Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Catzzzzzzz.
MendedFences27 said:
Cats - Too mysterious to comprehend. From Lions and Tigers to household pets, they remain aloof and powerful.
Your poem captures their station in life and our response to it brilliantly. Loved it.- Phil A.
July 30th, 2020 09:21
MendedFences27 said:
Cats - Too mysterious to comprehend. From Lions and Tigers to household pets, they remain aloof and powerful.
Your poem captures their station in life and our response to it brilliantly. Loved it.- Phil A.
July 30th, 2020 09:21
Catzzzzzzz.
Michael Edwards said:
At the risk of repeating myself - whilst I do not dislike cats even if they do look down on man I do rail against their owners who are too lazy to take them for walks and instead allow them to wander free wreaking havoc with wild life and in other peoples gardens. If responsible cat breeders can exercise their charges without setting them free then why can\'t other cat owners? Dog owners would never get away with it.
Rant over - another fine write Fay.
July 30th, 2020 08:12
Michael Edwards said:
At the risk of repeating myself - whilst I do not dislike cats even if they do look down on man I do rail against their owners who are too lazy to take them for walks and instead allow them to wander free wreaking havoc with wild life and in other peoples gardens. If responsible cat breeders can exercise their charges without setting them free then why can\'t other cat owners? Dog owners would never get away with it.
Rant over - another fine write Fay.
July 30th, 2020 08:12
Catzzzzzzz.
dusk arising said:
Superior beings every last one of them. Some people hate them for that. I adore cats and I adore dogs too I hasten to add.
You\'ve captured some typically cat and kitten characteristics here. But where is the shock pain of a kitten climbing up my trouser leg as i open a can of cat food?
Oh to be as lithe as a cat and as luxuriantly lazy as a cat at rest too. Definitely one of the top life forms on the planet.
July 30th, 2020 03:54
dusk arising said:
Superior beings every last one of them. Some people hate them for that. I adore cats and I adore dogs too I hasten to add.
You\'ve captured some typically cat and kitten characteristics here. But where is the shock pain of a kitten climbing up my trouser leg as i open a can of cat food?
Oh to be as lithe as a cat and as luxuriantly lazy as a cat at rest too. Definitely one of the top life forms on the planet.
July 30th, 2020 03:54
In Transit.
Goldfinch60 said:
The beauty of your words combine with the wonder of those raindrops flowing down the window pane.
Andy
July 29th, 2020 23:49
Goldfinch60 said:
The beauty of your words combine with the wonder of those raindrops flowing down the window pane.
Andy
July 29th, 2020 23:49
In Transit.
MendedFences27 said:
Odes indeed. Raindrops upon window panes, become a song of praise. Poets tend to find beauty in unlikely places. as you have here. To convey one\'s thoughts upon the moment, is poetry\'s purpose. You have given us all of your insight beautifully wrapped in poetic excellance. Thank you. -Phil A.
July 29th, 2020 21:23
MendedFences27 said:
Odes indeed. Raindrops upon window panes, become a song of praise. Poets tend to find beauty in unlikely places. as you have here. To convey one\'s thoughts upon the moment, is poetry\'s purpose. You have given us all of your insight beautifully wrapped in poetic excellance. Thank you. -Phil A.
July 29th, 2020 21:23
In Transit.
dusk arising said:
I was tempted to congratulate you on such a wonderful testament to the longevity and flexibility of the Ford Transit van..... however.....
Tears from heaven cascade earthward to refresh and lubricate our love for the verdant lush among which we toil. Captured here in your fine words as they hesitate for us to marvel their individual significant beauty.... not least that which inspires you Fay to find the finery in our everyday experiences.
And lets face it, 2020 has seen too bloomin many raindrops on windows especially for those of us shielding.
July 29th, 2020 04:04
dusk arising said:
I was tempted to congratulate you on such a wonderful testament to the longevity and flexibility of the Ford Transit van..... however.....
Tears from heaven cascade earthward to refresh and lubricate our love for the verdant lush among which we toil. Captured here in your fine words as they hesitate for us to marvel their individual significant beauty.... not least that which inspires you Fay to find the finery in our everyday experiences.
And lets face it, 2020 has seen too bloomin many raindrops on windows especially for those of us shielding.
