th, 2021 01:50
Stop the Chop (A Celebratory Acrostic)
Draven said:
I love an acrostic! I haven\'t read one for so long!
December 6th, 2021 09:31
Draven said:
I love an acrostic! I haven\'t read one for so long!
December 6th, 2021 09:31
Stop the Chop (A Celebratory Acrostic)
Lorna said:
Congratulations! I\'m off to see if I can find the song... also if you put on YouTube you can upload here.
Update: couldn\'t get to the site....
December 6th, 2021 07:49
Lorna said:
Congratulations! I\'m off to see if I can find the song... also if you put on YouTube you can upload here.
Update: couldn\'t get to the site....
December 6th, 2021 07:49
Stage Back
Goldfinch60 said:
Being nervous before going on stage is always there Ben. From your words you had a great first time back for a while, may that always be so.
Our choir has its first performance next Saturday after nearly two years, I hope that will go as well as your concert seems to have done.
Andy
December 6th, 2021 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Being nervous before going on stage is always there Ben. From your words you had a great first time back for a while, may that always be so.
Our choir has its first performance next Saturday after nearly two years, I hope that will go as well as your concert seems to have done.
Andy
December 6th, 2021 01:55
Stage Back
Doggerel Dave said:
Great piece of self talk there man.
And from your side comments, it worked! Go for it - enjoy the rest of your tour.
December 5th, 2021 23:16
Doggerel Dave said:
Great piece of self talk there man.
And from your side comments, it worked! Go for it - enjoy the rest of your tour.
December 5th, 2021 23:16
Stage Back
Fay Slimm. said:
You nail the time when to return on stage brings butterflies galore - I remember that feeling well -- the thrill of a live audience comes right through your words and the graphic too left me with a smile .
December 5th, 2021 16:36
Fay Slimm. said:
You nail the time when to return on stage brings butterflies galore - I remember that feeling well -- the thrill of a live audience comes right through your words and the graphic too left me with a smile .
December 5th, 2021 16:36
Stage Back
Draven said:
I love this, really playful and fun with nervous energy. And welcome back to the stage, there is nothing like it :)
December 5th, 2021 08:40
Draven said:
I love this, really playful and fun with nervous energy. And welcome back to the stage, there is nothing like it :)
December 5th, 2021 08:40
Talking to Myself
Lorna said:
So true.... I talk to myself all the time and it\'s peaceful - I never argue, always agree and generally we have the same sense of humor myself and I. Is this what they call lonely? Ha!
December 5th, 2021 08:39
Lorna said:
So true.... I talk to myself all the time and it\'s peaceful - I never argue, always agree and generally we have the same sense of humor myself and I. Is this what they call lonely? Ha!
December 5th, 2021 08:39
Stage Back
Lorna said:
You made me nervous but happy it all turned out well..... Why not attach some of your music to a poem so we can hear?
December 5th, 2021 08:37
Lorna said:
You made me nervous but happy it all turned out well..... Why not attach some of your music to a poem so we can hear?
December 5th, 2021 08:37
Sleeplessness
Goldfinch60 said:
So glad that you can write words in the night, I do as well when I cannot sleep.
Andy
December 2nd, 2021 02:02
Goldfinch60 said:
So glad that you can write words in the night, I do as well when I cannot sleep.
Andy
December 2nd, 2021 02:02
Sleeplessness
mdrogers said:
Mob-thought, Bukowski? I like that. I don\'t sleep much either. Do it.
December 1st, 2021 13:48
mdrogers said:
Mob-thought, Bukowski? I like that. I don\'t sleep much either. Do it.
December 1st, 2021 13:48
Sleeplessness
orchidee said:
A fine write AS.
You counted them sheep? Or they keep running off?!
December 1st, 2021 12:40
orchidee said:
A fine write AS.
You counted them sheep? Or they keep running off?!
December 1st, 2021 12:40
Frost and Beet
Goldfinch60 said:
That home is so special in our lives Ben.
Andy
November 29th, 2021 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
That home is so special in our lives Ben.
Andy
November 29th, 2021 02:19
Frost and Beet
Nicholas Browning said:
The words kept me enticed till the ending. And yes, that Mariah Carey song they can burn with the sugar.
November 28th, 2021 12:05
Nicholas Browning said:
The words kept me enticed till the ending. And yes, that Mariah Carey song they can burn with the sugar.
November 28th, 2021 12:05
Absence (An Acrostic)
L. B. Mek said:
absence, does help distil
the genuine worth, in our
feeling\'s and relationships
as long
as it\'s a conscious, choice
with purpose
not merely, an escape
from the harsh gravel
in our lives, path...
(I for one, will welcome back
your poetry
at every: Opportunity, dear Poet)
thanks for sharing
and yes, I think your chosen image
is a great visual, interpretation
of your poem, wonderful symmetry
November 25th, 2021 03:54
L. B. Mek said:
absence, does help distil
the genuine worth, in our
feeling\'s and relationships
as long
as it\'s a conscious, choice
with purpose
not merely, an escape
from the harsh gravel
in our lives, path...
