Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
MATURITY
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and the last line is so meaningful.
Apparently it\'s a bit wet in Venice I am led to believe. Good artwork.
June 6th, 2017 02:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and the last line is so meaningful.
Apparently it\'s a bit wet in Venice I am led to believe. Good artwork.
June 6th, 2017 02:50
MATURITY
swingline said:
An x-ray on the subject . Nice painting . Take your time next time .
June 6th, 2017 01:42
swingline said:
An x-ray on the subject . Nice painting . Take your time next time .
June 6th, 2017 01:42
MATURITY
MaddieJ said:
I like how deep the subject is and how you convey it in so few words! Good write!
June 6th, 2017 00:46
MaddieJ said:
I like how deep the subject is and how you convey it in so few words! Good write!
June 6th, 2017 00:46
FIVE THIRTY PM
Augustus said:
I\'m in Houston to now. Talk about mass transit. We had black raindrops in Southern California. The rain would cleanse the smog for a few hours.
June 5th, 2017 19:29
Augustus said:
I\'m in Houston to now. Talk about mass transit. We had black raindrops in Southern California. The rain would cleanse the smog for a few hours.
June 5th, 2017 19:29
FIVE THIRTY PM
Michael Edwards said:
Thanks everyone - many of us have been there, done that.
June 5th, 2017 02:11
Michael Edwards said:
Thanks everyone - many of us have been there, done that.
June 5th, 2017 02:11
FIVE THIRTY PM
swingline said:
Descriptive image , coming down , going out . As life goes on in a never ending cycle .
June 5th, 2017 00:58
swingline said:
Descriptive image , coming down , going out . As life goes on in a never ending cycle .
June 5th, 2017 00:58
FIVE THIRTY PM
Louis Gibbs said:
Nice poem to start off this day, Michael! Very descriptive phrases.
June 5th, 2017 00:24
Louis Gibbs said:
Nice poem to start off this day, Michael! Very descriptive phrases.
June 5th, 2017 00:24
LIMERICK 33
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
A man on the Platform @ Ealing
Waited in vain for a train to Darjeeling
The guard on Platform 3
Sotto voced to me
If he comes in the CAFF
We can all have a LAFF
And serve him with Darjeeling TEA
Thanks MIKE for limerick & cartoon
We need cheering up again this
morning Please check my POEM
BRIAN the MOURNFUL !
June 4th, 2017 04:21
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
A man on the Platform @ Ealing
Waited in vain for a train to Darjeeling
The guard on Platform 3
Sotto voced to me
If he comes in the CAFF
We can all have a LAFF
And serve him with Darjeeling TEA
Thanks MIKE for limerick & cartoon
We need cheering up again this
morning Please check my POEM
BRIAN the MOURNFUL !
June 4th, 2017 04:21
LIMERICK 33
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and cartoon, my first smile of the day.
June 4th, 2017 02:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and cartoon, my first smile of the day.
June 4th, 2017 02:06
AS YET UNWRITTEN
Augustus said:
Nicely done.
Sir I\'d be honored to serve on your next voyage. I have a full suit of mail. My specialty is broad ax. I have numerous kills to my credit and have taken the wives of my opponents. I\'m from The Valley Dal.
June 3rd, 2017 13:08
Augustus said:
Nicely done.
Sir I\'d be honored to serve on your next voyage. I have a full suit of mail. My specialty is broad ax. I have numerous kills to my credit and have taken the wives of my opponents. I\'m from The Valley Dal.
June 3rd, 2017 13:08
AS YET UNWRITTEN
orchidee said:
You written this poem yet. or is it still unwritten? Said some wag (me!). Ah yes, I see you\'ve written it! heehee.
June 3rd, 2017 12:21
orchidee said:
You written this poem yet. or is it still unwritten? Said some wag (me!). Ah yes, I see you\'ve written it! heehee.
June 3rd, 2017 12:21
AS YET UNWRITTEN
thehippiepoet said:
Very nice, I enjoyed how smooth it was to read and the alliteration used on the sword swinging line. Good use of alliteration always gets me
June 3rd, 2017 09:38
thehippiepoet said:
Very nice, I enjoyed how smooth it was to read and the alliteration used on the sword swinging line. Good use of alliteration always gets me
June 3rd, 2017 09:38
AS YET UNWRITTEN
P.H.Rose said:
Brilliant Michael
Absolutly brilliant
This is my kind of
Poem..well done..
June 3rd, 2017 03:05
P.H.Rose said:
Brilliant Michael
Absolutly brilliant
This is my kind of
Poem..well done..
June 3rd, 2017 03:05
AS YET UNWRITTEN
swingline said:
I picture Valhalla , where old Vikings do gather and swig and sway .
June 3rd, 2017 02:24
swingline said:
I picture Valhalla , where old Vikings do gather and swig and sway .
June 3rd, 2017 02:24
AS YET UNWRITTEN
MaddieJ said:
As I read I fealt like I was reading about history through a poem. I really enjoyed this!
June 3rd, 2017 01:20
MaddieJ said:
As I read I fealt like I was reading about history through a poem. I really enjoyed this!
June 3rd, 2017 01:20
SYNTACTIC AMBIGUITY 1
Augustus said:
When I was a kid the \"little rat\" that brought you a penny or a nickel for a tooth placed under the pillow. Louisiana was influenced by the French. Unfortunately these quaint distinctions have been lost. I love your little original characters. We use elevators in stead of lifts. Nice fiery uplifting haiku.
June 2nd, 2017 06:37
Augustus said:
When I was a kid the \"little rat\" that brought you a penny or a nickel for a tooth placed under the pillow. Louisiana was influenced by the French. Unfortunately these quaint distinctions have been lost. I love your little original characters. We use elevators in stead of lifts. Nice fiery uplifting haiku.
June 2nd, 2017 06:37
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