July 29th, 2020 04:04
In Error.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Aternoon FAY - Thanks for scaring ! WAR be it Civil or Uncivil always ends in destruction. Not only of Bricks & Mortar but also of lives & aspirations. The dead & the the dying - Nobody wins in the END ! The picture says it all - your Poem is the *Caking on the Ice !* Brian & I are both Pacifists and can see no sense in WAR ! Please check our Poem today *SUN - SAND - SEA - SANGRIA* It is a request to Pray for Spain - Her People & Her Economy. She has feely given us all so so much of her Spirit ~ The least we can do is PRAY for HER ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Angela - Brian - Smokey Cat 💛💛💛
July 28th, 2020 11:17
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Aternoon FAY - Thanks for scaring ! WAR be it Civil or Uncivil always ends in destruction. Not only of Bricks & Mortar but also of lives & aspirations. The dead & the the dying - Nobody wins in the END ! The picture says it all - your Poem is the *Caking on the Ice !* Brian & I are both Pacifists and can see no sense in WAR ! Please check our Poem today *SUN - SAND - SEA - SANGRIA* It is a request to Pray for Spain - Her People & Her Economy. She has feely given us all so so much of her Spirit ~ The least we can do is PRAY for HER ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Angela - Brian - Smokey Cat 💛💛💛
July 28th, 2020 11:17
In Error.
MendedFences27 said:
This world would be a beautiful place if it weren\'t for people.
Think of how many people had to sign off for that inadvertent bomb to fall where it did. We could blame them all, but mainly we need to take responsibility. We put the warmonger in control, we build the bombs, we fly the planes or launch the rockets. ...Enough, sorry......
A beautiful poem, sad. yet beautiful. I\'ll keep this one. Thanks.
- Phil A.
July 28th, 2020 09:20
MendedFences27 said:
This world would be a beautiful place if it weren\'t for people.
Think of how many people had to sign off for that inadvertent bomb to fall where it did. We could blame them all, but mainly we need to take responsibility. We put the warmonger in control, we build the bombs, we fly the planes or launch the rockets. ...Enough, sorry......
A beautiful poem, sad. yet beautiful. I\'ll keep this one. Thanks.
- Phil A.
July 28th, 2020 09:20
In Error.
Neville said:
man more and above all other creatures makes mistakes.. you paint a grim picture of reality here my friend..
and I can close my eyes and see a similar image to the one you posted when driving through Syria several years ago....
Neville
July 28th, 2020 06:18
Neville said:
man more and above all other creatures makes mistakes.. you paint a grim picture of reality here my friend..
and I can close my eyes and see a similar image to the one you posted when driving through Syria several years ago....
Neville
July 28th, 2020 06:18
In Error.
dusk arising said:
Great insight into the predicament of one of the lesser known, lesser appreciated, heroes, or victims, of war. A scene we see all too much of in the middle east.
Perceptive writing looking beyond the human facade into the personal loss of so much with now nowhere to go and nothing but rubble to her name.
ooh the picture changed from when i started to write this. it\'s now more attuned to what we see in the news reports.
July 28th, 2020 04:24
dusk arising said:
Great insight into the predicament of one of the lesser known, lesser appreciated, heroes, or victims, of war. A scene we see all too much of in the middle east.
Perceptive writing looking beyond the human facade into the personal loss of so much with now nowhere to go and nothing but rubble to her name.
ooh the picture changed from when i started to write this. it\'s now more attuned to what we see in the news reports.
July 28th, 2020 04:24
In Error.
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful emotive write Fay. Another for my favourites. It reveals such feelings within me. Thank you.
Andy
July 28th, 2020 04:16
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful emotive write Fay. Another for my favourites. It reveals such feelings within me. Thank you.
Andy
July 28th, 2020 04:16
If Only.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, the glory of Nature\'s Symphony brings glory to us all.
Andy
July 28th, 2020 00:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, the glory of Nature\'s Symphony brings glory to us all.
Andy
July 28th, 2020 00:12
If Only.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Evening Fay ~ Thanks for posting an enigmatic Poem ! Life ~ Love & Nature are awesome and each day we experience new Highs (& Lows & Inbetweens) ! Capturing them in emotive wordlets is equally the Poets ~ Pain & Pleasure !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
We have not posted today ~ Please check Yesterdays
*NOT GOING OUT* which is also a FUSION ~ Thnaks !
July 27th, 2020 11:06
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Evening Fay ~ Thanks for posting an enigmatic Poem ! Life ~ Love & Nature are awesome and each day we experience new Highs (& Lows & Inbetweens) ! Capturing them in emotive wordlets is equally the Poets ~ Pain & Pleasure !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
We have not posted today ~ Please check Yesterdays
*NOT GOING OUT* which is also a FUSION ~ Thnaks !
July 27th, 2020 11:06
If Only.
MendedFences27 said:
And thus you did. The music of Nature is compelling and poets thrive on its beauty. Your well placed words sing a song to the bird lovers of the world. Great poem - Phil A.