(I for one, will welcome back
your poetry
at every: Opportunity, dear Poet)
thanks for sharing
and yes, I think your chosen image
is a great visual, interpretation
of your poem, wonderful symmetry
November 25th, 2021 03:54
Absence (An Acrostic)
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that taste will be even sweeter Ben.
Andy
November 25th, 2021 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that taste will be even sweeter Ben.
Andy
November 25th, 2021 02:19
Absence (An Acrostic)
Doggerel Dave said:
I can\'t quite suss this one out, AS.....so just get back here and post some more.... 😊
November 24th, 2021 20:26
Doggerel Dave said:
I can\'t quite suss this one out, AS.....so just get back here and post some more.... 😊
November 24th, 2021 20:26
Absence (An Acrostic)
orchidee said:
A fine write AS.
If ya hadn\'t have gone for so long, I never would have known! Well, I would know, cos I\'ve missed your poems. lol.
November 24th, 2021 11:03
orchidee said:
A fine write AS.
If ya hadn\'t have gone for so long, I never would have known! Well, I would know, cos I\'ve missed your poems. lol.
November 24th, 2021 11:03
Host
Goldfinch60 said:
I can totally relate to this Ben, I had a friend staying with me over this passed weekend and we had a great time.
Andy
September 29th, 2021 01:02
Goldfinch60 said:
I can totally relate to this Ben, I had a friend staying with me over this passed weekend and we had a great time.
Andy
September 29th, 2021 01:02
Host
Thekkinkkattil said:
A very warm and endearing poem. I liked the style
September 29th, 2021 00:55
Thekkinkkattil said:
A very warm and endearing poem. I liked the style
September 29th, 2021 00:55
Host
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Really like this writing 🙂 and I think the hobbit is great !
September 28th, 2021 08:23
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Really like this writing 🙂 and I think the hobbit is great !
September 28th, 2021 08:23
Talking to Myself
L. B. Mek said:
situationally? - it depends, my friend
(everything temperate, even in your facility to be temperate)..
be yourself, because life is too draining,
to be traversed in the guise of someone else...
(such a wonderfully unique topic, thanks for sharing dear poet)
September 9th, 2021 04:27
L. B. Mek said:
situationally? - it depends, my friend
(everything temperate, even in your facility to be temperate)..
be yourself, because life is too draining,
to be traversed in the guise of someone else...
(such a wonderfully unique topic, thanks for sharing dear poet)
September 9th, 2021 04:27
Talking to Myself
orchidee said:
A fine write AP.
Since when was Frankie Boyle funny? Did he ever star being funny?! I\'m usually in bed by the time any stand-up comedians come on TV. Phew! There\'s loads of rubbish I miss on TV.
September 9th, 2021 01:54
orchidee said:
A fine write AP.
Since when was Frankie Boyle funny? Did he ever star being funny?! I\'m usually in bed by the time any stand-up comedians come on TV. Phew! There\'s loads of rubbish I miss on TV.
September 9th, 2021 01:54
Talking to Myself
Saxon Crow said:
Oh i love talking to myself. But even more I love listening to the constant rambling nonsense that comes out my mouth. Great relatable poem
September 9th, 2021 00:15
Saxon Crow said:
Oh i love talking to myself. But even more I love listening to the constant rambling nonsense that comes out my mouth. Great relatable poem
September 9th, 2021 00:15
Talking to Myself
Goldfinch60 said:
Talking to yourself at least you know that somebody is listening.
Andy
September 9th, 2021 00:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Talking to yourself at least you know that somebody is listening.
Andy
September 9th, 2021 00:11
Talking to Myself
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
We could talk nice words to ourselves ... yes , it can be helpful . I certainly can talk to myself ,
September 8th, 2021 14:39
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
We could talk nice words to ourselves ... yes , it can be helpful . I certainly can talk to myself ,
September 8th, 2021 14:39
Talking to Myself
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I don’t think it is . Maybe it’s soothing to talk to ourselves .. being friends with ourselves .
Good poem ) “ reassert my mental wealth “ ... maybe it’s good for our mental state to talk to ourselves ..
September 8th, 2021 14:37
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I don’t think it is . Maybe it’s soothing to talk to ourselves .. being friends with ourselves .
Good poem ) “ reassert my mental wealth “ ... maybe it’s good for our mental state to talk to ourselves ..
September 8th, 2021 14:37
Bus Folk
matthew jay said:
Before I was old enough to drive. I road the bus occasionally. I still remember many of them years later they were good people.
August 27th, 2021 21:12
matthew jay said:
Before I was old enough to drive. I road the bus occasionally. I still remember many of them years later they were good people.
August 27th, 2021 21:12
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