Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
The Word.
Accidental Poet said:
Beautiful write Fay. A lover of all animals, this really hits home for me. I wish animals could read this. AP
July 4th, 2020 08:24
Accidental Poet said:
Beautiful write Fay. A lover of all animals, this really hits home for me. I wish animals could read this. AP
July 4th, 2020 08:24
The Word.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. My mention of that horse inspire you somewhat here with this?
July 4th, 2020 03:34
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. My mention of that horse inspire you somewhat here with this?
July 4th, 2020 03:34
Absorbing.
Goldfinch60 said:
The silence of water can be so mesmerising and can take you to another place of peace, as do your words Fay.
Andy
July 4th, 2020 01:02
Goldfinch60 said:
The silence of water can be so mesmerising and can take you to another place of peace, as do your words Fay.
Andy
July 4th, 2020 01:02
Absorbing.
Neville said:
Yesterday was a long day for me.. and although I visited this page several times, I struggled to find the words I wanted to express...
today, having not had the most refreshing of sleeps and waking with a bass drum pounding somewhere in my head.. I just wanna say that despite all that, these words are indeed absorbing and have helped take my mind off of the banging... am back off to bed now... cheers x
July 4th, 2020 00:27
Neville said:
Yesterday was a long day for me.. and although I visited this page several times, I struggled to find the words I wanted to express...
today, having not had the most refreshing of sleeps and waking with a bass drum pounding somewhere in my head.. I just wanna say that despite all that, these words are indeed absorbing and have helped take my mind off of the banging... am back off to bed now... cheers x
July 4th, 2020 00:27
Absorbing.
Michael Edwards said:
And I\'m absorbed - the kind of work which resonates with me.
July 3rd, 2020 13:24
Michael Edwards said:
And I\'m absorbed - the kind of work which resonates with me.
July 3rd, 2020 13:24
Absorbing.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD AFTERNOON FAY - Angela here ! Brian is letting me make the comments today. Love the visual I didn\'t know you*d seen my new Pale Blue Ball Gown for *When the lights go on again !* Love the shape and message of the Poem. I love LAKES (little & large !) - they always have hidden depths & awesome reflections. lakes do *refine reality* and enable us to absorb calm ! Thanks for *Leading us beside still waters & restoring our Souls - AMEN !*
Blessings & Love & Peace & Joy
Angela & Brian & Smokey XXX
July 3rd, 2020 09:22
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD AFTERNOON FAY - Angela here ! Brian is letting me make the comments today. Love the visual I didn\'t know you*d seen my new Pale Blue Ball Gown for *When the lights go on again !* Love the shape and message of the Poem. I love LAKES (little & large !) - they always have hidden depths & awesome reflections. lakes do *refine reality* and enable us to absorb calm ! Thanks for *Leading us beside still waters & restoring our Souls - AMEN !*
Blessings & Love & Peace & Joy
Angela & Brian & Smokey XXX
July 3rd, 2020 09:22
Absorbing.
orchidee said:
I saw a small horse drinking on the opposite side of a river. Not a steep bank, and it soon safely galloped back to the others in the Riding Stables field. But unusual to see.
July 3rd, 2020 09:15
orchidee said:
I saw a small horse drinking on the opposite side of a river. Not a steep bank, and it soon safely galloped back to the others in the Riding Stables field. But unusual to see.
July 3rd, 2020 09:15
Absorbing.
dusk arising said:
eeeh bah gum lass, if thee \'avvent \'it nail smack on\'t \'ed wi thissun.
Still waters run deep innit as our aunt Mabel insisted when she drowned uncle Jack\'s parrot. E were a reet noisey beggar see and babble away like a ragin torrent.
Nah lass, gimmie the quiet of a glazed lake and a pork pie any day.
July 3rd, 2020 08:31
dusk arising said:
eeeh bah gum lass, if thee \'avvent \'it nail smack on\'t \'ed wi thissun.
Still waters run deep innit as our aunt Mabel insisted when she drowned uncle Jack\'s parrot. E were a reet noisey beggar see and babble away like a ragin torrent.
Nah lass, gimmie the quiet of a glazed lake and a pork pie any day.
July 3rd, 2020 08:31
Absorbing.
Accidental Poet said:
Beautiful write Fay. A calm water\'s surface can be very magnetic to the attention span. Observing the reflections is hypnotic sometimes.
July 3rd, 2020 06:56
Accidental Poet said:
Beautiful write Fay. A calm water\'s surface can be very magnetic to the attention span. Observing the reflections is hypnotic sometimes.
July 3rd, 2020 06:56
Unmistakable
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening FAY - You are vin a sensusl mood today - what did you have for Breakfast ? ! The first time I met Brian - and we danced together - it was LOVE - unmistakeable & irresistable and still is - AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Angela & Brian & Smokey !
Please check our NEW FUSUION
*BEYOND THE SUNSET* about Heaven - Thanks !
July 2nd, 2020 10:43
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening FAY - You are vin a sensusl mood today - what did you have for Breakfast ? ! The first time I met Brian - and we danced together - it was LOVE - unmistakeable & irresistable and still is - AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Love
Angela & Brian & Smokey !
Please check our NEW FUSUION
*BEYOND THE SUNSET* about Heaven - Thanks !
July 2nd, 2020 10:43
Unmistakable
dusk arising said:
I think you voice a fear within the longing. So much easier to turn away from the thought than contemplate its complexity and danger. Yet the goal .... oh the goal.... need i say more?
July 2nd, 2020 05:41
dusk arising said:
I think you voice a fear within the longing. So much easier to turn away from the thought than contemplate its complexity and danger. Yet the goal .... oh the goal.... need i say more?
