Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



THE DARK OF MIDNIGHT HOUR
swingline said:

Superb image creation , last line creates another story . Always enjoy your paintings . Nothing left to say but keep it up .

May 26th, 2017 05:36

THE DARK OF MIDNIGHT HOUR
Fay Slimm. said:

Both pictures painted and penned to perfection - - You have real talent my friend.

May 26th, 2017 03:35

THE DARK OF MIDNIGHT HOUR
P.H.Rose said:

This is so very good
Michael and as GF60
Said. Cracking last line
Well done sir, well done..

May 26th, 2017 02:15

THE DARK OF MIDNIGHT HOUR
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M.

May 26th, 2017 01:42

THE DARK OF MIDNIGHT HOUR
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, cracking last line.

Like the artwork as well, where is it I feel I know that building; is it Ledbury?

May 26th, 2017 01:13

THE DARK OF MIDNIGHT HOUR
Augustus said:

Love the poem and art.

May 26th, 2017 00:19

BLONKIT NIBBLUS
Augustus said:

Smile.

May 25th, 2017 11:55

BLONKIT NIBBLUS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

SUBBLIN TIKNOLB

Pastrami ~ stuck in throat~he
Sick over edgeof the boatee
Then he fell in ~ head over chin
And they progged him back in
With a grapplehook hooked in his goatee

Thanks for another GOBBLEDEGOOK ~ BRIAN

May 25th, 2017 08:03

BLONKIT NIBBLUS
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M. heehee.

May 25th, 2017 01:27

THE WHITE FROCKED MAID
P.H.Rose said:

Love this Michael
Really beautiful

May 24th, 2017 13:29

THE WHITE FROCKED MAID
Augustus said:

\"Rhymic grace she rose in soft half tones\" This is incredibly beautiful and takes my breath away to savor in its entirety.

May 24th, 2017 11:49

THE WHITE FROCKED MAID
swingline said:

Phanstasmorigal is the vison I see . The vapours specter rendering a purpose that somewhat is alluding to me . I had flashbacks of North Africa in the painting of yours , someplace along the ocean , near a beach , maybe in Tripoli .

May 24th, 2017 07:33

THE WHITE FROCKED MAID
Fay Slimm. said:

A maid made so real I was there in that ghostly old mullioned room. A haunt of a read Michael and thanks to for the peep at your clean, clear and beautiful watercolour of ruins which once were her residence.

May 24th, 2017 04:54

THE WHITE FROCKED MAID
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M.

May 24th, 2017 04:34

THE WHITE FROCKED MAID
Goldfinch60 said:

A beautiful write Michael.

I like the watercolour as well.

May 24th, 2017 01:21

LIMMERICK 29
WriteBeLight said:

That one \"cracked\" me up Michael! Ha Ha

May 23rd, 2017 13:27

LIMMERICK 29
Augustus said:

Smile.

May 23rd, 2017 11:55

LIMMERICK 29
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

SAID a Boy to his Teacher one day
Wright has written tonight wrong I say
The Teacher replied
Staring horrified
Right ~ Wright ~ write tonight right
Right ~ right away ! TOUCHE !
Please check my poem today ~ Thanks BRIAN

May 23rd, 2017 08:36

LIMMERICK 29
Fay Slimm. said:

A smile on my face as I contemplate a nude little Barrington without his tunic. Good limerick too.

May 23rd, 2017 02:49

LIMMERICK 29
P.H.Rose said:

Ha ha.....
Another cracker.

May 23rd, 2017 02:40

LIMMERICK 29
orchidee said:

A fine write M. Oohh, wasn\'t there some trouble about Donald Duck not wearing trousers? And Porky Pig in those cartoons too?! But then again, you ever seen animals wearing clothes, apart from some winter coats for dogs, etc?

May 23rd, 2017 01:53

LIMMERICK 29
swingline said:

Ha ha , a simple twist of fate .

May 23rd, 2017 01:53

THE CLOAK I WEAR
WriteBeLight said:

I feel the struggle Michael. Great poem.

May 22nd, 2017 18:11

THE CLOAK I WEAR
P.H.Rose said:

Both brilliant !!!
Michael ...

May 22nd, 2017 10:30

THE CLOAK I WEAR
willyweed said:

beautiful work

May 22nd, 2017 10:23

THE CLOAK I WEAR
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MICHAEL ~ For the perspective in both the Poem and the Painting. We all wear cloaks (very Harry Potter !) To protect and enhance our Outer Persona (Edwardian Men often sported a cloak) but also to cloak our Inner Weaknesses ~ Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN.

May 22nd, 2017 03:49

THE CLOAK I WEAR
swingline said:

Does the cloak of uncertainly protect the without from the within ? Or the within from the without are there any doubts ?

May 22nd, 2017 03:20

THE CLOAK I WEAR
Fay Slimm. said:

Love this - both picture and verse are so absorbingly good

May 22nd, 2017 01:55

THE CLOAK I WEAR
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic. I might have incerti-wotsit too! *gets out dictionary* heehee.

May 22nd, 2017 01:32

THE CLOAK I WEAR
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write and good painting.

May 22nd, 2017 01:05



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