July 27th, 2020 10:59
MendedFences27 said:
And thus you did. The music of Nature is compelling and poets thrive on its beauty. Your well placed words sing a song to the bird lovers of the world. Great poem - Phil A.
July 27th, 2020 10:59
If Only.
Neville said:
the song you have placed here should not only be sung from high boughs, but all those places where ears are hungry for the sound of birdsong and poetry ... Neville x
July 27th, 2020 08:07
Neville said:
the song you have placed here should not only be sung from high boughs, but all those places where ears are hungry for the sound of birdsong and poetry ... Neville x
July 27th, 2020 08:07
If Only.
L. B. Mek said:
a melodic orchestra of choice \'wordlets\', immersing us with the sensation of a nightingale\'s ballad at dawn
wonderful tempo
July 27th, 2020 07:09
L. B. Mek said:
a melodic orchestra of choice \'wordlets\', immersing us with the sensation of a nightingale\'s ballad at dawn
wonderful tempo
July 27th, 2020 07:09
If Only.
dusk arising said:
Oh but your words do all this upon entering my head. I asssure you birds sing a new harmony as your thoughts morph from words to complete mental pictures bringing forth an explosion of electrons in my brain.
No headaches were involved in the writing of this comment.
July 27th, 2020 05:27
dusk arising said:
Oh but your words do all this upon entering my head. I asssure you birds sing a new harmony as your thoughts morph from words to complete mental pictures bringing forth an explosion of electrons in my brain.
No headaches were involved in the writing of this comment.
July 27th, 2020 05:27
Patrol.
Neville said:
Michael has already said it for me but despite this slight deviation, from some of your more usual topics, of which there are indeed many, I think this post clearly demonstrates your incredible versatility... I kinda love it too.. x
July 26th, 2020 16:27
Neville said:
Michael has already said it for me but despite this slight deviation, from some of your more usual topics, of which there are indeed many, I think this post clearly demonstrates your incredible versatility... I kinda love it too.. x
July 26th, 2020 16:27
Patrol.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Evening Fay ! Love the picture with the Brolly over the DOG & not His Master ! I have never had a DOG my Parents always had CATS and now Angela & I have SMOKEY CAT! Essex is drier than Cornwall but on wet says I see Seniors doing their constutional with their grateful Pets. In my experience Dog Owners have a deeper bond than Cat Owners ~ Cats are much more independent and dont need WALKIES ! Angela loves DOGS (she loves SMOKEY too !) and I have promised Her when we have a BABY - and shes on Maternity Leave - I will get her a Golden Lab Puppy ! Smokey is good with DOGS ~ He ignores THEM !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Angela & Brian & Smokey 💛💛💛
Please check our POEM *NOT GOING OUT*
It is also posted as a FUSION ! Thanks A & B
July 26th, 2020 13:58
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Evening Fay ! Love the picture with the Brolly over the DOG & not His Master ! I have never had a DOG my Parents always had CATS and now Angela & I have SMOKEY CAT! Essex is drier than Cornwall but on wet says I see Seniors doing their constutional with their grateful Pets. In my experience Dog Owners have a deeper bond than Cat Owners ~ Cats are much more independent and dont need WALKIES ! Angela loves DOGS (she loves SMOKEY too !) and I have promised Her when we have a BABY - and shes on Maternity Leave - I will get her a Golden Lab Puppy ! Smokey is good with DOGS ~ He ignores THEM !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Love
Angela & Brian & Smokey 💛💛💛
Please check our POEM *NOT GOING OUT*
It is also posted as a FUSION ! Thanks A & B
July 26th, 2020 13:58
Entrance
Goldfinch60 said:
Yet another super poem that takes me to that wonderful dawn light.
Andy
July 26th, 2020 00:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Yet another super poem that takes me to that wonderful dawn light.
Andy
July 26th, 2020 00:23
Patrol.
Michael Edwards said:
There are loads of dog owners in our village and thankfully they are all very responsible when it comes to walking them. This is a bit of a departure from your usual writes and I love it.
July 25th, 2020 13:13
Michael Edwards said:
There are loads of dog owners in our village and thankfully they are all very responsible when it comes to walking them. This is a bit of a departure from your usual writes and I love it.
July 25th, 2020 13:13
Patrol.
dusk arising said:
Oh that we had such disciplined dog owners hereabouts for the unattended small waste piles and even half hearted abandoned filled doggy bags litter the streets, play areas and even the footbridges.
July 25th, 2020 12:55
dusk arising said:
Oh that we had such disciplined dog owners hereabouts for the unattended small waste piles and even half hearted abandoned filled doggy bags litter the streets, play areas and even the footbridges.
July 25th, 2020 12:55
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