July 2nd, 2020 05:41
Unmistakable
Neville said:
Only you could craft such an exquisite way of describing what we all know happens in those delicious moments of uncertainty or hesitation ...
Neville
July 2nd, 2020 04:13
Neville said:
Only you could craft such an exquisite way of describing what we all know happens in those delicious moments of uncertainty or hesitation ...
Neville
July 2nd, 2020 04:13
Unmistakable
Goldfinch60 said:
May that compliance with life always be with you Fay.
Andy
July 2nd, 2020 03:26
Goldfinch60 said:
May that compliance with life always be with you Fay.
Andy
July 2nd, 2020 03:26
Questions.
Goldfinch60 said:
As we sit within our minds eye we can grieve but that grief can change to love as the memories of that love take over our hearts and minds.
Wonderful words Fay.
Andy
July 2nd, 2020 00:22
Goldfinch60 said:
As we sit within our minds eye we can grieve but that grief can change to love as the memories of that love take over our hearts and minds.
Wonderful words Fay.
Andy
July 2nd, 2020 00:22
Questions.
Accidental Poet said:
If not for the pure elation that comes from writing poetry, there is comforting release of emotion and acceptance in what life lays at your feet. May you forever have the gift of words Fay.
July 1st, 2020 18:43
Accidental Poet said:
If not for the pure elation that comes from writing poetry, there is comforting release of emotion and acceptance in what life lays at your feet. May you forever have the gift of words Fay.
July 1st, 2020 18:43
Questions.
Suresh said:
While my comprehension of yours words is complete, yet the inability to replicate is torturous- and thus the admiration your work is even more appreciated
July 1st, 2020 15:52
Suresh said:
While my comprehension of yours words is complete, yet the inability to replicate is torturous- and thus the admiration your work is even more appreciated
July 1st, 2020 15:52
Questions.
dusk arising said:
Let there be no regrets as time takes us and plays the game of life upon us. Unanswerable questions will only find peace if we pattern our own beliefs from our innermost feelings and not be led by blind men in robes who\'s answers are but a dance upon a fear they gave us as infants.
July 1st, 2020 06:51
dusk arising said:
Let there be no regrets as time takes us and plays the game of life upon us. Unanswerable questions will only find peace if we pattern our own beliefs from our innermost feelings and not be led by blind men in robes who\'s answers are but a dance upon a fear they gave us as infants.
July 1st, 2020 06:51
Questions.
Neville said:
you just reminded me .. again, I might add.. of all the reasons why I fell in love with poetry....
July 1st, 2020 02:32
Neville said:
you just reminded me .. again, I might add.. of all the reasons why I fell in love with poetry....
July 1st, 2020 02:32
Turbulence.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, you took me there and I saw that wondrous sight. Thank you.
Andy
June 30th, 2020 23:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fay, you took me there and I saw that wondrous sight. Thank you.
Andy
June 30th, 2020 23:53
Twin-Flamed
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - GOOD EVENING FAY - WOW ! You Poem has reported exactly what happened when Brian & I first met over three years ago at a Hospital Dance ! The opportunity (slow dance !) presented itself for two flames tto get close enough to become one - A Volcano of Love - which erupted ! Internally fortunately or the Dance Hall would have conflagarated ! Your Poem relates exactally how it is with us and *Its growing stronger - warmer - wilder every Day !* Thanks for caring !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey !
June 30th, 2020 17:23
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - GOOD EVENING FAY - WOW ! You Poem has reported exactly what happened when Brian & I first met over three years ago at a Hospital Dance ! The opportunity (slow dance !) presented itself for two flames tto get close enough to become one - A Volcano of Love - which erupted ! Internally fortunately or the Dance Hall would have conflagarated ! Your Poem relates exactally how it is with us and *Its growing stronger - warmer - wilder every Day !* Thanks for caring !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey !
June 30th, 2020 17:23
Turbulence.
Suresh said:
Your imaginative write has been my desire for a long time. Your title is though extremely apt, as what makes our heart leap, is a sinister dance of turbulent particles.
Wonderful image and words in accompaniment.
June 30th, 2020 09:56
Suresh said:
Your imaginative write has been my desire for a long time. Your title is though extremely apt, as what makes our heart leap, is a sinister dance of turbulent particles.
Wonderful image and words in accompaniment.
June 30th, 2020 09:56
Turbulence.
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. I too went to Iceland, but didn\'t get the right end of the stick. They said \'We have no aurora here; it\'s a supermarket!\' Doh!
June 30th, 2020 07:04
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. I too went to Iceland, but didn\'t get the right end of the stick. They said \'We have no aurora here; it\'s a supermarket!\' Doh!
June 30th, 2020 07:04
Turbulence.
Accidental Poet said:
Fay you certainly lit up the page with this write. Beautiful.
June 30th, 2020 05:48
Accidental Poet said:
Fay you certainly lit up the page with this write. Beautiful.
June 30th, 2020 05:48
Turbulence.
Neville said:
this is so good.. it lit up my day...
I went to Iceland specifically to tick the aurora borealis off my bucket list... missed them by about ten minutes...
June 30th, 2020 02:42
Neville said:
this is so good.. it lit up my day...
I went to Iceland specifically to tick the aurora borealis off my bucket list... missed them by about ten minutes...
June 30th, 2020 02:42
Twin-Flamed
Goldfinch60 said:
So very very true Fay, that silence is so important in love\'s being.
Andy
June 29th, 2020 23:52
Goldfinch60 said:
So very very true Fay, that silence is so important in love\'s being.
Andy
June 29th, 2020 23:52
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