Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
WHY DO THEY DO IT?
Augustus said:
Must be a British thing. My beef is the tons of paper, plastic waste. I have no answer. Dishwashing has its effect on the environment as well. Kudos.
May 27th, 2017 10:02
Augustus said:
Must be a British thing. My beef is the tons of paper, plastic waste. I have no answer. Dishwashing has its effect on the environment as well. Kudos.
May 27th, 2017 10:02
WHY DO THEY DO IT?
swingline said:
I can relate . Nothing like dinner served on a plate .
May 27th, 2017 08:46
swingline said:
I can relate . Nothing like dinner served on a plate .
May 27th, 2017 08:46
WHY DO THEY DO IT?
orchidee said:
I thought only babies had dishes with separate compartments. Or cats and dogs?! A fine write and pic M.
May 27th, 2017 01:38
orchidee said:
I thought only babies had dishes with separate compartments. Or cats and dogs?! A fine write and pic M.
May 27th, 2017 01:38
WHY DO THEY DO IT?
Goldfinch60 said:
The pie in a pot is the one that gets me, perhaps it is too hard for them to get it out, I certainly struggle sometimes and end up with burnt fingers and pie everywhere, except on the plate. Good write and very true Michael.
May 27th, 2017 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
The pie in a pot is the one that gets me, perhaps it is too hard for them to get it out, I certainly struggle sometimes and end up with burnt fingers and pie everywhere, except on the plate. Good write and very true Michael.
May 27th, 2017 00:58
THE DARK OF MIDNIGHT HOUR
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI MICHAEL ~ There is a mental hiatus between The elegance and pristinity of the Hamlet and the Lady in your last haunting line ! She would not (in my experience with the YMCA) be plying her trade under the respectability of that cloistered portico ! BUT ~ in retrospect ~ that paradox heightens the sadness of her position. I have never met a truly happy SEX WORKER ~ they are all very vulnerable ! Yours BRIAN
May 26th, 2017 17:10
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI MICHAEL ~ There is a mental hiatus between The elegance and pristinity of the Hamlet and the Lady in your last haunting line ! She would not (in my experience with the YMCA) be plying her trade under the respectability of that cloistered portico ! BUT ~ in retrospect ~ that paradox heightens the sadness of her position. I have never met a truly happy SEX WORKER ~ they are all very vulnerable ! Yours BRIAN
May 26th, 2017 17:10
THE DARK OF MIDNIGHT HOUR
swingline said:
Superb image creation , last line creates another story . Always enjoy your paintings . Nothing left to say but keep it up .
May 26th, 2017 05:36
swingline said:
Superb image creation , last line creates another story . Always enjoy your paintings . Nothing left to say but keep it up .
May 26th, 2017 05:36
THE DARK OF MIDNIGHT HOUR
Fay Slimm. said:
Both pictures painted and penned to perfection - - You have real talent my friend.
May 26th, 2017 03:35
Fay Slimm. said:
Both pictures painted and penned to perfection - - You have real talent my friend.
May 26th, 2017 03:35
THE DARK OF MIDNIGHT HOUR
P.H.Rose said:
This is so very good
Michael and as GF60
Said. Cracking last line
Well done sir, well done..
May 26th, 2017 02:15
P.H.Rose said:
This is so very good
Michael and as GF60
Said. Cracking last line
Well done sir, well done..
May 26th, 2017 02:15
THE DARK OF MIDNIGHT HOUR
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, cracking last line.
Like the artwork as well, where is it I feel I know that building; is it Ledbury?
May 26th, 2017 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, cracking last line.
Like the artwork as well, where is it I feel I know that building; is it Ledbury?
May 26th, 2017 01:13
BLONKIT NIBBLUS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
SUBBLIN TIKNOLB
Pastrami ~ stuck in throat~he
Sick over edgeof the boatee
Then he fell in ~ head over chin
And they progged him back in
With a grapplehook hooked in his goatee
Thanks for another GOBBLEDEGOOK ~ BRIAN
May 25th, 2017 08:03
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
SUBBLIN TIKNOLB
Pastrami ~ stuck in throat~he
Sick over edgeof the boatee
Then he fell in ~ head over chin
And they progged him back in
With a grapplehook hooked in his goatee
Thanks for another GOBBLEDEGOOK ~ BRIAN
May 25th, 2017 08:03
THE WHITE FROCKED MAID
Augustus said:
\"Rhymic grace she rose in soft half tones\" This is incredibly beautiful and takes my breath away to savor in its entirety.
May 24th, 2017 11:49
Augustus said:
\"Rhymic grace she rose in soft half tones\" This is incredibly beautiful and takes my breath away to savor in its entirety.
May 24th, 2017 11:49
THE WHITE FROCKED MAID
swingline said:
Phanstasmorigal is the vison I see . The vapours specter rendering a purpose that somewhat is alluding to me . I had flashbacks of North Africa in the painting of yours , someplace along the ocean , near a beach , maybe in Tripoli .
May 24th, 2017 07:33
swingline said:
Phanstasmorigal is the vison I see . The vapours specter rendering a purpose that somewhat is alluding to me . I had flashbacks of North Africa in the painting of yours , someplace along the ocean , near a beach , maybe in Tripoli .
May 24th, 2017 07:33
THE WHITE FROCKED MAID
Fay Slimm. said:
A maid made so real I was there in that ghostly old mullioned room. A haunt of a read Michael and thanks to for the peep at your clean, clear and beautiful watercolour of ruins which once were her residence.
May 24th, 2017 04:54
Fay Slimm. said:
A maid made so real I was there in that ghostly old mullioned room. A haunt of a read Michael and thanks to for the peep at your clean, clear and beautiful watercolour of ruins which once were her residence.
May 24th, 2017 04:54
THE WHITE FROCKED MAID
Goldfinch60 said:
A beautiful write Michael.
I like the watercolour as well.
May 24th, 2017 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
A beautiful write Michael.
I like the watercolour as well.
May 24th, 2017 01:21
LIMMERICK 29
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
SAID a Boy to his Teacher one day
Wright has written tonight wrong I say
The Teacher replied
Staring horrified
Right ~ Wright ~ write tonight right
Right ~ right away ! TOUCHE !
Please check my poem today ~ Thanks BRIAN
May 23rd, 2017 08:36
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
SAID a Boy to his Teacher one day
Wright has written tonight wrong I say
The Teacher replied
Staring horrified
Right ~ Wright ~ write tonight right
Right ~ right away ! TOUCHE !
Please check my poem today ~ Thanks BRIAN
May 23rd, 2017 08:36
LIMMERICK 29
Fay Slimm. said:
A smile on my face as I contemplate a nude little Barrington without his tunic. Good limerick too.
May 23rd, 2017 02:49
Fay Slimm. said:
A smile on my face as I contemplate a nude little Barrington without his tunic. Good limerick too.
May 23rd, 2017 02:49
LIMMERICK 29
orchidee said:
A fine write M. Oohh, wasn\'t there some trouble about Donald Duck not wearing trousers? And Porky Pig in those cartoons too?! But then again, you ever seen animals wearing clothes, apart from some winter coats for dogs, etc?
May 23rd, 2017 01:53
orchidee said:
A fine write M. Oohh, wasn\'t there some trouble about Donald Duck not wearing trousers? And Porky Pig in those cartoons too?! But then again, you ever seen animals wearing clothes, apart from some winter coats for dogs, etc?
May 23rd, 2017 01:53
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