Comments received on poems by AuburnScribbler



Chase and Employ (A Song, inspired by Metallica’s “Seek and Destroy!”)
Goldfinch60 said:

So true Ben, I have thought that during these tough times I am so fortunate to be retired and receive my pension.

Andy

January 4th, 2022 01:27

Chase and Employ (A Song, inspired by Metallica’s “Seek and Destroy!”)
Draven said:

Haha! This fits perfectly, nice one!

January 3rd, 2022 16:07

Chase and Employ (A Song, inspired by Metallica’s “Seek and Destroy!”)
Rozina said:

A very tough time for numerous job seekers. Enjoyed this, thank you.

January 3rd, 2022 05:03


Twenty Twenty Two (A Hopeful Acrostic)
orchidee said:

A fine write AS.
If only all we had to be worried about was - will I sing or not! lol. Well, no worries there really, cos I will sing. heehee.

January 1st, 2022 03:03

Twenty Twenty Two (A Hopeful Acrostic)
Goldfinch60 said:

Good acrostic Ben and it says so much.
May 2022 be a great year for you and for everyone.

Andy

January 1st, 2022 02:11

Twenty Twenty Two (A Hopeful Acrostic)
Rozina said:

I join you wholeheartedly in your plea! Happy New Year.

December 31st, 2021 21:38

Twenty Twenty Two (A Hopeful Acrostic)
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

A caring kind writing … nice words .. good poem

Nothing lasts forever .. and it has to leave at one point

Happy new year to you too ))

December 31st, 2021 18:19

Pub Folk
Draven said:

Cheers, prost, from one bar fly to another. Some of my closest, dearest friends were met in a local bar.

December 30th, 2021 09:45

Pub Folk
Goldfinch60 said:

Such true words Ben, strangely before reading this I have written a poem about the same subject but of many years ago.
Yes those \"pub folk\" were always such great times.

Andy

December 29th, 2021 01:28

Pub Folk
Rozina said:

My British friends brought us to a pub when we were in London and outside London. The atmosphere was great and the people were so friendly. Very nice reading about this traditional institution again.

December 29th, 2021 01:18

Pub Folk
spilleronsheet said:

Good one dear poet…you captured the emotions of pub folk…i raise my words and cheers to a poetry…like your pub folk that place for me is mps…keep penning dear poet

December 28th, 2021 22:46

Pub Folk
Eugene S. said:

Cheers mate! From an American cousin. Great poem!

December 28th, 2021 19:51

Pub Folk
woundedheart said:

The red lion i guess they have one in every town lol. Bar dwellers bar wallers call them what you will after a few pints they are all your best mate lol. Nice poem capturing English mentality. ☺

December 28th, 2021 17:55

Angels (A Thank You to the NHS on Christmas 2021)
Draven said:

Nice tribute.

December 23rd, 2021 07:24

Angels (A Thank You to the NHS on Christmas 2021)
L. B. Mek said:

we should bring back
the Thursday \'clapping of hands\'
gesture of support and togetherness
maybe make it once a month?
a timely and well written dedication
thanks for voicing
what most of us were thinking, dear Poet

December 23rd, 2021 03:58

Angels (A Thank You to the NHS on Christmas 2021)
Goldfinch60 said:

Super tribute Ben and very rightly so.
Andy

December 23rd, 2021 01:39

Angels (A Thank You to the NHS on Christmas 2021)
Rozina said:

They did and are still doing a magnificent exhausting job.

December 23rd, 2021 01:19

Angels (A Thank You to the NHS on Christmas 2021)
woundedheart said:

Very true and a few even died saving their patients, lovely accolade to the NHS

December 22nd, 2021 11:17

Angels (A Thank You to the NHS on Christmas 2021)
orchidee said:

A lovely tribute AS.

December 22nd, 2021 09:35

Red Suit
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

A fun lighthearted poem ))

December 22nd, 2021 09:05

Scrooge (A Redemptive Acrostic)
orchidee said:

Good write AS.

December 18th, 2021 02:53

Scrooge (A Redemptive Acrostic)
spilleronsheet said:

The book is a masterpiece
And your sincere dedication matching its dignity
Dear poet you summed it up so well
The acrostic poetry is very nicely laid and connected


December 18th, 2021 02:21

Scrooge (A Redemptive Acrostic)
Goldfinch60 said:

Brilliant acrostic Ben.

Strangely my son is in Amateur Dramatics and they have been performing \"A Christmas Carol\" all this week, the last performance is tonight.

Andy

December 18th, 2021 01:44

Red Suit
L. B. Mek said:

so rare, to find festive cheer
that\'s not feigned or tainted
my darting eyes of despair..
thank you!
for reminding me
why the child, within me
once enjoyed this festive season,
what a gift you inked, dear poet
hope you have
a fantastic Christmas
and a happy new year,
stay safe, but remember
to enjoy yourself
have that extra slice
and a few more sips, than you should
rejoice, in simply
being alive and free 🍻

December 17th, 2021 03:50

Red Suit
Goldfinch60 said:

May that happiness be forever with us Ben.

Andy

December 17th, 2021 01:56

Red Suit
spilleronsheet said:

Christmas feel
With Santa inside
Even if it’s fantasy
It brings the child outside
Christmas around the corner
Hopes pile and eagerness for santa to arrive
Very poetic dear poet

December 16th, 2021 13:44

Tinselitis
orchidee said:

Good write AS.

December 9th, 2021 11:17

Sleeplessness
spilleronsheet said:

Often I realise sleeplessness a blessing or curse
Cause at those moments an artist is born
So do you my dear poet
It’s been years of sleeplessness within me
However I may want to sleep
Maybe sleep is a luxury
Not coming to me
Then I tumbled upon your poetry
Maybe its not bad waking up spree

December 9th, 2021 11:05

Tinselitis
woundedheart said:

Was actually expecting the old joke when I saw the title ☺. Love Christmas my electricity bill trebled with all the lights ablaze. Great poem full of festive fun.

December 9th, 2021 09:53



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